hello mmmh map
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Dainesl wrote:
here's the m4m you requested xd (All points made are merely suggestions unless stated otherwise.)GeneralAIMod reports conflicting countdown, unsnapped objects and unsnapped Kiais in all diffs, check that outInner Oni00:07:671 (47,48,49) - perhaps change the pattern a bit to be a bit more similar to 00:09:004 (58,59,60) - ? sort of like kkd/dkd respectively?
changed the second one to kkd
00:30:837 (253) - i'd say either make this note k or 00:31:254 (258) - this note d. would be a bit more consistent with what you mapped in the stream
went for the d one
00:47:671 (394,395) - consider swapping these? 394 sounds exactly the same as the note before it so having it be k would be a good idea imo
i prefer making a colour swap between 395 and 396
00:58:338 (481,482) - see above
01:22:004 (693,694,695) - consider making this kdk to follow the lowering pitch of the synth'd piano in the next 2 or so seconds a bit more? whether or not you make any of the other 2/3 notes kat is up to you tbh
i think a k on this downbeat would sound weird tbh
01:53:004 (861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869) - how about having these patterns be ddkd dkkdk? would transition into the next few seconds a bit better imo
changed the ddkd
02:15:670 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - consider making this stream more kat-heavy, given that you've mostly followed the song's base rhythm and patterning to this point?
there are already more kats than dons in that stream so i guess its okay
03:09:337 - i'd say add one or two notes at this bit just after the spinner; would be relatively appropriate given the previous spinner, plus it helps fill in some of the gaps you left while keeping the section calm
it sounds really weird to me xD
03:40:004 - ^ but just add the one note
done for this one
04:09:337 (416) - consider making this don instead to emphasise the kat before a bit more?
yes
yes this map is cool i like itOniI'd strongly suggest making the OD5.5 (maybe even 6?) here, it's relatively normal for an Oni so having it be OD5 is a bit too low imo. Maybe have HP be 5.5 as well or something.
00:23:671 (120) - consider removing this note to give the player a small break here? would separate this from the inner a bit more
k
01:11:504 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - I suggest that this pattern be changed slightly; would help add a bit of variation to this section considering the patterns are already very similar
01:22:171 (167) - same suggestion as Inner Oni. again, whether or not you make any of these 2/3 notes kat is up to you
01:44:171 - consider making this section up to the spinner slightly less dense (like, remove about 3 notes or so?) considering that the doublet and triplet combinations are somewhat complex.
02:30:171 - also consider removing a couple notes in this section, especially because there's no real breaks here as such for about 95 notes?
03:29:171 (21) - considering the fact that there's a few layers of instrumentation going on here, perhaps make this slider into a few notes instead?
04:09:337 (164) - same as Inner Oni again, but also consider making the kat before this a finisher given the loud bass?
04:19:503 (65,66,67,68,69) - and 04:20:837 (76,77,78,79,80) - perhaps change these patterns up from what they are now to provide a bit more variation in this bit? instead of kdkkd/dkddk maybe make these kkdkd/ddkdk? something minor yeh
idk, seems like a good map i guessMuzukashii00:28:337 (88) - perhaps make this a don to vary this pattern from the previous 3/4 one and also to show the slightly lower pitch than before?
01:46:587 (111) - maybe put this note on the red tick instead of the blue tick? would be a bit simpler to play given that 01:46:004 (109,110) - helps to keep a 1/1 rhythm for players
idk sounds weird and doesnt fit with the rest
01:51:921 (129) - ^
02:34:504 (55,56) - Either make this k k if you're going for the sort of opposite-pitch deal here, or make 02:35:004 (57,58) - d k instead to help make the pattern a bit cleaner.
i do think it's fine as it is
02:39:671 (78) - maybe make this k to be consistent with the fact that this and 02:39:837 (79) - sound pretty much the same?
changed for variety
yeah i got nothing else here really sorry
this set's ok xd i'll give it a star thanks bud
Thank you guys :pfrukoyurdakul wrote:
Hello, M4M.
Check your aimod on every diff, you have some unsnapped objects.
[Inner Oni]
Since this is a pretty solid diff, these will be only the suggestions. Speaking of, I recommend increasing 1/6 usage due to the following spots I've point out, because this difficulty is following keyboards mainly and it'll provide a better sound-related map.
00:48:337 - You can use a 1/6 dkkd here, by removing 00:48:254 (399) - this note. It will sound better with the fast keyboard.
01:02:671 (509,510,511) - How about a 1/6 dddk? The keyboard is in actually 1/6 and it will flow better. If you reject, I suggest dkk or ddk due to the keyboard pitch, and on ddk 01:05:337 (532,533,534) - it will be consistent with this. The second one is also in 1/6.
01:02:754 (511) - this is actually a 1/8 starting from this note lol. it'd sound weird tbh
01:28:671 (715,716,717) - Change this to ddk, 01:28:837 (717) - this note is a snare sound on it and you used kat on 01:35:504 (748) - this which means it'll be consistent.
i'm not exactly following the same layers though. ddk could work but i'd rather have a classic k kkd finish
02:11:004 - Same suggestion with 00:48:337.
03:59:670 - It's obvious that you're following drums but I think having a nice 1/6 1/4 which goes on kk(dkkd)kddk will be better. The point I've mentioned is the suggestion point of 1/6.
04:09:670 - I think a slider will fit here.
really subjective but i really like that blank spot
And, for the last stream:
04:17:504 (481,482) - Ctrl + g, 04:18:753 (496,497) - ctrl + g, 04:20:171 (513,514) - ctrl + g, 04:20:421 (516,517) - ctrl + g. With these swaps, I think it fits much better.
i'll keep the current one :p
I didn't mention about consistency issues with the suggestions I've made, so please check similiar parts yourself if you accept any of my suggestions.
[Oni]
00:04:337 (14,15) - For those two, since you used a 5-plet on 00:07:171 (22,23,24,25,26) - this one, I think you can use a kkd in order to emphasize the keyboard.
00:23:671 (120) - I think deleting this note will provide a good break, your every stanza has a 1/1 break and deleting this note will keep it consistent.
00:43:671 (97) - ^
00:54:337 (171) - ^ (I think you'll get the general idea.)
01:57:754 (326) - You don't have a finisher in Inner Oni. Either add one on it or remove this one.
01:58:171 (327) - ^
03:37:504 - Instead of a spinner, I recommend a slider which ends 03:38:670 - here, and you can put a note on 03:38:837 - this since it's pretty prominent.
[Muzukashii]
00:48:004 (157,158) - I think this gap is a bit much compared to the rest of the section. The maximum gap is 1/1 but you have 5/2 here. Consider adding a note.
nope i need a 2/1 break at least
03:07:504 (160) - Same goes on with Oni.
you didnt link anything related to this in the oni xD
03:36:837 (74,75,76,77,78) - Not sure about this. Are 5-plet 1/4 allowed on this BPM? I know there is a huge blank spot before it but still, I don't know.
03:37:504 (1) - Same suggestion I did on Oni.
04:09:337 - You have a note on Oni and Inner Oni here, and 04:09:087 (5) - this one is not a finisher. Consider changing by adding a note or removing it. I suggest removing the finisher and adding a note due to the snare sound.
[Futsuu]
02:39:837 (128,129,130,131) - You have used harder rhythms on that diff, and considering this I think you can turn those two to k d d k, it'll create a difference between 02:34:504 (109,110,111,112) - those two.
i really want to mark the piano sounds here
03:07:504 (173) - Same suggestion mentioned in other diffs.
03:37:504 (1) - This is mentioned earlier as well.
[Kantan]
03:23:004 (24,25) - Not sure about these 1/2 snappings. Even though they're the same color, I think they are a bit too hard.
changed
That will be all for the specific difficulty suggestions. In general, I think in all diffs you can use more finishers (most will be on every 8th stanza). Secondly, on Inner Oni the last stream is the most dense one and it has a kiai on it, yet Muzukashii, Futsuu and Kantan are too easy compared to the other diffs and with the kiai which doesn't fit the hardest part in the song. Maybe you can create a harder ending on them in the future.
A very interesting map, fun to play, and a bit hard :^) I hope my mod helps, good luck.
04:10 Arrival: tell me when you have time
04:11 Surono: residemsleepor length 4:20
04:11 Arrival: XD
04:12 Arrival: just look quickly
04:12 Arrival: no need to full od
04:12 Arrival: mod
04:12 Arrival: lul
04:12 Surono: qqqqqq
04:12 Arrival: :D
04:12 Surono: :DDDDDdd
04:16 Surono: dem already 24horse
04:16 Surono: +3m
04:16 Arrival: :eyes:
04:16 Surono: quack checkeng
04:17 Arrival: caw
04:19 Surono: 00:07:504 - kat for katana cuz dkdkdkdkdk donkatdonkatdonkat donatdonat.........
04:19 Arrival: muzu?
04:19 Surono: katan
04:19 Arrival: a
04:20 Surono: kantan
04:20 Surono: 00:33:504 - move to right 1/1 demm....
04:21 Arrival: ok done for first kat
04:21 Arrival: ya ok
04:22 Surono: 00:48:004 - dem empty, d here as similar 00:47:337 -
04:22 Surono: same next qwqwqwqwwq
04:23 Arrival: done
04:24 Arrival: and for the other kiais
04:24 Arrival: too
04:25 Surono: 01:04:171 - 01:07:504 - delete and similar next.. dem spanking babiestaco? cuz da differ with footshoe just.. without slider here, yeh as break for kantan. so keep or delete?
04:26 Arrival: ok i delete
04:27 Surono: 02:05:837 - k and similar next , to balance with footshoe density, dem futsuu double 1/2 3plet then kantan is 1/1 3plet
04:29 Arrival: done
04:30 Surono: 03:12:504 - 03:15:171 - u oki if these delete? cuz similar density with footshoe
04:31 Surono: dem ok just it
well i'd rather have more than not enough, if people go looking for like alpha complex as tags they are hoping to find something at least a bit related to them so in the end why notKuo Kyoka wrote:
why in the tags got a lot of unneccessary names? Yes, I know those are the one involved in this album too, but not in this song ... Kinda unneccessary to tags them in the song where they're not
Also 鑓田 (alpha complex) is the one who made a short MV in video about new albums of "Diverse System" in C91 https://youtu.be/0fG1wYRRY4g?t=1m06s, tho, it's not a full video but also you didn't added the video in this map, why tagging him/her?
Just my opinion. Good luck btw!
thankskomasy wrote:
gratz!
thanksCharlotte wrote:
congratz