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Maeno Tomoaki, Hanae Natsuki, Toriumi Kohsuke - Kimi Iro Smi

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Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
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Nao Tomori
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 24, 2017 at 7:38:59 AM

Artist: Maeno Tomoaki, Hanae Natsuki, Toriumi Kohsuke
Title: Kimi Iro Smile
Source: Room Mate
Tags: roommate ルームメイト realazy yahuri armin a_r_m_i_n male vocal
BPM: 105
Filesize: 1122kb
Play Time: 00:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. A r M i N's Easy (1.56 stars, 47 notes)
  2. Princess (3.63 stars, 101 notes)
  3. Real's Normal (1.8 stars, 51 notes)
  4. Yuri's Hard (2.59 stars, 79 notes)
Download: Maeno Tomoaki, Hanae Natsuki, Toriumi Kohsuke - Kimi Iro Smile
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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me no mae no

mp3 and background from Doormat
Easy by A r M i N
Normal by Real
Hard by fujoshi scum
Princess by me
Last edited by Nao Tomori , edited 24 times in total.
[Mad]
415 posts
Joined June 2014
[Mad]
Hello! Here for the m4m:

[A r M i N's Easy]

00:07:744 (2,3) - I feel like a 1/2 beat slider followed by a 1/1 beat slider would represent this better, and make it so noobies wouldn't have to start a slider on the offbeat
00:14:029 (1,2) - Might look better if this was blanketed
00:15:172 (3,1) - The sliders are touching :x
00:16:029 (1,2) - Blanket could be cleaner

[Real's Normal]

Nothing to say here

[Yahuri's Hard]

00:07:172 (1) - Might look nicer to use this to complete this 00:06:029 (3,4,5,6) shape
00:14:601 (2,3,4) - Would probably look cleaner if the spacing was equal, since its such a small spacing change
00:15:744 (5,6,1) - ^

[Princess]

00:01:458 (4,5) - Blanket spacing is noticably different from 00:00:315 (2,3)
00:27:029 (4,5,6) - Awkward to read these because of how they're stacked when they're really just the same sounds as 00:26:601 (1,2,3), might be nicer to make them spaced
00:20:315 (7,1) - Might be better for this to have the same spacing as 00:22:601 (3,1)?


Thats all from me, GL!
Djulus
570 posts
Joined September 2014
Djulus
why harumachi clover in tags lol
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Shogud wrote:

Hello! Here for the m4m:

[A r M i N's Easy]

00:07:744 (2,3) - I feel like a 1/2 beat slider followed by a 1/1 beat slider would represent this better, and make it so noobies wouldn't have to start a slider on the offbeat agree armin plz change
00:14:029 (1,2) - Might look better if this was blanketed
00:15:172 (3,1) - The sliders are touching :x
00:16:029 (1,2) - Blanket could be cleaner fixed both on your behalf =D

[Real's Normal]

Nothing to say here

[Yahuri's Hard]

00:07:172 (1) - Might look nicer to use this to complete this 00:06:029 (3,4,5,6) shape
00:14:601 (2,3,4) - Would probably look cleaner if the spacing was equal, since its such a small spacing change
00:15:744 (5,6,1) - ^

[Princess]

00:01:458 (4,5) - Blanket spacing is noticably different from 00:00:315 (2,3) fixed the hexgrid in the intro
00:27:029 (4,5,6) - Awkward to read these because of how they're stacked when they're really just the same sounds as 00:26:601 (1,2,3), might be nicer to make them spaced changed this pattern around
00:20:315 (7,1) - Might be better for this to have the same spacing as 00:22:601 (3,1)? nah its fine nobody misreads this anyway cuz of song structure + expectation of rhythm + NCing anyway


Thats all from me, GL!
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri

Shogud wrote:

[Yahuri's Hard]

00:07:172 (1) - Might look nicer to use this to complete this 00:06:029 (3,4,5,6) shape remapped some of this, doesnt apply anymore
00:14:601 (2,3,4) - Would probably look cleaner if the spacing was equal, since its such a small spacing change i use this spacing in multiple places. its for NCs without vocals, but i do it here because of the increasing intensity of the vocals.
00:15:744 (5,6,1) - ^ same
thanks, but no changes

noot
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TitleUnicode:君色スマイル
Artist:Tomoaki Maeno, Natsuki Hanae, Kosuke Toriumi
ArtistUnicode:Tomoaki Maeno, Natsuki Hanae, Kosuke Toriumi
Creator:Naotoshi
Version:Yuri's Hard
Source:Room Mate
Tags:
BeatmapID:1323372
BeatmapSetID:627027

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Tarrasky
1,203 posts
Joined March 2014
Tarrasky
sup, some tips

  • A r M i N's Easy
  1. Your background is called "chain.jpg" in code, but when i download I did not find this picture (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402935)
  2. 00:04:029 - i dont think that this moment is intense enough for a Finish, and in 00:04:887 - is quite a bit intense for a whistle, maybe you can invert the hitsounds of these moments
  3. In 00:00:887 - you have added a Clap, but in 00:10:029 - even though they are similar moments in music you have added the clap in 00:10:315 (2) -, have any reason for that?
  4. 00:11:458 (4) - same than 00:02:029 - /\
  5. Both these moments 00:10:315 (2,4) - are the only moments you haven't added the clap in the correct 2/4 and 4/4 white tick in the map, please do it more consistent
    The map itself looks very well polished, nothing to change

    Real's Normal

  6. 00:00:029 (1,2) - The only other moment you use this stack are in 00:27:744 (1,2,3) - and for me both looks In totally different situations, one is a 1/1 timing distance that looks confortable with this semi-stack and the other is in the start of the song that maybe will not feel so nice, of course this is just an opinion but this semi-stack with just one circle isn't good in my opinion 00:00:029 (1) -, maybe stacking in 00:02:601 (1) - can be more consistent, like no semi-stack in 1/2 timing distance, just in 1/1 in all the map, you may disagree
  7. 00:21:458 (2,3) - you can do a non-linear line in 00:21:887 (3) - as you have done in 00:19:601 (3) -, looks more consistent
  8. 00:29:744 (4) - This can be changed just for a circle, of course have a song extended until 00:30:029 - but as before you have ignored the guitar in 00:27:744 (1,2) -, maybe can be a good idea, and looks more confortable for play just a circle than a slider starting in a red tick and finishing in a big white, looks a bit strange (this is the only situation that have happen in all map)
    good map

    Yuri's Hard

  9. 00:06:601 (5,1) - In the other transitions between a circle and a new combo slider (like 00:09:172 (8,1) - 00:13:744 (8,1) - 00:22:887 (7,1) - etc) you have increased a bit the distance, is a good choice for me but you haven'd done it in this moment, have any special reason?
    hm nothing more special to say, really solid map

    Princess

  10. 00:10:601 (1) - The New combo and the Finish are unecessary, like you have done in 00:01:458 (4) -
  11. Starting in 00:13:744 - and until 00:17:172 - all the new combos have a wrong place, you are using the red tick before the big white tick (the more important tick in the song), i recommend you change the new combos like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8403285
good luck!
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Tarrasky wrote:

sup, some tips

  • A r M i N's Easy
  1. Your background is called "chain.jpg" in code, but when i download I did not find this picture (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402935) fixed
  2. 00:04:029 - i dont think that this moment is intense enough for a Finish, and in 00:04:887 - is quite a bit intense for a whistle, maybe you can invert the hitsounds of these moments
  3. In 00:00:887 - you have added a Clap, but in 00:10:029 - even though they are similar moments in music you have added the clap in 00:10:315 (2) -, have any reason for that?
  4. 00:11:458 (4) - same than 00:02:029 - /\
  5. Both these moments 00:10:315 (2,4) - are the only moments you haven't added the clap in the correct 2/4 and 4/4 white tick in the map, please do it more consistent
    The map itself looks very well polished, nothing to change

    Real's Normal

  6. 00:00:029 (1,2) - The only other moment you use this stack are in 00:27:744 (1,2,3) - and for me both looks In totally different situations, one is a 1/1 timing distance that looks confortable with this semi-stack and the other is in the start of the song that maybe will not feel so nice, of course this is just an opinion but this semi-stack with just one circle isn't good in my opinion 00:00:029 (1) -, maybe stacking in 00:02:601 (1) - can be more consistent, like no semi-stack in 1/2 timing distance, just in 1/1 in all the map, you may disagree
  7. 00:21:458 (2,3) - you can do a non-linear line in 00:21:887 (3) - as you have done in 00:19:601 (3) -, looks more consistent
  8. 00:29:744 (4) - This can be changed just for a circle, of course have a song extended until 00:30:029 - but as before you have ignored the guitar in 00:27:744 (1,2) -, maybe can be a good idea, and looks more confortable for play just a circle than a slider starting in a red tick and finishing in a big white, looks a bit strange (this is the only situation that have happen in all map) u cant change this cuz it wouldnt be 30 seconds then >.>
    good map

    Yuri's Hard

  9. 00:06:601 (5,1) - In the other transitions between a circle and a new combo slider (like 00:09:172 (8,1) - 00:13:744 (8,1) - 00:22:887 (7,1) - etc) you have increased a bit the distance, is a good choice for me but you haven'd done it in this moment, have any special reason?
    hm nothing more special to say, really solid map

    Princess

  10. 00:10:601 (1) - The New combo and the Finish are unecessary, like you have done in 00:01:458 (4) -
  11. Starting in 00:13:744 - and until 00:17:172 - all the new combos have a wrong place, you are using the red tick before the big white tick (the more important tick in the song), i recommend you change the new combos like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8403285
    fixed both
good luck!
sankyuu
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri

Tarrasky wrote:

Yuri's Hard
[*]00:06:601 (5,1) - In the other transitions between a circle and a new combo slider (like 00:09:172 (8,1) - 00:13:744 (8,1) - 00:22:887 (7,1) - etc) you have increased a bit the distance, is a good choice for me but you haven'd done it in this moment, have any special reason? nope. fixed, dumped the pentagon
hm nothing more special to say, really solid map
Thanks!

noot
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TitleUnicode:君色スマイル
Artist:Tomoaki Maeno, Natsuki Hanae, Kosuke Toriumi
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polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
polka
[General:]
  • Background is past the maximum dimensions.
[Easy:]
  • Turn on the countdown to be consistent.
[Normal:]
  • You're missing combo colours.
    00:21:887 (3,4,5,1) - Square is a little warped for me. Maybe move (1) up a bit?
    00:27:744 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this stacking at all. It's hard to read and doesn't really fit as well as sliders do.
    I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did.
[Hard:]
  • This difficulty is missing tags.
    I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did. Otherwise, 00:29:744 (3) - is better as a circle imo.
[Zero Effort Map no Hime:]
  • I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did.
    00:02:887 (2,3,4) - Switch when two and three are played to improve flow from 00:02:030 (5,1) - .
    00:04:315 (5,1) - Swtich for improved flow.
    00:06:315 (2,3) - Ur not pishi stop it. space these more to differ from your triplet. This doesn't play very well at all and isn't a necessary pattern.
    00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - More spacing between one and the triangle so it's readable.
    00:18:315 (4,2) - Stack?
    00:20:315 (7,1) - really? reeeaaaaly? Please just space it properly.
    00:26:887 (3,4) - I would remove this stack as it's the only stack in the whole song and nothing that sounded similar got one.
    00:29:744 (1) - Circle adds more emphasis on the final vocal.
[Afteword:]
  • You couldn't even be bothered to make more than one diff? >_> Jesus christ.
Last edited by polka , edited 1 time in total.
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]
  • Background is past the maximum dimensions. fixed
[Zero Effort Map no Hime:]
  • I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did. fuck spinners >:(
    00:02:887 (2,3,4) - Switch when two and three are played to improve flow from 00:02:030 (5,1) - . but its a 1/1 gap >.> if it was 1/2 i'd agree
    00:04:315 (5,1) - Swtich for improved flow. wot i think that would be more uncomfortable.. beside this takes emphasis off of 00:04:172 - cuz that one doesnt need emphasis
    00:06:315 (2,3) - Ur not pishi stop it. space these more to differ from your triplet. This doesn't play very well at all and isn't a necessary pattern. i think it plays fine, the sudden slow down in cursor movement represents how the vocals drop in intensity here
    00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - More spacing between one and the triangle so it's readable. its distance snapped here, and i use similar spacing in other places, plus this rhythm should be expected by now from the song
    00:18:315 (4,2) - Stack?
    00:20:315 (7,1) - really? reeeaaaally? Please just space it properly. it is spaced properly. 7 is the climax of the instrument so 1 is small spacing after it..
    00:26:887 (3,4) - I would remove this stack as it's the only stack in the whole song and nothing that sounded similar got one. fixed
    00:29:744 (1) - Circle adds more emphasis on the final vocal. circle makes it unrankable looool
[Afteword:]
  • You couldn't even be bothered to make more than one diff? >_> Jesus christ. coming from the guy with like 5 ranked 2 star maps plz
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
this song is

TRASH

[Princess]
- 00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing please the 1 is so far away
- 00:20:029 (5,6,7,1) - is this supposed to be increasing in spacing cuz if not it looks weird

[Yahuri's Hard]
- 00:20:172 - this seems like a triple worth mapping cuz snare is on it and it was mapping for most of the map already// 00:22:458 - 00:23:601 -

[Real's Normal]
- 00:00:315 (2) - nc cuz the song actually starts here?

are you serious what even is there to say about these maps

[Armin's Easy]
- 00:08:601 (3,4) - i'd ctrl+g this to get the snare clickable and since the head doesn't have much on it
- 00:17:744 (3) - maybe delete this for emphasis on the previous and next note (and for a break somewhere?)

nao stop mapping 30 second maps i can't find anything meaningful to say for these
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
polka

Naotoshi wrote:

coming from the guy with like 5 ranked 2 star maps plz
AT LEAST I BOTHER TO MAP MORE THAN ONE DIFFICULTY.
_Meep_
1,707 posts
Joined April 2014
_Meep_
just
staph
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
00:05:887 (5,1,2,3) - I'm not too sure what to make of this pattern. 1,2,3 use the same spacing as 00:05:887 (5,1) despite being a different snap and it throws you off at first when transitioning (tho it's also acceptable the way it is because reasons). I do think the low spacing for 1/2 beats is kinda meh

also remember to revert back the NC patterning as discussed on discord ;)
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Realazy

Tarrasky wrote:

sup, some tips



  • Real's Normal
  1. 00:00:029 (1,2) - The only other moment you use this stack are in 00:27:744 (1,2,3) - and for me both looks In totally different situations, one is a 1/1 timing distance that looks confortable with this semi-stack and the other is in the start of the song that maybe will not feel so nice, of course this is just an opinion but this semi-stack with just one circle isn't good in my opinion 00:00:029 (1) -, maybe stacking in 00:02:601 (1) - can be more consistent, like no semi-stack in 1/2 timing distance, just in 1/1 in all the map, you may disagree this does make sense, but both stacks are used where there are little to no instruments, so i guess it kinda fits imo
  2. 00:21:458 (2,3) - you can do a non-linear line in 00:21:887 (3) - as you have done in 00:19:601 (3) -, looks more consistent changed some patterning here
  3. 00:29:744 (4) - This can be changed just for a circle, of course have a song extended until 00:30:029 - but as before you have ignored the guitar in 00:27:744 (1,2) -, maybe can be a good idea, and looks more confortable for play just a circle than a slider starting in a red tick and finishing in a big white, looks a bit strange (this is the only situation that have happen in all map) yeah as nao said i can't do this, need to have 30s drain time
    good map

PolkaMocha wrote:

[Normal:]
  • You're missing combo colours. oops
    00:21:887 (3,4,5,1) - Square is a little warped for me. Maybe move (1) up a bit? yep i remade that square
    00:27:744 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this stacking at all. It's hard to read and doesn't really fit as well as sliders do. ehh id really like to keep the stack here, i think it emphasizes the vocals quite well though if more people disagree on it i can change it
    I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did. i don't think a spinner really fits here at all tbh
@mir agree, done

https://real.s-ul.eu/7zr1Aa1m.osu boop
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri

PolkaMocha wrote:

[Hard:]
  • This difficulty is missing tags. fixed
    I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did. Otherwise, 00:29:744 (3) - is better as a circle imo. what nao said, also can't do circle because of minimum drain time

Mir wrote:

this song is
TRASH
i think u mean this song

[Yahuri's Hard]
- 00:20:172 - this seems like a triple worth mapping cuz snare is on it and it was mapping for most of the map already// 00:22:458 - 00:23:601 - hmmmm i skip quite a lot of snare that doesn't happen on white ticks, mapping all the snare would make my diff pretty dense. might change my mind depending on future mods tho
thanks, but no changes

apparently i sent u the wrong code earlier idk fixed again from other post
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Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori
lets see..

@kisses i redid some of my nc'ing to make it clear when the snapping changes from 1/2 to 1/1 - this is then introduced by the pattern you brought up, so that issue is resolved hopefully.

updated other diffs
A r M i N
1,298 posts
Joined October 2014
A r M i N
fixed sth
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A r M i N
1,298 posts
Joined October 2014
A r M i N
man btw I'm not gay pls change that BG to something with clothes on plsss
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori
no this bg is good

edit: updated
Ohwow
1,193 posts
Joined July 2013
Ohwow
From ur Q part 2

[Princess]
  1. Spacing inconsistencies in this map can throw off a lot of players (it's only a 3.6* map). You can try to NC stuff to make things easier to read, but sometimes it forces NCs on places that doesn't match the music, like you did at 00:20:601 (1) - when the NC should be on the next note.
  2. 00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. Seeing how 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - is part of the same pattern as 00:13:744 (1,2,3,4) - & 00:14:887 (1,2,3,4) - but the vocals are completely different on 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - , so i think the pattern should differ there.
  4. 00:18:029 (2,3,4,5,1) - hard to play for a 3.6*
As far as map spread goes, Easy diff should have lower star rating.
Other than that, other diffs looks fine

Hope this helps xD

Ar 8.1 lul
Net0
1,238 posts
Joined October 2014
Net0
M4M
[General]
  1. No metadata links, had to confirm it myself:
    http://oneroom-anime.com/products_cat/disc_roommate/
    So you have the Romanized artist but the original song features their names in JP, so you might wanna fix that:
    葦原巧（CV：前野智昭） 仁科葵（CV：花江夏樹） 宮坂真也（CV：鳥海浩輔)
    The Romanized title is currently “Kimi Iro Smile” I’m pretty sure you need to double check that since I’m not familiar with the rule about mixing Romanized words with foreign languages since at first glance the title rominized would be “Sumairu”
  2. You should the Japanese name of the show , ルームメイト , in the tags since you’re using “RoomMate” as the source.
  3. Would be great that the map density went along with the song more often, especially in terms of taking advantages of the 1/1 pauses it contains on vocal to help new players out, such as 00:17:458 - ~ 00:18:029 - /00:04:029 - ~ 00:04:601 - . If the spread is currently good, this definitely can improve that specially if applied in the easy and normal diffs.

[ A r M i N's Easy]
  1. The finish here 00:04:029 – sounds really off and so it goes with the following; 00:06:029 (3) - / 00:09:172 (4) -/ 00:10:601 (3) –
    And a lot of important transition sounds were not finished hitsounded like this one 00:27:744 (1) -
  2. Shouldn’t it be a clap here 00:08:887 – instead of the whistle? You’re clapping every second and third white ticks and switches here when song is pretty much the same.
[Real’s Normal]
  1. It seems hitsounding of this diff is copied and it’s the same of easy, so you can check what was mentioned there.
  2. I don’t get the reason behind this repeat here 00:26:601 (3) - , the blue tick there doesn’t have anything that worthy to emphasize to put a repeat, it’s not even hitsouded for any rhythm purposes so this is really off compared to the diff overall. At least imo, maybe you have some reason, but it’s not clear enough to me, sorry.

[Yuri’s Hard]
  1. If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
  2. Making the same pattern and rhythm 00:18:029 (4,5,6,7,1) - cover instrumentals only section 00:18:029 (4,5) – and vocal+instrumentals 00:18:314 (6,7,1) – seems to make the pattern loose the representation it could have. My suggestion is that you keep the circle to vocals there and change this 00:18:029 (4,5) – into a slider.

[ Princess ]
  1. If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
  2. Finish spam is good for emphasis, but if your finishes all sound the same 00:08:744 (4,1,2,1) – the transition one 00:09:458 (1) – has some emphasis lost. Imo that finish hitsound patterning works a ton better if you use two different samples of cymbal crash.
  3. That spacing tho 00:19:601 (4,5,6,7,1) - , didn’t know you liked to map hard to read patterns.
    So far most of the 1/2 were covered with decent amount of spacing 00:02:030 (5,1) -/00:03:172 (4,1) -/00:04:315 (5,1,2) –/00:07:744 (2,1) -/00:08:744 (4,1) -/00:10:315 (3,4) -/00:11:458 (6,1) -/00:12:315 (4,1) -/00:13:744 (1,2) -/00:14:601 (4,1) -/00:15:744 (4,1,2) -
    Exception is this slow down section 00:05:887 (5,1,2,3,4) – that works just fine. However in this case 00:20:315 (7,1,2) – you already are in the slow down section once again and spacing were kept the same or you can even say that it has increased at some points 00:19:029 (2,3,4) -, and you have 3 consecutive 1/4 00:19:601 (4,5,6) – to break it here afterwards 00:20:315 (7,1) -. Consider re-working this a bit

Mapset looks fine mostly. I hate the song but well, musical taste :3 . I'll to get to the other map in the weekend. GL o/
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Realazy

Net0 wrote:

[Real’s Normal]
  1. It seems hitsounding of this diff is copied and it’s the same of easy, so you can check what was mentioned there. nao did the hitsounding so i'll leave that to him
  2. I don’t get the reason behind this repeat here 00:26:601 (3) - , the blue tick there doesn’t have anything that worthy to emphasize to put a repeat, it’s not even hitsouded for any rhythm purposes so this is really off compared to the diff overall. At least imo, maybe you have some reason, but it’s not clear enough to me, sorry. so it's not hitsounded because nao didn't map it in his top diff, but there's a really audible sound on the blue tick which sounds similar to the one on the white tick except that it's more emphasized by the snare
thanks for looking!
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
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Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Ohwow wrote:

From ur Q part 2

[Princess]
  1. Spacing inconsistencies in this map can throw off a lot of players (it's only a 3.6* map). You can try to NC stuff to make things easier to read, but sometimes it forces NCs on places that doesn't match the music, like you did at 00:20:601 (1) - when the NC should be on the next note. i nc'd whenever it switched from 1/2 to 1/1 snapping though lol, that way it matches the song since the map is mapped on the song. and it isn't a spacing inconsistency if it's on purpose and fits the song anyway. also using the sr as a judgement in a map is kinda dumb unless it's strictly for spread purposes since the map define the SR, not the other way around.
  2. 00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. Seeing how 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - is part of the same pattern as 00:13:744 (1,2,3,4) - & 00:14:887 (1,2,3,4) - but the vocals are completely different on 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - , so i think the pattern should differ there. yes, the vocals are different, and if i wasn't spamming triangle patterns everywhere i would change this but, it's still part of the same vocal phrase and the underlying instruments are the same, and the triangle thing is central to all of the patterns in the map, so changing it here would be against that theme.
  4. 00:18:029 (2,3,4,5,1) - hard to play for a 3.6* if i remove everything that's hard to play fr 3.6 star then it won't be 3.6 stars loool
As far as map spread goes, Easy diff should have lower star rating.
Other than that, other diffs looks fine

Hope this helps xD

Ar 8.1 lul =(

Net0 wrote:

M4M
[General]
  1. No metadata links, had to confirm it myself:
    http://oneroom-anime.com/products_cat/disc_roommate/
    So you have the Romanized artist but the original song features their names in JP, so you might wanna fix that:
    葦原巧（CV：前野智昭） 仁科葵（CV：花江夏樹） 宮坂真也（CV：鳥海浩輔) yeah, the issue is that then the title field runs out of space so i just kept their actual names; i saw kwan suggest this on some random other map (i think gabriel drop kick?) where there was too much stuff so to drop the character names.
    The Romanized title is currently “Kimi Iro Smile” I’m pretty sure you need to double check that since I’m not familiar with the rule about mixing Romanized words with foreign languages since at first glance the title rominized would be “Sumairu” will check
  2. You should the Japanese name of the show , ルームメイト , in the tags since you’re using “RoomMate” as the source. changed source and will add to tags
  3. Would be great that the map density went along with the song more often, especially in terms of taking advantages of the 1/1 pauses it contains on vocal to help new players out, such as 00:17:458 - ~ 00:18:029 - /00:04:029 - ~ 00:04:601 - . If the spread is currently good, this definitely can improve that specially if applied in the easy and normal diffs. well, for top diff i don't think that amount of contrast is needed since i can do cool stuff with spacing and patterning other than only rhythm based stuff.

[ A r M i N's Easy]
  1. The finish here 00:04:029 – sounds really off and so it goes with the following; 00:06:029 (3) - / 00:09:172 (4) -/ 00:10:601 (3) –
    And a lot of important transition sounds were not finished hitsounded like this one 00:27:744 (1) -
  2. Shouldn’t it be a clap here 00:08:887 – instead of the whistle? You’re clapping every second and third white ticks and switches here when song is pretty much the same.
[Real’s Normal]
  1. It seems hitsounding of this diff is copied and it’s the same of easy, so you can check what was mentioned there.
  2. I don’t get the reason behind this repeat here 00:26:601 (3) - , the blue tick there doesn’t have anything that worthy to emphasize to put a repeat, it’s not even hitsouded for any rhythm purposes so this is really off compared to the diff overall. At least imo, maybe you have some reason, but it’s not clear enough to me, sorry.

[Yuri’s Hard]
  1. If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
  2. Making the same pattern and rhythm 00:18:029 (4,5,6,7,1) - cover instrumentals only section 00:18:029 (4,5) – and vocal+instrumentals 00:18:314 (6,7,1) – seems to make the pattern loose the representation it could have. My suggestion is that you keep the circle to vocals there and change this 00:18:029 (4,5) – into a slider.

[ Princess ]
  1. If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
  2. Finish spam is good for emphasis, but if your finishes all sound the same 00:08:744 (4,1,2,1) – the transition one 00:09:458 (1) – has some emphasis lost. Imo that finish hitsound patterning works a ton better if you use two different samples of cymbal crash.
  3. That spacing tho 00:19:601 (4,5,6,7,1) - , didn’t know you liked to map hard to read patterns.
    So far most of the 1/2 were covered with decent amount of spacing 00:02:030 (5,1) -/00:03:172 (4,1) -/00:04:315 (5,1,2) –/00:07:744 (2,1) -/00:08:744 (4,1) -/00:10:315 (3,4) -/00:11:458 (6,1) -/00:12:315 (4,1) -/00:13:744 (1,2) -/00:14:601 (4,1) -/00:15:744 (4,1,2) -
    Exception is this slow down section 00:05:887 (5,1,2,3,4) – that works just fine. However in this case 00:20:315 (7,1,2) – you already are in the slow down section once again and spacing were kept the same or you can even say that it has increased at some points 00:19:029 (2,3,4) -, and you have 3 consecutive 1/4 00:19:601 (4,5,6) – to break it here afterwards 00:20:315 (7,1) -. Consider re-working this a bit reworked a lot so now all wide angle +nc = 1/2 gap lol

Mapset looks fine mostly. I hate the song but well, musical taste :3 . I'll to get to the other map in the weekend. GL o/
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri

Net0 wrote:

[Yuri’s Hard]
  1. If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) - done
  2. Making the same pattern and rhythm 00:18:029 (4,5,6,7,1) - cover instrumentals only section 00:18:029 (4,5) – and vocal+instrumentals 00:18:314 (6,7,1) – seems to make the pattern loose the representation it could have. My suggestion is that you keep the circle to vocals there and change this 00:18:029 (4,5) – into a slider. makes sense, appleid
fix my metadata pls
doot
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squirrelpascals
982 posts
Joined March 2015
squirrelpascals
Hi second mod

p rinc ess
• 00:17:172 (5) - nc should be moved here to stay consistent with 00:14:887 (1,1) - (you use the nc right after the 1/4 jumps)

Hard
• 00:05:458 (2,3) - I dont like how circle 3 is placed next to slider 2, it doesn't look like it flows visually well. Moving it up so that it's in line with either part of slider 2 (the tail or the rest of the slider body) would look nicer

Normal and Easy, and mp3 look okay, all very polished. (I might be flammed for asking but would the bg be considered "safe?" If something like haitai was considered an edge case I wouldn't know about this, but the haitai case was also just fucking dumb)

Good luck! :D
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri

squirrelpascals wrote:

Hard
• 00:05:458 (2,3) - I dont like how circle 3 is placed next to slider 2, it doesn't look like it flows visually well. Moving it up so that it's in line with either part of slider 2 (the tail or the rest of the slider body) would look nicer changed instead to put the middle of 3 on the bottom of 2 (so it matches the down/left flow of 1-2)
still fix my metadata

noot
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 18601
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi Iro Smile
TitleUnicode:君色スマイル
Artist:Tomoaki Maeno, Natsuki Hanae, Kosuke Toriumi
ArtistUnicode:Tomoaki Maeno, Natsuki Hanae, Kosuke Toriumi
Creator:Naotoshi
Version:Yuri's Hard
Source:Room Mate
Tags:realazy yahuri armin a_r_m_i_n harumachi clover male vocal
BeatmapID:1323372
BeatmapSetID:627027

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Background and Video events
0,0,"as.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

squirrelpascals wrote:

Hi second mod

p rinc ess
• 00:17:172 (5) - nc should be moved here to stay consistent with 00:14:887 (1,1) - (you use the nc right after the 1/4 jumps) ya but here its clear that 00:17:458 (1) - is the start of a new phrase adn i dont want a 1 circle nc

Hard
• 00:05:458 (2,3) - I dont like how circle 3 is placed next to slider 2, it doesn't look like it flows visually well. Moving it up so that it's in line with either part of slider 2 (the tail or the rest of the slider body) would look nicer

Normal and Easy, and mp3 look okay, all very polished. (I might be flammed for asking but would the bg be considered "safe?" If something like haitai was considered an edge case I wouldn't know about this, but the haitai case was also just fucking dumb) yolo

Good luck! :D
_Meep_
1,707 posts
Joined April 2014
_Meep_
squirrel
dont u dare
bubble dis
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
what a gay bg. tbh I wouldn't call it really safe. imo it isn't what we mean "all ages". better to change it.
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri
i watched the anime just now and i can confirm the background is a pretty darn accurate representation of the anime
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