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Meg & Dia - One Sail

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Larto
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 3. Oktober 2011 at 12:11:30

Artist: Meg & Dia
Title: One Sail
Tags: meg and dia here, here and here here and here
BPM: 110
Filesize: 5893kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,28 stars, 212 notes)
  2. Hard (4,73 stars, 335 notes)
  3. Insane (4,91 stars, 421 notes)
  4. Normal (4,02 stars, 271 notes)
Download: Meg & Dia - One Sail
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm a ship like you. One sail, one sea. But it seems you all left your souls next to the shore.

Alternative Background:

Copyright 2011 SapphireGhost
Krisom
Star!

Oh wai- FFFFFF

this message is too short lalalalalalalalalalalala
SapphireGhost
This map is very much amazing, I love you so much for all the hard work you do and please enjoy this figurative online cake.
/me gives cake?
Verdisphena
Meg & Dia !<3
Your message is too long.
SapphireGhost
One Sail. One Sea. One Larto. One Album. One Sky Ferreira.
It's modding time. The mod got a little too friendly, entertaining, and fun to read so I made a different version for people who would rather avoid that sort of thing.

Fun Version

[Innards]
- Circles are too small, please make them larger. THAT WAS A JOKE HAHA FAT CHANCE
01:42:148 (1,2,3) - This blanket could be improved by moving (3) a touch down. Ohohoho touchdown.
02:45:420 (8,9,1) - Jibbaha would not like you putting a new combo in a stack maybe.
03:03:148 (1,2,3,4) - Hey now now, these curves could probably be a bit less sharp.

[Nard]
00:50:875 (2,3,4) - For some reason, I really like the hitsounding here. Good job, sir.
01:13:239 (2,3) - Now I think you know, you know that I can be your girlfriend and your mother and my moment and that this overlap is unattractive. As in, I do not feel any sort of attraction towards this overlap and if I did that would be creepy.
01:15:421 (2,3) - again again again again again again again agaaaain
01:27:966 - SIR, I believe you need to drag the break to this point and then reprimand yourself for what you've done, look what we've done.
02:51:148 (4,5,6) - I'd advise you alter this section to embrace 1/3.

[Narmal]
01:19:511 (2,3) - Can't you seeheehee, I hate to be the overlap nazi but I know that your love is never gonna leave me so just take a Bob the Builder attitude and FIX IT.
02:19:511 (1,2,3) - The spacing of these notes is odd. In my glasses I'm no Wizard of Oz, but the spacing still looks strange.
03:09:693 (4,5,6,7) - At this Approach Rate, I'm a bit concerned that this spacing might be confusing for people, and perhaps cats too.
03:45:966 (3) - Okay, well this could be prettier. In fact...
ohohoho
he waaarned me not to make frieeends by my right ay
140,104,225966,2,2,B|125:189|213:215|297:163|253:123|209:83|293:31|380:59|364:143,1,374.399993305206,2|4

[Beginna]
00:40:784 (2) - Take a step to the left and if it looks like this then you're doing it right. A little bit of Monica in my life, a little bit of Erica by my side, a little bit of Rita's all I need, a little bit of Tina's -- I forgot the rest of the lyrics, and probably got the other ones wrong so... moving on!
00:50:057 (1) - Well, I don't think that a new combo is necessary here. Take it off, they turn us on when they take it off.

Not Fun Version

:(
[Insane]
01:42:148 (1,2,3) - This blanket could be improved by moving (3) a little down.
02:45:420 (8,9,1) - You might want to avoid putting a new combo in a stick. RandomJibberish doesn't like that, you know.
03:03:148 (1,2,3,4) - These curves are a bit sharp, you could make them smoother.

[Hard]
00:50:875 (2,3,4) - Great hitsounding!
01:13:239 (2,3) - Overlap doesn't look very good here.
01:15:421 (2,3) - See above.
01:27:966 - Drag the break to this point!
02:51:148 (4,5,6) - Map to the 1/3, at least a bit.

[Normal]
01:19:511 (2,3) - I know I'm pointing out a lot of overlaps but this really doesn't look good.
02:19:511 (1,2,3) - I'd advise you to change this irregular spacing.
03:09:693 (4,5,6,7) - The Approach Rate could make this pattern difficult to read.
03:45:966 (3) - Slider could look prettier.
SCREENSHOT
140,104,225966,2,2,B|125:189|213:215|297:163|253:123|209:83|293:31|380:59|364:143,1,374.399993305206,2|4

[Easy]
00:40:784 (2) - Center this note.
00:50:057 (1) - Remove unnecessary new combo.
Best of luck, Lartella.
NotShinta
Here I am, modding another Larto map. I hope nobody thinks I mod Larto's maps and Larto's maps only. I can understand one coming under that misconception, but the truth is I have a mental-only obligation to mod all of Larwhore's Gem + Aid maps. I am just distracted and don't seem to find time for the others.

Also, in reply to Sapphire's signature, it does seem almost like a religion at times. Which is kind of sad, but also is slightly logical. I relied on it when nothing else made sense. I can't wait until he changes that signature and I forget the context of it.

Lastly, blue is my favourite colour. Partially because I love the sea and the sky, which are both featured on this BG. It's like a song by Imogen Heap and some other really good band or singer I can't think of. To celebrate, tadaa. Enjoy your mod in a pleasant colour.

General:
- Now that we're on the subject of my odd obsession with a colour, it's okay if you don't want to use combo colours here, but I suggested it last time so I'll suggest it here just so I look more consistent and sexually appealing. Yay.

DOES THAT MAKE ME Insane:
- Never was the Navy bread.
- 02:09:966 (2) - This slider just causes a bit of rage in me. I'm not entirely sure why. It's the same as the other one. Maybe just make it more normal, and symmetrical. Like this, because I want you to feel sorry for my tiny resolution.
- 03:33:148 (2) - I thought this spacing was a bit strange, considering it's closer to 1/4 spacing than 1/2 elsewhere in this final chorus. Same for other orbiting things, actually. I can't remember what they're called. Remind me!

Hard:
- He warned me not to make friends with whales. There's also a little bug thing on me. Aha!
- 01:27:966 - Missing break draggage. Here's a good song about missing people. Not quite the same thing, is it.
- 02:09:966 (2) - Once again, a bad slider out of nowhere in a map of consistently good sliders. Ish. That second tick is a sad mistake.
- 03:39:966 (5) - And again, I couldn't help but think that this spacing was a bit odd! One sail, one sea, one flesh, one bone, one true religion, one voice, one hope, one real decision, one vision, one, one, one, one, one, one, one, one. The more you look at it, the less it makes sense as a number.

Normal:
- 02:29:602 (2) - Nice spacing. Did you mean to? I'd hope not.
- 03:08:193 (2) - laughingmegdia.jpg
- 03:39:966 (4,1,2) - So while I was playing the harder difficulties, I was thinking if Sapphire or someone mapped a mapset of this, he'd use WTF orbits at some point. Then I was wondering if you would in an easier difficulty. And you did! It's like an ah ah, but well done. This got uninteresting fast.

Easy:
- 02:36:966 (1) - These, sir, are sexy. However, some might be even more impressed if they blanketed the next note. Considering that might make the slider look worse for too much effort, I would let it pass. =]. That doesn't look as good in this font.
- 03:09:693 (3) - Just like to say I teeheehee'd at these points. Good.

Well, excellent mapset as usual, Larto. I didn't go supernitpickhunting for this one. Partially because I think I have an ear infection coming on and don't want to make it hurt for me, so I'll just keep listening to industrial and experimental music at the highest volume.

But as sexy as this map is, I'm curious as to how RJ's attempt at mapping this turned out when he was a non-believer in you. By the way, I started handwriting this post, but I realised how impractical that was for what's probably just a picture of the paper because my dad's scanner is round at my dad's and if I sent it to you the mod would've been outdated by then. It's the thought that counts.
Roddie
Hey.

Easy
  1. 02:24:420 (1)-It would sound great if there was a clap here.
  2. 02:26:602 (1)-^
  3. 02:33:148 (1)-^

Normal
  1. 03:03:148 (1)-I'm sure it would sound pretty good if there was a finish here maybe?

Hard
  1. 02:01:511 (5)-I think you forgot to add a finish on the end.

Insane
  1. 02:49:784 (8)-This note isn't snapped. Resnap it please.

And that's it. Good luck, Larto!
Topic Starter
Larto
Just pointing out that Agnes and Fuuko also modded this map and didn't seem to find anything (look at the stars).
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

This map is really good feel free to ignore my simple suggestions and possible nazing :P

[Easy]

Nothing~

[Normal]

00:40:784 (4) - Place this one neatly under (2).
00:46:920 (4) - ^-Same here. :P

[Hard]

Nothing~

[Insane]

03:38:875 (3) - Align with (5).

Nice map.
Zelos
I'M ON A BOAT! 8-)

Folder:
Cleeeean

General:
lol I love how precise your slider velocities are.

Please note any mod of mine is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored

Easy:
00:50:057 (1) - perhaps remove the new combo here? it just kinda seems redundant with the previous slider and all.
00:56:602 (4) - this is touching the HP bar, maybe move it down a little?
02:25:239 (3) - perhaps a new combo here? it will match the previous slider like this
02:41:330 (1,1) - stack the endings? it would look at least a little neater.
03:09:693 (3) - nothing wrong with this. just pointing something random out. SWEET JESUS THAT IS A LOT OF SLIDER POINTS SIR

Normal:
00:46:239 (3,4) - stack the endings? they are just slightly off. You could fix this by deleting 4, starting the a new slider on the end of 3, draw the curve you had starting on the end slider point, then ctrl + r
03:38:057 (1) - maybe move this over to the left 1 grid point? at least it will be a little centered if you do :o

There were other things I didnt like involving some 1/4th spots but they made sense so im not gonna bother with those

Hard:
01:20:330 (4,1) - maybe stack the beginnings of these just a bit better? it would look neater if you did
02:06:693 (4,1) - stack 4 on top of the ending of 1? its just a teeny bit off.
02:51:148 (4,5) - you should set the endings of both of these to 1/4th since you do this later on in the map.
02:54:420 (1,3) - stack the endings of these? they are also just a bit off.
03:44:875 (1,2) - now correct me if im wrong, but these look just a tiny tiny bit unstacked. if so, stack them perfectly?

Insane:
02:59:330 (2,3) - stack the endings just a tiny bit better?
03:44:875 (3,4) - stack the endings of these better too? this would look a lot neater if you did.

I would very much say this is ready for bubble check

Star x3
SapphireGhost
old fixes in a box
We meet again, my dear friend. This mod looks long but most of it is just prettiness suggestions so this can be as amazing as possible before it is ranked and enjoyed by hundreds of people. I'm being more nazi than I usually am, forgive me. This is the song that I was listening to when I heard the news that I was dead now a MAT, so I feel obligated to make it delicious.

[Insane]
01:09:693 (1) - AIBat kindly informed me that the end of this slider is unsnapped for some silly reason.
01:10:784 (5,6) - Minor overlap, but it won't take much work to shift it a bit and make it prettier.
02:54:420 (1,2,3,4) - (1) goes pretty deep into the HP bar, and (4) has a pixel or two going off-screen. Just move them around a bit and it'll be all good.
03:03:148 (1,2,3,4) - These are still more sharp than they should be, sir.
03:26:329 (2,3,4) - The small overlap here has no appeal, it has no appeal.
03:33:148 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern makes a smiley face and it's cool and all but honestly, I liked it better when (2) and (1) were in the same position. This is because the way the pattern is now is not completely perfect and the start of (2) and (1) overlap a bit. So basically yes, it's your choice in the end.
03:39:966 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Same thing but this time you have (7) overlapping with (1) and making things even more messy and I'm sorry, I just can't let you.

[Hard]
- The beginning bit of this has a few too many 1/4s for "[Hard]", it would be good to cut down on those a little.
01:38:330 (1) - This note touches the HP bar in a rather unattractive way, and it wouldn't be too hard to lower it a touch.
01:39:966 (1) - Here it goes, here it goes again.
02:55:239 (3,4,5) - Align (3) so it's right under the tick of (5).
03:33:148 (3,4,1,2) - The two sliders here are fairly noticably not perfectly in the right places as they should be, and they should be perfectly in the right places. You can do it.

[Normal]
00:38:193 (3,1) - HP bar stuff.
02:26:875 (1,2,3) - This pattern seems a bit awkward, in that it would be more intuitive to hit (3) 1/2 after (2), even though the spacing is different. I'd rearrange stuff so that you DO hit (3) 1/2 after (2) because that seems more intuitive. Notice my fabulous re-wording and/or redundancy.
02:46:511 (2) - Goes into the HP bar quite a bit, move it down, silly.

[Easy]
00:56:602 (4) - This also goes into the HP Bar to the point where it's touching the actual bar bit and stuff.
01:51:148 (1,2,1) - What this is not a blanket RJ would be sad.
02:36:693 (4,1) - Shift from 0.8x to 1.3x here is not welcome, sir. Try something a bit more similar to this.
03:46:784 (3) - It seems like you should just take the whistle off so it's more like FINISH... sea. Instead of that whistle chirp thingy.

You best be quick you've got to forum PM me when you make these changes so I can bauble this.
Checked with Larto on IRC to make sure he was good and ready. I've checked with a BAT about the mp3 length, he said it was fine.
By the way, this is officially my MAT song as it was what was playing on osu! when I found out I had been MATted, and it makes me very happy. Uh, back to the point.
Boom.
Bubbled!
Krisom
(dang, I was so sure I would be able to pop this <_<)

I'm a ship like you
One sail~ one sea~ you and me!
And I left my soul next to the shore
One sail, one sea ~

Congratulations!
SapphireGhost
Congratulations, my lovely Lartella!
psyclone
Download doesn't work. Always getting a 0 byte file.
IkkiMinami
Star!

Oh wai- FFFFFF
SapphireGhost
He warned me not to make friends with weather. Posting this here because Krisom didn't.
Mercurial
Seriusly Larto, I don't know how you do it?

Simplely, I love you ♥
OzzyOzrock
Think about sinking down.
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