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L Plus - Avenger

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Queru
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 03 de diciembre de 2017 at 18:57:50

Artist: L Plus
Title: Avenger
BPM: 87
Filesize: 3323kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Brainwash (4,87 stars, 309 notes)
Download: L Plus - Avenger
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ALMOSTY!:')
hyped for this one :D
Beta'
pavpab
Hi c:
#modreqs actually working LUL

Brainwash
00:02:864 (1,2,3,4) - This combo uses SV x1.50, but next slider 00:04:243 (1) uses x0.50. Consider making the gap smaller so there isn't a sudden speed change. This happens in many consecutive sliders during the song, so be careful with it >-<
00:07:519 (2) - This is way too close to the previous slider.
00:11:140 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - This object placement is kinda messy, and at the same time, should be one single combo.
00:13:726 (1) - I can't hear any sound being represented by this.
00:14:243 (1) - Remove NC.
00:14:243 (1,2) - You could stack those circles to make it flow better.
00:16:657 (1) - This slider shape is a bit shity to look at xd Maybe make the slider body easier to see, no overlapping with itself.
00:17:002 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:519 (1,2,3) - This placement is a bit odd, (1) comes out of nowhere, so maybe... you could overlap it with (2) from the previous combo, and pull (3) a bit closer, like this: https://gyazo.com/88625de48aa01770cab332f85c7f9254
00:17:519 (1) - Remove NC.
00:19:416 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - No NCs needed. also you should remake that placement...
00:23:554 (1) - Remove NC.
00:23:899 (1) - Remove NC.
00:25:968 (1) - Overlap it with the previous slider. And remove NC.
00:27:347 (3,4) - Stack those.
00:27:692 (5) - Add NC.
00:28:726 (1) - Remove NC.
00:28:726 (1,2) - Stack those.
00:29:588 (1) - Remove NC.
00:29:761 (2) - This slider doesn't represent the sound, just copy paste the previous one, and place it in a way they don't overlap on each other.
00:30:278 (1) - Remove NC.
00:30:451 (2) - Add NC.
00:30:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Messy object placement.
00:32:692 (1) - Remove NC.
00:36:312 (3) - Add NC.
00:37:002 (1) - Remove NC.
00:38:381 (3) - This slider shape doesn't represent the sound.
00:41:485 (2) - Practice Slider Art XD
00:44:243 (1) - AiMod This object's end is not snapped!
00:44:761 (2) - Overlap it with previous slider's head?
00:45:106 (1) - Remove NC.
00:46:571 (5) - This slider shpae doesn't represent the sound, make it so the slider body is clear to play.
00:47:692 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:037 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:382 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:554 (2) - Stack it with 00:47:519 (2) ? And add NC
00:48:727 (1) - Remove NC.
00:49:416 (4) - Unclear slider body...
00:50:451 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:796 (3,4) - Would be better like this: https://gyazo.com/0d74a760368aad78ea609703df389a86
00:51:399 (1,2) - WTF 1/8 JUMP. REDUCE SPACING LOL
00:51:831 (1) - Remove NC.
00:53:382 (1) - Remove NC.
00:53:726 (3) - Reduce spacing so it's the same between (1,2) and (3,4).
00:54:588 (3,4) - Reduce spacing.
00:55:278 (4) - Unclear slider body :D
00:55:968 (1) - Remove NC.
00:56:312 (1) - Remove NC.
00:57:519 (1) - Remove NC.
00:59:588 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:105 (1) - Ctlr + G and remove NC. :D
01:00:795 (4) - Add NC.
01:02:174 (3) - Unclear slider body.
01:02:692 (1,2) - Stack those.
01:03:123 (4) - Unclear slider body.
01:03:899 (1) - Remove NC.
01:04:933 (1) - Remove NC.
01:05:105 (2,3) - Maybe stack?
01:06:312 (7) - A nice way to show different SV changes! :3
01:07:347 (2,3) - Stack.
01:08:381 (3,4) - Reduce spacing.
01:08:726 (1) - Remove NC.
01:09:071 (2) - Add NC.
01:10:278 (1) - Remove NC.
01:10:623 (3) - Add NC.
01:10:968 (1) - Remove NC.


You should polish more the patterns you use in a map, but it's ok how you handled 01:06:312 (7) ! Favourite thing in the map XD
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