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Raging Bull

Nymph_ wrote:

- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.
Sorry, I understand that it is just over .03 , but don't say it was ranked before with over 3 star and you think it's okay. It's best to fix it to avoid these things in the future.
Topic Starter
Nymph

Raging Bull wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.
Sorry, I understand that it is just over .03 , but don't say it was ranked before with over 3 star and you think it's okay. It's best to fix it to avoid these things in the future.
I am really true it is not necessary.Anyway I don't really worried about stuff like this, not a big deal imo. it is easy enough
Topic Starter
Nymph

karenying wrote:

Genera
offset早了點,-390左右 =_=好吧 BAKAJO也说早= =
lead-in2500吧我建議 试了试血条还是瞬移。。算了先这样把
Normal
00:48:595 (3) - 為了對稱,copy 00:47:595 (1) - Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R 不好看=_=还得调距离..先这样把
00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =
hitsound看hard的mod

Hard
看完忍不著吐槽了: 為什么全是直slider,哦草還是扭来扭去的低阶婆婆排版orz 妮姆芙妮姆芙你腫么了 哎 我只是觉得这样很适合啊。。没有故意模仿婆婆
排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =
SPOILER
00:01:595 -
00:02:595 -
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00:04:595 -
00:05:595 -
00:06:595 -
00:07:345 -
00:07:345 -
00:08:595 -
00:44:595 (1,3) -
00:49:095 (3) -
00:52:595 (1,3) -
01:04:845 (6,7) -
01:11:845 (2) - 尾
01:12:345 (3) - 頭尾也加
01:14:595 -
01:15:595 -
01:16:595 -
01:17:595 -
01:18:595 -
01:19:595 -
01:20:345 (3,4) -
01:22:595 -
01:23:595 -
01:24:595 -
01:25:595 -
01:26:595 -
00:09:595 (7) - 可NC嗯NC好了
BAKA萤
Kotone

Nymph_ wrote:

00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =

排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =
1.有些人很2你懂的
2.我知道啊可是我覺得加了比不加好
Topic Starter
Nymph

karenying wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =

排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =
1.有些人很2你懂的 无视无视 我才不惧他们
2.我知道啊可是我覺得加了比不加好 =_=我不太觉得呢..先这样吧
Bad_Baka HT OwO
> V<笨蛋妮姆芙快把这图做完! 8-)
妮姆芙你这Baka!XD
DeadAlready
kugyuuu~ <3

來射一發星了~>w</

SPOILER
對了...前面雖然有好多人提offset早了...
不過我這邊反而覺得如果對鼓點offset的話好像晚了D: ...感覺或許offset -400(以現在的-9ms)聽起來好點?xD
(好吧 其實我大概知道是因為kugyu唱歌都會慢拍(被打) 所以對鼓點的offset和vocal的offset都會差一點(炸))
嘛...不過是我覺得而已啦 試試看如果覺得不好或是想對vocal的offset就無視這個吧(喂)lol
Topic Starter
Nymph

quintitem wrote:

kugyuuu~ <3

來射一發星了~>w</

SPOILER
對了...前面雖然有好多人提offset早了...
不過我這邊反而覺得如果對鼓點offset的話好像晚了D: ...感覺或許offset -400(以現在的-9ms)聽起來好點?xD
(好吧 其實我大概知道是因為kugyu唱歌都會慢拍(被打) 所以對鼓點的offset和vocal的offset都會差一點(炸))
嘛...不過是我覺得而已啦 試試看如果覺得不好或是想對vocal的offset就無視這個吧(喂)lol
T.T谢五条姐星~
OFFSET我是真不清楚了..我不擅长这种连打..怎么打都不正确..
Hellzero
2star for Kugimiya Rie <3
Topic Starter
Nymph

Hellzero wrote:

2star for Kugimiya Rie <3
thanks~ I love her too~
Kawayi Rika
hi~我来看看~做为钉宫迷~

鉴定完毕LOLICON Nymph~ :roll:
[General]

这首歌萌死了~
00:09:859 - 这个Break 太长了,1分30的歌 用不着这么长的 00:17:609 到这里怎么样?
OSB文件删掉,如果不要SB的话。
01:05:109 - 这里KIAI TIME 结束,01:05:609 - 这里再加会更好?
Stack Leniency 6应该就足够了~


[Hard]

00:40:359 (5) - add NC.
01:07:609 (6) - ^


[Normal]

HP 和 OD 太低了吧 简直是EASY 级别 减星也不能这样啊 >O<
各自+2?做个EASY 难度吧...
01:07:609 (5) - add NC.
01:20:359 (4) - 删掉这个.
01:20:859 - 这里加Note 和 clap,会更好点吧?

膜拜妮姆芙 神MAPPER~
good luck~
Topic Starter
Nymph

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi~我来看看~做为钉宫迷~

鉴定完毕LOLICON Nymph~ :roll:
[General]

这首歌萌死了~
00:09:859 - 这个Break 太长了,1分30的歌 用不着这么长的 00:17:609 到这里怎么样?不想MAP这里 就这样吧~
OSB文件删掉,如果不要SB的话。最后再删 不急
01:05:109 - 这里KIAI TIME 结束,01:05:609 - 这里再加会更好?这里不太想要喷泉
Stack Leniency 6应该就足够了~ 感觉6和7没发现什么区别 就这样吧这个是默认


[Hard]

00:40:359 (5) - add NC.
01:07:609 (6) - ^ 这两个觉得没大必要 没加


[Normal]

HP 和 OD 太低了吧 简直是EASY 级别 减星也不能这样啊 >O<
各自+2?做个EASY 难度吧... 这个做EASY就真的没什么玩头了...NORMAL够简单的
01:07:609 (5) - add NC. 这个加了
01:20:359 (4) - 删掉这个. 这个似乎有点用的样子
01:20:859 - 这里加Note 和 clap,会更好点吧?那样节奏太赶了 感觉没必要为了双CLAP加个NOTE

膜拜妮姆芙 神MAPPER~
good luck~
噗 谢了 我也是钉宫FAN =A=
L_P
wow nice song and very moe
so i wanna mod! xD (all suggestion, as youre nymph XD)

hard:
00:30:359 (4) - move to 00:30:484 ? (lyrics)
00:30:859 (6) - delete one return ?
00:31:234 (7) - slider with one return, end at 31,484 ?
00:32:359 (11) - slider, end at 32,484 ?
00:39:234 (8) - delete? cause sometime you also didnt follow the lyrics and i think this time also....dont need the note (make the rhythm "tatatata+tatatata+tatatatata"
00:41:109 (11) - delete, same reason

00:42:109 (2) - jump? i like jump here "fuwa fuwa ..."
00:48:859 (2,3) - here also..
01:00:359 (8) - really need curve..and suggest end it at 01:01:109
01:16:609 (5) - try end this at 01:16:859?


sorry for my bad mod and bad english....

哦 我好喜欢你的map哦 我是新mapper多多指教!

edited: why insane's sliders all straight one? i like easy's more
2nd edit: 你改名了哦?!
Topic Starter
Nymph

L_P wrote:

wow nice song and very moe
so i wanna mod! xD (all suggestion, as youre nymph XD)

hard:
00:30:359 (4) - move to 00:30:484 ? (lyrics)
00:30:859 (6) - delete one return ?
00:31:234 (7) - slider with one return, end at 31,484 ?
00:32:359 (11) - slider, end at 32,484 ? sorry but changing these will ruin the consistent imo, so I think I am gonna to keep this~
00:39:234 (8) - delete? cause sometime you also didnt follow the lyrics and i think this time also....dont need the note (make the rhythm "tatatata+tatatata+tatatatata" yeah but actually the vocal stops here.. so I think this note is really necessary.
00:41:109 (11) - delete, same reason

00:42:109 (2) - jump? i like jump here "fuwa fuwa ..."
00:48:859 (2,3) - here also.. yeah jump is a good idea, but I personally don't want to jump here.. sorry =A=
01:00:359 (8) - really need curve..and suggest end it at 01:01:109 sorry but I think this long slider fit more~
01:16:609 (5) - try end this at 01:16:859? nah I can't do this,because it is connected with 01:17:109 (6), so stop here is a better choice~


sorry for my bad mod and bad english....

哦 我好喜欢你的map哦 我是新mapper多多指教!

edited: why insane's sliders all straight one? i like easy's more
2nd edit: 你改名了哦?!
thanks for mod~ but I didn't fix anything T.T
about sliders on the hard diff, I just personally want to map it once, no other particular reason. Imo, this song need to be very neat and clean, so I decided to choose small circle and stright sliders. So they won't mess up in spacing~ =A=

恩恩 请多指教~ 我把名字里面的下划线去掉了~ =A=
Vicho
Add to the tags: THE IDOLM@STER, Minase Iori

I think you should add it because the song is from a CD of IDOLM@STER and the character that sing it is Minase Iori <3
L_P
awww..不是我的错啦 是你的map太好了
Topic Starter
Nymph

Vicho-kun wrote:

Add to the tags: THE IDOLM@STER, Minase Iori

I think you should add it because the song is from a CD of IDOLM@STER and the character that sing it is Minase Iori <3
oops...added =A= I didn't know about this.... thanks!

L_P wrote:

awww..不是我的错啦 是你的map太好了
那也谢谢MOD~还是很有用的~
Haruhi_sama
i want guset diff easy O_O
Topic Starter
Nymph
sorry but I don't think this need a easy diff :3
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Well, take one guest that follow the saxophone :D if you want

[Normal]
i don't know if the MATs/BATs will accept a 3,03 diff was an easier... but you might use the larger circle size( CS 3 ) to make it 2,99 and respect the "easier diff should be less than 3 stars" rule
00:25:359 (1) - I think it's more nice to make it 1/2 longer and do this
00:53:109 (2,3) - Move them as you complete the diamond pattern?(maybe forma triangle too), How you can adjust the part after? like this
00:55:609 (1,2,3) - a more circlular pattern? like this

[Hard]
Hp Drain +2 or at least +1.. as now it's really low
The streams are all linear... you might make some curved stream?
00:00:609 (1) - You might use a SV x0.5 section and make it like this?

actually it's bubble-ready for me :D
Topic Starter
Nymph

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Well, take one guest that follow the saxophone :D if you want

[Normal]
i don't know if the MATs/BATs will accept a 3,03 diff was an easier... but you might use the larger circle size( CS 3 ) to make it 2,99 and respect the "easier diff should be less than 3 stars" rule I think it is ok=A= CS3seems really ugly in this diff..
00:25:359 (1) - I think it's more nice to make it 1/2 longer and do this
00:53:109 (2,3) - Move them as you complete the diamond pattern?(maybe forma triangle too), How you can adjust the part after? like this sorry I personally don't like these 2.
00:55:609 (1,2,3) - a more circlular pattern? like this yeah allright done~

[Hard]
Hp Drain +2 or at least +1.. as now it's really low sorry but no =A=
The streams are all linear... you might make some curved stream? I think they are ok~
00:00:609 (1) - You might use a SV x0.5 section and make it like this? not very beautiful.. I'd like to keep mine

actually it's bubble-ready for me :D
=A= thanks~
SapphireGhost
moe and stuff

[General]
- The difficulty spread is very poor, I'd strongly advise having at least three. [Normal] gives ~ 250,000 points and [Hard] gives ~ 1,900,000 points, try to see if you can make one that fits well enough between those two in difficulty, star rating, and max score.
- The break in each difficulty is currently far too large and leaves a good 17.5% of the song unmapped. Map through it, or at least part of it.

[Hard]
00:00:609 (1) - This slider is currently a bit too crumpled, perhaps you could uncrumple it just a bit so that the start and end point do not overlap so it looks a bit nicer.

[Normal]
01:11:609 (5) - Combo is getting sort of long, add a new combo here to split it up a bit? It lands on the new measure nicely, too.

The maps themselves were mostly alright, it's mainly the stuff in [General] that needs to be fixed, and to be honest I wouldn't feel comfortable bubbling if the difficulty spread/break stayed the way it is. If you do decide to change those, however, send me a Forum PM I'll be happy to re-check and hopefully bubble. That's all!
Topic Starter
Nymph

SapphireGhost wrote:

moe and stuff

[General]
- The difficulty spread is very poor, I'd strongly advise having at least three. [Normal] gives ~ 250,000 points and [Hard] gives ~ 1,900,000 points, try to see if you can make one that fits well enough between those two in difficulty, star rating, and max score.
Nah sorry but I really don't want to, an easy is really not necessary and I really don't think another hard or normal+ between this normal and hard is good.so I think I am sure gonna to keep it like this.
- The break in each difficulty is currently far too large and leaves a good 17.5% of the song unmapped. Map through it, or at least part of it.
yeah alright. Mapped half of the breaktime.

[Hard]
00:00:609 (1) - This slider is currently a bit too crumpled, perhaps you could uncrumple it just a bit so that the start and end point do not overlap so it looks a bit nicer. ok then I use the 0.5 slider speed fix the slider to another shape.

[Normal]
01:11:609 (5) - Combo is getting sort of long, add a new combo here to split it up a bit? It lands on the new measure nicely, too.
Sure, fixed.

The maps themselves were mostly alright, it's mainly the stuff in [General] that needs to be fixed, and to be honest I wouldn't feel comfortable bubbling if the difficulty spread/break stayed the way it is. If you do decide to change those, however, send me a Forum PM I'll be happy to re-check and hopefully bubble. That's all!
thanks!
HakuNoKaemi
well, she could map something, but it's actually really difficult to be something between Normal and Hard, it will mostly be Insane, if she does not want to copy half of the patterns...
Topic Starter
Nymph
After discuss with Gonzvlo, decided to add a diff between these 2 diffs then~

change the hard diff's name to a custom name.

add another hard diff. done!
SapphireGhost
  1. New difficulty was checked, good there. Thanks for putting in the effort to improve your difficulty spread!
  2. Letterboxing was removed due to video.
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks~ Sapphire!

and thanks again for you and Gonzvlo's patience!
Kanon
4 bubbled map at same time :!:
不堪入目
Topic Starter
Nymph

Kanon wrote:

4 bubbled map at same time :!:
不堪入目
节操尽失
Andrea
[General]

Please make the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on every difficulty.


That's it, fix and I'll rank.
Topic Starter
Nymph
fixed~ updated~
Andrea
Alright then!

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks Andrea TvT~
Louis Cyphre
Gratz ~♥
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks Louis~
Kawayi Rika
555 快教我RANK~

Gratz ~ ;)
wcx19911123
我恨神mapper
Megurine Luka

wcx19911123 wrote:

我恨神mapper
hoLysoup

wcx19911123 wrote:

我恨神mapper
OzzyOzrock
ITATSURA DEMO
JoJo
让你不服让你不服让你不服 哼!=A=/ (噼里啪啦的掀桌声) 妮姆芙baka desu!>< (posted by 爪机
NatsumeRin
隔这么长时间做一个比tieff烂的多的版本是不是太浮躁了真的。
Topic Starter
Nymph

NatsumeRin wrote:

隔这么长时间做一个比tieff烂的多的版本是不是太浮躁了真的。
..…………算了 其实我现在也根本不明白什么是好图
AoiX

wcx19911123 wrote:

我恨神mapper
JoJo

NatsumeRin wrote:

隔这么长时间做一个比tieff烂的多的版本是不是太浮躁了真的。
烂?或许吧~ 但是对歌有爱才是真心的.. > <
做自己喜欢的歌 没什么错呢 至于它是好是烂 那就仁者见仁智者见智吧 @ @
KayeSara

真的我什么都说不出来了
只有说恭喜rank啦!



Edit:貌似最小的那只兔子撒花慢些呢 0.0
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks everyone~
L_P
eh he~
Dino99
Gratz!! :D
soulfear
ワロタwwwwww
Topic Starter
Nymph
谢了大家~
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