1. Extra (6,92 stars, 1366 notes)

Ed8_numbers wrote:

00:02:890 (1) - to 00:06:639 (1) - and 00:07:889 (1) - to 00:11:639 (1) - Could use slower SV, somewhat discomfortable when i played
this is done to give the players attention that the sliders are going to be fast

00:07:655 (4,5,6) - Too spaced, but i think that someone else thinks that this is ok
Same thing as above

00:17:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These sliders could be shorter, for me it was disorienting
Shortened them a bit.

00:31:639 (1) - An anchored slider is weird here
changed slider

00:33:202 (3,1) - This looks like it could have another circle in the middle OR to be differently hitsounded with 00:31:639 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -

00:35:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - , 00:37:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Too big combo
changed

00:42:108 (9,10,1) - This part of the stream could be smoother
Changed it a bit

00:49:608 (4) - and 00:50:077 (7) - try to make them visible, strange when played
Changed

00:56:952 (1,2) - and 00:57:499 (2,3) - these doubles are disorienting, use one circle for that specific beat, and when finished, make them with a different hitsound
2 beats on those ticks, sadly this means i won't change them, sorry!

00:59:061 (3) - looks unnecessary
Noticed and changed

01:02:889 (1,2,3) - use less slider points, but try to keep the shape (also, here the HP drain looks pretty painful)
not that good at slider-shapes yet so i might do this in the future!

01:20:389 (6,7) - ow use shorter sliders, if not possible lower the SV (again anchored slider looks weird)

01:22:889 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ow you could make this part a slower, more stacked stream, joining these with the other stream (difficult to notice the difference between the 1/6 part and the 1/8 part
This part follows the piano, so it shouldn't be too hard to follow

01:26:014 (1) - would extend the stream instead of adding this...
this part contains a 1/8 buzz, explains the slider

01:26:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ...and make these a repeat slider
I thought this was nice

01:29:139 (1,2,3,4) - make a star-like pattern with these sliders (combo looks weird)

01:48:827 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmapped stream, use a few short sliders to represent the beat
not overmapped, mapped it to match a faint noice in the background

01:51:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd pattern, discomfortable
Suits the part

02:05:858 (7,1,2) - try to make this smoother
done

02:04:452 (5) - i wouldn't use this, and it looks kinda weird for this part of the music
It fits though, again faint noice

02:07:264 (2) - this would be an amazing end to the beatmap. if this is where the short version ends, i would finish it there, but it's ok.
Map consists of 2 parts though, both are different so the first part is to prepare for the second one.

Overall I think that this map could be better in some parts, but in others they were amazing.

Thanks for the modding! I hope you'll enjoy this map in the future as well since i'll be making this my main time-consumer. If you have more suggestions for the second part (which is coming out soon please tell me!)

DominiGG wrote:

~~ Extra ~~

00:02:809 (1,2) - Do the blanket there
00:07:339 (3,4) - A bit uncomfortable spacing
00:18:329 (6,1,2) - maybe make it a bit more "circular"
00:27:183 (1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - Just make them all more far away, its part is too focused in center
00:35:308 (1) - remove nc
00:35:621 (2) - make nc
01:14:995 (7,8) - maybe stack it with 01:15:777 (2) -
01:20:308 (6) - there should be new sliderhead
01:20:933 (7) - ^
01:51:402 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - why the first triple is spaced and another isnt if its the same sound?
01:58:433 (3) - nc there and remove the previous one
02:00:308 (9) - nc

The blanket and aesthetics problems are repeating whole map. I also dont want to copy paste the same mistakes. Map is funny to play,
but tbh really ugly. You should use the full space in editor, not just focus in the center. I hope u'll improve this map and make more diffs !