Tachibana Arisu - Kimi ni Todoke

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S o a p

[Mahua] wrote:

[sb]
最后那个滤镜消失的太晚我还以为有惊悚要素……
[Insane]
宽屏sb打开下
00:15:390 (1) - 虽然知道是三角但是好像没正好在三角上……
00:45:866 (6) - 其实不用红点也能画这种滑条 而且可以更好看点其实我故意扭成这样的 :x
00:54:675 (4,5,6) - 偏向直接用三连 比较突出鼓点
[Normal]
00:15:627 (1) - emmmmm不知道你是故意的还是怎么
lkx_Shore
[Insane]
00:13:485 (7) - 换成1/2好点.
00:14:675 (3) - 叠好?
00:49:199 (5) - 不如用这种样式,看起来顺眼点. http://puu.sh/wQ89s/dab9ca2aba.jpg
00:56:580 (3) - 移到x384 y256左右?音和00:56:818 (4) - 是一样的,把它和上一个物件(00:56:342 (2) - )拆分开来会好点.
01:01:104 (6,1) - 物件和物件之间太近了.
01:04:437 (4) - 换成3/4滑条?

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
01:07:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 感觉直下来有点单调,这种梗如何.http://puu.sh/wQ8ql/9782980c96.jpg

[Normal]
感觉ar好低,不知道再加0.5ar规则允不允许呀.

[Easy]
emmm,easy呢.
Topic Starter
S o a p

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
00:13:485 (7) - 换成1/2好点.
00:14:675 (3) - 叠好?
00:49:199 (5) - 不如用这种样式,看起来顺眼点. http://puu.sh/wQ89s/dab9ca2aba.jpg
00:56:580 (3) - 移到x384 y256左右?音和00:56:818 (4) - 是一样的,把它和上一个物件(00:56:342 (2) - )拆分开来会好点.
01:01:104 (6,1) - 物件和物件之间太近了.还好吧
01:04:437 (4) - 换成3/4滑条? 3/4有点头疼排列,改成结尾二连了

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
01:07:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 感觉直下来有点单调,这种梗如何.http://puu.sh/wQ8ql/9782980c96.jpg

[Normal]
感觉ar好低,不知道再加0.5ar规则允不允许呀.emmmm AR5的NM好像还好应该算正常吧

[Easy]
emmm,easy呢.还在生
liaoxingyao

lkx_Shore wrote:

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
01:07:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 感觉直下来有点单调,这种梗如何.http://puu.sh/wQ8ql/9782980c96.jpg fixed
谢谢拉客修大大的摸!
Topic Starter
S o a p

Sun Rainbow wrote:

这bg不够美丽吗加了日彩虹的sb后才变美丽了呢。
12:10 S o a p: 彩虹
12:10 S o a p: 日彩虹
12:12 Sun Rainbow: Hi~
12:12 Sun Rainbow: ><
12:12 Sun Rainbow: 好久不见啦
12:12 S o a p: 彩虹彩虹
12:12 S o a p: 日彩虹
12:12 S o a p: 摸不摸图(喂
12:12 Sun Rainbow: oAo怎么了
12:12 Sun Rainbow: 摸吧
12:13 Sun Rainbow: 但是非常水
12:13 Sun Rainbow: 我几年没摸了
12:13 Sun Rainbow: (
12:13 Sun Rainbow: irc可以吗
12:13 S o a p: 液
12:13 *S o a p is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1363677 Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke]
12:13 Sun Rainbow: 速战速决
12:13 S o a p: 可以可以
12:13 S o a p: 当然可以
12:14 S o a p: 来来
12:14 *Sun Rainbow is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1363677 Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke [Normal]]
12:14 Sun Rainbow: 00:17:770 (1) -
12:14 Sun Rainbow: blanket
12:14 Sun Rainbow: 要严谨
12:14 Sun Rainbow: 我依稀记得我找图rank的时候被要求所有的blanket全部矫正(
12:14 Sun Rainbow: 挑到这地步的
12:15 S o a p: 额。。。
12:15 S o a p: 可怕
12:15 S o a p: 那估计完了我blanket好多都……
12:15 Sun Rainbow: 我的那个nightcore也是orz
12:15 Sun Rainbow: 00:18:723 (3,4,1) -
12:15 Sun Rainbow: 三角形是不是歪了(
12:16 S o a p: 哎呀正三角不好看(你
12:16 Sun Rainbow: 233
12:16 Sun Rainbow: 00:20:627 (3,4,1) -
12:16 Sun Rainbow: ^
12:16 S o a p: you agree!
12:17 Sun Rainbow: blanket问题我全跳过了你自己改吧(滚
12:17 Sun Rainbow: 20627这个怎么看都是歪了(
12:17 Sun Rainbow: 前面那个还是三角形
12:17 S o a p: hao(.
12:18 Sun Rainbow: 00:43:723 (3,1) - 这个感觉也是歪了(
12:18 Sun Rainbow: 不考虑ctrl+1网格做吧(
12:18 Sun Rainbow: 吗
12:18 S o a p: HAO GAILE
12:18 S o a p: gaile
12:18 S o a p: 改了
12:18 Sun Rainbow: 00:48:247 (1,2) -
12:18 Sun Rainbow: 这个中间空了感觉怪怪的
12:18 S o a p: 网格难受(
12:18 Sun Rainbow: 00:54:913 (3) - NC?
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 我作图已经进化成了不要grid不要ds得了(
12:19 S o a p: 空了怪吗
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 00:59:199 (1,2) - 1不要nc2nc怎样?
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 是的
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 可能因为vocal吧
12:19 S o a p: 那我补上
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 我就是听着听着突然空了
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 感觉怪难受的
12:19 Sun Rainbow: 不会摸讲不出其他摸的专业感觉(
12:20 Sun Rainbow: 01:03:247 (1,2) - 还是1不要nc2nc怎样》
12:20 S o a p: 好
12:20 Sun Rainbow: 因为1后面好大一个空才到2
12:20 Sun Rainbow: 不如给2nc
12:20 Sun Rainbow: 01:07:294 (1,2) - 这里也是
12:20 Sun Rainbow: 但是说不定其他modder要你改回来的时候
12:20 Sun Rainbow: 别打我(跑
12:20 S o a p: 我都是按长白线来分
12:20 S o a p: hhhhh
12:21 *Sun Rainbow is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1362335 Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke [Insane]]
12:21 Sun Rainbow: 00:11:580 (1,2) -
12:21 Sun Rainbow: nc给重音的2吧
12:21 Sun Rainbow: 00:13:485 (1,2) - ^
12:22 S o a p: 可
12:22 Sun Rainbow: 00:36:818 (4) - 歪了
12:22 Sun Rainbow: 没叠好
12:22 Sun Rainbow: 好多歪了的三角形的样子(跑
12:22 S o a p: 改了
12:22 S o a p: 我爱畸形三角形(跑
12:22 Sun Rainbow: 00:49:199 (5,6) - 这个超hard了吧(x
12:23 Sun Rainbow: 233333
12:23 Sun Rainbow: 00:52:533 (2,3) -
12:23 Sun Rainbow: 我觉得者可以是insane了(
12:23 S o a p: 有吗!
12:23 S o a p: 这本来就是!
12:23 S o a p: insane!
12:23 S o a p: 啊
12:23 S o a p: !
12:23 Sun Rainbow: 日
12:23 Sun Rainbow: 看成hard(
12:23 S o a p: 00:49:199 (5,6) - 这个我感觉那个5没给二连很良心
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 后面结尾
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 这个是insane的话就不用理了(
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 后面结尾很多没叠好的地方
12:24 S o a p: 2333
12:24 S o a p: 噢噢噢真的!=-=
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 然后没了
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 水的一比(
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 音频是不是没剪好啊
12:24 Sun Rainbow: 后面结尾怎么感觉少了一块
12:25 S o a p: 卧槽
12:25 S o a p: 被你发现了
12:25 Sun Rainbow: 你要sb吗 我做个五分钟速成背景动效sb(x
12:25 S o a p: 后面少了一大块
12:25 S o a p: 要!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12:25 S o a p: 要!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12:25 S o a p: 要!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12:25 Sun Rainbow: 我去看看吧
12:25 S o a p: 来来来!!!
12:25 Sun Rainbow: 能不能剪个结尾好点的
12:25 S o a p: 天使
12:26 Sun Rainbow: 好
12:26 S o a p: 你是天使
12:26 Sun Rainbow: 我先做sb吧 五分钟速成那种(
12:27 S o a p: 不是。这个我觉得结尾其实还行,这个往后就开始有vocal了,声音出来得特别快
12:27 S o a p: 好好
12:27 S o a p: 我去吃饭饭
12:28 Sun Rainbow: 那至少结尾渐变没掉更好点
12:49 Sun Rainbow: https://puu.sh/wPWdh/2b04d93f44.osb
12:50 Sun Rainbow: https://puu.sh/wPWeY/c5843db9c2.zip
Hectic
Hello, m4m here

Insane:
  1. I didn't get ncs idea, maybe just put it on every big white tick? sometime it feels random
  2. some of the triples don't have sound supporting them, are you sure you want to keep them? (examples: 00:36:580 (2,3,4) - 00:45:866 (6,7,1) - and so on)
  3. 00:46:580 - there is vocal note, maybe make repeat there or something like this?
  4. 00:49:199 (5) - why did you decide to emphasize vocal like this here? maybe just circle?

liaoxingyao's Hard:
  1. 00:54:437 (6,1) - a little bit awkward, i think you should overlap them (like this 00:47:294 (4,5) - )
  2. 01:08:723 (6,7,1) - i think would be better if you made these circles go down

Normal
  1. 00:22:532 (3,1) - why these fully overlap each other while these 00:11:580 (5,1) - stacked normally
  2. 01:08:008 (2,3) - the only 1/2 stack in the whole diff


Hope I helped. Good luck!
Gust
NM request from qq

[Normal]
00:04:913 (2,1) - 这种遮边看着有点不舒服

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:07:770 (5,1,2) - 应该调一下5和1的ds,现在看着有些不好。。
00:33:485 (2,3) - ds有点小
00:43:723 (3) - 加个NC可能比较好

[Insane]

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意
我开Ai mod有些物件没有对齐轴,不知道是我这里的问题还是本身就是没对齐的
00:16:104 (3) - 可以考虑拆成note
00:36:580 (2,3) - 用一个slider
00:42:056 (1) - NC?
00:41:342 (5,1) - 1还可以放的更好看一点
00:49:914 (8,9,1) - flow有点。。
01:00:627 (5,6,1) - ……不太好看……
01:08:008 (2,3,4) - 推荐叠

祝早飞
Sun Rainbow

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意
我作图才叫随意()

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Topic Starter
S o a p

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m here

Insane:
  1. I didn't get ncs idea, maybe just put it on every big white tick? sometime it feels random
  2. some of the triples don't have sound supporting them, are you sure you want to keep them? (examples: 00:36:580 (2,3,4) - 00:45:866 (6,7,1) - and so on)
  3. 00:46:580 - there is vocal note, maybe make repeat there or something like this?
  4. 00:49:199 (5) - why did you decide to emphasize vocal like this here? maybe just circle?

liaoxingyao's Hard:
  1. 00:54:437 (6,1) - a little bit awkward, i think you should overlap them (like this 00:47:294 (4,5) - )
  2. 01:08:723 (6,7,1) - i think would be better if you made these circles go down

Normal
  1. 00:22:532 (3,1) - why these fully overlap each other while these 00:11:580 (5,1) - stacked normally
  2. 01:08:008 (2,3) - the only 1/2 stack in the whole diff


Hope I helped. Good luck!
fixed some, thanks
liaoxingyao

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m here

liaoxingyao's Hard:
  1. 00:54:437 (6,1) - a little bit awkward, i think you should overlap them (like this 00:47:294 (4,5) - ) ok
  2. 01:08:723 (6,7,1) - i think would be better if you made these circles go down its fine i think


Hope I helped. Good luck!

Gust wrote:

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:07:770 (5,1,2) - 应该调一下5和1的ds,现在看着有些不好。。改了
00:33:485 (2,3) - ds有点小 ok
00:43:723 (3) - 加个NC可能比较好 这个应该还行..
thanks for modding!
Topic Starter
S o a p

Sun Rainbow wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意
我作图才叫随意()

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Topic Starter
S o a p

Gust wrote:

NM request from qq

[Normal]
00:04:913 (2,1) - 这种遮边看着有点不舒服还好

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:07:770 (5,1,2) - 应该调一下5和1的ds,现在看着有些不好。。
00:33:485 (2,3) - ds有点小
00:43:723 (3) - 加个NC可能比较好

[Insane]

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意
我开Ai mod有些物件没有对齐轴,不知道是我这里的问题还是本身就是没对齐的
00:16:104 (3) - 可以考虑拆成note这个感觉没什么必要换成note
00:36:580 (2,3) - 用一个slider感觉三连强调下好。
00:42:056 (1) - NC?
00:41:342 (5,1) - 1还可以放的更好看一点改了一点
00:49:914 (8,9,1) - flow有点。。还好吧..
01:00:627 (5,6,1) - ……不太好看……改了点
01:08:008 (2,3,4) - 推荐叠这个还好。我再看看其他人咋说(。

祝早飞谢谢
Kayano
Easy
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关于metadata:
Title:Kimi Ni Todoke
TitleUnicode:きみにとどけ
Artist:Tachibana Arisu (CV:Satou Amina)
ArtistUnicode:橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)
Source:IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS
Tags:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ Cool jewelries! 003 AKB48 OniJAM liaoxingyao

meta: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html

ArtistUnicode里面的冒号是半角还是全角的最好在游戏里面确认(找骏喵
Topic Starter
S o a p

Kayano wrote:

Easy
osu file format v14

[General]
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi Ni Todoke
TitleUnicode:きみにとどけ
Artist:Tachibana Arisu (CV:Satou Amina)
ArtistUnicode:橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)
Creator:S o a p
Version:Kayano's Easy
Source:IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS
Tags:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ Cool jewelries! 003 AKB48 OniJAM liaoxingyao
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关于metadata:
Title:Kimi Ni Todoke
TitleUnicode:きみにとどけ
Artist:Tachibana Arisu (CV:Satou Amina)
ArtistUnicode:橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)
Source:IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS
Tags:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ Cool jewelries! 003 AKB48 OniJAM liaoxingyao

meta: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html

ArtistUnicode里面的冒号是半角还是全角的最好在游戏里面确认(找骏喵
非常感谢欧尼酱 ;)
smallboat
[Global]

1.難度來源不一樣 (查看Aimod)
2.有個沒使用的osb : Tachibana Arisu (CVSatou Amina) - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb

[Normal]

00:27:532 (1) - 間距

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)

[Insane]

00:27:533 (3) - 重音忘了NC
00:54:913 (6) - 同上
liaoxingyao

smallboat wrote:

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)fixed
谢谢船业大大!
Topic Starter
S o a p

smallboat wrote:

[Global]

1.難度來源不一樣 (查看Aimod)
2.有個沒使用的osb : Tachibana Arisu (CVSatou Amina) - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb

[Normal]

00:27:532 (1) - 間距

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)

[Insane]

00:27:533 (3) - 重音忘了NC
00:54:913 (6) - 同上
谢船 :)
Kurai
I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

  1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
    All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html


  2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags.



Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix :D
Topic Starter
S o a p

Kurai wrote:

I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

  1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
    All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html


  2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix



Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix :D
Unicode Title: きみにとどけ
Romanised Title: Kimi ni Todoke
Unicode Artist: 橘ありす
Romanised Artist: Tachibana Arisu
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ

References:
http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlEPr6m2ZY
https://truth.bahamut.com.tw/s01/201607 ... 7fd2c4.JPG
http://cinderella.idolmaster.jp/

thanks :)
Kurai

S o a p wrote:

Kurai wrote:

I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

  1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
    All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html


  2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix



Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix :D
Unicode Title: きみにとどけ
Romanised Title: Kimi ni Todoke
Unicode Artist: 橘ありす
Romanised Artist: Tachibana Arisu
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ

References:
http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlEPr6m2ZY
https://truth.bahamut.com.tw/s01/201607 ... 7fd2c4.JPG
http://cinderella.idolmaster.jp/

thanks :)
I disagree with KwaN here. I believe the artist should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" as it is written "starring by 橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" everywhere, even on the album's back cover. Anyway, at least add "佐藤亜美菜" and "Satou Amina" in tags?

Also you could probably add "idolmaster" in tags as well; people looking for IDOLM@STER songs are probably more prone to type "idolmaster" in the search bar as it is easier to write than "idolm@ster". 8-)

[General]
- Your background image is a bit too big for a .jpg image (1.13 MB). I re-encoded it and now it is 136 kB (no quality loss): http://up.kuraip.net/0726x3nY2348.jpg
- You should remove "Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb" from the folder of your beatmap.
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