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SapphireGhost
Oh, oops. After some of the changes on [Easy], 00:08:076 (1) - needs a manual new combo. So yeah. Sorry about that.
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Pereira006

SapphireGhost wrote:

Oh, oops. After some of the changes on [Easy], 00:08:076 (1) - needs a manual new combo. So yeah. Sorry about that.
fix ._. and 00:00:076 (1) - need too new combo manual and fix :/

thank you mod :)
L_P
sooo sorry for the delay. im having my exam, big one
and heres your mod~ all suggestion as al~ways.

insane

00:16:964 (4) - place at note 6? suggestion cause the previous pattern you did has a jump on this beat
00:21:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - um....how to say? make the spacing from closer to further apart, cause the volume is rising, kinda some sort of my own feeling.
00:34:187 (3) - too many triplets....wait do we call that triplets?um.. anyway delete this?
01:14:520 (6) - i will be more pleasant if i see note 5 and 6 are further apart
01:16:298 (6) - nazi..right 1 grid

i noticed your chorus part doesnt really have much those "triplets" i mean....make more?like 01:29:631 (3) - here , and so on

01:48:291 (3) - make it right or left 1 or 2 grid? *the piano part

*dont you wanna cut some of those mp3 behind?

hard

00:01:853 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern suggestion, why not note 1 alone, note2,3 stack , note 4 alone, note 5,6 stack?
00:16:076 (8) - stack with next slider? i think it belongs to that group
01:13:631 (3) - ctrl+r? osuplayer111;s pattern

normal
good~ but are you sure youre gonna make the circle size like this?

easy
Goood

good map, not much to say
Topic Starter
Pereira006

L_P wrote:

sooo sorry for the delay. im having my exam, big one
and heres your mod~ all suggestion as al~ways.

insane

00:16:964 (4) - place at note 6? suggestion cause the previous pattern you did has a jump on this beat no
00:21:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - um....how to say? make the spacing from closer to further apart, cause the volume is rising, kinda some sort of my own feeling.no i like and stay
00:34:187 (3) - too many triplets....wait do we call that triplets?um.. anyway delete this? no if you listen so many women sing are 1/4 and beat so many 1/4 then is insane so o i make many triple stream here and is funny play
01:14:520 (6) - i will be more pleasant if i see note 5 and 6 are further apart no
01:16:298 (6) - nazi..right 1 grid ya

i noticed your chorus part doesnt really have much those "triplets" i mean....make more?like 01:29:631 (3) - here , and so on
no here is not 1/4 and you listen here so many 1/4 sing and beat so i add triple and is funny play and the triple is more fits this women sing and beat

01:48:291 (3) - make it right or left 1 or 2 grid? *the piano part ok

*dont you wanna cut some of those mp3 behind?
no this is mp3 original with video original and stay

hard

00:01:853 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern suggestion, why not note 1 alone, note2,3 stack , note 4 alone, note 5,6 stack? no
00:16:076 (8) - stack with next slider? i think it belongs to that group no
01:13:631 (3) - ctrl+r? osuplayer111;s pattern no i not wanna wrong spacing on hard

normal
good~ but are you sure youre gonna make the circle size like this?
yup i like it and stay

easy
Goood

good map, not much to say
thank you mod
HakuNoKaemi
[Easy]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:03:631 (1) - 1/2 shorter, dor the sake of following music.
00:07:631 (x) - Same sake, add a Circle(+ Clap)
00:19:187 (2,3) - to follow music


Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:17:409 (4) - Move it as there seem to be an imaginary curve within (3) and (4) starts?

[Normal]
Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:03:187 (3,4) - make the symmetryc to 00:01:853 (2,1) -
00:07:631 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - nothing big, try to unstack some notes to give the pattern a more varying feeling ? (Example, a zigzag)
00:40:964 (4) - remove the oblique start? [ur=http://puu.sh/7RjOl]example[/url]

[Hard]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
01:44:765 (x) - Add circle (SONG-WISE, IT'S EXPECTED)
Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:07:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could continue zig-zagging like you done in the part before?
00:14:742 (2,3) - Unstack from (1) and triangulize ( 1 - 2 - 3 feeling )
SPOILER
[img][http://puu.sh/7RoP/img]
01:40:298 (2) - Some grid down, to form an imaginary curve with (1) and (3)
The last part was graphivally random.. ( the END.. )
Gameplay
(Gameplay related ideas)
01:50:352 (3) - Use 1.0x Distance Snapfrom that point to
01:52:276 (3) - Use 0.8x from that point to end

[Insane]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:20:964 (5,6,7) - partially mapped stream? Why don't add a circle at 00:21:298 (x) -

Guess i Can STAR ;3
Topic Starter
Pereira006

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:03:631 (1) - 1/2 shorter, dor the sake of following music. no because i feel song like "tiiiiii" then this slider is fit more
00:07:631 (x) - Same sake, add a Circle(+ Clap) no i will stay mind mod's sapphire ghost
00:19:187 (2,3) - to follow music ok


Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:17:409 (4) - Move it as there seem to be an imaginary curve within (3) and (4) starts? i did change mu owm thank catch

[Normal]
Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:03:187 (3,4) - make the symmetryc to 00:01:853 (2,1) - ya
00:07:631 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - nothing big, try to unstack some notes to give the pattern a more varying feeling ? (Example, a zigzag) no
00:40:964 (4) - remove the oblique start? no[ur=http://puu.sh/7RjOl]example[/url]

[Hard]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
01:44:765 (x) - Add circle (SONG-WISE, IT'S EXPECTED) no because this is hard not more add cicles :(
Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:07:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could continue zig-zagging like you done in the part before? sure
00:14:742 (2,3) - Unstack from (1) and triangulize ( 1 - 2 - 3 feeling ) no
SPOILER
[img][http://puu.sh/7RoP/img]
01:40:298 (2) - Some grid down, to form an imaginary curve with (1) and (3) ya i like it
The last part was graphivally random.. ( the END.. )
the last is cool
Gameplay
(Gameplay related ideas)
01:50:352 (3) - Use 1.0x Distance Snapfrom that point to
01:52:276 (3) - Use 0.8x from that point to end

no

[Insane]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:20:964 (5,6,7) - partially mapped stream? Why don't add a circle at 00:21:298 (x) - ya add and change stream

Guess i Can STAR ;3
thank you mod and star :)
Breeze
[Hard]
  1. 01:00:520 (5) - Why this slider end at blue tick? Shouldn't it end at 01:01:187 red tick?
I try to get the timing of last part
BPM/Offset
132/108520
124/110338
113/112273
I feel this one is better, try it
Topic Starter
Pereira006

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 01:00:520 (5) - Why this slider end at blue tick? Shouldn't it end at 01:01:187 red tick?
what the... -.- i now konw what happened anyway fix


I try to get the timing of last part
BPM/Offset
132/108520
124/110338
113/112273
I feel this one is better, try it
ya i agree and fixe all and all diff

than you mod :)

pleasse recheck :(
HakuNoKaemi
there are other section at the end, Breeze,so better specify what to delet and what not.
SapphireGhost
Oh. I was going to get to finally rechecking this, but it looks like Breeze has got it, so that's cool. PM me if there are any problems.
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Pereira006

SapphireGhost wrote:

Oh. I was going to get to finally rechecking this, but it looks like Breeze has got it, so that's cool. PM me if there are any problems.
thanks, but now I'm worried about the last timing :(
I will pm you if timing is really fine or not

sorry my poor eng and thank
Breeze
Emm, I still doubt the timing of last part
Let's firgure out the final one
BPM/Offset
135/76
134/101399
134/104967
132/108520
124/110338
113/112273
105/113328
95/114469
85/115746
83/117132
86/120023

Need some timing check before bubble this map IMO
Try to ask for some players or modders to test this map with this timing, if most of them say this is fine, then I guess it's the time to bubble it
TicClick
1. Offset: 76ms BPM: 135,00
2. Offset: 108 518ms BPM: 132,00
3. Offset: 110 336ms BPM: 124,00
4. Offset: 112 271ms BPM: 113,00
5. Offset: 113 332ms BPM: 105,00
6. Offset: 114 469ms BPM: 95,00
7. Offset: 115 746ms BPM: 85,00
8. Offset: 117 132ms BPM: 83,00
9. Offset: 120 023ms BPM: 86,50

I only removed useless 134 BPM line, resnapped most of red lines and tweaked the last one a little. To give or not to give avard is your choice.
Topic Starter
Pereira006

TicClick wrote:

1. Offset: 76ms BPM: 135,00
2. Offset: 108 518ms BPM: 132,00
3. Offset: 110 336ms BPM: 124,00
4. Offset: 112 271ms BPM: 113,00
5. Offset: 113 332ms BPM: 105,00
6. Offset: 114 469ms BPM: 95,00
7. Offset: 115 746ms BPM: 85,00
8. Offset: 117 132ms BPM: 83,00
9. Offset: 120 023ms BPM: 86,50

I only removed useless 134 BPM line, resnapped most of red lines and tweaked the last one a little. To give or not to give avard is your choice.
kudosu for him because i did ask him for check offset and bpm then TicClick got paid

all fixed

134 bpm are really useless is true,I feel better now because all drums soft and strong are 1/1 and 1/2

thank you ticClick

pleasse i will not add useless 134bpm anyway MAT recheck pleasse and bubbled :( *me runs
Komeiji Yuki
^_______________^


[youtube]eN53ZyuX4Ps[youtube]

Oh shit it's already in the message :P
HakuNoKaemi
You applied the timing only on hard--- and uhm. The 134 is an offset jump and a little decrescendo(and it's 134,75, precisely)
1. Offset: 76ms BPM: 135,00
2. Offset: 101 400ms BPM: 134,75
3. Offset: 110 358ms BPM: 125,00
4. Offset: 112 300ms BPM: 117,00
5. Offset: 113 350ms BPM: 109,00
6. Offset: 114 469ms BPM: 95,00
7. Offset: 115 736ms BPM: 85,00
8. Offset: 117 136ms BPM: 83,00<- can't find that stream bpm at that point manually >.<
9. Offset: 120 023ms BPM: 86,50

and that's based on red ticks too ( just press Ctrl when playing song in the timing section )

i guess why some bpm are completely different... however... try this...
Topic Starter
Pereira006

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

You applied the timing only on hard--- and uhm. The 134 is an offset jump and a little decrescendo(and it's 134,75, precisely)

hard only? what you mean ?I say my map and i did submit i can see the timing all diff is same...

1. Offset: 76ms BPM: 135,00
2. Offset: 101 400ms BPM: 134,75
3. Offset: 110 358ms BPM: 125,00
4. Offset: 112 300ms BPM: 117,00
5. Offset: 113 350ms BPM: 109,00
6. Offset: 114 469ms BPM: 95,00
7. Offset: 115 736ms BPM: 85,00
8. Offset: 117 136ms BPM: 83,00<- can't find that stream bpm at that point manually >.<
9. Offset: 120 023ms BPM: 86,50

and that's based on red ticks too ( just press Ctrl when playing song in the timing section )

i guess why some bpm are completely different... however... try this...

I will pray to Card to check it...
:/ :/ :/ :/

Really and what happened bpm 124,000 ? then the drums soft now random i did put 25% slow song they are random sorry
not fixed i will keep using ticClick's timing because they are perfect 1/1 and 1/2

sorry not fixed

and pleasse MOD,MAT,BAT Find this devil timing :( pleasse
HakuNoKaemi
1. Offset: 76ms BPM: 135,00
2. Offset: 101 400ms BPM: 134,75
3. Offset: 110 358ms BPM: 125,00
4. Offset: 112 300ms BPM: 117,00
5. Offset: 113 350ms BPM: 109,00
6. Offset: 114 469ms BPM: 95,00
7. Offset: 115 736ms BPM: 85,00
8. Offset: 117 132ms BPM: 83,00<- can't find that stream bpm at that point manually >.<
9. Offset: 120 023ms BPM: 86,50
Believe me, the timing you're using now is MUCH MORE off than the last.

the 124 section felt good only because the offset was off....
Still, he used wrong bpm but tweaked the offset to the last hearable note, and that's wrong to do.
Other than that, soft drums? what? there aren't drums at the ends.
Still,sorry, but perfect 1/1? still, they're wrong. Those are offset jump, and can't be timed with perfects 1/2. (precisely, the Downbeat is al little earlier in all the bpm changes)
The only yellow notes are:
02:00:109 (3) - and 02:01:323 (4) -.

(corrected one thing as CnF suggestion, shall ask Doomsday now)
Mine is more correct, i assure you i timed all to the downbeats/upbeats in the piano.
Shiro
Alright... Timing this on request. = = I'll point out only the wrong lines.

offset 110336 ---> the offset is completely off in the beginning... try this:
  1. offset 110350 -- BPM 125.000
offset 113332 ---> BPM is a bit off. try:
  1. offset 113332 -- BPM 106.000
offset 115746 ---> offset is off and BPM is off. Try:
  1. offset 115740 -- BPM 91.000
Topic Starter
Pereira006
all fixed I hope the offset and bpm is fine ;_;
Breeze
I feel timing is fine now, since so many modders have checked the timing
I could bubble this map now !
Sakura
Ok fixed a missing clap on Normal, everything else looks fine.

Ranked!

Congratulations on your first ranked mapset Pereira ^_^
Anshi_old
congratulation~~ 0 0 great...desu
Elly-chan
Pereira i love you

as a friend
Topic Starter
Pereira006

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok fixed a missing clap on Normal, everything else looks fine.

Ranked!

Congratulations on your first ranked mapset Pereira ^_^
thank you ;__;

and thank you all ;_;

You all my friend :)
Xakyrie
wow Pereira, good job, I'm so happy for you! ^^

good job on your first ranked mapset :3
S h i o n
Pereira <3

I am touched by your spirit of pursuit of music though you are taken of something by God.

Breeze
Wow, it's get RANKed so quick, just when I wake up and I saw it's RANKed XD congz!
mancuso_JM_
Congratz in your 1st ranked beatmap ;)
Kotone
Mitani Nana<3~
terametis
Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Pereira006
Arigatou ;______;
CNM501
Can't seem to Download. Is the it broken? :/
Topic Starter
Pereira006

CNM501 wrote:

Can't seem to Download. Is the it broken? :/
lmfao is not broken because i can download
CNM501
Osu direct won't let me download nor would the website. :/ And no I have not been downloading a lot of maps at once. :/
JotaHora
Does not work for me too! I wanna try this!
SmileyBandit
I'm having the same problem downloading :(
Sakura
It is working here fine, so i dont know why you guys cant
Bittersweet
it worked fine for me too.

(E você precisa atualizar sua userpage, Pereira)
CNM501
I keep getting this...
Topic Starter
Pereira006

CNM501 wrote:

I keep getting this...
ya is true now today is happened me same :(

i hope fix this
Maraiga
Congrats again Perere <3 I can't download it to this computer either, hope that gets fixed soon :)
kong12345wai
what happen?!i cannot download this beatmap!0KP=_=
Sakura
Yeah for some reason it's downloading a 0 byte file :< i'll see what can i do to get this fixed
Weez
wtf is 1be.org??? It brings me to a spanish verb translation.....
Jesss

Weezy wrote:

wtf is 1be.org??? It brings me to a spanish verb translation.....
^ This...0kb and osu!direct can't download that map :V
Topic Starter
Pereira006

Jesss wrote:

Weezy wrote:

wtf is 1be.org??? It brings me to a spanish verb translation.....
^ This...0kb and osu!direct can't download that map :V

:( :( :(

I hope fixed this
Mismagius
Still can't download.
Topic Starter
Pereira006


now is working \:D/

i hope you all can dowmload
Bless
finally, it's worked~
thanks god~
CNM501
It's working now :D
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