- 00:08:293 (2) - For seeing this note, this note expressed like 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - the others, but music is differnent, 00:08:374 - tbh this part's song is not so loud, then you don't give same intense with others in this note. you should make just triplet or delete 00:08:374 - this rhythm.
- 00:14:131 (1,3,4,5) - I think you intend blanket here. but blanket is not perfect, you should check and fix it for better visual.
- 00:25:563 - this part has quiet symbol sound, if you add a note here, rhythm could be better for expressing.
- 00:25:968 (1,2) - You should make it into one slider, for seeing 00:20:779 (1) - and 00:00:023 (1) - , you made it as slider, but in here, you made two circlesm it makes bad consistent of pattern and intense, you should make it consistent.
- 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - you didn't use this circle patterns well, then this pattern looks it has more intense than others, without any reason. you should make it into 2 sliders and 1 circle. I know you intend pentagon, but yea,,,,,, you use weird way.