chano & 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi · forum

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-08-10T17:35:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sexta-feira, 25 de maio de 2018 at 02:29:05

Artist: chano & 40mP
Title: Natsukoi Hanabi
Tags: sugar panoram a note summer festival fireworks chano Trynna Mun MkGuh Shizuku- Mirash Delis Ataraxia Bariton
BPM: 158
Filesize: 15085kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2,33 stars, 194 notes)
Ataraxia's Easy (1,42 stars, 104 notes)
Bariton's Insane (3,88 stars, 226 notes)
Collab Normal (1,88 stars, 138 notes)
Delis' Insane (4,1 stars, 314 notes)
Extra (4,9 stars, 371 notes)
Mirash's Extra (4,34 stars, 358 notes)
Mk's Hard (3,33 stars, 250 notes)
Mun's Extra (5,05 stars, 337 notes)
Shizuku's Extra (4,75 stars, 323 notes)
Trynna's Insane (4,2 stars, 333 notes)

Download: chano & 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks bossandy and Hailie <3
no pp mapset, have fun!

Last edited by Net0 2018-05-25T05:29:37+00:00, edited 131 times in total.

Nikakis

770 posts

Joined May 2014

Nikakis 2017-08-10T18:09:25+00:00

not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-08-10T22:09:14+00:00

Nikakis wrote:
not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first

Not sure if I should care about this comment or not...

Donovan

5 posts

Joined November 2014

Donovan 2017-08-10T22:13:33+00:00

Nikakis wrote:
not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first

You should've at least seen the map or been at least nicer instead of just straight up calling the map a meme, hope you don't do this on a daily basis.

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-08-10T22:31:55+00:00

Nikakis wrote:
not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first

not sure vai toma no seu cu

oiii net0

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-08-17T20:26:07+00:00

i love mirash

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-08-18T20:59:16+00:00

edit

osu file format v14

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Title:Natsukoi Hanabi
TitleUnicode:夏恋花火
Artist:chano & 40mP
ArtistUnicode:シャノ & 40mP
Creator:Net0
Version:Bariton's Insane
Source:
Tags:
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Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-08-28T00:03:18+00:00

i love @mirash

Os cara nem é macho so pega esses desenho n pega mulhe de vdd :p

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-08-30T03:25:00+00:00

Net0 wrote:
The point here is fun, not pp. Enjoy!

not pp
enjoy
choose one

peaceGiant

91 posts

Joined November 2016

peaceGiant 2017-08-30T18:27:20+00:00

Nostalgic Festival

• 00:12:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This just shows poor execution imo, maybe it's a theme, but I would rather not have it copied and pasted. (Nvm i see the concept behind it)
• 00:24:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NC's seem inconsistent and i don't think they are following the music,00:25:980 (2) - NC this, 00:26:740 (1) - and this stays NC'd, else remove.
♥ 00:57:120 (1,2,3,1) - I love this!
• 01:01:107 (2) - NC?
• 01:07:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Poor emphasis choice imo, 01:07:563 (3,5) - These could be emphasized better with sharp angles.
♥ 01:09:272 (3) - Neto{tm}
If you do decide to apply these suggestions, fix other simmlar stuff cuz consistency

Shizuku's Extra

• 00:51:993 - Remove the timing point because it conflicts with every other diff and makes me and AImod Angery>
• 00:04:715 (3) - This isn't emphasized with larger spacing

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• 01:22:372 (3) - ?????Fflp://v impostor slider

Mirash's Extra

• 00:06:993 (3) - This slider isnt ignoring anything. (00:07:753 - This is worth a click imo)
• 00:21:708 - I don't hear a sound here.
• 01:01:677 (2,3,1,2,1) - I don't feel like this fits with the concept of the map, You are overall ignoring a lot of sounds and its just a pattern that just appears out of no where.

Delis' Insane

• 00:04:715 (3) - This deserves better emphasis.
• The combo colours are... Unique.
• 00:23:512 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - This could be improved visually
• 01:08:512 - There is a strong vocal here though, Slider would fit better.
• 01:16:866 (2) - skips a lot of important sounds.
= I'm going to be honest, but I really dislike this diff, It needs a lot of polishing, a lot of work with rhythm and emphasis, and aesthetics aren't the best, but it might just be me!

Trynna's Insane

• 00:04:715 (5) - I wish this was emphasized more.
• 00:12:689 - slider end 00:12:879 - circle?
• 00:24:272 (1,2,3,4) - I don't find this appropriate for an insane, but at the same time its so fun to playlol
• 01:09:272 (3) - Can you give me an explanation for these sliders snapped to blue tick?

That's it, I might mod the lower diffs (~~but I'm tired now~~), I am trying to improve in modding so sorry if my points weren't valid, Good luck!!

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-08-31T16:40:29+00:00

Trynna wrote:
Net0 wrote:
The point here is fun, not pp. Enjoy!
not pp
enjoy
choose one

manda vc se fude lixooooooo

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-03T15:27:27+00:00

peaceGiant wrote:
Nostalgic Festival
• 00:12:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This just shows poor execution imo, maybe it's a theme, but I would rather not have it copied and pasted. (Nvm i see the concept behind it)Glad you noticed
• 00:24:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NC's seem inconsistent and i don't think they are following the music,00:25:980 (2) - NC this, 00:26:740 (1) - and this stays NC'd, else remove.Improved NC
♥ 00:57:120 (1,2,3,1) - I love this!Thx
• 01:01:107 (2) - NC?There isn't sv changing there, so why NCing there?
• 01:07:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Poor emphasis choice imo, 01:07:563 (3,5) - These could be emphasized better with sharp angles.The circles are mostly linear only at the end of each phrase of the strong emphasized drum/vocal I changed spacing for a bigger moviment.
♥ 01:09:272 (3) - Neto{tm}lmao
If you do decide to apply these suggestions, fix other simmlar stuff cuz consistency

That's it, I might mod the lower diffs (~~but I'm tired now~~), I am trying to improve in modding so sorry if my points weren't valid, Good luck!!No worries, thanks for modding.

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-09-08T18:27:45+00:00

Hello from my que
[Ataraxia's Easy ]

00:07:373 (2,3) - hmm, i think you can better do blanket
00:13:259 (1,2,3,4) - About this, 3 slider need start here 00:13:259 (2,3) - stong vocal, in my opinon this looks better! I will not write about this anymore. pls check all map
00:31:677 - hmm, maybe add note? imo
00:33:196 - ^
00:53:512 (3,4) - maybe blanket?
01:17:816 (1,2,3) - pls do so

[advanced]

00:14:588 (6,7) - hmm maybe try do so? looks better

[Mk's Hard ]

00:13:069 (3,4) - maybe do good blanket?
00:16:107 (2) - Hmm,ctrl j and make evenly to note 3 i think it's better overlap
00:18:575 (1,2) - Just slightly correct blanket
00:51:613 (5) - Move to the left to make a smoother line
01:01:107 (1,2,3) - make a more acute angle
01:05:474 (1) - maybe do stack with 5 note, triangle patter looks better
01:07:563 (2,3,4) - make a more acute angle?

[Mirash's Extra]

00:09:461 (2,3) - Не хочешь замутить бланкет с началом слайдера?
00:10:411 (4) - Ну и так же можно с концом
00:17:721 (1,2) - По моему это очень трудно прочитать, может убрать стак?
00:21:613 - Очень странно что ты не решил замапать этот сильный звук, может тогда сделать там мини стрим?
00:30:727 (1) - не знаю как другим, но мне очень трудно прочитать эту ноту, может быть ее поставить в вверх?
00:42:879 (1) - ^ хотя ее уже было легче прочитать
01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Жесткая херовинаXD, по моему 01:16:677 (1,2,3,4,1) - тут можно было сделать флоу получше

Sorry it's all
Good luck with mappset

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-09-09T14:19:17+00:00

;_;

Ideal

Nomination Assessment Team

629 posts

Joined January 2014

Ideal 2017-09-10T20:01:54+00:00

osu!

rikia

202 posts

Joined December 2015

rikia 2017-09-11T05:01:32+00:00

[Nostalgic Festival]
00:04:714 (6) - this lands on a stong sound, maybe emphasize it by increasing spacing or changing the angle?
00:07:373 (5,6) - it doesnt make sense to me that these are sliders but 00:08:132 (1,2,3,4) - are not
00:09:461 (5) - maybe you could NC this to show that it's a part of a new phrase (that isnt as calm)
00:10:791 (1) - this could be a different shape to show that its not the same length as 00:10:031 (2,3) - is
00:11:170 (2,3) - you could increase the spacing here since they are both drums
00:13:449 (4) - the slider tail ends on a drum beat which i think should be a circle instead
00:16:487 (4) - ^
00:13:829 (5,6) - this could be a slider since 6 is a barely noticable sound
00:15:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - could you find a better way to make this look different without repeating the same thing but flipping it horizontally?
00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - can the spacings here not vary so much? it feels weird seeing them vary so much when nothing in the song changed.
00:24:272 (7) - NC, it feels to long
00:25:031 (2,3) - maybe these could have a different spacing so players wont be confused because of it?
00:27:310 (3,4) - the spacing here could be smaller to indicate that the sounds are less strong here
00:30:158 (2,1) - pls fix overlap
00:33:196 (1,1) - ^
00:42:310 (2,1) - ^
00:41:360 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1) - again with the copy and pasting :V
00:58:449 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ??? arent these just 2 triples
01:11:550 (1,1) - i dont think the spacing here has to be so big, but it is D:
01:18:765 (5) - NC?
to be honest this entire kiai feels too random, i dont know what to say.
[Shizuku's Insane]
00:05:854 (1,2) - why is there a huge jump here? and to what sound is it even jumping onto?
00:18:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,1,2) - would be nice if you didn't ignore the drum beat here but i guess its fine xD
00:31:677 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why do these have different spacing? they are practically the same :v
00:43:829 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:32:436 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3) - ^
00:46:866 (1,2,3) - I feel like the spacing here is too large, could you make it similar to 00:48:385 (1,2,3) - ?
01:25:410 (1) - this passes through a noticeable sound, can you make it end on it instead? (1/2)
01:36:233 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - I think these should have lower spacing because it is more calm
[Mirash's Insane]
00:00:727 (2,1) - this feels way too spaced, holy.
00:03:385 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is the same as the one before but its so different!
nevermind i give up im not even going to try for this one.
[Delis' Insane]
Combo color: can u make the kiai different colors instead of both red?
00:06:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern could be made better tbh but its fine and perfectly playable
00:10:031 (3,4) - because this was directly overlapped like 1 and 2 were people could misread this for a 1/1 beat gap but it could be fine
00:10:980 (2,1) - the 1(NC) should be futher away from 2 because its a drum beat on a large sound
00:17:626 (7) - can you NC this pls?
00:22:183 (3) - this slider goes through a drum beat, can u make it like a reverse slider or something?
00:23:512 (1,2,1,2) - can you make it so these all have the same spacing?
00:30:348 (3,2) - please fix this ugly overlap
00:32:626 (5) - NC?
00:50:284 (1,2,3,4) - pls make this square look better
01:07:183 (1) - where is the kiai
01:11:360 (3,1) - this is spaced too closely imo compared to the other jumps
To be honest for the entire kiai the jumps feel pretty random in spacing and angles but thats just me, the diff is great overall

[Trynna-

~~nevermind i have to go off the comp, i will finish this mod tomarrow!~~ nevermind x2 i have no school tomarrow

[Trynna's Insane]
00:18:575 (1,2,3,4) - pls make same space
00:21:044 (5) - dis goes through a drum , pls fix
01:03:196 (6,7) - can u move the slider to the right so the angle is sharper
tbh i dont find alot of issues here, sorry.
[Bariton's Insane]
00:03:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this mapped so much differently then just before?
[ ]
i can't find anything else, low diffs are my weakness

Sorry.

Pulse

257 posts

Joined April 2015

Pulse 2017-09-11T17:59:46+00:00

vindo da minha queue

se
pre
pa
ra
que eu vou moddar bem na sua cara

[General]

Não lembro se é problema, mas os kiais são inconsistentes nas dificuldades. Não sei se isso é necessário, que tal padronizar?
00:51:993 (1) - Additional Timing Point on Shizuku's Extra is necessary?

[Ataraxia's Easy]

00:29:208 - Uma nota aqui seria legal. Não sei se foi intencional ou erro, já que o AiMod aponta como se tivesse uma nota aqui, mas ela simplesmente não aparece pra mim no editor.
00:10:411 (2) - Clap no lugar do Whistle?
00:45:537 (3) - Sei lá, eu acho que essa nota poderia estar pegando o som do tick vermelho anterior. Com o ritmo atual, creio que iniciantes possam clicar essa nota antes do tempo atual devido ao ritmo que a música tem.

[Collab Normal]

Não sei se vai ser um problema por ser um desvio muito pequeno, mas chequem os DS apontados no AiMod.
01:28:449 (8) - NC?

[Mk's Hard]
Clean af

01:29:208 (1) - Acho melhor manter a direção desse slider pro próximo do que do anterior para esse. Ctrl+G?

[Bariton's Insane]

01:13:069 (4) - Essa nota me parece melhor stackada no começo do próximo slider em vez de no final do anterior.

[Trynna's Insane]

00:57:689 (6) - Esse stack aqui é putaria, bem ruim de ler.
01:02:816 (5) - Já falei disso num mapa do Natsu. Acho muito ruim ter notas que encostem na meter bar (apesar de ter sido alegado não ter problema), dá uma mudada se possível.

[Delis' Insane]

Some overlaps looks bad playing, I'll list them if you think that you could do some changes:
00:13:829 (1,4) - They overlap with slider body and I think that could be cleaner;
00:31:297 (2) - Overlap with previous slider start;
00:58:069 (1) - I think that you could move pattern down to prevent overlap and you wouldn't need to change next blue combo spacing;
01:24:272 (8,1,2,3) - Isn't this unnecessarily confusing?
01:14:018 (1,2,3,4) - This flow hurts a bit, could you think about moving 3 and for a little bit up and make 4 less curved?

[Mirash's Extra]

00:21:423 (1,2,3,4) - Idk... Your hitsounding bring a new atmosphere to the song, but these doubles doesn't have much sense to me, even being playable. Could you explain?

[Shizuku's Extra]

Check General section
00:06:423 (1) - Double timing point
00:33:765 (1) - That's a lot of stacking. Not much confusing, but annoying. Consider moving this slider down and adjust following notes.

[Nostalgic Festival]

00:06:423 (1) - Double timing point
00:21:993 (3) - Esse terceiro combo pode ser confuso durante o gameplay, já que antes você tinha combos de duas notas (sério isso realmente me confundiu umas três vezes). Considere deixar assim.
00:23:322 (2) - Acho que NC aqui é válido independente de seguir a sugestão acima.
00:58:069 (1) - Esse slider me parece melhor posicionado se der um Ctrl+G e stackar no 00:56:930 (3).
01:11:930 (1) - Na minha opinião isso aqui deveria ter menos SV pra você poder ter um slider menor e não forçar demais o movimento do player. A janela de tempo entre o slider anterior e esse é bem pequena, e nisso dá pra sair muitos 100s ai sem necessidade - tanto por largar o slider anterior mais cedo pra poder pegar o próximo slider quanto por break por seguir o slider anterior até o final e errar a mira tentando alcançar o slider em questão. Ao contrário do 01:23:702 (1,1), onde o movimento é mais favorável. Mesmo assim você poderia reduzir aqui também pra ser consistente (caso reduza o primeiro).

Boa sorte!

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-09-11T19:58:12+00:00

vipo

Viperial wrote:
[Bariton's Insane]
00:03:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this mapped so much differently then just before? fixed

pulso

Pulse wrote:
[Bariton's Insane]
01:13:069 (4) - Essa nota me parece melhor stackada no começo do próximo slider em vez de no final do anterior. concordo fixed

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Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-14T15:42:48+00:00

makisokk wrote:
[advanced]
00:14:588 (6,7) - hmm maybe try do so? looks betterI prefer how it looks now.
Good luck with mappsetThanks

Viperial wrote:
[Nostalgic Festival]
00:04:714 (6) - this lands on a stong sound, maybe emphasize it by increasing spacing or changing the angle?It's such a calm part in the intro I guess the pattern doesn't need bigger jumps or difficulty.
00:07:373 (5,6) - it doesnt make sense to me that these are sliders but 00:08:132 (1,2,3,4) - are notthey sound different..
00:09:461 (5) - maybe you could NC this to show that it's a part of a new phrase (that isnt as calm)Sure
00:10:791 (1) - this could be a different shape to show that its not the same length as 00:10:031 (2,3) - isThe slider there is poiting down for a reason, it's part of how I structured the main downbeats on the map. Doesn't require differet slider shape
00:11:170 (2,3) - you could increase the spacing here since they are both drumslol but they're not emphasized
00:13:449 (4) - the slider tail ends on a drum beat which i think should be a circle insteadmelody rhythm :/
00:16:487 (4) - ^
00:13:829 (5,6) - this could be a slider since 6 is a barely noticable soundThis contradicts your previous suggestion I'm not even sure what's your point now.
00:15:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - could you find a better way to make this look different without repeating the same thing but flipping it horizontally?what's the problem of flipping?
00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - can the spacings here not vary so much? it feels weird seeing them vary so much when nothing in the song changed.every single spacing variation as well as flow is supported by song...
00:24:272 (7) - NC, it feels to longok
00:25:031 (2,3) - maybe these could have a different spacing so players wont be confused because of it?The entire point here is reading in case you didn't notice 00:24:651 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - .
00:27:310 (3,4) - the spacing here could be smaller to indicate that the sounds are less strong here
00:30:158 (2,1) - pls fix overlap
00:33:196 (1,1) - ^
00:42:310 (2,1) - ^don't you think it's a bit weird that this specific two circles are overlapping? That's on purpose.
00:41:360 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1) - again with the copy and pasting :VAgain, what's the problem?
00:58:449 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ??? arent these just 2 triplesThere's only one triple section in this part of the song here 00:57:120 (1,2,3) - on the hi-hats, so I don't really agree in adding a triple there.
01:11:550 (1,1) - i dont think the spacing here has to be so big, but it is D:Nerfed
01:18:765 (5) - NC?Doesn't make any sense NCing there.
to be honest this entire kiai feels too random, i dont know what to say.:/ but it's not

Pulse wrote:
[Collab Normal]
Não sei se vai ser um problema por ser um desvio muito pequeno, mas chequem os DS apontados no AiMod.https://puu.sh/xzBGe.png :thinking:
01:28:449 (8) - NC?Claro
[Nostalgic Festival]
00:06:423 (1) - Double timing pointArrumado
00:21:993 (3) - Esse terceiro combo pode ser confuso durante o gameplay, já que antes você tinha combos de duas notas (sério isso realmente me confundiu umas três vezes). Considere deixar assim.O combo em si eu não vou mudar porque a música realmente faz essa virada de 1-3 pra depois voltar com 1-2 na melodia, foi o que eu segui. Mas eu acho que mudar a posição do 00:21:993 (3) - é tranquilo, então vamos tentar sua sugestão.
00:23:322 (2) - Acho que NC aqui é válido independente de seguir a sugestão acima.O 2 continua fazendo parte da seção anterior não vejo um motivo além do gap de ritmo pra mudar isso, vou manter por enquanto
00:58:069 (1) - Esse slider me parece melhor posicionado se der um Ctrl+G e stackar no 00:56:930 (3).Essa posição faz parte de um conceito geral do mapa. Observa como esse slider 00:58:069 (1) - coincide com 00:51:993 (1) - que é o primeiro objeto da seção que por sua vez estava posicionado acima de 00:45:917 (1) - que era o som mais forte da section anterior e logo na sequência 01:02:436 (1) - vai subir mais ainda, etc.
01:11:930 (1) - Na minha opinião isso aqui deveria ter menos SV pra você poder ter um slider menor e não forçar demais o movimento do player. A janela de tempo entre o slider anterior e esse é bem pequena, e nisso dá pra sair muitos 100s ai sem necessidade - tanto por largar o slider anterior mais cedo pra poder pegar o próximo slider quanto por break por seguir o slider anterior até o final e errar a mira tentando alcançar o slider em questão. Ao contrário do 01:23:702 (1,1), onde o movimento é mais favorável. Mesmo assim você poderia reduzir aqui também pra ser consistente (caso reduza o primeiro).Eu nerfei essa parte dos sliders 3/4, mas só no primeiro caso.
Boa sorte!Muito obrigado <3

Chihara Minori

1,239 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-09-15T04:50:56+00:00

1,2 pattern works, but the current not fit
(if you feel more open about this ill back and give some words)

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-15T05:56:16+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
1,2 pattern works, but the current not fit
(if you feel more open about this ill back and give some words)

I'm always open for discussion, feel free to post your concerns :>

Mirash

Nomination Assessment Team

706 posts

Joined June 2013

Mirash 2017-09-15T11:46:39+00:00

peaceGiant

peaceGiant wrote:
Mirash's Extra

• 00:06:993 (3) - This slider isnt ignoring anything. (00:07:753 - This is worth a click imo) nah, its just a beginning of the map
• 00:21:708 - I don't hear a sound here. overmapping things
• 01:01:677 (2,3,1,2,1) - I don't feel like this fits with the concept of the map, You are overall ignoring a lot of sounds and its just a pattern that just appears out of no where. this pattern follows vocal

makisokk

makisokk wrote:
[Mirash's Extra]
00:09:461 (2,3) - Не хочешь замутить бланкет с началом слайдера? не хочу
00:10:411 (4) - Ну и так же можно с концом
00:17:721 (1,2) - По моему это очень трудно прочитать, может убрать стак? подвинул немного
00:21:613 - Очень странно что ты не решил замапать этот сильный звук, может тогда сделать там мини стрим? я тут мелодию фоловнул
00:30:727 (1) - не знаю как другим, но мне очень трудно прочитать эту ноту, может быть ее поставить в вверх?
00:42:879 (1) - ^ хотя ее уже было легче прочитать обе подвинул
01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Жесткая херовинаXD, по моему 01:16:677 (1,2,3,4,1) - тут можно было сделать флоу получше пойдет так

@Pulse doubles are overmapped yeah, but i feel like with so many diffs already for this song it should have some diversity in patterns and also they sound cool and edgy lol

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Peter

800 posts

Joined June 2016

Peter 2017-09-15T14:08:22+00:00

Hi i'm from my queue

Easy

00:08:512 (4) - rotate by -6* and by selection centre because looks off
00:13:259 (2) - make this one sharper
00:42:879 (1) - looks weird i recommend you to do that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093409
00:45:537 (3) - recommended place this on previous red tick pretty strong sound here after you've done that 00:45:917 (1,2) - change to that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093419
00:48:196 (4) - looks off to previous and next slider
00:54:651 (4) - off to previous

Normal

00:18:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm would make something more interesting here
00:39:841 (1) - rotate by -21* and selection centre will look much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093460 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093463
way better
00:51:993 (1) - move like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093468
01:12:120 (5) - place higher
01:25:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as before

advanced

00:04:715 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps looks awful change to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093480
00:14:588 (6) - something like this would have been better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093490
00:25:411 (3,4) - this looks more interesting : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093499

Hard

00:11:550 (4) - looks not symmetric to 00:10:791 (2)
00:52:942 (2,3,4) - you should make jumps here

Bariton's Insane

00:03:955 (3) - too many reverse arrows

rest of the diffs are above 4
GL

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-09-15T16:18:38+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Hi i'm from my queue
Easy
00:08:512 (4) - rotate by -6* and by selection centre because looks off okie
00:13:259 (2) - make this one sharper eh... explain for me why, because i made a control c control v patten , and its good for me
00:42:879 (1) - looks weird i recommend you to do that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093409 if are weird, explain why...i do a good blanket and its simple, and even your choice is a minor change, i don't see any relevance
00:45:537 (3) - recommended place this on previous red tick pretty strong sound here after you've done that 00:45:917 (1,2) - change to that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093419 if i put that circle in the red tick, i will break ALL the flow i made, and gonna be a 1/2 patten, in easy, you can not put 1/2
00:48:196 (4) - looks off to previous and next slider hmmmm i have see and see and seeeeee and.... i don't see anything off
00:54:651 (4) - off to previous okie done

tks to mod

to com fome

quem le é gay

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só uma coisa

na proxima vez que tu chama meus mapa de feio se eu tromba com vc na rua vou da uma bem na tua oreia

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-09-15T18:05:30+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Bariton's Insane
00:03:955 (3) - too many reverse arrows no

GL

diff

no changes lol

Ideal

Nomination Assessment Team

629 posts

Joined January 2014

Ideal 2017-09-15T18:53:13+00:00

yo boys

[Mirash]
00:21:423 (1,2,3,4) - yea, this is slightly overmapped indeed :d ik diversity matters since there's a lot of diffs but i dont really think it calls for unneeded doubles, plus they're pretty difficult to hit while aiming considering the already linear flow
[Shizuku]
01:12:309 (3) - this is slightly offscreen, just saying. it's barely offscreen but still.

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-09-16T01:21:23+00:00

e

[nostalgic festival]
00:24:272 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you maybe make a more curved stream, actually that's pretty sharp angle not very confortable
00:39:461 (1) - this can be nice to be extanded to the blue tic
00:51:613 (1) - ^
00:57:120 (1,2,3) - can you maybe replace this by a reverse 1/4 ?
01:12:310 (1,2) - really ugly pattern imo, and also very confusing pattern 01:12:879 (2,3) - on the spacing similar but one is 1/2..
01:28:449 (1,1,1) - can u maybe move them a little bit on the right that jump is huge hoyl shit
01:29:398 (1,2) - weird spacing imo
why u don't map the end ?

[mun]
everyone has like a related bg, but yours feels out of place imo
00:02:816 (5) - mute slider end?
00:06:044 (2) - ^
00:11:550 (4) - ctrl g makes nice pattern!
00:33:196 (2) - maybe 2 circles here for the clap?
00:45:348 (5) - ^
00:51:234 (4,5) - weird flow here maybe if you move 5 on 00:51:044 (3) - could be nice back & fourth
01:07:183 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this jump is really small compared to 01:19:335 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - makes actually no sense to me
01:24:461 (3,4,5) - ctrl G is sexy

[shizuku]
00:51:802 (3,1) - unrankable don't overlap perfectly the slider reverse pls
actually that diff is really good hoyl

[mirash]
00:11:550 (4) - can u space it a bit more, i missed 2 time on this i thought it was a jump stream lul
00:21:423 (1,2,3,4) - wtf is this rhythm, what are you even trying to follow ? 00:21:518 (2,3) - i don't hear anything here
01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here dude why there's a damn stream
01:24:936 (4,2,4) - literally no sound here
this diff has really really weird rhythms.....

[my biggest fan delis]
00:59:588 (1) - weird slider shape, make it more even xd like this
01:31:582 (1) - that spinner is really out of place, can u map that section lul
really good

[trynna]
00:21:518 (7) - sound there's nothing here to be mappable
good

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-09-16T03:10:25+00:00

peaceGiant wrote:
Shizuku's Extra
• 00:51:993 - Remove the timing point because it conflicts with every other diff and makes me and AImod Angery> ok removed
• 00:04:715 (3) - This isn't emphasized with larger spacing . ok made the spacing even larger
• 01:22:372 (3) - ?????Fflp://v impostor slider hmm?[/notice]

Viperial wrote:
[Shizuku's Insane]
00:05:854 (1,2) - why is there a huge jump here? and to what sound is it even jumping onto? it's like a mini-transition thingy. i can't explan it in a full detail
00:18:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,1,2) - would be nice if you didn't ignore the drum beat here but i guess its fine xD ok
00:31:677 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why do these have different spacing? they are practically the same :v just me trying to add a bad variation
00:43:829 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:32:436 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:46:866 (1,2,3) - I feel like the spacing here is too large, could you make it similar to 00:48:385 (1,2,3) - ? stacked to 00:45:917 (1) - 's head instead
01:25:410 (1) - this passes through a noticeable sound, can you make it end on it instead? (1/2) i can't really hear that particular sound. so denied for now
01:36:233 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - I think these should have lower spacing because it is more calm did something different instead

Pulse wrote:
[Shizuku's Extra]
Check General section ok
00:06:423 (1) - Double timing point removed
00:33:765 (1) - That's a lot of stacking. Not much confusing, but annoying. Consider moving this slider down and adjust following notes. i think it is fine tho

Idealism wrote:
[Shizuku]
01:12:309 (3) - this is slightly offscreen, just saying. it's barely offscreen but still. made it less off-screen

Sotarks wrote:
[shizuku]
00:51:802 (3,1) - unrankable don't overlap perfectly the slider reverse pls L I T E R A L L Y U N P L A Y A B L E
actually that diff is really good hoyl thanks!

dam that's a lot of mods got

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Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-16T03:20:11+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
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[nostalgic festival]
00:24:272 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you maybe make a more curved stream, actually that's pretty sharp angle not very confortableIt's pretty confortable actually.
00:39:461 (1) - this can be nice to be extanded to the blue tic
00:51:613 (1) - ^I'll consider this, because I really used extended only in special parts of the song/map and I don't reall want to over use it.
00:57:120 (1,2,3) - can you maybe replace this by a reverse 1/4 ? The rhythm idea in this piano section is using sliders ONLY on the main transition sounds and the diff overall is using circles for everything, I don't think it would benefit changing here to a reverse because that also implies in changing the flow which doesn't fit there
01:12:310 (1,2) - really ugly pattern imo, and also very confusing pattern 01:12:879 (2,3) - on the spacing similar but one is 1/2..Changed
01:28:449 (1,1,1) - can u maybe move them a little bit on the right that jump is huge hoyl shitApplied
01:29:398 (1,2) - weird spacing imoAnti-jump
why u don't map the end ?Now mapped

thx mod

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-09-16T03:33:24+00:00

Ataraxia's Easy

00:12:499 (1,2) - usa um slider um pouco mais curvado pra fazer o blanket certinho
00:41:360 (1,1) - blanket
00:45:537 (3) - eu acho que faz mais sentido botar esse círculo no 00:45:348 -
00:53:512 (3,4) - isso ta muito feio vai se fude :< ~~rip orelha~~
01:22:373 (1) - meio undermapped comparado ao resto do kiai

Collab Normal

00:09:841 (2) - tenta diminuir o slider pra o tick vermelho!

00:42:499 - adiciona um círculo aqui?
01:16:677 - ^

Advanced

00:10:791 (3) - remove esse slider e adiciona um círculo
00:33:385 - adiciona um círculo? :<
00:37:373 (2,3) - acho que faria mais sentido com a música inverter a ordem desse slider com o círculo

00:49:525 (2,3) - ^
01:18:765 (8) - transforma esse slider num 1/2 reverse (é assim que se chama? asdhjas)

Mun's Expert

00:33:196 (2) - doesn't feels right
00:38:892 (3,4) - overmapped?
00:45:727 (6) - feels better stacked on the start of the next slider

00:51:044 (3,4,5) - overmapped? also uncomfortable to play :<
sorry for my shitty english/mod ;A;

não vou moddar a diff do guh pq ele é fresco >;(
also desculpa pelo meu mod horrível!

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-16T06:27:27+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Hi i'm from my queue

Normal
00:18:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm would make something more interesting hereIt's pretty cool and stands out a lot, btw it's normal diff I can't go crazy here
00:39:841 (1) - rotate by -21* and selection centre will look much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093460 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093463
way better Fixed
00:51:993 (1) - move like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093468It's not blanket intended here
01:12:120 (5) - place higher That doesn't make much different :/
01:25:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as before^

advanced
00:04:715 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps looks awful change to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093480 Sure
00:14:588 (6) - something like this would have been better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093490 Second person to mention that, changed
00:25:411 (3,4) - this looks more interesting : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9093499that breaks intended flow

GLThanks

Bariton wrote:
Collab Normal
00:09:841 (2) - tenta diminuir o slider pra o tick vermelho! OK
00:42:499 - adiciona um círculo aqui?Dá pra simplificar
01:16:677 - ^Dá pra simplificar
Advanced
00:10:791 (3) - remove esse slider e adiciona um círculoNão vejo um motivo pra fazer isso
00:33:385 - adiciona um círculo? :<Não vejo um motivo pra fazer isso
00:37:373 (2,3) - acho que faria mais sentido com a música inverter a ordem desse slider com o círculo 00:36:613 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - sliders diferentes para seguir ritmos diferentes
00:49:525 (2,3) - ^
01:18:765 (8) - transforma esse slider num 1/2 reverse (é assim que se chama? asdhjas) Eu to usando reverse só pras partes com stream ou de transição mais importantes

não vou moddar a diff do guh pq ele é fresco >;(
also desculpa pelo meu mod horrível!

Mekki

Mekki 2017-09-16T15:51:11+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Hi i'm from my queue

00:52:942 (2,3,4) - you should make jumps here Why?

rest of the diffs are above 4
GL

Thanks. Applied Pulse's mod.

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victorfernando

292 posts

Joined October 2016

victorfernando 2017-09-16T17:30:31+00:00

olar tudo bom ?

Ataraxia's Easy

o ritmo tá bonitinho mas o hitsound tá meio confuso pra mim , não se tá baixo ou se não tem sabe ?
00:37:753 eu acho que aqui ficaria melhor com um blanket , mas só opnião minha mesmo , você pode conferir o jeito que fica nessa imagem :
imagem
00:42:879 aqui você poderia tentar assim tbm :
imagem 2
00:51:993 o ritmo aqui tá um pouco mais acelerado , ao invés desse circulo poderia ser dois slider's mas claro , se tu for botar slider vai ter que arrumar a distancia da patern , ou botar um slider reverse mesmo <3 imagem :
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Só isso mesmo , bela gd <3

Collab Normal

00:13:829 esse overlap me da um toc fudido se você arrumasse ou não sei lá depende de tu, eu ficaria agradecido <3 :
overlap
00:18:006 o espaço entre o 4 e o 1 é muito pequeno , consideraria aumentar o espaço
00:18:575 essa parte ai tá mto né
00:19:145 você poderia tirar esse circulo , depois ve o ritmo , praticamente você botou som aonde não tinha
00:19:525 aqui um quick slider seria melhor por que o som começa no tick branco e termina logo em seguida no tick vermelho porém você teria que mudar sua pattern , isso depende de você
00:19:715 aqui tem som de um circulo só
00:19:904 e aqui começaria um slider que terminaria em 00:20:474
tirando isso o ritmo tá bem <3 boa sorte

Mk's Hard

tá perfeito viado só falta botar hitsound

Bariton's Insane

00:01:866 pra que tanto reverse ? :p
00:04:904 ^ tenta trocar esses reverse por circulos
00:45:537 esqueceu um som aqui :p
00:51:803 bota ele um pouco mais longe , quando fui jogar pensei que era 1/4 mas na verdade era 1/2 quando fui olhar no editor :p
01:08:797 o som do slider termina aqui e começa outro no tick branco , é escolha sua tirar o reverse pra botar som ou não <3
a diff mais bonitinha :3 <3

Trynna's Insane

00:24:272 no meu ver isso não ficou muito legal ainda mais pra um insane de 4,19
00:23:512 talvez bota o 2 mais longe por que a musica tava crescendo ?
00:27:310 a pattern ficaria melhor assim : mas é escolha sua :p
imagem
01:09:272 um blanket entre o 3 e o 4 não seria bom ?
só isso , a diff tá muito boa <3

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2017-09-16T17:53:30+00:00

I really love Sotarks. Like, a lot. Like, a whole lot. You have no idea. I love her so much that it is inexplicable, and I'm ninety-nine percent sure that I have an unhealthy obsession. I will never get tired of listening that sweet, angelic voice of hers. It is my life goal to meet up with her in real life and just say hello to her. I fall asleep at night dreaming of her holding a personal concert for me, and then she would be so tired that she comes and cuddles up to me while we sleep together. If I could just hold her hand for a brief moment, I could die happy. If given the opportunity, I would lightly nibble on her ear just to hear what kind of sweet moans she would let out. Then, I would hug her while she clings to my body hoping that I would stop, but I only continue as she moans louder and louder. I would give up almost anything just for her to look in my general direction. No matter what I do, I am constantly thinking of her. When I wake up, she is the first thing on my mind. When I go to school, I can only focus on her. When I go come home, I go on the computer so that I can listen to her beautiful voice. When I go to sleep, I dream of her and I living a happy life together. She is my pride, passion, and joy. If she were to call me "Onii-chan," I would probably get diabetes from her sweetness and die. I wish for nothing but her happiness. If it were for her, I would give my life without any second thoughts. Without her, my life would serve no purpose. I really love Sotarks.

Mekki

Mekki 2017-09-16T17:57:39+00:00

what the? xD

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-09-16T18:02:17+00:00

but sotarks is a guy =(
pls rewrite

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-09-16T21:16:32+00:00

sotarks is a cute loli

Ideal

Nomination Assessment Team

629 posts

Joined January 2014

Ideal 2017-09-16T21:19:12+00:00

sotarks is a

Bariton

306 posts

Joined October 2012

Bariton 2017-09-16T21:34:44+00:00

victorfernando wrote:
olar tudo bom ?

Bariton's Insane
00:01:866 pra que tanto reverse ? :p >:(
00:04:904 ^ tenta trocar esses reverse por circulos nao
00:45:537 okueceu um som aqui :p ok
00:51:803 bota ele um pouco mais longe , quando fui jogar pensei que era 1/4 mas na stackei era 1/2 quando fui olhar no editor :p stackei
01:08:797 o som do slider termina aqui e começa outro n eu fiz algo diferente do que vc falou mas mudeia botar som ou não <3 eu fiz algo diferente do que vc falou mas mudei
a diff mais bonitinha :3 <3 obg fofooooooooooooooooooooooteamo

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-17T13:01:19+00:00

You can guess which diff this is for

00:33:196 (1) - I know you went to map the backing track for this, the same layer that 00:32:816 (1) is mapping. But to me it would make be much more intuitive (and make more sense in a way) to use https://i.imgur.com/7WaeKhB.png or https://i.imgur.com/IH4fcTu.png . This is because it would follow the same layer (drums) as 00:29:208 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - and avoid abrupt changes in which instrument you follow.
00:45:348 (1) - ^
00:37:753 (4) - Would you consider spacing this a bit to the left a bit so it doesn't look like it slightly touches 2? This is one of the few objects that doesnt have other objects stacked underneath it and separating it from 2 a bit would make it look more structured imho
01:08:133 (6,7) - Decreasing the spacing between 6 and 7 would create more emphasis on the vocal pattern at 01:08:512 (1) . As of now the huge spacing between 6 and 7 takes away a bit of emphasis from it
01:11:550 (1,1,1) - I don't really agree on the slow SV on this slider tbqh. I can't see how it's different from 01:08:512 (1,2,3) - and if it is then it must be very minuscule. In the end it just comes off as rather forced. I am a person that sometimes creates different patterns to try to incorporate a certain feel, but because you've already established a no SV change pattern earlier it ends up being really abrupt and feels like youre trying to put too many ideas into your map. Same with 01:23:702 (1,1)
01:17:816 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern uses considerably lower spacing than the rest of the kiai. I just wanted to point this out because this quite an emphatic space of the chorus the low spacing doesnt seem to do it justice imho
01:20:664 (8) - I can't tell if this is a mistake or not so I'm just going to point it out. You didn't opt for three 3/4 sliders for the vocals like you did at 01:08:512 (1,2,3) - and this is the only place in the chorus where you skipped out on mapping with this rhythm

[]w ~

Smokeman

463 posts

Joined November 2012

Smokeman 2017-09-17T14:40:37+00:00

haha... memes ; )

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-17T16:36:43+00:00

Kisses wrote:
You can guess which diff this is for
00:33:196 (1) - I know you went to map the backing track for this, the same layer that 00:32:816 (1) is mapping. But to me it would make be much more intuitive (and make more sense in a way) to use https://i.imgur.com/7WaeKhB.png or https://i.imgur.com/IH4fcTu.png . This is because it would follow the same layer (drums) as 00:29:208 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - and avoid abrupt changes in which instrument you follow.
00:45:348 (1) - ^This rhythm suggestion is the intuitive choice indeed, but that's not the layer I'm following. I kept rhythm somewhat obvious, but I made the choice to follow melody in specific parts like 00:32:816 (1,1,1) - /01:00:727 (1,2,1) - /01:08:512 (1,2,3) - etc to make them stand out more and be a new approach to the songs rhythm representation. It's one drum skip´, I think it's mostly fine.
00:37:753 (4) - Would you consider spacing this a bit to the left a bit so it doesn't look like it slightly touches 2? This is one of the few objects that doesnt have other objects stacked underneath it and separating it from 2 a bit would make it look more structured imhoSure, moved it in the x axis by 2.
01:08:133 (6,7) - Decreasing the spacing between 6 and 7 would create more emphasis on the vocal pattern at 01:08:512 (1) . As of now the huge spacing between 6 and 7 takes away a bit of emphasis from it All right, I made the spacing lower
01:11:550 (1,1,1) - I don't really agree on the slow SV on this slider tbqh. I can't see how it's different from 01:08:512 (1,2,3) - and if it is then it must be very minuscule. In the end it just comes off as rather forced. I am a person that sometimes creates different patterns to try to incorporate a certain feel, but because you've already established a no SV change pattern earlier it ends up being really abrupt and feels like youre trying to put too many ideas into your map. Same with 01:23:702 (1,1) I have to disagree, the concept of using different SV sliders was already used before in the diff, the point of the kiai is just increasing its intensity for the vocal emphasis, especially for the "Hanabi" phrase, which seems imo the most important part to use it.
01:17:816 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern uses considerably lower spacing than the rest of the kiai. I just wanted to point this out because this quite an emphatic space of the chorus the low spacing doesnt seem to do it justice imhoSure, I changed the placement of 01:18:196 (3) - to increase spacing here
01:20:664 (8) - I can't tell if this is a mistake or not so I'm just going to point it out. You didn't opt for three 3/4 sliders for the vocals like you did at 01:08:512 (1,2,3) - and this is the only place in the chorus where you skipped out on mapping with this rhythmI did that mostly because the second kiai part is not the same in intensity compared to the previous one; that's why rhythms are more intense. That's why I used only one 3/4 here 01:20:664 (1) - since I only skip there a hi-hat, you can also notice how it got more intense comparing 01:23:702 (1,1,1,2,3) - with 01:11:550 (1,1,1) - , and overall the angles got more agressivelly mapped too in this section. I could apply tho the 3/4 here 01:21:423 (4,5,6) - since this too is just hi-hat, so let me know if you think it could work with two, but I definetly can't make all of the 3 like in the previous chorus section
[]w ~

victorfernando wrote:
olar tudo bom ? Tudo ^^

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00:13:829 esse overlap me da um toc fudido se você arrumasse ou não sei lá depende de tu, eu ficaria agradecido <3 :
overlap
Essa foi a opção esteticamente mais bonita pra mim lol, se vc tiver alguma sugestão diversa, fique a vontade
00:18:006 o espaço entre o 4 e o 1 é muito pequeno , consideraria aumentar o espaçoMas não tá dando overlap nesse caso
00:18:575 essa parte ai tá mto né?
00:19:145 você poderia tirar esse circulo , depois ve o ritmo , praticamente você botou som aonde não tinhaToda essa parte o ritmo é 1/2, então existe sim som aí.
00:19:525 aqui um quick slider seria melhor por que o som começa no tick branco e termina logo em seguida no tick vermelho porém você teria que mudar sua pattern , isso depende de vocêA diff tinha que simplificar, se vc observar o Advanced eu usei esse ritmo que vc achou melhor ^^
00:19:715 aqui tem som de um circulo só
00:19:904 e aqui começaria um slider que terminaria em 00:20:474
tirando isso o ritmo tá bem <3 boa sorteBasicamente vc não concordou com o pattern. Bom, como eu expliquei, nessa parte eu tinha que simplificar um ritmo que é inteiramente 1/2. Pra fazer isso sem usar sliders 1/2, eu optei por mapear todos os sons importantes com slider; 00:18:575 (1,3,5,7) - , ou seja todos os sons de snare ficaram representadas por um objeto, enquanto que o sons do tick vermelho foram simplificados pela metade 00:18:765 - /00:19:525 - /00:20:284 - /00:21:044 - e a outra metade é circle já que se trata de som de natureza distinta. Optei por esse pattern porque se trata de uma parte dificil da música, tanto que é um dos poucos momentos que vc vai ter uma sequência mais intensa assim.

Smokeman wrote:
haha... memes ; )

Well this mapset isn't meme :<

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2017-09-17T18:16:01+00:00

I'll pick some diff only...

General

Mirash's Extra

Hitsounds
[list:1337]////Arrangement & Design

00:30:158 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3) - This is mean...
01:02:436 (1,2) - You didn't touch the head and tail on earlier sliders. So I suggest you keep them in the same way.
img

Shizuku's Insane

Hitsounds

No problm

Arrangement & Design

00:47:626 (2) - Could be stacked better
00:59:588 (1) - To follow your overall style I suggest you put it like this: To make them on the same line.
If you do so don't forget to move the following 01:01:677 (2) -
img
01:35:854 (1) - accident?

Mun's Expert

Hitsounds

Well done.

Arrangement & Design

01:34:335 (3) - It looks a bit weird. I'd put this note at somewhere else like here:
img

Nostalgic Festival

Hitsounds

No prob here.

Arrangement & Design

I noticed you are trying to use different type of combocolors for marking sections. Maybe you can do this here (01:26:170 -), for marking some jumps
img

01:36:993 (4,5,6,1) - Music here is a fade-out outro, I think you can decrease their distance.
img

You used lots of symmetry patterns, I can't pick any other important issues here..

I testplayed all >Insane diff. Other diffs are fine to me.
Good luck!

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

Net0 2017-09-18T00:19:01+00:00

fanzhen0019 wrote:
I'll pick some diff only... No worries

Nostalgic Festival

Hitsounds
No prob here.
Arrangement & Design

I noticed you are trying to use different type of combocolors for marking sections. Yep I did thatMaybe you can do this here (01:26:170 -), for marking some jumpsit is marked, the jumps with kicksliders are using the green and blue/purple combo color, they're different from the other red-pink, similar to what I did here 00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) -
img

01:36:993 (4,5,6,1) - Music here is a fade-out outro, I think you can decrease their distance.Applied suggestion, decreased the spacing there.
img

You used lots of symmetry patterns, I can't pick any other important issues here..hmm so using symmetriy is an issue? I'm not sure about that, if there's any specific pattern you don't approve let me know.

I testplayed all >Insane diff. Other diffs are fine to me.
Good luck!thanks a lot

Hollow Wings

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Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2017-09-18T16:37:38+00:00

m4m

General

combo 7 and combo 8's red colors in most diffs are very similar, not recommend you to do that thou...

Nostalgic Festival

00:27:120 (2,3,4) - shouldn't these jumps' distances are in 00:23:322 (2,3,4,5,6) - 's kind? similar mod to 01:05:854 (1,2,3) - as well.
00:42:879 (1) - nc from here is a bit confused to me. i recommend just set nc at those notes have 1/1 gap before them.
01:18:006 (2) - move to 180,184?
01:23:322 (6,7) - i recommend you swap these two.
01:24:082 (1,1) - this jump is kinda too large.
01:29:398 (1,2) - this should be a big jump imo... not really necessary to give ds pattern here. if you insist note 2 should be at that corner, stack it at note 1 can be the best solve.
hmmmmm, when 1/2 and 1/4 gaps appeared together, new combos are usually used, that's ok. but the places you set them are caring downbeats too much, focus on the detail patterns should be better than that way. and also, notes' jumps are in regular symmetry like way placement set, but random like distance set, i think you shall consider both of them at same time... i can understand some of patterns or organizations made on purpose, maybe i'm just not fav on these.

Mun's Expert

00:25:791 (6,1) - this jump is too large and not necessary, try move note 6 to 296,136.
00:30:158 (1,2) - this jump is too large compared to 00:42:309 (1,2) - .
00:48:955 (6) - missed nc.
01:06:613 (8) - add nc here to notice the sudden ds shifting. maybe add another nc at 01:06:234 (7) - and be better.
01:16:677 (2,5) - as for your slider overlapping style, you can hide these two under 01:16:866 (3) - 's previous part.

Shizuku's Extra

00:10:411 (3) - add nc maybe, for you have all these nc spam for ds shifting. maybe 01:02:056 (3) - as well, and things like that, won't mention much.
00:36:803 (1,2) - swap nc setting can be simple.
00:51:803 (3,1) - idk why people start overlapping arrows, but this is kinda unrankble.

Mirash's Extra

00:21:423 (1,2,3,4) - these doubles are like following nothing, even you skipped that downbeat. i don't think this is kinda right rhythm for that proper part.
01:04:145 (1,1,1,1) - nc spam here is not necessary.
jumps at 01:07:183 (1) - with heated emotion, even shorter than jumps at 00:29:208 (1) - in quiet part...

Delis' Insane

00:27:120 (4) - add nc for ds shifting.
finally a decent map for the proper song in an obviously matured style.

Trynna's Insane

maybe you shall find a way to help players distinguish 00:18:196 (6,1) - and 00:19:335 (5,6) - 's ds pattern, by noticing something.
01:16:677 (2,3) - swap them can be better for the heated part.
01:23:322 (4,5) - swap them can be better, for it can emphasize the vocal beat at 01:23:702 (1) - 's head with a larger jump.
good map.

not much to say about lower ones...

hmmmmmmmmmm...

good luck.

Net0

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Net0 2017-09-18T17:25:29+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m

combo 7 and combo 8's red colors in most diffs are very similar, not recommend you to do that thou...My diff in particular only goes up to color 6, so this probably refers to some GD
Nostalgic Festival
00:27:120 (2,3,4) - shouldn't these jumps' distances are in 00:23:322 (2,3,4,5,6) - 's kind? similar mod to 01:05:854 (1,2,3) - as well.The song is not as intense there, but I'll space them more to keep it consistent with 00:23:322 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:42:879 (1) - nc from here is a bit confused to me. i recommend just set nc at those notes have 1/1 gap before them.The idea of the NC here is kinda obvious if you highlight all of them 00:29:208 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - , changes here.
01:18:006 (2) - move to 180,184?I'm not sure WHY but I'll do that
01:23:322 (6,7) - i recommend you swap these two.Sure
01:24:082 (1,1) - this jump is kinda too large.Considering the overall spacing I don't believe this is off, however I did nerf the slider speed and decreased the pattern size.
01:29:398 (1,2) - this should be a big jump imo... not really necessary to give ds pattern here. if you insist note 2 should be at that corner, stack it at note 1 can be the best solve.I stacked... But I thought that the intention there was clear enough... Well if even you can't get it I'll just change that
hmmmmm, when 1/2 and 1/4 gaps appeared together, new combos are usually used, that's ok. but the places you set them are caring downbeats too much, focus on the detail patterns should be better than that way. and also, notes' jumps are in regular symmetry like way placement set, but random like distance set, i think you shall consider both of them at same time... i can understand some of patterns or organizations made on purpose, maybe i'm just not fav on these.I'm pretty sure I made spacing consistent and not random, but if you find something off with how it was done, just point it so I can see it. This section 00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - is indeed symetrically done. But the spacing/flow goes along with song intensity, as you can see the stronger transitions all had bigger spacing 00:20:854 (1,2,1,2,1) - compared to 00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , flow from this point on 00:21:613 (1) - was linear so all the main curves; 00:22:183 (1) - /00:22:563 (1) - /00:22:942 (1) - with harder flow. Another thing worth mentioning is that this map uses a gimmick with the playfield that this pattern shows if you compare 00:18:575 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - with 00:18:765 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,3,2,2) - . So yeah it's not random, but I can see why you didn't like it.

good luck.

Trynna

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Trynna 2017-09-18T17:49:45+00:00

reds are delis

blueloniess

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blueloniess 2017-09-20T09:53:39+00:00

[Nostalgic Festival]
00:20:284 (2) - I think this note should be here 00:19:525 (2) , this one 00:20:474 (1) should be here - 00:19:335 (1) then this one 00:20:664 (2) - be here 00:19:904 (2) - . then it becomes a Symmetrical Polygon

01:12:310 (1) - why slow down so much? shouldn't this part similar this part?01:09:272 (3) -

pretty awesome

[Mun's expert]
00:06:992 (1,2) - stack
00:48:006 (3,4) - too close , separate it
01:04:145 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I think you can make this jumps much bigger

[Shizuku's Extra]
00:46:866 (1,2,3) - make these three on a same line

[Mirash's Extra]
00:00:348 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - why don't make this part similar ?
00:17:721 (1) - overmap?
00:21:613 - why ignore here
00:47:056 (5,6) - stack or separate or move 00:47:056 (5) - at around (x:295 y:132)

[Delis' Insane]
00:07:753 (3,4,5,6,7) - ★ pls
00:19:715 (7,1) - stack?

[Trynna's Insane]
00:24:272 (1,2,3,4) - holy... really?

This is too terrify in a insane mapset
01:04:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe a ★？
01:10:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ★
pp map style

[Bariton's Insane]
01:22:183 (4,2,3) - stack?

[MK's hard]
00:03:955 (3) - Ctrl+G?

Sry but IDK how to mod EZ and NM

This map impressed me a lot
IDK how to give a suggestion under this kind of mapping style

masterpieces.
I can't play it well though.

Net0

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Net0 2017-09-20T15:04:39+00:00

blueloniess wrote:
[Nostalgic Festival]
00:20:284 (2) - I think this note should be here 00:19:525 (2) , this one 00:20:474 (1) should be here - 00:19:335 (1) then this one 00:20:664 (2) - be here 00:19:904 (2) - . then it becomes a Symmetrical PolygonIf the point is being a symmetrical pattern I think it already suits your suggestion ^^

01:12:310 (1) - why slow down so much? shouldn't this part similar this part?01:09:272 (3) - They share some similarities indeed; 01:08:512 (1,2,3) - here you can see that 01:08:512 (1,2) - are more straight and imply more moviment, while 01:09:272 (3) - you have to stop the cursor a bit more for the vocals that are prolonged and emphasized here 01:09:272 - . I applied the same idea here 01:11:550 (1,1,1) - but since this vocal line is more special in the song I added SV to the moviment idea.

pretty awesomeThanks a lot, glad you liked the map.

Ok guys, I think I gathered a few mods already, not sure if the other requests I've made I'll receive mods. For now I'll wait everyone to update their diffs responding to the mods, to check if the current mods received are enough. -w-

ShinodaYuu

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ShinodaYuu 2017-09-20T18:35:50+00:00

Hi, from my queue

[Collab Normal]
00:09:461 (1) - This sound is very similar to 00:09:841 (2) - ,but here you highlighted only end of it, so instead of it 1/2 slider from 00:09:272 - to here would be better imo
00:37:183 - There's a drum beat here, so think of filling
00:38:512 - ^
00:49:335 - Like upon, drum but also vocals are stronger here
00:50:284 (3) - ^
00:51:044 (4) - ^
00:51:044 (4,1) - Blanket?
00:56:550 (1) - If you change first red tick to white to be more circular should look better imo
01:04:335 - Here's same as 01:05:094 (2) - so fill
01:16:677 - Strong sound, fill
01:24:461 (6,3) - Think of making it go same direction

[Advanced]
00:19:715 (4,5) - Would look better if blanket imo
00:23:702 - Strong sound, fill
00:33:385 - ^
00:45:537 - ^
00:47:626 (6) - I can't find anything what's a representation of this circle in song, better move to 00:47:816 -
00:48:765 (9) - Imo more important than these vocals are drums on 00:48:765 (9) -

I've also seen highest diff but it's I'm probably not experienced enough to know what's a real mistake here

Hope will be helpful

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