HellDawn wrote:

mjw5150's Normal
Add preview point *-*
00:56:699- clap
Fix it
Hard
Please recheck your combos. Ok, I'll recheck it.
02:02:319- New combo Fix
02:27:819- 1 grid downI don't think so

JoJo wrote:

回学校了再来MOD

先支持了=w=

shortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshort

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• ●I suggest Offset: 256 (Note: Before try this plz read my mod firstly.)
  ●Add "mjw5150" into tags.
  ●Check all KIAI sections by youreself and resnap them.

• ●Disable useless countdown.
  ●01:16:006 (4) - Plz stack this perfectly.
  ●01:25:006 (2) - ^
  ●01:37:006 (2) - ^

• ●

  Rules wrote:

  Each mapset must have at least two osu!standard difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. The difficulty of a single map should remain consistent, whilst the set should provide a steady difficulty curve without any large gaps which could alienate groups of players at certain skill levels. This ensures that players of all experience levels are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love.

  Since Alace sensei told me that it's okay if you only exceed a little, so please try to change some patterns and make sure it's ≤3.10 star ratings.

JoJo wrote:

My ignorable baka modding here !~~

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●I suggest Offset: 256 (Note: Before try this plz read my mod firstly.)
  ●Add "mjw5150" into tags.
  ●Check all KIAI sections by youreself and resnap them.

[Hard]

• ●Disable useless countdown.
  ●01:16:006 (4) - Plz stack this perfectly.
  ●01:25:006 (2) - ^
  ●01:37:006 (2) - ^

mjw5150 wrote:

中秋节半夜寂寞的1B
仍颗星星睡觉去~
Your message is too short.

Raging Bull wrote:

Normal:
Use tickrate 2. Sounds better.
+1 AR so there's not a lot of circles I guess.
Nothing much to say. Probably map to the end though? You have like 10 more seconds left anyways.

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi, tell me what you fixed and what you didn't fix. If you say no, please say why. These are all suggestions unless I said so otherwise.

General:
Hard has countdown while normal does not. Please disable it for hard.Fix
I liked the old name better. At least put 5150's normal or something. The diff name is bothering me now.Add normal
I don't really like 2 diff map sets. Try to make another diff. Could be an insane if you want.Ouch...lazy always, and hardly that I can make an insane
Combo colors are different. It's not a big deal, but maybe you can agree on what combo colors you want for consistency? Fix

Hard:
Big jump in difficulty settings here. Maybe -1 AR -2 OD?
Map to the end.Fix all

Nothing much to say. It's a good map. No kds.Kds for someone who help my map, whatever the degree is.

Raging Bull wrote:

Why is it called 5150 no Normal? Is it an accident or on purpose?

Raging Bull wrote:

Hmm well okay. And since you gave me a kudosu, I'll star your map.

xykbear wrote:

M4M request
Aoi的无节操Mod
[box=┗[+ω+:77178]]
[Hard]
00:02:506 (5) - 第三个节点下移3格|美观
00:06:256 (7) - 去掉finish，加这感觉很奇怪
00:06:443 (1) - finish
00:30:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 既然用了变间距那就让其分布的均匀点。可以将（2，3）往外摆或者将（5，6）往内摆
00:31:193 (5) - new combo|便于区分
00:31:755 (1) - 开头加finish
00:36:068 (2) - 右移一个|nazi.space
00:57:818 (5) - 既然拉了这么长那就做个fade in的效果吧～
01:00:443 (2) - 开头加finish
01:26:318 (1) - 改用whistle
02:06:255 (2) - ^
02:23:880,02:24:255 - 添加circle，否则这段的节奏很奇怪
02:24:443 (11) - new combo
//做的很好，在音效方面，特别是finish音效最好参照下Normal

Nymph_ wrote:

谁说以后自己不上传图的 谁啊? 谁啊?

切 果然节操都给Bakajo了么

Moonlight wrote:

I only did a little modding, as I think the map is good enough. I do feel some parts of the map are a little off sync with the music, but everyone is different so I didn't change it at all.

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~
Please Read The Rules~
Sorry for that, I have add it~Uncle Tails~

Hard
HP Drain +1 Fix it
00:02:506 (5) - The tail is overlapping with (3)Staying, no a big issue
00:30:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to read~A little hard, but for my map is the highest diff, so I make some jumping in some parts.
01:10:443 (2) - Ugly Slider X.X
02:40:055 (2) ^It just make playing smoothly, and I don't think it's ugly enough.
_________________________________________
That's all~

Kanon wrote:

首先是aimod
Warning: [5150's Normal] 01:00:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [5150's Normal] 02:06:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Hard] 01:00:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Hard] 02:06:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
All fix
General
Combo colour颜色需要加深，和背景的对比度太低了。
还有2种combo colour颜色过于相近，这是不好的。因为会无法区分new combo （我MOD的时候只好改好颜色才能吐槽NC._.)
OK 颜色加深了
Hard
AR+1 因为你的摆法前面很多纯靠反应才能打的跳，换了以后玩起来感觉会好很多
00:03:256 (1) - 不要NC 如果非要的话，00:05:506 (5) - 也加上
00:09:068- 这根绿线没用 直接用红线代替了
00:21:443 (1,2,3) - 1的clap放到3上
00:22:380 (4) - 头的clap放到中间 可能会好听点，不然实在clap听起来很突兀
00:27:068 (4) - NC

00:37:568 (2) - 这样遮挡比较蛋疼，头尾遮挡住一边就好了。都遮住-.-
00:43:005 (4,5,6,7) - 这里可以摆好看一点。
02:03:630 (5,6,7,8) - 摆好一点
02:20:693 (8) - NC 后面的02:21:068 (1) - 不要NC
02:48:443 (1) - 和normal一样
整张map的flow一直在转圈, 让我想起来lkp的图- -这个diff还不错
全部都改完了！
给你颗星星，加油吧~

Muya wrote:

[Hard]:
Make a 1 sec Audio Lead-in?
Slider Tick Rate: 1
00:09:068 - this break time start at 00:09:443?
00:45:068 (1,2) - (1) remove new combo (2) add new combo
01:26:318 (1) - end at 01:28:943 , and some add note to 01:29:693 ~ 01:30:068 ?
02:48:255 (1) - end at 02:50:505
All fix, besides

1. Slider Tick Rate: 1

Tanmak wrote:

Great.




Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.

Aleks719 wrote:

General
You easiiest diff has 3.08 stars. Reduce it to 3 or less than 3 stars? :S
BG resolution is 1024x767, make 1024x768 please
I suggest to use noiseless soft sliderbody (in attachments). imo, will sounds better
Hum.. I checked you timing. i got +10ms offset for every timing point :
offset 266, bpm 160
offset 4953, bpm 160
All of them fix
5150's Normal
It will be update later, this guy is absent.

Hard
OD +1
00:54:828 (4,6) - add 2 whistlesFix
01:19:765 (3,4,5) - remove claps from (3) and (5), add whistles to (3,4,5)Fix
01:22:765 (4) - remove clap from the start, add whistles to the start, to the endFix
01:23:703 (6) - imo, this note must be at 01:23:515 + whistleFix
01:31:203 (2) - add clapFix
02:09:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo doesn't fit's the musicstaying for it will take smoothly playing
02:18:828 (4) - add finish to the start instead of clapFix
02:19:765 (6,7) - vise versa : Fix

02:23:140 (6,7) - ^Staying, not big issue

02:25:765 (1,2,3) - remove clap from 2, add whistle to (1,2,3)Fix
02:28:765 (8,9) - add whistles to the start, end of (8), remove (9), add 2 notes+whistles, as on picture:

Staying
02:40:765 (4) - add whistleFix
02:41:140 (5) - add whistle, remove clapFix
02:41:515 (6) - add finishFix

Good luck, star

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~General~
  
  2 diffs are not enough for this to be bubbled soon though... If you want it that way though.
  
  ~5150's Normal~
  
  Looks good...
  
  ~Hard~

1. 00:32:140 (2): Try moving this to x: 360 y:208
2. 00:55:296 (6): To x:320 y:184???

1. add "Minato Tomoka" in Tags (character's name)
2. Preview Point: 59890 (it's 59881 in Hard dif)

1. 01:23:329 (4) - add whistle at the end
2. 01:25:203 (2) - ^
3. 02:13:766 (2) - add whistle at the beginning, the turn, and the end [as 01:07:765 (3)]
4. 02:29:329 (4) - add whistle at the end
5. 02:33:453 (2) - add finish at the beginning

1. 00:05:516 (5) - remove whistle at the end
2. 00:06:078 (6,7) - add whistle
3. 00:32:515 (3) - add finish at the end
4. 00:59:890 (1) - remove finish at the beginning, and add it at end

Pereira006 wrote:

[5150's Normal]

Cicle size +1 this will great gameplay IMO

pleasse slider tick rate is 2 because this fit this song IMO all diff tick rate should same
00:48:454 (1) - Put add Finisht hitsound only start slider?
01:03:828 (5) - Put new combo and at 01:06:454 (1) - Remove new combo

KSHR wrote:

5150's Normal

1. 01:23:329 (4) - add whistle at the end
2. 01:25:203 (2) - ^
3. 02:13:766 (2) - add whistle at the beginning, the turn, and the end [as 01:07:765 (3)]
4. 02:29:329 (4) - add whistle at the end
5. 02:33:453 (2) - add finish at the beginning

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ sorry later

IMO <- My opinions

General

you have Slider tick rate diferent Normal is 1 and hard is 2 you should same all diff cannot different Fix

Some suggestions

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hard

00:29:890 (6) - this hidden and hitburst that this is unrank i suggest get another place or stack it with the end slider 00:28:953 (3) if you change this don't forget fix spacing at 00:30:078 (7,8) reamp this part!
00:34:765 (4) - this clap i can't feel nothing so remove it clap?Fix
01:02:515 (3) - remove clap and 01:02:703 (4) - add clap 01:02:890 (5) - remove clap 01:01:953 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - that hitsound conscienty better IMOFix
01:30:453 (1) - Remove new combo Staying!

The play is fine and i like but you hitsound is random...i not like this hitsound sorry but
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That all i think
good luck~

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello!!! http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24043 or http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~General~
  
  2 diffs are not enough for this to be bubbled soon though... If you want it that way though.
  
  ~Hard~

1. 00:32:140 (2): Try moving this to x: 360 y:208 Remap this part!
2. 00:55:296 (6): To x:320 y:184??? OK~

That's it. I LOVE the song!!!!
Thank you and good luck.

KSHR wrote:

ouch.. moddi..ouch... modding


General

1. add "Minato Tomoka" in Tags (character's name)
2. Preview Point: 59890 (it's 59881 in Hard dif)

Fix~


Hard

1. 00:05:516 (5) - remove whistle at the endFix~
2. 00:06:078 (6,7) - add whistleFix~
3. 00:32:515 (3) - add finish at the endFix~
4. 00:59:890 (1) - remove finish at the beginning, and add it at endStaying ><

sry for my usefulness modding... T^T
Thx >< really~

Raging Bull wrote:

I just realized. You should change your BG a bit. You can see their panties and I'm sure it's not gonna be good :v

Raging Bull wrote:

They had different rules than we do now.

kanpakyin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

They had different rules than we do now.

Hum?What is that rule?New ranking rule is still on working. and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26946 was ranked on Aug 14, 2011.That is not too far from now...so...

peppy wrote:

No obscene imagery in background image/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity or near-nudity. Keep things PG, suitable for 12+.

Raging Bull wrote:

What is wrong about removing panties BG?

peppy wrote:

No obscene imagery in background image/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity or near-nudity. Keep things PG, suitable for 12+.

This includes nudity or near-nudity.

kanpakyin wrote:

Probably you should know that. And what's the obscene? Do you think just show a panties is obscene?

peppy wrote:

Keep things PG, suitable for 12+.

kanpakyin wrote:

Also this GUIDELINES have been created 2 years old,so why ztrot's map and Licnect's map didn't get unranked?That suggested these kind of BG is okey.

Raging Bull wrote:

It's more like, just because it got ranked before with some of these stuff, it doesn't mean that it's not wrong.

justnobody wrote:

silly mod maybe.

[Hard]
hitsound有點亂耶...害我retry了好幾次才pass...
00:01:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 本來想說全部hitsound去掉的...
不忍心的話試一下去掉第一combo的(1,6)吧.
00:23:703 (3,4,5,6) - 試試去掉(4,6)的clap
00:27:828 (3) - 弄彎一點?
00:29:515 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個在kiai出現的話還可以...現在算是overmap了
00:42:453 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我會想加finish耶...試試在(3)的頭或(5)的尾加finish?
00:57:828 (5) - 我覺得這裡放spinner好一點啦...
01:00:453 (2) - no clap?
01:02:515 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這裡不知怎麼放才好...我想還是跟vocal吧.
01:54:078 (2,3) - 我想這裡(2)該要一拍而(3)該要兩拍吧...
01:55:953 (1,2,1,2) - 全clap?
02:07:578 (5,6,7,8) - no clap?
02:30:640 (3) - no clap?

good luck.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Normal][/color]

这个难度问题不多；做的很好。
01:06:454 (1) - 开头加finish.
01:34:954 (1) - ^
01:36:454 (1) - ^

Kawayi Rika wrote:

MOD之前先膜拜一下神MAPPER sara~ ~(@^_^@)~ 神mapper什么的太夸张了，我距离太遥远了

[Hard]

00:44:140 (6) - 开头加finish.
00:44:515 (7) - ^ 因为之前在00:42:453 (3) - 加过finish所以没动了(才改的所以你不知道
01:02:703 (4) - 建议往右边移动一个格子.没变
01:03:078 (6) - add NC. 感觉还是比较有连贯性就没改了
01:35:140 - 这里加个note. 这个确实是~
01:35:890 (4,5) - 换成Slider?为了保持对称 我后面的slider都换成note了
02:12:078 (9) - CLAP去掉加Finish.保持
02:18:265 (2,3) - 这个去掉放个Slider会舒服点.好建议~
02:33:078 (4) - CLAP去掉。改了
02:46:578 (7) - add NC.改了~
有些音效没改 是因为我会再次remap下音效的问题~

[Normal]

这个难度问题不多；做的很好。
这句话要气死我= = 嘛 算你有良心扔个星星，不过这么晚了才mod，弄得我又要2点睡觉了

请接受我的星（心）>///<
萝莉万岁，Sara万岁~

shikyu wrote:

some suggestions...
[5150'sNormal]
01:30:265 (2) - add clap at the start of slider
01:33:265 (3) - ^
02:12:265 (2) - move to 02:12:453, shorten until 02:12:828

[Hard]
00:02:516 (5) - add whistle at the start of slider
00:53:328 (1) - remove clap at the end of slider
02:31:765 (5) - add whistle/clap

Hope it useful

shikyu wrote:

[5150'sNormal]
01:30:265 (2) - add clap at the start of slider
01:33:265 (3) - ^
02:12:265 (2) - move to 02:12:453, shorten until 02:12:828

Nymph_ wrote:

5150's Normal:

Beatmap design/suggestion
I really think you are following the vocal too much, seems Kanon have the same opinion with me. Rankable yes, just feel little weird during playing, a little uncomfortable. But maybe this is your style, I am not gonna to say much about it. Anyway I am gonna to skip this part.

And by the way, I prefer you use less straight sliders, they seem didn't fit well. Of course it is just my own opinion=A=

then some issues:
01:12:265 (1) - not a big problem but maybe spacing?
01:16:766 (1) - delete this new combo? seems not necessary compared to the new combos before.
02:13:204 (1) - ^
02:22:766 (1) - ^

Hitsound
01:18:454 (1) - Finish at the head of this slider?
01:49:954 (1) - feel empty about hitsounds here, maybe add some? for example, the head and the tail of this slider with whistle?
01:52:204 (3) - head of this too?
01:52:954 (1) - same as 01:49:954 (1)
01:55:204 (3) - head too?
02:00:454 (3) - maybe finish here?
02:01:204 (1) - and whistle on the head?

shikyu wrote:

some suggestions...

[Hard]
00:02:516 (5) - add whistle at the start of slider
00:53:328 (1) - remove clap at the end of slider
02:31:765 (5) - add whistle/clap

Hope it useful

Nymph_ wrote:

好吧 我彻底把以前所有MOD全看了一下感激ing:
Hi Nymph here and request from: ingame.

General:
Of course you need a Insane, wait for me T.T>_<总觉得怪怪的，嘛，不管怎么说靠神mapper了

Only 2 combo colours?习惯性了...一般我都是两色

The background file is way to big I think, not a big issue, but I just think you could make it
smaller to make people download it easier. Try this:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:5830a]BG.jpg[/attachment:5830a]

原本十多MB大小的XD 缩小后1MB 我已经很不忍心了，既然这样那就再缩小吧

Hard:

Issue/unrankable stuff
For this diff I really think AR7 is much better.改了~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:09:453 - maybe let the breaktime after the spinner starts at here?
00:22:390 (4) - I don't like the slider here, because it makes much trouble to put here sound here, the clap at the head and the tail didn't sound good.
00:53:890 (2) - again ^ break time 改了，其它的因为（人懒了）你懂的，于是又放弃了

Hitsound
00:23:703 (3) - too early for a clap here.
00:24:453 (1) - too early for a finish imo.
00:27:078 (1) - clap here?
00:28:578 (1) - clap here? ACTUALLY I THINK OF THIS PART SHOULD AT CLAP ON THE 2ND AND 4TH WHITE LINE...Not gonna suggest about these more. Any problem call me in game =A=
00:28:765 (2) - whistle come out of a sudden, I suggest delete it.
00:32:515 (3) - maybe clap at the tail of this slider?
00:33:453 (1) - head finish?
00:34:578 (3) - clap
00:36:453 (4) - clap move to tail
00:37:015 (1) - remove the clap
00:39:078 (1) - clap?
00:40:015 (4) - clap should be on 3?
00:40:765 (6) - clap should be on 5?
00:42:453 (3) - clap on tail?
00:43:015 (4) - delete clap
00:44:515 (7) - move the clap on the arrow to the tail?
00:50:515 (4) - whistle?
00:50:703 (5) - whistle on the tail?
00:51:453 (1) - head clap instead of whistle? whistle on the tail?
Hitsound 基本都改了

........I am exhausted... Going out for a while, will finish later =A=


买个饭回来 突然觉得我写了这么多是不是你应该看到后面都看不进去了...反正我也写不动了...还是QQ说吧..
就跟没说一样>_>

kanpakyin wrote:

魂淡尼姆服拿我modding模塊阿 T_T
專利沒了 T_T (bla

1. 我测出的timing是这样的
   BPM/OFFSET
   160/1397
   160/9459
   如果你觉得这个更合适的话就换成这个吧, 如果换了的话记得resnap all notes, 然后至少让KIAI的timing section对准时间线

1. 01:59:709 (1) - 这里加个clap感觉更好
2. 02:19:772 (3) - 加finish?

1. 不知道为什么, 每次test这个难度或者玩这个难度都会osu崩溃 :/
2. 00:45:459 (8) - 加finish?

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. 我测出的timing是这样的
   BPM/OFFSET
   160/1397
   160/9459
   如果你觉得这个更合适的话就换成这个吧, 如果换了的话记得resnap all notes, 然后至少让KIAI的timing section对准时间线

嗯呢 我也突然发现timing延迟好厉害，不过就只有坐等微风帮改啦~谢谢啦

[Hard]

1. 不知道为什么, 每次test这个难度或者玩这个难度都会osu崩溃 :/ 不会是因为太简单了吧XD
2. 00:45:459 (8) - 加finish? Fix~

star

Breeze wrote:

[5150's Normal]

1. 01:59:709 (1) - 这里加个clap感觉更好
2. 02:19:772 (3) - 加finish?

懒B无节操的玩dota去了，不过都改了~

DeeN wrote:

DO IT DO IT!!!!

<5150‘s Normal>
Nothing

<Hard>
01:01:396 (1,3) - 结尾关掉gird snap摆在（1）的结尾位置

我也真心看不出什么了

no kds

12BARRY21 wrote:

@@

5150's Normal

01:58:959 (1) - finish?

Hard

02:44:896 (x) - Add a note?
02:45:271 (4) - finish
02:45:459 (5) - Remove this note?
02:45:646 (x) - Add a note?
02:45:834 (x) - ^
02:46:021 (6) - finish
02:46:771 (2) - ^
02:47:521 (4) - ^

像這樣:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/155860

---------------------------------------------
簡略的mod的一下>< 圖還不錯~@@ 加油摟~

1. 标题: Jishu Koi Shoooooter! (Short Ver.) 这番我都没看过... 名字搞错 不要这么业余啊OTL
2. offset: 1397 Hard别忘了把第一条绿线删了然后改下红线音量

1. 00:06:459 (1) - 在00:06:365开始
2. 00:42:459 (3,4,5) - 怎么又不跟vocal了
3. 00:59:896 (1,2,3,1) - 很混乱的感觉.. 跟vocal不是好选择
4. 01:17:146 (7,8,9) - 建议只在红线下note
5. 02:05:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - clap很乱, 在KIAI后2/4白线放即可
6. 02:32:709 (2) - clap删去

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 标题: Jishu Koi Shoooooter! (Short Ver.) 这番我都没看过... 名字搞错 不要这么业余啊OTL Orz我什么都不知道 我是个业余选手也什么都没看过，就是等大人们来帮助XD
2. offset: 1397 Hard别忘了把第一条绿线删了然后改下红线音量 OK~

[Hard]:

1. 00:06:459 (1) - 在00:06:365开始搞定~
2. 00:42:459 (3,4,5) - 怎么又不跟vocal了花了半天功夫终于Fix了
3. 00:59:896 (1,2,3,1) - 很混乱的感觉.. 跟vocal不是好选择
4. 01:17:146 (7,8,9) - 建议只在红线下note这两个是花了半天功夫越改越差。。。所以都不管了
5. 02:05:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - clap很乱, 在KIAI后2/4白线放即可Fix
6. 02:32:709 (2) - clap删去Fix

用中文mod排版好麻烦 ~>~你自己写个poor english我怕我这个渣英语更看不懂了>_<

Megurine Luka wrote:

hmmm from my Queue

章鱼图超美谢谢了>3<
谢谢mod~
[General]

hmm确定只要两个难度？虽然这没什么但总觉得只有两个难度略显单调了w人越来越懒了，找人做的insane也不想做了TAT
LetterboxInBreaks 可以关掉w。不过这个随便你了OK关掉了
确定需要slidertick rate 2？毕竟只有两个难度啊，不刷分点怎么行啊

[Normal]
起始点最好和hard保持一致
00:01:772 (1) - 这个有点太直了不是很好看，中间的tick往外拉一点吧？
00:39:084 (1) - ^，跟后面保持一致w
01:30:271 (2) - 好笔直O O
全部都改啦~
[Hard]
00:23:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个弧线可以弄圆一点w这个啊，因为感觉打着顺手，没大碍就没动了
00:30:834 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星不正wOrz 这都被发现了，fix
01:12:271 (4) - http://puu.sh/742qFix
01:30:459 (1) - 为啥不弄对称？休息部分，做的有点随意啦，人懒了啊XD
02:11:334 (7) - 略近了Fix

以上w。

应该只有细节问题了> <加油加油

224,56,94959,6,0,B|260:83|301:82,1,80,6|2
336,93,95521,2,0,B|389:160,1,80,0|2
345,268,96459,6,0,B|265:248,1,80,4|2
227,250,97021,2,0,B|176:242|160:192,1,80,0|2
201,90,97959,1,6

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,KayeSara ~ (requested by kanpakyin from my modding queue)


5150's Normal
00:06:084 (6) - 索性去掉这个，然后把之后的spinner往前1/2 ?
00:54:459 (1) - 尾 --> (392,202)
01:34:959 (1,2,1,2) - 这样2组直的排不是很美观,试试这个

224,56,94959,6,0,B|260:83|301:82,1,80,6|2
336,93,95521,2,0,B|389:160,1,80,0|2
345,268,96459,6,0,B|265:248,1,80,4|2
227,250,97021,2,0,B|176:242|160:192,1,80,0|2
201,90,97959,1,6

02:30:459 (1) - 头 clap ?


Hard
00:03:272 (6) - New combo
00:06:365 (1) - spinner后面还可以再轻一点
01:16:771 (6) - New combo
01:33:271 (5) - 晚1/2 ?
02:04:959 (x) - 这里或许可以放上连打


Lovely song ~~
Good luck~

karenying wrote:

balalalala

karenying wrote:

噗。。好笨

1. Timing off掉了.試試這offset把,先看完MOD再改這個把.
   
   Timing

   1. Offset: 1,754ms BPM: 160.00
   2. Offset: 9,442ms BPM: 160.00

1. AR +1?Seems much better for me.

1. 00:31:771 (4,5,6) - 個人覺得這堆1/2有點偏難了,因為這個mapset沒有Easy的關係,於是新手都會玩這個diff!我建議把00:33:084 (6) - remove掉就好.這樣會比較簡單,後面的spacing要調整一下.
2. 00:46:959 (3) - (design)試試把這個slider拉成00:45:459 (1) - 的樣子?然後和(1)- 對稱一下就行了.像這樣子,改的話後面的spacing要調整一下.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:09:084 (x) - 這裏的節奏和整體上相比比較空白,是是在這裏加個note?加了之後再加上clap把.
4. 01:14:896 , 01:15:084 (x) - 為甚麼不在這些地方加notes呢?你大部分的地方都跟了vocal來放節奏,這裏突然不跟理解不能.
5. 02:15:271 - 這裏的節奏和整體上相比比較空白,是是在這裏加個note?加了之後再加上whistle把.
6. 02:20:896 , 02:21:084 - 為甚麼不在這些地方加notes呢?你大部分的地方都跟了vocal來放節奏,這裏突然不跟理解不能.
7. 02:30:459 (1) - (design)這個slider拉歪了,所以略醜,是是這樣的slider?
   

   384,284,150459,6,0,B|367:251|250:248|240:286,1,160,4|2

   Example and the core's slider

   
8. 02:48:459 (1) - 為甚麼要停在紅線了?意義不明,我建議把spinner停在02:50:709 - 這個位置剛好在音樂完的位置

1. 00:21:459 (2) - 在這裏加個finish?因為可以加強重音效果.
2. 01:13:021 (2) - 在slider得開始部分加whistle?感覺效果不錯
3. 01:30:271 (2) - ^同.這裏是高音部分,所以建議加whistle.
4. 02:30:459 (1) - 無論改還是不改這個slider,建議都在這個位置加個finish把..只是跟音樂而已.

1. 00:43:771 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (bad gameplay)沒接操,不堪入目,倫理喪失,最後,請自重!跳得毫無論理可言,求改善.
   This part is a suggestion only! :其實這部分不太適合跳,所以我建議這樣就很好了: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175486
   附上code:
   

   424,220,43209,6,0,B|436:274|402:321|351:317,1,120
   338,232,43771,2,0,B|509:320,2,180
   247,235,45084,2,0,B|200:256|147:236|147:236|160:252|152:275,1,120

   改完之後就適當的加上hitsound把
2. 02:40:021 (2) - (bad gameplay)突然減spacing意義不明,也可能有一些palyer會誤認為1/4.請把spacing放大.

1. 00:02:522 (5) - (design)感覺這個slider會比較好看,如果你能和(3)-對稱的話.然後把(5)- 的頭和 (3.4) 成一直線,如圖
   
   Example

   
2. 00:03:272 (6,7,8) - (design)把這3個連成一條直線把 就是把(8)-移到(6)-和(7)-的中間.看起來會好看一點
3. 00:23:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 無意義的縮短spacing,要是這樣的話我更寧願用slider跳代替這個縮短spacing.像這樣,記住要在00:23:334 (1) - , 00:24:084 (3) - 的開頭加上clap.在改完之後
   

   394,162,23334,6,0,B|412:128|399:96,1,60,8|0
   311,112,23709,2,0,B|328:68|300:38,1,60
   222,68,24084,2,0,B|225:34|199:6,1,60,8|0

   Example

   
4. 00:31:771 (1) - (design)像這個slider一樣,用2個折點相對會比較好看,效果也是和之前一樣的,看圖
   
   Example

   
5. 00:42:365 (x) - 我剛才發現原來這裏有一個音,在這個位置加上note把,疊在(3)-的上面就好,然後再加上whistle,出來的效果很讚喔!
6. 00:56:521 (x) - 加個note在這裏?其實在跟音樂而已.
7. 01:08:709 (6) - 和00:03:272 - 一樣,不解釋了
8. 01:19:584 (2,3) - 接觸到(1)-的尾巴了,感官上不太好看,而且後面的正方形也歪了,於是美觀度就悲劇了01:19:584 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我指的是這個正方形.正方形放好一點把.
9. 02:10:209 (5) - 很明顯和之前的(2.3.4)-不能成一個完美的正方形,重新擺一下把.
10. 02:13:209 (3,4,5,6,7) - 感覺這個梗用的不太好,排上來也不太美觀,重新排一次?
11. 02:28:584 (7) - 跟歌詞,add new combo here.
12. 02:48:271 (1) - 為甚麼要停在紅線了?意義不明,我建議把spinner停在02:50:709 - 這個位置剛好在音樂完的位置

1. 00:34:396 (2) - 加上whistle?感覺會好聽一點
2. 00:34:771 (4) - 在這個slider的尾部去掉clap,和音樂不太適合,有一種凸了出來的感覺
3. 01:01:021 (3) - 移走clap把,極度違和,不太適合這個位置用這種clap pattern.
4. 01:16:021 (4,6) - clap移走把,加在紅線的上面有一種詭異感,然後再(4.5.6.7)-加上whistle來增加層次感
5. 01:17:521 (9) - ^同,在頭尾都要加上!
6. 01:25:584 (4) - 在尾部加上finish?在重音上.
7. 01:29:709 (2) - 加clap.
8. 01:30:271 (3) - 再開頭加whistle.
9. 01:31:209 (4) - 加上clap.
10. 01:32:709 (2) - ^
11. 01:33:271 (5) - Slider尾部加上clap
12. 02:18:271 (2) - Remove clap?違和感滿載.
13. 02:40:021 (2) - 在slider的頭,未加上whistle,感覺好聽很多.

kanpakyin wrote:

努力往Rank前進.

[General]

1. Timing off掉了.試試這offset把,先看完MOD再改這個把.
   
   Timing

   1. Offset: 1,754ms BPM: 160.00
   2. Offset: 9,442ms BPM: 160.00

改了！
[Hard]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 00:43:771 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (bad gameplay)沒接操,不堪入目,倫理喪失,最後,請自重!跳得毫無論理可言,求改善.节操的节写错了>_>
   This part is a suggestion only! :其實這部分不太適合跳,所以我建議這樣就很好了: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175486
   附上code:
   

   424,220,43209,6,0,B|436:274|402:321|351:317,1,120
   338,232,43771,2,0,B|509:320,2,180
   247,235,45084,2,0,B|200:256|147:236|147:236|160:252|152:275,1,120

   改完之後就適當的加上hitsound把
2. 02:40:021 (2) - (bad gameplay)突然減spacing意義不明,也可能有一些palyer會誤認為1/4.請把spacing放大.

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:02:522 (5) - (design)感覺這個slider會比較好看,如果你能和(3)-對稱的話.然後把(5)- 的頭和 (3.4) 成一直線,如圖
   
   Example

   
2. 00:03:272 (6,7,8) - (design)把這3個連成一條直線把 就是把(8)-移到(6)-和(7)-的中間.看起來會好看一點
3. 00:23:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 無意義的縮短spacing,要是這樣的話我更寧願用slider跳代替這個縮短spacing.像這樣,記住要在00:23:334 (1) - , 00:24:084 (3) - 的開頭加上clap.在改完之後
   

   394,162,23334,6,0,B|412:128|399:96,1,60,8|0
   311,112,23709,2,0,B|328:68|300:38,1,60
   222,68,24084,2,0,B|225:34|199:6,1,60,8|0

   Example

   
4. 00:31:771 (1) - (design)像這個slider一樣,用2個折點相對會比較好看,效果也是和之前一樣的,看圖
   
   Example

   
5. 00:42:365 (x) - 我剛才發現原來這裏有一個音,在這個位置加上note把,疊在(3)-的上面就好,然後再加上whistle,出來的效果很讚喔!
6. 00:56:521 (x) - 加個note在這裏?其實在跟音樂而已.
7. 01:08:709 (6) - 和00:03:272 - 一樣,不解釋了
8. 01:19:584 (2,3) - 接觸到(1)-的尾巴了,感官上不太好看,而且後面的正方形也歪了,於是美觀度就悲劇了01:19:584 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我指的是這個正方形.正方形放好一點把.
9. 02:10:209 (5) - 很明顯和之前的(2.3.4)-不能成一個完美的正方形,重新擺一下把.
10. 02:13:209 (3,4,5,6,7) - 感覺這個梗用的不太好,排上來也不太美觀,重新排一次?
11. 02:28:584 (7) - 跟歌詞,add new combo here.
12. 02:48:271 (1) - 為甚麼要停在紅線了?意義不明,我建議把spinner停在02:50:709 - 這個位置剛好在音樂完的位置

几乎都改了啊
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:34:396 (2) - 加上whistle?感覺會好聽一點
2. 00:34:771 (4) - 在這個slider的尾部去掉clap,和音樂不太適合,有一種凸了出來的感覺
3. 01:01:021 (3) - 移走clap把,極度違和,不太適合這個位置用這種clap pattern.
4. 01:16:021 (4,6) - clap移走把,加在紅線的上面有一種詭異感,然後再(4.5.6.7)-加上whistle來增加層次感
5. 01:17:521 (9) - ^同,在頭尾都要加上!
6. 01:25:584 (4) - 在尾部加上finish?在重音上.
7. 01:29:709 (2) - 加clap.
8. 01:30:271 (3) - 再開頭加whistle.
9. 01:31:209 (4) - 加上clap.
10. 01:32:709 (2) - ^
11. 01:33:271 (5) - Slider尾部加上clap
12. 02:18:271 (2) - Remove clap?違和感滿載.
13. 02:40:021 (2) - 在slider的頭,未加上whistle,感覺好聽很多.

音效全改！

KanaRin wrote:

SPOILER

21:14 <KayeSara> : Kana师父有兴趣给个taiko的IRC mod么>_<
21:14 <KanaRin> : =w=
21:14 <KanaRin> : short mod可以嗎
21:14 <KayeSara> : 当然!
21:15 <KayeSara> : 给baka KPY的
21:15 *KayeSara is listening to (Hanazawa Kana - Jishu Koi Shoooooter! (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36426]
21:15 <KayeSara> : 你好久都没来了
21:19 <KanaRin> : ok了
21:19 <KanaRin> : 先打一次吧XD
21:22 <KayeSara> : OK!
21:22 <KanaRin> : 很好啊WWWWW
21:22 <KanaRin> : 沒什麼能mod,就是想說為什麼打出了888750打不出888888
21:22 <KanaRin> : 說笑的(汗
21:22 <KayeSara> : TAT....
21:22 <KanaRin> : 真的很好啊ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
21:23 <KanaRin> : 好吧
21:23 <KayeSara> : 耶
21:23 <KanaRin> : 啊
21:23 <KanaRin> : kiai time
21:23 <KanaRin> : 01:00:254 (261) -
21:23 <KayeSara> : 这开始?
21:23 <KanaRin> : 這裡下比較有效果..
21:24 <KanaRin> : 我覺得
21:24 <KanaRin> : 嗯
21:24 <KanaRin> : 01:05:785 (294) -
21:24 <KanaRin> : 加個don
21:25 <KanaRin> : 01:16:754 (358,359,360) -
21:25 <KanaRin> : 全部加finish
21:25 <KayeSara> : 咦 那个don本来就是红色啊 0.0
21:26 <KanaRin> : no note
21:26 <KanaRin> : 囧
21:26 <KanaRin> : 5 plets
21:26 <KanaRin> : 改做
21:26 <KanaRin> : ddddk
21:27 <KayeSara> : OK!
21:28 <KanaRin> : 啊加finish吧
21:28 <KanaRin> : 00:43:754 (186) -
21:28 <KanaRin> : 00:44:504 (189) - ^
21:28 <KayeSara> : 耶!
21:28 <KayeSara> : 改完了
21:28 <KanaRin> : 就這樣

Irc modded. 很好的Taiko.

1. 00:57:629 (1,1) - I don't think you should use 40% for the finish on the spinner. Raise the volume a bit, it's kinda distracting like this because in the music you have such sounds on both places.
2. 02:43:567 (8) - To be honest, I don't think this slider fits. Try ending it at 02:43:754, it follows the music much better. Additionally, if you think that you need an extra note, consider adding a circle at 02:44:129 and stack it with 02:44:317 (1). It follows the music much better.