pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

00:53:595 (3) - new combo (given what you did last section) I think this is ok~

Hard:

Fine

nice map~ ...[Hard] reminds me of DJPop O.O

_Kiva wrote:

瞎了原来洗衣板也唱过这首歌Your message is too short.

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• ●Try Offset -391
  ●Break前相当缺音效，建议在一下时间点+whistle
  
  SPOILER

  [list:13168]●00:01:595
  ●00:03:595
  ●00:05:595
  ●00:07:595
  ●00:08:595
  [Hard]
  
  • ●00:00:595 (1) - 结尾点向右向下各一格使2个圈在一直线上，看上去好看些。。
    ●00:02:595 (5,6) - 类似这样的1/4的spacing建议和之前1,2,3的DS统一为固定格。。这个要改的地方很多而且又不是很有必要所以肯定要被你ignored不过还是当凑字数写在这里了。。（被拍砖）
    ●00:17:595 (1) - Hard的话我觉得从这里就可以开始map，感觉Break好长。
    ●01:04:845 (10,11) - 可以考虑+new combo。
    ●01:22:345 (4) - 1 grid up ?
    ●01:27:595 (1) - 开头+clap ?
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  [Normal]
  
  • ●00:55:595 (1) - 强烈建议拆成2个slider。突然一个这么多来回的slider会让人很困扰的= =。
    
    ●01:27:095 (2) - 折返点+clap ?
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  完毕~ 其实都是些nazi的东西= = 直接找BATrank吧
  闪走前再膜拜下（趴）
  咩。
  

JoJo wrote:

直接找BATrank吧

JoJo wrote:

按照惯例MOD前先拜一下神mapper（趴）

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●Try Offset -391 我不确定= = 再等等别人意见
  ●Break前相当缺音效，建议在一下时间点+whistle =A= 如果说我是故意的 你会想踹我吗..不过我真是故意不加的..
  
  SPOILER

  [list:25895]●00:01:595
  ●00:03:595
  ●00:05:595
  ●00:07:595
  ●00:08:595
  [Hard]
  
  • ●00:00:595 (1) - 结尾点向右向下各一格使2个圈在一直线上，看上去好看些。。嗯改了
    ●00:02:595 (5,6) - 类似这样的1/4的spacing建议和之前1,2,3的DS统一为固定格。。这个要改的地方很多而且又不是很有必要所以肯定要被你ignored不过还是当凑字数写在这里了。。（被拍砖）我不觉得啊 我觉得现在挺好
    ●00:17:595 (1) - Hard的话我觉得从这里就可以开始map，感觉Break好长。亚达=A=
    ●01:04:845 (10,11) - 可以考虑+new combo。加了一个
    ●01:22:345 (4) - 1 grid up ?神眼力=A=
    ●01:27:595 (1) - 开头+clap ?不要了 背景音CLAP很重了已经=A=
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  嗯 好吧 加了一个顺便降了15VOLUMN
  
  [Normal]
  
  • ●00:55:595 (1) - 强烈建议拆成2个slider。突然一个这么多来回的slider会让人很困扰的= =。好吧 改了= =
    [attachment=0:25895]123.jpg[/attachment:25895]
    ●01:27:095 (2) - 折返点+clap ?亚达 理由同上
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  加了 也同上
  
  完毕~ 其实都是些nazi的东西= = 直接找BATrank吧
  闪走前再膜拜下（趴）
  咩。

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
00:10:852- Very long break time so unrankable* =A= no more than 20 sec, I think it is ok
00:49:595- like this I don't see big difference..

01:19:095- 5 grid right nope, it makes the spacing wrong
01:28:595- finish <3 Finish is too loud imo =A=

Hard
01:14:595- finish
01:18:595- finish ?
01:28:595- finish :3 =A= too loud imo

Looks good but very long break time please fix it If i have a kudosu I will give star
Good luck <3

Didn't fix anything but still thanks for modding~

p3n wrote:

[General]
- why do you have "zero no tsukaima" in the tags? (just curious >w<) Because the video is about it:P
- long breaks are long...maybe map the break for the "hard" version? nah don't want to.
- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.


[Normal]
Good map but some hitsound suggestions:
01:14:595 (3) - add soft whistle?
01:16:595 (3) - ^
01:17:595 (1) - soft whistle on ending?
01:20:595 (5) - soft whistle?
01:22:595 (3) - ^
01:24:595 (3) - ^
01:25:595 (1) - soft whistle on ending?

You should use "something" to put emphasis on the middle upbeat in this part as it is VERY dominant in the song. If you dont like the soft whistle maybe you can find some nice custom hitsound for those notes? sorry, just don't want to. To make the hitsounds different from the kiai I just don't put hitsounds here on purose...


[Hard]
00:45:970 (3,4,5,6) - 4/4 makes no sense here imo. If you want to map the lyrics 100% use only 1/4 3/4 4/4 (delete (4) and play @25% and you'll hear what I mean); if you want to keep (4) on the downbeat (for the clap) maybe use 2 short sliders instead (will still play a bit weird though)
same applies to the other similar 4/4 streams in the map I don't think so.... they played well for me



Not much to complain...solid mapset. Maybe add an "Easy" version.lazy...yay +1

Nymph_ wrote:

- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.

Raging Bull wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.

Sorry, I understand that it is just over .03 , but don't say it was ranked before with over 3 star and you think it's okay. It's best to fix it to avoid these things in the future.

karenying wrote:

Genera
offset早了點,-390左右 =_=好吧 BAKAJO也说早= =
lead-in2500吧我建議 试了试血条还是瞬移。。算了先这样把
Normal
00:48:595 (3) - 為了對稱,copy 00:47:595 (1) - Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R 不好看=_=还得调距离..先这样把
00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =
hitsound看hard的mod

Hard
看完忍不著吐槽了: 為什么全是直slider,哦草還是扭来扭去的低阶婆婆排版orz 妮姆芙妮姆芙你腫么了 哎 我只是觉得这样很适合啊。。没有故意模仿婆婆
排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =

SPOILER

00:01:595 -
00:02:595 -
00:03:595 -
00:04:595 -
00:05:595 -
00:06:595 -
00:07:345 -
00:07:345 -
00:08:595 -
00:44:595 (1,3) -
00:49:095 (3) -
00:52:595 (1,3) -
01:04:845 (6,7) -
01:11:845 (2) - 尾
01:12:345 (3) - 頭尾也加
01:14:595 -
01:15:595 -
01:16:595 -
01:17:595 -
01:18:595 -
01:19:595 -
01:20:345 (3,4) -
01:22:595 -
01:23:595 -
01:24:595 -
01:25:595 -
01:26:595 -

00:09:595 (7) - 可NC嗯NC好了

Nymph_ wrote:

00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =

排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =

karenying wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =

排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =

1.有些人很2你懂的 无视无视 我才不惧他们
2.我知道啊可是我覺得加了比不加好 =_=我不太觉得呢..先这样吧

quintitem wrote:

kugyuuu~ <3

來射一發星了~>w</

SPOILER

對了...前面雖然有好多人提offset早了...
不過我這邊反而覺得如果對鼓點offset的話好像晚了D: ...感覺或許offset -400(以現在的-9ms)聽起來好點?xD
(好吧 其實我大概知道是因為kugyu唱歌都會慢拍(被打) 所以對鼓點的offset和vocal的offset都會差一點(炸))
嘛...不過是我覺得而已啦 試試看如果覺得不好或是想對vocal的offset就無視這個吧(喂)lol

Hellzero wrote:

2star for Kugimiya Rie <3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi~我来看看~做为钉宫迷~

鉴定完毕LOLICON Nymph~
[General]

这首歌萌死了~
00:09:859 - 这个Break 太长了，1分30的歌 用不着这么长的 00:17:609 到这里怎么样？不想MAP这里 就这样吧~
OSB文件删掉，如果不要SB的话。最后再删 不急
01:05:109 - 这里KIAI TIME 结束，01:05:609 - 这里再加会更好？这里不太想要喷泉
Stack Leniency 6应该就足够了~ 感觉6和7没发现什么区别 就这样吧这个是默认


[Hard]

00:40:359 (5) - add NC.
01:07:609 (6) - ^ 这两个觉得没大必要 没加


[Normal]

HP 和 OD 太低了吧 简直是EASY 级别 减星也不能这样啊 >O<
各自+2？做个EASY 难度吧... 这个做EASY就真的没什么玩头了...NORMAL够简单的
01:07:609 (5) - add NC. 这个加了
01:20:359 (4) - 删掉这个. 这个似乎有点用的样子
01:20:859 - 这里加Note 和 clap,会更好点吧？那样节奏太赶了 感觉没必要为了双CLAP加个NOTE

膜拜妮姆芙 神MAPPER~
good luck~

L_P wrote:

wow nice song and very moe
so i wanna mod! xD (all suggestion, as youre nymph XD)

hard:
00:30:359 (4) - move to 00:30:484 ? (lyrics)
00:30:859 (6) - delete one return ?
00:31:234 (7) - slider with one return, end at 31,484 ?
00:32:359 (11) - slider, end at 32,484 ? sorry but changing these will ruin the consistent imo, so I think I am gonna to keep this~
00:39:234 (8) - delete? cause sometime you also didnt follow the lyrics and i think this time also....dont need the note (make the rhythm "tatatata+tatatata+tatatatata" yeah but actually the vocal stops here.. so I think this note is really necessary.
00:41:109 (11) - delete, same reason

00:42:109 (2) - jump? i like jump here "fuwa fuwa ..."
00:48:859 (2,3) - here also.. yeah jump is a good idea, but I personally don't want to jump here.. sorry =A=
01:00:359 (8) - really need curve..and suggest end it at 01:01:109 sorry but I think this long slider fit more~
01:16:609 (5) - try end this at 01:16:859? nah I can't do this,because it is connected with 01:17:109 (6), so stop here is a better choice~


sorry for my bad mod and bad english....

哦 我好喜欢你的map哦 我是新mapper多多指教！

edited: why insane's sliders all straight one? i like easy's more
2nd edit: 你改名了哦？！

Vicho-kun wrote:

Add to the tags: THE IDOLM@STER, Minase Iori

I think you should add it because the song is from a CD of IDOLM@STER and the character that sing it is Minase Iori <3

L_P wrote:

awww..不是我的错啦 是你的map太好了

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Well, take one guest that follow the saxophone if you want

[Normal]
i don't know if the MATs/BATs will accept a 3,03 diff was an easier... but you might use the larger circle size( CS 3 ) to make it 2,99 and respect the "easier diff should be less than 3 stars" rule I think it is ok=A= CS3seems really ugly in this diff..
00:25:359 (1) - I think it's more nice to make it 1/2 longer and do this
00:53:109 (2,3) - Move them as you complete the diamond pattern?(maybe forma triangle too), How you can adjust the part after? like this sorry I personally don't like these 2.
00:55:609 (1,2,3) - a more circlular pattern? like this yeah allright done~

[Hard]
Hp Drain +2 or at least +1.. as now it's really low sorry but no =A=
The streams are all linear... you might make some curved stream? I think they are ok~
00:00:609 (1) - You might use a SV x0.5 section and make it like this? not very beautiful.. I'd like to keep mine

actually it's bubble-ready for me

SapphireGhost wrote:

moe and stuff

[General]
- The difficulty spread is very poor, I'd strongly advise having at least three. [Normal] gives ~ 250,000 points and [Hard] gives ~ 1,900,000 points, try to see if you can make one that fits well enough between those two in difficulty, star rating, and max score.
Nah sorry but I really don't want to, an easy is really not necessary and I really don't think another hard or normal+ between this normal and hard is good.so I think I am sure gonna to keep it like this.
- The break in each difficulty is currently far too large and leaves a good 17.5% of the song unmapped. Map through it, or at least part of it.
yeah alright. Mapped half of the breaktime.

[Hard]
00:00:609 (1) - This slider is currently a bit too crumpled, perhaps you could uncrumple it just a bit so that the start and end point do not overlap so it looks a bit nicer. ok then I use the 0.5 slider speed fix the slider to another shape.

[Normal]
01:11:609 (5) - Combo is getting sort of long, add a new combo here to split it up a bit? It lands on the new measure nicely, too.
Sure, fixed.

The maps themselves were mostly alright, it's mainly the stuff in [General] that needs to be fixed, and to be honest I wouldn't feel comfortable bubbling if the difficulty spread/break stayed the way it is. If you do decide to change those, however, send me a Forum PM I'll be happy to re-check and hopefully bubble. That's all!

1. New difficulty was checked, good there. Thanks for putting in the effort to improve your difficulty spread!
2. Letterboxing was removed due to video.

Kanon wrote:

4 bubbled map at same time
不堪入目

wcx19911123 wrote:

我恨神mapper

wcx19911123 wrote:

我恨神mapper

NatsumeRin wrote:

隔这么长时间做一个比tieff烂的多的版本是不是太浮躁了真的。

wcx19911123 wrote:

我恨神mapper

NatsumeRin wrote:

隔这么长时间做一个比tieff烂的多的版本是不是太浮躁了真的。