1. Savage Kingdom - 4Key (7.2 stars, 4700 notes)

Niks wrote:

아 귀테러

1. 00:37:283 - 멜로디
2. 01:00:483 - 01:03:683 - 멜로디가 한번씩 꺾입니다. 참고
3. 01:00:833 - 01:04:033 - 이 음들이 여기서 짧은 포즈가 있는데, 그걸 단놋으로 표현해 보시는것도 나쁘지 않을것 같군요
4. 01:08:533 - 01:08:583 - 여기에 음이 있으니, 이렇게 해보는건 어떻습니까 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8897981
5. 01:11:683 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8897984
6. 02:19:433 - 한번 더 2-4 롱놋?
7. 02:35:633 - 마이너한 소리들 스킵한건 의도하신건가요
8. 04:10:433 - 더블로 해도 무관할듯
9. 04:19:133 (259133|2,259133|0,259133|1,259233|1,259233|0,259233|2,259333|2,259333|1,259333|0) - 이거 솔직히 무리노트같은데, 다른 비슷한 음에도
   더블입니다. 04:20:033 -

Lude wrote:

Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

[Savage Kingdom]

1. 00:37:283 - 멜로디 // 수정
2. 01:00:483 - 01:03:683 - 멜로디가 한번씩 꺾입니다. 참고 // 명확하지 않아서 그냥 롱놋하나로했어요
3. 01:00:833 - 01:04:033 - 이 음들이 여기서 짧은 포즈가 있는데, 그걸 단놋으로 표현해 보시는것도 나쁘지 않을것 같군요 // 수정
4. 01:08:533 - 01:08:583 - 여기에 음이 있으니, 이렇게 해보는건 어떻습니까 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8897981 // 그대로 갈게요 일부러 뻈어요
5. 01:11:683 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8897984 // 소리가 명확하지도않고 있다해도 빼는게 좋을거같네요
6. 02:19:433 - 한번 더 2-4 롱놋? // 놉
7. 02:35:633 - 마이너한 소리들 스킵한건 의도하신건가요 // 그렇습니다
8. 04:10:433 - 더블로 해도 무관할듯 // 쉬는 텀이라 1놋씩으로 했어요
9. 04:19:133 (259133|2,259133|0,259133|1,259233|1,259233|0,259233|2,259333|2,259333|1,259333|0) - 이거 솔직히 무리노트같은데, 다른 비슷한 음에도
   더블입니다. 04:20:033 - // 잘들어 보시면 드럼 크기가 다릅니다 그리고 잘치던데요 다른분들 호호

깔ㅡ끔

Arzenvald wrote:

>:O camellia furry confirmed

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Very blastix

Civilization wrote:

yo
1║2║3║4

mod

00:44:733 - place a note here
00:48:733 - ^
01:07:733 - place a note on 4
01:08:133 - place a note on 1
01:39:733 (99733|3,99733|1,99783|2,99783|0,99833|3,99833|1,99933|2,99933|0,99983|1,99983|3,100033|2,100033|0) - this type of jumptrill is uncomfortableoawejr
02:13:183 - make the LNs end here
02:19:433 - place a jump here
02:36:333 - ^
02:37:633 (157633|3,157633|0,157833|0,157833|1,157933|2,158033|3,158033|1,158033|0) - place 1/4 notes here
02:40:233 (160233|2,160233|3) - makes these two LNs the same as before
03:14:033 (194033|3,194033|1) - should be a hand
03:14:533 - place a note here
03:14:533 - ^
03:15:133 - ^
03:23:733 (203733|2) - this note should be 03:23:766 - here
03:23:933 (203933|1) - this note should be03:23:899 - here
03:24:033 - place a note here
03:27:133 - another sound here
03:41:333 - place a note on 4
03:41:733 - place a note on 1
03:45:733 (225733|2,225833|3,225933|1,226033|0,226033|2,226033|3,226233|2,226233|3,226433|2,226433|3,226633|2,226633|3,226833|3,226833|2,227033|2,227033|3,227233|2,227233|3,227333|2,227333|1,227333|0,227633|0,227633|1,227633|3,227833|1,227833|0,228033|0,228033|1,228233|1,228233|0,228433|1,228433|0,228633|0,228633|1,228833|0,228833|1,228933|1,228933|2,228933|3,229233|0,229233|3,229233|2,229333|1,229433|2,229533|3,229633|2,229633|1,229633|0,229733|3,229833|2,229933|1,230033|0,230033|3,230033|2,230133|1,230233|2,230333|3,230433|0,230433|1,230433|2,230533|3,230633|2,230733|1,230833|0,230833|2,230833|3,230933|2,230933|3,231033|1,231033|0,231133|0,231133|1,231233|2,231233|3,231333|0,231333|2,231433|0,231433|3,231533|3,231533|2,231633|0,231633|1,231683|2,231683|3,231733|1,231733|0,231783|2,231783|3,231833|1,231833|0,231883|2,231883|3,231933|1,231933|0,231983|2,231983|3,232033|0,232058|1,232083|2,232108|3,232133|0,232158|1,232183|2,232208|3,232233|0,232258|1,232283|2,232308|3,232333|0,232358|1,232383|2,232408|3,232433|1,232433|0) - ctrl+h
04:01:333 (241333|3,241333|1,241383|0,241383|2,241433|1,241433|3) - make it a [14][23][14] pattern
04:31:033 (271033|0,271033|1) - should be a jump
04:31:233 (271233|3,271233|2) - ^
04:31:833 (271833|2,271833|0) - ^
04:32:033 (272033|3,272033|2) - ^
04:32:233 (272233|1) - move to 3 and make it a LN
04:32:333 (272333|2) - remove this so the LN can reach all the way aoiwejr
04:32:633 (272633|2,272633|3) - needs jump stuff here etc
04:45:233 (285233|1,285233|0) - all these jumptrill start on this side
04:54:783 (294783|1) - remove
05:22:033 (322033|0,322033|3,322033|1) - you could make this a quad for effect

good luck

Murumoo wrote:

hiyong~

(1/2/3/4)

Savage Kingdom

00:49:233 - 여기랑 위에 234 3스냅 쓰셨는데 나머지 패턴에선 3스냅 똑같이 주는경우가 없어서 이부분이랑 윗부분 3스냅중에 한곳 변경 어떨까요?// 소리나는부분에 넣어서 패스
01:28:533 - 여기서 시작되는 점핸이랑 아랫구간 끝부분 점핸이 패턴이 똑같은데 뒤집어보시는게 어떤? // 약간의 변화만 줬네요
01:33:233 - 여기서 124 3스냅후 1,4롱노트인데 치다보니까 그냥 3스냅에서 롱노트 줘서 올리는거나 롱노트시작을 01:33:433 - 여기로 바꾸는것도 괜찮은거 같습니다. // 300브픔이여서 빨간선부분에넣는게 재밌을거같아서 그렇게했네요
어우.. 이 이후 패턴들은 대체.. 일단 하프타임 45~47만클은 되는군여 노말은 ㅈㅈ

Kawawa wrote:

귀테러 오진다

Reba wrote:

안녕하냐 난 안녕하다

00:58:933 (58933|0) - 롱놋의 위치가 잘못되었다, 정확히는 00:59:033 - 여기서 소리가 난다. 01:05:333 (65333|3) - 이것도 마찬가지다. 멜로디의 소리는 그 위에서 난다. // 그렇다

01:08:733 (68733|2) - 이런것 보다는 12 를 두번 반복했다가 34를 치는게 더 좋고 재밌다고 생각한다. 노트를 1칼럼으로 옮겨라 // 냅둘거다

01:12:033 (72033|3) - 여기가 피니쉬사운드인데 왜 01:11:833 (71833|2) - 여기가 3놋인지 잘 모르겠다. 01:12:433 (72433|0) - 여기와의 일관성을 맞추려면 말이다. // 둘다 3놋으로했다

03:23:733 (203733|2) - 여기서부턴 뭔가 롱놋으로 표현했으면 더 나았을거라는 개인적인 의견 // 그런거같다

03:26:033 (206033|3,206333|3,206633|2,206733|1) - 이거 4개 롱놋이 굉장히 어울린다 ㅎㅎ // ㅗ

03:37:433 (217433|0) - 없어도 될거같다. 03:38:133 (218133|2,218333|0) - 여기처럼 // 소리가있긴있어서 단놋했다

03:42:183 - 복사 붙히기 하다가 이런걸 놓치게 되었잖냐 똥멍청아. 전꺼에도 소리가 있긴하지만 약해서 안넣을만하지만 여기는 더 강력한거같다 // 복붙이아니다 이멍청한녀석 일부러 이렇게했다 뒤에 23 12 34 를 쉽게 치기위해

1. 00:41:333 - add one note for the small drum sound
2. 00:41:833 - i believe here is also a sound similar to 00:41:633 - so better make it double too
3. 00:50:633 - double for kick
4. 00:51:033 - ^
5. 01:02:033 (62033|1,62033|0,62233|0,62233|2,62333|1,62333|3,62433|0,62433|2) - why you use double suddenly for these sounds that sound like the same volume as before? I would still prefer them to be single notes to make your pattern consistent
6. 01:17:233 - how about something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8995358
7. 01:45:633 - imo, you only need to double the sounds on white and red lines, so maybe try this pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8995366
8. 02:44:533 (164533|1,164633|2,164833|3) - how about make the pattern here similar to 02:12:433 (132433|2,132633|2,132833|3) - ?
9. 03:00:583 - miss a note here for the melody
10. 03:01:433 (181433|2,181633|3) - these melodic sounds are weaker, better delete them
11. 03:03:233 (183233|1,183333|2) - ^
12. 03:04:933 (184933|1) - delete, 03:04:933 (184933|1) - add
13. 03:06:983 - also miss note
14. 03:07:833 (187833|0,188033|3,188133|2) - delete
15. 03:08:833 (188833|0) - delete
16. 03:09:433 (189433|0,189633|0) - ^
17. 03:11:833 - miss a note
18. 03:13:433 - ^
19. 03:16:333 - 03:16:633 - miss notes
20. 03:21:033 - need double for kick
21. 03:21:433 - ^
22. 03:50:833 - same thing as 01:17:233 -, if you apply my idea owo

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, M4M via irc PM owo

[Savage Kingdom]

1. 00:41:333 - add one note for the small drum sound
2. 00:41:833 - i believe here is also a sound similar to 00:41:633 - so better make it double too
3. 00:50:633 - double for kick
4. 00:51:033 - ^
5. 01:02:033 (62033|1,62033|0,62233|0,62233|2,62333|1,62333|3,62433|0,62433|2) - why you use double suddenly for these sounds that sound like the same volume as before? I would still prefer them to be single notes to make your pattern consistent
6. 01:17:233 - how about something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8995358
7. 01:45:633 - imo, you only need to double the sounds on white and red lines, so maybe try this pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8995366
8. 02:44:533 (164533|1,164633|2,164833|3) - how about make the pattern here similar to 02:12:433 (132433|2,132633|2,132833|3) - ?
9. 03:00:583 - miss a note here for the melody
10. 03:01:433 (181433|2,181633|3) - these melodic sounds are weaker, better delete them
11. 03:03:233 (183233|1,183333|2) - ^
12. 03:04:933 (184933|1) - delete, 03:04:933 (184933|1) - add
13. 03:06:983 - also miss note
14. 03:07:833 (187833|0,188033|3,188133|2) - delete
15. 03:08:833 (188833|0) - delete
16. 03:09:433 (189433|0,189633|0) - ^
17. 03:11:833 - miss a note
18. 03:13:433 - ^
19. 03:16:333 - 03:16:633 - miss notes
20. 03:21:033 - need double for kick
21. 03:21:433 - ^
22. 03:50:833 - same thing as 01:17:233 -, if you apply my idea owo

Good Luck! Hope my mods can help you owo

Curiossity wrote:

POWA OF DA WILDANES Mod

1|2|3|4

such a good song

Savage Kingdom

00:29:733 (29733|2) - maybe a note here?

00:47:933 (47933|3) - here too

00:57:633 (57633|3) - maybe new LN here, shorten 00:57:533 (57533|2) - to 1/2 for the sound here

01:11:733 (71733|0,71933|2) - these two should probably be jumps, just because the same sounds were jumps before.. 01:11:783 (71783|1,71983|1) - are fine because of the hands, i would think

01:12:333 (72333|0) - not sure if this is a ghost note or not

01:20:233 (80233|3) - for this part, the snapping seems okay until here, when i would either start following the beats in the background (which are 1/4 i think) or start slowing down for the twing-y sound you were following at the start (if i follow this correctly x.x). this part plays fine just concerned about following music i guess

01:27:933 (87933|1) - note here

01:34:833 (94833|3,94933|3,95033|3) - why are the first two notes hands, but the last one just a jump? just wondering about layering

01:39:333 (99333|2,99433|2) - maybe move these two to col. 4 so that the transition from 01:39:133 (99133|2) - to 01:39:233 (99233|3) - is moreso emphasized

01:40:633 (100633|1,100733|0,100833|3,100933|2,101033|3,101133|0) - maybe make these notes short LNs, the sound they have is kinda unique

01:46:583 (106583|1,106783|1) - these two notes seem iffy to me, they certainly don't follow the main sound here and although the first one feels alright the second one maybe not...

01:47:233 (107233|0,107633|3) - this section is strange, i feel like the only sound in the section is constant so maybe make the pattern constant as well (i.e. 1/8 roll the entire thing, or have an ln and do 1/4 roll or something...)

01:57:199 (117199|3) - eh, maybe cut off this note, the sound it represents ends around 01:57:183. you could even cut off the last two notes, just to emphasize the pause

01:58:333 (118333|3) - jump here? maybe put a note on col. 2

02:06:133 (126133|2,126533|2,126733|2) - maybe move these notes back. around 1/2 earlier, since there's not really any sounds they represent unlike 02:06:333 (126333|3) - and then delete the first one?

02:10:233 (130233|1,130533|2) - maybe add 1/4 notes after these two, since they're the start of the sound that you've been mapping as 1/4 rolls for awhile

02:11:233 (131233|1,131283|0) - not sure why you used a 1/4 roll here, feels out of place given the use of the rolls previously

02:11:633 (131633|3,132433|1) - between these two points, there's sounds every 1/2 if you wanted to use that first column for something (or just add notes elsewhere idk)

02:12:833 (132833|3) - since this is a stronger sound comparatively to the previous two LN starts, maybe have another Ln start at col. 2

02:23:883 (143883|1,143983|3,144083|1) - probably ghost notes

02:30:283 (150283|2) - same here

02:36:483 - starting here, there's some 1/4 and 1/2 snares you're missing, maybe map those like you did in the other section?

02:37:333 (157333|3) - also here, missed snare, and 02:37:633 (157633|3,157833|1) - between these missed 1/4

02:44:533 (164533|1) - this might actually start on the beat at 02:44:433 (164433|2) - also the LNs' endings are interesting, but the song is so loud it's hard to tell everything apart ;w;

03:19:933 (199933|1) - note here?

03:45:333 (225333|0,225533|2) - same as before, maybe make these jumps

03:52:833 (232833|3) - same snapping concerns as before as well

03:58:833 (238833|1,239033|1,239233|2) - what makes these hands compared to the other kick sounds? if it's just for structure or to make it dense you could move the hands to 03:58:933 (238933|2,239133|3,239333|3) - so that it follows the synth, but if there's something i'm missing then that's cool too

04:06:683 (246683|2) - maybe remove this note and make 04:06:733 (246733|1,246783|2,246833|3) - a minitrill instead, since i'm not sure there's a sound on the first note but i'm pretty sure the last three are kicks similar to the minitrill before this

04:10:133 (250133|2) - not sure if this should be a jump

04:14:133 (254133|0,254233|0,254733|0,254833|0) - these two patterns shouldn't be the same, as the sounds they represent aren't the same

04:19:483 (259483|3) - move this note 1/4 earlier, as 04:19:433 (259433|1) - this sound is loud similar to 04:19:033 (259033|3) -

04:22:333 (262333|2) - there should be a sound here, maybe move 04:22:433 (262433|3) - to start here instead

04:53:833 (293833|0) - imo this note should be a jump and 04:53:883 (293883|2) - this note should be a single note, just because of how the triple is structured in the music

very nice chart, good luck with rank! c:

Kyousuke- wrote:

[POWAWA OF DA MODA]

00:29:233 - ~ 00:30:033 - isn't the note placement should be like 00:35:633 - this and 00:38:833 - this part? o.o i think something like this would work https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102744 // clearly 00:29:233 (29233|2,29333|0,29533|2,29633|0) - have sounds.
00:47:933 - skipped a note? xd add it like 00:44:733 - this part (same thing like 03:18:333 -) // added
00:49:433 (49433|0) - move this note to 00:49:533 - here? as the sound is audible while 00:49:433 - there's no any sound exist // I hear both of them. added

01:08:733 (68733|1,68733|2,68783|1,68783|0) - hmm is this intended? if yes make it jack instead (01:08:733 (68733|2) - move to 1) as it easier to hit or make it like the usual one (if agree, also apply on 03:42:333 -) // intended
02:06:983 (126983|2,127033|0,127083|2,127283|1,127333|3,127383|1) - aren't the notes should be shifted 1/4 snap down? :^) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103075 // It is more louder than other bass sound, so I did triple.
03:45:633 (225633|3,225633|0) - make it 3 notes like 01:12:033 - previous part? :^) // added

04:04:033 (244033|1,244033|2,244083|0,244083|3,244133|1,244133|2) - recommend to make it [12][34] instead of [23][14] due to harder to execute and needs more stamina, so i think simplicity of the pattern would be more appropriate.// that's why this is 7stars. I don't want make it easier

04:19:133 (259133|2,259133|0,259133|1,259233|1,259233|0,259233|2,259333|2,259333|1,259333|0) - should be double instead of triplet like 04:11:633 - this part? and 04:15:633 - on this part even only double -w- // same.

04:22:433 (262433|3) - shift the LN 1/2 snap down from 04:22:333 - here, where the sound starts at xd // fixed

04:23:183 (263183|3,263233|0,263233|1,263283|2,263333|1,263333|0,263383|3,263433|2,263433|0,263483|3,263533|2,263533|0,263583|1,263633|2,263633|3,263683|0,263733|2,263733|1) - this pattern was quite hard to execute especially on high bpm, considering to make it more simpler. Maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103731 // I'll think about it a little more.

04:33:533 (273533|1,273533|2,273583|0,273583|3,273633|2,273633|1) - same like the mod before, recommend to make it [12][34]. If you accept here's the pattern suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102229 it suits with the next pattern tho owo // eee pass

04:36:533 - missing note? obviously the same sound with 04:36:733 - this note // I didn't add it to make a 1/4 space above
04:53:683 (293683|3,293883|3) - actually this mini LNs are not too necesarry, it just makes the pattern more harder to read. also 04:53:483 //
I think it's possible to play In detail there are have some little drum sounds. so add 1more note
(293483|2,293483|3) - this was actually a ghost note. Suggesting to make it like your previous pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102414 // clearly have sounds.
or if you want to keep that for the pp sake 04:53:483 (293483|3,293483|2) - make this into single LN instead :^)

ET Map! Goodluck xDD