Megurine Luka wrote:

http://puu.sh/7orA

skins

偷懒了=w=

记得放default的sliderarrow进去

Samah wrote:

[KS's Normal]
00:34:912 (1,2) - Not sure if you should have this jump. You'd be better off moving it between the two sliders.

SPOILER

Edit: Or maybe you could stack it under one of the sliders.
00:36:128 (1,2) - ^
00:37:344 (1,2) - ^
00:38:560 (1,2) - ^

KayeSara wrote:

Thx for your modding, jump is fine for me.
= =人人都要吐槽这个jump啊，卧槽啊

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

only suggestions...... just for m4m

[Overall]

这mp3音量能不能升高点= =
这个因为是直接从FLAC截的，所以应该音乐本身的问题，自己改了以后不晓得会不会出现轻微的爆破音...
刚开始就没听出有声音......

[spinner]

为什么是一边的。。。。。。不习惯。。。
我觉得蛮有新意的嘛
把那人放中间然后用两边的spinner转起来比较舒服= =

[Easy]
[Normal]

简单的不好mod =,=

[Insane]

00:05:722 (1) - 这里的clap感觉在(5)头上whistle比较好......
00:08:155 (1) - clap放到(6)?
00:43:425 (4) - 改成clap? 听不出来www
这是根据C00 W00下的，可以避免槽点...
这歌好短= =

Megurine Luka wrote:

调了我半个小时= =

顺便新做了一套评分的skin

o.o看看喜欢哪个吧

1. Skin: You are missing spinner-approachcircle.png as you have a custom spinner skin.
2. Skin: Since you have a custom hitcircleoverlay.png, you need to specify the color of your slider border. You can do that by adding "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" into your .osu files just below your combo colors, like this. The "255,255,255" is a RGB value of white, if you want another color, use a different RGB value.
3. Folder: I don't understand the point of soft-hitwhisle.wav, soft-slidertick.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav, they look the same to me like their default versions. In that case, you should remove them and full submit, because they are unnecessary.

1. This diff is heavily overmapped. You use streams where there is absolutely nothing in the music for them. I am not comfortable with such heavy overmapping. You should definitely map the music, and not how you feel the music.
2. Combos: Instead of mapping the ticks, why not map the music? For example: use a new combo at 00:06:128 (2) instead of at 00:05:722 (1), because at that spot a new vocal line starts. This also goes for 00:15:858 (3) (instead of 00:15:452 (1)), 00:21:939 (4) (instead of 00:22:749 (1)), 00:26:803 (9) (instead of 00:27:614 (1)).
3. 00:08:155 (1) - Instead of this circle, why not map a slider that ends at 00:08:560? It fits the music better because the voice holds. This means that you should remove the slider 00:08:560 (2) and map a circle at 00:08:763 instead.
4. 00:32:479 (1) - Remove this new combo.
5. 00:44:641 (1) - I wonder why did you end your spinner at 00:47:074, when the sound is echoing all the way to the end of the mp3. If you are mapping music, extend the spinner all the way there, and don't use the custom clap on it, just leave it without a hitsound so it actually fades out unnoticeable. This goes for all diffs.

1. 00:20:317 (1) - Sounds like you're missing a clap at the start.

1. I believe that circle size 2 is unrankable, because you cannot set it through the editor, and it affects gameplay. You don't really have a reason to use 2 anyway, since some stuff later on overlaps slightly, so use circle size 3 please.

lolcubes wrote:

Hello there!

[General]

1. Skin: You are missing spinner-approachcircle.png as you have a custom spinner skin.
   fixed
2. Skin: Since you have a custom hitcircleoverlay.png, you need to specify the color of your slider border. You can do that by adding "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" into your .osu files just below your combo colors, like this. The "255,255,255" is a RGB value of white, if you want another color, use a different RGB value.
   fixed
3. Folder: I don't understand the point of soft-hitwhisle.wav, soft-slidertick.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav, they look the same to me like their default versions. In that case, you should remove them and full submit, because they are unnecessary.
   fixed

[Hard]

1. This diff is heavily overmapped. You use streams where there is absolutely nothing in the music for them. I am not comfortable with such heavy overmapping. You should definitely map the music, and not how you feel the music.
   remap some parts
2. Combos: Instead of mapping the ticks, why not map the music? For example: use a new combo at 00:06:128 (2) instead of at 00:05:722 (1), because at that spot a new vocal line starts. This also goes for 00:15:858 (3) (instead of 00:15:452 (1)), 00:21:939 (4) (instead of 00:22:749 (1)), 00:26:803 (9) (instead of 00:27:614 (1)).
   fixed
3. 00:08:155 (1) - Instead of this circle, why not map a slider that ends at 00:08:560? It fits the music better because the voice holds. This means that you should remove the slider 00:08:560 (2) and map a circle at 00:08:763 instead.
   fixed
4. 00:32:479 (1) - Remove this new combo.
   fixed
5. 00:44:641 (1) - I wonder why did you end your spinner at 00:47:074, when the sound is echoing all the way to the end of the mp3. If you are mapping music, extend the spinner all the way there, and don't use the custom clap on it, just leave it without a hitsound so it actually fades out unnoticeable. This goes for all diffs.
   remove the clap of all diffs

[KS's Normal]

1. 00:20:317 (1) - Sounds like you're missing a clap at the start.
   fixed

[Easy]

1. I believe that circle size 2 is unrankable, because you cannot set it through the editor, and it affects gameplay. You don't really have a reason to use 2 anyway, since some stuff later on overlaps slightly, so use circle size 3 please.
   fixed

Sorry it took so much to get to your map but I did take a look in the end.
The map is incredibly simple, and would be ready for ranking I think, if only you didn't overmap the hard so much.

lolcubes wrote:

You still have streams in hard. You should remove all of them because they really don't fit.
That may make your map kinda "easy", but it's just the song that makes it that way. This means you have to remove all notes on blue ticks in the kiai (the notes which make the streams).
fixed

The only other suggestions I have for your hard, to follow the music better and make it harder, is to change some sliders:
00:36:128 (1) - This slider goes over the red tick at 00:36:330, where a vocal is located. What you could do is change it into a short slider + circle, and then create a jump between every section every measure.

SPOILER

[attachment=1:2267c]screenshot645.jpg[/attachment:2267c]

This is just an example, I deleted some stuff so it looks more clear. The reason why I used only a slider and 2 circles is because there is nothing in the music anywhere else. In the screenshot you can see I created a jump between the circle 3 and the next slider. The jump fits because of the pause in the music and makes more sense if you ask me. This applies to all of the sliders here and after. You may position them however you want though.
change something in this part, but not like your suggestion, since I feel that is so different from the style before.

00:40:993 (4,5,6) - You could create some really nice jumps with these (put new combo on 4), it would totally fit and would increase the difficulty, that also goes for 00:43:425 (4,5,6). Also remove 00:42:006 (7) in that case cause that note is completely useless.
remove (7), but others are not changed, since I think this is in the end of the song, and here need easier set.

You may also use this silent sound for the sliderslide, which would silence the sliding part of the sliders, would actually sounds nicer.
[attachment=0:2267c]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:2267c]
I use the default - 6 dB instead of silent, since it seems the silent sliderslide fit the whole song, but it is unrankable...

Just don't forget to full submit.

Keep in mind that these are suggestions, so you may apply them if you want to, but if you don't, then that is ok with me, but I won't be able to bubble a map like this, I just don't like heavy overmapping, and unfortunately you will have to find another MAT who doesn't care that much about that.

1. 00:31:263 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle.
2. 00:36:128 (1) - Remove clap.
3. 00:38:560 (1) - Remove clap.

1. 00:34:912 (1) - Sounds like you forgot the clap at the start.
2. 00:37:344 (1) - Same here, add a clap at the start.

1. 00:36:128 (2) - Remove the clap from the start and add a whistle.
2. 00:38:560 (4) - ^ Same thing.

lolcubes wrote:

Okay this makes alot more sense and I like it. Just a few more small things:

[Hard]

1. 00:31:263 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle.
2. 00:36:128 (1) - Remove clap.
3. 00:38:560 (1) - Remove clap.

[Normal]

1. 00:34:912 (1) - Sounds like you forgot the clap at the start.
2. 00:37:344 (1) - Same here, add a clap at the start.

[Easy]

1. 00:36:128 (2) - Remove the clap from the start and add a whistle.
2. 00:38:560 (4) - ^ Same thing.

All Fixed

Don't kudo this post.
These are suggestions that will make your hitsounds follow the music better. You used them like this throughout the whole song too, it's just that you didn't do it here for whatever reason.
The rest looks good. Call me back (if you see me ingame don't be afraid to PM me) once you decide if you want to fix these or not.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "approachcircle.png" into your folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission.

Fix and I'll rank.

vivicat wrote:

神速rank我瞎了
恭喜