Ceui - Souai Calendula (TV Size) · forum

Sandrew

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-08-29T13:19:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年6月19日 at 17:58:07

Artist: Ceui
Title: Souai Calendula (TV Size)
Source: 八犬伝-東方八犬異聞-
Tags: hakkenden touhouhakkenibun tv size ed ending 小高光太郎 odaka kotaro abhor Lobelia Pata-Mon
BPM: 134
Filesize: 11585kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Hard (2.71 stars, 183 notes)
Lobelia's Calendula (4.23 stars, 302 notes)
Normal (1.71 stars, 127 notes)
Pata-Mon's Insane (3.68 stars, 229 notes)

Download: Ceui - Souai Calendula (TV Size)
Download: Ceui - Souai Calendula (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane by Pata-Mon
Calendula by Lobelia
metadata:http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACM-14114.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fcFmWZEBzNU
Hana ni Natta Shounen no Shinwa is included in this single so they maybe a little related.

Original Insane diff by me

https://puu.sh/AfcfX/42700c39ce.osu

special thx

victorfernando hitsound help
kanor hitsound help
lobelia awesome bg and video found by this one owo
Pata-Mon awesome diff

bg cut from a r-18 doujinshi's cover

Last edited by Sandrew 2018-06-27T13:01:49+00:00, edited 67 times in total.

Tsuruno

15 posts

Joined September 2015

Tsuruno 2017-08-31T20:28:53+00:00

mk

Imouto koko

95 posts

Joined January 2016

Imouto koko 2017-11-04T06:59:22+00:00

from pm req:

[Calendula]

00:13:782 (1,2,3) - 间距不合理，音乐明显加强了为什么00:13:111 (2,3) - 比00:14:230 (3,1) - 间距还大。随便摆了个意思一下。
SPOILER
00:20:163 (2,3) - 00:25:088 (4,1) - 1/4clickable jump?不太像是一个4.2星应该有的东西。
00:36:842 - 空拍比较莫名。
00:37:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这flow好乱啊，建议这样。
SPOILER
00:49:155 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g.
版面很整齐，好看，kiai挺棒的。

[Insane]

00:12:439 (6,1) - blanket.
00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:27:439 (2,3) - 00:31:021 (3,4) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 01:07:290 (3,4) - 看过主难度再来打这个in就会感觉单点摆的有点偷懒，这几个叠的逻辑基本都不一样，尤其是00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 更加影响了前后节奏的流畅性。比如00:17:812 (3) - 完全可以移动到x:284 y:187。
01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - 单独提一下这里，这段01:07:290 (3,4,5) - 的2+1节奏其实并不明显，在kiai段连跳的时候突然一个原地，除非有很强的、有规律的节奏支持，否则最好避免一下。
感觉次难度比主难度少了好多东西，该体现节奏的地方基本都混过去了，00:56:767 (1,2,3,1) - 这边这样剧烈加强的节奏显然不能再用和00:03:036 (1,2,3,1) - 一样的排列，重复的东西太多缺少变化，可能需要大改一下。

[Hard]

00:03:260 (4,1) - 挡折返箭头了，unrankable.
00:21:058 (5,6) - 叠崩了，关edit stack看看。
01:07:737 (5,6,1,2) - hard这样摆不太好。
01:13:334 (1) - 这个不对称强迫症死了。
01:22:289 (7) - 向上摆一点比较好，滑条方向跟着变。

[Normal]

不会摸，看了看没太明显的问题。

主难度和次难度节奏上有不少overmap，我节奏也不太好就不提了，再找人看看吧

GL.

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-11-04T09:21:36+00:00

@Imouto koko,
就是那个关于1/4跳的那种。。只能说这个是表面上看4.2星吧QWQ，所以这个没改
其他都改啦!

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:奏愛カレンデュラ
Artist:Ceui
ArtistUnicode:Ceui
Creator:Sandrew
Version:Calendula
Source:八犬伝-東方八犬異聞-
Tags:abhor Lobelia hakkenden touhouhakkenibun tv size ending 小高光太郎
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Imouto koko

95 posts

Joined January 2016

Imouto koko 2017-11-04T11:44:15+00:00

才发现主难度是个gd……想当然了。
in摆开一点还是很不错的，加油。

Doesnt matter

392 posts

Joined May 2016

Doesnt matter 2017-11-04T12:08:22+00:00

[Normal]
00:19:155 (2) - Try that:

slider

[Insane]
00:44:006 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Why stream?
00:47:588 (4, 5, 6, 7) - ^

[Calendula]
00:15:349 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) - ^
01:03:931 - 01:04:491 - This part of song also has words, so why don't you map them?

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-11-04T13:31:04+00:00

Imouto koko wrote:
from pm req:
[Insane]
00:12:439 (6,1) - blanket.
00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:27:439 (2,3) - 00:31:021 (3,4) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 01:07:290 (3,4) - 看过主难度再来打这个in就会感觉单点摆的有点偷懒，这几个叠的逻辑基本都不一样，尤其是00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 更加影响了前后节奏的流畅性。比如00:17:812 (3) - 完全可以移动到x:284 y:187。
01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - 单独提一下这里，这段01:07:290 (3,4,5) - 的2+1节奏其实并不明显，在kiai段连跳的时候突然一个原地，除非有很强的、有规律的节奏支持，否则最好避免一下。
感觉次难度比主难度少了好多东西，该体现节奏的地方基本都混过去了，00:56:767 (1,2,3,1) - 这边这样剧烈加强的节奏显然不能再用和00:03:036 (1,2,3,1) - 一样的排列，重复的东西太多缺少变化，可能需要大改一下。提到的基本上都做了点改动，重复的地方主要是没梗……
[Hard]
00:03:260 (4,1) - 挡折返箭头了，unrankable.
00:21:058 (5,6) - 叠崩了，关edit stack看看。
01:07:737 (5,6,1,2) - hard这样摆不太好。改起来稍微有点难度……我再问问其他人意见
01:13:334 (1) - 这个不对称强迫症死了。
01:22:289 (7) - 向上摆一点比较好，滑条方向跟着变。
其他都改了
[Normal]

不会摸，看了看没太明显的问题。
[/notice]

主难度和次难度节奏上有不少overmap，我节奏也不太好就不提了，再找人看看吧
GL.

鞋模

现在做insane一个没梗一个放不开

ChuuritsuTv wrote:
[Normal]
00:19:155 (2) - Try that:
slider
fixed
[Insane]
00:44:006 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Why stream?because there are 1/4 here
00:47:588 (4, 5, 6, 7) - ^^

thx for modding

Daycore

Beatmap Nominator

931 posts

Joined January 2015

Daycore 2017-11-04T17:33:29+00:00

Hello! ~ From my queue

Calendula

00:20:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space-stream? in "Insane" difficulty? Why?
00:22:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is bad
00:26:431 (1) - there's no sound for 1/8 kickslider
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable spacing: 1 -- 2 - 3 -- 4 -1 ~ why?
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is stack here? can you make something like this? ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470339
00:54:528 (7) - new combo maybe?
01:03:484 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow is bad (grammar?)
01:03:484 (1) - nc here
01:09:528 (2,3) - overlap
01:16:913 (2,3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470390

Sandrew's diffs are ok. Good luck with map!

b00

186 posts

Joined January 2014

b00 2017-11-04T17:57:07+00:00

From my M4M queue

Calendula

00:05:499 (1,2) - not sure why these are overlapped.
If your going to overlap any in that pattern. I would do 00:05:723 (2,3) - these two so that 00:06:170 (4) - gets more empathise
00:14:454 (1) - Small stuff but, I think that this would look better: https://goo.gl/oyUHp3
00:20:275 (3) - This doesnt need to be a 1/4 slider. Making it a 3/4 slider would be better because your holding the vocal and it empathises 00:20:723 (1) - more
00:26:431 (1) - why is this here lol. Something like this would work better https://goo.gl/GV3cxz because your starting the note of the small drum in the background. And extending it gives more empathise to the next note.
00:28:334 (1) - okay dude. I know this is a mistake but pls fix.
00:38:409 (4,5) - A 1/2 slider would work well here
00:40:200 (1) - minor slider aesthetics
00:52:066 (1,2) - spacing is pretty low here
00:54:081 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure why these are triples. There is no sound on the middle tick
This flow from 7 to 1 is pretty harsh. Using something like this could look and play better https://goo.gl/dCW8yN
01:11:208 (3) - Remove this and 01:11:431 (5) - The 1/4 should start here 01:11:543 (6) -

Insane

First off. Calling this an insane is rather odd. The ranking criteria says you should have a 3.75-5.25 to be insane. Maybe light insane would be better?
00:06:618 (5,1) - Vocals are the most prominent sound here. So mapping them actively would be preferable.
00:15:573 (6,1) - Moving 1 even further away would give more empathise.
00:20:275 - I would make this a 1/2 slider. There is no noise on 00:20:275 - but if you still want to map this sound 00:20:275 - then using a 1/2 slider would do just that
00:21:394 - 00:21:394 - making both these circles would be better.

GL with the map!

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-11-04T23:51:23+00:00

ChuuritsuTv wrote:
[Calendula]
00:15:349 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) - ^
01:03:931 - 01:04:491 - This part of song also has words, so why don't you map them?

i'm not just follow the vocal...

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:
Hello! ~ From my queue

Calendula
00:20:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space-stream? in "Insane" difficulty? Why? 4.2 star not means it's a insane diff and using a space-stream is fit to this part.
00:22:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is badqwq,i feel it's well
00:26:431 (1) - there's no sound for 1/8 kicksliderin fact,the drums are really soft in this part and there are definetly have many drums so use the 1/8 is fine for me.
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable spacing: 1 -- 2 - 3 -- 4 -1 ~ why? ?
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is stack here? can you make something like this? ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470339?
00:54:528 (7) - new combo maybe?i think this is no need to NC cause the music what i followed are not over to be honest
01:03:484 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow is bad (grammar?) fixed!
01:03:484 (1) - nc herei'm not sure but NC in here maybe make people feel a little confused?
01:09:528 (2,3) - overlap ...it's a pattern,i do it on purpose
01:16:913 (2,3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470390i know why you do like this but 01:17:140 - has a downbeat which is really different from the previous part so i use a small jump here.
thanks for mod~

b00 wrote:
From my M4M queue
Calendula
00:05:499 (1,2) - not sure why these are overlapped.
If your going to overlap any in that pattern. I would do 00:05:723 (2,3) - these two so that 00:06:170 (4) - gets more empathise
00:14:454 (1) - Small stuff but, I think that this would look better: https://goo.gl/oyUHp3i want to gradually increase the distance so the pattern maybe is not nice but i still think it's plays well.Then for the stack,i think there are no issue for me to stack begin on the red line because the stronger voice is obvious on the white line.
00:20:275 (3) - This doesnt need to be a 1/4 slider. Making it a 3/4 slider would be better because your holding the vocal and it empathises 00:20:723 (1) - morefixed,but i changed the rhythm with a new way
00:26:431 (1) - why is this here lol. Something like this would work better https://goo.gl/GV3cxz because your starting the note of the small drum in the background. And extending it gives more empathise to the next note.in fact,the drums are really soft in this part and there are definetly have many drums so use the 1/8 is fine for me.
00:28:334 (1) - okay dude. I know this is a mistake but pls fix.?
00:38:409 (4,5) - A 1/2 slider would work well here?why
00:40:200 (1) - minor slider aesthetics
00:52:066 (1,2) - spacing is pretty low here qwq,i want to gradually increase the distance and i NCed in here so it can be separated from the previous section.
00:54:081 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure why these are triples. There is no sound on the middle ticki hear the music to be honest...there are obvious voice on the middle tick
This flow from 7 to 1 is pretty harsh. Using something like this could look and play better https://goo.gl/dCW8yN
01:11:208 (3) - Remove this and 01:11:431 (5) - The 1/4 should start here 01:11:543 (6) -01:11:208 - but i still can hear the drums on this tick...

MeAqua tete

Beatmap Nominator

386 posts

Joined January 2015

MeAqua tete 2017-11-05T11:32:22+00:00

From PM

Insane

00:56:543 (1,2,3) -这里下vocal音可能太单调了一点，感觉这样下节奏打起来会更舒服一点？（反正前后都用了那么多1/4滑条了）https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476422
01:16:913 (2,1) -をかお、1/4滑条后面接几个跳，打起来太难受了，改成叠在一起的二连怎么样？（假装这里没有变速）https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476445
00:59:006 (6) -这地方既然跟vocal就跟着吧，6 7的ds略大，而且7那个音太小了，建议直接去掉吧（打起来挺舒服的w）
01:04:155 (4,5,6,7) -这间距太imba了

同学叫我打l4d2去了，回头会补上其他三个diff的

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-11-05T12:13:50+00:00

AngelSnow wrote:
From PM

Insane

00:56:543 (1,2,3) -这里下vocal音可能太单调了一点，感觉这样下节奏打起来会更舒服一点？（反正前后都用了那么多1/4滑条了）fixedhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476422
01:16:913 (2,1) -をかお、1/4滑条后面接几个跳，打起来太难受了，改成叠在一起的二连怎么样？（假装这里没有变速）https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476445改成二连容易acc杀手
00:59:006 (6) -这地方既然跟vocal就跟着吧，6 7的ds略大，而且7那个音太小了，建议直接去掉吧（打起来挺舒服的w）改了67的ds，确实和后面的一处排列比起来打了一点
01:04:155 (4,5,6,7) -这间距太imba了fixed

同学叫我打l4d2去了，回头会补上其他三个diff的

先谢谢摸图

b00 wrote:
From my M4M queue
Insane
First off. Calling this an insane is rather odd. The ranking criteria says you should have a 3.75-5.25 to be insane. Maybe light insane would be better?there are many insane ranked diff with 3.xx star so it's fine
00:06:618 (5,1) - Vocals are the most prominent sound here. So mapping them actively would be preferable. do you mean changing them into circles?imo compared to 00:13:782 (4,5,6) - , a reverse slider here is enough because its slighter than the next
00:15:573 (6,1) - Moving 1 even further away would give more empathise.fine
00:20:275 - I would make this a 1/2 slider. There is no noise on 00:20:275 - but if you still want to map this sound 00:20:275 - then using a 1/2 slider would do just thatthere are noise on 00:20:275
00:21:394 - 00:21:394 - making both these circles would be better.ok, if more people note this I will add circles
GL with the map!

thx for modding, I have mod your map in modv2

mantasu

760 posts

Joined October 2015

mantasu 2017-11-06T19:19:42+00:00

o/ m4m from my q
[Normal]
00:06:170 (5) - lift it a bit up for better 'curved' visuals
01:16:512 (1) - remove NC
[Hard]
00:20:275 (3,4) - as for hard this place can be confusing for players, consider placing 4 further
00:21:058 (5) - no sound on blue tick, if so then there's one 00:20:834 - too, so this is whether overmapped or undermapped
00:40:648 (3) - you could give some more visual spacing (like putting this sliders tale up)
00:44:230 (2) - this reversed slider should be moved so it'd start from 00:44:006 - bc I barely hear sound on 00:44:678 -
00:54:752 (3) - as for hard you could map sounds instead
01:12:887 (4) - if you use NCs after 1/1 stacking, then so do here
01:17:140 (1) - you could space this further
[Insane]
00:44:678 (8) - replace this with circle bc it represents different sound than 00:44:454 (7) -
00:54:081 (1,2,3,1,2) - you should match them due to similar sound (I suggest on both 1/4 slider and a circle)
00:53:633 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (I suggest on both triples)
01:14:902 (1) - two 1/2 circles imo would be better
01:16:512 (1) - ^ (like stacked or sth)
[Calendula]
00:30:573 (2) - this sound is ok emphasized but 00:31:021 (4) - this one shouldn't be
00:44:454 (6) - imo this spacing is too much
00:54:528 (7) - NC

Great map owo, here's a kudo
GL with rank

pls mod mine

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-11-07T12:47:59+00:00

seselis1 wrote:
o/ m4m from my q
[Normal]
00:06:170 (5) - lift it a bit up for better 'curved' visualsfixed
01:16:512 (1) - remove NC bpm changed here so I add a nc to warn the player
[Hard]
00:20:275 (3,4) - as for hard this place can be confusing for players, consider placing 4 furtherI want a stop feeling here, which is the music presents so keep it, but I will move it further if more people say that
00:21:058 (5) - no sound on blue tick, if so then there's one 00:20:834 - too, so this is whether overmapped or undermappeduse a reverse slider
00:40:648 (3) - you could give some more visual spacing (like putting this sliders tale up)fine
00:44:230 (2) - this reversed slider should be moved so it'd start from 00:44:006 - bc I barely hear sound on 00:44:678 - fix the beats here
00:54:752 (3) - as for hard you could map sounds insteadfor now I don't want to add stars
01:12:887 (4) - if you use NCs after 1/1 stacking, then so do herefixed
01:17:140 (1) - you could space this furtherhere has a bpm changing so spacing is a little sensitive, I'm afraid
[Insane]
00:44:678 (8) - replace this with circle bc it represents different sound than 00:44:454 (7) - fine
00:54:081 (1,2,3,1,2) - you should match them due to similar sound (I suggest on both 1/4 slider and a circle)not understood, I use 1/4 slider and a circle due to the last stronger sound, but well I will ask some people about that
00:53:633 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (I suggest on both triples)
01:14:902 (1) - two 1/2 circles imo would be better
01:16:512 (1) - ^ (like stacked or sth)I get it but I want to keep the slider later due to the changing bpm, so the previous pattern will be kept both
Great map owo, here's a kudo
GL with rank

thx for your mod and kd

You are so nice

Shiratori

525 posts

Joined April 2015

Shiratori 2017-11-11T12:34:47+00:00

占位发摸

Shiratori

525 posts

Joined April 2015

Shiratori 2017-11-11T13:37:30+00:00

Hard
00:00:797 (2,3) - 其实要是我的话我不会叠起来我会这样

img

https://puu.sh/yjD8r/3f8d9bb9ce.png

不过改不改无所谓
00:07:290 (1,2,3,4) - 挤成一坨了不太好
00:12:887 (1,2,3,4) - 同理
00:17:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这里分不清你想跟什么可以音效改的金宝一点
00:19:827 (1,2,3,4) - 别叠了
00:48:260 (5,1,2,3) - 略丑
00:50:051 (6) - 这个略迷
01:17:140 - mp3是不是没cut好

懒就摸一个diff

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-11-11T13:38:05+00:00

fixed

osu file format v14

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Creator:Sandrew
Version:Calendula
Source:八犬伝-東方八犬異聞-
Tags:abhor Lobelia hakkenden touhouhakkenibun tv size ending 小高光太郎
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Chanyah

1,845 posts

Joined November 2014

Chanyah 2017-11-13T18:39:56+00:00

From my queue - don't see much issues with the map so i'll just bring up minor stuff and suggestions

General

Calendula has no video on
I believe that having 7 od is low on the Insane - bring it up to 7.5
Wide screen support either needs to be on or off (preferably off) because some difficulties is on and some is off

Insane

00:24:305 (4) - the clap here is too loud imo and doesn't match the music much at all - Just using the whistle works better with this note

- this isn't the only but all in the slow part up - most soft hit clap you use don't work in notes like this 00:30:126 (3) -)
(Around here this part of the song 00:48:484 (1) - it works just fine)
- Id point them all out but it be better if you check it out yourself (plus I don't want this mod be too long about hit-sounds lol)
00:28:334 (4) - the normal whistle may have been a mistake but it doesn't sound right with the music so please remove it
00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for the most part, I understand the reason behind this but at the same time, I do wish the spacing was lower down some because the jumps are a bit too high for this slow part of the song
00:59:006 (6) - helps flow a better if you bring the head of the slider down some

GL

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-11-15T12:04:34+00:00

Amamiya Kanade wrote:
Hard
00:00:797 (2,3) - 其实要是我的话我不会叠起来我会这样
img
https://puu.sh/yjD8r/3f8d9bb9ce.png
不过改不改无所谓我柑橘目前的停顿感挺好的，应该也不影响读，以及那啥你知道可以用img代码吗
00:07:290 (1,2,3,4) - 挤成一坨了不太好spacing影响吧……我觉得至少很整齐啊……
00:12:887 (1,2,3,4) - 同理
00:17:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这里分不清你想跟什么可以音效改的金宝一点跟鼓啊，跟人声容易头轻脚重，我不是淫笑大师改不动orz
00:19:827 (1,2,3,4) - 别叠了改了
00:48:260 (5,1,2,3) - 略丑我觉得海星，你有没有别的推荐
00:50:051 (6) - 这个略迷emm
01:17:140 - mp3是不是没cut好没有办法，官方蜜汁剪辑

懒就摸一个diff

邪魔

Hailie wrote:
From my queue - don't see much issues with the map so i'll just bring up minor stuff and suggestions

General
Calendula has no video on
I believe that having 7 od is low on the Insane - bring it up to 7.5up to 7.3
Wide screen support either needs to be on or off (preferably off) because some difficulties is on and some is off
Insane
00:24:305 (4) - the clap here is too loud imo and doesn't match the music much at all - Just using the whistle works better with this note

- this isn't the only but all in the slow part up - most soft hit clap you use don't work in notes like this 00:30:126 (3) -)
(Around here this part of the song 00:48:484 (1) - it works just fine)
- Id point them all out but it be better if you check it out yourself (plus I don't want this mod be too long about hit-sounds lol)
thx, I got it
00:28:334 (4) - the normal whistle may have been a mistake but it doesn't sound right with the music so please remove it
00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for the most part, I understand the reason behind this but at the same time, I do wish the spacing was lower down some because the jumps are a bit too high for this slow part of the song
00:59:006 (6) - helps flow a better if you bring the head of the slider down some
others all fixed
GL

thx for mod

Garden

osu! Alumni

1,345 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-11-17T12:04:57+00:00

General

你的难度里在开头结尾两段适当加点whistle跟旋律
最后转盘加几根绿线渐弱一下，60%转到最后面很吵

Normal

00:22:961 (5,1,2,3,4) - 虽然说摆得很干净bpm也很低，但作为最低难度最好还是减少这种读图相对比较复杂的节奏。简化起来的话，00:22:961 (5) - 可以用圈，00:24:305 (2,3) - 用一个1/1就可以了，很多人声和鼓都不是必要跟，抓到重点就可以了
00:48:484 - 漏了finish，高难度同
00:52:066 - 可以用 https://puu.sh/ynRVz/47e367c54b.png 节奏跟到这个重音，也不影响跟人声
00:52:961 (3) - 可以长半拍，这里1/2鼓点比较紧凑，节奏也用1/2间隔比较合适
01:02:588 - 就这个finish压在滑条尾，建议调整节奏
01:09:976 (5,6) - 同前所说我比较倾向换成一个滑条，不过如果一定要跟牢人声也行吧

Hard

00:11:991 (3,1) - hard就不要这么拘谨了，人声所有音节可以基本跟到。我建议 https://puu.sh/ynSsX/c4c4c4881e.png，1/1滑条跟长音
00:54:752 (3) - 2333 https://puu.sh/ynSxC/351683d131.png

Insane

00:14:902 (2,3) - 直上直下有点别手
00:16:917 (4,1,2) - 这个往回拐的打起来有点不舒服，可以试试这个顺序https://puu.sh/ynTkQ/85c7b0fc5f.png
00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 高音往低音感觉间距大到小比较好
00:44:006 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这是跟的什么啊? 慢段 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9558638 这样简单点就行了吧
00:59:902 (2,3,4,5,1) - 和 00:59:678 (1) - 包一下比较好看
01:02:140 (1,2,3) - 前面做一个重复没问题，这里既然要换方向不如跳开一点，这样stack前面的东西就显得比较挤
01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里flow感觉打起来有点奇怪啊，你这样摆我也不知道怎么改好可以自己琢磨下

Calendula

00:11:543 - 00:12:439 - clap?
00:19:603 (6) - finish?
00:41:320 - 这段用40%不好，比起前面背景反而更加响了，很多hitnormal几乎听不到，建议改60
00:47:700 (5,6,7,8) - 这什么节奏。。。如果要这么下的话一定要自己音效制造一些其他反馈，虽然梗本身不难打
00:53:857 (3) - 我感觉这种一般优先finish吧
00:56:991 - 00:57:215 - 可以whistle
00:57:775 (2,3) - etc. 这间距就比较尴尬，当单点读有点快，当连打读的话容易断滑条.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9558800 我建议这样或者按你的排版喜好调整一下间距
01:11:767 - 01:12:439 - 也用softfinish就好

挺干净的set，自己再改改细节觉得ok满意了可以找我泡
我的图: 1 2 随便选一张摸

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-11-17T14:05:31+00:00

好的，谢谢花园爷爷
这几周会比较忙我先摸完你的图再慢慢reply改起来

edit：normal，hard和general全部fix了，就不reply了
edit:Insane

00:14:902 (2,3) - 直上直下有点别手改成了斜线
00:16:917 (4,1,2) - 这个往回拐的打起来有点不舒服，可以试试这个顺序https://puu.sh/ynTkQ/85c7b0fc5f.png改了
00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 高音往低音感觉间距大到小比较好好的
00:44:006 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这是跟的什么啊? 慢段 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9558638 这样简单点就行了吧好的
00:59:902 (2,3,4,5,1) - 和 00:59:678 (1) - 包一下比较好看目前一定要包起来的话后面的排列有点接不上……
01:02:140 (1,2,3) - 前面做一个重复没问题，这里既然要换方向不如跳开一点，这样stack前面的东西就显得比较挤改大了
01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里flow感觉打起来有点奇怪啊，你这样摆我也不知道怎么改好可以自己琢磨下暂且改了一下

好了，我再去找几个人看看细节问题，回头找你

Last edited by Sandrew 2017-11-24T14:13:45+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Lobelia

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Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-11-18T12:48:58+00:00

Garden wrote:
Calendula
00:11:543 - 00:12:439 - clap?
00:19:603 (6) - finish?这里因为只听到了鼓音。。但并没有那种很强烈的FINISH的音效，所以没加上
00:41:320 - 这段用40%不好，比起前面背景反而更加响了，很多hitnormal几乎听不到，建议改60
00:47:700 (5,6,7,8) - 这什么节奏。。。如果要这么下的话一定要自己音效制造一些其他反馈，虽然梗本身不难打
00:53:857 (3) - 我感觉这种一般优先finish吧
00:56:991 - 00:57:215 - 可以whistle
00:57:775 (2,3) - etc. 这间距就比较尴尬，当单点读有点快，当连打读的话容易断滑条.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9558800 我建议这样或者按你的排版喜好调整一下间距
01:11:767 - 01:12:439 - 也用softfinish就好
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321,303,53857,1,6,3:0:0:0:
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466,269,54193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,277,54305,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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254,187,54640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,157,54752,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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389,161,55200,1,4,0:1:0:0:
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145,164,55648,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,164,56543,5,0,0:0:0:0:
145,164,56655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,77,56991,2,0,L|252:71,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,210,57215,2,0,L|71:222,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,67,57439,6,0,L|130:240,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,287,57775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,204,57887,2,0,L|242:215,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,322,58111,2,0,B|426:278|412:234|412:234|404:268|364:286,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,56,58558,2,0,B|321:118|321:118|328:136|328:136|318:203,1,150.000005722046,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
477,89,59006,6,0,L|396:103,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,152,59454,1,2,3:0:0:0:
230,133,59566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,111,59678,2,0,P|218:87|217:62,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,30,59902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,57,60014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,86,60126,2,0,P|104:109|102:136,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,60349,6,0,L|83:252,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,316,60573,2,0,L|181:311,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,310,60797,6,0,P|242:286|256:214,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,253,61245,6,0,L|411:248,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,193,61469,2,0,L|323:186,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,40,61693,6,0,P|300:86|256:139,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,179,62140,6,0,P|171:181|207:179,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,109,62364,1,2,3:0:0:0:
236,270,62588,6,0,P|162:276|81:265,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,26,63036,2,0,P|178:61|176:106,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,121,63260,2,0,P|57:108|103:110,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,270,63484,1,4,0:0:0:0:
218,326,63595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,346,63707,1,2,3:0:0:0:
108,321,63819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,266,63931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,97,64155,5,2,3:0:0:0:
204,150,64267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,171,64379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,157,64491,1,2,3:0:0:0:
342,10,64603,6,0,P|275:22|272:101,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,143,64939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,31,65051,2,0,L|403:60,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,262,65275,2,0,B|483:176|483:176|469:210|432:223,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,93,65723,2,0,L|407:143,1,150.000005722046,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
420,382,66170,6,0,B|409:314|409:314|430:334|457:336,1,112.500004291535,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,262,66618,1,2,3:0:0:0:
203,293,66842,1,2,3:0:0:0:
465,262,67066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,262,67178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,262,67290,1,2,3:0:0:0:
329,268,67514,2,0,L|335:234,2,25.0000009536744,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,331,67737,2,0,L|289:367,2,25.0000009536744,2|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,293,67961,6,0,B|92:283|92:283|122:321,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,217,68409,6,0,P|257:183|256:157,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,120,68633,1,2,3:0:0:0:
372,32,68857,6,0,B|380:140|380:140|424:100,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,42,69305,6,0,P|267:47|236:47,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,117,69528,2,0,P|181:117|219:127,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,53,69752,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,53,69864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,53,69976,2,0,P|120:123|103:202,1,150.000005722046,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
321,278,70424,1,2,3:0:0:0:
135,293,70648,6,0,L|217:287,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,213,71096,1,2,3:0:0:0:
416,239,71208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,268,71320,1,2,3:0:0:0:
419,297,71431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,325,71543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,324,71655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,320,71767,5,4,0:0:0:0:
481,147,71991,1,2,3:0:0:0:
226,235,72215,1,2,3:0:0:0:
368,26,72439,2,0,L|356:111,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,100,72887,5,2,3:0:0:0:
111,151,73111,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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182,161,74902,5,0,0:0:0:0:
182,161,75126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,104,75349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,161,75573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,106,75797,1,2,0:0:0:0:
437,230,76021,2,0,P|436:195|427:161,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,318,76512,6,0,P|281:327|228:321,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,315,76914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,292,77048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,238,77140,6,0,B|265:245|291:240|291:240|303:130,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,57,77811,2,0,P|336:59|382:151,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,132,78483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,148,78707,6,0,L|442:314,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,295,79602,2,0,B|229:300|229:300|187:270|187:270|131:277,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,351,80274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,351,80498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,211,80722,6,0,P|267:160|252:79,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,59,81169,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,152,81393,2,0,B|194:145|194:145|217:152|217:152|240:146|240:146|264:153|264:153|285:147|285:147|306:156|306:156|326:150,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,151,82289,6,0,L|413:114,2,20,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82513,12,0,87886,0:0:0:0:

Shiratori

525 posts

Joined April 2015

Shiratori 2017-11-18T18:31:46+00:00

我当然知道啊不过懒的打两套代码了嘻嘻

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-11-20T07:10:55+00:00

懒了啊。。能不能当ticket啊

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-11-20T08:28:12+00:00

Suzuki_1112 wrote:
懒了啊。。能不能当ticket啊

不急，insane我要到周末才有空改，什么时候改完了再找你吧

MeAqua tete

Beatmap Nominator

386 posts

Joined January 2015

MeAqua tete 2017-11-21T16:43:59+00:00

我我我我我我我我..我不是故意咕的..在路上了..相信我

Cris-

Beatmap Nominator

552 posts

Joined March 2015

Cris- 2017-12-10T18:41:46+00:00

Hi, M4M from my queue

Normal

00:03:036 (5) - Perfect stack with 00:00:573 (2) ?
00:32:812 - This could be sound nice here: https://puu.sh/yDu0y/a783d62fb7.png
00:40:648 - 1/2 slider
00:49:827 (3) - Replace this for a circle and put a slider 1/2 00:50:275 - here (with NC)
00:53:857 (5) - NC
01:16:512 (1,1) - The space between these 2 objets is too close, you can add more without DS to the 01:17:140 (1)

Hard

01:16:780 (2) - Maybe you could transform this into a slider that ends in 01:17:047
01:20:722 (4) - NC

Insane

00:18:036 (4) - NC
00:46:021 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow
00:59:006 (6) - NC here and remove 00:59:678 (1) - here
01:06:170 (6) - Same as above ^
01:09:976 (3) - NC

Calendula

00:19:155 (4) - Stack with 00:18:484 (2) - and 00:19:379 (5,6) - Ctrl+G flows better
00:29:454 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:44:902 (3) - NC
00:50:051 (8) - ^

An advice that could give you is make this type of sliders (Example 00:27:663 (3) - on Insane diff) something like this: https://puu.sh/yDuBy/64cf4cc813.png or 00:28:782 (1) - on Caledula (this looks nice) ; looks much better and feel more polished

Good Luck!!~

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-11T11:33:30+00:00

Cris- wrote:
Hi, M4M from my queue

Normal
00:03:036 (5) - Perfect stack with 00:00:573 (2) ?omg fixed
00:32:812 - This could be sound nice here: https://puu.sh/yDu0y/a783d62fb7.pngI want to follow the vocal only, not so important to add the piano here
00:40:648 - 1/2 sliderabove
00:49:827 (3) - Replace this for a circle and put a slider 1/2 00:50:275 - here (with NC)for now it's ok but I will keep it in mind
00:53:857 (5) - NCabove
01:16:512 (1,1) - The space between these 2 objets is too close, you can add more without DS to the 01:17:140 (1)here has a bpm changing so I think follow the ds rule will be easy for beginners

Hard
01:16:780 (2) - Maybe you could transform this into a slider that ends in 01:17:047keep it in mind
01:20:722 (4) - NCadjust the nc here

Insane
00:18:036 (4) - NCI nc by vocal here
00:46:021 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flowok
00:59:006 (6) - NC here and remove 00:59:678 (1) - hereok
01:06:170 (6) - Same as above ^ok
01:09:976 (3) - NCdon't understand

An advice that could give you is make this type of sliders (Example 00:27:663 (3) - on Insane diff) something like this: https://puu.sh/yDuBy/64cf4cc813.png or 00:28:782 (1) - on Caledula (this looks nice) ; looks much better and feel more polished oh someone said about that but he didn't give a exchange example, thx for your advice, I will reshape them later

Good Luck!!~

thx for modding

Last edited by Sandrew 2017-12-12T12:56:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ShinodaYuu

633 posts

Joined May 2016

ShinodaYuu 2017-12-11T15:23:56+00:00

Hi, from my queue

[General]
I believe offset should be moved about -7 ms
I don't know why you changed BPM at 01:16:512 - . Normal is fine

[Normal]
Generally I would recommend not to make normal based fully on vocals beacause of this breaking flow gaps
00:32:588 - Fill from here to 00:33:708 - with two 1/2 reversing sliders
00:36:618 - Imo sound from here to 00:37:066 - is much more important than the one from 00:36:282 - to 00:36:618 - , so I wouldn't add this reversion, but add a 1/1 reversed slider from 00:36:618 - to 00:37:066 -
00:39:081 - This gap feels weird, think of adding reversion to 00:38:409 (2) - instead of 3
00:44:006 - Consider adding a 1 beat slider
00:50:275 - There's music!
00:52:290 - ^
01:12:663 - ^
01:08:633 (2) - Make it more following the path

[Insane]
00:18:708 (6,7) - I would rather avoid this gap by placing 1/1 slider at 6 and make 7 1/2 slider
00:33:036 (3,4) - Sounds on 00:33:036 - , 00:33:260 - and 00:33:484 - are weaker than 00:33:708 - so maybe change this first slider into reversed one and put a circle on white tick
00:34:491 (2) - There's no special sound here, I think
00:38:073 (2) - ^
00:44:790 (5) - ^
00:37:066 (2) - That's not the best place for stack, will be confusing with low AR
00:41:320 (1) - End it on blue tick, you'll get something like 00:42:887 (5) -
00:43:334 - Omiting this vocal sound feels strange for me
00:47:812 (4,5,6,7) - I don't know why you put stream here
01:04:043 - I would fill this gap
01:15:349 (2) - As it's vocal-only try using two circles
01:16:512 (1,2) - If you'll change BPM put 3 circles on white red and second white ticks

So that's it, hope some of this will be helpful

Don't forget to mod back

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-12T13:16:29+00:00

Milar001 wrote:
Hi, from my queue

[General]
I believe offset should be moved about -7 msI will ask someone else
I don't know why you changed BPM at 01:16:512 - . Normal is fineif not vocal can't be followed

[Normal]
Generally I would recommend not to make normal based fully on vocals beacause of this breaking flow gaps
00:32:588 - Fill from here to 00:33:708 - with two 1/2 reversing sliders
00:36:618 - Imo sound from here to 00:37:066 - is much more important than the one from 00:36:282 - to 00:36:618 - , so I wouldn't add this reversion, but add a 1/1 reversed slider from 00:36:618 - to 00:37:066 -
00:39:081 - This gap feels weird, think of adding reversion to 00:38:409 (2) - instead of 3
00:44:006 - Consider adding a 1 beat slider
00:50:275 - There's music!
00:52:290 - ^
01:12:663 - ^
01:08:633 (2) - Make it more following the path

[Insane]
00:18:708 (6,7) - I would rather avoid this gap by placing 1/1 slider at 6 and make 7 1/2 slider
00:33:036 (3,4) - Sounds on 00:33:036 - , 00:33:260 - and 00:33:484 - are weaker than 00:33:708 - so maybe change this first slider into reversed one and put a circle on white tick
00:34:491 (2) - There's no special sound here, I think
00:38:073 (2) - ^
00:44:790 (5) - ^
00:37:066 (2) - That's not the best place for stack, will be confusing with low AR
00:41:320 (1) - End it on blue tick, you'll get something like 00:42:887 (5) -
00:43:334 - Omiting this vocal sound feels strange for me
00:47:812 (4,5,6,7) - I don't know why you put stream here
01:04:043 - I would fill this gap
01:15:349 (2) - As it's vocal-only try using two circles
01:16:512 (1,2) - If you'll change BPM put 3 circles on white red and second white ticks

So that's it, hope some of this will be helpful
Don't forget to mod back

almost fixed, thx for modding

EncoreW

833 posts

Joined June 2013

EncoreW 2017-12-13T05:00:25+00:00

from my modding queue

[General]

audioleadin 0->2000左右

[Calendula]

00:00:126 (1,4) - 这种钢琴重音不应该和 00:00:349 (2,3) - 这两个用同样的音效同样的音量，否则根本没有区分度

00:01:693 (3) - 00:02:588 (3) - 00:03:260 (2,3) - ^

00:00:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这4个nc听上去的话应该是音量按 nc慢慢小下去的，可以考虑插点绿线，00:03:708 (1) - 回到原来水平

00:03:708 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个滑条头也是应该下重音的，不太好跟滑条尾用同样音效

00:06:170 (4) - 这种地方直接下重音，音量100%都不过分

00:28:334 (4) - 加 whistle，00:28:334 (4,5) - 这两个地方的音效应该是一样的

00:30:126 (3) - 加 whistle，00:31:917 (2,3,1) - 加 whistle，事实上我觉得你用 whistle来表现钢琴音不是很恰当，钢琴音可以找那种专门的钢琴音效来上，比如 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/394742，这个图里面就有很多钢琴音效可以扒下来用

00:38:185 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 加 whistle，讲道理这个 whistle比较适合这种比较轻的地方

00:43:782 (4,5) - 滑条尾消音

00:52:849 (5) - 00:54:193 (5) - 00:54:640 (2) - 00:59:566 (3) - 这几个地方听上去好像都不应该下三连啊

01:02:364 - 节奏应该和之前的差不多，换1/4滑条

01:11:208 (3,5) - 这两个也是不需要这么塞满的，去掉或者放两个1/4滑条，滑条尾消音，因为这两个地方比 01:11:096 (2,4) - 差太多了

01:17:140 - 下钢琴音，加音量，至少要比 01:17:587 - 这个地方更响

01:18:707 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 钢琴音塞满

gl

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-12-13T09:39:54+00:00

EncoreW wrote:
from my modding queue

[General]

audioleadin 0->2000左右

[Calendula]

00:00:126 (1,4) - 这种钢琴重音不应该和 00:00:349 (2,3) - 这两个用同样的音效同样的音量，否则根本没有区分度

00:01:693 (3) - 00:02:588 (3) - 00:03:260 (2,3) - ^

00:00:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这4个nc听上去的话应该是音量按 nc慢慢小下去的，可以考虑插点绿线，00:03:708 (1) - 回到原来水平

00:03:708 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个滑条头也是应该下重音的，不太好跟滑条尾用同样音效

00:06:170 (4) - 这种地方直接下重音，音量100%都不过分

00:28:334 (4) - 加 whistle，00:28:334 (4,5) - 这两个地方的音效应该是一样的

00:30:126 (3) - 加 whistle，00:31:917 (2,3,1) - 加 whistle，事实上我觉得你用 whistle来表现钢琴音不是很恰当，钢琴音可以找那种专门的钢琴音效来上，比如 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/394742，这个图里面就有很多钢琴音效可以扒下来用

00:38:185 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 加 whistle，讲道理这个 whistle比较适合这种比较轻的地方

00:43:782 (4,5) - 滑条尾消音

00:52:849 (5) - 00:54:193 (5) - 00:54:640 (2) - 00:59:566 (3) - 这几个地方听上去好像都不应该下三连啊QWQ可我真的仔细听了，的确就是有音啊

01:02:364 - 节奏应该和之前的差不多，换1/4滑条ORZ这个前面两组刚好在滑条头都能听到人声咬字，这里主要是想做出区别，打起来也没有维和

01:11:208 (3,5) - 这两个也是不需要这么塞满的，去掉或者放两个1/4滑条，滑条尾消音，因为这两个地方比 01:11:096 (2,4) - 差太多了这里的话，就是没有人声了，我知道说不塞满的意思就是去对小提琴。。。可这里并没有人声需要去对了，对小提琴就有点无聊，才把鼓音填上的QWQ

01:17:140 - 下钢琴音，加音量，至少要比 01:17:587 - 这个地方更响

01:18:707 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 钢琴音塞满

gl

音效的方面都改了=W=毕竟我一直音效苦手

Cris- wrote:
Hi, M4M from my queue

Calendula
00:19:155 (4) - Stack with 00:18:484 (2) - and 00:19:379 (5,6) - Ctrl+G flows betterbut the instrument is really soft on the 4 note , so i think stack with is not fit the music
00:29:454 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:44:902 (3) - NC
00:50:051 (8) - ^
no reply = fixed!

Good Luck!!~

fixed

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paydayzcool

390 posts

Joined October 2014

paydayzcool 2017-12-14T01:36:36+00:00

Hi there, M4M from my modding queue: https://osu.ppy.sh/community/forums/topics/675299,

Insane

01:12:887 (1) - I reckon this part of the song is better represented with 2 circles.

Calendula

00:43:782 (4,5) - This spacing is misleading as it is shared with the usual 1/2 spacing most of the time.
00:53:185 (7,8) - Why such a big jump here? The song hasn't reached the climax of its buildup.

This mapset is very clean, so I have nothing really much to say.

Here's some kudosu!

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-12-14T02:24:14+00:00

鸽子来了
骗个摸吧XD https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/696085/#osu/1474641
只做完了EZ和EX qwq

[Normal]
可能会摸的非常强迫症反正低难度也没啥好摸的（
00:07:290 (1,2) - 弧度可以再调下没对齐
00:08:857 (3) - 这里节奏有点问题后面只空个1/1感觉不好可以不折返然后00:09:528 - 加个单点
00:18:036 - 加个圈
00:39:305 (3) - 移到00:39:081 - 去这段你人声没跟那么紧像00:33:931 - 就没下圈
01:08:857 (3,4,5) - 包一下？
01:12:215 (2,1) - ^
01:16:512 (1) - 不用滑条吧放个圈不跟后面音试试

[Hard]
00:06:618 (3,1) - 小blanket多注意
00:08:857 (4) - s型滑条能拉的更好康些我个人习惯这么拉

SPOILER

https://puu.sh/yFYYN/bf25b39116.png

00:11:991 (1,2) - 不平行（
00:31:917 (4) - 可以这里空一拍不放滑条曲子和缓而00:30:349 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - 这一截不空拍太长了
01:13:334 (1) - 只是感觉这滑条这么庄重和曲子不搭（x）
01:22:289 (4) - 1/8

[Insane]
00:20:387 - 为什么只有这里有1/4 后面00:22:178 - 这些都米有
00:23:409 (1,2) - 形状可以拉更顺一点
00:24:752 (5,1,2) - 这三个的flow有那么点诡异
00:31:245 (4) - 这里不用s型比较好和00:30:573 (2) -上下对称就行
00:32:364 - 已经是高难度了这里应该clickable 取消00:31:917 (5) - 折返然后圈放00:32:588 (1) - 上就行
00:32:588 (1) - 加个圈这里空拍太长
00:46:021 (3,4) - 近了放2尾巴上
01:12:439 (6) - 不要滑条放个圈就行
01:14:902 (1) - 改两个圈重叠更好
01:16:913 (2,1) - 有点迷连打不就好了
01:22:289 (4) - 不要折返顺便只有头加whistle比较好
3.53叫hard也没啥问题前面2.7叫advanced就行

[Calendula]
不写成Lobelia's Calendula么……
00:09:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 前面都挺慢这里突然强度有点大了可以00:10:648 (7) - 放00:10:200 - 然后 00:10:200 (4,5,6) - 放00:10:424 - 位置不用变至少移动强度可以下去
00:13:334 (3) - ctrl+g 跟歌词
00:18:708 (3) - ^
00:21:954 - 或者00:22:290 - 加个圈
00:23:185 - 别漏音啊
00:26:431 (1) - 少折返一次不然容易断cb
00:47:924 (6,7) - 有点难读
00:53:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 我是觉得不如做大跳……至少三连的中间加上明显点的音效不然感觉很怪顺便这里可以音量渐大
HP搞到7或6.5吧 insane都6了

没了建议开始找人飞图

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-12-14T03:46:16+00:00

Ametrin wrote:
[Calendula]
不写成Lobelia's Calendula么……不吧QWQ加了怪怪的，问了别的BN也说可以不加上
00:09:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 前面都挺慢这里突然强度有点大了可以00:10:648 (7) - 放00:10:200 - 然后 00:10:200 (4,5,6) - 放00:10:424 - 位置不用变至少移动强度可以下去有道理=W=
00:13:334 (3) - ctrl+g 跟歌词
00:18:708 (3) - ^？？这两个不是很懂。。。是在跟歌词啊？觉得FLOW不好？
00:21:954 - 或者00:22:290 - 加个圈我选择了前者加圈，谢谢=W=
00:23:185 - 别漏音啊这里不是漏音啦，因为鼓音是从蓝线起的，红线上明显跟后面的乐器不是一组，对上反而不好
00:26:431 (1) - 少折返一次不然容易断cb不会吧。。。都是隔了1/4拍，前后间距也一样
00:47:924 (6,7) - 有点难读QWQ应该不会。。。别人打起来都觉得这里很顺
00:53:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 我是觉得不如做大跳……至少三连的中间加上明显点的音效不然感觉很怪顺便这里可以音量渐大这里大家都在说ORZ那我看着改改吧
HP搞到7或6.5吧 insane都6了好

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-14T11:01:49+00:00

placehold for reply tomorrow
以及楼上姐姐你的diff文件呢

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-15T11:47:23+00:00

@paydayzcool imo slider is also fine
thx for modding

Ametrin wrote:
鸽子来了
骗个摸吧XD https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/696085/#osu/1474641
只做完了EZ和EX qwq

[Normal]
可能会摸的非常强迫症反正低难度也没啥好摸的（
00:07:290 (1,2) - 弧度可以再调下没对齐好
00:08:857 (3) - 这里节奏有点问题后面只空个1/1感觉不好可以不折返然后00:09:528 - 加个单点因为主要是在跟vocal所以这里拿折返来抵人声的长音了……
00:18:036 - 加个圈好，改了一下节奏
00:39:305 (3) - 移到00:39:081 - 去这段你人声没跟那么紧像00:33:931 - 就没下圈你说的对，我把前面的人声圈补上了
01:08:857 (3,4,5) - 包一下？好
01:12:215 (2,1) - ^好
01:16:512 (1) - 不用滑条吧放个圈不跟后面音试试还是想紧跟vocal惹

[Hard]
00:06:618 (3,1) - 小blanket多注意好，这里一段都改了
00:08:857 (4) - s型滑条能拉的更好康些我个人习惯这么拉前面一个人也这么说，insane里能改我都改了，这里是以为影响之后排列所以没改……然而改完了发现根本没影响233
SPOILER
https://puu.sh/yFYYN/bf25b39116.png
00:11:991 (1,2) - 不平行（好
00:31:917 (4) - 可以这里空一拍不放滑条曲子和缓而00:30:349 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - 这一截不空拍太长了不跟vocal我浑身难受……
01:13:334 (1) - 只是感觉这滑条这么庄重和曲子不搭（x）唔，实在不会拉滑条……
01:22:289 (4) - 1/8知道是，hard放1/8不太好吧（我玩这种原地1/8折返后面不跟滑条都可能会断，反正1/4滑条也能盖上了

[Insane]
00:20:387 - 为什么只有这里有1/4 后面00:22:178 - 这些都米有因为这里能听到比较明显的1/4，后面都米有
00:23:409 (1,2) - 形状可以拉更顺一点好
00:24:752 (5,1,2) - 这三个的flow有那么点诡异改顺了应该？
00:31:245 (4) - 这里不用s型比较好和00:30:573 (2) -上下对称就行我是希望和00:27:663 (3) - 这部分对应
00:32:364 - 已经是高难度了这里应该clickable 取消00:31:917 (5) - 折返然后圈放00:32:588 (1) - 上就行好
00:32:588 (1) - 加个圈这里空拍太长？？？没理解
00:46:021 (3,4) - 近了放2尾巴上好
01:12:439 (6) - 不要滑条放个圈就行好
01:14:902 (1) - 改两个圈重叠更好都这么说我就改吧
01:16:913 (2,1) - 有点迷连打不就好了既然都说要连打就满足你们
01:22:289 (4) - 不要折返顺便只有头加whistle比较好好
3.53叫hard也没啥问题前面2.7叫advanced就行现在改难度名容易set爆炸……现在3星多的insane满地跑应该海星
没了建议开始找人飞图

不小心多开了一楼……
谢谢大佬的摸和星

Shiratori

525 posts

Joined April 2015

Shiratori 2017-12-15T14:04:42+00:00

Hard
00:03:708 (1) - 这个没snap到音
00:05:499 (1) - ^
00:37:961 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得不太好
00:43:111 (3) - 3/4?
00:54:752 (3) - 好像没对称
01:07:737 (5,6) - 你觉得这样好吗

no kd

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-12-18T13:20:07+00:00

fixed

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Soai Calendula.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56767
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Souai Calendula
TitleUnicode:奏愛カレンデュラ
Artist:Ceui
ArtistUnicode:Ceui
Creator:Sandrew
Version:Calendula
Source:八犬伝-東方八犬異聞-
Tags:abhor Lobelia hakkenden touhouhakkenibun tv size ending 小高光太郎
BeatmapID:1400567
BeatmapSetID:661578

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,285,"ED.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-19T11:25:38+00:00

Amamiya Kanade wrote:
Hard
00:03:708 (1) - 这个没snap到音一拳打包瞎复制音效的自己
00:05:499 (1) - ^一拳不够再来一拳
00:37:961 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得不太好why?
00:43:111 (3) - 3/4?这里vo落在介于3/4和1/1之间，我经他人建议用1/1糊过去了，这样也可以合背景鼓
00:54:752 (3) - 好像没对称不会拉，告辞
01:07:737 (5,6) - 你觉得这样好吗我觉得海星

no kd

thx for modding

Shiratori

525 posts

Joined April 2015

Shiratori 2017-12-20T04:08:36+00:00

Sandrew wrote:
Amamiya Kanade wrote:
Hard
00:03:708 (1) - 这个没snap到音一拳打包瞎复制音效的自己
00:05:499 (1) - ^一拳不够再来一拳
00:37:961 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得不太好why?
00:43:111 (3) - 3/4?这里vo落在介于3/4和1/1之间，我经他人建议用1/1糊过去了，这样也可以合背景鼓
00:54:752 (3) - 好像没对称不会拉，告辞
01:07:737 (5,6) - 你觉得这样好吗我觉得海星

no kd
thx for modding

围观Sandrew打拳

Garden

osu! Alumni

1,345 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-12-27T04:49:38+00:00

recheck

Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap3.wav, normal-hitfinish3.wav, soft-hitclap3.wav, soft-hitnormal3.wav, soft-hitwhistle3.wav

Hard:
01:16:512 (1,2) - 这里照着人声变bpm用两个圈就很容易按100，不如就换个1/2跟Normal一样

Insane:
00:10:648 (3,1) - ctrl-g节奏跟人声?
01:22:401 (1) - 停的位置和其他难度不一样

Calendula:
00:47:924 (6,7) - 我想了想这里拆开还是不太符合音乐强度，考虑stack，应该不会太影响美观度

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-27T11:36:07+00:00

thanks!!

all fixed, now waiting for 阿伯

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-12-28T04:12:31+00:00

ok,fixed~

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Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-28T10:57:47+00:00

updated~~

Garden

osu! Alumni

1,345 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-12-28T11:11:22+00:00

bubbled

Sandrew

559 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Sandrew 2017-12-29T10:28:06+00:00

哇谢谢花园

flake

713 posts

Joined December 2015

flake 2018-05-05T14:49:11+00:00

well ok you asked for a mod on insane

Insane

00:08:857 (1,2) - I personally think this kind of rhythm choice is better as it emphasizes the pitch change in 00:09:081 - . And while the vocals are not there, the sound on also gets to be clickable. https://i.imgur.com/fVRJA6K.png

00:19:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'll be honest, It took me 4 tries to actually hit these. Because of how dense the last section was, I barely thought that the next section would be less dense, since the last section literally has almost an object placed on every tick.

I do think 00:25:200 - can use more emphasis. imo I'd map it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878017

00:32:364 (1,2,3) - I think 1/2 sliders fit well here since a lot of prominent sounds are on the white ticks

00:35:275 (3,4) - maybe have it as a slider?

00:49:155 (3,3) - imo it's better to have these as circles in place.

00:49:827 (5,6,5) - have 00:49:827 (5,6) - as slider and 00:51:618 (5) - as circles to show the increase in intensity.

00:57:215 (4,2) - space the slider abit further from the circle

01:01:245 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - either crtl+g 01:01:693 (4) - and replace 01:02:588 (1) - with 01:00:797 (1) - rotated by 45 degrees.

01:15:349 - woah this section feels weird to map lol

01:18:707 (4,1) - make into slider

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2018-05-06T07:21:01+00:00

垃圾摸

nazi mod

00:34:155 (1) - 考虑和下面抱起来？

00:49:603 (4,5,6,1) - 正方形歪了

凑不出什么来了 gl

Kensuke

1,856 posts

Joined April 2014

Kensuke 2018-05-12T07:02:28+00:00

oof

[general]
you might add the romanised word of 小高光太郎 to be easier to find.
and you might add ed, which stands for ending

[normal]
you might increase the difficulty settings in this diff higher actually. rn the gap between normal and hard is pretty high in terms of circle size and approach rate settings. something like cs 3.5 and ar 5 might work better.
00:12:887 (3) - you might change this into 1/2 reverse slider instead since there is a vocal sound at 00:13:111 -. (do-t-te)
00:52:737 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these 1/2 chains are too consecutive tho, remind that this is the lowest difficulty in the mapset. using long chains of 1/2 might be too difficult for newbie players to play. so you might make the rhythm here more simplistic for players, like merging these hitobjects 00:52:737 (2,3) - into plain 1/2 slider? so it could keep the rhythm of 00:53:633 (4,5,6,7) -.
01:16:512 (1) - i know that the bpm changes here, but adding new combo individually isn't kinda fit with the song. i think you could remove it.

[hard]
00:21:618 (1,2) - people might get confused with the 1/4 stacks prior 00:19:827 (1,2,3) -, so it might be better if you could un-stacking it to avoid having a reading problem.
00:43:111 (3,4) - i think you could follow the vocal's rhythm instead just using plain 1/1 sliders, as the sliders prior 00:41:320 (1,2) - also follow the vocal's rhythm too. using a 3/4 slider with a reverse would fit with the vocal's rhythm better.
00:54:752 (3) - making this slider following the vocal's rhythm is kinda weird, as the previous hitobjects in this part have followed the instrumental's rhythm.
01:02:140 (3,4) - using 2 circles here might not be a good idea, since the sound here is as the same as the sounds prior 01:00:349 -, 01:01:245 -.
01:16:512 (1,1) - players might get confused that these hitobjects have 1/2 gap between each hitobjects since the visual spacing here is as the same as the spacing prior. you should move it further to avoid having a reading issue.
01:22:289 (4) - pretty sure that you're following the piano's rhythm here, but the actual piano's rhythm isn't started at the big white tick. the piano's sounds are at 01:22:233 -, 01:22:289 -, and 01:22:345 -. so you should use a 1/8 slider with a reverse (which starts at 01:22:233 - and ends at 01:22:345 -.) instead.

[insane]
might use ar 8 for a better ar spread between mapset
00:00:126 (1,2) - you might make the spacing here higher to emphasize the piano sounds at here, as you have done on the next hitobjects 00:01:693 (1) -, 00:02:588 (3) -.
00:51:618 (5) - since there are both vocal's sounds at both slider start and slider end, i think using 2 circles here would fit with the vocal's rhythm better.

[calendula]
i think you should indicate that this diff is made by guest mapper by adding a possession before the difficulty name, since rn players could think that this difficulty is made by mapper host.
00:05:723 (2,3) - i think you should make these hitobjects overlap to each other than making these 00:05:499 (1,2) - overlap to each other, since the piano's pitch decreases at 00:05:723 -, so making these hitcircles 00:05:499 (1,2) - far from each other could help emphasizing the decreasing piano pitch.
00:48:484 (1,2) - it's pretty forcing for players to play actually, since the flow here is kinda contradicting. players would expect 00:48:931 (2) - to be at somewhere around the slider tail, not being blanket.
01:07:514 (7,8) - there are no 1/6 sounds in both vocal's nor instrument's rhythm here, so why are these sliders mapped as 1/6 reverses?
01:11:543 (6,7,1) - i think you should make the spacing here higher since the vocals here is kinda intense, using low spacing here doesn't seem to represent it pretty well.
01:22:233 (1) - as i mentioned it on hard diff

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