Hi.
Just metadata+minor things. The set is pretty good already and your spread seems fine.
[Metadata]
Here's
an official source and
a screencap from the OP. Unless you have a different official source you're getting the metadata from, the artist should be listed as 'パトリシア・オブ・エンド(CV:高森奈津美)・黒木未知(CV:仙台エリ)・夕莉シャチ(CV:浅川悠)・明日原ユウキ(CV:種﨑敦美)' and 'Patricia of End (CV: Takamori Natsumi) Kuroki Michi (CV: Sendai Eri) Yuuri Shachi (CV: Asakawa Yuu) Asuhara Yuuki (CV: Tanesaki Atsumi)' Romanised.
You have 'to' in the tags twice.
[Kantan]
Similar to what I'll say for the Futsuu here, instead of having the gap between 00:02:692 and 00:04:011 - right at the start of a phrase, I think it's a lot more fitting to have it at the end of one, like between 00:06:648 - 00:07:967 - . You'll have to shuffle notes around a little to get it to work, but try it out - I find it way nicer to play.
Add a note at 00:08:626 - ? The vocals here really stand out, so giving them some more emphasis with your mapping here would be really nice.
Small suggestion, but starting the spinner at 00:44:725 - rather than 00:44:890 - feels better to me.
[Futsuu]
Try filling the gap at 00:03:022 - and instead leaving the gap at 00:05:000 - . Having the gap right at the start of the section feels pretty awkward. This alternative is a lot more intuitive to play and puts more emphasis on the important sounds here. There are a few other places where you've used similar rhythms that could have a similar change applied. See:
00:05:659 - Just add a note
00:25:439 - Add a note and remove 00:26:098 (74) -
00:29:395 - Add a note. Maybe remove 00:28:736 (84) - to keep a break
00:14:890 (44) - Move this to 00:15:055 - ? I guess you're trying to avoid using 3/2 here, but really it feels really weird to play it as you've mapped it - it's a lot more intuitive as 3/2. Besides, you've used 3/2 elsewhere in the map already. The same applies to 00:20:164 (59) -
[Muzukashii]
00:22:967 (89,90,91,92,93,94) - This might be too hard for a muzu. Try removing 00:23:296 (91) - and 00:23:626 (93) - I found this really fun to play and much more fitting for the difficulty.
The structure around 00:31:703 - is kind of awkward imo. It's just the way the notes line up with the vocals makes it feel kind of weird. The best I could do here was moving 00:32:197 (140) - to 00:31:868 .
[Oni]
Tiny suggestion, but imo having a ddk triplet at 00:29:890 - instead of a triplet at 00:29:560 - makes a nice parallel with the repeated vocals here and plays a little more nicely.
[Inner Oni]
Nice diff. The streams are surprisingly intuitive to play, I enjoyed it.
Overall really nice set. Let me know when you get 12sp
