From my Queue

Insane

1. 00:00:584 (2,1,2,3,4) - for this part you can fix the overlap -
   if your confuse what I mean go to view up top --> unchecked hit animation if it is on -
   here is a pic where (3) is stack up top of 00:00:584 (2) -
   http://imgur.com/a/22lP7 - that is just an example since you may want to change it differently
   - there is others you can fix but I am only pointing out this 1
2. 00:13:539 (1,2,3,4) - Minor but (2) can be adjusted a tad bit
3. 00:15:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole patterns is too hard to me in comparison to the whole entire map - I think you should reduce the distance
4. 00:41:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I think this combo is too long for no reason tbh - start a NC at least here 00:43:880 (8) -
5. 00:46:266 (1) - I understand ur point but in my opinion , there really shouldn't be a nc here but it up to u to keep it
6. 00:49:334 (6) - there should be a nc here - the is strong enough for 1
7. 00:53:425 (5) - same as above ^
8. these 00:59:391 (1,3) - can be blanket
9. 01:01:607 (8) - You can shape this a little better - also a NC can be perfect

small mod so I hope this help ya out a bit

DJ Lucky wrote:

From my Queue

Insane

1. 00:00:584 (2,1,2,3,4) - for this part you can fix the overlap - Done I think
   if your confuse what I mean go to view up top --> unchecked hit animation if it is on -
   here is a pic where (3) is stack up top of 00:00:584 (2) -
   http://imgur.com/a/22lP7 - that is just an example since you may want to change it differently
   - there is others you can fix but I am only pointing out this 1
2. 00:13:539 (1,2,3,4) - Minor but (2) can be adjusted a tad bit Fixed
3. 00:15:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole patterns is too hard to me in comparison to the whole entire map - I think you should reduce the distance I agree tbh, I reduced the distance
4. 00:41:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I think this combo is too long for no reason tbh - start a NC at least here 00:43:880 (8) - Added a NC
5. 00:46:266 (1) - I understand ur point but in my opinion , there really shouldn't be a nc here but it up to u to keep it Removed NC
6. 00:49:334 (6) - there should be a nc here - the is strong enough for 1 Done
7. 00:53:425 (5) - same as above ^ Done
8. these 00:59:391 (1,3) - can be blanket Done
9. 01:01:607 (8) - You can shape this a little better - also a NC can be perfect Done

small mod so I hope this help ya out a bit

Thanks for the mod, I agreed with all your suggestions.

PeterEU wrote:

Easy

00:10:812 (1) - spinner is too long the circles after spinner are visible too early remove it and place circles http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100308 -- Done
00:23:766 (2) - move it here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100256 -- Done
00:26:153 (5) - make it less sharp -- Done
00:39:107 (1,2) - make blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100263 -- Done
00:51:721 (3) - move it here -- Done
00:51:721 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100296 -- Done
01:11:834 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100315 -- Done

Normal

00:15:925 (1) - ctr + h this -- Done
00:26:153 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100331 after you've done that move 00:27:516 (8) somewhere else -- Done
01:20:698 (9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9100334 -- Done
01:21:721 (10) - New combo here -- Done

hard

00:21:380 (3) - try to avoid situation like this one this slider is under this 00:20:698 (1) one avoid mapping like that -- I'll remember that, thanks & fixed
00:47:630 (6) - bad place for this -- Done

Thank you for the mod, I really appreciate it!

From my modding queue. As you said you never modded before, I want you to take into consideration that I'm not the best at this either




To keep the modding fair, I modded around the same drain time length as my map is. Great mapset, good luck! (ofc you can deny everything I said here )

ChaoticRed wrote:

From my modding queue. As you said you never modded before, I want you to take into consideration that I'm not the best at this either

Final Story

00:07:914 (3,4,5) - this pattern feels really overmapped, I'd lower the spacing -- Agreed, reduced spacing.
00:08:766 (2) - this x:336 y:192 and then 00:09:107 (1) - this x:140 y:320 -- Done
00:12:516 (8) - this would feel better if it was one tick shorter -- I thought that too, but I kept it like this because there's a slight guitar-like sound on the red tick which I wanted to be represented through the slider tail
00:29:562 (5) - make this like this: https://puu.sh/xBlME/765d0b1b1c.png. It emphasizes the vocals and then the jump should be put a bit lower. -- Done
00:38:425 (1,2) - this pattern feels out of place. I'd change it to sth like this: https://puu.sh/xBlUm/fde72a066d.png -- Agreed & Done
00:47:971 (5) - NC -- Done
00:50:698 (7) - ^-- Done
00:58:880 (8) - ^-- Done
01:05:698 (7) - this slider feels really different than other ones, and NC -- Fixed the curve, it did seem a bit sharp. NC added
01:09:448 (1) - remove NC here, and put it here 01:09:789 (2) - If you listen closely you can clearly hear louder sound here, so it's better to start NC here
01:10:471 (4) - make it the same as 01:10:130 (3) - - Not too sure what you mean by this :S
01:15:244 (5,6,7,8) - You've done so great circle flowing slider patterns before and now you do sth like this. It feels really out of place --
I felt that the sounds sounded very similar and sharp, so I used straight sliders facing the same direction, bc the sounds were similar and I wanted to represent them with similar sliders too, if that makes any sense- im not too good at explaining things ;-;
01:19:334 (7) - NC -- I felt a NC could go where the "ding" hit sounds come in instead (here: 01:18:653 (1) - )

Insane

00:01:607 (1) - If you want the NC's here start on the ding sound (can't remember how's it named), be consistent with it and remove the NC here and put it here -- I placed those 'triangle' hitsounds on parts where there was a significant piano sound, hence why I didn't have it in a specific pattern, because the song doesn't either.
00:07:914 (2,3,1) - same as the one above, a bit overmapped pattern. -- Agreed, and fixed
00:08:255 (1) - remove NC, 00:08:425 (2) - put NC -- Done
00:09:107 (1) - remove NC, 00:09:789 (4) - put NC -- Done
I know those two above might be questionable cause you probably mapped it to vocals, but it really feels better with the rhythm
00:19:334 (7) - 00:22:062 (3) - 00:24:789 (8) - I get confused with all those NC, I think by now you realize what to do with other things like that -- Yes, grouped most of them together since there were no significant changes/sounds in them
00:35:698 (8) - x:317 y:196 -- Done
00:36:209 (10) - x:272 y:280 -- Done
00:44:221 (2,3) - I really don't like this. Sth like this: https://puu.sh/xBmw9/9a5a46502e.jpg would be better. -- In this case, it goes from a strong violin, with a pause, then a strong, similar-sounding violin. So I did this to emphasize the "pause" or "beat" in between the violin sounds. I hope I explained that well ;s
00:48:482 (2,3,4) - Grab all those 3 and put them on x:199 y:301 -- Done
01:17:630 (4) - this should still be a curved a slider and this one -- Done
01:18:994 (8) - should go with the 3 before -- I think it'd look a bit cramped, but i'll think about it
01:19:334 (9) - make it curved and one tick in 1/2 longer. Will fit better -- There are drum beats after it which I felt needed to be expressed with circles.

Hard

For starters, same NC issues as in the previous ones.
00:06:550 (4,5) - x:355 y:231 -- Done
00:32:289 (4) - x:244 y:228 -- I'm sure you meant 344,228? If yes, then I did that. 244,228 doesn't seem right so maybe typo?
00:36:550 (4) - on the sliderhead should be a circle and it should be not reversed: https://puu.sh/xBmLe/d4e24b0b67.png
00:45:584 (4) - this slider feels really different from every other one in this pattern -- It was made to sort of "wrap" around the previous slider
01:09:107 (5) - x:412 y:132 and then this one 01:09:448 (1) - x:232 y:108 -- Done & Done

To keep the modding fair, I modded around the same drain time length as my map is. Great mapset, good luck! (ofc you can deny everything I said here )

Thanks so much for the mod, it was very helpful

hi, nm from my queue
good luck!

- titan wrote:

hi, nm from my queue

SPOILER

Easy
00:03:653 (2,4) - why not just have these in the same spot? -- Done, didn't notice that
00:10:812 (4,5) - i think it would be better if you moved these 1 white tick over, and then put a circle at 00:12:516 . the way you have it now emphasizes less important sounds -- Agreed, Done
00:17:289 (3,5) - ugly overlap -- Fixed
00:19:334 (6) - this slider is kinda ugly imo. you could just make a regular wave slider and rotate it. also 00:18:653 (5,6) blankets really poorly I improved the shape of it, and made it slightly "blanket" over the previous slider and it looks much better now imo.
00:22:744 (1,2) - bad blanket -- Fixed blanket
00:23:766 (2) - 2/1 slider isn't very fitting here because you're missing a syllable from the vocals I thought it worked nice with a "S" style slider, with the vocal syllable inbetween transitioning into the next. But if anyone else points out then I'll consider.
00:23:766 (2,3) - not a good blanket -- Agreed, Fixed
00:26:153 (5,7) - not too noticeable in game but ugly overlap -- This one doesn't seem like too much of an issue, but again, if anyone else does point it out, ill change.
00:28:198 (6) - nc? -- Agreed, Done
00:29:221 (7,8) - blanket is pretty off -- Agreed, Fixed
00:41:153 (1) - why is this slider so sharp? -- Not sure tbh, I think I thought it looked nice, but your reason below makes sense so I changed them.
00:43:198 (3) - ^ not really sure why you started using sliders like these, it doesn't really have anything from the music to warrant it
00:49:334 (1) - 1 object combo ? -- Removed NC
00:52:403 (4) - misses a syllable of the vocals -- Same reason as before
01:00:244 (6) - nc? -- Agreed, Done
01:04:675 (3) - make this slider shape something like 01:03:994 (2) , it's not very fitting Did it like that to facilitate for the vocal syllable in between.
01:10:130 (2,4) - ugly overlap -- Fixed
01:13:880 (6) - nc? -- Agreed, Done
01:13:880 (6,7) - slider body of (7) touches (6) a bit and it looks bad imo -- I moved it away slightly
01:17:630 (3) - make this a more normal slider like the example i gave earlier -- Same reason as earlier
01:18:653 (4,2) - ugly "overlap" -- I think I fixed it
01:23:425 (3,1) - ds? -- Fixed, doesnt look like AIMod spotted that
01:23:425 (3,2) - overlap

throughout the diff object are really close and almost overlapping, which some people don't really like. you could fix this by either increasing cs slightly, or resnapping everything with slightly higher ds. (or you could ignore this, it's not really necessary) I'll see what others think

good luck!

Thanks for the mod! I really appreciate it and it was very helpful c:

hihi from my q

Easy
00:16:607 (6) - NC
00:46:607 (4) - ^
change 01:27:516 (1) - length to 01:28:709 - as all diff must end at same time

Normal
00:11:153 (1) - change to slider cause there's not enough rest/reaction time after the spinner for begginers to react to cuz they spin like they never spun before.
Is unrankable i believe so. there must be at least 4 beat rest so yee.
00:24:789 (5,7) - nice blanket
00:41:153 (4) - x325 y234 because you can
00:41:834 (5) - x435 y228 because you also can
00:46:607 (5) - x276 y96 because ... you can
00:53:425 (7) - x277 y80 cuz u know
00:54:789 (9) - NC

Hard
00:00:925 (1,1) - remove nc
also you should use red anchors more in this diff cuz most of the time you're using straight/3-point sliders

Insane
Change 01:27:431 (1) - length to 01:28:709 - cuz all maps need to end on same time

OK done! pls get ranked cuz I see gd pp in Insane ecks dee

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi from my q

Easy
00:16:607 (6) - NC -- Agreed, Done
00:46:607 (4) - ^ -- Done
change 01:27:516 (1) - length to 01:28:709 - as all diff must end at same time -- Fixed

Normal
00:11:153 (1) - change to slider cause there's not enough rest/reaction time after the spinner for begginers to react to cuz they spin like they never spun before.
Is unrankable i believe so. there must be at least 4 beat rest so yee. -- Removed spinner, added a slider
00:24:789 (5,7) - nice blanket Thanks ;p
00:41:153 (4) - x325 y234 because you can -- Agreed, Done
00:41:834 (5) - x435 y228 because you also can -- Agreed, Done
00:46:607 (5) - x276 y96 because ... you can -- Agreed, Done
00:53:425 (7) - x277 y80 cuz u know -- Agreed, Done
00:54:789 (9) - NC -- Agreed, Done

Hard
00:00:925 (1,1) - remove nc -- Agreed, Done
also you should use red anchors more in this diff cuz most of the time you're using straight/3-point sliders -- No change just yet, i'll see what others think

Insane
Change 01:27:431 (1) - length to 01:28:709 - cuz all maps need to end on same time Changed spinner to slider and fixed timing! Thanks for pointing these out

OK done! pls get ranked cuz I see gd pp in Insane ecks dee

Thanks for this invaluable mod! I'll try my best to get this ranked ;d

NM from q

[General]
Audio bitrate is too high. "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps." -Ranking Criteria

[Final Story]
00:03:312 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd suggest reduce the object density since the beginning of the song is quite calm. Use more 1/2 slider here, and maybe some 1/2 repeats and 1/1 slides too. For example, 00:04:334 (1) - can be a 1/1 slider, 00:01:607 (6,7,8) - can be 1/2 repeat, etc.
Just figure out some way to reduce the amount of clicking involved cause again the song is quite calm compared to sections later in the song which are more intense and more fitting for high object density. For example, 00:16:607 - this section is clearly more intense than the beginning, yet you filled this place with a whole bunch of 1/2 sliders.

00:06:209 (2,3) - why stack? if anything (3) should have some sort of a jump to emphasize the vocal there.

00:09:107 (1,4) - Looks weird since you're not blanketing these.

00:12:516 (8) - I think a circle is better here imo. Your choice though.

00:16:096 (5,6,7) - weird pattern imo. 00:16:266 (6,7,1) - the spacing here is awfully too close when the song is the most intense here.
00:16:437 (7,1) - also the fact the these aren't parallel makes it look messy.

00:51:380 (3,5) - blanket?

00:57:516 (1) - should just be 2 circles

01:01:437 (7,8) - not liking how the spacing is super small all of the sudden when it should be the biggest here, I'd suggest ctrl+g 01:01:266 (6,7) - and rearrange stuff so you have spacing between 7 & 8

01:13:539 (3,4) - I don't see the reason to break the stream here. if anything, 01:13:454 (2,3) - is more suitable for a flow change or some sort to emphasize that piano sound, but a more simple looking stream would look nicer imo.

01:15:244 (5,6,7,8) - Sorry, the rhythm here just feels lazy. It needs to follow the vocal more.

01:18:994 (2,3) - Watch out for objects that are too close to each other like these, just space em out a bit more and it will look better.

01:26:153 (11) - This definitely needs to be a circles and not a slider.

01:27:005 (2,3) - It would look better if the bigger slider blankets around the smaller slider, not the other way around. (Well you can do both actually, that would look the best)

It looks like you're using the same slider shape and similar patterns too much that it makes the map look a bit more dull than it should be. You are using a lot of symmetry / blankets with curved sliders a lot like 00:24:789 (1,2) - 00:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:30:244 (1) - 00:39:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sure it makes the map look more structured, but you aren't implementing any contrast when there are changes in the song.

[Insane]
00:01:266 (3,1) - avoid these small overlaps. Either overlap clearly, or don't overlap.
00:07:062 (7,2) - more minor overlaps that you should avoid
00:07:573 (1,2) - space out the blanket, it looks way too close.
00:12:857 (1,2,3) - Should just have a little break here like in your Extra diff. Not to mention 00:12:346 (6,1) and 00:12:516 (7,3) - these minor overlaps are a bit annoying.
The things i pointed out in extra can be pretty much applied to Insane diff too. Stuff about NC too.

[Hard]
You need to spread out your patterns a bit more. notice if you highlight all this 00:02:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - It's all clustered together, when you have a lot more space in the playfield to work with. As a result, you ended up overlapping a lot of objects together.
01:12:175 (9,1) - too close.

[Normal]
00:16:607 (1,1) - Y the NC spam?
Same with hard, 00:16:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - is all clustered in the middle. Try to spread out your patterns next time.
00:49:334 - Y skip beat here?
00:13:880 (3,4,1,2) - These are the only 1/2 beats you ever used in this map. Should implement more 1/2 rhythms. Otherwise, it just feels like Easy diff with higher spacing.

[Easy]
00:02:630 - should fill it in with a note. It kinda feels awkward not having anything there.
00:03:653 (2) - would look better if the red anchor was more in the middle of the slider.
00:12:857 (1,2) - Would delete these just to emphasize the pause in the music and make the emphasis on 00:13:880 (1) - more impactful
Next time I would suggest making SV or DS a bit higher so the spacing between objects aren't too close. it's fine as it is though.

That's it. gl bro. keep on mapping

Hello from my que
[General]

• Bitrate audio should be 192 kbs

[Easy]

• 00:03:653 (2) - Make a fold in the middle of the slider
  00:07:062 (1,3) - avoid overlap
  00:08:425 (2,3) - Make them parallel
  00:11:153 (4,5) - Do blanket?
  00:12:857 (1,2) - you can delete this note! There's still no sound, but it's up to you
  00:31:948 (2,2) - Overlap
  00:38:937 (1) - this slider need start here 00:38:937 - have strong sound
  01:02:119 (2,2) - overlap

[Normal]

• Please do not get hung up on one place on the map, it's boring to play and so you do a lot of unnecessary overlaps things because of this
  00:00:925 (3,2) - overlap
  00:05:187 (7,2) - try do this overlap better
  00:09:107 (2) - stack this with slider end 00:07:744 (2) -
  00:12:857 (1,2) - can delete this, In the normals no longer adheres to the vocal, but the instrument, you can combine them together, but only in those places where they stand in one place
  00:16:607 (1,1) - Here nc it is not necessary
  00:15:925 (3,1) - avoid overlap
  00:20:698 (1,2) - stack with 00:19:334 (1) - ?
  00:36:039 (1,1) - Recovery after spinner 2 white tick
  01:00:925 (8,1) - so bad overlap
  01:02:971 (2,2) - pls stack it's looks better

[Hard]

• Sorry can't mod this, so ovelapped
  There is a similar problem at the expense of the use of the game board, see how other mappers do hard

[Insane]

• 00:01:607 (1) - Move somehow so, so flow is better

hmm, sorry it's all
pls check this:
t/86329
t/441929
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu!
good luck

hi from my Q

optional to change | unrankable | suggested to change

that's all goodluck~ hope i helped

Oh my, three mods while I was off! Thanks guys I'll check work on these when I get home. :d

Ohwow wrote:

NM from q

[General]
Audio bitrate is too high. "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps." -Ranking Criteria -- Fixed

[Final Story]
00:03:312 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd suggest reduce the object density since the beginning of the song is quite calm. Use more 1/2 slider here, and maybe some 1/2 repeats and 1/1 slides too. For example, 00:04:334 (1) - can be a 1/1 slider, 00:01:607 (6,7,8) - can be 1/2 repeat, etc.
Just figure out some way to reduce the amount of clicking involved cause again the song is quite calm compared to sections later in the song which are more intense and more fitting for high object density. For example, 00:16:607 - this section is clearly more intense than the beginning, yet you filled this place with a whole bunch of 1/2 sliders. -- Reduced, but might work on this more later

00:06:209 (2,3) - why stack? if anything (3) should have some sort of a jump to emphasize the vocal there. Added jump

00:09:107 (1,4) - Looks weird since you're not blanketing these. Made into a blanket

00:12:516 (8) - I think a circle is better here imo. Your choice though. I agree, done.

00:16:096 (5,6,7) - weird pattern imo. 00:16:266 (6,7,1) - the spacing here is awfully too close when the song is the most intense here. --
Changed the pattern to something better (I think) and increased spacing
00:16:437 (7,1) - also the fact the these aren't parallel makes it look messy. -- Fixed

00:51:380 (3,5) - blanket? -- Done

00:57:516 (1) - should just be 2 circles -- Done

01:01:437 (7,8) - not liking how the spacing is super small all of the sudden when it should be the biggest here, I'd suggest ctrl+g 01:01:266 (6,7) - and rearrange stuff so you have spacing between 7 & 8 -- Done and done ;d

01:13:539 (3,4) - I don't see the reason to break the stream here. if anything, 01:13:454 (2,3) - is more suitable for a flow change or some sort to emphasize that piano sound, but a more simple looking stream would look nicer imo. -- Done

01:15:244 (5,6,7,8) - Sorry, the rhythm here just feels lazy. It needs to follow the vocal more. -- I see what you mean, I thought it'd be nicee to go with the strong instrument sounds. I have changed to suit vocal more

01:18:994 (2,3) - Watch out for objects that are too close to each other like these, just space em out a bit more and it will look better. --
Done

01:26:153 (11) - This definitely needs to be a circles and not a slider. -- Fixed

01:27:005 (2,3) - It would look better if the bigger slider blankets around the smaller slider, not the other way around. (Well you can do both actually, that would look the best) Did both!

It looks like you're using the same slider shape and similar patterns too much that it makes the map look a bit more dull than it should be. You are using a lot of symmetry / blankets with curved sliders a lot like 00:24:789 (1,2) - 00:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:30:244 (1) - 00:39:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sure it makes the map look more structured, but you aren't implementing any contrast when there are changes in the song. I see what you mean, i'll try doing some research and see what patterns would work well in different stages of the song.

NCs

I suggest you to stick to NCing every measure (every big white tick). Right now your NC pattern looks kinda random. (Well from the looks of the beginning, I guess you're trying to NC the piano sounds, but they don't sound strong enough for an NC) Ah I see, Ok I'll rework the new combos and try finding a good pattern c:
For example,
00:01:607 - should be NC
00:02:289 (1) - should delete NC,
00:05:016 (1) - delete NC
00:06:891 (1,2) - No need for NC here. It's too NC spammy.
00:09:789 (4) - NC instead of 00:09:107 (1) -
00:17:971 (5) - NC
00:20:698 (5) - NC instead of 00:21:380 (1) -
00:54:789 (3) - NC, clear change in the song.
That's all i'm going to list for now, should look through the rest and follow a good NC pattern. (NCing every measure is the best way to start)
Done all of above

[Insane]
00:01:266 (3,1) - avoid these small overlaps. Either overlap clearly, or don't overlap. -- Fixed
00:07:062 (7,2) - more minor overlaps that you should avoid -- Fixed
00:07:573 (1,2) - space out the blanket, it looks way too close. -- Fixed
00:12:857 (1,2,3) - Should just have a little break here like in your Extra diff. -- Fixed --Not to mention 00:12:346 (6,1) and 00:12:516 (7,3) - these minor overlaps are a bit annoying. -- Fixed
The things i pointed out in extra can be pretty much applied to Insane diff too. Stuff about NC too.

[Hard]
You need to spread out your patterns a bit more. notice if you highlight all this 00:02:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - It's all clustered together, when you have a lot more space in the playfield to work with. As a result, you ended up overlapping a lot of objects together.
01:12:175 (9,1) - too close.
I'm going to remap hard in the weekend and i'll take in your advice while doing so, since I did rush this diff little bit.

[Normal]
00:16:607 (1,1) - Y the NC spam? -- Fixed
Same with hard, 00:16:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - is all clustered in the middle. Try to spread out your patterns next time. -- Will remember c:
00:49:334 - Y skip beat here? -- I have no idea how I missed that, fixed
00:13:880 (3,4,1,2) - These are the only 1/2 beats you ever used in this map. Should implement more 1/2 rhythms. Otherwise, it just feels like Easy diff with higher spacing. -- Added a few more 1/2 sliders

[Easy]
00:02:630 - should fill it in with a note. It kinda feels awkward not having anything there. -- Done
00:03:653 (2) - would look better if the red anchor was more in the middle of the slider. -- Fixed
00:12:857 (1,2) - Would delete these just to emphasize the pause in the music and make the emphasis on 00:13:880 (1) - more impactful -- Done
Next time I would suggest making SV or DS a bit higher so the spacing between objects aren't too close. it's fine as it is though.

That's it. gl bro. keep on mapping

Thanks so much for this mod roast! Thanks for taking your time out of the day to do this, I have benefited greatly from this

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que
[General]

• Bitrate audio should be 192 kbs

--Fixed from last mod
[Easy]

• 00:03:653 (2) - Make a fold in the middle of the slider -- I think I fixed it?
  00:07:062 (1,3) - avoid overlap -- Fixed
  00:08:425 (2,3) - Make them parallel -- Done
  00:11:153 (4,5) - Do blanket? -- Done
  00:12:857 (1,2) - you can delete this note! There's still no sound, but it's up to you -- I hear quite strong sounds on those beats
  00:31:948 (2,2) - Overlap -- Fixed
  00:38:937 (1) - this slider need start here 00:38:937 - have strong sound -- I think it's better to have it on the vocal because making it on the tick before would make it hard for beginners when taking in account of the vocal, but I'll see what others think before I make any change.
  01:02:119 (2,2) - overlap -- Fixed

[Normal]

• Please do not get hung up on one place on the map, it's boring to play and so you do a lot of unnecessary overlaps things because of this
  00:00:925 (3,2) - overlap -- Fixed
  00:05:187 (7,2) - try do this overlap better -- Fixed
  00:09:107 (2) - stack this with slider end 00:07:744 (2) - -- Done
  00:12:857 (1,2) - can delete this, In the normals no longer adheres to the vocal, but the instrument, you can combine them together, but only in those places where they stand in one place -- Done
  00:16:607 (1,1) - Here nc it is not necessary -- I think it is, there's a change in the tone of the song
  00:15:925 (3,1) - avoid overlap -- Fixed
  00:20:698 (1,2) - stack with 00:19:334 (1) - ? -- I ended up doing something else with it after last mod
  00:36:039 (1,1) - Recovery after spinner 2 white tick -- Not sure what you mean by this
  01:00:925 (8,1) - so bad overlap
  01:02:971 (2,2) - pls stack it's looks better

[Hard]

• Sorry can't mod this, so ovelapped
  There is a similar problem at the expense of the use of the game board, see how other mappers do hard

Will do.

[Insane]

• 00:01:607 (1) - Move somehow so, so flow is better

-- Done
hmm, sorry it's all
pls check this:
t/86329
t/441929
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu!
good luck

Thanks for the mod!

AJamez wrote:

hi from my Q

optional to change | unrankable | suggested to change

General

1. change the tildes in the title it's kinna unncessary. change it to -TV size mix- instead Done!

Final Story

1. 00:03:312 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm.. these notes here are quite too densed imo, the song is calm atm what's with the jumps already such spacing shouldn't be introduced quickly -- Fixed from Ohwow's mod
2. i wouldn't stack this if i were u, u could emphasize this note here by making it a jump like i would do something like this perhaps for better emphasis especially to the vocal
3. 00:07:062 (1) - u probably missed to remove this NC by any chance cus i dont see a reason for this -- Fixed
4. 00:08:084 (6) - move this circle to the left by 1 grid to blanket with 00:07:062 (3) - -- Done
5. 00:08:425 (1,2) - uhh yes nazi but the blanket here is quite off -- Done
6. 00:09:107 (1) - i guess u forgot to blanket this with (4) to fix that just overlap this slider to 00:10:812 (7) - -- Fixed
7. 00:12:516 (8) - tbh this slider doesnt really emphasizes any sound at all i mean it follows the guitar but in this section the most prominent sound is the bell sound so i'd just follow it instead and replace a circle for this. besides in my opinion the slider just makes it awkward hitting it when the most obvious sound is the latter and also to make jumps more relevant -- Fixed from Ohwow's mod
8. 00:13:539 (1) - this repeat slider doesnt really fit with the map imo since u didnt really use any of it so i'd suggest to replace this with two 1/1 sliders instead like 00:16:266 (6,7) - since it's a relevant thing on the map yea just my suggestion tho -- Done
9. 00:16:266 (6,7) - these two are quite uncomfy what's the underspaced thing here in an intense part of the song -- Fixed from Ohwow's mod
10. 00:21:039 (6) - u could adjust the ds here a bit keeping it onthe position as (5) makes it idk how to describe but i'd overlap it to 00:19:675 (2) - for better aesthetics -- Wasnt too sure what you wanted here since I re-did all my NC's and im no longer sure what (5) is whoops
11. 00:22:062 (1,2) - quite too spaced imo make it similar like 00:20:698 (5,6) - adjust (2)
12. 00:24:107 (7) - NC here perhaps to give emphasis to drums -- Personally, I don't think that sound is strong enough for a NC, but I may reconsider depending on what others think
13. 00:26:834 (1) - it's better to remove this NC to have consistency since sound is the same as well no need for more emphasis -- Was fixed from Ohwow's mod
14. 00:31:266 (1) - remove NC for this and add NC for 00:31:607 (8) - instead since the most prominent vocal sound is on that slider since it's downbeat and also to keep NC consistency -- Fixed from Ohwow's mod
15. 00:33:312 (1,5) - overlap these two for better aesthetics -- I think I did it, but since i reworked the NC I wasnt sure exactly where you meant, but I assumed this time.
16. 00:35:016 (7) - quite overspaced imo reduce the spacing a bit -- Fixed
17. 00:47:971 (1,2) - uh make perfect blanket for this dont forget 00:47:630 (3) - after -- Done I think
18. 00:52:914 (4) - this part u could add a stream maybe for the drums look at what i did perhaps follow it i overlapped the stream with 00:54:107 (2) - btw I think it's ok how it is, but I may reconsider if pointed out again
19. 00:54:789 (3) - ur missing the sound on the next red and white ticks i suggest make this a repeat slider instead maybe I didn't see/hear any missing sounds?
20. 01:01:607 (8) - the spacing here is not quite right maybe adjust it or just ctrl h and put it back to the same position for better angle tho -- Fixed from ohwow's mod
21. 01:07:062 - 01:08:766 - some jumps look random might wanna polish them more I tried, but not sure if I did enough
22. 01:26:153 (11) - like what i stated above before make this a circle instead and place it symmetrically like place it below like x128 y320 -- Done
23. 01:25:300 (6,8,10) - would nc these for emphasis xd -- I think it's fine, I dont think it's necessary
24. 01:27:005 (2,3) - blanket these two pls it looks messy if it's not imo -- Fixed from Ohwow's mod

that's all goodluck~ hope i helped

Thanks so much for taking time out of your day for this mod! It was very helpful

For a map going for rank, this is horrendously out of time. +36ms offset minimum.

Mykaterasu wrote:

For a map going for rank, this is horrendously out of time. +36ms offset minimum.

OH I changed the bitrate of the audio from the last mods and it seems the offset got messed up, thanks so much for pointing this out!

yo
Just a few things that were a bit off to me. Take what you want from it
[Easy]
00:31:948 (2) - Dosen't flow well with the next object
00:45:244 (2) - Not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket or not
01:09:448 (1,2) - Dosen't flow, even though it is a nice looking pattern
[Hard]
00:29:903 (2) - weird overlapping - might be hard to reach the next object in time
00:46:948 (4,5,6) - weird flowing
[Insane]
00:48:994 (5) - very sharp angle
01:01:607 (1) - almost touches the hp bar, but it looks okay while playing
[Final Story]
00:02:339 (3) - sounds weird
00:23:134 (6,1) - blanket?
00:33:021 (1,2) - ^


Good luck with your map

hello from nm

• General

1. offset of last diff is different from the others, make sure to set all of them to 294
2. inherited timing points need to be snapped for all diffs, since it seems like you swapped mp3's or something
3. lots of unnecessary overlaps and notes touching at the borders. i'll just point out the most obvious ones here, it should improve the map visually.
   
   Final Story
   00:23:816 (2,5) - bad overlap
   00:30:294 (1,6) - might as well stack these if these are so close together
   00:33:021 (1) - misplaced clap maybe?
   00:33:703 (3,4) - stack these as well
   00:43:880 (1) - for consistency make this part similar to what you did in insane diff
   00:50:748 (1,3) - bad overlap
   00:52:453 (2,3,4,5) - sliders should be snapped to 1/3 , so you'll have to remap a bit
   00:57:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - add NC every 3 or 6 notes, there is clearly a pattern with the violin here
   01:01:316 (6,7,1) - you fully mapped the drums in hard & insane, why not here?
   01:16:487 (5,1) - this stack serves no purpose at all and isn't in any of your other diffs
   01:25:691 (6,7,8,9) - make this a stream, so it is consistent with insane diff
   01:26:203 (9) - this note should be a slider so it matches last 2 diffs
   
   Insane
   00:12:516 (1,2) - switch these two NC's so the break is more distinguishable
   00:14:903 (5) - combo too long, set NC for this note
   00:15:925 (9) - and here
   00:23:425 (8) - set NC for this note
   00:29:221 (2,4) - bad overlap here
   00:30:244 (1,6) - stack these to avoid the near overlap with 00:30:925 (4)
   00:43:880 (1) - you could emphasise the break better if you make this a circle and overlap/stack with 00:44:221 (2)
   00:52:403 (2,3) - again, sliders should be snapped to 1/3
   01:05:698 (1,4) - fix this overlap
   01:08:937 (3,5) - these aren't touching, but too close to each other imo
   01:13:880 (1,3) - bad overlap
   01:22:062 (1,4) - ^
   
   Hard
   00:00:244 - this section should be less than 1x, you're already introducing SV changes in this diff so why not
   00:06:209 (2,3,4,5) - not too fond of these stacks tbh, maybe have a similar pattern as 00:07:573 (2,3,4,5)
   00:10:130 (1) - the drum hit should be a hittable note instead of on the sliderend
   00:12:857 (4) - vocals come in here, so it makes sense to add NC
   00:13:539 (6) - this isn't snapped correctly on the timeline
   00:13:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - as with insane diff, i feel there should be a few NC's to break up this combo
   00:16:351 (1) - i think this NC is misplaced
   00:29:903 (2) - bad overlap
   00:37:062 (6) - add NC, and make it a 3 point reverse slider instead of 4 to avoid confusion
   00:42:175 (4,5) - there should be some space between these notes
   00:47:630 (6,2,3) - bad overlaps
   00:52:573 (1,2) - 1/3 snap here
   00:58:539 (3,1) - fix overlap
   00:59:391 (1) - NC isnt consistent with the other difficulties
   01:00:244 (4) - add NC here
   01:03:653 (3,4) - bad overlap
   01:19:164 (1,2,3,4) - this part need to be entirely remapped, sliderhead needs to be on the downbeat (big white tick) and 3 stacks is too excessive

that's pretty much it (i'm lazy), good luck with rank!

hi~~ from my Q

[Final Story]

before that .. press ctrl+shift+A to open up AI mod .. you can see there are a lot of unsnapped problem
00:01:657 (1) -
00:00:634 (2) -
00:01:316 (5) - all of this .. what? maybe you forgot to snap the slider end back when you changing the offset.. fix this
00:12:566 (1) - put finish here?
00:13:589 (2) - nc
00:44:441 (3) - are you sure ... reverse slider? you confusing player if you did like that xD .. make is a long slider .. end the slider end here 00:44:782 -
00:59:100 (10) - ok this is to big for a combo on tv sizes map .. put nc here because the sound is getting more loud and intense
01:01:657 (1) - to end this slider wrongly lmao .. supposed to end here 01:02:339 -
01:13:419 (6) - nc pls
01:19:044 (6,1) - blanket it properly
01:25:691 (6,7,8,9) - just my suggestion .. better if you increase the spacing on this note when the song continues .. make it more intense xD
01:26:203 - nc
01:27:055 (2) - end this slider here 01:27:481 -

[Insane]

00:01:948 (2) - why this spacing suddenly so big lmao ..
00:10:130 (2,3,4) - and also why the spacing s incresing when the song continue.. it is unnecassary because the sound is just the same .. no loudness increasing or decreasing
00:16:096 (10,11,12,13,14) - the stream should start here 00:16:096 - not here 00:16:266 - .. slow the song to 25% on the bottom right of your screen .. you can here it :3
00:16:096 (10) - also nc here
00:22:744 (4,5,6,7) - better make slider here .. idk if you follow the vocal or the intrument cuz you keep changing it randomly lmao .. if you map it according to vocal .. mt suggestion do like this

00:30:925 (4,5,1) - hurm .. blanket this
00:33:482 (3,4) - weird lol ... swap this two places
01:03:994 (5,2) - blanket pls

01:03:994 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1) - ok im not the type of complaining how pretty the map were .. but this map is kindda hectic cuz you mainly focus mapping on middle .. make it weird and ugly overlap .. as you can see,there is less placement on right and left

also flow .. maybe give it some more work because sometimes you break the circular flow randomly ..

that all from me .. goodluck ^^

Thanks for all your mods guys, sorry I took too long, have been loaded with college work past week ;-;

Hi, from my queue

[Timing]
Snap green lines correctly

[Insane]
00:01:487 (6,1) - 180 degree is really unnatural to play
00:03:021 (1) - It's nc so I suggest to make it visually different
00:43:930 (1,2) - This stack has no reason
00:53:475 (1,2) - Place it further to show time gap here is bigger

I've seen also last diff but I have nothing to say
Hope will be helpful, good luck

Sorry for the wait if anyone is following this, I'm currently overloaded with college work, so once I'm cleared up I can get back to working on this map.

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Timing]
Snap green lines correctly -- Fixed! It was due to the mp3 change didnt notice that

[Insane]
00:01:487 (6,1) - 180 degree is really unnatural to play -- Changed
00:03:021 (1) - It's nc so I suggest to make it visually different -- I think it looks better to be uniform with the previous "significant" piano sound before it, looks more nice that way
00:43:930 (1,2) - This stack has no reason -- It does, it helps emphasise the slight "pause" in the music in between the two sounds
00:53:475 (1,2) - Place it further to show time gap here is bigger -- Done!

I've seen also last diff but I have nothing to say
Hope will be helpful, good luck

Thanks for the mod!

from my Q

[Final Story]

1. 00:05:407 (4,5) - I recommend change them to circle. because, its have no sounds in each sliderend, and this pattern is too strong so not fit at the mood.
2. 00:16:316 (7,8) - ^
3. 00:13:589 (1,2) - how about try 4 circle stream?
4. 00:15:294 (1,2) - NC swap? And I think you should put jumps at here. this point has strong sounds enough to put jumps like 00:14:271 (2,3) - here and 00:14:782 (4,5) - here
5. 00:16:657 (1) - ~ 00:24:669 (6) - In my opinion, the difficulty gap between slider and circle patterns are too big. maybe you should make slider patterns harder.
6. 00:59:612 (4) - add nc? 7 seems too long at here
7. 01:15:294 (1,2,3,4) - suddenly difficulty become easy. buff this?
8. 01:16:487 (5,1) - stack seems not a good idea to emphasis here. try jump?

[Hard]

1. 00:11:203 (5,1) - Swap NC?
2. 00:12:225 (1,3) - ^

[Normal]

1. snap all notes

[Easy]

1. snap all notes

that's all

GL

Kawashiro wrote:

from my Q

[Final Story]

1. 00:05:407 (4,5) - I recommend change them to circle. because, its have no sounds in each sliderend, and this pattern is too strong so not fit at the mood. -- I agree with this one, change made
2. 00:16:316 (7,8) - ^ -- Dont agree, since this one has clear drum sounds on both sides of the slider, and I feel it works well to demonstrate the intensity of that part
3. 00:13:589 (1,2) - how about try 4 circle stream? ^
4. 00:15:294 (1,2) - NC swap? And I think you should put jumps at here. this point has strong sounds enough to put jumps like 00:14:271 (2,3) - here and 00:14:782 (4,5) - here -- Agreed with NC swap -- Not sure about the jumps since it'd ruin the pattern, i'll see what others think
5. 00:16:657 (1) - ~ 00:24:669 (6) - In my opinion, the difficulty gap between slider and circle patterns are too big. maybe you should make slider patterns harder. -- I did this to demonstrate the intensity of the music at this point, i made this change from a previous mod
6. 00:59:612 (4) - add nc? 7 seems too long at here -- Done
7. 01:15:294 (1,2,3,4) - suddenly difficulty become easy. buff this? -- Personally I feel it suits the song, as the strong piano sounds stop and it becomes violin+vocal at that point, so It does demonstrate the pause in the intense music
8. 01:16:487 (5,1) - stack seems not a good idea to emphasis here. try jump? -- Done

[Hard]

1. 00:11:203 (5,1) - Swap NC? -- Done
2. 00:12:225 (1,3) - ^

-- Done!

[Normal]

1. snap all notes

-- Fixed (i have no idea how I missed this :thonking: )

[Easy]

1. snap all notes

-- Fixed

that's all

GL

Thanks for the mod!

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