SuzumiyaSama wrote:

MOD结果:
1.打击的声音太大了。和音乐配合起来应该是要小声一些比较好。
2.需要添加入hitsound。选中要添加的note再点击compose界面下，右手边的whistle finish clap等
3.缺少Preview Point （一般设置在副歌开始部分，此图建议设置于0:27:027位置）。设置方法：移动到想要设置的位置，点击工具栏中的timing的最后一项。
4.缺少背景图片。图片最大不超过1024x768
5.缺少高潮部分。具体请看http://tieba.baidu.com/p/718843690
6.缺少tags（即标签）。设置方法：song setup→general→Tags
7.[0:27:653]之后不要空出一大段。是没做完吗？补上吧。
8.note的摆放没有过多的差错不进行mod。
【如果你觉得我的MOD结果对你有帮助，麻烦请给一个kudos，谢谢】

KayeSara wrote:

timing ：
offset ：858

cmn_891127 wrote:

KayeSara wrote:

timing ：
offset ：858

fixed，明天上午我把弟弟借给你半天...

Yasora-chan wrote:

KS's Normal
00:04:506 (2) add whistle?
00:06:330 (2,4) ^
00:09:371 (2) add whistle in the beginning?
00:36:128 (3,5,7) NC?
00:40:993 (2) add whistle?
00:43:425 (2) ^

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi~ :3 time to mod your map

General
Priview Point = 00:39:290 ? (only suggestion)
no, thx

Easy
AR -1
fixed
00:33:029 (2) maybe, it's too hard for easy http://puu.sh/74jv move 1/2 beat? and no stack?
no, thx

Hard
00:03:898 (2) add whistle?
no, thx
00:04:101 (3) add whistle in the end?
fixed
00:05:317 (5) add whistle in the beginning?
no, thx
00:06:128 (2) add whistle?
no, thx
00:06:533 (4) add whistle in the beginning and the end, del whistle in the reverse?
only add whistle in the end
00:07:749 (6) add whistle?
no, thx
00:08:560 (2,3,4,5) add whistle in the beginning?
no, thx
00:11:398 (2) ^
no, thx
00:11:803 (3,4,5) add whistle?
only add (3)
00:13:628 (2) add whistle in the reverse?
00:14:236 (3) add whistle in the beginning and the end?
add whistle like before
00:21:939 (4) NC?
00:26:803 (9) ^
00:29:439 (8) ^
00:31:668 (9) ^
no, thx

PreviewTime: 17885

SPOILER

Pereira006 wrote:

KS's Normal

00:10:587 (1) - add clap only slider begin
00:11:803 (3) - ^
00:14:236 (2) - you lost whistle?
00:16:668 (2) - ^
00:19:506 (4) - add whistle and at 00:19:912 (5) - remove whistle
00:20:317 (1) - same above 00:10:587 (1)
00:21:533 (3) - ^
00:26:398 (3) - whistle on red tick is not fit IMO remove and add begin slider
00:34:912 (1,2) - sorry no jump for normal fix this spacing
00:36:128 (1,2) - ^
00:37:344 (1,2) - ^
00:38:560 (1,2) - ^
The Normal and easy never make jump pleasse fix this

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good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Mod4Mod -> Mitani Nana - Sakura Forever Friendship
I will mod it 4 hours later, since I'm in school now.

General

All diff should add

PreviewTime: 17885

(00:17:885) pleasse all diff
Since this song is really too short, if I set preview time at 00:17:885, only 26s left...so not change
and try this volume http://puu.sh/75TZ this will better hear hitsound and also 0% volume is unrank you should try 10% or 5 for all diff pleasse
I change the three part 35%/40%/5%, since I think the music is so clam.

Easy
Ar +1 ? will be better read IMO
Opps, I think Ar3 is better too, so fixed
Slider tick Rate 2 because listen at 00:08:357 and put 25% and listen drums very soft that should be tick 2 IMO
It's in the red line, if I add tick 2, the rhythm will be break, so not change
00:04:506 (2) - can you listen women voice start higher here? you should add clap only begin slider
00:06:939 (3) - ^
00:09:371 (2) - ^
00:11:803 (2) - ^
00:16:668 (3) - ^
I change the hitsounds like Hard diff
very very relax play
I think so, even though it is 2.95*, in fact it's so easy...

Hard
woooow nothing really wrong but try add hitsound IMO

SPOILER

lol
Awesome, I cannot FC it now...maybe I need more exercise

I love this song and very nice map so STAR !
good luck

[Colours]
Combo1 : 247,221,145
Combo2 : 201,201,201
Combo3 : 255,170,213

Megurine Luka wrote:

有一种瞬间被治愈的感觉..要死

[General]

LetterboxInBreaks 可关
fixed

Combo color suggestion

[Colours]
Combo1 : 247,221,145
Combo2 : 201,201,201
Combo3 : 255,170,213

调亮了一点，现在这样总体感觉太暗了
好多啦啦

这次变懒了啊skin都没有w。
要skin可以找我> <
我懒成zhu了。。。

[Easy]

00:33:493 (2) - 叠在一起对新手来说太难了，可以选择拆开或者干脆改成一整个slider
不要啦，那样不好听
00:44:641 (1) - 末尾不加个铃音？
加的CLAP

其他没啥o.o
不是姐自恋，姐做Easy那就是没的说的超级好

[Normal]

00:13:020 (1) - 再弯一点？
00:21:128 (2) - http://puu.sh/79Nz >这样试试看，感觉比较符合音乐
00:35:722 (2) - spacing，建议不要在NM里放跳啦。新手看不懂的w，后面也是。而且现在这样放整体感觉偏乱。真要这么放可以抓几个新手试试看他们的first play
00:44:641 (1) - 末尾不加个铃音？

[Hard]
00:07:344 (5,6,1) - 这里可以摆大点
00:13:020 (1) - ^
00:21:939 (4) - 亲爱的你太遵守DS了，这里可以跳了
00:26:803 (9) - ^
00:31:668 (9) - ^
不要啦，这样严重不符合我良民的身份，我可以说是我自己打不过去么
00:26:803 (9) - NC
fixed
00:44:641 (1) - 末尾不加个铃音？
已经加clap啦，对whitle无爱...

有些地方的摆法..嗯比如00:26:803 (9,10,11,12) - 这种，可以参照shinxyn的图w
现在的感觉就是图的流线感很好，但是太有流线感了不免略微有些单调w
我一直在痛苦这个问题，总感觉差点什么，原来是排版样式单一啊

总体当然是好图<3
主要歌好啦~~~
加油

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ cmn_891127

this is a (shenqu).
~~

[General]

The basic no problem
PreviewTime: 3087
fixed

[Hard]

OD+1
fixed
00:26:803 (9) - add NC.
fixed
00:31:668 (9) - ^
fixed
00:35:216 (4,4,4,4) - Delete will be more beautiful.
no thanks

[Easy]

00:44:641 (1) - add whistle.
clap instead
good luck~

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Normal]

00:13:020 (1) - 再弯一点？ 我发现你特别喜欢弯啊？？？直点不是挺有精神些么
00:21:128 (2) - http://puu.sh/79Nz >这样试试看，感觉比较符合音乐Fix
00:35:722 (2) - spacing，建议不要在NM里放跳啦。新手看不懂的w，后面也是。而且现在这样放整体感觉偏乱。真要这么放可以抓几个新手试试看他们的first play暂时没管，小跳怎么感觉都没什么
00:44:641 (1) - 末尾不加个铃音？Fix

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Baka's Normal]
不是感冒了么，这不挺有精神么

AR+1,CZ+1这难度有点高了，不敢弄更高了
00:44:641 (1) - add whistle.我换clap感觉好些

Megurine Luka wrote:

http://puu.sh/7orA

skins

偷懒了=w=

记得放default的sliderarrow进去

Samah wrote:

[KS's Normal]
00:34:912 (1,2) - Not sure if you should have this jump. You'd be better off moving it between the two sliders.

SPOILER

Edit: Or maybe you could stack it under one of the sliders.
00:36:128 (1,2) - ^
00:37:344 (1,2) - ^
00:38:560 (1,2) - ^

KayeSara wrote:

Thx for your modding, jump is fine for me.
= =人人都要吐槽这个jump啊，卧槽啊

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

only suggestions...... just for m4m

[Overall]

这mp3音量能不能升高点= =
这个因为是直接从FLAC截的，所以应该音乐本身的问题，自己改了以后不晓得会不会出现轻微的爆破音...
刚开始就没听出有声音......

[spinner]

为什么是一边的。。。。。。不习惯。。。
我觉得蛮有新意的嘛
把那人放中间然后用两边的spinner转起来比较舒服= =

[Easy]
[Normal]

简单的不好mod =,=

[Insane]

00:05:722 (1) - 这里的clap感觉在(5)头上whistle比较好......
00:08:155 (1) - clap放到(6)?
00:43:425 (4) - 改成clap? 听不出来www
这是根据C00 W00下的，可以避免槽点...
这歌好短= =

Megurine Luka wrote:

调了我半个小时= =

顺便新做了一套评分的skin

o.o看看喜欢哪个吧

1. Skin: You are missing spinner-approachcircle.png as you have a custom spinner skin.
2. Skin: Since you have a custom hitcircleoverlay.png, you need to specify the color of your slider border. You can do that by adding "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" into your .osu files just below your combo colors, like this. The "255,255,255" is a RGB value of white, if you want another color, use a different RGB value.
3. Folder: I don't understand the point of soft-hitwhisle.wav, soft-slidertick.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav, they look the same to me like their default versions. In that case, you should remove them and full submit, because they are unnecessary.

1. This diff is heavily overmapped. You use streams where there is absolutely nothing in the music for them. I am not comfortable with such heavy overmapping. You should definitely map the music, and not how you feel the music.
2. Combos: Instead of mapping the ticks, why not map the music? For example: use a new combo at 00:06:128 (2) instead of at 00:05:722 (1), because at that spot a new vocal line starts. This also goes for 00:15:858 (3) (instead of 00:15:452 (1)), 00:21:939 (4) (instead of 00:22:749 (1)), 00:26:803 (9) (instead of 00:27:614 (1)).
3. 00:08:155 (1) - Instead of this circle, why not map a slider that ends at 00:08:560? It fits the music better because the voice holds. This means that you should remove the slider 00:08:560 (2) and map a circle at 00:08:763 instead.
4. 00:32:479 (1) - Remove this new combo.
5. 00:44:641 (1) - I wonder why did you end your spinner at 00:47:074, when the sound is echoing all the way to the end of the mp3. If you are mapping music, extend the spinner all the way there, and don't use the custom clap on it, just leave it without a hitsound so it actually fades out unnoticeable. This goes for all diffs.

1. 00:20:317 (1) - Sounds like you're missing a clap at the start.

1. I believe that circle size 2 is unrankable, because you cannot set it through the editor, and it affects gameplay. You don't really have a reason to use 2 anyway, since some stuff later on overlaps slightly, so use circle size 3 please.

lolcubes wrote:

Hello there!

[General]

1. Skin: You are missing spinner-approachcircle.png as you have a custom spinner skin.
   fixed
2. Skin: Since you have a custom hitcircleoverlay.png, you need to specify the color of your slider border. You can do that by adding "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" into your .osu files just below your combo colors, like this. The "255,255,255" is a RGB value of white, if you want another color, use a different RGB value.
   fixed
3. Folder: I don't understand the point of soft-hitwhisle.wav, soft-slidertick.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav, they look the same to me like their default versions. In that case, you should remove them and full submit, because they are unnecessary.
   fixed

[Hard]

1. This diff is heavily overmapped. You use streams where there is absolutely nothing in the music for them. I am not comfortable with such heavy overmapping. You should definitely map the music, and not how you feel the music.
   remap some parts
2. Combos: Instead of mapping the ticks, why not map the music? For example: use a new combo at 00:06:128 (2) instead of at 00:05:722 (1), because at that spot a new vocal line starts. This also goes for 00:15:858 (3) (instead of 00:15:452 (1)), 00:21:939 (4) (instead of 00:22:749 (1)), 00:26:803 (9) (instead of 00:27:614 (1)).
   fixed
3. 00:08:155 (1) - Instead of this circle, why not map a slider that ends at 00:08:560? It fits the music better because the voice holds. This means that you should remove the slider 00:08:560 (2) and map a circle at 00:08:763 instead.
   fixed
4. 00:32:479 (1) - Remove this new combo.
   fixed
5. 00:44:641 (1) - I wonder why did you end your spinner at 00:47:074, when the sound is echoing all the way to the end of the mp3. If you are mapping music, extend the spinner all the way there, and don't use the custom clap on it, just leave it without a hitsound so it actually fades out unnoticeable. This goes for all diffs.
   remove the clap of all diffs

[KS's Normal]

1. 00:20:317 (1) - Sounds like you're missing a clap at the start.
   fixed

[Easy]

1. I believe that circle size 2 is unrankable, because you cannot set it through the editor, and it affects gameplay. You don't really have a reason to use 2 anyway, since some stuff later on overlaps slightly, so use circle size 3 please.
   fixed

Sorry it took so much to get to your map but I did take a look in the end.
The map is incredibly simple, and would be ready for ranking I think, if only you didn't overmap the hard so much.

lolcubes wrote:

You still have streams in hard. You should remove all of them because they really don't fit.
That may make your map kinda "easy", but it's just the song that makes it that way. This means you have to remove all notes on blue ticks in the kiai (the notes which make the streams).
fixed

The only other suggestions I have for your hard, to follow the music better and make it harder, is to change some sliders:
00:36:128 (1) - This slider goes over the red tick at 00:36:330, where a vocal is located. What you could do is change it into a short slider + circle, and then create a jump between every section every measure.

SPOILER

[attachment=1:2267c]screenshot645.jpg[/attachment:2267c]

This is just an example, I deleted some stuff so it looks more clear. The reason why I used only a slider and 2 circles is because there is nothing in the music anywhere else. In the screenshot you can see I created a jump between the circle 3 and the next slider. The jump fits because of the pause in the music and makes more sense if you ask me. This applies to all of the sliders here and after. You may position them however you want though.
change something in this part, but not like your suggestion, since I feel that is so different from the style before.

00:40:993 (4,5,6) - You could create some really nice jumps with these (put new combo on 4), it would totally fit and would increase the difficulty, that also goes for 00:43:425 (4,5,6). Also remove 00:42:006 (7) in that case cause that note is completely useless.
remove (7), but others are not changed, since I think this is in the end of the song, and here need easier set.

You may also use this silent sound for the sliderslide, which would silence the sliding part of the sliders, would actually sounds nicer.
[attachment=0:2267c]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:2267c]
I use the default - 6 dB instead of silent, since it seems the silent sliderslide fit the whole song, but it is unrankable...

Just don't forget to full submit.

Keep in mind that these are suggestions, so you may apply them if you want to, but if you don't, then that is ok with me, but I won't be able to bubble a map like this, I just don't like heavy overmapping, and unfortunately you will have to find another MAT who doesn't care that much about that.

1. 00:31:263 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle.
2. 00:36:128 (1) - Remove clap.
3. 00:38:560 (1) - Remove clap.

1. 00:34:912 (1) - Sounds like you forgot the clap at the start.
2. 00:37:344 (1) - Same here, add a clap at the start.

1. 00:36:128 (2) - Remove the clap from the start and add a whistle.
2. 00:38:560 (4) - ^ Same thing.

lolcubes wrote:

Okay this makes alot more sense and I like it. Just a few more small things:

[Hard]

1. 00:31:263 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle.
2. 00:36:128 (1) - Remove clap.
3. 00:38:560 (1) - Remove clap.

[Normal]

1. 00:34:912 (1) - Sounds like you forgot the clap at the start.
2. 00:37:344 (1) - Same here, add a clap at the start.

[Easy]

1. 00:36:128 (2) - Remove the clap from the start and add a whistle.
2. 00:38:560 (4) - ^ Same thing.

All Fixed

Don't kudo this post.
These are suggestions that will make your hitsounds follow the music better. You used them like this throughout the whole song too, it's just that you didn't do it here for whatever reason.
The rest looks good. Call me back (if you see me ingame don't be afraid to PM me) once you decide if you want to fix these or not.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "approachcircle.png" into your folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission.

Fix and I'll rank.