bbj0920 wrote:

Vicho-kun.. Can I make guest diff?

Vicho-kun wrote:

Don't ask for guest diff anymore, thank you ~

Vicho-kun wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 18 de octubre de 2011 at 0:05:59

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: Endless Story (TV Size)
Source: C3
BPM: 79
Filesize: 16597kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4,67 stars, 453 notes)
2. Insane (4,88 stars, 356 notes)
3. Net's Normal (3,96 stars, 142 notes)

Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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C3 -C Cube- OP Theme - Endless Story by Tamura Yukari <3

Easy: WIP by Kenezz
Normal: Done by net45291
Hard: WIP
Insane: 92%
Taiko Oni: Done by climbb65588

Special thanks to ykcarrot for the nice video <3

Don't ask for guest diff anymore, thank you ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]

00:03:992 (1) - Remove NC. nup
00:06:270 (2) - add NC to here. ^
00:09:308 (2) - ^ ^
00:41:424 (2) - ^ ^
00:42:387 (1) - Remove NC. ^
01:11:584 (2) - not perfect overlap. nazi nazi ~~ ok xD

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
AR+1 ? Currently Insane's one is 7 so I leave it to Vicho-kun~
00:33:242 (4,5) - short slider start at red line feel kinda odd.. I like move repeat from sldier 3 to slider 5 Hmm...sorry I don't think so if it follows the music.
00:51:370 (5,6,7,8) - OMG , THIS IS CONFUSING!!! I strongly suggest change this pattern.. the spacing is hard to read.. and the stack make it more hard.. Changed the pattern~
01:15:595 - add note here ? if you fix this , then spinner start at 01:15:755 Added and changed some notes.

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[Kenezz's Easy]
HD+2 no
AR+1/2 ^
OD+2 HD=0 or OD=0 is unrankble I think naah not is unrankable~~
00:11:777 (1,1) - too far from the spinner eh?, the spinner it's okay~
00:42:387 (1) - end at 00:43:510 ? if you fix this , remove clap at the end no, sorry
00:48:162 (1) - move the last square to x:176 y:344 , blanket better. if you fix this , don't forget to fix 00:49:445 (2) mmm okay~
01:27:306 (1) - remove spinner? make all diffs end at same time is better imo. but I think all diff add a spinner here is better.. about the flow you have razon but the spinner sounds fine... I leave like this~

1. Combo Colours: I'd suggest to use another purple, the current one blends with some parts of the video. Perhaps, pick one sliiightly darker?
2. Timing: Sounds okay, but you need to add another Timing Section here: 00:14:151 - to fix the metronome. Don't forget to re-snap afterwards, just to be sure that nothing messed up.
3. Video: Some parts look rather odd while playing the Taiko diff, consider removing it from that diff.
4. Letterboxing: Disable it, there aren't any breaks o3o
5. Tags: Perhaps, add "KenezzEdward"?

1. I don't see any major problems here, good job. Just a few minor suggestions.
2. 01:27:306 (1) - The change felt a bit harsh, you should reduce the volume gradually. (decrescendo)
3. 00:54:579 (2,3) - This stack doesn't fit very well this part, I'd suggest to unstack the objects. Plus, it would make the pattern easier and will avoid the overlap with the next slider when the objects stack, here's a suggestion.
   If you refuse to follow this suggestion, at least move those circles some grids away (1 grid right + 1 grid down) to avoid the ugly overlap.
4. 00:56:504 (1,2) - ^ same here. Oh, you shouldn't worry about the next spacing because there's a little blank before the next objects.

1. The Kiai Time felt a bit empty, I strongly suggest to add some claps, either the custom ones or the default ones would work. I'd pick the default ones, you'd need to reduce the volume a bit so it sounds better.
2. Due to the high BPM during the 2nd part of the song, I suggest to reduce AR 1 tick.
3. 00:39:178 (3) - Is this overlap intentional? It's not a big deal but I noticed that none of the previous objects were overlapping, just wondering.
4. 01:17:039 (1) - This spinner felt a bit short for a [Normal] difficulty, I know that bonus gets 6k but you should keep in mind that the BPM is quite high so it's kinda of hard to hit the next circle. Consider using a slider instead.
5. 01:16:878 (4) - Again, due to the high BPM this circle might be a problem. You should either remove the circle and make the last slider longer by 1/2 or at least unstack this circle so it's easier to hit.

1. 00:43:991 (5,1,3) - Due to the previous jump, I kinda expected a jump for (1) too. You should try to increase the spacing between these objects to improve the flow. (just a bit)
2. Felt more like an [Insane] but I suppose it's alright for this difficulty spread. Good job!

1. 00:44:632 (3,4,1) - The stack felt rather odd, because the last object was following a different rything, you should unstack (1). The musical change is quite noticeable, keeping (1) in that stack doesn't make much sense, imo.
2. 01:00:996 (3) - Due to the previous hit-burst, the slider was hard to play/see. I strongly suggest to move this slider somewhere else, either that or you could move the previous (8) some grids away.
3. 00:47:520 (1,1) - Is the 2nd NC intentional? You should remove it, just like you did in the next similar pattern (00:52:814 - )

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. I don't see any major problems here, good job. Just a few minor suggestions. :3
2. 01:27:306 (1) - The change felt a bit harsh, you should reduce the volume gradually. (decrescendo) ok~
3. 00:54:579 (2,3) - This stack doesn't fit very well this part, I'd suggest to unstack the objects. Plus, it would make the pattern easier and will avoid the overlap with the next slider when the objects stack, here's a suggestion.
   If you refuse to follow this suggestion, at least move those circles some grids away (1 grid right + 1 grid down) to avoid the ugly overlap. welll I think in this not a big prob but anyways fixed~
4. 00:56:504 (1,2) - ^ same here. Oh, you shouldn't worry about the next spacing because there's a little blank before the next objects.

^

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Combo Colours: I'd suggest to use another purple, the current one blends with some parts of the video. Perhaps, pick one sliiightly darker? I think it's ok, but thanks for the suggestion :3
2. Timing: Sounds okay, but you need to add another Timing Section here: 00:14:151 - to fix the metronome. Don't forget to re-snap afterwards, just to be sure that nothing messed up. Done~
3. Video: Some parts look rather odd while playing the Taiko diff, consider removing it from that diff. Ok~
4. Letterboxing: Disable it, there aren't any breaks o3o ok o3o
5. Tags: Perhaps, add "KenezzEdward"? Lol, ok~

[Normal]

1. The Kiai Time felt a bit empty, I strongly suggest to add some claps, either the custom ones or the default ones would work. I'd pick the default ones, you'd need to reduce the volume a bit so it sounds better. Hmm, no, sorry :/
2. Due to the high BPM during the 2nd part of the song, I suggest to reduce AR 1 tick. Ok~
3. 00:39:178 (3) - Is this overlap intentional? It's not a big deal but I noticed that none of the previous objects were overlapping, just wondering. No~
4. 01:17:039 (1) - This spinner felt a bit short for a [Normal] difficulty, I know that bonus gets 6k but you should keep in mind that the BPM is quite high so it's kinda of hard to hit the next circle. Consider using a slider instead. I think it's ok...
5. 01:16:878 (4) - Again, due to the high BPM this circle might be a problem. You should either remove the circle and make the last slider longer by 1/2 or at least unstack this circle so it's easier to hit. Ok~

[Insane]

1. 00:44:632 (3,4,1) - The stack felt rather odd, because the last object was following a different rything, you should unstack (1). The musical change is quite noticeable, keeping (1) in that stack doesn't make much sense, imo. Ok~
2. 01:00:996 (3) - Due to the previous hit-burst, the slider was hard to play/see. I strongly suggest to move this slider somewhere else, either that or you could move the previous (8) some grids away. Okey.
3. 00:47:520 (1,1) - Is the 2nd NC intentional? You should remove it, just like you did in the next similar pattern (00:52:814 - ) Ups, sorry about it, fixed~

Overall, the mapset is quite nice. Good job! Thanks~

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]

1. 00:43:991 (5,1,3) - Due to the previous jump, I kinda expected a jump for (1) too. You should try to increase the spacing between these objects to improve the flow. (just a bit) Fixed~
2. Felt more like an [Insane] but I suppose it's alright for this difficulty spread. Good job! XD

1. 00:03:232 (3,4) Both notes are in the same tick.
2. 00:11:587 (1,1) Both notes are in the same tick.
3. 01:11:584 (2) It's the only note under a slider in the difficulty, please put the note over the next slider.

1. Totally agree with Gonz, please add more claps in the kiai time, feels very empty.
2. 00:59:712 - This is not a perfect square when you're playing, because the note is stacked, please fix it !
3. 01:26:102 - This spinner feels very short to be a normal difficulty, should be good if you use the same spin like kenezz.

1. 00:11:587 - The slider is stacked with the spinner.
2. 00:44:311 - Not sure about these jumps, seems very unexpected to me, please change the pattern.
3. 00:48:001 (2) Due that the note is stacked, this seems very bad when you're playing, please increase the distance.
4. 01:15:113 (5) Maybe you forgot a whistle here?

1. Please add a spinner on this difficulty, maybe you can replace this slider? 00:11:587 - Because the second repeat don't follow anything in the song.
2. 00:17:199 (5) Add the new combo here and remove in the next note.
3. 01:20:407 (1) Remove the new combo here and add it here 01:20:888 (3)

1. 00:13:510 (1) Unsnapped note.

eldnl wrote:

[Suzully]

1. 00:11:587 - The slider is stacked with the spinner. Oh...why did that happen...fixed.
2. 00:44:311 - Not sure about these jumps, seems very unexpected to me, please change the pattern. Enough easy to read imo.
3. 00:48:001 (2) Due that the note is stacked, this seems very bad when you're playing, please increase the distance. Nope. It's familiar pattern.
4. 01:15:113 (5) Maybe you forgot a whistle here? In this map, I use whistle at the head of slider. So doesn't fit here, sorry~

eldnl wrote:

[Normal]

1. Totally agree with Gonz, please add more claps in the kiai time, feels very empty. Ok
2. 00:59:712 - This is not a perfect square when you're playing, because the note is stacked, please fix it ! Ok
3. 01:26:102 - This spinner feels very short to be a normal difficulty, should be good if you use the same spin like kenezz. Ok

[Insane]

1. Please add a spinner on this difficulty, maybe you can replace this slider? 00:11:587 - Because the second repeat don't follow anything in the song. No, sorry
2. 00:17:199 (5) Add the new combo here and remove in the next note. Ok
3. 01:20:407 (1) Remove the new combo here and add it here 01:20:888 (3) Ok

nicenicenicenice Thanks -w-

1. Timing : The first timing point doesn't start at the good spot. Change the the offset for 954ms to fix the metronome
2. Tags : Add "cube x cursed x curious cubexcursedxcurious" ?
3. .osu : Adjust the audio Lead-in to 2500ms

1. 00:11:967 (1) - The end of this spinner isn't correctly snapped on the new timing section.

1. I don't agree with the HP drain rate. Actually 7 is very high for a hard, It's more used in Insane difficulties. Use 6 instead ?
2. 00:03:232 (3) - As you start a new pattern here, this circle should have the new combo mark. Consider adding it. Furthermore, you did it on 00:09:308 (1).
3. 01:27:306 - Consider adding a spinner here like in the easiest difficulties.

1. 00:12:346 - Why would you have a reverse here if you silence it and the end of the slider, this doesn't make sense to me. Instead of making a slider, a spinner which ends at 00:13:106 would be more appropriate
2. 01:27:306 - Consider adding a spinner here like in the easiest difficulties.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hey :3

General :

1. Timing : The first timing point doesn't start at the good spot. Change the the offset for 954ms to fix the metronome Ok
2. Tags : Add "cube x cursed x curious cubexcursedxcurious" ? Ok
3. .osu : Adjust the audio Lead-in to 2500ms Ok

Easy :

1. 00:11:967 (1) - The end of this spinner isn't correctly snapped on the new timing section. Fixed

Suzully's Hard: Insane :

1. 00:12:346 - Why would you have a reverse here if you silence it and the end of the slider, this doesn't make sense to me. Instead of making a slider, a spinner which ends at 00:13:106 would be more appropriate Ok ok, fixed
2. 01:27:306 - Consider adding a spinner here like in the easiest difficulties. Ok...

Nice mapset :3

KuraiPettan wrote:

Suzully's Hard :

1. I don't agree with the HP drain rate. Actually 7 is very high for a hard, It's more used in Insane difficulties. Use 6 instead ? OK changed~
2. 00:03:232 (3) - As you start a new pattern here, this circle should have the new combo mark. Consider adding it. Furthermore, you did it on 00:09:308 (1). Added.
3. 01:27:306 - Consider adding a spinner here like in the easiest difficulties. Added.

1. Kiai Time: 00:57:787 - This one is not snapped correctly, re-snap it manually please.
2. Timing: The first offset is off try 960~962ms. Make sure to re-snap the section and make sure that these objects: "00:13:113 & 00:13:510" are snapped properly. (Confirmed with Sallad)
3. Metadata Even though "net4529" was banned, you should still add him to the tags and change [Normal] to [net4529's Normal]. While you're at it, since he's banned, you could try to change to Combo Colours and make them consistent with [Hard] and [Insane] (Perhaps, ask Kenezz to change them too?)

1. 00:11:976 (1) - This spinner seems short for the easiest diff in the mapset, imo. I strongly suggest to use a slider instead, I'm sure that you can create a nice slider shape.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. 00:11:976 (1) - This spinner seems short for the easiest diff in the mapset, imo. I strongly suggest to use a slider instead, I'm sure that you can create a nice slider shape.

.

1. Inconsistent tag on this diff, separate the net from "KenezzEdwardnet"
2. 00:59:231 (4) - The slider repeat is almost covered by the hit burst. The first time playing this surprised me even though I can read it perfectly the second time, will this be a problem?

Sallad4ever wrote:

Also [Hard]

1. Inconsistent tag on this diff, separate the net from "KenezzEdwardnet" baka Vicho fixed~
2. 00:59:231 (4) - The slider repeat is almost covered by the hit burst. The first time playing this surprised me even though I can read it perfectly the second time, will this be a problem? OK changed pattern~

h3k1ru wrote:

pervert-kun pervert-map >~<

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Jesus Christ, Hard and AR6? What are you smoking? A diff like that MUST have AR7.

kthxbai.