Hi. /me from my Queue
Sorry for the delay.
[General]find a new BG. this one looks awkward.
Make the offset the same
Keep kiai time in all diff the same. NM has a shorter one.
[Esay]I strongly recommend you to change SV, but it is a huge work.
00:15:616 (4) - add NC (because you have a NC in the second period same slider)
00:28:675 (4) - add one return or add a circle at 00:29:734
01:18:440 (2) - put it in the same position with 01:16:322 (3)
01:20:558 (4) - grid3 1 grid right--nazi
01:31:498 (3) - decrease volume?
copy and paste is actually not recommended.
[Normal]00:21:969 (2,3) - spacing
00:29:734 (1,2) - decrease two return, add note on 00:30:440
00:32:557 (1,2) - ^--suggestion
00:35:381 (1,2,3) - make right triangle
01:14:910 (1) - finish at end
[Zenbu..]<--del the dots
00:12:616 (2) - delete
00:16:322 (3) - change the shape, dont touch (1)
00:19:851 (1,2) -
http://puu.sh/6Lpv00:23:381 (6) - del 4 returns and add note on 00:24:087
00:26:910 (1) - reshape, looks strange
00:33:969 (3,4,5) - stack perfectly
00:36:439-00:36:616 - +slider
00:41:734 (3,4) - make it into a reversible slider
00:43:145 (3,4) - ^
00:48:792 (1) -hmm,start at 00:48:969>
http://puu.sh/6LpS[Uso!!]00:13:145 (1) - change into a circle
00:14:028 (5) - del
00:18:086 (3,4) - exchange position
00:32:910 (2,3) -
http://puu.sh/6Lqr00:40:498 (5,6) - exchange 5&6, 5+whistle
00:41:910 (5) - move to 368,40?
00:46:675 (9) - del and put spinner on this position. dont change the length of spinner
00:48:881 (4) - del
00:52:410 (2) - ^
00:53:116 (2) - ^
00:57:969 (1) - stack with 00:57:086 (4)
00:59:381 (1) - start at 00:59:557 and del one return
00:59:910 (2) - delete
01:00:439 (5) - stack with 1
01:01:322 (2) - del
01:03:792 (1) - ^
01:12:439 (2,3) - change into slider
01:13:145 (5,6) - ^
01:21:969 (1) - start at 01:22:145 and del one return
01:22:498 (2) - delete
01:31:851 (1) - decrease volume
That's all.
Good luck