1. _~Inner Oni~_ (5,2 stars, 622 notes)
2. ~Futsuu~ (2,15 stars, 145 notes)
3. ~Kantan~ (1,38 stars, 99 notes)
4. ~Muzukashii~ (3,73 stars, 273 notes)
5. ~Oni~ (4,09 stars, 370 notes)

Arach wrote:

Hi! M4M: here is my part! You modded 2 of my diffs so I do the same to you ^^

[General]

Star spread: Between Futsuu and Muzu there is too much difference. It is recommended to keep quite the same star gap among diffs. Same for Oni and Inner. Between Muzu and Oni there are only 0.2* difference and this is definitely not good. I suggest you to nerf Muzu a little bit and buff your Oni, so star spread can be balanced.

Preview Point: You did not set a preview point for the song in all diffs: only Inner has it, fix it :')

Timing and Offset: It is all ok, do not worry ^^

Metadata: This is the name of the artist --> 無力P which will be romanised immediately, but this is more correct. I recommend you to fill up tags section too.

AiMod: Check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) to find other errors... And do not forget to check it XD

[Muzukashii]

Little considerations:
D = big don
K = big kat
d = simple don
k = simple kat
(so it is easier to explain)

00:10:162 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - this pattern does not belong to this difficulty level, it is too difficult. Pattern used for Muzu are usually ddd kkk ddddd kkkkk, maybe one or two ddk or kkd (but only one or two, mainly in low bpm songs). I suggest you to change this into this (only a tip, a way you can resolve it... of course you can do whatever you want ^^). In this way star rate drops. I also recommend you to change this note 00:11:014 (23) - into a big K just because 1/4 notes before are K d d d K d d d so in this way you keep this kind of structure.

00:11:696 (1,4,7,10) - These 1/1 notes are all k, so this is the structure you chose for this passage. Why other 1/1 in the same passage are sometimes d and sometimes k without a stable structure? I mean 00:14:423 (13,18,32,35,38,42,66,71,77,84,86,92,6) - all of this should be k, also because in those points the pitch is higher, so they need an accent and k fits very well in these cases.

00:12:889 (5,6,7) - this kind of pattern is very frequent here. As I said before, it does not belong to Muzu, so I recommend you to change all those patterns in the song with ddd or kkk or every other solution you think fits well (you will see star rate dropping).

00:25:332 (77) - Why this finisher? Tbh I do not hear something that justifies a finisher here, a normal k is good.

00:27:037 - I suggest to put this note here: 00:26:951 - so it follows the rhythm like in the other similar points.

00:41:696 (31,32) - ctrl+G here so you keep the structure k d k d in this passage.
00:45:105 (2) - same as above
00:47:150 (7,11) - same
00:49:196 (16) - same

00:49:537 (17,20) - The pitch here is higher so k would fit better here

00:54:650 - In this point in Inner Oni starts the kiai section, which is missing in every other difficulty: I suggest you to add it. Remember that kiai sections should be the same in every difficulty.

00:54:650 (35) - Here the pitch is very high, consider to put a k maybe with a finisher too like here 01:05:559 (76) -

00:55:332 (38,44,52,53,57,60,68,70,72,73,75) - In these points there is a snare sound, so a high pitch sound, it should be highlighted with k.
01:06:241 (77,83,86,92,94) - same

01:06:241 (77,83,86,92,94) - here is a not mapped sound, a very evident sound: you should add k here

01:04:196 - personally I think this note is not necessary: you have an accent just before it. Consider deleting it.

01:11:014 - This is the ending. You can do it a little more difficult, now it seems like a Futsuu, you can play with patterns here, it is the right place ^^

01:16:469 - a K and a spinner together do not fit well in this ending. I suggest you two different solutions: deleting k and making spinner begin here 01:16:469 - or deleting spinner and adding here 01:16:809 - another K with finisher.

[Oni]

From here 00:00:105 (1) - to here 00:09:650 - I think it would be better like in Muzu: following the structure K d d d K d d d because the first beat in this intro is alway more strong, so a kat is needed here. Also in this point 00:09:650 - there is an evident sound you did not mapped: I suggest you to add a big K.

00:09:991 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This pattern is a little too difficult for a Oni, it might fit well in a inner, but here I suggest to semplify it a bit, like from this to this

00:11:014 - Here the pitch is high, I recommend a big K

00:14:423 (13,18,34,37,40,45,69) - These notes should be k for the same reason I told you in Muzu

00:12:292 - consider adding a d here: a ddk pattern fits well
00:17:747 - same

Consider adding d also here 00:13:827 - and here 00:13:912 - so you increase the number of notes and the star difficulty of the map so it can be balanced with the others (and also because a kdd pattern sounds cool there)
00:19:281 - same? (suggestion)

00:14:934 (19,20) - Change to d? It is a suggestion, this is not necessary

00:20:219 (53) - if you change it to k the whole pattern would be mirrored and it sounds cool too! Don't you think? ^^

00:37:605 (143) - Like in Muzu I suggest to turn this into d so you keep the structure k d k d
00:40:332 (150) - same
00:41:696 (153) - same
00:42:378 (154) - same but from d to k
00:45:105 (2) - same but from d to k
00:47:150 (7) - same
00:47:832 (11) - same but from d to k
00:49:196 (16) - same but from d to k
00:53:287 (30) - same but from d to k

Maybe add a d here 00:53:372 - and here 00:54:054 - ?

00:54:650 - same problem with the kiai section, see what I wrote you about in Muzu

Another suggestion to buff a bit your Oni: in the section between this 00:32:832 - and this 00:54:650 - you should put more notes/patterns, your choice which and where, but this is a Oni, do not map it like a Muzu

00:54:650 (39,43,49,60,69,73,84,88,4,8,15,20,25) - These notes should be k: same as Muzu. Maybe these 00:54:650 (39,52,76,80,95,4,8,25) - with a finisher too (I might have missed some, I trust on your good ear to find the others )

01:05:559 (84) - if you change this into k (like suggested above) I recommend to change a bit this pattern (which is good, but if you put a k at the end is more 'meh') 01:05:048 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - instead of ddkkkkd you can do something like ddkkddk or kkddkdk, your choice ^^

00:54:650 - Here begins the ending. I think there are too many breaks for a Oni in this section, you should fill up a bit. I can suggest you something based on my tastes, of course you always do whatever you want, it is YOUR map, do not forget it ^^. For example you can:
• Add two d here 00:55:673 - before the k so you make a ddk pattern, which fits well and is appropriate to this diff
• Add a d here 00:57:037 - so you fill up that huge space a Oni do not need
• Add two d here 00:58:400 - like I said before
• Add a k here 00:59:849 - here 00:59:679 - and here 01:00:020 - so you build up a new pattern good for a Oni
• Add a d here 01:01:128 - fill up (I do not wanna write all the sentence again XD)
• Add a d here 01:02:491 - fill up
• Add two d here 01:02:662 - new pattern
• Add a d here 01:03:855 - fill up
• Add two d here 01:06:582 - new pattern
• Add a d here 01:07:946 - fill up
• Add a d here 01:09:309 - fill up
• Add a d here 01:12:122 - and a k here 01:12:292 - new pattern
• Add a d here 01:13:486 and here 01:14:338 - new patterns
• Add a d here 01:14:849 - and here 01:15:020 - and a k here 01:15:190 - new pattern

01:16:469 (47) - Please this note does not fit at all. I recommend you to finish like in Muzu, as I suggested in one of those two ways: it will sound a lot better ^^

[Conclusions]

In my mod I tried to find suggestions in order to nerf a bit Muzu and buff a bit Oni, so star rate and note spread can be more balanced based on the rest of the mapset.

I still have a couple of things to say: this is your first beatmap, so it is normal to do errors, but the first thing you must learn in mapping is consistency, that is keeping the same structure for similar-sounding sections, you can change patterns above that structure but the rhytmical skeleton has to be quite the same, so remember this rule: if it sound similar, map it similar (and similar=/=exactly the same). I link you this VEEERY useful guide from OnosakiHito t/152263 here you can find whatever you want about how to create a taiko mapset. I read it a lot of times and I assure you this is pure gold ^^

Ok, I finished, sorry for the loooooong mod I made XD I am trying to improve myself in modding (it also helps in mapping) so please, reply to this, I need it :')

I wish you the best and good luck for your map! ^^
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