1. Festival is far from over (4,62 stars, 2150 notes)

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Difficulties and progress

Festival is far from over by ASPIRIN
SB by ASPIRIN

Nifty wrote:

From queue~

- The only diff lole -

Note for ASPIRIN: Delete almost all of these finishers. They not only make this set super unrankable (ddD is unrankable in 1/4ths) but uncomfortable to play, and they don't match the music or Rudmorph's parts at all. Ok, this is good tip

The notes sound a little behind, consider toying with the offset.

00:05:144 (15) - You have a finisher here and it doesn't even follow the sound you used finisher on, there's no bass drum. fixed

00:05:595 (17) - If you're gonna use finishers, please be consistent. This should be a D. Understood. but i will don't use finishers in this section - ill use kat to map sounds like that 00:02:888 (5) -

00:08:753 (31) - Again remove please, and same for everything after. fixed

00:20:181 (1,1) - unrankable spinners, according to RC spinners must be at least 1/2 spaced from the next note. Repeats on the next set. spinners are mistake, fixed

For the next section of singing with spammed finishers, only put finishers where the voice ACTUALLY hits, meaning on 1 - 3 - 1 - 2 - 3 i cant understand what you mean here, but, i fix this section using tips from the top

00:47:531 (3) - Ok just highlight everything past this point and click "finish" twice, you're gonna needa reconsider this shit. [ulr=https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Taiko_Ranking_Criteria]Read the RC please[/url] i just unfinish last note

01:16:557 (147,148,149) - Make all of these k, fits the piano and the 'd every bass kick' rhythm fixed

01:47:044 (356,357) - ctrl-g this to emphasize the hi hat fixed

01:48:699 (367) - k for hi hat fixed

01:53:277 (400,401) - ctrl-g like above fixed

01:54:933 (411) - ok you copy pasted this but yes same as above

goddamnit aspirin stop putting finishers everywhere lmao removed all finishers

02:15:193 - to 02:20:648 - oh my god please actually map this, do anything other than this. I removed the finishers and made a couple of triples for the vocal

02:28:829 (606,607,608,609,610) - kkddk fits rhythm etc etc fixed

Rudmorph's parts are noticeably better in this song, so Aspirin should be looking at what he's doing in terms of rhythm and stream placement and pretty much copying it because I'm not making more than 1 change per section for him. I will try to be better

I noticed that there is nobody highlighted in the sb for mapping from 05:37:790 - here on (it's pretty obviously Rudmorph tho). Also Rudmorph took the last 4 sections which seems a little odd. Nice sb overall though. about 05:37:790 - i did this just for piano part on last slider... and last sections are realy mapped by Rudmorph. It was his wish. And about sb - it is still WIP, just concept, not final ver, ill to it better, biggest and more laggy

Hope I could help ^^ thanks for your help!

1. Че по св, я там сильно не читал рц, но вроде можно 1.60/ 1.40 и 1.96. хз, почитай там.
2. Немного не понял, почему некоторые каты ставишь вистлом, а некоторые клепом. Разницы там как бы и нет, что одно, что другое. Странно звучит просто лол
3. Весь парт до 00:18:678 - предлагаю пересмотреть его полностью. Ритм емхазис отсутвует — к примеру, 00:02:888 - сильное звучание, следовало бы выделить его не как остальные. 00:03:791 - сейм, сделать 00:03:791 - катом, чтоб соответствовал 00:04:091 (10,11,12,13) - паттерну. Ну и так далее, там куча таких моментов. Алсо, мне не оч нравится, что из ритма ты выбрал просто два 1/3 серкла с гапом в 1/3. Скучно.
4. 01:00:193 (68) - идк почему выделяешь его по-другому, не как 00:59:803 (66,67) - . Звук в точности такой же.
5. 01:04:479 (96) - странный финиш. Не ставил же на такой звук до этого. Кип консистенси. В тайко это типа важно.
6. 01:05:648 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - прислушай внимательнее. 01:05:940 - вот тут есть звук. 01:06:232 (108,109,110,111,112) - а тут просто 1/2. Предлагаю просто свитчнуть ритм. По типу.
7. 01:13:635 (134,135,136,137,138) - / 01:15:193 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - ну вообще идк. Слишком интенсивность повышаешь, если сравнивать с той же частью тут 01:07:011 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - .
8. 01:39:544 (303,304,305,306,307,308) - вот посмотри, ты там чередовал паттерн 5нот стрим - серкл. А тут зачем-то поставил два трипла, не очень такая штука вписывается, по ритму там лучше этот 5нот + серкл паттерн тбх. Структура и консистенси.
9. 01:48:310 (364) - предлагаю его катом сделать, чтоб соответствовал след. триплу. А то у тебя там все триплы такие — 01:44:998 (342,343,344,345,346,347) - / 01:46:557 (352,353,354,355,356,357) - зеркальные, я б сказал.
10. 02:06:037 (474) - по рц нельзя финиш ставить при снаппинге 1/4 или больше при таких бпмах. Не буду всё искать, сам найдешь. 02:11:881 - ну и так дальше.
11. Алсо, к предыдущему поинту, такие рандомные финиш — плохо в тайко. Они выбиваются из общего ритма, и делают акцент на этом звуке, который, в принципе, не отличается от других таких же.
12. От 02:14:609 - до 02:21:037 - слишком недостает всего в ритме. Если сравнить со вторым и третьим киаями, разница-то получается огромная. Интенсивость очень сильно разнится. И всякие триплы по вокалу не выделяешь даже 02:16:264 - и так далее.
13. 02:36:135 - оп-па, звук. Зря андермапнул.
14. 03:35:648 (156) - тоже немного инконсистент, у тебя ж не было этого серкла ни 03:35:648 (156) - , ни 03:35:648 (156) - , ни 03:41:881 - тут.
15. 04:56:979 - / 04:57:174 - ну не знааааю. Нет как-то особо большого смысла скипать звуки, итак у тебя там куча всякого 1/4.

Namki wrote:

прив

1. Че по св, я там сильно не читал рц, но вроде можно 1.60/ 1.40 и 1.96. хз, почитай там. Исправил
2. Немного не понял, почему некоторые каты ставишь вистлом, а некоторые клепом. Разницы там как бы и нет, что одно, что другое. Странно звучит просто лол Это к Рудморфу, зачем он это делает, непонятно... Ну ноты становятся катами и ладно
3. Весь парт до 00:18:678 - предлагаю пересмотреть его полностью. Ритм емхазис отсутвует — к примеру, 00:02:888 - сильное звучание, следовало бы выделить его не как остальные. 00:03:791 - сейм, сделать 00:03:791 - катом, чтоб соответствовал 00:04:091 (10,11,12,13) - паттерну. Ну и так далее, там куча таких моментов. Алсо, мне не оч нравится, что из ритма ты выбрал просто два 1/3 серкла с гапом в 1/3. Скучно. Исправил. Я не знаю как сделать этот момент более весёлым...
4. 01:00:193 (68) - идк почему выделяешь его по-другому, не как 00:59:803 (66,67) - . Звук в точности такой же. Исправил
5. 01:04:479 (96) - странный финиш. Не ставил же на такой звук до этого. Кип консистенси. В тайко это типа важно. Исправил.
   Я вообще все финишеры убрал, они правктически все не в тему.
6. 01:05:648 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - прислушай внимательнее. 01:05:940 - вот тут есть звук. 01:06:232 (108,109,110,111,112) - а тут просто 1/2. Предлагаю просто свитчнуть ритм. По типу.
7. 01:13:635 (134,135,136,137,138) - / 01:15:193 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - ну вообще идк. Слишком интенсивность повышаешь, если сравнивать с той же частью тут 01:07:011 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - Исправил
8. 01:39:544 (303,304,305,306,307,308) - вот посмотри, ты там чередовал паттерн 5нот стрим - серкл. А тут зачем-то поставил два трипла, не очень такая штука вписывается, по ритму там лучше этот 5нот + серкл паттерн тбх. Структура и консистенси. Исправил
9. 01:48:310 (364) - предлагаю его катом сделать, чтоб соответствовал след. триплу. А то у тебя там все триплы такие — 01:44:998 (342,343,344,345,346,347) - / 01:46:557 (352,353,354,355,356,357) - зеркальные, я б сказал. Исправил
10. 02:06:037 (474) - по рц нельзя финиш ставить при снаппинге 1/4 или больше при таких бпмах. Не буду всё искать, сам найдешь. 02:11:881 - ну и так дальше. Исправил
11. Алсо, к предыдущему поинту, такие рандомные финиш — плохо в тайко. Они выбиваются из общего ритма, и делают акцент на этом звуке, который, в принципе, не отличается от других таких же. Я это понял уже, поубирал все финишеры, оставил только в паре месь,
    там где в тему
12. От 02:14:609 - до 02:21:037 - слишком недостает всего в ритме. Если сравнить со вторым и третьим киаями, разница-то получается огромная. Интенсивость очень сильно разнится. И всякие триплы по вокалу не выделяешь даже 02:16:264 - и так далее. услышал там пару триплов на вокале и один стрим из 5 нот
13. 02:36:135 - оп-па, звук. Зря андермапнул. Исправил
14. 03:35:648 (156) - тоже немного инконсистент, у тебя ж не было этого серкла ни 03:35:648 (156) - , ни 03:35:648 (156) - , ни 03:41:881 - тут.Исправил
15. 04:56:979 - / 04:57:174 - ну не знааааю. Нет как-то особо большого смысла скипать звуки, итак у тебя там куча всякого 1/4.Исправил

всё. не буду все досконально писать.
просто иди пройдись по рц и исправь анранки
гл Я всё понял, большое спасибо за мод ^^

1. I'm not hating the difficulty name, but somehow it's really long and thus it's no longer a diff name but summary of the song lol just saying
2. Do you have a grudge against 1.40? lol 154 with 1.60 is too fast imo probably lower them? Not to mention that this is a marathon, keeping up with that fast pace is kinda hard, also with some of the streams, it's already hard enough.
3. Also, HP is too high with those streams and the length. Try 5, and also OD to 5.
4. 00:04:994 (15,16) - can be changed to k, to suits the vocal and the bell
5. 00:08:603 (33) - ^
6. 00:11:760 (49,50,51,52) - ddkk for same reason as above. just to make a variation too, so it wont be a boring dd dk dd dk etc
7. 00:24:542 (104,105,107) - i feel comfortable with them as K when i play it, because the sound of something click there makes it feel lighter than the heavy D. I feel all the click there (on the triplets also) can be changed to k because it's really really weird to have a heavy tone on the music here don't be afraid with the repetitions, because the song is similar there so i hope you change this orz
8. 00:40:783 (147) - change to K? 00:41:234 (148,149,150,151) - weird pattern. my suggestion is delete them, then make dddk d k on 00:40:933 and delete the SV change. it overlaps and looks ugly u,u
9. No comment on the stream because i dont know
10. 02:05:258 (508,509,510,511,512) - flows better as kkddk
11. 02:19:089 (602) - delete, maybe? for breaks. 2/1 all over is kinda boring
12. 02:20:648 (610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618) - dkkdkdkkd flows better with the music :> and 02:21:816 (619,620,621,622) - change to k k d d for following the vocal. and 02:23:180 (623) - can be deleted for also following the vocal. just a suggestion but it flows better like this~
13. 02:24:544 (629,630) - k for instrumentals
14. 02:26:881 (638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646) - kkkkddddk? it also flows better with the drum
15. 02:28:829 (653,654,655,656,657) - kddkk for following the strings too
16. 02:29:609 (659,660,661,662,663) - dkdkk for the same reason as above
17. 02:30:972 (668) - also can be deleted for break and the echo of the strings from the note before
18. 02:42:466 (734,735,736,737,738) - 02:44:803 (745,746,747,748,749) - just k d k 3/2 is enough here, no need for stream
19. 02:45:680 (751,752) - just 1/1 k here is enough

Senritsu wrote:

sorry for late! im only available on Friday T_T
im only suggesting things here, so you don't have to accept all of it

[Festival]

1. I'm not hating the difficulty name, but somehow it's really long and thus it's no longer a diff name but summary of the song lol just saying This diff name has MEANING! Im really don't want to change it, but if this will be reason why i can't rank this map, i'll change it...
2. Do you have a grudge against 1.40? lol 154 with 1.60 is too fast imo probably lower them? Not to mention that this is a marathon, keeping up with that fast pace is kinda hard, also with some of the streams, it's already hard enough. True, edited
3. Also, HP is too high with those streams and the length. Try 5, and also OD to 5. Ok
4. 00:04:994 (15,16) - can be changed to k, to suits the vocal and the bell Good tip
5. 00:08:603 (33) - ^ +
6. 00:11:760 (49,50,51,52) - ddkk for same reason as above. just to make a variation too, so it wont be a boring dd dk dd dk etc You know more than me
7. 00:24:542 (104,105,107) - i feel comfortable with them as K when i play it, because the sound of something click there makes it feel lighter than the heavy D. I feel all the click there (on the triplets also) can be changed to k because it's really really weird to have a heavy tone on the music here don't be afraid with the repetitions, because the song is similar there so i hope you change this orz Yeah, edited
8. 00:40:783 (147) - change to K? 00:41:234 (148,149,150,151) - weird pattern. my suggestion is delete them, then make dddk d k on 00:40:933 and delete the SV change. it overlaps and looks ugly u,u I again listened to the rhythm in this moment, you are right
9. No comment on the stream because i dont know Dragon-touhou-force
10. 02:05:258 (508,509,510,511,512) - flows better as kkddk Ok
11. 02:19:089 (602) - delete, maybe? for breaks. 2/1 all over is kinda boring I dont unrestand, you mean delete all noted in this momen to make Break Time or what?
12. 02:20:648 (610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618) - dkkdkdkkd flows better with the music :> and 02:21:816 (619,620,621,622) - change to k k d d for following the vocal. and 02:23:180 (623) - can be deleted for also following the vocal. just a suggestion but it flows better like this~ Ok
13. 02:24:544 (629,630) - k for instrumentals *Made a note sticker on the wall*
14. 02:26:881 (638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646) - kkkkddddk? it also flows better with the drum Ok
15. 02:28:829 (653,654,655,656,657) - kddkk for following the strings too ok
16. 02:29:609 (659,660,661,662,663) - dkdkk for the same reason as above Ok
17. 02:30:972 (668) - also can be deleted for break and the echo of the strings from the note before Maybe my map a bit boring in some moments, but i'm basically don't want make a break time in my map
18. 02:42:466 (734,735,736,737,738) - 02:44:803 (745,746,747,748,749) - just k d k 3/2 is enough here, no need for stream i'll work on it
19. 02:45:680 (751,752) - just 1/1 k here is enough ok

Yeah i dont know if i have to list all of them but there are many unnecessary notes on calm parts, i hope you remove some, especially the stream parts. Need a lot improvements also, on the hitsounds. I have my reasons why i don't mod till the end, because if i have to say, i will say many things, that may completely replace your mapping style u_u Interesting thing - In this time, while i was waiting your mod i was started playing taiko (Before that I just passed 1* maps 2 years ago) and my perception of taiko mapping changed radically, I can not look at my map without tears, i needs to be completely redone! Thanks for your advices (muzukashii dif is wip too)


And btw, nice SB, though i doubt taiko players pay enough attention to the SB. SB as how much i love this song

Gluck! Thanks!

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.

1. Delete 05:50:161 , to make a gap become larger. If follow this suggestion, please ignore 00:41:685 suggestion for the map's consistency.
2. Add d on 05:50:258 , and moved a a start of spinner to 05:50:453

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

1. Still shocked after see the stream patterns. Let me help you to delete some note. It's too long somehow ;;w;;
   **Please note that here is only my opinion**
   00:53:667 / 00:55:031 / 00:55:810 / 00:56:394 / 00:56:784 / 04:50:161 / 04:50:940 / 04:51:524 / 04:52:303
   And here is the part that it's calm, but have too many note, consider to delete it. Let the silence emphasize the music :3
   04:33:310 / 04:33:505
   
   
2. Some parts are seems too boring to play because it's k d k d k d k d pattern. Maybe add a note for some variation.
   **Please note that here is only my opinion**
   01:34:381 / 01:34:576 / 02:18:992 / 03:41:979 / 04:24:057 / 04:29:511

[R] wrote:

yo

[Long diff name]
00:17:625 - change kat Ok
00:22:888 - add note, the break feels akward, similiar pattern with 00:19:129 - Ok
00:26:497 - ^Ok
00:30:106 - ^Ok
00:33:715 - ^Ok
00:37:324 - ^Ok
00:47:336 - ddk change kkk, sounds will more clear Last note is K, this is rankable if it kkK
00:59:706 - delete, there has finisher with SV forward that make a bit hard Edited everywhere
01:16:167 (152,153) - invert, make drum sound consistent 01:15:193 - Ok
01:16:557 (154,155) - change kat, high picth piano Ok
02:08:959 - change D, consistency 02:02:725 - Ok
02:32:920 - change kat, give a variety Ok
03:42:076 - change kat Ok
04:34:868 - make kkk ?? following 04:33:310 - have triplet here Ok
04:59:414 - change don ? Ok

maybe just that from me
good luck Thank you very much!

Tyistiana wrote:

Still wait for your replies. uwu

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi, ASPIRIN~
Sorry for late, too ;;w;;
I too was late, I'm sorry. I've been very busy since the beginning of September and I just forgot to answer you ... Better late than never!

If my modding are affects to your mapping style, feel free to reject them! :3

[ Unrankable caution]

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.

Nothing much, let's have a look of spinner on 05:50:258
A gap between note and spinner is not enough. Here I have 2 ways to suggest you.

1. Delete 05:50:161 , to make a gap become larger. If follow this suggestion, please ignore 00:41:685 suggestion for the map's consistency.Edited!
2. Add d on 05:50:258 , and moved a a start of spinner to 05:50:453 Edited!

[ Difficulty name problem proof]

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

So about difficulty name , no problem , keep going on! Yea! Cool! I really like this diff name!

[ General]
To be honest, HP7 is seems too merciless somehow , considered by this map length is exceed 5 minutes.
Maybe decrease HP a little might be good! :3 Edited!

[ Overall]

1. Still shocked after see the stream patterns. Let me help you to delete some note. It's too long somehow ;;w;;
   **Please note that here is only my opinion**
   00:53:667 / 00:55:031 / 00:55:810 / 00:56:394 / 00:56:784 / 04:50:161 / 04:50:940 / 04:51:524 / 04:52:303
   And here is the part that it's calm, but have too many note, consider to delete it. Let the silence emphasize the music :3
   04:33:310 / 04:33:505
   
   
2. Some parts are seems too boring to play because it's k d k d k d k d pattern. Maybe add a note for some variation. Edited everywhere
   **Please note that here is only my opinion**
   01:34:381 / 01:34:576 / 02:18:992 / 03:41:979 / 04:24:057 / 04:29:511 Edited everywhere too

[ Festival is far from over]
00:10:407 - Change to k , similar pitch to 00:10:106 Edited everywhere!
00:12:212 (51,52) - Since the vocal here is high, how about k to emphasize these vocal? Edited!
00:41:535 moves to 00:41:685 - I think that to follow the vocal here might be better. I really don't understand the note on 00:41:535 that which pitch it's follow. At least in my opinion, there shouldn't have a note on 00:41:535 Edited!
00:41:685 moves to 00:41:881 - In taiko , we can place a spinner after the pitch too if we have a note which it's follow that pitch. Edited!
00:56:102 (45,46) - Change to d , in order to emphasize the pitch like 00:56:297 Edited!
00:56:881 - Change to d , the pitch here seems not high enough compare to 00:57:076 / 00:57:174 Edited!
00:59:706 moves to 00:59:316 - Seems fitter and have more power to emphasize the finisher on 00:59:803
01:02:336 - Remove finisher here, even this pitch is dominate, but it isn't strong enough in my opinion. Finisher here was accidentally
01:05:063 - Here are only my opinion Looks really cool! Added!
01:06:427 - Don't have any pitch here , should delete. ;;w;; Edited!
01:07:401 / 01:08:180 / 01:08:959 - Change to d , let's have a look on 01:10:128 , it's similar pitch. Sure, I didn't talk about vocal. Change for the consistency of the pitch might be better in my opinion. uwu Edited!
01:12:758 - Delete , for the ease to emphasize 01:12:855 Here is important sounds, i think i don't need to delete it
01:12:855 - Sure, same pitch as 01:10:128. (I guess it's drum pitch) Change to d for the consistency of the map :3Edited!
01:29:024 - Change to d Edited!
01:29:219 - Change to k , seems fitter in my opinion. Edited!
02:21:427 - Change to d , similar pitch to 02:21:816 Edited!
02:23:570 - Change to k , the vocal here seems higher than 02:23:764 Edited!
02:42:758 - Change to k , a special pitch appears here. this part I completely remade, now there is no note on this place
03:43:342 - Delete , for the consistency as you've decide to use 5-notes pattern so far. (Usually, 6-notes pattern are not common to use.) Edited!
03:43:537 moves to 03:43:440 - For the note's position consistency on 03:44:219 Edited!
03:44:219 - Sure, change to d for the color consistency on 03:43:537 Edited!
04:53:375 - High pitch, might change to k Edited!
05:23:764 - Change to d , same reason as 02:21:427 Edited!

[ Storyboard]
My definition : I'll represent the circle like 01:44:803 as circle
Some strong pitch are not have circles , which I think that it'll be good to emphasize that pitch
Like 02:21:427 / 02:21:806 / 02:22:206 / 02:22:596 / 02:22:985 / 02:23:375 / 02:23:764 / 02:24:154 / 02:24:544 / 02:24:933 / 02:25:323 / 02:25:712 / 02:26:102 / 02:26:492 // 05:23:764 part this circles need to emphasize finishers, but at this moments i'll a other effects, but when i think up of something interesting

Wait, I'm not SB modder, lmao
It's been a long time that I haven't see a SB on taiko! Nice!!
So, take my star (／・ω・)／ Aww, thank you very much!
Good luck for ranking~ After your mod, i thoroughly revised my view on mapping and fully remade 02:46:362 - 02:52:596 and 04:57:466 - 05:05:063 parts and remade every pattern, now this looks better! Thanks!

PoPoii wrote:

i want to go to the festival

General

This is not successful SB remake, maybe a bit later i'll use it

festival is not here

00:08:753 - make it kk, bcuz mostly u use that doublet for vocal oks before it a bit too
00:09:655 - to dk, same reason^ Ok!
[/color]00:09:956 - kk ^ Edited!
00:19:580 (90,91,92,93) - to kdkk ? it fit with drum flow, dkdk isnt good enough Ok
00:41:234 - why not add k there ? i can hear sound there, also if you add k, add don 00:41:385 - for the flow Oops, i forget note here
01:12:271 - how about ? k for snare don for tom/bass Looks better!
01:18:505 - same as above^ Edited!
01:25:031 (221,222,223,224) - its kkkd tho, :3 bcuz its have differ pitch Edited!
01:38:180 (305,306,307,308,309) - same like above, try kkkkd Looks cooll!
01:40:128 - this one is don, and del this 01:40:225 - Oops, my mistake, edited!

overall your map is good but isnt good enough, why i can said that, bcuz some part need more consistency, sometime you use d for snare and use k for bass drum, some of your stream need to be fixed ? oh not fixed hmmm need more impruvment, but its already good tho like 01:48:505 - i like that part Good reason to remap it again, haha

sorry i do a shortmod, bcuz i cant pass this map xD that stream is demn

Thanks for mod!

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello ASPIRIN, from my queue:
Thank you for M4M

[General]
OD/HP : 6/5 ok!

[Festival is far from over]
00:04:994: kk for high pitch No, dk better here i think, it emphasize pitch before it

00:55:907: k to fit the pitch ok!

00:58:635: dkd, you may use 50% speed to listen for the music pitch ok!

01:23:277: Delete to emphasize at 01:23:375 Good tip

01:33:894 to 01:35:842: Don't you see this part is boring ok, this part is remaped

01:47:920 and 01:51:037: Change to k for consistency in 01:54:154 - 01:52:596 hmm, somebody once told me "note between finisher with same color - unranked", so, i'll not edit momentz like this

01:55:907: Change to d to emphasize the next k ok!

05:24:154: How about kkd? Maybe you mean 05:25:518 (878,879,880) ? So, kkd here sounds better!

Good luck
Thank you very much!

Kith190 wrote:

Hi, here for NM from my modding queue.

[Festival is far from over]
from here 01:37:790 - to 01:42:661 - there is quite a mess, 01:38:180 (308,309,310,311,312) - this sound is mapped differently from 01:38:959 (314,315,316,317,318) - and you placed some notes that to me are not so much "player friendly" like 01:38:862 - 01:40:420 - 01:41:979 - i'll rework this moments, cuz it need reword
In order to make hem more playable I would suggest you to move all of them of a 1/4 before but here is actually a sound so idk, check somehow
04:43:245 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Here I hear something like dkddk twice Ok
04:44:511 - this note is definitively a higher pitch than this one 04:44:414 - so I would place a k Ok, i made it like dkdkk
04:51:232 - I hear this stream a bit different, ignore me if you don't agree:
04:51:719 - d , 04:52:109 (662,663) - control+g , 04:52:206 (663,664,665,666,667) - all the opposite, so dddkd Now it sounds better!
04:53:472 - maybe here is a d sound, not sure Ok
same thing here 05:44:511 -Ok, i did it in same places after it

Nice consistency
Hope it was helpful! Good luck for ranking! Thank you very much! <3

game rock wrote:

Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

• 
  
  HP: 6

1. 00:05:144 (16) - Change to k, the voice have a hight tone, also sounds very good with this structure 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - for the low voices and notes 00:02:287 (2,3) - to increases here 00:04:091 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - Ok
2. 00:09:655 (39,40,41,42) - Change to d, and then change to k 00:11:911 (50,52) - to keep consistency with 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
3. 00:53:570 (24) - Change to d flow much better the stream 00:53:472 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - Ok, but i think 00:10:106 (41) - is need to be k, cuz here other sound
4. 00:57:953 (57,60) - Make Ctrl G flows much better the pitch. Ok
5. 01:22:693 (203) - Change to k sounds much better. Ok
6. 01:49:868 (398) - You forgot change to k to keep the sequence you have with the kats 01:48:699 (386,387,390,391,394,395) -Ok
7. 02:14:316 (563) - Change to k to variate bevause you have some kdd so a variation is much better for much fun. Ok
8. 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - This is a bit repetitive, add notes how you make here 02:15:388 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - I suggest you add a d 02:18:797 - and add a k 02:19:381 - Added
9. 03:00:388 (863,864,865) - , 03:01:167 (868,869,870) - , 03:01:946 (873,874,875) - This is a bit repetitive do not you think? I recommend move 03:02:044 (874) - to 03:01:849 - Edited
10. 03:03:602 (886) - Change to k to variate a bit. Ok
11. 03:31:751 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - This would sound much better if you move this note 03:31:849 (111) - here 03:32:044 - Ok
12. 03:37:985 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - This part too for a similar consitency with the previous suggestion, move 03:37:693 (151) - to 03:37:888 -Ok
13. 03:40:712 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - Change to ddkkdddd sounds much better with the instrumental. Ok
14. 04:22:985 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - You remember this part, right? is this same part 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - so to keep consistency in both parts please add a d 04:23:472 - and add a k 04:24:057 - Ok
15. 04:26:979 - , 04:27:174 - Add a k for variation and make much fun the map, because this is a bit repetitive 04:26:102 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485) - Ok
16. 04:28:921 - Add a d and add a k here 04:29:122 - for a similar reason and density with the previous suggestion. Ok
17. 04:42:758 - You forgot add a note, similar to 04:40:323 (566,567,568) - so please add a d and change to k to flow much better 04:42:709 (585) - Ok. But I thought that in this moment 2 1/8 notes!
18. 04:50:014 (642,643) - Same ^ (Just move 04:50:014 (642,643) - to 04:49:966 - and add a d 04:50:112 - )Ok
19. 05:20:648 (859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870) - You know what to do here right? Ok
20. 05:42:368 - Add a k and add a d 05:42:953 - sounds very nice and to increase the density a bit.Ok

Amazing map! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!
Amazing mod! Thank you very much for help!

Thousand wrote:

Hi~ :3 NM from here

SPOILER

d = small don
k = small kat
D =big don
K = big kat
^ = again

Festival is far from over

• change 00:41:535 (153) - to k Ok
  delete 00:41:687 (154) - Ok
  move 00:41:881 (1) - to 00:41:687 and end it in 00:44:803 Ok
  change 00:53:375 (22) - to d No, cuz here is stream flow
  change 00:54:057 (29) - to k ^
  change 00:54:154 (30) - to D ^
  change 00:54:349 (31,32) - to k Ok
  01:01:167 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - here you can change 01:01:557 (84,85) - to d and 01:01:751 (86) - to k or just change 01:01:751 (86) - to k Ok
  00:53:570 (24,25) - ctrl + g previous mod - here is kk
  change 01:02:725 (93) - to d Ok
  change 01:02:920 (94) - to k, 01:03:018 (95,96) - to d and 01:03:407 (99) - to d Ok
  change 01:03:797 (102) - to k Ok
  01:04:089 (104,106) - ctrl + g Ok
  01:04:381 (107,108) - ^ Ok
  change 01:04:674 (110) - to d Ok
  01:04:771 (111) - ^ Ok
  change 01:05:453 (118) - to k Ok
  change 01:05:842 (122) - to d Ok. Now this stream sounds really cool!
  make 01:18:505 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - a kkdkkkd Ok
  01:20:355 (184,187) - ctrl + g Ok
  01:22:693 (203,206) - ^ - here is kk
  change 01:22:888 (205) - to k Ok
  change 01:23:764 (212) - to d Ok
  01:25:323 (226) - ^ Ok
  change 01:44:609 (359) - to d not really, here is d k d D#BFFF00]d[/color] k d D
  change 01:44:803 (360) - to K В becouse sound is clunk
  01:44:998 (361,364) - ctrl + g No. First triple is up for high pitch, second for pitch down
  change 01:46:167 (369) - to d not really, here is d k d D#BFFF00]d[/color] k d D
  change 01:46:362 (370) - to KВ becouse sound is clunk
  01:46:557 (371,372) - ctrl + g Ok, just for variate
  change 01:46:946 (374) - to k Ok
  01:47:531 (378,379) - ctrl + g Ok
  02:52:596 (808,809,810,811) - ^ Ok
  02:53:375 (813,814) - ^ Ok
  02:53:667 add d Ok
  02:53:764 (816,818) - ctrl + g Ok
  move 02:54:251 (820) - to 02:54:446 Ok
  02:54:544 (822,823) - ctrl + g Ok
  move 02:54:836 (824) - to 02:55:420 Ok
  02:55:323 (829,830) - ctrl + g Ok
  02:55:712 (831,832,833,834) - ^ Ok
  02:56:492 (836,837,839,840) - ^ Ok
  02:57:271 (841,843) - ^ Ok
  change 02:57:855 (846) - to k Ok
  change 02:58:440 (849) - to D unranked
  make 02:59:024 (852,853,854) - a kkd
  02:59:414 (855,857,859,861) - ctrl + g Ok
  02:59:414 (855,857,859,861,863,864) - ^ Ok
  03:00:583 (866,867,868,869,871,872,873,874) - ^ Ok
  change 03:02:141 (876) - to k Ok
  03:02:920 (882,884) - ctrl + g Ok
  03:02:920 (882,884,885,886) - ^ Ok
  03:03:699 (888,889) - ^ Ok
  change 03:04:089 (890) - to k Ok
  move 04:50:014 (642) - to 04:49:998 (1/6) Ok
  change 05:04:089 (745) - to K no, here is 2 clunk sounds
  delete 05:53:375 (1) - Ok
  move 05:53:764 (1) - to 05:53:375 and make it end on 05:57:271 Ok

All of this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you. Good luck with ranking
Thank you very much! <3

rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

This is not extra Festival is far from over

1. 00:52:985 (20) - Change to k? 00:52:596 (18,19,20,21) - The melody of this part is gradually increase. I think change that to k is look better.Not really, 18 and 20 are equal, but 21 is higher than 19 ... So d k d k is best pattern here
2. 00:54:057 (29) - Remove this note? When i intend to heard this. I unheard a melody here. Yeap, you are right
3. 01:05:842 (122,123,124,125) - The melody on here is look similar all. I suggest change to d all. Edited, but like ddkD, cuz finishers need note with other color before
4. 01:13:635 (146,147,148,149,150) - How about change this to d k k k d? Look it's follow a melody better. Ok
5. 01:14:803 to 01:17:336 - I think your note on this is not follow a melody a bit. I suggest 01:15:583 (155,156) - change to k and 01:16:946 (162,163) - ctrl+g. Look it's better? definitely better
6. 01:23:959 (213,214,215,216,217,218) - These notes the melody is similar like 01:23:570 (210,211,212) - . I suggest change 01:23:959 (213,214,215) - to kkd. and change 01:24:349 (216,217,218) - to kkd too. ok
7. 01:29:803 (256,258) - Ctrl+g? Look it's follow a melody better. Here is selected 2 katu notes... I changet it for ddkdk k (it was dddkk k)
8. 01:56:394 (446) - Change to d? The sound is look similar like a before note. ok
9. 02:24:154 (620) - Change to k? Look the vocal is high. ok
10. 03:18:115 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - I suggest to change this to opposite color. It's similar like 01:13:635 (146,147,148,149,150) -
    ok
11. 03:20:648 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - Same as above ^. ok
12. 04:32:920 (524,525) - Ctrl+g? look (524) the sound is higher (525) ok
13. 04:34:479 (533) - Change to k? The sound is look high. ok
14. 04:38:959 (564,565) - Ctrl+g? look (564) the sound is higher (565)
15. 04:39:738 (568) - Change to k? The sound is look high.
16. 04:40:323 (572,573,574) - I think use 1/8 is look very sudden. Can you change to 1/6? wow, it looks better!
17. 04:42:661 (590,591,592) - Same as above ^. ok changed, but i need to think about this moment, because here is not 4 1\3 notes...

This is all from me. Good luck //Sorry look i mod this not as good as it should be because i'm so sleepy. T^T
Thank you very much!

Marm wrote:

heya, mod from my queue.

festival

1. 00:40:933 (148) - deleting this would flow better as ddkk is more common for 1/6 snappings. ok
2. 00:41:687 - move slider beginning to here? The vocals are stronger here than on where it is right now. This is unrankable, cuz overlap
3. Also, new inherited timing point here is skipping 2ms, is that intentional? If not then fix it to be on 00:41:685. If it is then put a new inherited timing point here 00:41:629 - ommiting first bar line to avoid the double bars. That is intentional
4. 01:06:135 (132,133) - invert those colours as the finisher has a snare sound, more suitable for kat. ok
5. 01:06:427 - don here would help the flow in the transition with 1/4 notes > 1/2 notes > 2/1 notes. The way it is right now (1/4 > 1/1 > 2/1) doesn't play so well. Also there's a nice drum sound there :p ok
6. I think deleting 01:14:024 (155) - would be better here as it feels less over mapped and dk kd on calm parts usually fits very nice.
7. 01:15:388 (161) - could remove too, this section feels too overmapped for the intensity of the song.
8. 01:15:777 (163) - ^
9. 01:16:557 (167) - ^. Consider checking the last 4 suggestions together before accepting or declining. hmm, i'll think about this moment
10. 01:17:531 (172,173,174) - these should be dons as they are the same sound on 01:17:141 (170) - and on previous notes. ok
11. 02:21:427 (621,622,623,624) - good place for finishers to go with the intensity on vocals. ok
12. 02:27:661 (649) - finisher here doesn't fit well as the sound here is not too strong and there's a note of the same colour on the stream very close to it, making it hard to play. ok. Just forgot to delete it
13. 02:36:362 (707) - this note is 1/4, not 1/6. Idk about the previous one though, seems like it is between 1/4 and 1/6 but 1/4 plays much better than 1/6 here, I'd go for that for consistency on the map. This one 02:36:946 (713,714) - is better as there's a break after it so the player can recover later, but 1/4 would still be better here. ok
14. 02:52:596 (827) - again, weird place for finisher, end of stream with a note of the same colour near it. also it has no increased intensity compared to the other drum sounds on the white lines. ok 02:52:206 (823) - this would fit much better for a finisher if you removed the following note. I hear stream here, so i cant
15. 03:02:271 (897) - no reason for this 1/6 note as you didn't map any of the 1/6 drum sounds before it like 03:01:881 - or 03:02:076 - , this just breaks consistency and flow. ok
16. 03:04:381 - don here before the finisher as you already have used many ddK or kkD over the map? ok
17. 04:47:920 - the 1/6 used on this section makes much more sense imo as it gives emphasis on the guitar solo that's happening, however it's still ugly for the eyes to see :vok
18. I think the sv on this note 05:03:407 (770) - was supposed to be x0,66?ok
19. 05:23:764 (914,915,916,917) - again, good place for finishers using the vocals intensity. ok
20. Last thing, I think it's important to warn players somewhere (If it's not already) that the SB (finishers effect to be more precise) works only on 4:3 resoltion. I want to rework this effect, so that it would look good on all types of monitors

nice song and fun sb here, get some stars and be aware of the 1/6 consistency! Good luck o/
Thank you very much! 1\6 was just test.

Faputa wrote:

From my Queue,
o/

[Storyboard]
⏩00:01:535 - Shouldn’t ‘さあ’ appear on this line instead of the next one? Ok, i'll edit this moment
⏩I think the light particles can be more at the upper section of the screen, close to the Japanese lyrics because I think the upper part seems kinda empty now. Ok, i'll fix it.
⏩02:52:596 (828) - Remove the dark ring at the hit section because you don’t have a big note there now. When i updating the SB, these rings are automatically added or deleted. By the way, i have problems with displaying this effects on 4:3 monitors, so, i'll change it by other effect soon (I guess that these will be particles flying in all directions every finisher note, although you can suggest an idea for the better).
⏩05:23:764 (914,915,916,917) - 05:26:102 (923,924,925,926) - For tidiness I think you should add those black rings on these big notes.^

⏩05:53:375 (125) - Just a suggestion, but you may let the sound spectrum at the below less sensitive to let the credit screen more static?
Ok, i'll edit this moment

[General]
⏩Maybe capitalise the diffname from [Festival is far from over] to [Festival Is Far From Over]? On my opinion, first is looking better. Most likely because I'm just used to the old name.
⏩Remove tags Diao ye zong 凋叶棕 since they already showed up at the metadata.
⏩Add tags めらみぽっぷ for the Japanese of meramipop,
Team Shanghai Alice Shanhai Arisu Gengakudan for both the official english name and the romanised form,
Touhou for relation to the source’s game’s theme,
めらみぽっぷ for the singer’s name that sings this song.
if you are reading this now, please contact me in any way and tell me - did I put it right, because I did not fully understand where to put any points ....

Here are the problems with SV I think you should definitely check them out:
⏩04:19:868 (444) - At least a gradual SV of 04:19:479 (440,441,442,443,444) - . Right now it is very unsatisfying visually and I would notice the (444) as not a ¼ following the previous 4 ¼ notes and combo-broke when testplaying. OR Make the SV line a ½ tick later just like 02:15:193 (580,581) - so that that confusion will not happen again Fixed, I forgot to fix this moment before
⏩Starting from 05:00:583 (749,750,751,752,753,754,755,756,757,758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771) - I think the SV change is way too large that it makes it a sight-read of notes, and this kills many HD players as well One way - i'll delete it
By the way, what's about 05:50:355 (94) - and next SVs?

Here are the suggestions with SV that I think it may make the map more clean in SV
⏩04:06:622 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356) - Maybe a grudual increase in SV. Cool idea!


[Festival is far from over]
Generally I don’t really get why you usually use a Big note after streams or ¼ -ples. That would be a style, but I don’t think would be a good one. Im trying to make finishers and next note is not same color, for comfortable playable
⏩00:41:881 (1) - Why starting this spinner here? I believe there aren’t sounds at 00:41:881 - but instead you can follow the vocal at 00:41:687 - . ok
⏩01:05:842 (129,130,131,132) - For the k, there is the same sound with (130,131,132) so kddd here maybe questionable. Hm, i hear it like kdkk
⏩01:08:570 (138) - This section which there’s k covering the drum sounds aren’t the best spots to put the ks I think. I mapped this part with vocal, cuz frum sounds is boring here
⏩02:08:180 (530,531,532) - ddK K K feels uncomfortable when playing. I think d K K K would work better. Ok, changed it and same
03:15:193 (8,9) - Ctrl+g this? again kdkd at least can make it sounds better. ok
⏩03:48:699 (235) - Remove this finisher? I think it would balance more since you don’t have finisher at 03:51:816 (254) - 03:53:375 (264) - 03:54:933 (279) - 03:56:492 (289) - .. ok
Be sure to change that storyboard settings as well Sure
⏩04:35:745 (552) - Remove this note? There isn’t piano sounds and I think it can let the player rest a bit to prepare for the next stream. ok
⏩04:42:855 (606) - Remove this? The sound impart of that trill ends at 04:42:790 (605) - I think you can certainly have a dkd here instead of dkdk. ok


Really satisfying map to play and watch! Good luck on approval!!

Thank you very much! <3

1. 01:21:622 - эта пауза кажется такой неестественной
2. 01:31:167 (274) - d будет лучше, потому что 01:31:037 (272) - здесь я не слышу ничего особенного для выделения
3. 01:44:803 (370) - не знаю конечно, но раз ты поставил k 01:46:362 (380) - 01:47:920 (390) - тут и на других идентичных ударах, то лучше это сделать и там
4. 02:08:959 (534) - финиш бы подошёл к таким штукам, в этом и других киаях тоже + 02:02:725 (492) - здесь же ты его ставишь
5. 02:32:725 (682,684) - лучше k поставить, звук же одинаковый. 02:33:894 (688) - а тут k и с финишем можно
6. 03:54:933 (279) - может d поставить? как тут 03:48:699 (235) - , если это сильно ничего ломать не будет конечно

tokiko wrote:

[Festival is far from over]
добавь слово "project" в теги
если сделать "Festival is Far from Over" или сделать заглавную букву маленькой, то будет эстетичнее, наверное

1. 01:21:622 - эта пауза кажется такой неестественной всё хорошо, там просто звуков нет, так что нечего туда пихать считаю я
2. 01:31:167 (274) - d будет лучше, потому что 01:31:037 (272) - здесь я не слышу ничего особенного для выделения О, вот и фолоу!
3. 01:44:803 (370) - не знаю конечно, но раз ты поставил k 01:46:362 (380) - 01:47:920 (390) - тут и на других идентичных ударах, то лучше это сделать и там Оп, ты на 200% прав, я просто забыл там поставить кату
4. 02:08:959 (534) - финиш бы подошёл к таким штукам, в этом и других киаях тоже + 02:02:725 (492) - здесь же ты его ставишь Тут скорее с второго надо убирать финишер, ибо ну не такой сильный звук как те K K K паттерны
5. 02:32:725 (682,684) - лучше k поставить, звук же одинаковый. 02:33:894 (688) - а тут k и с финишем можно Чисто флоу, не могу ничего тут сделать
6. 03:54:933 (279) - может d поставить? как тут 03:48:699 (235) - , если это сильно ничего ломать не будет конечно Первоё чёткий звук тарелок, второе звук что-то более басового, так что нет. Кстати, я убрал там финишеh, так что отчасти этот пункт был полезен

тайко модинг такой трудный
От души! Спасибо!

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Festival is far from over]
00:19:881 (92) - d? It helps emphasize the finisher at 00:20:031 (93). Ok

00:41:009 (148,149,150) - Delete. If you listen at 50% playback, the drums are 1/6, not 1/4. Replace with:
00:41:084 and 00:41:159 - Add d. I listened attentively to this moment and concluded that there is ddk

01:19:868 (188) - Change to d. Yeap
01:28:050 (251,252,253,254) - kdk d for consistency? You mapped 01:34:674 (298) with d. Ok
01:43:829 (364,365,366) - ddK? You used K for every finisher in this section [excluding 01:44:024 and 01:44:803] Ok
01:44:803 (370) - K? Same reason as above. Ok
01:50:161 (411,412) - dK? Ok

01:55:128 - This whole stream is a bit awkward to play imo. I'd suggest:
01:55:420 (447) - Change to k.
01:55:615 (449) - Change to d.
01:55:810 (451) - ^
01:55:907 (452) - Change to k.
I listened attentively to this moment and concluded that there is dkkddkkddkdkddk

Good luck with ranking this!
Thanks!

Consified wrote:

Sorry for late D:

[General]
Diao Ye Zong Ye XD
I think it's chinese name,so why dont you put capital letters on first word?

btw GOD SB wtf D:
:D

[Storyboard]
00:01:535 - First lyric should put here,since the vocal start at that time Hmm... Maybe you have old sb version? Cuz lyrics start here already

[Map]
00:01:535 - start here?reason same as storyboard Hm, ok!
00:47:920 - I would put a stream here NVM I was thinking about it, but it will be longest stream in map, so... sounds good, but i care about difficulty
00:53:375 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - add some 1/6?There is instrument flow sound I afraid of 1/6 will break my map for DT players. in any case many of all 1/6 moments sounds like inaccuracy of playing a musical instrument. (2 exceptions is bookmarked in map)
01:05:940 - and 01:06:135 - change to k? Follow drums Here i mapped by drums pitch, so this notes has lower pitch than notes before and 01:06:232 (132) - is K so i cant to put k before
01:08:570 - d,same sound and dont have any high pitch Yeap, edited!
01:10:907 - d, drum Ok
01:15:583 - k,no drum sound Ok
01:16:946 - ^ Ok
01:30:972 (270,271,272,273) - ddkk?kdkd didnt suit the sound effect Ok!
02:02:725 - preview point here?since there is the climax of the music I like when preview point is in tranquil moments before something interesting, i think this is best moment for it. In any case i just accustomed to this part
04:40:453 (583) - k Ok, sounds good, but i afraid about feelings of this moment with DT
04:41:102 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595) - kdkdddk? Sounds good!


:thinking:
nice patterns,BN plz notice here \:D/
Thanks for mod! <3

Lasse wrote:

do you really think hp6 is necessary on such a long map at this difficulty level? 5 seems like a nicer choice Ok

i think in some parts your patterning becomes a bit too monotonous, like in this part 00:55:323 - basically the streams are kkdd/ddkk
could use more more variety, for example why not make 00:56:492 - into something like https://i.imgur.com/6BU89dC.jpg ?
I think that would fit nicely since it switches back to the high pitched instrument on 00:56:881 -
01:00:388 - this part seems more engaging patterning wise Ok. But i think this pattern is ddkdkdkkd

parts like 01:56:881 - and 04:01:557 - could utilize a bit lower sv to get a nice contrast with the more intense ones Sure, i'll think up something interesting

01:14:803 - this doesn't fit the intensity of this part very well since you suddenly map it so much more dense. also makes it really unclear what you want to follow since it mixes piano, vocals and drums
=> 01:15:388 - 01:16:946 (165) - deleting these two would make it more fitting density wise and be emphasize vocals a bit yeap, you are right

01:24:349 (220,221) - think this would work better as dd since then you get a change in patterning to match instruments and vocal phrase better no because 01:24:349 has a higher pitch than next note
01:30:193 (263,265) - removing these would work really well with the sudden really pronounced 1/1 emphasis in the song + drums are only 1/1 too, only 1/2 is the hihat oh, sounds good
01:31:362 (271) - could be removed for similar reasoning, gives the start of the next part also much more impact ok
01:36:232 - similar 1/1 suggestion here as 1:30 ok

chorus could use a little more 1/4 stuff since it seems a bit lacking compared to the verse
for example 02:07:790 (522,523,524,525) - could be ddkkd instead
similar for chorus 2 (also toning down the other parts slightly, like a few points here suggest, might help too)
third seems nicer since you mapped it way more dense


02:21:816 (617,618,619,620) - these would be great if you added finish, same for when it happens again right after
just like you did on 05:24:154 - which is basically the same thing you can notice that with each kiai this part becomes another, at first here just notes, then there are more sounds, and for the third time there are already finishers. Well, a lot of people tell me about it, so I'll make finishers here.
02:42:271 (743) - think this could be deleted to match the overall lower intensity of this part since it's only mapped to really quiet background drums that you skipped a lot ok
02:43:245 (747,748,749,750,751,752,753) - combining white and red tick triple in the same pattern when nothing in the song suggests it feels really awkward, how a bout just deleting 02:43:342 (748) - ? ok

03:34:674 (131,132,133,134,135) - same 1/1 thing as before since it's a repeating part, other stuff mentioned before will apply here too ok
04:41:199 (592) - deleting this would emphasize the piano you follow before and after much better ok
04:41:687 (597,598,599,600) - could be kddk instead to follow the switch from piano to only drums on 04:41:881 (598,599) - since it seems you tried to follow piano with kat things before ok
04:49:868 (660) - whole streams seems to ignore blue tick emphasis of the guitar which is sad, how about a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/2dHvo5f.jpg ? In editor is sounds strange, but in game is ok
04:57:953 - could be mapped since it's basically continuous guitar spam here ok

Smallwu wrote:

Hii from queue
[General]

1. Diff name: How about Festival is Far from Over? I do not know, I'm used to the name that I have now. I just do not like the way it looks ...
2. Everything Perfect. But there's one thing to tell you that I guess the pic was already removed by the painter. (reason) I cant read it

[Festival is far from over]

1. 00:53:959 (28) - kat to follow the instrument, it's from low to high. (Sounds like lute but I don't know.) Ok
2. 01:02:336 (95) - kat to follow the instrument. The others are already kat, so follow it is a better choice imo. Ok
3. 01:12:271 (143) - kat to follow drum, and keep consistency. [01:18:505 - 03:16:946 - 03:23:180] Yeap, it was little misstake
4. 03:15:972 (10,11,12) - k k d if you follow vocal. I think no, cuz here is k k k
5. 03:34:479 - I think here can add a kat to follow cymbal? kat won't decline the vocals' existence feeling. and You also add it at 01:29:803. it's made for vocal singing, so I do not know, d k d k looks boring
6. 03:42:271 (181,182) - Maybe you can remove these ones. The main reason is the part is too long if you don't give a breaktime. If you mean about triple - this triple is unnecessary.
7. 03:51:816 (250) - Why here is KAT ?W? woops, edited
8. 04:06:232 (345,346) - How about d d? To follow vocal pitches, they sound from high to low. (Tho k k is also good.) Yeap, you are right, here is d d
9. 04:25:615 (485,486,487,488,489,490) - kddddd or kdddkd, the last 5 notes sound like drums imo, so use ddddd. (k cuz read easily) here is long stream, it is dkkdkkkkd
10. 04:41:492 (596) - kat if you follow piano. sure

Nice song and nice map, good luck with rank!
thanks for Eng subtitle btw I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you very much! <3

whosthebox wrote:

Hello there! I'm here for the M4M request! Hi!

Festival is far from over

most of these are suggestions, don't feel forced to change them ~

00:21:836 (96) - change this one to K, or change 00:22:287 (97,98) - this two to D, the sound is the same in those three beats, they should be mapped the same, you mapped it as a K 00:27:249 (114) - here. yeah, but i hear i like K D K, i think 00:22:287 - is clunk
00:23:640 (104) - change this to K? the intensity of that part reaches it's peak right there. Yeap, you right
00:26:648 (109,110,111,112,113,114) - this part is exactly the same as 00:23:039 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - this one, why did you change the mapping that much? try doing something a bit more similar, at least. Yeap, it is same moments, i'll try to make is similar as posibble
00:32:663 (134,135,136) - same as above, same sound, make them either D D D or K K K. Since you seem to be following the vocals in this part, the proper mapping would be D K K. Ok, changed to it
00:36:272 (148,149,150) - again, same sound, i suggest K K K here or K K D if you want to follow the vocals. K K D sounds cool
00:50:648 (13) - change this to k, it's pitch is way higher than the k 00:50:453 (12) - here. yet you mapped this as a d. i changed it to kdd k
00:53:472 (23,24) - ctrl+g here, you mapped the instrument 00:53:570 (24) - here almost everytime with a k, why ignore it here when it's both clearly audible and has a higher pitch than the note 00:53:472 (23) - here? Because the begining of this beatmap has a stupid issues from last 10-20 reamaps. by the way - accepted
00:55:712 (42) - this one is clearly a k. Here is low bass kick. hmmm. I think this isn't k:roll:
00:56:492 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - this stream should finish with a k, intensity reaches it's peak there. I suggest you to do something like ddkdkkddk, but feel free to change it as you wish, as long as it has a k as it's last note. ok. I'll edit it to ddkkdkkdk
01:05:648 (124) - this is a k too, it's also the same sound as 01:05:258 (120) - here, and you did map that one as a k. ok
01:12:563 (146) - k too. yeap
01:21:622 - add a k here, there's a CLEARLY audible sound, also, considering how you mapped everything else in that part, it does not play very nice. Playability is important thing, ok, i'll add it
01:23:667 (213) - i think this one should be a d. You are right
01:45:485 (366,367) - ctrl+g these two, 01:45:583 (367) - this one has a higher pitch than 01:45:485 (366) - this one, you also mapped it as k both 01:47:141 (377) - here and 01:48:699 (387) - here. Ok
01:51:719 (411,412) - same as above Ok
01:59:998 (464) - this one should be a k, the vocal and the instrumental are the same as 01:59:609 (463) - here. Yeap, you are right
02:02:433 (479) - i can't hear any sound worth this note, you might be mapping the cymbal from the previous note, but it's already mapped here. I suggest you to remove this note and change 02:02:336 (478) - this one to a K. wow, it's really true that there is no sound! And idea with finmisher is great!
02:14:316 (570,571) - ctrl+g again, same stuff as mentioned before. Yeap, and i add finisher at last note of this triple and edit next stream a bit
02:21:427 (620) - this and 02:21:816 (621) - this, both should be D, you seem to be following the vocals in this part, and the vocals in those two notes are exactly the same. Nope, vocal at 02:21:816 - is higher than 02:21:427 - and 02:22:206 soo... this is D K D
02:29:609 (661,662,663,664,665) - ctrl+g this one, it sounds and follows the instrumental here a lot better imo. changed for kkdkd
02:31:946 (677) - k here? yeap!
02:32:531 (680) - , 02:32:920 (682) - you mapped both this sounds as k and 02:32:725 (681) - this one as d everywhere before this, why change it here? Keep the mapping the same, or, if you want to keep 02:32:725 (681) - this one as a k, you should still change this 02:32:725 (681) - and 02:32:920 (682) - this to k. Ok.
02:34:966 (694,695) - ctrl+g sounds a lot better imo. Yeah, you right, but is kdkdk is good pattern? No, i'll change it for kdddk
02:35:745 (700,701) - same as above, ctrl+g, you also mapped 02:35:258 (697) - this one as a k, and the same sound 02:35:842 (701) - here is mapped as k.
02:36:232 (704) - again, the same sound as before, this one should be a k. ok
02:36:622 (708) - k here too, clearly audible. ok
03:15:972 (10) - this one should be a k, higher pitch than the rest of the notes, you also mapped the same sound as a k 03:14:414 (6) - here.
03:48:699 (232) - this one is a k, either make it a k, or ctrl+g 03:48:602 (231,232) - these two if you want to emphasize the last one. ok. i'll emphasize last one
03:50:161 (241,242) - ctrl+g this one, i mentioned this several times before. ok
03:56:394 (285,286) - same as above. ok
03:59:609 (306) - k here, same reason as above. ok
04:04:284 (335,336) - i mentioned this before, both instrumental and vocals (mainly the vocals) here sound the same, both should be k. Yeap
04:06:622 (346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - apply the same changes as i mentioned earlier ( 04:07:109 (351) - here). This stream is different than the first one tho, map them both the same, as both vocal and instrumental are the same in that part. Yeap
Try making both the first and the second kiai be a bit more consistent with each other, the mapping is pretty different, even the instrumental and vocals in both parts being basically the same. ok
04:37:693 - add a k here, there's a clearly audible sound here, and i suggest to change 04:37:790 (570) - this one to k, sound better that way imo. Ok, k is added, but last note is not edited for k because next notes is K K K, i afraid of unranked things
04:37:790 (570) - ctrl+g this one, 04:39:738 (581) - this one must be a k, the pitch goes higher starting from 04:39:544 - here, ok
04:46:362 (631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639) - imo, this stream both follows the instrumental and sounds A LOT better by making it kddkddkdk. ok
04:49:479 (657) - i see what you tried to do here, but i think you can improve it. Try mapping it like this https://imgur.com/a/NcPfo I thought for a very long time at this moment, but your version is the best, thank you!
04:51:329 (673,674) - i suggest you to ctrl+g this two, and to change 04:51:622 (676) - this one to d, sounds and plays better imo. Ok
05:50:648 (96) - change this one to k k
05:52:011 (110,111,112) - these three notes should be kdk instead of dkd, the stream plays a lot better like that, and it follows the instrumental a lot better too. Yeap

most of the suggestions are small hitsound changes, the map is pretty good tbh.

THAT'S ALL MY FRIEND, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, THIS IS A NICE MAP AND HAS A FANTASTIC STORYBOARD, I HOPE TO SEE THIS RANKED SOON!
When I read this, I almost cried, thank you very much!

pssst, i love how you used the finishers here, ignore what everyone else says about them, big notes ftw :^) :^)

1. 00:41:685 - Put a red line here, and omit it. It is required to prevent the double line appearance on BPM changing.
2. 01:30:193 - 01:30:583 - 01:30:972 - Umm, I'm not comfortable with these gaps to be honest. Because the open hi-hat sound is way more prominent than the keyboards and the main melody, hence I suggest putting kats on these spots. Relevant spots needs to be changed too.
3. 01:49:479 - Well, starting from here kdkkdkkkD sounds way better to me. Follows the drums exactly.
4. 02:27:661 - End the kiai here. The pace of the song is changing at that spot. Remainder: Aimod error is not important on kiai SV changes.
5. 03:49:479 - I couldn't really understand what those kinds of finishers are emphasizing. They are spreaded out to the entire section (including the 1st one) but I don't hear a specific sound on them so I simply recommend removing the finishers on all of them.
6. 04:32:336 - Same issue as 02:27:661
7. 05:05:063 - Start the kiai here, it starts late now.
8. 05:24:154 - I don't think changing the SV is appropriate here, considering what you have done on the 1st kiai at 02:21:816 - this spot. Just keep it fixed to keep the SV changes consistent.
9. 05:29:998 - End the kiai here for the same reasons I've mentioned before.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hi there.

[Festival is far from over]

Well, generally the patterns are good, some of the parts are a bit inconsistent though, but the map is definitely promising.

1. 00:41:685 - Put a red line here, and omit it. It is required to prevent the double line appearance on BPM changing. Ok, fixed
2. 01:30:193 - 01:30:583 - 01:30:972 - Umm, I'm not comfortable with these gaps to be honest. Because the open hi-hat sound is way more prominent than the keyboards and the main melody, hence I suggest putting kats on these spots. Relevant spots needs to be changed too. Ok, fixed
3. 01:49:479 - Well, starting from here kdkkdkkkD sounds way better to me. Follows the drums exactly. I like your suggest, edited, but I don't agree with the last two notes because last finisher is high cymbal and note before finisher is should be not same color, so it is dK
4. 02:27:661 - End the kiai here. The pace of the song is changing at that spot. Remainder: Aimod error is not important on kiai SV changes. Ok, fixed
5. 03:49:479 - I couldn't really understand what those kinds of finishers are emphasizing. They are spreaded out to the entire section (including the 1st one) but I don't hear a specific sound on them so I simply recommend removing the finishers on all of them.Ok, all finishers are deleted. Except 01:44:024 (361) - 03:48:699 (235) - this
6. 04:32:336 - Same issue as 02:27:661 Ok, fixed
7. 05:05:063 - Start the kiai here, it starts late now. Ok, fixed
8. 05:24:154 - I don't think changing the SV is appropriate here, considering what you have done on the 1st kiai at 02:21:816 - this spot. Just keep it fixed to keep the SV changes consistent. Ok, fixed
9. 05:29:998 - End the kiai here for the same reasons I've mentioned before.Ok, fixed

Really good map, the storyboard is also nice. Call me back when you fix these issues.
Thank you! I did my best!