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Topic Starter
al2e10
CAN YOU GIVE ME SOME Opinion
kingcobra52
The name of the mp3 can't contain any foreign characters. You'll need to change the mp3 name to something else, then do a full submission.

Peace.
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank You !!
I Will Change It.~
DawnII
Your BPM was just about spot on. Here's my timing:

88 BPM/200 Offset

There are a few discrepancies with spacing you should go through and adjust with Distance Snap locked (on the right side of the editor). Just click on an already placed note and it will auto-adjust the distance it should be at.

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [a-change].osu
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank You!!!
Topic Starter
al2e10
have some one gave me some opinion?
please~!!! :P :P
hank_officer
some distance of hit-circle or slider is not good.
adjust them so your map can be better. :)

keep going. 8-)
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank You !! ;) ;)
Thank For Your Opinion!! :) :)
Topic Starter
al2e10
You can list out some timeming~
with "distance of hit-circle or slider is not good" :?: :?:
because i have some hit-circle or slider is beats time~~ :D
hank_officer
-- Step 1 --
these is was too close thereunder.
[00:36:336] (5) (6)
-- Step 2 --
these is was too close thereunder.
[00:55:086] (3) (4) (5)
-- Step 3 --
these is was too close thereunder.
[02:08:381] (1) (2)
[02:13:495] (1) (2)
[02:25:407] (1) (2)
these is was too far thereunder.
[00:46:222] (4) (5) (6)

just my comment.
not absolutely correct.:)
Topic Starter
al2e10
I have change it !!Thank you!! :D :D

have other change??~~
Gave me some opinion!!~!:D :D

PLEASE!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
al2e10
Have someone gave me a star~!?? :P
K-S-O
I find those one-second breaks to be rather unnecessary. Also, I've noticed the spacing is rather inconsistent. I'll point those out later when I find the time.

Other than those issues, I find this to be a pretty solid beatmap.
Topic Starter
al2e10
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peppy
Don't PM me.
Topic Starter
al2e10
You Don't Have Any Opinion~= =
James
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Topic Starter
al2e10
you are so nice!!^^
I will change it~~
Thing you
!!

I Have change it!!
See See??

Have other thing did I change?
Have other opinion
James
another batch of stuffs:

step1:
delete all other timing sections and...
01:46:562 - make a new timing section here, change the hitsound to "soft" and go to "timing setup panel" in "timing" tab, check the "inherit previous timing settings" at the upper left part of the panel.
02:26:109- same as above, but instead change the hitsound to "normal"
..after doing the two above, resnap all notes (timing menu > resnap all notes)

step2:
tickrate to 2
remove ALL the whistle hitsound starting at 02:35:654~END. whistle hitsound does not belong to this song :)
remove the last timing section, 03:01:904
03:00:881 - put a circle here.

step3:
resnap all notes
Topic Starter
al2e10
I Have Finash This^^

Thing you
James
its "thank you" not "thing you"
or does it have another meaning for it?

anyways,
last one. i overlooked/heard these last time..
step1: remove the whistle hitsound at the last part too...
step3: are you SURE that you snapped all notes here?
(go to timing menu > resnap all notes, and DOUBLE CHECK the whole map.)
Topic Starter
al2e10

James wrote:

its "thank you" not "thing you"
or does it have another meaning for it?

anyways,
last one. i overlooked/heard these last time..
step1: remove the whistle hitsound at the last part too...
step3: are you SURE that you snapped all notes here?
(go to timing menu > resnap all notes, and DOUBLE CHECK the whole map.)
I Have Change It ^^
"thank you"^^ :P
James
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Topic Starter
al2e10
OK^^
James
all difficulties:
remove all timing sections for hitsounds, use 19301 offset, then put all timing sections for hitsounds back, and resnap all notes.

step3:
set tickrate to 2, current tickrate doesnt sound good.
Alace
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Topic Starter
al2e10
多謝你~
我會改的!!^^
thank you!!
i will change!!
I have Change
James
all good for me~

James gained 6xp~
Topic Starter
al2e10
This Is My First Song Give Someone RANK^^
Thank You !!
James!!
James
Rank.

And First.

:)
Topic Starter
al2e10
Have someone can rank my song? :D :D
m980
Step 1
Resnap
00:24:06 (2) - Move closer to 1, then move 3 closer to 2, then 4 closer to 3. and make sure spacing is even.
00:32:92 (2) - Move this abit to the left
00:40:42 (3) - Move this abit down.
00:52:01 (1,2,3) - Put these closer to eachother.
01:23:38 (4) - Move this abit down.
01:26:10 (4) - Move closer to 3.
02:41:44 (3) - Move this down so that is in right inbetween 2,4.
02:49:28 (2) - Move abit to the left.

Step 2
Resnap
Change slider tick rate to 2 or 4.
01:30:54 (4,5) - Move these away from 3.
02:27:47 (2) - Move just a little bit away from 1.

Step 3
This isn't snapped properly. Resnap.
00:53:22 (4) - Move abit away from 3.
01:09:03 (2) - Move abit down.
02:08:35 (1) - Move abit up.
02:09:54 (4) - Move away from the end of 3.
02:14:14 (3) - Move closer to 2.
02:36:30 (2) - Move abit to the right.
02:57:44 (3,4,5) - Spread these out.

These were all spacing inconsistencies except for the fact that they weren't snapped properly.

Jeez. Who bubbled this.
Topic Starter
al2e10
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MaxwellDemon
I am not gonna nazi about the beatspacing too much, but here we go... On a side note, I don't really agree with the claps in this song, but eh, your choice.

Step 2:
01:47:25 (2,3) - Talk about misleading with beatspacing. :O

Step 3:
Er... this isn't snapped? :/
01:05:32 (x) - Break?
02:22:49 (1) - Start 1/4th earlier, end at same time though
02:23:69 (3) - Don't get what is this mapped to? D:

Other than that, pretty nice... no bubble yet though. XD
Topic Starter
al2e10
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Topic Starter
al2e10
Can someone give me some opinion??
Topic Starter
al2e10
have some one can rank me ??
kingcobra52
2nd offset: 66,391
3rd offset: 106,572
4th offset: 155,662

Step 1

01:48:60 (1) - Place farther from 3. Distance snap accordingly.

Step 2

Put a break after 02:29:86 (1).

Step 3

Looks fine.

Also, when you make map in the future, use grid level 3 for best results. :D
Topic Starter
al2e10
I have change it ~~^^

think you kingcobra52
Loginer
Step 2 and 3 look pretty good to me, but there are some problems with the spacing in Step 1 (for example, the distance between 02:39:071 and 02:39:752. Pro-tip: Always use distance snap when beatmapping. You'll never have to move a beat again.
lukewarmholiday

Loginer wrote:

Step 2 and 3 look pretty good to me, but there are some problems with the spacing in Step 1 (for example, the distance between 02:39:071 and 02:39:752. Pro-tip: Always use distance snap when beatmapping. You'll never have to move a beat again.
HOLY SHIT LOGINER MODS
kingcobra52

Loginer wrote:

Step 2 and 3 look pretty good to me, but there are some problems with the spacing in Step 1 (for example, the distance between 02:39:071 and 02:39:752. Pro-tip: Always use distance snap when beatmapping. You'll never have to move a beat again.
Even considering he's using grid level 1?
Topic Starter
al2e10
Think you!!

lukewarmholiday and Loginer

I have change it ~

But I don't know where have problem = =

:P
Can you list the problem?? :?:
Topic Starter
al2e10
grid level 1?

I think is okey~~

Bet what do you think??
kingcobra52
All you did was change the offset. You need to resnap and recheck afterwards.

You also still need to fix the issues i noted above with step 1 and step 2.

Peace.
Topic Starter
al2e10
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Topic Starter
al2e10
I Have Change The Step 1. (All is change)
And some step 2 and 3.

Step 3 (I change 02:00 before . And the after I have not change.)^^
Step 2 is the same~
kingcobra52
...Wow my offsets are off ><

Since you're just changing the sounds,do this on all difficulties:

1. Go into the timing setup panel.

2. Hold Ctrl and select all 4 timing sections.

3. Check "Inherit previous timing settings"

4. Click Apply.

Afterwards, You will need to resnap and recheck your notes again.
Topic Starter
al2e10
I have change^^

Thank you!!

You can see see the first pg.

and I think....

this is my first time to try my best to finash~
Topic Starter
al2e10
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mattyu007
Revived and moved to Help.
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