Mr Color wrote:

Let's go.

Your map has a LOT of sliders. It's not necessarily a bad thing but it becomes a bit silly on easier difficulties (10 circles total on the Easy? Really?) Hm, I've made a Easy which has just 13 circles and it seem fine http://osu.ppy.sh/b/111591&m=0. I prefer using sliders for easier diffs as you do not have to hit them on time to get a 300, but just follow the slider track and this is easier for beginners especially. Sliders allow you to make nice clean jump as well.

[Insane]
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I suggest deleting all of this. The notes were place before the red timing section, and it could give the map some natural audio lead-in.It's actually before the 2nd red timing point (read first reply to this topic) and this part is mappable, don't see why it should be removed.
01:30:669 - This speedup is not needed and is not intuitive either, please fix. I disagree, I try mapping this part in Hard without speed up and it just doesn't feel right. Slow slider then jumps isn't really nice and this part of the song feel like it need a speed up anyway.

[Hard]
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4) - Same as the Insane, please delete Read Insane
01:09:335 (3) - This slider begs for some reworking. Not so good with sliders, would appreciate a screenshot with where to put the points. Improve a little bit through.

[Normal]
00:00:336 (1,1,2) - Same as the Insane, please delete Read Insane
01:01:168 (2) - Redo this slider please Picture on where to put the points?
01:02:501 (1) - ^ ^
01:04:001 (4) - ^ ^ Looks good enough for me.
01:18:668 (2) - ^ ^
01:21:335 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Easy]
You need less sliders and more circles Read above, star rating is also quite high already for an Easy.
00:00:336 (1,1,2) - Same as the Insane, please delete Read Insane

Would prefer to see a screenshot of where to put the points for the sliders that you pointed out. Made minor adjustment in grid 4 through.

This is pretty good. Ty

Yasora-chan wrote:

yuhuu~ time to mod your map~ o/

Easy
AR -1 ? Sure
00:04:002 (2) add finish in the end? Done
00:04:835 (1) del whistle, add finish in the end? Too many finish, so no.
00:21:668 (3) del whistle, add clap in the beginning and the end? Done
00:22:668 (1) del clap, add finish in the beginning, add clap in the end? Done
00:23:668 (2) del clap in the beginning, add clap in the reverse? Done
00:54:335 (1) move slider to 00:54:668? and add finish in the beginning I can hear vocal at 00:54:335, feel weird to have nothing here and there is already a finish at 00:51:835, don't want to put more.
00:57:335 (1) spinner end in the 00:59:335? Keeping consistency with other diffs (all the spinner end here for other diffs)
01:11:335 (2) add clap? Two claps next to each other doesn't sound good
01:11:668 (3) del clap in the beginning, and add in the end? I think it sound better like how it is now.
01:12:668 (1) del clap in the beginning? ^
01:23:835 (1) move to 01:24:001, end in the 01:25:335 ? Done and change for all diffs, but end at same spot, keeping consistency with Insane

Normal
00:03:335 (2) add finish in the end? Sound weird, so no
00:33:335 (1) add finish? Done
00:54:335 (1) add finish in the reverse? Done
01:06:668 (3) NC? I think it's fine
01:23:835 (1) spinner end in the 00:25:335? No, same reason as Easy

Hard
00:02:335 (x) add circle + add whistle? I want to keep 00:02:699 one white tick apart from everything else
00:18:501 (2) move to 00:18:335 ? + add clap in the beginning? Following vocal, so no.
01:23:835 (1) spinner end in the 01:25:335? Same reason as before

Insane
00:38:168 (4) NC? I think it looks better in the same combo
00:49:327 (1) Object isn't snapped Fixed

okay~ that's all my mod~ hope it can help you~ Pretty helpful hitsound mod for Easy ^^

Magicphoenix wrote:

Yo ~ mod !

General

Fine

[Insane]
*Got irregular spacings like 00:04:002 (1,2) Fix a bit - , 00:43:169 (2,3) Same here - , 01:15:169 (1,2) Hm? everything is snap to 0.8x? -, ... Did you even use distance snap? Most of the irregular spacing you point out are very minor 0.06x different (seriously doubt many people will notice it) and is probably because I map mainly in grid 3, sometime the spacing go off by 0.01~0.10x or so. I'm also trying to use more distant snapping changes to follow the music more and make the map play better so some place may have irregular spacing. Thanks for pointing out the above spacing errors through.

*00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Plays and sounds really strange. Remap it somehow or even consider removing that part I can play it fine, but i'll wait for more people opinion.
*00:44:002 (6,1) - Swap New combo Done
*00:45:669 (1) - Remove New combo Don't want to make thew combo too long, so no

[Hard]

*00:06:001 (3) - Very senseless jump I wanted to emphasize this part of the music, but k, fixed
*00:38:668 (3) - NC I want to keep the combo roughly equal length, if I follow your suggestion, two combo will have just 2 note which is too small for my taste.
*00:40:668 (1) - Remove if followed above ^
*00:42:335 (3) - NC if followed above ^

[Normal]

*00:02:669 (1,2) - Replace this part with a spinner since it doesn't fit to anything IMO I hear a ticking sound, so that's what I'm following
*00:21:335 (3) - Remove finish Sound fine to me, this is the highest note she sing for this part and I want to emphasize it. And the hamster appear during this note too ^^
*00:22:668 (1) - Add finish Didn't apply above mod. Also, it break the clap pattern and it doesn't right to me.
*00:24:668 (4) - Remove f Look at Insane and you should see why I put finish. First, this is the highest note she sings for this part again and there is a slight pause (1 red tick) before the next note so finish should be here to signify that. The space is not really noticeable for the easier diffs through.
*00:26:668 (3) - Add f I understand why you want me to put a finish here, but there is already at the end of the next note, finish spam doesn't sound good.
*00:26:668 (3) - ^ Modding mistake?
*00:50:501 (3) - ^ There is a finish at 00:51:835, I don't want to put more finish here, that's why I used whistle instead.
*01:05:001 (1) - ^ on reverse It doesn't sound bad, but read below. Plus this part sound "calmer" than the other part of the song to me
*01:08:001 (1) - Remove f I disagree, listen to how she sing and you can hear she accent this note more than the others. Since I'm keeping this finish, I don't want to put any more finish in this section.
*01:09:335 (3) - Add f I thought about putting finish here, but I don't want to finish spam. Whistle also doesn't work as she sing low here.
*01:14:668 (4) - ^ There is already a finish at the end of next slider, again don't want to finish spam.

You will surely ask why I suddenly modded hitsounds on this diff. It's because the finishes finally started bugging me here after seeing strange finishes on [Hard] & [Insane] as well. Would be good if you take a look at those diffs with the same suggestions here. Personally, I think the hitsound is fine for Insane and Normal + Hard follow the hitsound pattern for Insane so they should be fine as well. Some of your finish suggestion make sense, but having several finish in a row make it loses it effect (which is to emphasize a part) and more than likely, I can use a whistle instead (which I did for the most part) so that's why I disagree with most of them. Even through I didn't follow your mod, I fix up hitsound a bit in all diffiuclties so ty for hitsound mod.

[Easy]

*00:03:002 (1) - Remove note Following tick sound.
*01:00:002 (1) - This note comes too fast after a spinner for a beginner to get on 180 BPM. I don't see how I can fix it. Also, my other argument for this is, you don't have to spin a spinner the whole way, you can stop earlier and prepare your mouse for the next note. No change.


The start of the map really confuses me and is really hard to map. I recommend you to remove the start. May remove if more people suggest it
That's all, good luck on rank Ty
PS : Sorry if I appeared rude in this mod, really sleepy and stressy day (that's why I'm gonna sleep now as well xD) Nah, pretty decent mod for being really tired actually.

artpiggo wrote:

(A little talk) In the beginning part, I think about kind of chinese hitsounds(attachment) most. I try add it and think that it's nice. (Just saying in case you'd prefer.) Also, in some part (especially in slow part, these hitsounds could help improve map.) You may have to ask someone's permission. dunno who is the real creator, since there are people using a lot now. Ty for hitsound, I'll use it for the quieter parts of this song (beginning and before the kiai time). I'll credit you since you were the one who suggest for me to use these hitsounds. I use just clap through, don't really like the whistle and finish.

Insane
fine with shape and flow.

Hard
00:53:002 (3) - (152,40) Done
01:20:668 (4) - right 1 grid Fix this section up a bit.

Normal
01:10:335 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/160269 Done

Easy
very fine with it.

8.5/10. not like song much. but mapping is in very good now. Ty

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this song because of ur request

Easy:
00:04:002(2) - x:224 y:116 for the 2nd point and x:248 y:200 for the end point Done
00:04:835(1) - x:204 y:272 if u follow the suggestion above Done
00:57:001(3) - x:228 y:132 Adjust slider (2) instead, I want to keep (3) in the center of the map.

Normal:
00:04:335(3) - move it to 00:04:501 from there fix the spacing for the last 3 notes I want to keep 1 red tick between every note at this part.
00:44:668(3) - x:228 y:72 for the end point I don't think it look good, but adjust a bit so that it's better.
01:23:335(4) - Aline it to the end of the slider Don't really want to stack this

Hard:
00:05:501(1) - 2 grids up for the end point Didn't follow suggestion, but fix up a bit.
00:31:668(2) - Aline it between (1) and (3) Done
00:32:668(4) - without distance snap 3 grids down Don't want it to touch (2), but move down a bit.
01:07:335(5) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6LuX Adjust a bit, thanks for the screenshot
01:27:335(4) - ^ http://puu.sh/6Lva Didn't follow suggestion, but I fix (3) and copy and paste to (4).

Insane:
00:05:168(3) - Aline it with (1) I don't see a reason to stack them and I rather space it out.
00:05:355(4) - ^ (2) ^
00:41:335(4) - 1 grid left with distance snap Fix so that the distant between (3,4) is exactly 1.20x. I intend for the distant snap between (4,1) to be 1.10x so that's why I didn't follow your suggestion.
01:04:501(4) - 1 grid down for the 2nd point and 2 grids down for the end point Don't really like it, but I fix up this slider a bit.

This is the best i can do. GL Thanks for modding the sliders

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi ~ merchat7

my some tips.

[General]

Please complete the full set Skin. I can't make a skin :/, I made a custom spinner and a recolored cursor since they're very easy to make. I think it fit fine with the default skin and most custom skin out there.
Delete the OSB file. Delete and redownload, no .osb file. I notice that it come back almost every time I make changes in the editor.


[Insane]

00:06:085 - add note Better listen. There isn't really anything here and this double stream is quite unexpected.
00:48:002 (4) - add NC to here, I want to keep them in group of 4s
00:48:002 (4,1,2,3,4) - jump Use 1.5x distant snapping for this combo, not more since it feel unexpected and 00:48:669 (4) change 1 note. I like the slider more
00:51:502 (6) - move to here X:184 Y:204 Don't really like how it look and feel. It feel weird since you go left, right and then suddenly left (mini jump) again. Feel better the way it is now.
00:54:669 (2) - add finish. Done, but with reduced volume. Add to other difficulties as well.
00:56:002 (1) - ^ Too many finishes now.
01:19:085 (2) - To the right move a lattice. Don't get what you mean here, but improve a bit.
01:25:335 (6) - start point add finish. Done


[Hard]

00:49:001 - add note Better listen. Following vocal, so no
00:56:001 (4) - start point add finish. Rejected for the same reason as Insane


[Normal]

HP+1 Want to keep star rating below 4, may change if more suggest this.
00:32:335 (4) - move to here X:104 Y:272. Done


[Easy]

looks good~


nice map and kawaii song. Ty, pretty nice mod ^^
Please accept my star (My Heart) >///<
good luck ~

Mercurius wrote:

hi~
my noob MOD

[Easy]
01:09:335 (3) - stack to (1) 1grid down Hm stack? Don't really understand what you mean and this part feel fine.

[Hard]
01:23:668 (x) - add note with clap Keeping consistency with Easy and Normal

[Insane]
00:01:002 (5) - spacing (x:44 y:204) This was snap to 0.9x on purpose.
00:02:002 (5) - ^ (x:368 y:236) ^
00:29:669 (3) - ^ (x:252 y:280) Again, snap to 1.1x on purpose (play a lot better like this)
01:06:169 (5) - put slider with DistantSpacing x0.8 There is a slider here? Jump is on purpose
01:06:669 (1) - ^ ^ same here
01:27:335 (1,2,3) - spacing (to keep slider on center, move notes (1,2)) Intentional again, and it play fine.
00:42:668 (4) - slider length Blue tick sounds offbeat.

01:13:169 (4) - ^ Done, thanks for pointing this out.


The spacing errors you mentioned are all intentional. When you mod Hard/Insane, if you see a spacing error, only point them out if they play weird. For example, "This jump doesn't make sense at all, the music slow down here, so you should probably keep spacing the same here" or "At 00:23:565, you use this same pattern without the jump, so why did you put a jump here?" and so forth. Just keep this in mind for future mods.

nice maps, and song
good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello~~

General

Sorry you diff Easy and normal 1 tick is not fit change 2 is fit and to same all diff pleasse I used slider tick 1 for those difficulties as the slider velocity is lower and the tick look really clustered with tick 2. Tick 2 fit fines with the other difficulties as the slider velocity is higher and the tick are more spread out.

IMO -> My opinions

Some Suggestions

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[Easy]

AR +1 because this will be more read IMO I think it's easier for beginner to read a lower ar. The current ar feel just right for me as well.

00:04:002 (2) - you konw the finish should be begin slider because women higher and strong drums that should finish and whisle should be the end slider that this is better IMO Done
00:20:001 (1) - the begin slider remove clap and add finish? Claps sound fine, I don't want to use too many finishes.
00:26:668 (2) - Can you listen women higher voice here? that should add finish IMO After looking at it again, I decide to put finish here and whistle for 00:27:835 for all difficulties. Also reduce volume of the finish at 00:25:355 so it doesn't sound like a finish spam.
00:37:501 (1,2) - that not good blanket try this http://puu.sh/6NQJ ? if you wanna Should be better, thanks for screenshot.
00:41:335 (3) - add finish? This part is quieter than other parts of this song so don't think a finish really fit.
00:43:835 (1,2) - you use grid level 4 right? so incosiente spacing Not always, I notice I make better sliders in general in grid 3 and better pattern as well. Fixed
01:08:002 (1,3) - Weird stack if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:10:335 (1) You mean not stacked properly? Should be fix now if that is so.

everthing else good but lost finish IMO
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Normal

OD -1 ? better game play IMO Most Normal I see use ar 4. Don't see why i should use lower considering the speed of this song.

00:03:335 (2) - that same easy ?? Don't understand what you mean.
00:05:335 (1) - remove whistle and add finish I think whistle sound really nice here plus, if I use a finish here, the finish at 00:06:335 sort of loses it effect.
00:20:001 (1) - add finish only begin slider Don't agree with this finish, I don't want to use too many finish and I think the finish fit best at 00:21:335.
00:38:668 (3,1,2,3,4) - try this combo http://puu.sh/6O09 better combo IMO because i can feel 00:40:001 (1) that change new drums strong that i put new combo here but IMO Hmm, guess I'll do it since it doesn't look bad aesthetically.
00:40:001 (1) - remove the clap and add finish No, for same reason as Easy.
00:43:835 (1) - remove this new combo and at 00:44:335 (4) - put new combo Guess, I'll follow this suggestion as I don't see a problem with it.
00:49:335 (1) - remove the begin slider clap and add finish because strong drums with women voice higher Two claps like this sound much better imo. I did the same thing for Insane as well.
01:12:668 (1) - remove this new combo and at 01:13:668 (5) - put new combo K, done
01:11:668 (3,1) - weird stack the end slider i wanna (3) the end point put center like this http://puu.sh/6O17 to better stack IMO Fix the point for end of slider (3).

good diff
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Hard

00:04:002 (1) - you konw i mean... orz Fixed
00:20:001 (1) - add finish only begin slider No, same as previous reason
00:22:668 (1) - ^ No, you didn't suggest this for Easy and Normal and again, trying not to use too many finish. I put whistle instead through.
00:26:668 (3) - this women higer the finish is better than whistler here Done

everthing is good but you have lost finish here same like easy
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Insane

00:04:002 (1) - ... Hm, I disagree for this one, finish doesn't sound good right after the drum sound from (2) in the previous combo. Fit much better for this diff at 00:04:501.
00:04:835 (1) - not fit combo remove new combo Look at how I put the combo here, they are all in group of 4s.
00:18:502 (1) - remove this combo and at 00:18:836 (4) - put new combo Want to keep it the same as 00:28:335.
00:20:002 (1) - remove whistle and add finish No, same reason as before.
00:22:669 (1) - ^ ^, same as Hard.
00:33:335 (1) - add finish Done, for other difficulties as well.
00:39:668 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/6OaL better combo IMO No, since it doesn't look good with how I map this part.
01:00:002 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Sorry i not like this combo try this http://puu.sh/6Obe better combo IMO I did it as, I'm follow the girl singing and the hamster as well. And the combos fit well with how I placed the notes.
01:04:002 (1) - add finish Finish doesn't good with the drum sound in the background.
01:16:001 (1) - add finish only begin slider Replaced the previous finish with whistle and add Finish here instead. Did this for Normal and Hard as well.
01:18:834 (5) - put new combo and at 01:19:001 (1) - remove new combo This is following a certain combo pattern if you look carefully.
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That all i think and sorry my nazi modding Finish because i can see you have so many lost finish i guess if you listen here 00:04:002 and you see White tick long that mean have some drums strong or women higer or Strong drums with women higher that should add finish will be great IMO but some white tick long not have strond drums or women higer that no need add finish because you have listen carefully this music anyway sorry my bad eng I did 24 time listen this song lmfao I didn't add some of the finish as it's never good to use too many finishes, but I did fix some stuff, thanks for mentioning them
and play everthing is good
and good luck ty

wmfchris wrote:

Timing: I guess the one 4002 is fine, it don't need two red lines. Hm, some people don't like for stuff to be map before a red line and I don't see a harm in keeping it.
00:06:668 - You should start the break exactly here. Start the break at the same time for all the diff Done


KEY:
NC= new combo

[Insane]
00:01:002 (5) - as the music sounds four in a group, you should NC here (or 1 combo for 6 beats) [and I wonder why spacing is slightly different from before] Done, spacing is slightly different since I feel it play better, if you can't really notice the different than that's fine, but for me I notice it quite a bit (it make this part feel less clustered) so that's why.
00:01:669 (3) - NC here if you've NC for 00:01:002 Done
00:04:335 (3) - up 1 grid lv4 Hmm, I think 1 grid up make it worse.
00:04:835 (1,3,1) - remove NC here, NC it in (3) refer to vocal, remove NC on next (1) Don't agree, she take a short breath before singing this note and the combo at 00:05:502 is to make it so the combos here are in group of 4s.
00:29:501 (2) - (200,340) looks better Hm, k, I see why you want me to put it here.
00:43:001 (1) - left 1 grid lv4 Done
00:53:501 (2,3,4) - bad spacing On purpose, if you have a way to make it look nice and play good, please tell me.
01:17:001 (6,1) - not prefer such jumping, not expected I did this for aesthetically reason (5.6) are snap to 1.0x so I snap (6.1) to 1.0x as well. Not just this, it make this part feel less clustered and I don't think it play very bad. May remove if more suggest this through.
01:17:668 (5,6,1) - ^ [same for similar arrangement after this] ^
And in the ending stream, you SHOULD new combo once per bar. Such arrangement is messy.If by ending stream you mean 01:26:168 > end, I think the new combo looks fine.
Looks very different from other diffs...? Maybe because I use more hit circle here? (all the other difficulties have 50% or more sliders compare to this one)

[Hard]
fine.

[Normal]
fine.

[Insane] just like a diff made by a different mapper lol, spacing, NC and sounding problem comes quite frequently and it can be more smoothly. However, the rest of the diff looks fine enough, and the clapping idea is good.I guess it make sense since I map the Insane 2 month ago while all the other difficulties were mapped last week. I changed how I do my new combo and I have a better idea of how to do hitsound now, and jumps too so maybe that's why Insane is quite different. Plus, I'm testing with minor spacing change like at 00:01:002 (5). Don't seem like many people like this, so I prob won't do this again for my next Insane.

Good luck! Ty

L_P wrote:

hi~my cousin says he wanna try mod, so here is a mix mod.....(dont worry, ive arranged it)
and your map has nothing unrankable, so as usual, Suggestion only~
ps: if you wanna give credit to pianiac, shoot a star on his map~he need it, and you too~i would like to star yours also.... Sorry, only star maps that I mod (only if they're good enough) and I only mod maps in my queue or if I like the song. If you ever post in the queue I may star.

00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) -new combo thing, i think that 4notes and 1slider make a combo Read wmfchris mod, make more sense for it to be like this.
00:04:835 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make some shape like pentagon? or may be make the spacing from small to large, that is more fun playing This part doesn't feel like I should use accelerated spacing for it and I try playing around with some shapes and they don't really work well. If I get an idea I may change it.
00:21:669 (2,4) - i would like to see that is like http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/1729/aaaftm.jpg
because you have similar at 00:18:502 (1,2,3) Don't really want to reuse the same pattern, more interesting to use different patterns.

00:42:668 (4,1,2) - there is a strong bass beat here, consider make a triangle pattern notes? Triangle pattern doesn't really work with how I'm mapping this part (most note here are arranged to a curve).
01:29:169 (4) - balance it Don't understand what you mean here.

hard
00:22:335 (5) - move to 00:22:168? It's here so that I don't break the clap pattern Changed to a slider and place it where you suggested. Thanks for catching this
00:25:668 (1,2) - full clap sound? Sound better to me like this.
01:23:668 (5) - add something? Intentional, to keep consistency with Easy and Normal.
01:34:835 (2) - end at 01:35:668? ^ same here

normal
00:27:168 (4) - tail grid 2 or 3 down Done
00:43:835 (3) - move to previous white tick and add a repeat? Done

easy
00:04:835 (1) - grid the middle point abit, blanket the previous one Should be a bit better.
00:18:502 (2) - i would make it curve the other way It play betters like this since it point to the next slider at 00:20:001. May change if more suggest.
00:32:335 (3) - tail add clap? Don't want to put clap on a red tick.
00:47:502 (2) - end it at white tick Done
00:51:835 (1) - shape it to blanket note 2 Adjust slider and move (2) a bit.

done~nice mapset, really hard to mod it Pretty nice mod actually
best regards and good luck~ i like your seesaw map, i rate it 10! Ty ^^

Suggestion for future mods, bold the title like this (it make it easier to know which difficulty you're modding).

Insane
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) -new combo thing, i think that 4notes and 1slider make a combo
00:04:835 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make some shape like pentagon? or may be make the spacing from small to large, that is more fun playing
00:21:669 (2,4) - i would like to see that is like http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/1729/aaaftm.jpg
because you have similar at 00:18:502 (1,2,3)

00:42:668 (4,1,2) - there is a strong bass beat here, consider make a triangle pattern notes?
01:29:169 (4) - balance it

Hard
00:22:335 (5) - move to 00:22:168?
00:25:668 (1,2) - full clap sound?
01:23:668 (5) - add something?
01:34:835 (2) - end at 01:35:668?

Normal
00:27:168 (4) - tail grid 2 or 3 down
00:43:835 (3) - move to previous white tick and add a repeat?

Easy
00:04:835 (1) - grid the middle point abit, blanket the previous one
00:18:502 (2) - i would make it curve the other way
00:32:335 (3) - tail add clap?
00:47:502 (2) - end it at white tick
00:51:835 (1) - shape it to blanket note 2

regenz wrote:

Hi
This is mod form Thai mapper modding Team ( old name net & 2004 )

First time i saw this i think the publish is same with this game

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2l9W0nLP82g

and it 's same lol this game name is imouto smile hehe. Haha, yep, same singer and publisher and the artstyle is quite similar too.

General

I don't think spinner is spin well around try to fix it. I assume you're talking about the spinner circle? It should be fine since or I did was use the template skin spinner's circle and greyscale it.

Insane

00:02:502 (1) - if you want to follow instrument here it NOT land on 1/4 it land on 1/6 change it to 1/6
and place following beat Hm, you're right, but I like how fast the slider move at 1/4 more (way too slow or too fast at 1/6) and you can't really notice the different anyway. Keeping it for now.

00:02:447 circle ^
00:02:558 start 1/6 return slider until 00:03:058 ^

Pic

00:04:002 (1) - add fin (finish hitsound ) It doesn't sound bad, but I don't want to finish spam. Whistle sound perfect for what you suggest through. Change for all diffs.
00:05:335 (4) - ^ ^
00:05:669 (2) - ^ ^
00:06:002 (4) - ^ ^
00:21:335 (1) - this not suit for fin sound remove plz I think it sound fine
00:22:669 (1) - nice for fin sound you can open 25 percent playback and here it easy. Since I think finish fit better at 00:21:335, don't really want to use finish here, whistle work fine as an alternative.
00:35:335 (3) - remove clap Done
00:40:001 (2) - whistle Done
00:41:335 (4) - fin head (start of slider ) Whistle instead.
00:42:668 (4,1,2) - change like this ?

and add fin each note Done, Finish > Normal > Whistle for the hitsound.
00:43:335 (4) - fin head Whistle instead
00:44:001 (7) - fin Whistle instead
00:45:335 (4) - fin Whistle instead and remove from (3)
00:46:669 (1) - fin Don't like the sound of finish here
00:47:169 (4) - fin head Done with reduce volume
00:48:002 (4) - fin Whistle is fine
00:48:336 (2) - fin ^

00:49:335 (1) - fin Clap sound better
00:50:502 (1) - fin Whistle is fine
01:00:002 (1) - fin Hm I prefer finish at 01:01:002
01:01:002 (2) - remove fin ^
01:01:168 (1) - fin head ^
01:02:336 (2) - remove fin ( lol alot ) use 25 percent playback plz you can here it completely I use finish here for the same as reason as 01:01:002 (to emphasize hamster voice).
01:02:502 (1) - fin head No, since keeping finish ^
01:03:963 (1) - unsnap note Fixed
01:05:336 (2) - fin Hmm, ok
01:09:335 (5) - change to three note follow instrument is better and it's best place to jump HERE! Done, but 1.5 distant snapping and place in a different way.


01:10:336 (2) - fin Like finish at (7) more
01:11:835 (7) - remove fin head ^
01:13:169 (4) - fin tail ( end of slider ) Whistle is fine since I kept finish at (7) and it'll sound like a finish spam.
01:14:669 (7) - fin head Want to keep clap and clap + finish doesn't sound good.
01:15:169 (1,2,3) - fin ( 3 only fin head ) Don't want finish here as there is one at (1) in the next section
01:25:835 add note and whistle + 01:26:001 add note and whistle + 01:26:335 (2) - whistle Don't want to add notes, but add whistle to 01:26:335
01:35:751 + 01:35:835 + 01:35:918 add note ( there are stream here add if you like ) Want to try to follow vocal here.

***** about finish hitsound i suggestion there are alot So I 'll not mod hitsounds in other difficult if you like it plz apply to other diff also. Apply some suggestions to all diffs.


Hard

01:24:001 (1) - reduce length 1 beat add fin Want to end the spinner the same time as the slider in Insane
01:25:835 add note Don't want to follow instrument + too close to spinner
01:26:001 ^ ^

Normal

01:28:668 (1,2) - change to 1/2 slider return 2 times or unstack it Don't see a problem with this stack.
01:24:001 (1) - reduce length 1 beat add fin Same as Hard


Easy
01:19:668 (3) - add another return Trying to follow vocal (somewhat), so no.
01:24:001 (1) - reduce length 1 beat add fin Same as Hard
01:27:335 (2) - clap at centre is weird remove plz Hitsound sound really empty without it, any suggestions?

**** Blue Hair Miko San! =D

Thanks for the nice hitsound mod and suggestions for Insane were very useful

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

[request from queue~

[General]
> i see gradually increasing SV from each diff by 30% (90% - 120% - 150% - 180%)
> lol, when i checked the tags, i know why the BG is feel somewhat
> great map!

[Easy]
> tick 2 ? Too many slider tick clustered together when it's 2 so that's why it's 1.
> some of slider with beat of 3/2, 5/2 etc. is a bit kind of ... shorter by 1/2 You're right, but I look through them and they fit fine with the song.
00:43:835 (1) - (time) move to right by 1/2, and shorter by 1/2 Hm, ok
00:50:501 (2) - longer it by 1/2 I want to put the clap at the end of this slider, doesn't work when it end on a red tick.
fine

[Normal]
> tick 2 ? Same reason as Easy
fine

[Hard]
fine..

[Insane]
fine

staar! Ty!

0sync wrote:

Hi, here for M4M. Will look at your map right after I finish checking all the mods

General
I love this song! ^^

Insane:
00:00:336 (1) - Since the music is a bit irregular at this point, I suggest using sliders that are half a beat each with two repeats each... That or you don't map this section. The hit circles don't feel right. Picture for reference: I actually really like these hit circles, I rather try to tweak it so it play better then to remove it. About the repeating sliders, I rather not use kick sliders unless I really have to. And for this part, I don't think I have to.
00:42:668 (1,2,3) - I like these jumps (just saying) Thanks to regenz for suggesting me to put a jump here
00:56:002 (1) - Add a finish here. It feels empty without it. I feel there is too many finish here, so whistle instead, add to Hard as well.
01:18:168 (1) - Remove this combo Following a certain new combo pattern here (new combo at every stream except for the last one, and after every repeating slider).
01:18:668 (1) - Add a new combo and add a finish. Perhaps you should raise the volume by 10% or so for this note. There's already a finish here, no new combo because of reason above. Increase volume for this note by 5%.
01:19:084 (2) - Remove this combo ^
01:23:668 (1) - Remove this combo ^
01:24:001 (3) - Add a new combo here. ^
01:30:669 (1) - I'm going to note that I hate (woah, red AND bold) these slider changes. I mean, ultimately it's up to you but they feel really bad when playing the map. Personally, I think this part fit well with 1.5x sv. I made it oblivious that there is a speed change by making one long straight slider so it shouldn't be unexpected. Plus, I like how it make this difficulty a bit more unique and interesting.
01:35:252 (6) - Especially this one. :P, I see why, very easy to combo break on this one, but I want to try using different slider shapes here and a loop is what seem to fit best.

Fun map

Hard:
00:01:669 (3) - I'm just not feeling this section. At least add a repeat. Guess I'll add a hitcircle then.
00:28:335 (1) - Add a repeat I don't see a reason for a repeat since I don't really hear anything at 00:29:001.

Normal:
00:00:336 (1) - Good idea! Maybe you should start off all of your other difficulties like this? I prefer mapping for the harder difficulty rather than use a spinner.
00:02:669 (1,2) - Remove, doesn't fit at all. Insert a break time instead A break fit even less imo..
00:04:002 (1) - Add a slider here that lasts 1 and 1/2 beat. (Remove the slider that would overlap) Hm, don't really like it
00:57:335 (1) - Shorten this by one beat. Half a beat is not enough time for a normal player to recover from a slider. Sorry want to keep consistency with Insane with when this spinner end and you can always stop spinning earlier.
01:34:501 (3) - This feels horrible. Move it forward two ticks. I find this even weirder since I can hear her singing on the red tick

Easy:
00:03:002 (1) - Remove for reasons explained earlier No, for same reason as Normal.
00:04:835 (2) - Remove this combo. I prefer two combos here, look a bit nicer aesthetically.
00:57:335 (1) - Shorten by one beat. Half a beat definitely is not enough time for an easy player. Same reason as Normal
01:34:501 (3) - I refuse to see this offbeat slider not be deleted. Shorten by one tick and move over two ticks. It's offbeat as it is trying to follow the vocal, and she sing this on a red tick. Same reason as Normal.

I hope I helped improved your map. Good luck. Think the hitsound is a bit nicer now and some parts play a bit better.

tutuhaha wrote:

PreviewTime: 4002 I prefer to leave a little room in the preview point before your hear the vocal.
SliderTickRate need same or unrank It doesn't need to be the same as long as you have a good reason. Slider tick 2 in Easy and Normal really make the slider ticks look really clustered so that's why they are 1.

Easy
00:32:335 (3) - there change one circle and then make a slider (00:32:668 - 00:33:001) Don't want to make Easy any Harder than this.
00:35:001 (1) - end on 00:36:668 Keeping consistency with other difficulties
00:37:335 (1) - slider (00:37:335 - 00:38:001),because it is hard to read in easy ^ I map on the other difficulty on the red tick so I did that here too. Don't think it's too hard to read.
00:57:335 (1) - end on 00:59:335 and add whistle, too close in easy ^ You can always stop spinning earlier
01:24:001 (1) - end on 01:25:335 and add whistle ^

Normal
OD-1 It's fine, I feel od 4 fit better with the difficulty spread.
00:37:335 (1) - move to there? Again, keeping consistency with other diff.
00:38:001 (2) - move to there and then add Return? Following vocal here.
00:57:335 (1) - add whistle I don't think it fits.
01:35:668 (4) - add circle? Consistency with Easy and Hard.

Hard
OD+1 Keeping it the same as it fit better with difficulty spread.
00:38:001 (X) - add circle and add whistle? Trying to follow vocal here.

Insane
01:35:501 (XXX) - add three circle I rather keep the slider for this.
00:35:669 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163704 space Done
00:38:001 (X) - add circle and add whistle? Following vocal.
00:47:502 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163705 space Fix up a bit, but not going to make sure each and every note is perfectly space as most people will not be able to notice it.
00:48:669 (4) - end on 00:49:001 It's this long as that's how long she holds the note.
00:49:335 (1) - KIAI time begin there.....(you kiai time is 00:49:336....) Fixed
01:15:169 (1,2,3) - Space Orz..... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163706 Fix up a bit, but again not going to make sure they are all perfectly space
01:20:001 (1,2) - space Orz ^

Good lucky Thanks for catching some stuff in Insane

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi~/from my Queue

[General]

Seeing none

[Easy]

00:57:002 (3) - 1 grid down Hm ok
01:00:002 (1) - too approach the former spinner, leave some time for new babies to react The approach rate is low enough that you can see this note coming while spinning, so this mean, they have a little warning to stop spinning a bit earlier.

[Normal]

00:56:001 (3) - looks ungly :< Guess i'll remove the red point from it.

[Insane]

00:41:335 (4) - 1 grid left Done
00:53:669 (3) - spacing On purpose, for playability and look nicer this way. If you have a way to make it play roughly the same while keeping spacing consistency, would be appreciated.
01:10:169 (1) - ^ Improve a bit

nothing wrong can be found

No KD and Good luck :> Hm, ok, but I think thanks to your mod, some part look a little nicer so if you ever want the kudosu, feel free to post

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
Insane's kiai time end at 01:16:002 , it is different from other diffs , I suggest you make all kiai times the same Fixed

[Easy]
00:04:835 (1) - move the 2rd square to x:280 y:300 ? like this : http://puu.sh/78va Done
00:05:668 (2) - move 1 or 2 gird left if you fixed ^ Done
00:32:335 (3) - end at 00:32:668 sound better , but seems it is empty at 00:33:001 , so add a note there or add a repeat on this slider ? I want to keep this pattern as it follow music a bit more accurately.
00:37:501 (1) - this can be better , like : http://puu.sh/78vR Move down a bit
00:51:835 (1) - same as ^ , ok I ignored same suggestiongs after this , just care about slider shapes after this , it isn't any difference when playing but it looks more comfortable imo Improve a little bit. Hm, if I notice them while self modding, I'll fix them.
01:05:002 (1) - change to a circle at 01:05:001 and a slider from 01:05:335 to 01:05:668 is much more better Hm, I think the slider fit better with how I'm mapping the Easy.
01:31:168 (2,1) - this spacing is different.. it is confusing here Ty for catching this!
01:34:501 (3) - this rhyme is much better , http://puu.sh/78wC Hm, ok.
01:36:001 (1) - end at 01:37:335 sound better , but kinda harder to play.. Spinner is way too short for an Easy

[Normal]
00:38:168 (2) - repeat ? fixe the spacing if you add a repeat here Want to leave atleast 1 red tick before the next note
00:42:668 (2) - repeat 2 times and end at 00:43:335 ? (use 1/3 beat) I rather keep all note snap to 1/4 here.
00:43:668 (3) - remove repeat , change to 1/1 slider sound better. cuz the vocal here is on 1/4 beats , if you use a 1/2 repeat slider , it sound kinda odd Done
01:21:335 - add clap Don't want to put two hit sound in the same place.
01:23:668 - add note Since lot of people suggest me to do this, I might as well add a note here (change previous note to slider and end it here).
01:28:668 (1,2) - if you want to do this , I suggest do some thing like this : http://puu.sh/78yQ cuz if you want to add circle at 01:28:668 , the sldier start at 01:29:001 is best , but it is a tri-click.. too hard to play in a Normal diff..I didn't want to use a 3/2 slider because of ugly slider tick, but I guess it play better. Done
01:34:501 (3) - same as Easy Done
01:36:001 (1) - same.. Read Easy

[Hard]
00:43:001 (4) - move to 00:42:835 and add circle at 00:43:335 , sound betterI like this pattern But you're right, it sound better like what you suggested. So changed.
00:43:835 (1) - try a 1/4 repeat slider here ? Moved to 00:43:668 and follow your suggestion.
01:11:335 (2,3,1) - why this spacing are 1.2x.. change to 1.0x or it is kinda confusing It look better imo, and I highly doubt many people is going to miss because of 0.2x different in the distant snapping.
01:20:668 (4,1) - spacing.. Similarly here ^ Feel clustered with 1.0x distant snapping.
01:22:668 (4) - repeat 1 time more or add circle at 01:23:668 Done
01:35:668 - add note? Done, for consistency with Easy and Normal.
01:36:001 (1) - same as Easy Read Easy, and I rather have all difficulty end at the same place.

[Insane]
00:42:335 (2,3,1,2,3) - make 00:42:335 (2,3,1) spacing is 1.0 and 00:42:668 (1,2,3) is 2.0 , or it is very confusing Hm, ok, fix spacing a little and make it more consistent.
00:43:835 (5,6,7) - don't stack on a slider ending plz ;_; I miss here.. maybe just me.. at least add nc on (5) plz I don't really want to space this out, but sure, new combo on (5).
00:48:001 (4,1) - change nc , cuz the spacing is changed here I want to keep the combos here in group of 4 and I tihnk the spacing change is readable enough without the new combo.
00:48:668 (4) - why not end at 00:49:001 , don't you hear the is a beat on 00:49:001 ? I want to leave a little room here for people to adjust to the next note.
00:50:335 - add note , I suggest stack on 00:50:169 (6) , and not to fix the spacing , make a jump here is good I don't really like the stacking here, but I change to slider instead.
00:51:668 - same as ^ A little bit worried that stack + jump is unexpected, but I like how it feel so done.
00:58:001 - add a note ? or make 00:57:335 (1) end here ? Add a note (stacked to end of slider).
01:06:002 (4,5) - this jump is kinda suddenly.. You're the first person to mention this, so I think it's fine. If you have a suggestion on how to make this better, feel free to tell me.
01:06:669 (1,2) - this jump is better but it is confusing to next notes... ^ I rarely miss this part and usually get 300s easily here.
01:36:669 (3) - ctrl + j ? I like how it feel this way more.

some suggestions here :
this map follow the vocal tooooooooo many , why not try to follow drums or guitar somewhere? it will sound better and not boring to play..
now your Hard and Insane feel kinda empty .. maybe it just my feeling 0.0
anyway , I think you should try to follow something else beside always following vocal in your future maps..
this is only suggestions... it's up to you to take care about this or not I map this Insane a long time ago and Hard is following the beat placement of Insane so that's probably why I'm following vocal way too much. Looking at it now, I notice a few place where I could put streams, but I rather not as it doesn't fit with how I map this Insane. About, Hard, I'll be sure to use more hit circle next time. I use lot of sliders as I was worried about star rating. Expect a better Insane for my 5th beatmap, 4th was map the same time as this one and my 1st beatmap, although I'm currently remapping, the song doesn't really have any drum / guitar I can follow so I have to follow the vocal.

good luck Ty, lot of helpful suggestion from your mod ^^

S h i a wrote:

Hi~ merchat7

I think your song is fine to me.
nice song and nice map set <3
Just some sugguestion in Insane diff.

[Insane]

00:26:669 (5) - this slider maybe better like this? K done
01:26:001 (7) - add note? Hm, sure since lot of people has suggest it so added a slider and make a jump here.
01:27:669 (2) - move down a bit? should be better near 01:27:835 (3) - I rather not stack them, doesn't feel it should be stack and I think it play nicer unstacked.
01:30:669 (1) - it will be lovely to make a notification to tell players it's *1.5 bpm here XD lol, there are 3 reasons why I think it's readable. One, slider tick. Two, it's a new combo. Three, it's a straight slider. Also, personally I feel a 1.5x slider velocity fit really well here so I don't think there need to be a warning.
01:37:002 (1) - delete this spinner? It's long enough and I want to keep the end point the same for all diff.

No Kd Hm, ok, but I think your mod is worth a kudosu through, so if you ever want it, feel free to post.
Good luck

biwako wrote:

Hi,mod from queue~

[General]
Please use same slider tick rate at all diff. Slider 2 tick rate look really ugly in Easy and Normal so that's why they are 1.

[Easy]
HP Drain+1 Want to keep star rating just a bit lower.
Perhaps don't use red tick? May have use too make red ticks for this Easy, but everything on white tick = very boring easy so it's fine.
00:49:335 (1) - add finish slider start Done

[Normal]
00:49:335 (1) - add finish slider start I think clap is better
00:46:668 (1) - This slider is harder for Normal diff imo. Hm, I feel like using a kick slider here and it should be readable since it's pointing to the next note. Will change if someone has a nice alternative for this.

[Hard]
OD+1? Just want to keep star rating a little lower.
00:00:336 - 00:02:335 don't match sound,remove or change spinner? I want to keep this and it doesn't play bad imo.
00:43:668 (1) - add finish slider end Done
00:49:335 (1) - ^ slider start Clap sound better to me
01:00:001 (1) - ^ ^
01:02:001 (5) - remove finish slider end Finish is there to follow hamster.
01:02:501 (1) - add finish slider start No since I'm keeping the finish above
01:09:335 (3) - ^ Since so many people have suggest this, done.
01:14:335 (4) - ^ slider end Done
01:32:001 (2) - ^ slider start Doesn't sound good to me.
01:33:335 (2) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:00:336 - 00:02:335 don't match sound,remove or change spinner? Same as Hard
00:23:001 (2) - symmetry to 00:22:668 (1) ? Done
00:34:669 (5),00:35:001 (1) - switch new combo Looks better to me like this.
00:39:668 (1) - remove new combo Don't see the problem with the new combo. May be short but it look nicer if there is two combo here.
00:43:835 (1) - ^ New combo so that's it easier for some people to see the stack.
00:47:501 (5) - ^ Looks nicer like this
00:48:001 (8),00:48:168 (1) - switch new combo Since I didn't apply previous suggestion, no.
00:49:335 (1) - add finish Clap sound better to me
01:02:502 (1) - slider end 01:02:835 (2) Leaving a bit space feel better for me (a bit more jumpy)
01:13:168 (4) - ^ 01:13:501 (5) ^
01:15:501 (3) - change circle? Slider feel and look better to show the end of this section.
01:15:835 (x) - add note? Feel better to me to leave a little space.
01:15:918 (x) - ^ On second thought, add both notes and make it a jump.
01:19:085 (2) - move to 01:18:918 (6) Following a certain pattern here.

Leorda wrote:

Hello, sorry for delay

Easy
00:22:668 (1) - Make this slider more wavy (Nazi) You're right, could be more wavy, fixed
00:32:335 (3) - End slider snap at red ticks feels make no sense. Perhaps, try snap the end slider to 00:32:668 and add 1 repeating slider? Since a few people has mention this was weird, changed. End the slider on the next white tick.
00:46:668 (1,2) - Try making like this http://puu.sh/7hP0 The flows feels good if you change this Changed in a different way.
01:06:002 (2) - Make this slider more wavy (Nazi) Made a little nicer

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Normal
* AR +1? The approach circle speed is kinda little slow for me Feel fine to me

00:35:001 (1) - I don't think this spinner is fit to the song or vocal. Try make something else? I want to put a spinner at 00:36:002 like in Insane, but spinner is too short for the easier difficulties so that's why the spinner start here.
01:23:335 (4) - Change the position of slider into this http://puu.sh/7hSf For making a good flow in gameplay Nice suggestion, ty

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Hard
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this part would be fit to the music. Perhaps, replace this part into one spinner? As mention in previous reply to other mod post, want to keep this. It give a nice introduction (all the notes are on white tick) so sort of like a metronome at the beginning.
00:35:001 (1) - I don't think this spinner is fit to the song or vocal. Try make something else? Same as Normal
00:38:668 (3) - New combo for 0,5x BPM Multiplier section Speed change isn't too unreadable and compare to other combo in this section, feel a little too short.
01:24:001 (1) - Snap the end spinner at upbeat is doesn't fit to the song. Try snap the end spinner to downbeat (01:25:335) and add finish Want to keep consistency with Easy and Normal, but it does sound better so changed. (Not Change for Easy and Normal as spinner will be too short)

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Insane
00:43:835 (1) - New combo? ? You mean remove? If not no since for some people, it's easier to read this stack.
00:44:335 (1) - Remove new combo? Since previous new combo is just to make stack easier to read, so no.
00:48:668 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for following sound effect? (lol) Why not? It also allow me to make a small jump here
01:19:084 (2) - I feel this object aren't fit to this tick. Maybe move this to 01:18:918 and fix the spacing? Following a certain beat placement here, doesn't make sense to change just for one of them.
01:29:169 (4) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi) Done

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That's all, sorry ;_;

MoodyRPG wrote:

General
Clean

Easy
00:04:835 (1) - Remove new combo Look nicer this way.
00:35:001 (1) - Remove this spinner and map here I want to put a spinner at 00:36:002 like in Insane, but spinner is too short for the easier difficulties so that's why the spinner start here.

Normal
00:35:001 (1) - Same as Easy,remove and map Same as Easy

Hard
00:35:001 (1) - Same Same as Easy

Insane
00:01:002 (1) - Remove new combo Don't see a reason on why it should be remove.
01:03:335 (3) - Align with (2) Thanks for catching this.

Good Luck ^^ Ty

• Correct title to "Jouzu ni Dekiru Renai Jouju" (成就 is Jouju)
  Don't forget to fix the Taiko BG title as well.
  Add the composer name "REDALiCE" to the tags because he has many ranked songs in osu
  This map is short so I think you're allowed to map 00:06:668 - 00:17:335. You don't have to though.
  Delete .osb

• 00:03:335 (2) - Remove finish
  00:05:335 (4) - NC if you're following the vocals.
  00:25:335 (1) - NC
  00:25:669 (2) - Remove NC
  00:26:669 (5) - End this slider at 00:27:001? It sounds better that way.
  00:29:168 (3) - Remove NC. And you need to fix the spacing here. The spacing between the (2) and (3) is 1.20, the spacing between (3) and (4) is 0.8 so it is really confusing.
  00:41:335 (4) - Move this towards the center so it's symetric acrros the y-axis
  00:43:335 (4) - Start at the middle of the triangle? Like this http://puu.sh/7umH
  00:48:001 (4) - NC if following vocals.
  00:53:835 (4) - End at 00:54:168?
  00:58:336 (3) - Move to x:256 y:132? Looks better. http://puu.sh/7umR
  01:00:836 (1) - Remove NC
  01:02:169 (1) - ^
  01:02:502 (1) - End this slider at 01:02:835?
  01:07:669 (4) - Move to x:316 y:56. This isn't a clean triangle
  01:10:669 (4) - End at 01:11:168?

• 01:14:669 (7) - NC
  01:18:168 (1) - Remove NC
  01:18:668 (10) - NC
  01:18:751 - Add a note here?
  01:19:001 (1) - Remove NC
  01:20:585 - Add a note?
  01:21:335 (5) - Remove NC. I think a triplet starting from here fits the synths(Add single notes at 01:21:418 - and 01:21:501 - or a repeat slider)
  01:21:501 (6) - NC
  01:23:668 (1) - Remove NC
  01:24:001 (3) - NC
  01:24:501 (4) - Remove NC
  01:25:168 (4) - NC

• 00:35:001 (1) - Start this at 00:36:001 - and map this part?
  00:41:336 (2) - End this at 00:41:835 -and add a single note at 00:42:001 -?
  00:42:335 (3) - End this at 00:42:501 - and add a single note at 00:42:668 -?
  00:44:335 (2,3) - Why not use two repeat sliders instead?
  01:37:002 (1) - Make it the same spinner length with Insane?

• 01:24:001 (1) - End at 01:25:335 -?

• 00:57:335 (1) - End this at 00:59:335 -. The next note appears to early after a spinner for a beginner player
  01:24:001 (1) - End at 01:25:335 -?
  01:34:501 (3) - NC?

zeroclover wrote:

come for play and mod

hmm... your map's rhytm always following singer voice
sometimes is not bad and not good to play
make me retries for get S for insane Hm, I find it easier to play an Insane that follow vocal (I always get 95%+ accuracy on this Insane).

insane

my suggestion, following vocal + instrument rhythm, can help player to follow the song for first play.. u should make more combo for insane
this my mod list:
00:06:676 - u can make new combo here There's no note there?
00:21:501 - add circle ( because its look like 00:24:002 (1,2,3,4,5)'s beat) Make it a stream
00:29:335 - ^ Feel weird for me
00:30:501 - ^ ^
00:43:751 - ^ There is nothing here at this part.
00:51:835 (1) - so far jump... Remove a note to make it feel better
00:54:168 - circle Made a stream here
00:55:668 - clap Done
01:08:668 - circle Stream here

play result : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168933 sorry ,bad score Not bad


hard

difficult rate : 4.63 < u can decrease this rate if following aimod suggestion
but i play this diff without problem for 1st play all ai mod is suggesting is to fix spacing error? And I think they all play fine. Actually I' m considering adding more notes. 4.63 isn't too high for a Hard.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168934


normal

difficult rate : 3.98 < hard diff's rate , follow aimod suggestion

my mod for this diff is in aimod
I think the notes after spinner is fine. You can always stop spinning earlier.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168935

easy

...


ok, no kd lol, you didn't need to playtest my map because I give your map suggestions. I just look through one of the diff as I want to see the song get rank. Pretty helpful suggestion with hit circle through, Insane feel a little bit better now. If you want the kudosu, feel free to post and tell me ^^

Takos wrote:

Mod request accepted from my queue >w</
Please note that these are all suggestions add you can ignore them.

General

General

• Correct title to "Jouzu ni Dekiru Renai Jouju" (成就 is Jouju) I got the name from here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BI5nTkdYMqQ and it seems accurate enough. I would like to keep it like this unless you have a good source.
  Don't forget to fix the Taiko BG title as well. ^
  Add the composer name "REDALiCE" to the tags because he has many ranked songs in osu Would have prefer if you post a link of where you find this, but a quick search on google confirm this so added.
  This map is short so I think you're allowed to map 00:06:668 - 00:17:335. You don't have to though. Just a preference to have a short break at the beginning when possible.
  Delete .osb Redownload, there is no .osb. The .osb keeps on coming every time you make a change in the editor. I have to make sure there is no .osb in the folder every time I full submit.

Insane

Insane

I like this diff. I will like it more if it had more streams but oh well Suggestion on where to put streams?

• 00:03:335 (2) - Remove finish Sound fine to me, feel a little empty without imo.
  00:05:335 (4) - NC if you're following the vocals. Keeping them in group of 4s. Look nicer to me.
  00:25:335 (1) - NC Don't' really agree, mainly because it doesn't look very good and the current combo make sense to me.
  00:25:669 (2) - Remove NC ^
  00:26:669 (5) - End this slider at 00:27:001? It sounds better that way. May sound better, but the next note play weird for me.
  00:29:168 (3) - Remove NC. And you need to fix the spacing here. The spacing between the (2) and (3) is 1.20, the spacing between (3) and (4) is 0.8 so it is really confusing. No new combo for consistency with 00:17:688. Move (3) more down, or (1) since I didn't follow new combo suggestion. Ty for catching this.
  00:41:335 (4) - Move this towards the center so it's symetric acrros the y-axis Move (1,2,3) more left and follow your suggestion. And adjust the next note a bit.
  00:43:335 (4) - Start at the middle of the triangle? Like this http://puu.sh/7umH Done, didn't use distant snapping for (4) as it's impossible to put in center with it.
  00:48:001 (4) - NC if following vocals. Again, in group of 4s.
  00:53:835 (4) - End at 00:54:168? I add notes to this part in a previous mod.
  00:58:336 (3) - Move to x:256 y:132? Looks better. http://puu.sh/7umR It's feel weird to me, but I make it symmetrical to 3 from previous combo instead. I want to keep a circular shape here.
  01:00:836 (1) - Remove NC New combo because, it's following hamster voice
  01:02:169 (1) - ^ ^
  01:02:502 (1) - End this slider at 01:02:835? Same reason as 00:26:669
  01:07:669 (4) - Move to x:316 y:56. This isn't a clean triangle Didn't follow suggestion, but make it better.
  01:10:669 (4) - End at 01:11:168? White tick sound better imo

Lots of NC errors for this part. I believe this is correct if you're following the synths.

• 01:14:669 (7) - NC Done
  01:18:168 (1) - Remove NC ^
  01:18:668 (10) - NC
  01:18:751 - Add a note here?
  01:19:001 (1) - Remove NC
  01:20:585 - Add a note?
  01:21:335 (5) - Remove NC. I think a triplet starting from here fits the synths(Add single notes at 01:21:418 - and 01:21:501 - or a repeat slider
  01:21:501 (6) - NC
  01:23:668 (1) - Remove NC
  01:24:001 (3) - NC
  01:24:501 (4) - Remove NC
  01:25:168 (4) - NC Think this one is fine, the rest denied since I'm following a certain beat placement and combo placement here (after every repeating slider and on every stream, and the beat placement is basically, 5 hit circle > stream > 2 hit circle > repeating slider and repeat except for beginning and end.)

Hard

Hard

Nice diff XD

• 00:35:001 (1) - Start this at 00:36:001 - and map this part? A spinner is fine imo since I want to put a spinner here like in Insane, but spinner is a bit too short for Hard.
  00:41:336 (2) - End this at 00:41:835 -and add a single note at 00:42:001 -? Hm, change this part a bit
  00:42:335 (3) - End this at 00:42:501 - and add a single note at 00:42:668 -? ^
  00:44:335 (2,3) - Why not use two repeat sliders instead? Pay attention to vocal, this fit better
  01:37:002 (1) - Make it the same spinner length with Insane? May be a bit too short for Hard, so that's why it's here.

Normal

Normal

Looks fine

• 01:24:001 (1) - End at 01:25:335 -? Spinner a bit too short if it end there.

Easy

Easy

• 00:57:335 (1) - End this at 00:59:335 -. The next note appears to early after a spinner for a beginner player It should be readable since you have a good 500 ms to see this note (because of approach rate)
  01:24:001 (1) - End at 01:25:335 -? Same as Normal
  01:34:501 (3) - NC? Consistency with Normal and seems fine.

KS's Taiko

KS's Taiko

I can't mod taiko~

The song was fantastic~
This map was really fun to play, good luck with ranking! Ty

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Easy]
Flawless.

[Normal]
Flawless.

[Hard]
Flawless.

[Insane]
I really can't pick much in this, except maybe some minor spacing suggestions.
00:35:669 (5,6) - One down to be symmetrical with 2,3? Done
01:03:002 (2,3,4) - Not symmetrical, if it was intended. Hm, fixed
01:26:502 (3) - Maybe down and right a bit? Want to keep spacing between (3) and (4) exactly 1.20x and it play worst for me.
01:29:002 (3) - Maybe up and right a bit? I just make it so (3,4) have 1.2x distant snapping like above.

I'm really clutching at straws here... this mapset is ready for ranking.

No kd please. Hm, ok

Scorpiour wrote:

mod from queue, sorry for late

general:
actually I cant follow the beat well when i test it, i thought that because u follow vocal but not beats. I cant say it's good or not, but to low diffs, it may hard for beginners. The vocal is actually following the beat quite a bit. All of the note are on red and white ticks except for the streams in Insane and 1 part where blue tick simply sound better - also for Insane so i find it weird that lot of people are saying it's hard to follow the beat.

normal:
00:49:001 - consider to add a note here? Hmm, it's fine, since a space feel better for me.
01:28:668 (5) - make this slider end at white line? K, done


hard:
01:11:835 (3) - suggest to move slider to white line, and end at white line Listen to this at 0.25x, it make much more sense on the red tick to follow singer and drum. The white tick, there is some cymbal or so, but you can barely hear it. Think it's better to follow what you can easily than what you can barely hear.

insane:
00:27:001 - consider to add a note here? Feel really weird to me (always get 100 on this hit circle or the next one).
00:42:335 (2,3,1) - space distance This is to make the jump more smooth. Would be weird if you have say, an anti jump and then all the sudden you make a jump across the screen. Doesn't flow so good so that's why.


that's all. I hope it will help u

Breeze wrote:

General

1. [KS's Taiko] is missing a 2nd red line BPM:180, offset:4002, actually I think a red line BPM:180, offset:2 is fine though :/ Hm, I think red line has to be at the place where music start. There is no music at 00:00:000 - 00:00:335. But idk, I don't see anything wrong with two red timing points through

2. Takos wrote:

   I'm Japanese so I'm pretty sure "Jouzu ni Dekiru Renai Jouju" is the correct title.
   You can ask another Japanese person if you want to be extra sure.
   You know the writing in Japanese is "上手にできる恋愛成就" right?
   上手reads to Jouzu,
   成就 reads to Jouju.
   I assume the creator wanted these two words to rhyme.
   Hope this helps

   If title is what Takos said, please fix this, I can't find this game on wikipedia so failed on checking this :/ Here is the Japanese wikipedia page http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%81%BF% ... %E3%81%93!. What Takos said seem correct so fixed. Just wondering why on the youtube video, it's listed as Seiju instead.

Normal

1. 00:04:001 (2) - You forget to add a finish sound here? Fixed

Insane

1. 00:03:835 (2) - The spacing might be confusing, use usual spacing here seems better Since these hit circles are following the instrument, I don't want to use the same spacing as the hit circles following the vocals and imo, it's give a nice lead up to the vocal and this part of the music feel like your mouse should be moving faster (jump). New combo should also help make it easier to read and you're the first one to mention this.
2. 00:42:668 (1) - ^, use same spacing to 00:42:335 (2,3) looked better IMO I want to have a slight jump here, feel a little weird to me without it. But made the spacing a little nicer.
3. 01:10:168 (1) - ^, make spacing close more seems better You're right, snap to 1.25x like at 01:09:001.
4. 00:48:001 (4) - New combo here, remove NC of 00:48:168 (1) since spacing change starts here Since lot of people wants me to do this. Guess i'll do it. I wanted to keep the combo here in group of 4s.
5. 01:06:169 (5) - Spacing too far, may confusing player I think it's fine. It's a slider, so you do not have to time it perfectly to get 300 and this part feel like your mouse should move a little faster (slight jump here). Also want to keep symmetry with next part and you're the first one to mention this.
6. 01:30:668 - Emm, I feel this 1.5xBPM come out too sudden, while it's playable, maybe use 1.2xBPM would make it played more comfortable? Hm, I disagree, slider ticks, new combo, and a straight slider should help you read this space change. And using 1.2x feel a little bit too little for me and sort of lose the point of having a speed up in the first place.

Let me know when this map have 8SP K, will try to get the 2 final stars. If by next week I still don't have it. I just star the last 2 stars myself.