[General]
- Top diff has some aimod issues how tf did i miss that
- your normal difficulty needs to be below 2* for it to be rankable as per the current RC. you can either make an EZ diff or nerf NM slightly to have a diff below 2*. either works (wont mod NM in the meantime) done
[SHD]
00:17:254 - from what i can hear the prominent 1/2 rhythms start here so it would make sense to also start charting notes on the 1/2 here
ok01:11:117 - i would actually add the 1/2 LN here for the weird sound thing like at 01:10:572 (70572|3) - because its still present here, and you didnt have a problem with it being present during the 1/4th rhythms like at 01:10:572 (70572|3) -
pattern doesnt work because of the 1/6 stuff right after01:20:117 - could do something cool with the sounds here by overlapping the LNs kinda like
http://prntscr.com/jqq6gg i guess
i have something similar now01:59:254 - i believe you are missing the 1/8th rolls for the hihat here, like in 01:30:072 - but only for one beat
correction, 1/602:03:277 - not a huge fan of the random direction changes on this roll here since the sound doesn't change drastically enough for it to justify such a change here tbh. i would try out something like which suits the sound a lot better than as it is now
http://prntscr.com/jqq8lt made it a 2143 instead of suggested 124302:03:617 - another small suggestion here, maybe a more LN based pattern could fit to represent the bass wub things in the bg
http://prntscr.com/jqq9fw SV already represents that pretty clearly, i think it would be disrupted with more notes herelit
tit[SC]
00:17:254 - similar idea to top diff, i can hear the 1/2 rhythms beginning here
ok01:59:254 - maybe an LN or smth for the hihats here?
idk, it disrupts the flow, if i find a better pattern for it i will implement the LN02:03:617 - a similar suggestion to top diff about adding some notes here, but maybe just single notes or non overlapping LNs to create a sort of spread
SV is harder in SHD than in here i guess that is the "spread", i dont feel like more notes are necessary here02:56:527 - as for this section, id recommend some sort of LNs (1/1) to cover the length of the 1/4th rhythms here since avoiding them altogether seems pretty contradictory to the music
changed this part pretty significantly03:05:117 - i see no reason to skip the note here since theres more than enough sound to justify a note here and would help ease into the next section since atm it feels janky when the previous rhythms have been 1/2 consistently
fixed04:30:617 - since theres a pretty prominent kick sound here i would add a note in col 4 to kind of show that its there and emphasise it as well as the sound behind the triples
did them both as doubles. also changed SHD's hitsounds for this part to keep consistency[MX]
00:17:254 - probably to keep consistent with the top two diffs, i recommend starting the 1/2 rhythms here since they're loud enough to justify some sort of note-age here
done01:24:890 - i would prefer for this jumptrill if the patterning wasnt changed to keep consistent with the jumptrill at 00:58:708 -
fixed03:13:708 (193708|2,193845|3) - some pretty awkward release times especially when compared to the LN next to it. i would restructure it to keep the LN releases the same for all 4 LNs. kinda like
http://prntscr.com/jqqtsl or similar
ok03:18:345 (198345|3,198413|2,198549|1,198617|0) - not a huge fan of how the broken stream is structured since it implies a straight stream with the pattern at the moment. i would try out something like
http://prntscr.com/jqquei which probably shows that the stream is broken instead of consistent more effectively
aight04:01:708 (241708|0,242049|0) - caught me off guard when playing it, for the sake of keeping the flow clean i would try moving the LN to like col 2 or smth so that the shield isnt there
yeet04:40:436 - this is cool i like it
thanks babe04:45:617 - same idea about the broken stream here
yote05:24:890 - i mean, i guess its not a huge problem but i would definitely prefer for you to have some sort of LN patterning towards the end to have the drain time in this diff consistent with the others. not to mention the song carries on past this point so feels pretty abrupt to just end it here personally
ill ask other BN because i thought it was fitting for the spread (in context)[HD]
00:17:254 - yeah same idea about the 1/2 rhythms here
gotcha01:00:686 (60686|2,60754|1,60822|2) - i see no reason personally to have this stream to end on a trill when theres no indication within the sound to do so. i would just have the normal [4321] roll all the way through and have the double at the end be [34]
ok01:26:867 - same idea here i guess, and for any other instances of this
05:11:799 - i would of preferred this little section before the stream to be a little denser, try out
http://prntscr.com/jqr2h4?
sure05:24:890 - same idea in MX about possibly adding some LNs at the end here