JarvisGaming YT wrote:

From meh queue
d = Small don
D = Big don
k = Small kat
K = Big kat
[Oni]
00:03:214 (20) - k Low pitch here
00:08:551 (52) - Delete it No delete, to emphasize better
00:13:337 (80) - k Low pitch
00:14:073 (85) - k ^
00:19:410 (113,114,115) - kkk ^
00:24:748 (140) - K Calm part here
00:26:404 (151,152,153,154,155) - kdddk Done as kkddk
00:30:085 (171) - K D
00:30:269 (172) - K Why big K here?
00:30:361 (173,174) - Delete Make the gameplay harder
00:32:662 (187) - k Ok
00:40:208 (222) - d Doesn't fit the pitch
00:45:453 (246) - delete Wait, why?
00:45.545-00:45.729 - ddd Same, doesn't fit the pitch
00:46:189 (251,252) - delete Make the gameplay harder
00:46.282-00:46.466 - ddk Done as ddkkd
00:47:018 (256,257,258,259,260,261,262) - kdkdkdk At 00:47:386 doesn't fit the pitch
00:51:435 (279) - ddd Sure
00:51:711 (280) - delete Nice, fixed
00:53:183 (291) - delete Make gameplay harder and vocal there
00:54:196 (295) - k Doesn't fit the pitch
01:01:558 (337) - delete To emphasze better
01:03:030 (347) - D Calm part
01:03:490 (349,350) - delete Same, make gameplay harder
01:04:410 (354) - d High pitch here
01:05:607 (363) - k Low pitch
01:08:643 (380) - k Ok
01:09:104 (384,385,386) - kkk Low pitch
01:11:312 (398,399,400) - kkk No ;w;
01:14:073 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - dddkddk Changed the pattern other way
01:21:251 (461,462,463) - ddd Doesn't fit the pitch
01:22:171 (467) - delete Why?

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I suck at modding
What the hell am I doing here

1. 00:11:864 - add D ? , 00:11:496 (17,18) - finish?
   It is to insist on this place where the sound is strong.
   
   
2. 00:16:650 (25) - delete
   I will write a detailed reason after this, but delete as consistency
   
   
3. 00:28:429 (41) - delete, 00:35:791 (53) - delete
   00:23:275 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) -
   This consecutive notes is very difficult for Kantan player.
   1/1 break will be a good map for the Kantan player as well.
   and for consistensy. 00:16:650 (25,41) -
   
   
4. 00:48:122 (69) - change spin?
   I have resistance to making kantan player hit a 1/4 pattern.
   
   
5. 01:00:821 (86) - delete, 01:01:558 (87,88,89) - finish, 01:02:662 (90) - delete
   I recommend that you take a big break after the five-tuplet.
   But when you listen to songs you can not do such a thing, we recommend that you break the five-tuplet.
   
   
6. 01:06:711 (98) - delete
   Secure a break.
   
   
7. 01:08:551 (102) - delete
   This quintuplet is strange. Vocal is also natural if you make it 3-1 pattern.
   
   
8. 01:20:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This pattern is impossible for Kantan player.
   01:21:067 (5) - delete, 01:22:539 (9) - delete, it my opinion.
   Avoid seven tuplets.
   
   
9. 01:25:116 (13) - move to 01:25:300 - or 01:24:932 - .
   The former is piano, the latter is vocal.
   I feel strange because there is no distinct sound.

• 
  

  PoPoii wrote:

  some advice
  dont use long pattern for futsuu, if some new player try this, maybe they will fail, and your begining its too hard, its different then your kai/chorus i hope you can fix that, i cant mention it all sorry

  agree

1. 00:00:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) -
   This part is closer to Muzukashii 's pattern than Futsuu, Futsuu Player is impossible.
   
   
2. 00:50:883 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5) -
   There are no breaks in the pattern so far.
   We need more break.
   
   
   Looking at the recent Taiko Ranked map may be helpful.
   
   
   In the current state it will be far from ranked.

1. 00:06:895 (33) - delete
   I feel unnecessary
   
   
2. 00:24:564 (107) - delete
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   
   
3. 01:01:374 (60) - finish
   you pick vocal accent.
   
   
4. 01:02:846 (68) - delete
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   
   good Muzu :3

1. 00:04:134 (25,29) - delete
   00:03:582 (21,22,23,24) - 00:04:318 (26,27,28) - 00:05:055 (30,31,32,33) -
   would like to make a consistent pattern with these.
   
   
2. 00:05:791 (35) - delete
   Unnecessary. The one who turned it out gets better.
   
   
3. 00:13:153 (78,79) - delete, 00:13:889 (83,84) - delete, 00:14:257 (86,87) - delete
   Unnecessary. There is no sound to raise the density around here, obvious overmapping.
   
   
4. 00:15:361 (94,95) - delete
   Unnecessary.
   
   
5. 00:23:091 (132) - delete
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   
   
6. 00:24:932 (141,142,146,147) - delete
   Unnecessary. There is no sound to raise the density around here, obvious overmapping.
   
7. 00:30:269 (172,173,174) -
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   and It is hard for any player.
   
   
8. 00:41:680 (231) - delete, 00:41:864 (232) - change k .
   Ease of hitting.
   and 00:41:496 (230,232) - Because it has almost the same pitch, it has the same color.
   
   
9. 00:49:594 (270,271) - delete, 00:49:778 (272) - finish
   You should make this sound stand out.
   Doing so will create a good flow throughout the map.
   
   
10. 00:53:183 (294) - move to 00:53:367 -
    vocal follow, The original triplet is strange.
    
    
    You can improve consistency a little more.
    Because there is over mapping, we can cut it a little more notes.

PoPoii wrote:

i love this song xD
from my queue t/475792
Hi! o/

Moo zoo

00:01:005 (5,6) - k d
Applied~
00:08:367 - change to d ? i think its fit whit the piano
It doesn't at all, piano is really high and notorious, don't get why changing D:
00:11:496 - to d, its a same sound with the previous ddK
It's not the same... also if I change it to d d k pattern it will be so repetitive, so I pref using k d k for variation and filling better
00:16:282 - to k, the vocal said "yaa" and i hear snare
It's mostly about following melody, current d is great to follow next kat note
00:17:570 - to k
00:17:754 - to d
00:18:122 - to k to follow the vocal
Fixed the vocal-follow pattern in some way you said ~
00:19:594 - d its bass drum and it said "to mo", if you want you can change 00:19:226 - to d, but i hear snare there so you can keep
You answered yourself xD also pitch is way same ^^
00:26:220 - to d, to fit with vocal and bass drum
I pref using d k k k cause it feels like rhythm is really ascendant and not making a high-low-high-low pattern
00:30:085 - sir are you missing there ? i think its a dominan sound, maybe you can drag 00:30:269 (131) - to 00:30:085 - and change to big K ?
Not pretty sure about this tbh, I got your point but I skipped this because I'm highly following vocal on this section. I pref holding as it is cause by sightreading this at playing will be really strange since there's not any vocal to map
00:33:398 - this should be k and 00:33:582 - should be d
Why? I think melody is currently ascendant and makes a great emphasis to next k d k k (00:33:582 (145,146) - specially)
00:34:686 - to d ?
Same as above. Current k d k k pattern is fine imo
is 00:53:091 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - the reverse version of 00:51:619 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ? if yes, you need to change some note it doesnt fit
Only reverse notes are 00:51:987 (13,14,15,16) - 00:53:459 (21,22,23,24) - and if I make a ddd pattern on second triple it can create a weird ddd d d k pattern. I'll hold it since it follows great pitches and melody
00:52:355 - to d ?
^
01:06:343 - to ka its "hazuka" it should be kdk
I already used 01:05:606 (83,84,85) - 01:07:079 (89,90,91) - on these so I pref using dinamicity. Also 01:06:343 (86) - is a real low note so there's not reason to use kat on here
01:10:944 - d ? but you can keep it k, cuz it high sound :thinking:
As you said. High pitch xD
01:14:809 - you can del your slider and try this
I deleted spinner but just putted 2 kats instead to follow piano kick. That pattern will be a little overmapped imo :p
01:24:748 (37,38) - to kd
But 01:24:932 (164) - is a real kick so... not real reason to change D:
/box]Thanks for the mod!

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi! from my queue~
Hi yzrin! o/

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:895 (33) - delete
   I feel unnecessary
   I think it's neccesary to follow the piano and melody. If I delete it will be so empty and doesn't have consistency on this section at all
   
2. 00:24:564 (107) - delete
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   Hmmmmm wasn't pretty sure to be honest. I will delete but both sounds great. I used quarter to make a section change emphasis but w/e
   
3. 01:01:374 (60) - finish
   you pick vocal accent.
   Hmm I think it doesn't fit at all since I'm using finish only for hard drum kicks. So it will be non-consistent if I randomly place a big note for vocal note. I can wait for another comment since I got you point but for now I'm holding
   
4. 01:02:846 (68) - delete
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   I agree with you on this, it's really different than the first one since there's not any sound ~
   good Muzu :3
   Thanks! :3

good luck.

Thanks for modding! ~~
[box=Muzuka]http://puu.sh/wLiSW/2095f76648.osu

PoPoii wrote:

i love this song xD
from my queue t/475792

foot shoe

00:01:005 - k fixed

00:04:686 - del this fixed

00:04:870 - and this to d fixed

00:05:239 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - i think this is too long del 00:05:423 (22,24) - fixed

00:09:104 - del, too long fixed

00:12:969 - XD waaat is this, its look like "after the strom, come a warm sun" your begining is too hard it doesnt look like a futsuu, but at this section, this the real futsuu xD, idk what sound you follow, the singer or the drum ?, you ignore so much important/domina sound fixed


lets continue
00:19:594 - to d
00:20:699 - del this
00:20:883 - add k
00:21:067 - del
00:21:435 - to d
00:21:803 - to k
00:22:171 - add k
00:22:539 - add d
00:22:907 - add k
00:23:091 - del
00:23:275 - to k
00:23:459 - del
00:23:643 - to d
00:24:380 - add k all fixed fixed

00:24:748 - again, i dont understand about your pattern, maybe you can choose, follow the vocal or the drum/melody, sorry i skip this section, maybe you can change some part and make it better I tend to follow the beat but if I cant hear it then I try to fill with d since they aren't made for hitsounds... really. But I have fixed all of that, hopefully.

lets go to kai
00:53:091 - k its snare fixed

00:58:797 (25) - drag this to 00:59:165 - i think its better fixed

01:00:453 - k
01:00:821 - to d , bass drumfixed

01:02:478 - you can del this fixed

01:03:766 - to d fixed

01:05:239 - to d fixed

01:05:607 - k fixed

00:59:349 - del this fixed

01:01:374 - add k and del 01:01:558 - fixed

01:08:183 - del fixed

01:08:920 - d ? fixed and agree

01:14:441 - too long, you should not use this at futsuu, its low diff fixed

01:13:889 - add d fixed

01:14:073 - drag to 01:14:257 - fixed

01:14:441 (68,69) - del this fixed

01:14:993 - ^ fixed

01:15:545 - ^ fixed

01:16:834 - drag to 01:16:742 - fixed

01:17:202 - drag to 01:17:018 - fixed

01:17:294 - add k fixed
i think your slider is too long but its ok xD adjusted a little bit

some advice
dont use long pattern for futsuu, if some new player try this, maybe they will fail, and your begining its too hard, its different then your kai/chorus i hope you can fix that, i cant mention it all sorry I made this difficulty to be a very hard futsuu to get muzukashii a better feel, but adjusted for ranking purposes.

PoPoii wrote:

i love this song xD Thanks
from my queue t/475792

Onyyy

00:00:913 - del ? Ok
00:16:282 - to k, the vocal said "yaa" and i hear snare No change due to the low pitch
00:17:202 - also k for vocal Same
00:24:012 - maybe add d here ? cuz you have d here 00:23:275 - Yea sure
01:05:791 (368,369) - i think you can change it to d d, or k d , the lyric said "ki mo" 01:05:975 changed that to d

wew nice diff, great job

cant tan

00:18:858 - add d ? Why? To leave 4/1 space in Kantan
00:38:736 - ^ ^
00:41:680 - ^ ^
01:25:116 - drag to 01:24:932 - that should be there Nice, fixed

wew good, nearly perfect xD good job

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi! from my queue~

thanks M4M ><

[Kantan]

1. 00:11:864 - add D ? , 00:11:496 (17,18) - finish? Not really strong but moved the note
   It is to insist on this place where the sound is strong.
   
   
2. 00:16:650 (25) - delete Why? The note there is important for the music, the forward of the music isn't important for the vocal
   I will write a detailed reason after this, but delete as consistency
   
   
3. 00:28:429 (41) - delete, 00:35:791 (53) - delete Agree wth your opinion and deleted on my own too.
   00:23:275 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) -
   This consecutive notes is very difficult for Kantan player.
   1/1 break will be a good map for the Kantan player as well.
   and for consistensy. 00:16:650 (25,41) -
   
   
4. 00:48:122 (69) - change spin? Agreed, changed to the spinner
   I have resistance to making kantan player hit a 1/4 pattern.
   
   
5. 01:00:821 (86) - delete, 01:01:558 (87,88,89) - finish, 01:02:662 (90) - delete Deleted those but not sure with the 3 big notes on the same flow, considering...
   I recommend that you take a big break after the five-tuplet.
   But when you listen to songs you can not do such a thing, we recommend that you break the five-tuplet.
   
   
6. 01:06:711 (98) - delete 01:05:607 deleted at that to make unity and break
   Secure a break.
   
   
7. 01:08:551 (102) - delete Agreed, sorry for using 5 notes pattern
   This quintuplet is strange. Vocal is also natural if you make it 3-1 pattern.
   
   
8. 01:20:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This pattern is impossible for Kantan player. Agreed, fixed by my opinion
   01:21:067 (5) - delete, 01:22:539 (9) - delete, it my opinion.
   Avoid seven tuplets.
   
   
9. 01:25:116 (13) - move to 01:25:300 - or 01:24:932 - . I don't get it, The vocal ends in 01:25:668
   The former is piano, the latter is vocal.
   I feel strange because there is no distinct sound.

[Oni]

1. 00:04:134 (25,29) - delete Ok
   00:03:582 (21,22,23,24) - 00:04:318 (26,27,28) - 00:05:055 (30,31,32,33) -
   would like to make a consistent pattern with these.
   
   
2. 00:05:791 (35) - delete Ok
   Unnecessary. The one who turned it out gets better.
   
   
3. 00:13:153 (78,79) - delete, 00:13:889 (83,84) - delete, 00:14:257 (86,87) - delete You were right, overmapping isn't good to me but why did i put these notes in
   Unnecessary. There is no sound to raise the density around here, obvious overmapping.
   
   
4. 00:15:361 (94,95) - delete
   Unnecessary.
   
   
5. 00:23:091 (132) - delete Changed by my opinion
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   
   
6. 00:24:932 (141,142,146,147) - delete Same, by my opinion
   Unnecessary. There is no sound to raise the density around here, obvious overmapping.
   
7. 00:30:269 (172,173,174) - ^
   Since it is a turning point of music, it is better to split up it once.
   and It is hard for any player.
   
   
8. 00:41:680 (231) - delete, 00:41:864 (232) - change k . OK
   Ease of hitting.
   and 00:41:496 (230,232) - Because it has almost the same pitch, it has the same color.
   
   
9. 00:49:594 (270,271) - delete, 00:49:778 (272) - finish Ok
   You should make this sound stand out.
   Doing so will create a good flow throughout the map.
   
   
10. 00:53:183 (294) - move to 00:53:367 - No change because it isn't strange to me
    vocal follow, The original triplet is strange.
    
    
    You can improve consistency a little more.
    Because there is over mapping, we can cut it a little more notes.

There is still room for improvement.
good luck.

D o t wrote:

hi from my q

[notice][General]

[Kantan]
00:04:870 - missing a note? Want to make a break here.
00:12:232 (18) - finish That's right, fixed
00:18:858 - missing a note? ^
01:16:282 (115) - move to 01:16:097 - Nice, fixed
01:21:435 (6) - move to 01:21:251 - ^
01:22:171 (7) - move to 01:21:987 - ^
seems some places are random dk?

That's all. Good luck!

Consified wrote:

hi nm q

general

How do you think if you put a op video in the map? Not sure

Kantan

00:10:392 - 00:11:128 - 00:11:864 - big k here,follow the sound effect No change due to the complex of the diff, add them will be more difficult
00:10:760 - 00:11:496 - delete ^ Moved back to 1 white tick
00:12:232 - add finisher ^ Fixed
00:19:226 - add d ,follow the vocal Make sense, fixed
00:19:963 - add k ^ Want to make a break here
00:24:012 - add finisher,the sound effect is same as 00:23:275 Nice, fixed
01:24:012 (10) - add finisher,i heard the sound is heavier. Fixed
01:24:380 - big d ^ No change, too hard
01:24:748 - add big d,follow the vocal. ^
01:24:932 (11) - change to big k ^ Low pitch here, no change
01:25:668 (12) - change to big D,lower pitch. Fixed
01:25:852 ~ 01:29:165 - add a spinner.because of the piano sound very long at last.Nah, it seems fine to me without spinner

Oni

00:06:987 - change to d,low pitch No change, i hear high pitch O.O
00:19:226 - change to k,vocal Low pitch
00:19:594 - change to k ,^ ^
00:22:907 - delete Moved to 00:23:091
00:23:091 - add big d ^ but no big D
00:24:012 - change to k Fixed
00:24:196 (126,127) - change to d No change, I want to make variation in 00:23:643
00:25:300 - change to d Fixed
01:25:852 - add spinner No ;w;

Good luck for ranked~

davidminh0111 wrote:

Self modding for xfrac and Blushing

[xfrac's Muzukashii]
00:02:110: Move to 00:02:478
00:02:662: Delete, no sound here
00:07:631: Delete, why would you put this triplet here?
00:07:631: Delete
Applied way your suggests for first part :p. Prefered following kind of piano instead rhythm on first part
00:18:858: To d , low pitch here
But there's a notorious difference between 00:18:674 (83,84) - by following piano on this secion
00:37:263 (158, 159): Ctrl + G?
Hmmm nahh, 00:37:999 (158,159) - is clearly descendant rhythm
00:49:594 and 00:49:686: Delete, this triplet isn't the best idea, to make a good flow
I think it's pretty good to make players get familiarized with triples right before first Kiai. Also Muzu players should be way good with spinners so they use to finish spinners before :p
00:54:748: Delete?
Fixed to let a great break~
01:15:729: Add note?
I'm following cymbal in this part, not vocal so it's currently fine. Adding a note could be overmap
Leave me a comment for my mod, and shoot stars if you want to push this for rank

Consified wrote:

hi nm q
o/

xfrac's Muzukashii

00:12:232 (60) - change to k,higher pitch
I'd pref to stuck at ddd and kkk patterns even I got your point and they're acceptable. It makes a great emphasis on next kat anyways :p
00:12:416 - add finisher ^
I think by using 00:10:392 (48,51,54) - as big notes is enough, they're more strong than the one you're suggesting :p
00:12:969 (62) - remove finisher,soft pitch here.
Removed~
00:31:926 - change to d , follow the vocal
Fixed~
00:35:607 - change to k ^
It's way so strong using kat here. I pref stucking at don so I make better emphasis on next k
00:35:791 - delete ^
This note is pretty neccesary to follow piano here since there's not voice to follow
00:35:975 - add d ^
But there's not any sound D:
00:38:736 - add d
Same as above, I'm following vocal here
00:46:282 - and 00:46:374 - change to d,low pitch
Same comment about stucking at kkk / ddd patterns and there's a difference between first and second ddd k pattern than this
01:03:030 (68) - change to big d
I changed 01:03:398 (68) - instead and sounds better
01:25:852 - add spinner
Even I like finishing songs with spinner I'd pref to finish at that note (also not any other diff is using spinner in last part )

Good luck for ranked~

Unmei Muma wrote:

100 years after you requested, here's your mod. First things first: is the inner still a WIP? Of course

I'm using terms like 4th, 8th and so on. A 4th note is 1/1 (in case you don't know yet)

Tags: "naotyu-" -> remove the quotes and add spaces. k Then.

[Oni]
00:00:729 - Add a don here, to accompany the guitar. You may need to delete 00:00:913 (4) - afterwards. I realized you could just move it, but both give the same result Yea, I deleted that since no sound there.
00:06:711 (36,37,38,39,40) - This goes down for all the notes. I suggest kkdkd (the pattern will become kdkkdkd in the end) instead to further mark the pitch down. After all you did it there too : 00:09:656 (54,55,56,57,58) - Fixed
00:12:416 (70) - I am not fond of the speed change on this note only - it will fit better with the other pattern as there is no pause between the notes (considering the main snapping is 8th for this part). Removed the SV, doesn't really appeal to me
00:12:969 (71,76) - These fit better as kats; the color being different to the filler dons will make them stand out more. Changed to k at 00:12:969, because in 00:13:705 the pitch is setting
00:15:729 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - Kind of awkward way to put it, mark the pitch increase or alternate kats and dons like that: dk d k dkd I see, fit the pitch, Fixed
00:19:226 (102,103,104,105,106,107) - Vocal pitch goes down, also the way it's put makes the pattern even more awkward. See something more like two 8th triplets.
00:22:907 - Add a kat to mirror 00:22:171 (116,117) - .
00:23:275 - Don't think this 1.2x is properly justifiable here, just take it out dude.
00:25:852 (136) - Kinda weird but I think I'll let it slide
00:33:582 (177) - Don, 00:33:950 (178,179) - Only one of these should be kat after, depends on how you want to make your progression.
00:35:791 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190) - The drum pattern asks for something closer to kkddkkd - you get two strong hits landing on two beats, which are better marked with the same color.
00:47:018 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244) - It's better if you split this in 3+3 or 5+1. A 7 note pattern doesn't really make sense and breaks the change in seiyuu (or IDK they're just dissimilar).
00:51:159 (257) - Delete this (it's just a filler note and you don't really need it) so you make the speed change to kiai less awkward.
00:53:643 (273) - Delete this note too, it will bring a nice punch to the K following it
00:55:300 (283,284) - Vocally, k d makes more sense.
00:56:220 (289,290) - 00:57:140 (292,293) - These gaps makes the map awkward, just want to address it, you don't have to change it
00:58:061 (295,296,297) - ddd, to avoid anchoring to kats and clearly separate high vocal to fainter drums.
01:02:110 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323) - Okay I clearly have a completely different thing in mind. Namely, two big notes - they're really emphasized - a 7-stream is the complete opposite of what the song conveys.
01:14:073 (390,391,392,393,394,395,396) - Awkward pattern that doesn't belong to this part, a 3+3 is the best fit.
01:14:809 (397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - You can use a roll, it kills 10 notes but it's a solution as viable - or continue a progression with 8ths and small 16ths in a much different fasion.
01:23:828 (450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458) - It's not the best you can make out of it, as the song goes: XX X XX (in 8ths). Make clearer distinctions!
01:25:300 (459,460,461,462,463) - COMPLETELY OPTIONAL but you can just make a small roll to close


[Kantan]
Please don't put OD2, 4 is more than enough (and should be the minimum at that speed).
00:10:392 (15) - The whole part has the same notes, but this one doesn't have kat. Put it in kat to line up the notes
00:18:858 - I don't know it feels empty since you always have downbeats.
01:24:380 (11) - Doesn't ask for a big note. Also, the ending is kind of a difficulty spike, with a lot of notes landing mid-beat.

Overall I think the set needs much more polishing before calling a BN, gl with the ranking something something something
And IDK if you requested me another map back in round 1? idk

Unmei Muma wrote:

100 years after you requested, here's your mod. First things first: is the inner still a WIP? Of course

I'm using terms like 4th, 8th and so on. A 4th note is 1/1 (in case you don't know yet)

Tags: "naotyu-" -> remove the quotes and add spaces. k Then.

[Oni]
00:00:729 - Add a don here, to accompany the guitar. You may need to delete 00:00:913 (4) - afterwards. I realized you could just move it, but both give the same result Yea, I deleted that since no sound there.
00:06:711 (36,37,38,39,40) - This goes down for all the notes. I suggest kkdkd (the pattern will become kdkkdkd in the end) instead to further mark the pitch down. After all you did it there too : 00:09:656 (54,55,56,57,58) - Fixed
00:12:416 (70) - I am not fond of the speed change on this note only - it will fit better with the other pattern as there is no pause between the notes (considering the main snapping is 8th for this part). Removed the SV, doesn't really appeal to me
00:12:969 (71,76) - These fit better as kats; the color being different to the filler dons will make them stand out more. Changed to k at 00:12:969, because in 00:13:705 the pitch is setting
00:15:729 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - Kind of awkward way to put it, mark the pitch increase or alternate kats and dons like that: dk d k dkd I see, fit the pitch, Fixed
00:19:226 (102,103,104,105,106,107) - Vocal pitch goes down, also the way it's put makes the pattern even more awkward. See something more like two 8th triplets. To d at 00:19:226
00:22:907 - Add a kat to mirror 00:22:171 (116,117) - . Ok
00:23:275 - Don't think this 1.2x is properly justifiable here, just take it out dude. Adjusted to 1.10x
00:25:852 (136) - Kinda weird but I think I'll let it slide 00:25:668 and 00:25:760 Removed notes
00:33:582 (177) - Don, 00:33:950 (178,179) - Only one of these should be kat after, depends on how you want to make your progression.00:33:950 changed to k
00:35:791 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190) - The drum pattern asks for something closer to kkddkkd - you get two strong hits landing on two beats, which are better marked with the same color. I think the original patttern is fine, I think ddkkddk doesn't really fit the pitch
00:47:018 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244) - It's better if you split this in 3+3 or 5+1. A 7 note pattern doesn't really make sense and breaks the change in seiyuu (or IDK they're just dissimilar). 00:47:294 removed a note
00:51:159 (257) - Delete this (it's just a filler note and you don't really need it) so you make the speed change to kiai less awkward. Added all SV to make the speed up more smoother
00:53:643 (273) - Delete this note too, it will bring a nice punch to the K following it Ok
00:55:300 (283,284) - Vocally, k d makes more sense. Doesn't fit the pitch
00:56:220 (289,290) - 00:57:140 (292,293) - These gaps makes the map awkward, just want to address it, you don't have to change it 00:56:404 added a triplet, other no because 00:56:404 I followed the background instrument
00:58:061 (295,296,297) - ddd, to avoid anchoring to kats and clearly separate high vocal to fainter drums. 00:58:061 changed to d due to the pitch
01:02:110 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323) - Okay I clearly have a completely different thing in mind. Namely, two big notes - they're really emphasized - a 7-stream is the complete opposite of what the song conveys. Changed
01:14:073 (390,391,392,393,394,395,396) - Awkward pattern that doesn't belong to this part, a 3+3 is the best fit. changed some
01:14:809 (397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - You can use a roll, it kills 10 notes but it's a solution as viable - or continue a progression with 8ths and small 16ths in a much different fasion. Removed some notes in my own way
01:23:828 (450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458) - It's not the best you can make out of it, as the song goes: XX X XX (in 8ths). Make clearer distinctions! Ok
01:25:300 (459,460,461,462,463) - COMPLETELY OPTIONAL but you can just make a small roll to close

As now, Oni goes down to 3.68 star.

[Kantan]
Please don't put OD2, 4 is more than enough (and should be the minimum at that speed). OD3
00:10:392 (15) - The whole part has the same notes, but this one doesn't have kat. Put it in kat to line up the notes Ok
00:18:858 - I don't know it feels empty since you always have downbeats.Added a note
01:24:380 (11) - Doesn't ask for a big note. Also, the ending is kind of a difficulty spike, with a lot of notes landing mid-beat.Fixed

Overall I think the set needs much more polishing before calling a BN, gl with the ranking something something something
And IDK if you requested me another map back in round 1? idk

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hey GD here,sorry for late :c

Inner Oni GD

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458,179,44441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,216,44625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,44809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,44901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,176,44993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,176,45177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,208,45545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,208,45637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,168,45729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,176,45913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,46282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,46374,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,168,46466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,46650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,168,46834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,168,47018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,168,47110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,47202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,47386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,47570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,160,47662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,47754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,47846,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,47938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,176,48122,1,12,0:0:0:0:
432,200,48490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,48674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,160,48858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,160,49042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,152,49226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,144,49410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,152,49594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,49686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,49778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,160,49963,1,12,0:0:0:0:
456,168,50515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,50699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,160,50883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,50975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,51067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,51159,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,51251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,51435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,51527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,51619,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,152,51803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,51987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,52079,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,144,52171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,52355,1,12,0:0:0:0:
496,160,52723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,52907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,52999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,53091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,152,53275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,152,53367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,160,53459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,53643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,53828,1,12,0:0:0:0:
480,176,54196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,54380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,54472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,54564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,168,54748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,54932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,168,55024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,160,55116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,160,55208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,152,55300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,55484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,152,55668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,144,55760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,136,55852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,136,55944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,136,56036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,56220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,136,56404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,136,56496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,152,56588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,56772,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,176,56956,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,160,57140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,192,57509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,168,57693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,168,57877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,168,58061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,168,58153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,58245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,168,58429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,160,58613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,168,58705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,168,58797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,58981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,59165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,176,59533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,168,59901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,60085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,177,60269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,177,60361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,162,60453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,141,60637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,136,60821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,136,60913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,141,61005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,141,61097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,154,61189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,154,61374,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,154,61558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,161,61650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,154,61742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,153,61834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,154,61926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
459,166,62018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,168,62110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,146,62294,1,12,0:0:0:0:
311,190,62478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,186,62662,1,12,0:0:0:0:
434,184,63030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,186,63214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,160,63398,1,12,0:0:0:0:
490,190,63766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,174,63950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
486,174,64042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,170,64134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,150,64318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,156,64502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,156,64594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,157,64686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,157,64778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,154,64870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,168,65055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,158,65239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,158,65331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,165,65423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,65515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,163,65607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,164,65791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,161,65975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,161,66159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,133,66251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,166,66343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,155,66527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,158,66711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,154,66803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,148,66895,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,148,66987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
433,149,67079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,149,67263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,155,67447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
481,157,67539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,149,67631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,156,67723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,160,67815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,163,67999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,155,68183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,155,68367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,177,68551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
466,170,68736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
466,170,68828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,157,68920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,157,69288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,158,69472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
494,160,69656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,160,69840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,160,69932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,153,70024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,157,70208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,160,70392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
482,160,70484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,154,70576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,171,70668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,70760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,173,70944,1,12,0:0:0:0:
371,141,71312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,158,71404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,169,71496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,158,71680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,160,71864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,194,72232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,152,72416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
439,159,72601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,159,72785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,158,72969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,156,73153,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,156,73245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,162,73337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,162,73521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,159,73705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,157,73889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,162,74073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,165,74257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
490,167,74441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,167,74625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,183,74809,1,12,0:0:0:0:
474,166,74993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
495,182,75085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,166,75177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,187,75361,1,12,0:0:0:0:
466,179,75545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,182,75637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,179,75729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,189,75913,1,12,0:0:0:0:
491,169,76097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,182,76189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,169,76282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,175,76466,1,12,0:0:0:0:
494,184,76742,1,12,0:0:0:0:
494,185,77018,1,12,0:0:0:0:
494,185,77294,1,12,0:0:0:0:
494,184,77570,1,12,0:0:0:0:
460,164,77754,1,4,0:0:0:0:
479,164,78122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
479,164,78306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,165,78490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,165,78674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,165,78766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,160,78858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,170,79042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,171,79226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
450,177,79318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,79410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,160,79594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,155,79778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,169,80147,1,8,0:0:0:0:
425,175,80208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,177,80269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,162,80331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,177,80515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,184,80699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,169,80883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,175,80975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,169,81067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,174,81251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,165,81619,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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423,172,81803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,177,81987,1,12,0:0:0:0:
479,179,82355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,177,82539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
471,177,82723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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443,156,84932,1,12,0:0:0:0:
436,154,85300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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436,154,85423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,154,85484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,169,85668,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85852,12,0,88981,0:0:0:0:

*please change od/hp setting
kantan -> 2/8
futsuu -> 3/7
muzukashii ->4/6
oni -> 5/5.5
since the song is relaxed and short and number of notes are quite few,therefore I think hp should be higher and od should be lower

Unmei Muma wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:04:318 - Fait noise, you can add a note here as well
added~
00:30:085 - add a note. just. add it. This is going really against the song as it stands.
fixed someway~
01:02:294 (63,64,65,66) - Same complaint as in the Oni, you're better off with big notes.
I'd pref to stuck at triple usage since it's kiai and it doesn't fit at all with big notes :p
01:04:686 - Not the best place to cut a sequence, you shouldn't be scared of a longer sequence, as long as it fits the spread. Add a note
I think it will get so hard if I add note on here. Long chain of notes aren't the best way imo
01:14:809 (122,123,124) - Here too you can definitely add some notes
added some dons~
01:16:466 (126,127,128,129,130) - And here you're better off not changing colors
But I'm completely following vocals so fits good
My biggest complaint is that while it's accurate, the map as a whole feels really bland and sticks to simply "follow the song", instead of freestyling the song a bit. The simplest way is to add more filler 16th notes outside of the kiai.
I'd pref to stuck at simple mapping style on Muzu. These kind of 'slow' songs aren't neccesary to make it really different than it sounds :p

iloveyou4ever wrote:

*please change od/hp setting
kantan -> 2/8
futsuu -> 3/7
muzukashii ->4/6
oni -> 5/5.5
since the song is relaxed and short and number of notes are quite few,therefore I think hp should be higher and od should be lower
fixed~

1. Changed some weird flows in Oni
2. Updated xfrac's Muzukashii
3. Added ily4's Inner Oni

Nyan wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

01:01:374 (59) - add Finish
01:14:809 (122) - add Finish
Ok!~

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:51:252 Fixed

00:51:251 - reduce SV to 1.00xFixed
01:14:809 (115,116,1) - can be replaced to a single long spinner I want Kantan players have a break between 2 notes.
01:25:668 (13) - add Finish Added

[Blushing's Futsuu]

01:25:668 (6) - add Finish Added

[Oni]

01:23:828 (44,45,46,47,48) - add Finish Added

[ily4's Inner Oni]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:51:252 Fixed

Blackener wrote:

Hi! from NM. here
You can skip it if you feel my modding affects your mapping style.
Please keep in mind that I'm mapping newbie. So, feel free to ignore if you have reason enough, I'll try my best! Good

Kantan

I almost can't find any error
Maybe this mod is an error instead, isn't it? XD

00:17:754 (27) - k? it's the same pitch like the next one. Nope, the pitch its setting up from here so it would be better to do dk

00:34:318 (53) - k? But I make this pattern to make it easier for the players

00:41:312 (64) - k? Vocal pitch drops at 00:41:680 (65), not here. 00:41:680 changed to k

00:54:932 (82) - k? it's high pitch Melody is low pitch, not high :3

01:00:821 (92) - d? Vocal pitch drops here Sounds good, fixed

(If you change it to d it'll reflect 00:57:140 (86,87,88,89,90) perfectly)

01:22:907 (8) - k, it's the higher pitch. not really to me XD

01:25:668 (13) - if you don't want to put spinner at the end, could you finish it with finisher? I'm sure it's strong enough. Fixed

Blushing's futsuu

00:02:846 (6) - k,high pitch here But it's k already lol

00:09:472 (27) - d? To emphasize background instrument. Nice! Fixed

00:14:809 (42,43,44) - kdk, if you want to follow vocal. I'm following background instrument

change 00:23:643 (62) to k and 00:23:828 (63) to D ? Changed by myself

00:43:889 (33,34,35) - k ? I'm not sure. k dd instead

00:54:932 (12) - k? higher pitch here. WHAT? O_o. I hear low pitch :3

00:56:036 (15,16) - Ctrl+G? It's the high pitch and the lower one. The melody in the current time is rising up here

01:04:502 (40) - kdk ? To reflect next dkd Fixed

01:05:607 (44) - k? to emphasize next lower pitch. Nope, d will emphasize better

01:07:079 (48) - d? to emphasize next higher pitch. Correct, Fixed!

01:10:760 (58) - k? It's another high pitch. Pitch rising up

01:12:785 (64,68) - k? It's quite clear voice, it should be k, I guess.

01:17:018 (3,4) - d? (Optional) Disagree xD

01:18:122 (7,8,9,10) - I would go for k k k d Pitch rising up

01:19:778 (12) - kd? It'll refect 01:20:331 (1,2) Fixed

01:21:987 (6) - k, high pitch here ? I know but i think d will be better

01:25:668 (6) - Add spinner? It's strong enough. No ;w;

Oni

00:02:662 (15) - k, to emphasize next ddk I don't want to break this flow so no change

00:05:055 (26,27,28) - kdk , kdd , kkd will emphasize the next k But pitch is low?

00:07:999 (43) - k, ^ ^

00:09:104 (49,50,51) - kkd,kdd, ^ kkd

00:13:337 (72,73) - Ctrl+G? , to emphasize voice at 00:13:705 (74) ddk instead

00:18:674 (96) - k, to emphasize guitar sound. Fixed

00:19:226 (98) - k, to emphasize next k (vocal) Low pitch

00:24:012 (116) - Delete? It sounds strange when it is here in my opinion. Emphazising next triplet

00:25:116 (121,122,123) - these triplets should place at 00:25:116. Don't understand what you mean here

00:26:220 (128,129) - Ctrl+G? high pitch is at 00:26:220 (128) Nope, low xD

00:29:901 (145,146) - d at 00:29:901 (145) to emphasize K at 00:30:085 (146) (If you change it) Fixed

00:30:821 (148,149,150) - Ctrl+G to emphasize k. You can use other different way to say it, Ctrl+ G more than 3 notes will make it messy .
Fixed

00:31:558 (153,154,155) - ^ ^

00:32:846 (162) - k to emphasize ddd. 00:32:662 changed to k

00:40:944 (197) - d?? I'm not sure. Ok, incorrect xD :Think:

00:43:889 (209) - d? , not sure either. ^

00:55:116 (270) - k? , to emphasize d (Vocal) Made some changes

00:55:668 (273) - d? to emphasize kkd Yup, fixed

00:58:797 (291) - k? , to follow vocal But I'm following?

00:59:717 (296,297,298,299,300) - kkddk " Best Quintuplets in Taiko " ddkkd instead

01:02:110 (309) - k? to emphasize Se--No. No, it will break the flow

01:02:662 (310) - Ctrl+G to follow Se--No. :Think:

01:05:055 (321,322,323) - kdk or kkk to follow high-pitched vocal. Better with kkd

01:08:551 (341,342,343,344,345) - ddkdk ? Agree but mine is better

01:11:496 (362) - k to follow vocal. ???? I'm following

01:11:680 (363,364) - Ctrl+G, ^ Sounds good, fixed for a better flow

01:14:533 (376,377) - Ctrl+G, to emphasize vocal. Fixed

01:17:018 (4,5) - d (optional). Maybe not

01:18:122 (8) - k, to follow vocal Low pitch?

01:19:042 (12,13,14) - ddk? ^ Yep, fixed

01:20:147 (20) - k? I'm not sure. Fixed

01:21:803 (31) - k? Not sure either Ok, no change XD

01:25:300 (48) - Too bad, I expect spinner, finisher or something else that isn't drumroll, just kidding. ;3 Finisher

ily4's Inner Oni

Wow, you're so experienced in mapping, I almost cannot find any error here, honestly. Maybe you'd better mod my map instead Accept my mod as you agree! ;3

00:35:607 (196,197,198,199) - Ctrl+G to follow background instrument. But he's following?

00:40:760 (218,219) - Ctrl+G to follow vocal Current pattern is better

01:13:153 (417) - d? to follow vocal. dkk instead

(This diff's modding is fake modding, just kidding.)

Good luck to all of you on ranking!

Prophecy wrote:

From my special queue, short mod.

[General]
> Disable widescreen support Done

[Kantan]
> 00:01:926 (2,3,4,5) - it's quite hard for beginners, usually we don't use too much 1/2 in Kantan, consider to remove few 1/2 in order to provide a better spread. Deleted

> 00:01:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - too many kat in this part, for example, you can change 00:10:392 (15) - to emphasize the next higher pitch (16) Changed some

> 00:24:012 (35) - maybe you place the wrong D here? Nope, you may pay more attention to the background instrument

> 00:23:275 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - too long, you need to put a break there like removing 00:31:374 (47) . Deleted some

> Add a inherited timeline here (green line) for lower volume (~75%) Time please?

> 00:45:361 (70,71,72,73) - why you put here? you follow the vocal before. :3 Moved some notes

Good kiai, However you must pay some attention on the diff. spread and the 1/2 issue. GL~

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my M4M modding queue. Sorry for being late due to unexpected workload in osu and irl. NO KDS

[General]

> 'bg.jpg' resolution should be re-arranged to 1366*768, or you may find another BG for it. I don't know how to reduce the BG resolution and look for the new BG. Can u help me?

> Remove the artist names in 'Artist' column. You can add them in 'Tag' column instead. The main artist name should be in Japanese word.
You may check for another Best FriendS map more to find the information.

> Metadata check:
http://www.love-lab.tv/music/index.html


> OD/HP settings:

Kantan: HP may be 8 for a better HP spread, after all the notes in Kantan are much fewer comparing with Futsuu. It's already HP 8 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Futsuu: 3.5/7 You forgot to set it, Blushing. Fixed
Oni: 5/5 OD should be displayed in a linear scale. Fixed

[Blushing Futsuu + xfrac's Muzukashii]

> They are the most problematic difficulties in terms of spread. The exagerated expression in Kiai, comparing between Futsuu and Muzukashii is too large. F-M-O spread is very poor. Both of you please compromise with each others' difficulties and make some amendments. Both difficulties are good separately, but the spread could be improved more. Will fix the Futsuu for him, and frac will fix by himself

> Futsuu is too easy, overall density could be increased. Muzukashii is too hard, vice versa, esp.ly those triplet usages. idk

[]

I will come back with a proper mod when the above issues are addressed in a superficial extent. Sure

Skylish wrote:

It seems you ran into some troubles about General issues, here's another supplementary material for you:

[General]

> You may replace the bg with this 1920*1080 jpg . It is the same picture but in different resolution only. Changed

> Remove that png file since it is not used. I forgot to check this for you in previous mod, sorry. https://puu.sh/xs7EO/f7c3acd20e.png I deleted already

> Title should only be '藤女生徒会執行部'. Put 沼倉愛美 赤崎千夏 水瀬いのり 佐倉綾音 大地葉 in 'Tag' column. It is supported by the official website of anime. Other ranked mapset did so too. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/130104

Skylish wrote:

Artist: 藤女生徒会執行部
Romanized artist: Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu
Title: Best FriendS -TV Size-

Please fix it first before you get any mods....

** I typed 'Title' <-- this was a typo, I meant 'Artist'.... I think you should judge everything before you make changes.

Alwaysyukaz wrote:

hi! Modding req from your queue

Kantan

00:03:214 (3) - kat? seems not have a quiet different from 00:01:926 (2) - Pitch is low, no change

00:04:502 (4) - change to don,the sounds seems lower Not really

00:10:392 (12,13,14) - why not make the all of this note to finish? its better in finish because the sounds is strong Yea

00:12:232 (15) - change to kat is better if you follow my suggestion before Ok

00:08:367 (9) - i think you its should be in white thick here 00:08:551 - . i know your mean but is seems difficult for

beginner players or as a kantan's players to try to tap it Ok

00:20:883 (25) - ^ Not this one

00:44:441 (54) - ^ Not this one

00:56:220 (68) - ^ This one

01:00:637 (74) - ^ Not this one

01:19:778 (4) - ^ Not this one


00:36:527 (41) - add finisher No, the melody isn't strong

00:40:944 (48) - don, opposite from 00:37:999 (43,44,45) - Fixed

00:48:122 (59) - i think its better in spinner than slider But spinner is better imo, will get more further mods

00:53:091 (63) - change to kat? seems add some variation more interesting XD Ok

01:13:337 (91) - don,the sounds still lower until here All diffs did like this

01:24:932 (12) - change to kat? the picth of sounds seems high and i think its better No ;w;

Oni

00:04:686 - add note here for consistancy Yea

00:09:932 (58) - delete? i think isn't really fit when i compare with 3 1/2 note here 00:10:024 (59,60,61) - *as this part

i think the better one is using finish 00:10:024 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - but its up to you if you wanna use it or not XD But I hear sound, fit to me imo

00:19:963 (101) - change to kat,for consistancy with 00:20:331 (102) - yea

00:27:324 - Add note here *don't leave it empty XD Has sound here, fixed

00:31:558 (155,156,157) - change to dkd and make some variation from 00:30:821 (150,151,152) - seems better than monoton

pattern But it should be variety

00:48:122 (237) - why not using note than slider here? try this Changed by myself

00:57:509 - add note here Ok

Good Luck!

Marm wrote:

hey m4m with david for Sisterz - Inverse World

ily diff

00:50:331 - add a note for the vocal here? Following background instrument
01:09:748 - a note here (to make a 5 note stream) works better with the vocals than the 5 note stream at 01:10:392 (401,402,403,404,405) since there's a longer voice note at the first one. you could delete 01:10:484 (402) or 01:10:668 (404) if you agree. Nah, it's fine

the rest looks good o/.

oni

01:07:999 (346) - this to kat since the vocal has a higher pitch (like 01:07:447 (342) and 01:07:631 (343) Fixed

xfrac diff

00:09:656 (44,45,46) - this to ddk or kkk to give more emphasis on the following d d K pattern that's more intense.
01:20:239 - could add a don to cover the piano

good good.

blushing diff

00:30:453 - or 00:30:637 - add a note. starting notes on red lines with no set rhythm before can be too challenging for futsuu players.
00:33:030 - or 00:32:846 - note for the transition. this is the only part in this section that has a 3/2 gap between notes while all the others are 2/2. that's hard for rhythm and even more for newer players.
The kiai could use a lot of finishers in the parts with a higher intensity/heavier beat/stronger vocals. You should take advantage of that and make it more interesting. The way it is now there's only 1 :C. All fixed

kantan

00:03:214 (3) - offbeat on the redline is too hard for kantan since there's no rhythm set and it's pretty much a sole note. I think you should change this part if you're going for ranked. Ok
00:30:085 (32) - same as above.
00:31:558 (34) - same, move 1/4 backwards just like 00:30:637 (33) .
00:32:294 (35) - note on the red line works better in the white ticks.All fixed
00:47:570 (56) - move note 1/2 backwards to keep the 4/1 gap between notes flow. this rhythm break is too complex for kantan. Looks fine,
no change

that's it from me,
good luck on standard pp map :^)

Zetera wrote:

Yo, M4M. (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668397)

Spreadwise, I feel like the Kantan of your mapset is not connected to the rest. There is a very significant difficulty spike from Kantan to Futsuu, it is much bigger than that between Futsuu and Muzukashii (that is in terms of patterning and in terms of SR). Therefore, I'll have some suggestions for you that buff the Kantan just a tad.

Why is the OD on Oni higher than on Inner? I don't think the Oni needs an OD as high as 6. 5 is just about enough, and you could even buff the OD of the Inner by .5. Ok

[Kantan]

00:14:441 - and 00:14:809 - could use some ds. Ok
00:20:883 - I'm really not a fan of those 1/1+1/2 gap patterns in a kantan, why not go with something simpler like placing the d at 00:21:067 - ? If you decide to change this pattern, change 00:35:607 - as well. Fixed as Marm's mod
00:25:484 - you could add a k here and a d at 00:26:588 - to buff the diff a bit. Yea
00:31:558 (36,37) - This is equally troubling. I get that you're following the vocals, but I feel like it would make more sense to follow the background instruments instead. Fixed by Marm either
00:43:889 (53,54) - Change these to d k d if you want to be consistent in rhythm with 00:40:944 (48,49,50) - and 00:37:999 (43,44,45) - . the colours add a little bit of difficulty. Ctrl + G instead
00:54:196 (5,6,7) - how about d d k d k instead? all of these are on 1/1 snapping. If you change this, make sure you also change 01:05:975 - to the same pattern. Changed by myself

All in all, if every point has been considered and added, you'll have an SR of 1.62. Also, the difficulty will be a bit harder in general, which links it a little more
to the rest of the set.

[Futsuu]

00:09:656 - this is optional, but you might want to delete that circle for a little bit of a break before the finisher section. Deleted
00:29:901 (72,1) - This one may be a little bit too difficult. Remember that this forces you to do a jackhammer on one of your kat keys, and that's not easy for a beginner. To make this more playable, just remove the note in front of the finisher. yea
00:30:821 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is intriguing, but sticking to the instruments in the background may be the safer option. ok
00:44:809 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - Overall a very dense section and the main reason why the Kantan didn't really link to the rest of the set. Do you think you could find a way to nerf this bit?
01:16:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you try to avoid 1/3 in Futsuus. There's probably an easier way you can structure this part. (Please note that the Oni is using the same pattern) Yea

[Oni]

00:02:294 - This doesn't necessarily have to be a triplet, since there is nothing worth stressing with a triplet in the song. k d should do the job. If you insist on keeping the triplet, then at least change it to kkd to put a more playable and more suitable emphasis on the last note of the pattern. Deleted
00:23:643 - I can't see what this pattern is trying to follow. The lyrics? I think you're better off using something like this:

Changed by myself

Please note that I removed some circles after the k triplet.
00:30:637 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) -
The SV speedup at 00:50:883 - in the Inner Oni is much smoother than here, so I'd recommend you change the sv change per green line to x0.01 instead of x0.02. Ok
00:53:183 - using d here is much smoother. Ok

[Inner Oni]

Other than your usage of kdd, I can't really notice any grave mistakes. Good job! Thanks

Welp, there you go. Hope I could help you.