Hey, returning M4M!
Broken Angel
Lilyanna's Advanced
ReFaller's Normal
Easy
General
- 01:25:370 (6) - Sliders starting on red ticks are not always the best since they start on a weak sound while 01:25:370 (6) - is on a strong sound, try something like this:
- 01:37:023 (4,1) - You've had bigger jumps to weaker sounds, why is this one smaller?
- 01:42:973 (5,1,2) - I see you are using this space emphasis for a reason, but the way it is structured basically makes a wide angle jump making for awkward flow. If you Ctrl + G 01:43:221 (1) - so it leads into 01:43:717 (2) - it might make it flow better.
- 01:47:684 (2,3) - Fix blanket
- 01:09:007 - This slider-end does not perfectly overlap 01:10:246 (2)
- 01:09:254 (4,1,2) - This rhythm doesn't make much sense, at first you map to the instruments and then you switch over to the vocals. Imo it would be better if you just have 3 half sliders starting at 01:09:254 so that the repeated notes of the vocals are represented.
- 01:53:139 (1,2) - The "curved blanket" could be better
- 00:54:626 (4) - Add NC
- 01:41:982 (4) - This slider starts on a weak sound, try moving down 1/2 a beat and just place a circle where the head used to be
- 01:57:849 (4) - Same here ^
- 01:09:502 (2) - Goes off screen
This mapset is really good, I love your use of combo colors to separate different sections of the song and I genuinely love the storyboard! Since this mapset is made up of lower difficulties I couldn't find a lot of dreadful errors so you're pretty good on that. The only issues I would have to do with sliders starting on red ticks and weird rhythm in some places. Overall though it is a high quality map.
Some notes about the difficulty Broken Angel, I saw that your new combos were kind of weird, I would suggest adding a new combo every big white tick so that it can represent each measure without the combo seemingly going on forever. If you are confused, take a look at Lilyanna's Advanced to see what I'm talking about.
Anyway, I hope you can eventually rank this since it definitely deserves to be!
Good luck!
P.S. Thanks for the mod!
Some notes about the difficulty Broken Angel, I saw that your new combos were kind of weird, I would suggest adding a new combo every big white tick so that it can represent each measure without the combo seemingly going on forever. If you are confused, take a look at Lilyanna's Advanced to see what I'm talking about.
Anyway, I hope you can eventually rank this since it definitely deserves to be!
Good luck!
P.S. Thanks for the mod!