1. Easy (2.07 stars, 117 notes)
2. inaba's taiko (4.83 stars, 808 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 458 notes)
4. kosiga's Hard (4.8 stars, 325 notes)
5. Normal (4.11 stars, 171 notes)

kosiga wrote:

yeah!
かんせーい

merchat7 wrote:

Random mod from me ^^ this song

[General]

- Can you keep the artist the same as the other ranked beatmap for the pc version opening? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24458 So change to Dai2BungeibuBand
- Go-Go-Adventure! (Short Ver.) Add exclamation mark since everytime I search the song name, i see a ! and short ver since you are not mapping the full version. Just incase, viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
- Remove the * from source, so it should be Kira Kira -Rock 'n' Roll Show- http://vndb.org/v414
- Tags: Put the second literary department instead in tags and d2b as well as ps2 visual novel kirakira (in case someone search it this way) overdrive (developer) princess soft (publisher) mangagamer (English publisher for the PC version and the fan disc). airi (i think she sing this as she sing the songs for the pc version as well http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_zr3vA6A2kI) Alternate names for her... ur8n uran http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/AiRI This song come from the album hot hearts http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/detailview.html?KEY=LACA-5880. That should be it for tags.

All fixed~

- Background image is 520x390. I'm sure there is a better image with a better resolution than this. I not found the good background image
- Reduce volume for the final spinner in all difficulty. Too loud. This still ..orz

[Easy]

00:00:879 (1.2,3,4,5) - (1) feel really weird for me, end it at 00:01:703. I don't see why you didn't use sliders considering this is an Easy. I suggest something like this http://puu.sh/6eci.
00:05:164 (6) - Don't like the red point on this slider. It make the slider slower and doesn't fit the song. Remove it and try a different slider shape. I changed to this
00:07:637 (1.2.3) - Repeating slider, 3 hit circles like this really feel like a Normal. http://www.puu.sh/6edg Something like this if possible.
00:18:186 (2,3) - Slider instead try to have, no more than two hit circle next to each other in Easy.
00:30:384 (3.4) - Slider fit the song better.
00:44:560 (2.3.4) - Remove (4), it isn't following anything. Make a slider here and end it at 00:45:549.A repeating slider also work here.
01:30:714 (1) - Easier to read this kick slider if you place it like this http://puu.sh/6ee7.
01:38:956 (1) - Really short spinner for an Easy, slider work better. 01:38:956~01:39:945 - slider add
01:40:604 (1.2.3) - Slider > Hit Circle or Hit Circle > Slider instead.Try to not make it a boring box pattern as well.
01:48:186 (1,2) - Slider
01:49:340 (3,4) - ^ Should keep the same effect while not being too hard for beginners.

Would be a lot more beginner friendly and play nicer if you replace some hit circles with sliders.

All fixed~

[Normal]

+1 ar, too slow for the amount of notes you place in this difficulty (your current ar make your difficulty look really clustered)

00:10:109 (2) - Ctrl+H and put back in same spot. More interesting.
00:47:527 (3,4) - I don't see why you do this here but not at 00:10:109. Remove two repeats from both sliders and end it at white tick for consistency purposes and it feels a lot better for me.
01:05:000 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 6 hit circles in a row :/ Try a slider/repeating slider for (2,3,4).
01:15:219 (1) - Short spinner again, try to map it out.
01:17:527 (2) - I don't think you should do repeating sliders like this for Normal. Remove two repeats and extend it so it end at same spot. Slider velocity is too slow for this type of slider imo.
01:50:164 (5) - ^

Looks pretty solid.

All fixed~

[Hard]

00:22:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve this stream a bit? Look nicer http://puu.sh/6egq. fixed

Pretty nice.

[Insane]

00:02:362 (4,1) - This jump doesn't really fit, if you want to keep it, make the jump smaller. fixed
00:06:483 (5) - Don't like this anti-jump-like slider. Remove some of the red points. Slight changes
00:05:494 (2.3) - Reduce the jump a bit. fixed

Fun difficulty, out of the whole map only the two jumps above annoyed me so reduce spacing just a little bit.

Definite star since map is solid overall and I like this song.

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Jojo's mod queue~

General:
Try to find a better BG~ I found the perfect background

Why GD's name is koshiga's Hard? Isn't your ID kosiga? =A= fixed

Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:36:318 (6) - maybe add a new combo? 8 combos seems long for easy. 01:35:659 (5) - to add new combo
01:40:604 (1) - and I don't know what this new combo means.. maybe delete it? fixed
others all play fine for me~ not gonna to nazi.

Hitsound
01:50:824 (1) - If you want to slience the spinner end completely, you may change it to soft hitsound instead of normal, it will sounds much better. fashion similar to that in "Hard"

Normal:
Pretty fine~

Hitsound
same suggestion as easy on the end spinner, won't mention again~ fashion similar to that in "Hard"

Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
I think AR8 plays more comfortable, just personal feeling. sorry.no fixed

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:307 (1) - oops I missed here, because of the slidershape... maybe don't jump here? ok. spacing1.50x fixed
others played well for me.

Hitsound
the volumn lowing on the last spinner on the hard diff is pretty good. Maybe consider do the same thing on other diffs too? fashion similar to that in "Hard"
That is all I think, then good luck~ have my star~

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my mod queue~

General:

Why GD's name is koshiga's Hard? Isn't your ID kosiga? =A= my name kosiga

koshiga's Hard: kosiga's Hard!!
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:43:076 (5) - the approach circle is little hard to see with default skin.. change it

Hitsound
01:32:362 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why this part don't have any whistles? on purpose? sounds really sudden for me. add whistles fixed!

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

Hello,my little mod your insane diff

[Insane]
00:02:692 (2) - 2 grid up no fixed
00:02:857 (3) - 3 grid up 1 grid up
00:07:637 (3) - 1 grid left? no fixed
00:09:450 (3) - 6 grid left no fixed
00:10:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4 grid left no fixed
00:13:901 (5,6) - 3 grid right no fixed
00:14:725 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154832 fixed
00:15:879 (1) - if you fix ^ 3 grid right no fixed
00:21:318 (2) - remove clap fixed
00:23:296 (3) - try this (Citl + H) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154833 fixed
00:24:780 (5) - 4 grid down no fixed
00:24:945 (6,7) - if you fix ^ 5 grid left no fixed
00:25:439 (1,2,3) - 1 grid down no fixed
00:25:934 (4) - 1 grid right and 3 grid up, remove clap fixed(crap)
00:26:923 (2) - 2 grid left
00:27:087 (3) - 7 grid left and 1 grid down ]
00:28:406 (4) - remove clap fixed
00:29:725 (5) - ^ fixed
00:30:219 (7) - ^ fixed
00:31:044 (4) - ^ fixed
00:40:604 (5) - 2 grid up no fixed
00:41:263 (1) - 1 grid right no fixed
00:41:593 (2) - ^ no fixed
00:42:252 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ no fixed
00:48:202 - 2 grid left no fixed
00:51:978 (3,4) - Try this i think this better, if you change ofcourse fix spacing what?
00:57:087 (2) - grid left no fixed
00:57:252 (3) - 3 grid up no fixed
00:57:417 (4) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154842 fixed
01:05:659 (1,3) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154844 no fixed
01:06:648 (1) - 1 grid right no fixed
01:09:285 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:10:439 (3) - ^ no fixed
01:12:912 (3) - 3 grid rgiht and 2 grid up no fixed
01:21:153 (5) - 2 grid up no fixed
01:30:879 (3) - 3 grid tight no fixed
01:33:022 (7) - 5 grid right no fixed
01:36:978 (4) - 2 grid right no fixed
01:38:956 (1) - remove whistle fixed
01:41:263 (3,4) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154846 no fixed
01:45:054 (4,5) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154847 fixed
01:48:186 (1) - remove whistle fixed
01:50:824 (1) - remove finish no fixed

1. 00:30:549 (X) - Add circle
2. 01:17:857 (1) - Remove new combo
3. 01:18:022 (11) - New combo
4. 01:31:868 (8) - Add circle

1. AR+1
2. 01:50:000 (4) - Somehow feels better when you change it to one repeat and add a circle @01:50:494, just my opinion.

1. 00:00:879 (1) - End on 00:01:538
2. 00:01:703 (X) - Add circle with whistle
3. 00:20:824 (X) - Add circle with clap

1. Looks okay~

L i d a N wrote:

Hey ^.^

[Insane]

1. 00:30:549 (X) - Add circle
2. 01:17:857 (1) - Remove new combo
3. 01:18:022 (11) - New combo
4. 01:31:868 (8) - Add circle

[Normal]

1. 00:00:879 (1) - End on 00:01:538
2. 00:01:703 (X) - Add circle with whistle
3. 00:20:824 (X) - Add circle with clap

[Easy]

1. Looks okay~

Nice map~ Good luck

Byakugan249 wrote:

KiraKira Hurray

Easy:
00:00:879(1) - 1 grid down for the end point
00:03:681(3) - 2 grids down ^
00:44:560(2) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6hQ8
01:38:956(5) - 1 grid down for the end point

Normal:
00:39:615(2) - 1 grid left for the end point
00:41:263(5) - New combo?
00:44:890(1) - 1 grid right for the end point
01:05:000(2) - 2 grids up for the end point

Insane:
01:12:417(1) - 1 grid down for the 2nd point. it looks like a straight slider.

This is the best i can do. GL

All fixed!

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Easy]
00:05:164 (4) - newcombo
00:31:703 (4) - ^
00:44:560 (2) - end at 00:45:549

All fixed~

[Normal]
00:52:142 (6) - try to start at 00:51:978 no fixed
01:07:142 (1) - move to 01:07:307
01:08:626 (4) - add a reverse arrow

other fixed

[Insane]
00:48:846 (1,2,3) - try to put them like this .. sorry. no fixed

SPOILER

01:35:659 (1,2) - ^ sorry. no fixed
01:38:296 (6) - newcombo fixed

-------------------------------------------------
That's all~
Good luck

L i d a N wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]

1. AR+1　　fixed
2. 01:50:000 (4) - Somehow feels better when you change it to one repeat and add a circle @01:50:494, just my opinion.fixed

Byakugan249 wrote:

kosiga's Hard:
01:11:923(1) - 1 grid up for the end point fixed
01:41:428(1) - ^ fixed

Snowy Dream wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]
00:24:615 (x) - add a note? sorry, no change

1. 00:14:560 (4,5) - Do something like this: http://puu.sh/6wtg Blanket is good here
2. 00:35:000 Add a circle?
3. 00:48:846 (1) - Finish
4. 00:53:956 (1) - Start it with a finish
5. 00:59:395 Circle?
6. 01:15:219 (1) - Spinner is so short for beginners.. End it at 01:17:197

1. 00:00:879 (1) - http://puu.sh/6wni Set in in this way, better
2. 00:03:681 (4) - Distance snap
3. 00:04:340 (5) - If you used distance snap on (4), move it at x488 y176
4. 00:05:164 (1) - Start it with a finish
5. 00:06:483 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/6wnV Imho you should improve the shapes of sliders
6. 00:10:604 (3) - Finish is better than whistle, but it is just a suggestion
7. 00:11:923 (1) - Start it with a finish
8. 00:48:846 (1) - Finish
9. 01:05:000 (2) - Last waypoint 1 grid up, 2nd waypoint 1 grid left
10. 01:15:219 (1) - Finish at the beginning
11. 01:17:197 Add a circle? With a nc maybe..
12. 01:17:527 (3) - Finish at the end (01:17:857)
13. 01:36:318 (1,2) - Set it like this for a better blanket: http://puu.sh/6wpA (It's preferable to use 4 waypoints on sliders btw)
14. 01:38:956 (5) - New combo
15. 01:40:274 (1) - Remove nc
16. 01:44:230 (1) - Finish?
17. 01:50:824 (1) - Please use Normal Custom1 volume 10% here

1. 00:01:703 (2) - I don't like this whistle, I suggest you to remove it
2. 00:24:120 (2) - http://puu.sh/6wqW Can you set in this way and add a repeat? Or just add a circle at 00:24:615?
3. 00:26:758 (2) - 1 grid up
4. 00:26:923 (3) - x136 y256 is better
5. 00:27:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - Snap with 2 if you followed my suggestion

1. 01:41:428 (4) - Last waypoint 1 grid up
2. Good job

Chewin wrote:

kosiga's Hard:

1. 00:01:703 (2) - I don't like this whistle, I suggest you to remove it ok remove
2. 00:24:120 (2) - http://puu.sh/6wqW Can you set in this way and add a repeat? Or just add a circle at 00:24:615? sorry, no change
3. 00:26:758 (2) - 1 grid up grid move to x228,y256
4. 00:26:923 (3) - x136 y256 is better change it
5. 00:27:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - Snap with 2 if you followed my suggestion grid move to x228,y256

Chewin wrote:

Hai gamu

Easy:

1. 00:14:560 (4,5) - Do something like this: http://puu.sh/6wtg Blanket is good here
2. 00:35:000 Add a circle?
3. 00:48:846 (1) - Finish
4. 00:53:956 (1) - Start it with a finish
5. 00:59:395 Circle?
6. 01:15:219 (1) - Spinner is so short for beginners.. End it at 01:17:197

All fixed~

Normal:

1. 00:00:879 (1) - http://puu.sh/6wni Set in in this way, better
2. 00:03:681 (4) - Distance snap
3. 00:04:340 (5) - If you used distance snap on (4), move it at x488 y176
4. 00:05:164 (1) - Start it with a finish
5. 00:06:483 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/6wnV Imho you should improve the shapes of sliders
6. 00:10:604 (3) - Finish is better than whistle, but it is just a suggestion no fixed
7. 00:11:923 (1) - Start it with a finish
8. 00:48:846 (1) - Finish
9. 01:05:000 (2) - Last waypoint 1 grid up, 2nd waypoint 1 grid left
10. 01:15:219 (1) - Finish at the beginning
11. 01:17:197 Add a circle? With a nc maybe.. no fixed
12. 01:17:527 (3) - Finish at the end (01:17:857)
13. 01:36:318 (1,2) - Set it like this for a better blanket: http://puu.sh/6wpA (It's preferable to use 4 waypoints on sliders btw)
14. 01:38:956 (5) - New combo
15. 01:40:274 (1) - Remove nc
16. 01:44:230 (1) - Finish?
17. 01:50:824 (1) - Please use Normal Custom1 volume 10% here sorry.I can not understand

other fixed~

Insane:

1. 01:41:428 (4) - Last waypoint 1 grid up fixed~
2. Good job Thanks :3

I wish you good luck then o/

-Gamu- wrote:

[*]01:50:824 (1) - Please use Normal Custom1 volume 10% here sorry.I can not understand [/list]

Chewin wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

[*]01:50:824 (1) - Please use Normal Custom1 volume 10% here sorry.I can not understand [/list]

Timing > Add timing section > + > Sound > Set Normal Custom 1 >volume 10%

xD

justnobody wrote:

late mod late mod~

[Easy]
00:34:670 - add note?
the whole easy diff sounds kinda broken...

[Normal]
00:56:098 (5,1) - start the new combo at (5)?
01:06:648 (3,1,2) - sound strange...remove 01:07:307 (1) and add note at 01:07:142 and 01:07:472?

[Insane]
00:01:868 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the whistles here doesn't sound good in my ears. consider removing them? sorry, no fixed
00:15:384 (6) - sounds odd. sorry, no fixed

and last thing: about tags.
are you sure tags like "playstation2" necessary...? I feel the need to

anyway star.

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que
I like this song :3 me too~

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:14:560 (4) - try this ? http://puu.sh/75CW　fixed
00:56:098 (4) - remove clap and end at 00:56:593 ? follow the vocal better sorry.no fixed
00:58:076 (7) - end at 00:59:230 ? same reason as ^ sorry.no fixed
01:28:406 (1,1,2) - different times repeat sliders together in a short time.. this kinda hard to read when they end , maybe change some sliders to 2 sliders. for example , 01:28:406 (1) - change this to 2 sliders , 01:30:714 (1) - this to a repeat-slider and a slider this change(01:28:406~01:32:033)
01:50:824 (1) - I suggest spinner end at 01:57:417 and silenced the ending ok. fixed

[Normal]
OMG , this spacing.. this is a Hard's spacing ;_;
00:26:593 (4) - hey , don't follow guitar here.. it is very odd , don't you think end at 00:27:087 to follow the vocal is much better ? fixed
00:32:197 (2,3,4) - this is obey the ds rules.. but I'm sure it is still hard to read for newbies , change something to a slider will helps a lot ok. 00:32:197~00:32:527 - slider add
00:43:571 (1) - just suggestion here , start at 00:43:406 , it sound better if follow vocal fixed
00:44:890 (1) - start at 00:44:725 , same reason as ^ fixed
01:07:472 (5,6) - slider first then circle later is better to read and play imo.. fixed
01:09:945 (1) - try a slider from 01:09:780 to 01:10:109 and a cirlce at 01:10:274 ? sound better ok. fixed
01:13:571 (3,1) - I don't like sliders overlap like this.. maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/75Gb ok. fixed
01:16:538 (1,2) - kinda empty here.. try some rhyme like this ? http://puu.sh/75Gr ok. fixed
01:28:406 (1) - start at 01:28:241 , follow the vocal here is better imo ok. fixed
01:50:824 (1) - end at 01:57:417 and silence ok. fixed

[Insane]
00:06:483 (5) - umm.. I suggest change a shape.. this kind of slider is not good to play imo , suddenly slow down then suddenly fast.. hmm...small change
00:43:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - delete 00:43:406 (3,4,5,6) , add slider from 00:43:406 to 00:43:736 , add circles at 00:43:901 and 00:44:065 , sound better ok.fixed
01:50:824 (1) - start at 01:50:989 , end at 01:57:417 , add a note at 01:50:824 , play better if change the stream like this ok.fixed

that's all
good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]
00:00:879 - 00:05:000 - hitsound too noisy.. volume down a bit plz ok. 10% down
00:07:142 - 00:09:450 - ^ ^
00:16:703 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/75HQ fixed
00:24:615 - add a note or something here.. sound empty here sorry, no change. (I like this rhythm.) but I hear the opinion of other people
00:27:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is stack with 00:26:758 (2) in edit , but when playing it is not stack well.. plz move them right and down a bit to make them stack well change it!
00:43:241 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - to follow the vocal better , you can try this http://puu.sh/75Iw < I think this is better umm...Do not match me a little. (match it rhythm with 00:37:967 1,2,3,4,5)
00:44:890 (3) - move to 00:44:725 and add note at 00:45:219 if you changed ^ sorry, no change. I think with an upper sentence. I do not change it now , but change it, if necessary. thanks idea
01:17:857 (1) - move to 01:17:692 and circle at 01:18:186　sorry, no change. because do not match KIAI TIME
01:28:241 (1) - end at 01:28:571 and circle at 01:28:736 , sound better change it
01:50:494 (5) - not stack ? kinda hard to read there is a circle after the slider.. change it
01:50:824 (1) - same as Normal fixed

Nivalis wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]
-> The HP Drain and OD is unbalanced with the AR >< AR-1
00:09:615 (3) - Add clap on repeat also? fixed
00:27:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks weird in play mode, maybe use repeating slider here? sorry, no repeating slider
00:31:044 (3) - Use whistle rather than clap? sorry, no change
00:46:208 (1,2) - Add clap on (1)'s repeat and on (2)'s end? fixed
00:59:065 (7) - Clap here? fixed
01:14:560 (1) - Move the last inherit section to the spinner's end what do you mean?

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

Sorry for being quite late ><

[General]
-> You have a video, so you might want to turn "Letterbox in Breaks" off. Not necessary though hmm...fixed
-> Combo color 1 and 2 looks similar, try this color maybe: combo color 2 changed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:2badd]gamu mod.png[/attachment:2badd]

-> This is a fast-paced song, I think lead-in time 1.5 seconds is better ok. fixed

[Easy]
00:09:615 (2) - Move the inherit section to the slider end (your current position allows players to hear 80% volume sliderslide) fixed
00:11:098 (3) - Add finish on slider end maybe? I can hear cymbal sounds fixed
00:29:065 (2) - Curve the slider like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165045 ? fixed
00:33:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - Arrange like this for better flow : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165046 ? fixed
00:49:175 (x) - Add a 1/2 slider here with clap on the slider's start maybe? xD circle add
00:53:956 (1) - I checked AIMod and it says this is still too early after a spinner for an Easy >< Move to 00:53:131　(end)

01:20:824 (5) - Err... spacing? (It supposed to be 1 grid down to follow the spacing) fixed
01:21:483 (6,7,8) - Make them perfectly symmetrical in the center like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165049 maybe? fixed
01:42:912 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/2? ok. fixed

[Normal]
00:09:615 (1,2) - Add clap on slider's start? ok. fixed
00:37:967 (3) - Make this slider facing left better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165050 fixed
00:47:527 (3,4) - You can slightly curve them to get more flow : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165052 fixed
01:09:285 (9) - 9 combos for Normal is too much imo, try add new combo somewhere? 01:07:472 - new combo add
01:15:219 (1) - Not perfectly symmetrical (you might want to drag the 2nd waypoint a bit to the lower left and the 3rd a bit to the upper left) I'm pretty bad at making a slider. little changed
01:27:087 (2) - Move up a bit so it doesn't touch 01:26:098 (2)? fixed

[Insane]
00:25:934 (4) - Remove clap? Sounds better without it imo fixed
00:42:252 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think it follows anything on the song (1/2 x 3 better imo) sorry.no fixed
01:05:659 (1,2,3) - Arrange like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165058 ? fixed
01:35:164 (4) - Move a bit to the left to form a triangle? fixed
01:41:428 (4) - Curving with more bezier points like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165061 is better imo because it doesn't break the flow fixed

I personally think your Insane is more to streamy Insane rather than a jumpy Insane, so I think AR8 on Insane and 7 on Hard is better.
Neat map, good luck -Gamu- :3 "Hard AR7" "Insane AR9" I think this

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi~ sorry for too late
Normal:

00:26:593(4) end at white behind　no fixed
01:04:835(?) add a note fixed


Easy:

fine


Insane:

00:58:406(2) the (3) is completely hidden, so reset the (2) no fixed...I think it is ok
01:22:307(3) not so beautiful, you can set 6 below and 1 left fixed


I like your insane diff
Good luck~

cmn_891127 wrote:

kosiga’s Hard:

00:09:120(4) it’s really easy to be ignored, you can set it in the left of (3) ok. change it
00:37:307(?) add a note sorry, no change
00:51:978(3,4,5,1) change to two 1/2 sliders, and spinner start at 00:52:637 sorry, no change. (I don't like short spinner 2000 )
01:08:626(1) the hitsound is just a little low change it

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Yo~
[General]
• You need to take the audio out of the video. Luckily I'm here to save the day. Use this video instead video Thanks :3 chganed!
• I think you should try offset 40 (-15) sounds right to me. ok.changed


[Easy]
♦ The Kiai time in this difficulty seems really choppy and it really doesn't flow well. Consider taking a look at that. "kiai time" I think it should be the all same.. so, no fixed
• 00:41:923 (1) - The end of the spinner should be on 00:43:406, matches the music a lot better, don't you think? fixed
• 00:43:891 (1) - Really awkwardly placed note. Doesn't really match the music where it is on the timeline IMO. no fixed
• 01:02:362 (1,2,3,4) - This part seems really empty. It's also pretty awkward to play since it doesn't really match the music. Maybe you should try something like this: fixed

• 01:04:670 - I think a note should be added in here with a finish, the song is just asking for it. sorry.no fixed
• 01:23:461 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:02:362 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
• 01:31:373 (2,3) - The space between these sliders is really weird and should be filled with a note to produce a better flow. fixed
• 01:33:681 (4) - Add a new combo on this note to match the lyrics and remove the new combo on 01:35:659 (1) -.fixed


[Normal]
• 00:06:483 (3) - Nothing big. I just thought the slider would end better on 00:07:142 sorry.no fixed
• 00:09:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - This whole pattern seems too much for a normal. I say it's pretty easy for newbies to screw up on this pattern. Consider changing this.change → this
• 00:16:373 (2) - I think you should simplify this pattern by removing this note. It makes the Normal more...Normal.
• 01:16:538 (1,2) - This might be really confusing for Normal players. I'd consider revising it. (1) circle change
• 01:28:241 (4) - NC on this slider to match with the lyrics. fixed


[Insane]
♦ Reduce the HP drain to compensate for the high AR. HP-1
• 00:22:472 - Why not add a note here. It would fit well with the music. sorry.miss..orz fixed
• 01:27:912 (6) - This slider is a tricky one. People wouldn't expect the next repeat and would force them to screw up and combo-break. circle change
• 01:40:109 (5,6) - This sounds a tad strange and I believe this would work better ok. fixed



[Overall]
Pretty solid, difficult map. Just a few suggestions and other stuff. A little more nazi-ing would make this map great.

I think it deserves a star ♪

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]
• 00:37:472 (2) - This here repeat is visible for a flash moment. Not many people would catch it on time. Consider making it more visible. sorry,no change (what do you mean?)
• 00:48:846 (1) - Add a finish and whistle to the start of this slider. It sounds weird because of the volume change so I'd make it stand out by adding the two hitsounds. ok. add finish and whistle
• 01:40:109 (5,6) - Add new combo on (3) and remove it on (1) to match the lyrics. ok. change it

kosiga wrote:

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]
• 00:37:472 (2) - This here repeat is visible for a flash moment. Not many people would catch it on time. Consider making it more visible. sorry,no change (what do you mean?)

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[kosiga's Hard]
• 00:37:472 (2) - This here repeat is visible for a flash moment. Not many people would catch it on time. Consider making it more visible. sorry,no change (what do you mean?)


The repeat on this slider is visible only for a quick moment. People won't see the repeat in time and would combo-break.

1. It is unrankable to silence both the ticks and the sliderslide.
2. You might want to turn the epilepsy warning on. The video becomes pretty bad regarding that at some point (aroud 00:54:270 - here).

1. This is really difficult for an Easy. Some of the rhythms used are pretty complex, and there are difficult patterns (mainly these 1/1 "streams").
2. 00:43:886 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need time to readjust their aim (or find their cursor) after a spinner. Also, the rhythm here is pretty unintuitive: the spinner is mapped on vocals, while this is mapped over the drums, and the switch isn't exactly expectable.
3. 01:17:842 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. Besides, 01:17:842 (1,2) - these two are hidden by the text that pops up after completing the spinner - new players might not have time to react to click them properly.

1. Pretty much the same comment as for Easy: the difficulty is a bit hard. Aside from that, the mapping itself is fine.

1. 00:00:864 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - For this part, the spacing changes for no reason at all. Why not keep a constant spacing (preferably the lower one to make some kind of speed change like in the song) ?
2. 00:37:457 (2) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a hitburst.
3. 00:51:963 (3,4,5) - I don't see why these have a higher spacing than (1,2). Reduce their spacing to the same as (1,2)'s ?
4. 01:22:787 (2) - Missing clap ?

1. AR9 just doesn't fit. The song and the map are far from being fast enough to warrant such high AR. It makes the map more confusing than it should be and lowers its quality.

Odaril wrote:

Hello~ request taken from #modreqs.

Odaril wrote:

Hello~ request taken from #modreqs.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. It is unrankable to silence both the ticks and the sliderslide. "normal-slidertick" remove
2. You might want to turn the epilepsy warning on. The video becomes pretty bad regarding that at some point (aroud 00:54:270 - here)."Display epilepsy warning" on!

Easy

1. This is really difficult for an Easy. Some of the rhythms used are pretty complex, and there are difficult patterns (mainly these 1/1 "streams").change the spacing and alignment.
2. 00:43:886 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need time to readjust their aim (or find their cursor) after a spinner. Also, the rhythm here is pretty unintuitive: the spinner is mapped on vocals, while this is mapped over the drums, and the switch isn't exactly expectable. 00:41:908 (1) - slider changed
3. 01:17:842 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. Besides, 01:17:842 (1,2) - these two are hidden by the text that pops up after completing the spinner - new players might not have time to react to click them properly.01:17:842 (1) - move down

Normal

1. Pretty much the same comment as for Easy: the difficulty is a bit hard. Aside from that, the mapping itself is fine.change the spacing and alignment.

Insane

1. AR9 just doesn't fit. The song and the map are far from being fast enough to warrant such high AR. It makes the map more confusing than it should be and lowers its quality. Hmm....understanding. AR8 changed!

The Easy and Normal need some work. Hard and Insane are... okay.

Odaril wrote:

kosiga's Hard
[*]00:37:457 (2) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a hitburst.

Odaril wrote:

kosiga's Hard

1. 00:00:864 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - For this part, the spacing changes for no reason at all. Why not keep a constant spacing (preferably the lower one to make some kind of speed change like in the song) ? ok. change DS 1.5x
2. 00:37:457 (2) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a hitburst. ok.... move it! Is this all right?
3. 00:51:963 (3,4,5) - I don't see why these have a higher spacing than (1,2). Reduce their spacing to the same as (1,2)'s ? ok. change it. DS 1.5x
4. 01:22:787 (2) - Missing clap ? remove it

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Odaril wrote:

kosiga's Hard
[*]00:37:457 (2) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a hitburst.

This is what I meant ^ ok... move repeat slider!! Is this all right?

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

こんにちわ~ こんにちわ～

Picked this up from #modreqs.

General
Some Notes are offbeat, you may need to experiment a bit with 1/3 snapping. sorry.I think had put a note in the 1 / 4

Stack leniency may be a bit too low on all diffs. Is there a good reason to keep it so low? ok. 2 → 5 changed~

Turn epilepsy warning OFF. This is meant for storyboards, not for videos. I see. fixed

Insane
Could need some extra finishes.

00:05:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - add finishes to each beginning.
00:17:182 (1) - add finish
00:19:820 (1) - ^
00:21:633 (3) - ^
00:22:457 (9) - ^
00:26:413 (1) - add finish to repeat
00:26:908 (2) - add finish.
00:27:732 (8) - ^
00:30:204 (7) - remove finish.
00:31:688 (1,3) - add finish
00:33:007 (9) - ^
00:36:963 (1,3) - ^
00:38:281 (9) - ^

argh, don't wanna continue this. Just add some finishes since they sound nice.

00:43:886 (4) - overlaps with sliderbody - looks stupid.
00:58:061 (1,2,3,4) - hard to tell where the slider begins.
01:50:974 (1) - start this 1/4 earlier. also, this spinner is WAY too long. please end it earlier.　no fixed..

Other fixed!

Normal
Need more finishes in the right places. I am, "finish" do not know where to use the

00:21:138 (1) - remove note and add a 1/2 slider. fixed
01:06:633 (6,1) - repeating sliders with more than 1 repeat is not a good idea. therefore, remove 1 repeat each and add a single note instead. slider changed
01:50:891 (1) - too long D: sorry.no fixed

Easy
What I don't like about your Normal and Easy diffs: The low spacing. You can, and actually should use higher spacings, this allows you to avoid stupid clusterfuck combos, and it makes the map a LOT easier to read. The way the maps are right now, there is always a high threat of having newsb click the beats too early because they're too close to each other. hmm...ok. 0.8x → 1.0x changed(Easy)

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

kosiga
Prolly the same stuff with the finishes as in Insane. You gotta remove some of them in this diff, though, because they are often at stupid notes...

00:06:468 (5) - volume is too high. volume change
00:09:270 (1,2,3) - those jumps don't play nice. I suggest to remove them and use normal spacing instead. sorry, no change
00:15:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think that reducing the volume here and in similar parts is a good idea. If anything, you should increase the volume instead. keep volume. but add 00:16:605 volume 70%
00:24:600 - add note to fill the awkward break. sorry, no change
00:52:457 (1) - the soinner starts way too early - the vocals go "ni" here: 00:52:622 . yeah. but spinner score 2000 is very hard. so no change it
01:11:908 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't lower the volume. ok. remove timing point
01:50:809 (1) - way too long ._. sorry, no change. ._.;

I don't like your sound manipulations. The finish hitsound placement needs work. No major problems, though. I regret it

-Gamu- wrote:

[kosiga’s Hard]


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