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I recalculated and Nudged everything :<

I also added ur offset.

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Well, for starters, Zerostarry's offset is all kinds of messed up. Change it to 3810, and the time signature to 4/4. Other than that, the beatmap is fine.

Did what U said Loginer And it sounds nicely with ur offset.

THNX for the spacing Zero and I got Hard uploaded

Change the BPM to 115.0, none of that 114.998 bullshit or its never gonna get ranked lol. The offset 3810 is still good.

There are alot of phrases that you've mapped that are the correct rhythms, but aren't placed well on the timeline. I'm not gonna make a nazi list right now because I don't have the time / patience, just slow it down and listen for yourself... many are easy to spot.

I rather you do make a nazi List of nudging needed but I'll try listening for myself.

Download: Wizet, Nexon - First Step Master (Metroid) [Easy].osu

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Maybe next summer I'll start a maple Pack if Luigi wants to help but I doubt it )
(I made the skin)

First of all, you did a good job with that there skin ya got there. Like the combo burst
Now for the real modding.

Fundamental Errors
Easy
After applying all the changes below, remember to update your distance spacing!
Normal
Look above
Hard
There are way too many breaks in this song with the health drain still killing you. It is incredibly hard to keep your life up because of this. This is a "hard" map. Fill in the spaces. Remember Spacing!
Insane
We already have a Hard Rock mod. Make this difficulity distinctly different from Hard, or scrap it. If you wish to keep it, remember to fill in the spaces. It is even more important here because the health drain rate is larger! Remember Spacing!

Technical Errors
Easy
*00:04:679(2,3,4): Move these three notes 2/6 of a beat forward.
*00:37:114(1,2,3,4): First, these four notes aren't snapped on the timeline. EASY FIX: See that combo at 1:54:418? Make this have the same spacing on the timeline as that one. Make sure after you do what you need to to to make the spacing the same that the notes aren't in a place where they are mistimed.
*00:41:273(2,3,4): Move 2 1/6 of a beat forward. Do the same with 3. 4 is not snapped, so snap it by moving it forward and then move it forward 1/6 of a beat.
*00:45:031(1,2,3,4): Oh god this area is so horribly screwed up. None of these four note are snapped, just like at 37. See "EASY FIX" above.
*00:57:027(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4): More unsnapped notes! Snap them by moving forward, but move all of them an additional 1/6 of a beat forward. While you're at it, do the exact same thing to the next combo.
*01:07:462(1,2,3,4): See the above correction but only do it to this combo
*01:11:897(2): Unsnapped. Move it forward a little bit but bring it another 1/6 of a beat forward.
*01:15:288(1): Read this carefully. Move the slider 2/6 of a beat forward. However, you must shorten the slider so it ends where it ended BEFORE you moved it. Got that? Good
*01:31:201(3): Unsnapped. Move it forward, then another 1/6 of a beat forward.(are you seeing a pattern here?)
*01:37:810(1,2,3,4,5): Yup, there IS a pattern here. 5 unsnapped notes. You should know what to do with these by now. Hint: look at the previous correction
*01:35:897(1): Unsnapped. Follow pattern.
*01:58:592(1,2,3,4,5): Unsnapped. Follow pattern.
*02:28:331(1,2,3,4): Unsnapped. Follow pattern.
*02:45:549(1,2,3,4,5,6,7): Unsnapped. Follow pattern.
Normal
*00:04:853(2,3,4): Unsnapped. Follow pattern found in easy.
*00:16:070(1): Unsnapped. Follow pattern.
*00:24:244(1): I shall abbreviate the phrase "Unsnapped. Follow pattern" to UFP. So, for this note, UFP.
*00:26:505(5): Using the UFP fix, do it by LENGTHENING the slider. Unique fix, huh?
*00:29:462(2): UFP
*00:37:114(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9): UFP
*00:41:273(2,3,4): Just move 2 1/6 of a beat forward. As for 3 and 4, UFP.
*00:45:027(3): Move this 2/6 of a beat forward.
*00:47:897(8,9): UFP
*00:50:331(2,3,4,5): UFP
*00:53:201(2): UFP
*00:57:027(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4): UFP
*01:07:463(1,2,3,4): UFP
*01:09:636(2): UFP
*01:11:897(2): UFP
*01:15:114(1,2,3,4,5): UFP
*01:28:418(4): UFP
*01:31:027(3): UFP
*01:37:549(1,2,3,4,5): UFP
*01:45:897(1): UFP
*01:50:776(2,3): UFP
*01:56:766(8,9,1,2,3,4,5): UFP
*02:05:114(8,9,1,2,3,4,5): UFP
*02:10:940(1): UFP
*02:28:057(1,2,3,4,5,6,7): UFP(wow, THIS is the longest you've gone without an error?)
*02:44:853(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): UFP
Hard(oh god...)
Alright, I'm not gonna do a Nazi list for this because
A. There will be a million and a half errors
B. These errors will like be a whole bunch of UFP's
C. These UFP's will likely be in the same places as in Normal, with more here and there
So, in general for hard, you see a note that isn't exactly on a tick in the timeline, use the UFP on it. This saves ME an hour of typing, you see?
Here is the super shortened Nazi List
*00:38:853(7,8): In every instance of this combo, PUT ANOTHER NOTE BETWEEN 7 AND 8!!! Anybody worth his salt will attempt to hit the note that SHOULD be here and lose his/her combo, so fix it!

I will NOT do Insane, mostly because every error will be exactly the same as Hard, and due to the fact that you wish to scrap it.

If I were a BAT, this beatmap would be NUKED, and then NUKED again! FIX IT!

Uhm 1- I did this with 1.4 snap divisor.
and 2 The BPM changed while I was mapping this to 114.998 somehow.
done all what u said except that 7,8 thing on the bottom.
Cause 1 it fells better the way it is and also Just slightly pause between 7 and 8


I wanna scrap Insane anyway Unless a majority of people want Insane.

Easy
00:24:28 (1) - 1/4th back
00:25:20 (2) - Extend the end by 1/4th
00:29:63 (2) - 1/4th forward
00:41:72 (2) - Move it to 00:41:766
00:42:07 (3) - Move it to 00:42:157 and extend the slider by 1/4th
01:11:81 (2) - Move it to 01:11:897
01:26:24 (2,3,4) - Beatspacing! Generally, you'll probably want to go through all your difficulties with the distance snap as there are some very funky spacing. Not to mention, you'll need to fix your beatspacing anyway when you fix the stuff up... so, might as well.
01:42:41 (2) - Extend by 1/4th
01:48:28 (1) - Extend spinner by 1/4th
02:25:20 (3,4) - Spacing
02:28:20 (1) - 1/4th forward
02:28:20 (1) - 1/4th forward
02:30:02 (3) - 1/4th forward
02:30:54 (4) - 1/4th forward
02:35:24 (1) - Extend by 1/4th

Generally, make sure when you use blue ticks, it is on notes. Because from what it seems is that you depend on blue ticks too much. So, go through your other difficulties, check if the blue ticks you have beats on are actually following something.

Other than that, great map, great song, and great skin.

Did what u said Max and I fixed spacing.

Other than the spacing, I see you did nothing to follow the list I gave you as the beats are still in the same position.

I am not resuming to mod until you fix every single thing my list demands for Easy... as they are really quite offbeat.

I thought I did fix easy CRAP!!!

Apparently It didn't sound Like i did anything due to me having the right side of my headphones broken so Lucky I got new headphones so I;ll try to fix it this weekend.

Sorry to ask u Maxwell but I might need you to remod the easy mode :<

Unfortunately, it still seems like it isn't fixed. D:
You sure you uploaded it?

If you can maxwell can you make a new nazi list for this since I have nop clue what to do.

Easy
00:25:98 (3,4,5) - Spacing here... Move it just a bit closer to (2)
00:30:28 (3) - Move this away from (2).
01:41:63 (1) - Move it just a touch closer to (2). A little to the right will do it.
02:30:15 (3) - A little closer to (2)

Normal
The distance between full beats feels a little stretched for some of this map, in my opinion. I won't make a big deal of this.
00:25:98 (3) - Please get this closer to (2).
00:41:72 (2) - This doesn't seem to be snapped to anything, whether a 1/4 beat or an 1/8 beat.
01:12:94 (4) - Fix the distancing between here and (3) (2-3 and 3-4 aren't equal).
01:43:20 (3) - Bit close to (2), especially when you compare to the 1/2 beat distancing with the rest of the map.
02:43:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Contrary to what I first said, most of these beats feel a little close.

Hard
I already see more that needs some tweaking in this than the other two.
00:04:85 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Figure out spacing, please. 2-3 is very, very notably closer than the others. Havne't even goten past the first ten seconds yet lol.
00:09:81 (4) - Feels kinda close to (3). Review spacing.
00:10:33 (5) - Definitely too close to (4).
00:16:07 (3,4,5,6) - The last beat here sounds more like it should be a little later than it is... Move 1/4 beat forward and figure what you'll do here. I don't typically like stacks with varying beat timing, though I don't think I'd have too much to complain for this.
00:21:54 (2,3) - I'll point out the need for spacing review.
00:25:20 (4) - Same thing.
00:25:89 (5,6,7) - These don't seem snapped to anything... I THINK you want these snapped to 3/8, 7/8 and again 3/8 beat points here (meaning so that they're on the yellow ticks right after the blue). With that the case, I won't say anything about spacing.
00:41:72 (2) - Snap to the 5/8th?
00:42:24 (4) - Snap this as well?
00:45:02 (3) - Sounds and feels off. I'd say to move 1/4 forward and check your spacing.
01:42:41 (5) - In my opinion, sounds better when lengthened 1/4 beat. Of course, if you do this, adjust your spacing to make sure everything is right.
01:52:72 (11) - This isn't mapped to anything that I can pick up at all. I'd say it's safe to take it out.
01:58:94 (2) - Not snapped... I think you want this on the 5/8th.
02:02:50 (3) - Sounds off. I think, move it back (<- that way) 1/4. And make sure you're spacing is right.
02:45:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - No matter how many times I watched this, I couldn't follow. Especially with (12) being immediately next to (11). This part could use a cleanup, in my opinion.
Oh. And did I say to go through the whole map after that and double-check your spacing? Do that.

Overall, really nice map, just needs some tweaks.

Easy- done
Normal-done
Hard-done (I instead completely re-spaced all the beats)


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And if you're willing to skin the numbers for the score/combo counter, they use arial. >_>

Oh the text font I can do ( I thought you meant the font used to show the damage when you hit a monster)

I meant "in addition to." I still mean the damage numbers and graphics for the 300/100/50/MISS in my first post.

Sorry for the misunderstanding.

thats ok But if you have a chance please ask awp or soem1 with good drawing skills to draw the Hit numbers since I won't be on this week due to school.
thnx

Noticed just a couple little things when replaying this.

Normal:
00:24:41 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo still needs a spacing check. There's too much space between 3 and 4 now.

Hard:
You did really well in cleaning this up.
00:07:33 (9) - I know I said something about this beat before. D: I don't know what though. Except that I mentioned that it bugged me? Get more input on this lol.
00:24:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe make sure the second half is snapped to the 1/4 beats and adjust spacing? I don't know. I seem to have different feelings about certain parts now. Again, get some more input from someone else, because I'm not entirely certain.
02:02:50 (3) - Might have pointed out before? I think this would do well moved back (<- That way) 1/4 beat. And adjust spacing after that.
02:32:24 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think these combos need just a little more space between each of them.

Also, for all the difficulties, I've now taken notice that there doesn't seem to be much for hit sounds. There's that one finish, and a COUPLE whistles... Though a few more well-placed whistles would be very nice.

Oh. And I forgot to mention before. D: Love the skin. So, on a note to the side of the actual map, I'd love to see this worked up to a full skin for osu! <3 Seriously, after supper, I'm swapping skins, because that's how amazing this is.

AGENTS ARE


GOOOOOOOOO!

Offset: 3.795. At least that's what I got.

Easy:
- 00:14:360 (1): There's actually no reason to let this spinner start at a blue tick. Let it begin at the white or red one.
- 00:29:490 (2,3): They both start 1/4 too early. Fix plz D:
- 00:48:795 (1): Again, no reason to have this start on a blue tick. White or red one D:
- 01:48:273 (1): ^
- 02:06:012 (1): ^
- 02:35:229 (1): ^


Normal:

- 00:26:490 (5): I think this slider should end 1/2 earlier, but I guess it works both ways.
- 00:41:686 (2): Move this on the blue tick, plz.
- 01:49:969 (1): One more slider repeat, maybeez?
- 01:50:751 (2): Sounds better ending on the white tick.


Hard:

- 00:16:447 (4): I think this hitcircle isn't needed. Remove maybeeez?
- 00:26:490 (7): I think this slider should end 1/2 earlier, but I guess it works both ways. (lol)
- 00:41:686 (2): Move this on the blue tick, plz.
- 01:00:403 (1): I suggest one more repeat for this slider. And rape.
- 01:08:751 (1): ^. And rape.
- 01:43:708 (7): I think this slider should end 1/2 earlier, but I guess it works both ways.


YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!

MISSION COMPLETE!

A-RANK!

METROID ACHIEVED A LARTO STAR!

Did what you said that was necessary except those sliders that you said either way since I prefer how they are and I didn't change the offset(the offset was by accident) I'll change it if a BAT recommends using your offset.

Easy:
00:14:50 (1) - This spinner sounds better ending a white tick earlier.

Normal:
00:16:07 (1) - Add or remove a repeat.
00:41:37 (1,2,3) - Even out this spacing.
02:33:28 (1) - Move this a bit to the right.

Hard:
00:16:07 (3,4,5,6) - Move this stack further away, and add one more or remove the last one.
00:32:76 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Move one or both of these stacks, just to make things more fun.
00:40:59 (10,1,2,3,4) - Even out the spacing.
00:51:81 (5,1,2) - Even out the spacing.
01:49:98 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part sounds ugly.
01:58:59 (1,2,3,4) - Even out.

Love the skinning here. This is worthy of a star.

I did what you said and to fix the 3 1 repeat sliders near the end I made it in the upside down T formation.

I think the maps are ok, but Hard feels more like an alternate Normal than a harder level of play. Try making it a bit harder, no need to make it hardcore or anything, just harder.

Easy is fine

Normal
00:41:76 (2) - Move it up abit
02:30:15 (5) - Move down abit

Hard
00:38:24 (4,6) - Move these down abit.
01:43:20 (5,6,7) - I'd try not to hide beats behind sliders.
02:48:67 (15) - Move it down abit.

Edit:
All Fixed. I see no more problems except the ugliness in 01:41:62 (Combo) - Hard. But
Matty suggested 3794 offset.
And i think 3794 sounds good.

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ok then~

grats on first ranked beatmap.