Note that some points may lead to remapping a whole section.
This is mostly an aesthetic mod since I don't see any major issues with the rhythm here.
EZYGeneral:
I would increase the ds by 0.1x since some patterns look really messy, especially with this cs.
using cs3.5 would also help.
- 00:26:401 (3,4) - The overlapping sliders look really messy here. Something like this could look nicer while (4) emphasizes the vocals
- 00:28:801 (5) - NC. I also think a straight or sharp would fit better here, to emphasize the distorted bass thing
- 00:40:801 (3) - You could fit a really nice slidershape here, maybe something like this?
- 00:43:201 (1,3) - These two sliders are touching each other
- 00:42:601 (4,2) - I'd overlap these two circles
- 00:47:401 (5) - Place this slider here to make it look a bit nicer
- 00:48:001 (1) - I'd bring this down just a little bit so it flows a little nicer
- 00:50:401 (3) - You never use the top right corner (ctrl+a) so I would make this slider go up instead, kinda like this
- 00:52:201 (4,1,2,3,4) - You may need to remap this if you applied the last point. If you did not, I would curve this slider 00:55:201 (3) - like this instead and overlap these two 00:54:001 (2,4) -
- 01:00:001 (3) - NC this since theres a change in intensity
- 01:02:401 (1,2) - These are not parallel
- 01:04:801 (3) - owo?
- 01:08:401 (2,3) - fix blanket
NRMLGeneral: You break the ds way too much in this diff :/
I would consider resnapping everyting after this
- 00:46:801 (5,6) - I'd replace these with a slider going like this
- 01:00:001 (3) - make this a 1/2 reverse slider and remove this 01:00:601 (4) - . The 1/4 reverse seems really out of place here :l
Nothing much to say here, fix ds and rhythm and it should be alright.
DM me if I did any mistakes
Pretty nice set, gl!
