Poppin'Party - Kira Kira datoka Yume datoka ~Sing Girls~ (TV · forum

[Crz]Makii

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[Crz]Makii 2017-06-10T17:58:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年10月8日 at 9:41:29

Artist: Poppin'Party
Title: Kira Kira datoka Yume datoka ~Sing Girls~ (TV Size)
Source: BanG Dream!
Tags: pata-mon pata mon bandori garupa バンドリ！girl band project Toyama Kasumi Hanazono Tae Ushigome Rimi Yamabuki Saaya Ichigaya Arisa Aimi Otsuka Sae Nishimoto Ohashi Ayaka Itou Ayasa 愛美大塚紗英牛込りみ山吹沙綾市ヶ谷有咲オリジナルサウンドトラック ed ending
BPM: 180
Filesize: 26296kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.59 stars, 122 notes)
Expert (5.68 stars, 389 notes)
Hard (3.1 stars, 238 notes)
Normal (1.98 stars, 162 notes)
Pata-Mon's Insane (4.45 stars, 350 notes)

Download: Poppin'Party - Kira Kira datoka Yume datoka ~Sing Girls~ (TV Size)
Download: Poppin'Party - Kira Kira datoka Yume datoka ~Sing Girls~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2

If you have downloaded this beatmap before 2017/10/8(y/m/d),please redl it cuz I add a new video!thanks~

Poppin'Party's PP
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Easy --- by me 100%
Normal --- by me 100%
Hard --- by me 100%
Insane --- by Pata-Mon 100%
Expert --- by me 100%
Hitsounds Done.
Metadata checked by IamKwaN
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2017/6/25 offset: 899 → -435 cuz pata-mon's Insane need a green line
2017/7/2 Pata-Mon's Insane has been added.
2017/7/3 Tags added.HS added.
2017/10/8 video added.
2017/10/8 Bubbled by Kencho
2017/10/27 Qualified by Garden

Metadata check

IamKwaN wrote:
好的，沒問題

Unicode Title: キラキラだとか夢だとか～Sing Girls～ (TV Size) 那些~好像不一樣
Romanised Title: Kira Kira datoka Yume datoka ~Sing Girls~ (TV Size) (Kirakira也行吧)
Unicode Artist: Poppin’Party (這個好像也不同)
Romanised Artist: Poppin'Party
Source: BanG Dream!

References:
http://bang-dream.com/cd/#anc1179
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8juUyEP_6PU

Last edited by [Crz]Makii 2017-10-28T01:25:30+00:00, edited 40 times in total.

09kami

829 posts

Joined August 2010

09kami 2017-06-18T09:36:32+00:00

09kami wrote:
[Expert]

00:54:898 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里的没有突然转折的连打音吧感觉很奇怪

00:55:732 - 00:56:065 - 这两个音不加上去吗

00:48:898 (1) - 这里我感觉漏了的音 00:49:398 - 应该是个1/2滑条

kiai摸不了看不懂JB跳

01:28:732 (1) - 结束段应该是在01:29:232 -

[normal]
就我个人感觉节奏密集度实际上应该算hard 虽然是normal的排列

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-06-25T08:47:40+00:00

09kami wrote:
09kami wrote:
[Expert]

00:54:898 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里的没有突然转折的连打音吧感觉很奇怪改了

00:55:732 - 00:56:065 - 这两个音不加上去吗不加这里做个停顿

00:48:898 (1) - 这里我感觉漏了的音 00:49:398 - 应该是个1/2滑条人声确实在红线但是这里我觉得跟住鼓好一些

kiai摸不了看不懂JB跳 hahaha

01:28:732 (1) - 结束段应该是在01:29:232 - 好

[normal]
就我个人感觉节奏密集度实际上应该算hard 虽然是normal的排列其实还好啦跟的1/2比较多 1/4我都拿别的东西给带过去了打起来没问题的

Thx

My Angel RangE

1,075 posts

Joined April 2015

My Angel RangE 2017-07-03T04:08:38+00:00

Hello owo m4m

Easy

00:20:565 (2,3,1) - Beginner playing confuse or i think 00:21:398 (1) this head Ds same error look
00:32:065 (1) - NC remove
00:34:232 (2) - flow strange ,
00:35:232 (3,1) - DS error , maybe reason 00:36:898 (2) this move head stick (?)
01:06:732 (1) - ok. I know you're mean, but easy NC emphasize do not recommend
01:17:398 (1) - ^ too.

Expert

00:05:232 (2) - basket of 00:04:732 (1) this body ?
00:16:232 (1,2,3) - be mixed up with repeatedly
00:20:065 (3) - this 00:19:398 (1) basket error or Ds error ?
00:32:898 (1,2,3) - flow strange
00:38:232 (1) - for basket to be close
01:01:565 (3) - basket?
01:09:898 (5) - ^ ?
01:16:898 (1,2,3) - Different from each other DS
01:28:732 (1) - all whistle and finish..? xd

owoo ??

good luck , well you say ' All will be best ;w; ' .. i not well eng best diff mod right?

Justysuwu

184 posts

Joined July 2016

Justysuwu 2017-07-03T21:13:07+00:00

Hi

Eazy

00:06:065 (1) - half beat earlier
01:28:564 (1) - instead this make 4 beat slider started there: 01:28:231
00:03:565 (1) - 1 beat slider and circle instead this slider
00:21:398 (1) - start this slider half beat earlier , get on 1/4 beat divisor and get this slider 1/4 beat longer (longer without arrow)

Hard

01:02:731 (2) - make it half beat shorter and end in same place
01:04:064 (2) - ^^

Normal

01:27:732 (4) - half beat earlier

Pata-Mon's Insane

01:27:398 (1,2) - make two bne beat slider instead this slider and circle(started on red lines)

Expert

i think nothing but hp can be higher (7 or8)

[lucky:1337]Good Luck[/lucky:1337]

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-07-04T02:52:53+00:00

算了直接摸图 gtmd考试(
m4m

[normal]
00:05:232 (1) - NC和前面不一致
00:10:232 (2) - 加个finish
00:20:732 (4,1) - 会不会太密了试试只跟人声？
00:31:398 (2,3,4,5) - 好吧更密了orz
确实感觉像hard

[hard]
00:32:231 - 这里clickable会比较好
00:34:898 - 这里的音被漏了？用前面00:32:898 (1,2,3) - 或后面00:36:898 (1,2,3) - 都会好些
00:45:398 (2) - ^

怕特萌的难度摸不出啥鸽了

[expert]
00:02:898 (3) - ctrl+g？都向右感觉强度突然减小太多
00:13:731 (6) - 我觉得它应该不是对称的
00:17:565 (1,2,3) - 太顺了 3感觉没强调
00:50:732 (3,4,5,6) - 近了
01:07:398 (4,5,1) - 不如把45和1分开搞事情（跑
01:13:232 (3) - ctrl+g
01:21:564 - vocal太强了放滑条尾有点违和

没了
坐等pp

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-07-04T03:57:10+00:00

My Angel RangE wrote:
Hello owo m4m

Easy

00:20:565 (2,3,1) - Beginner playing confuse or i think 00:21:398 (1) this head Ds same error look ok,changed it to similar as 00:31:565 (3,1) -
00:32:065 (1) - NC remove 00:21:398 (1) - same as it,I want to remind players it's a different snap
00:34:232 (2) - flow strange , just ok...keep at moment,more issue will fix.
00:35:232 (3,1) - DS error , maybe reason 00:36:898 (2) this move head stick (?)??it's 1.0x...
01:06:732 (1) - ok. I know you're mean, but easy NC emphasize do not recommend
01:17:398 (1) - ^ too.I used it 4 times in this diff so I think beginners will understand why I need to NC it ^^

Expert

00:05:232 (2) - basket of 00:04:732 (1) this body ?changed 00:04:732 (1) - shape.
00:16:232 (1,2,3) - be mixed up with repeatedly I met it in another ranked map and I think it fit in there so...
00:20:065 (3) - this 00:19:398 (1) basket error or Ds error ? fixed blanket.
00:32:898 (1,2,3) - flow strange just ok....
00:38:232 (1) - for basket to be close fixed
01:01:565 (3) - basket?
01:09:898 (5) - ^ ?yay
01:16:898 (1,2,3) - Different from each other DS it's ok,though eyes they are the same ds
01:28:732 (1) - all whistle and finish..? xd xd,I like it lol,more issues I will consider fix it.

owoo ??

good luck , well you say ' All will be best ;w; ' .. i not well eng best diff mod right?

MyAngelMeinter wrote:
Hi
Eazy
00:06:065 (1) - half beat earlier I want to show red line's rhythm
01:28:564 (1) - instead this make 4 beat slider started there: 01:28:231 just a circle in Easy diff I think it's ok,easier rhythm will be accpeted by more people
00:03:565 (1) - 1 beat slider and circle instead this slider it's hard ;w;
00:21:398 (1) - start this slider half beat earlier , get on 1/4 beat divisor and get this slider 1/4 beat longer (longer without arrow)I want to follow vocal here so...
Hard
01:02:731 (2) - make it half beat shorter and end in same place
01:04:064 (2) - ^^like them 01:19:564 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I prefer use 1/1+1/1+1/2 to follow some complex rhythm..yay I mean it can make this diff more easily to play.
Normal
01:27:732 (4) - half beat earlierI followed the drums
Pata-Mon's Insane
01:27:398 (1,2) - make two bne beat slider instead this slider and circle(started on red lines)
Expert
i think nothing but hp can be higher (7 or8)I will consider it.HP7 maybe hard for HR playes so...I need more testplay xD

[lucky:1337]Good Luck[/lucky:1337]

Ametrin wrote:
算了直接摸图 gtmd考试(
m4m

[normal]
00:05:232 (1) - NC和前面不一致是的，改了
00:10:232 (2) - 加个finish k[/color]
00:20:732 (4,1) - 会不会太密了试试只跟人声？
00:31:398 (2,3,4,5) - 好吧更密了orz
确实感觉像hard 我觉得还好啊...这样节奏都能跟上而且打起来也不难

[hard]
00:32:231 - 这里clickable会比较好 01:06:731 (1,2,3,1) - 类似于这个，如果变clickable就太难了 qwq
00:34:898 - 这里的音被漏了？用前面00:32:898 (1,2,3) - 或后面00:36:898 (1,2,3) - 都会好些
00:45:398 (2) - ^ 暂时先保留，那个鼓点太弱了所以我直接拿这个带过去了，看看有没有更多指出的，有我就改

怕特萌的难度摸不出啥鸽了

[expert]
00:02:898 (3) - ctrl+g？都向右感觉强度突然减小太多开头这样flow比较顺
00:13:731 (6) - 我觉得它应该不是对称的懒( 大概看着还行
00:17:565 (1,2,3) - 太顺了 3感觉没强调往下挪了点
00:50:732 (3,4,5,6) - 近了有理，改了
01:07:398 (4,5,1) - 不如把45和1分开搞事情（跑那太搞事了(
01:13:232 (3) - ctrl+g 其实差不多，我更喜欢全锐角
01:21:564 - vocal太强了放滑条尾有点违和好改了

没了
坐等pp

Thx all!

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-07-04T14:28:36+00:00

因为看到几个摸说normal节奏太复杂所以扫了一眼

00:20:732 (4,1) - 这里，你前后主要跟vocal，这样一下确实太复杂，建议：https://puu.sh/wBprL/7074a58895.png
00:31:398 (2,3) - 把大白线（主要你还加了finish）放到了折返点上却跟了一些无所谓的节奏，建议：https://puu.sh/wBprK/15d503b58c.png
00:40:898 (1) - 这里用这节奏挺违和的，而且音效也违和．建议复制00:39:565 (1,2,3) - 的节奏
00:42:232 (2) - 这个把折返去了．这是很明显的俩音，而00:42:564 - 这里没有
00:42:732 (3,4) - 把4删了，把3换成折返，00:43:232 - 这里根本没音
00:46:232 (1) - 这滑条形状在低难度大概不行
00:47:232 (2) - 谜之overmap，后面更重要的00:47:731 - 却空着．把00:47:565 (2) - 换成1/2滑条吧
00:48:065 (1,2,3) - 这里，00:48:231 - 无音，在normal里用这样的节奏会更好：https://puu.sh/wBpME/8d7e722f73.png
00:48:898 (1) - 没有强行跟鼓的必要，直接用00:50:232 (3,4,5) - 一样的节奏就行
01:06:231 - 这里重音建议拆开来clickable，可以放一个1/2滑条，因为01:06:398 - 这里也很清楚
01:06:732 (1,2) - 也是建议用这个节奏：https://puu.sh/wBpME/8d7e722f73.png
01:17:398 (2,3) - 同上
01:18:731 - 01:21:398 - 01:24:064 - 加一下会比较自然有note可能会好些（这个看你）
01:27:398 - 这里开始是长vocal，建议用滑条头跟，所以这里节奏建议：https://puu.sh/wBpTj/32f9e93727.png

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2017-07-04T15:49:32+00:00

摸四模。我只有一张pending图，人懒就不发链接了。感觉太长太多的话水水就好了

Ex

00:08:732 (8) - 推荐把这个删去，合曲一些
00:20:232 (4,5,1) - 这里不是很懂为何要奖间距，建议换一个间距比较大的排列
00:54:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这个串能跟上一个滑条近一些就好了，2左右的间距差不多了。
01:02:564 (2) - 高度推荐3/4滑条，不仅更切合鼓点而且还好玩
01:07:398 (4,5,1) - 感觉外观上可以搞的平滑一些
01:24:898 (1,2,3) - 感觉这地方减间距也没什么道理啊，可以把2拉远一些

Pata-mon

00:56:564 (1) - 建议ctrl+g

Hard

00:03:232 (3,4) - 推荐滑条带过，因为4的位置没音，现在这个感觉圈有点多有点小卡手
00:05:565 (2) - 试试竖着向下方向的滑条？
00:15:731 (5,6,7) - 个人口味，可以替换成折返滑条+3连点的节奏
00:25:898 (4,5) - 试试ctrl+g？
00:34:231 (1,2) - 试着重新给你摆了一个。现在这个感觉既不合vocal也不合鼓点，有股违和感。00:44:898 (1,2) - 问题类似.

Normal

00:20:732 (4,1) - 我个人倾向N难度不要叠折返滑条，挺干扰读图的

就这样吧。加油加油~

edit: 没感觉N难度很复杂a，不是最低难度就还ok吧。跟这差不多复杂的N难度也不是没有

DeRandom Otaku

2,142 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-07-04T16:02:32+00:00

[Extra]

00:05:398 (3) - Unnecessary finish on tail
00:15:398 (6) - Try bringing this up, It overlaps a lot with the hit error
00:20:231 (4,5,1) - Why is your spacing so low here compared to the rest? for example your spacing for the pattern before it 00:19:398 (1,2,3) - is twice as much even tho the intensity is same
00:30:565 (2) - 00:31:232 (5) - Both of these sliders have the similar problem and its that they both have a stronger vocal at their end compared to what they have on their heads thats why the emphasis is really low here. You should try to make 00:30:731 - 00:31:398 - These beats click able for sure

[Insane]

01:28:731 (1) - Diff is pretty clean except the thing here, the sound this slider follows acctually ends at 01:29:231 - so yeah it should be extended till that point, Also if your refer to other difficulties , they all end at 01:29:231 - too

[Hard]

00:03:398 (4,1) - I don't think stacking these is a good idea because 00:03:564 - This sound is really loud here so it should be spaced. Having some movement for it will emphasize it properly
Same goes for 00:06:065 (1) -
00:41:898 (3,4) - If you compare these two slider , you can clearly tell that 00:42:231 (4) - This one is really under emphasized because 00:41:898 (3) - this one is supporting casual sounds of the song but 00:42:231 (4) - this one supports two loud cymbals with intenser vocals than the previous slider, So yea to emphasize the section properly u may change 00:42:231 (4) - to two circles, its a quick fix
00:44:898 (1,2) - This rhythm doesnt fit much with the vocals, the rhythm u used at 00:43:564 (1,2,3) - works like a charm, You should do the same for 00:44:898 (1,2) -
00:58:064 (4,1) - 00:59:398 (4,1) - 01:00:731 (4,1) - 01:08:731 (4,1) - 01:10:064 (4,1) - 01:11:398 (4,1) - The fact that you stacked all these is just bad because the notes that are actually stacked are supporting stronger sounds..

The top difficulty lacks quality in structure and emphasis for sure. Rest looks ok
gl

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-07-04T16:31:51+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
因为看到几个摸说normal节奏太复杂所以扫了一眼

00:20:732 (4,1) - 这里，你前后主要跟vocal，这样一下确实太复杂，建议：https://puu.sh/wBprL/7074a58895.png 好
00:31:398 (2,3) - 把大白线（主要你还加了finish）放到了折返点上却跟了一些无所谓的节奏，建议：https://puu.sh/wBprK/15d503b58c.png 好
00:40:898 (1) - 这里用这节奏挺违和的，而且音效也违和．建议复制00:39:565 (1,2,3) - 的节奏改了音效，节奏我觉得还可以啊...
00:42:232 (2) - 这个把折返去了．这是很明显的俩音，而00:42:564 - 这里没有
00:42:732 (3,4) - 把4删了，把3换成折返，00:43:232 - 这里根本没音都改了
00:46:232 (1) - 这滑条形状在低难度大概不行反震某些图Easy比这个几把多了都能过去...我觉得这个能读出来的
00:47:232 (2) - 谜之overmap，后面更重要的00:47:731 - 却空着．把00:47:565 (2) - 换成1/2滑条吧前面也有个音，我叠起来了
00:48:065 (1,2,3) - 这里，00:48:231 - 无音，在normal里用这样的节奏会更好：https://puu.sh/wBpME/8d7e722f73.png 好
00:48:898 (1) - 没有强行跟鼓的必要，直接用00:50:232 (3,4,5) - 一样的节奏就行我觉得这里跟鼓好一点...比较明显
01:06:231 - 这里重音建议拆开来clickable，可以放一个1/2滑条，因为01:06:398 - 这里也很清楚好
01:06:732 (1,2) - 也是建议用这个节奏：https://puu.sh/wBpME/8d7e722f73.png 我本意是拿一个长滑条跟vocal的...感觉还行
01:17:398 (2,3) - 同上 ^
01:18:731 - 01:21:398 - 01:24:064 - 加一下会比较自然有note可能会好些（这个看你）加了太密了，还是算了
01:27:398 - 这里开始是长vocal，建议用滑条头跟，所以这里节奏建议：https://puu.sh/wBpTj/32f9e93727.png

01:27:898 - 人声在这里停的...有点蛋疼所以还是不改了，后面1/2滑条和前面一样强调两个重音

Adol Christin wrote:
摸四模。我只有一张pending图，人懒就不发链接了。感觉太长太多的话水水就好了

Ex
00:08:732 (8) - 推荐把这个删去，合曲一些这里有个乐器的起音，还是要跟一下的
00:20:232 (4,5,1) - 这里不是很懂为何要奖间距，建议换一个间距比较大的排列为了顺flow......有点没法改
00:54:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这个串能跟上一个滑条近一些就好了，2左右的间距差不多了。挪了一下
01:02:564 (2) - 高度推荐3/4滑条，不仅更切合鼓点而且还好玩其实这段主要是1/2跟爆，塞3/4反而有点奇怪了....
01:07:398 (4,5,1) - 感觉外观上可以搞的平滑一些懒
01:24:898 (1,2,3) - 感觉这地方减间距也没什么道理啊，可以把2拉远一些做了微调

Hard
00:03:232 (3,4) - 推荐滑条带过，因为4的位置没音，现在这个感觉圈有点多有点小卡手好的
00:05:565 (2) - 试试竖着向下方向的滑条？要跟ds..不好处理
00:15:731 (5,6,7) - 个人口味，可以替换成折返滑条+3连点的节奏这里还是算了，我图里所有三连点全是间距连点，放不开...
00:25:898 (4,5) - 试试ctrl+g？放跳我要被弄死的
00:34:231 (1,2) - 试着重新给你摆了一个。现在这个感觉既不合vocal也不合鼓点，有股违和感。00:44:898 (1,2) - 问题类似. 行，也有人提过这个问题，我摆了一个stack跟鼓

Normal
00:20:732 (4,1) - 我个人倾向N难度不要叠折返滑条，挺干扰读图的好换了排列

就这样吧。加油加油~

edit: 没感觉N难度很复杂a，不是最低难度就还ok吧。跟这差不多复杂的N难度也不是没有

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Extra]
00:05:398 (3) - Unnecessary finish on tail 00:16:232 (1,4) - 00:17:565 (1,3) - like these,I put same hs ;w;
00:15:398 (6) - Try bringing this up, It overlaps a lot with the hit error I just followed vocal here...I think it's OK and in testplay no hit error there
00:20:231 (4,5,1) - Why is your spacing so low here compared to the rest? for example your spacing for the pattern before it 00:19:398 (1,2,3) - is twice as much even tho the intensity is same yes,my bad.fixed.
00:30:565 (2) - 00:31:232 (5) - Both of these sliders have the similar problem and its that they both have a stronger vocal at their end compared to what they have on their heads thats why the emphasis is really low here. You should try to make 00:30:731 - 00:31:398 - These beats click able for sure 00:30:564 - 00:30:898 - 00:31:064 - 00:31:231 - there are 4 clear drums,compared with following vocal I think drums are stronger.btw I used sliders to link vocal and drum to make them more soft.
[Hard]
00:03:398 (4,1) - I don't think stacking these is a good idea because 00:03:564 - This sound is really loud here so it should be spaced. Having some movement for it will emphasize it properly
Same goes for 00:06:065 (1) - yes,fixed.
00:41:898 (3,4) - If you compare these two slider , you can clearly tell that 00:42:231 (4) - This one is really under emphasized because 00:41:898 (3) - this one is supporting casual sounds of the song but 00:42:231 (4) - this one supports two loud cymbals with intenser vocals than the previous slider, So yea to emphasize the section properly u may change 00:42:231 (4) - to two circles, its a quick fix Considering the Hard diff I think your suggestion is great.fixed!
00:44:898 (1,2) - This rhythm doesnt fit much with the vocals, the rhythm u used at 00:43:564 (1,2,3) - works like a charm, You should do the same for 00:44:898 (1,2) - changed in my way
00:58:064 (4,1) - 00:59:398 (4,1) - 01:00:731 (4,1) - 01:08:731 (4,1) - 01:10:064 (4,1) - 01:11:398 (4,1) - The fact that you stacked all these is just bad because the notes that are actually stacked are supporting stronger sounds..well like 00:58:231 (1) - is the object I want to show more clearly..with a strong hs I think they can show their music greatly.
The top difficulty lacks quality in structure and emphasis for sure. Rest looks ok
gl

thx all!

Celektus

730 posts

Joined April 2014

Celektus 2017-07-05T15:38:59+00:00

[Overall]

The new standard for BG size is 1920x1080px so you might wanna get some more high res pictures or up scale your current ones.
You also might wanna look for a more high quality 192kb/s mp3... your is fine tbh, but why not look for a better one.

[Normal]

I think you could improve this S slider in one or 2 ways 00:34:232 (3) - First off you don't really need a red anchor for this shape and it kinda stands out in a bad way and 2nd off you blanket with 2 could be improved. I would suggest to copy paste the slider and then adjust it slightly to still be on the same point. The result should look more like this.

You might wanna check some other blankets in your map as sometime the distance from the bodies from you are further away than the head or end of the slider from the approach circle.

[Hard]

So your diff has one major possible issue which is how you handle stacks, for players of this level reading different kind of rhythms as stacks can be hard to read. At this level players are supposed get introduced to spacing concept by making different rhythms visually consistent.
osu! Ranking Criteria wrote:
1. Avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing. Spacing variation through jumps on points of emphasis are encouraged, but only if these jumps are recognizably different from 1/1 gaps.
this guideline specifically only mentions 1/1 and 1/2 and you seem to switch between stacked and spaced 1/2 very consistently, but maybe keep this in mind when making future maps as differentiating 1/2 and 1/4 in your diff might be harder to read for players then you intended.
I think you could ctrl + G this rhythm and re arrange the notes to fit again 00:13:732 (2,3) - as right now the Vocal and arguably strong Snare hit here 00:14:064 - could be more emphasized through actively clicking. This specific case repeat sometimes so either do it always or never.
There are some more rhythms wich could be ctrl + G'd or changed. I'm gonna make a few different example.
1. 00:15:731 (5,6) -
2. I would split this into a circle and 1 1/2 slider 00:30:564 (2) - to still map the Vocal on the red tick inside the slider.
3. I would change this rhythm 01:00:898 (1,2,3,4) - to something more like this
there are some other places in the kiai where your rhythm choices could be improved to emphasize the Vocals more, but I think pointing out anymore would just end up be annoying. In case my suggestions aren't good enough think of some other ways to improve the rhythm maybe.

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

You seems to use imo a bit too many NCs consider making your combos bigger in some sections.
there might be some clap sounds missing in your diff. Mostly on drum fills like this 00:48:564 (2,3,4,5) - check if you might wanna add some soft-hitclaps... well I noticed that you might use normal-hitnormals as Snare hitsounds though this kinda conflicts with how the host of the map seems to use claps for them. I would highly suggest to change your Hitsounding as the host litrally added a Snare similar hitsound for claps and having different hitsounding for different diffs isn't really good.
enable stacking in the view options cause this blanket isn't right in game 00:06:064 (1,3,4,5) - cause notes don't perfectly stack in-game
this jump I think is a bit big 00:10:898 (1,2,3,4) - compared to these 00:09:231 (2,1) - the 1/4 stack also itself is a bit more straining to play so lowering spacing into it would also be better because of that. This jump tho is fine 00:11:231 (4,1) - this repeats in some other places possibly like here 00:26:898 (4,5,6,7) - so look through some jumps into 1/4 and maybe reduce them slightly.
I would also make this one smaller 00:11:398 (1,1) - as the next section is already less intense. It should at least be smaller than this one 00:13:731 (4,5) - *comparison*
why is this stacked 00:15:231 (4,1) - but this very similar one right after isn't? 00:15:731 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are also the 2nd 1/2 in the entire map which would be better if the whole section was made around 1/2 being stacked, but like this it's more random than good I think. Consider making stacks in the section more consistent by either not using them or using them with some sort of idea behind them.
this jump 00:16:731 (1,2) - is bigger than this one 00:18:064 (1,2) - make them more similar. I think ctrl + Ging 00:18:064 (1) - would some what create a similar movement then before, so I would consider doing that and changing the jump pattern between the 2 patterns
I think a 1/1 Slide would fit here more 00:24:731 (5,1) -
I think this jump could stand out more because of the tom sound on it 00:26:898 (4) - maybe more spacing or a different overlap would fit, though I can understand if that's too inconsistent maybe.
I think a movement like this might fit the drum sounds here 00:37:564 (4,5) - just an idea though. If you apply it make sure spacing into and out of it is still correct.
the way you use new combos here is a bit confusing 00:52:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
I think this jump into 1/4 is a bit too big 00:53:898 (2,1) - consider making it smaller
the last sound last for a bit longer here 01:28:731 (1) - the host also used a 3 1/2 gap long slider on the highest diff

[Expert]

I've said a lot about stacks in this mod so now more of a suggestion to make some more hard to read stacks like this 00:16:232 (1,2,3) - later on more expectable. Adding a 1/2 circle for the guitar here 00:16:232 (1,2,3) - underneath the 1/4 stack seems reasonable for a Expert diff and would introduce more interesting stacking ideas as early as possible... if this is too hard to read I'd argue that it is literally at the start of the map and make the pattern mentioned before 00:16:232 (1,2,3) - more excepted. I also think it's not too inconsistent, but you choice tbh

that would ofc make this jump a bit big 00:00:898 (1) - so keep that in mind, seems easy to adjust tho
I think that jump is a bit too big for a sound that isn't really that strong 00:01:399 (2) - changing your rhythm to make the Snare on this slider end clicked 00:01:231 - and jump into it would be way more intuitive. I would consider making 00:00:898 (1) - into a extended slider and adding a circle on the Snare like this. A extended slider wouldn't allow for a big jump though so a 1/2 slider might be better depends how much you want to emphasize the hold sound on 1.

overall you can actually make a lot of 1/1 slider like this one 00:02:065 (1) - into extended ones as you have sounds that are strong enough to be clicked on slider ends a lot. If that's too much work or "too dense" consider other solutions
I think the jump into this should be smaller 00:06:565 (2,3) - than this one 00:07:231 (7,1) - especially since 1/4 can be considered more straining to jump to. You could apply the same idea to most jumps into 1/4 stacks or streams on the map.
I would consider comparing your first major jump section with the Kiai or right before the kiai as some of these jumps are bigger than those 00:09:732 (3,1) - which would indicate that they are the most intense parts of the song
that's kinda big for such a calm section 00:12:564 (3,1) - I might point out more jumps in this section, but mentioning that I think it's overall a bit too spaced might be worth thinking about.
you Ignore the Kick sound on the big white tick inside this slider 00:13:732 (6) - and decided to map the arguably very strong Snare sound with a slider end. I would consider splitting this up to map the Kick and Emphasize at least the Snare. If you REALLY wanna keep that held sound from the Vocal skip the Kick and make it a extended slider, but pls map the Snare with something clickable.
this is bigger 00:16:732 (4,5) - than this 00:18:065 (3,4) - so you might wanna make them more similar.
I would make this jump bigger 00:24:565 (6,1) - as the Snare sound seems more intense to me
this jump should be bigger 00:25:565 (3,4) - than this one 00:25:232 (2,3) - as 4 has A Clap Hitsound on it... though to be fair I'm kinda questioning why you even used clap Hitsounds as there are no Snares on these Soooo.... you might wanna check your hitsounding again.
I think this jump is a bit too big 00:27:232 (5,6) - it's nearly as big as some of the smaller jump in that jump section you had before the Vocals I talked about. It should be more like this I think 00:28:232 (1,2) -
it's kinda weird to hear a whitsle and finish on the big white tick here after a Vocal on a slider end 00:31:565 (1) - as you seem to have previously mapped the Vocals with them no matter what tick they are on, an example would be: 00:30:065 (1) - I think your rhythm overall here seems to not emophasize the Vocal enough so you might wanna change it, but If my suggestions on rhythm so far were just not your thing I would still say that the hitsounds should land on the Vocals even if Hitsounds on a slider end are weird I guess?!? not sure some modders might have pointed that out I think so I would disagree with them if that's the case.
could be a blanket 00:31:732 (2,3) -
the curve here is a bit too subtle for your aesthetic I'd say 00:36:232 (3) - so either make it more apparent or just straight
Why is there a jump into 2? 01:06:732 (1,2,3) - the Vocal is on the slider end... 2 is just a normal Snare and 3 even has a stronger Vocal on it. I kinda don't get why you would do this, but it emphasizes the weakest sound in the pattern so I highly consider making this just a normal stack
you could add a direction change into 5 here 01:12:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - like a S shape, a slider corner would also work or just moving the first half like this the first solution I think would be the best, the 2nd also ok and the 3rd is just if you're lazy. ;_;
this kinda make up a wide angle which is harder to play 01:16:732 (7,1,2) - so I thought I'd might point this out in case you prefer a sharper more common angle. In that case 2 would need to be between 7 and 1.
you pretty much used no 1/2 stack in the song so far at all until here 01:21:398 (3,4) - which is really inconsistent imo. Juts make it spaced for more consistency

Hope that's not too much. gl with the set

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-07-05T16:20:57+00:00

wow it's such a looooooong mod lol,Thanks for your Looking so careful firstly!I will reply it asap.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-07-07T15:06:36+00:00

@MyAngelMeinter I want to emphasis the vocal 01:27:398 (1) - so I use 1/1 slider
@阿斗我觉得这样好，而且跟开头位置关系相同
@DeRandom Otaku ok

Celektus wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Insane]

You seems to use imo a bit too many NCs consider making your combos bigger in some sections. I don't think so, and I don't know where lol
there might be some clap sounds missing in your diff. Mostly on drum fills like this 00:48:564 (2,3,4,5) - check if you might wanna add some soft-hitclaps... well I noticed that you might use normal-hitnormals as Snare hitsounds though this kinda conflicts with how the host of the map seems to use claps for them. I would highly suggest to change your Hitsounding as the host litrally added a Snare similar hitsound for claps and having different hitsounding for different diffs isn't really good. Why should gd use same hs... Yes I want to use n-hitnormal on them
enable stacking in the view options cause this blanket isn't right in game 00:06:064 (1,3,4,5) - cause notes don't perfectly stack in-game It's ok, not really affect playing
this jump I think is a bit big 00:10:898 (1,2,3,4) - compared to these 00:09:231 (2,1) - the 1/4 stack also itself is a bit more straining to play so lowering spacing into it would also be better because of that. This jump tho is fine 00:11:231 (4,1) - this repeats in some other places possibly like here 00:26:898 (4,5,6,7) - so look through some jumps into 1/4 and maybe reduce them slightly. Music changed here so I use bigger ds to emphasis it
I would also make this one smaller 00:11:398 (1,1) - as the next section is already less intense. It should at least be smaller than this one 00:13:731 (4,5) - *comparison* jump after 1/1 slider is really easy to play, so np with this
why is this stacked 00:15:231 (4,1) - but this very similar one right after isn't? 00:15:731 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are also the 2nd 1/2 in the entire map which would be better if the whole section was made around 1/2 being stacked, but like this it's more random than good I think. Consider making stacks in the section more consistent by either not using them or using them with some sort of idea behind them. no drum sound at 00:15:398 - so stack, drum at 00:15:898 - so jump
this jump 00:16:731 (1,2) - is bigger than this one 00:18:064 (1,2) - make them more similar. I think ctrl + Ging 00:18:064 (1) - would some what create a similar movement then before, so I would consider doing that and changing the jump pattern between the 2 patterns jump after 1/1 slider is really easy to play, especially the heads of 00:16:731 (1,2) - are close
I think a 1/1 Slide would fit here more 00:24:731 (5,1) - I follow all drum sound
I think this jump could stand out more because of the tom sound on it 00:26:898 (4) - maybe more spacing or a different overlap would fit, though I can understand if that's too inconsistent maybe. 00:26:898 - this drum is not really heavy
I think a movement like this might fit the drum sounds here 00:37:564 (4,5) - just an idea though. If you apply it make sure spacing into and out of it is still correct. I think the pattern now is better
the way you use new combos here is a bit confusing 00:52:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why? I use nc every pattern
I think this jump into 1/4 is a bit too big 00:53:898 (2,1) - consider making it smaller I don't see 1/4 jump here lol
the last sound last for a bit longer here 01:28:731 (1) - the host also used a 3 1/2 gap long slider on the highest diff ok

Thanks for mod.

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286,64,78898,2,0,P|162:64|128:98,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,263,79231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,166,79398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,258,79564,6,0,P|191:336|246:373,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,166,79898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
279,263,80064,2,0,P|387:271|429:238,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,64,80398,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,258,80564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,166,80731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,156,80898,6,0,P|59:87|66:10,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,161,81231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,258,81398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,59,81564,2,0,P|300:74|329:113,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,156,81898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
279,263,82064,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,251,82148,1,0,1:0:0:0:
353,239,82231,6,0,L|448:232,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,149,82564,2,0,L|110:156,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,120,82898,2,0,L|317:25,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,268,83231,2,0,L|241:363,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,384,83481,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,384,83564,6,0,P|434:345|526:216,1,191.999994140625,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,154,84064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,269,84231,2,0,P|374:246|419:166,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,203,84564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
189,318,84731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,154,84898,6,0,P|228:91|176:90,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,318,85231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
389,335,85398,2,0,P|482:300|513:240,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,154,85731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,384,85898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
399,220,86064,1,0,1:0:0:0:
399,220,86148,1,0,1:0:0:0:
399,220,86231,5,0,1:0:0:0:
304,154,86398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,318,86564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
294,269,86731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,88,86898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
199,203,87064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,39,87231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,137,87398,6,0,P|106:271|235:313,1,191.999994140625,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,39,87898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,203,88731,6,0,P|249:306|313:203,1,287.999991210938,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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Vanillas

398 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2017-07-07T15:19:26+00:00

Here is a kd star.

Celektus

730 posts

Joined April 2014

Celektus 2017-07-07T22:51:16+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
Celektus wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Insane]

I think this jump into 1/4 is a bit too big 00:53:898 (2,1) - consider making it smaller I don't see 1/4 jump here lol

jump into 1/4. I say that because jumping into 1/4 from 1/2 is already emphasizing the 1/4 sounds as they are slightly more straining to play... Jumps out of 1/4 are less straining

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-07-08T02:05:03+00:00

OK I understand. But I think this ds of jump and stream are not too big and easy to play so I don't need to reduce it again. Using too many ds would make the map messy.
Anyway thanks for your explanation xD

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[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-07-11T13:48:07+00:00

Celektus wrote:
[Overall]

The new standard for BG size is 1920x1080px so you might wanna get some more high res pictures or up scale your current ones. If I can find lol
You also might wanna look for a more high quality 192kb/s mp3... your is fine tbh, but why not look for a better one.
I cut down it from 320kbps to 128kbps,anyway it's listened ok now,if I find another 192kbps mp3 I will change it.
[Normal]

I think you could improve this S slider in one or 2 ways 00:34:232 (3) - First off you don't really need a red anchor for this shape and it kinda stands out in a bad way and 2nd off you blanket with 2 could be improved. I would suggest to copy paste the slider and then adjust it slightly to still be on the same point. The result should look more like this. use red anchor can make sliders more soft and glossy,anyway I adjusted the blanket.

You might wanna check some other blankets in your map as sometime the distance from the bodies from you are further away than the head or end of the slider from the approach circle.yes,will check afterwards.

[Hard]

So your diff has one major possible issue which is how you handle stacks, for players of this level reading different kind of rhythms as stacks can be hard to read. At this level players are supposed get introduced to spacing concept by making different rhythms visually consistent.

osu! Ranking Criteria wrote:
Avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing. Spacing variation through jumps on points of emphasis are encouraged, but only if these jumps are recognizably different from 1/1 gaps.
this guideline specifically only mentions 1/1 and 1/2 and you seem to switch between stacked and spaced 1/2 very consistently, but maybe keep this in mind when making future maps as differentiating 1/2 and 1/4 in your diff might be harder to read for players then you intended.
yes I knew it and I put almost every objects in DS except some circles.though testplay I don't find any misleading objects tbh,I will find some 1000pp players to test it and get a more accurate reply.
I think you could ctrl + G this rhythm and re arrange the notes to fit again 00:13:732 (2,3) - as right now the Vocal and arguably strong Snare hit here 00:14:064 - could be more emphasized through actively clicking. This specific case repeat sometimes so either do it always or never. mentioned this 00:14:732 (2,3) - and so on,I mean I used this pattern lots of time so players will know which notes they should click down next,of course many other ranked maps have used circle-1/2 slider to follow the vocal
There are some more rhythms wich could be ctrl + G'd or changed. I'm gonna make a few different example.

00:15:731 (5,6) - fixed.
I would split this into a circle and 1 1/2 slider 00:30:564 (2) - to still map the Vocal on the red tick inside the slider.I wanted to use 1/1 slider to follow the main rhythm and make there easier to play.
I would change this rhythm 01:00:898 (1,2,3,4) - to something more like thisI followed vocal there,as I think it's more important.
there are some other places in the kiai where your rhythm choices could be improved to emphasize the Vocals more, but I think pointing out anymore would just end up be annoying. In case my suggestions aren't good enough think of some other ways to improve the rhythm maybe.I will consider more about it.

[Expert]

I've said a lot about stacks in this mod so now more of a suggestion to make some more hard to read stacks like this 00:16:232 (1,2,3) - later on more expectable. Adding a 1/2 circle for the guitar here 00:16:232 (1,2,3) - underneath the 1/4 stack seems reasonable for a Expert diff and would introduce more interesting stacking ideas as early as possible... if this is too hard to read I'd argue that it is literally at the start of the map and make the pattern mentioned before 00:16:232 (1,2,3) - more excepted. I also think it's not too inconsistent, but you choice tbh I have been influenced by this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/713594?m=0 ,in this map it has shown a interesting way to show vocals (yes the stacking notes),I think players won't be confused there.

that would ofc make this jump a bit big 00:00:898 (1) - so keep that in mind, seems easy to adjust tho waiting other modders to show their suggestions,I will consider it more.
I think that jump is a bit too big for a sound that isn't really that strong 00:01:399 (2) - changing your rhythm to make the Snare on this slider end clicked 00:01:231 - and jump into it would be way more intuitive. I would consider making 00:00:898 (1) - into a extended slider and adding a circle on the Snare like this. A extended slider wouldn't allow for a big jump though so a 1/2 slider might be better depends how much you want to emphasize the hold sound on 1.^,give me time to consider it.

overall you can actually make a lot of 1/1 slider like this one 00:02:065 (1) - into extended ones as you have sounds that are strong enough to be clicked on slider ends a lot. If that's too much work or "too dense" consider other solutions used some 1/1 slider to mix 1/2 rhythms up will up the playable degree,and in fact I followed the main rhythm.
I think the jump into this should be smaller 00:06:565 (2,3) - than this one 00:07:231 (7,1) - especially since 1/4 can be considered more straining to jump to. You could apply the same idea to most jumps into 1/4 stacks or streams on the map. they are so similar that I think it's ok now.
I would consider comparing your first major jump section with the Kiai or right before the kiai as some of these jumps are bigger than those 00:09:732 (3,1) - which would indicate that they are the most intense parts of the song not a necessary problem,but I will consider it more.
that's kinda big for such a calm section 00:12:564 (3,1) - I might point out more jumps in this section, but mentioning that I think it's overall a bit too spaced might be worth thinking about. In vocal part I want to make it easy.
you Ignore the Kick sound on the big white tick inside this slider 00:13:732 (6) - and decided to map the arguably very strong Snare sound with a slider end. I would consider splitting this up to map the Kick and Emphasize at least the Snare. If you REALLY wanna keep that held sound from the Vocal skip the Kick and make it a extended slider, but pls map the Snare with something clickable. uhh it's a good idea,If other modders say the same question I will change it.
this is bigger 00:16:732 (4,5) - than this 00:18:065 (3,4) - so you might wanna make them more similar. done.
I would make this jump bigger 00:24:565 (6,1) - as the Snare sound seems more intense to me adjusted.
this jump should be bigger 00:25:565 (3,4) - than this one 00:25:232 (2,3) - as 4 has A Clap Hitsound on it... though to be fair I'm kinda questioning why you even used clap Hitsounds as there are no Snares on these Soooo.... you might wanna check your hitsounding again.well
I think this jump is a bit too big 00:27:232 (5,6) - it's nearly as big as some of the smaller jump in that jump section you had before the Vocals I talked about. It should be more like this I think 00:28:232 (1,2) -
it's kinda weird to hear a whitsle and finish on the big white tick here after a Vocal on a slider end 00:31:565 (1) - as you seem to have previously mapped the Vocals with them no matter what tick they are on, an example would be: 00:30:065 (1) - I think your rhythm overall here seems to not emophasize the Vocal enough so you might wanna change it, but If my suggestions on rhythm so far were just not your thing I would still say that the hitsounds should land on the Vocals even if Hitsounds on a slider end are weird I guess?!? not sure some modders might have pointed that out I think so I would disagree with them if that's the case. removed finish
could be a blanket 00:31:732 (2,3) - fixed
the curve here is a bit too subtle for your aesthetic I'd say 00:36:232 (3) - so either make it more apparent or just straight adjusted a little
Why is there a jump into 2? 01:06:732 (1,2,3) - the Vocal is on the slider end... 2 is just a normal Snare and 3 even has a stronger Vocal on it. I kinda don't get why you would do this, but it emphasizes the weakest sound in the pattern so I highly consider making this just a normal stack fixed.
you could add a direction change into 5 here 01:12:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - like a S shape, a slider corner would also work or just moving the first half like this the first solution I think would be the best, the 2nd also ok and the 3rd is just if you're lazy. ;_; hmm I will change it shape when I get a new point.
this kinda make up a wide angle which is harder to play 01:16:732 (7,1,2) - so I thought I'd might point this out in case you prefer a sharper more common angle. In that case 2 would need to be between 7 and 1.I think it's ok now.
you pretty much used no 1/2 stack in the song so far at all until here 01:21:398 (3,4) - which is really inconsistent imo. Juts make it spaced for more consistency fixed.

Hope that's not too much. gl with the set

Thanks very much!

Yahuri

1,406 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-07-12T04:21:36+00:00

blanket/stack mod from my q
-stacks look fine, blankets in Normal are already clean
-adding some extra comments since theres really not much for me to look at ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Normal
00:21:398 (3) - looks like you deleted one of the anchors earlier and it turned into this weirdly curved slider. remap this slider.
00:08:898 (1,3) - visual spacing between these sliders is a bit close, you can space them out more
00:31:564 (3,4,5) - overlapping makes this section look pretty clumped up. i would have slider 5 move further away from 4 (so something like a -90degree angle change for 5)
01:05:898 (5,6) - ^ overlapping 3 objects together doesnt look very good

Hard

blankets

00:03:231 (3,1) - could be blanketed if u want
00:04:565 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:18:898 (6,1) - ^ also doesnt look very nice because the reverse side of 6 gets kinda close to the slidertail of 1
00:25:398 (2,3) - blanket?
00:34:231 (1) - fix blanket
01:07:564 (1,3) - blanket?

00:34:231 (1,2,3,4) - 00:36:898 (1,2) - fix DS, the spacings there are larger than the rest of this section 00:32:898 - 00:38:231 for no apparent reason
01:03:398 - remove clap
01:08:898 (1,3) - visual spacing between these sliders is a bit close, you can space them out more
01:14:231 (1,2) - rhythm feels awkward here. yea theres guitar here 01:14:731 (2) but you havent really been focusing on that. try a rhythm like this https://puu.sh/wHqer/b04ff919b0.jpg

Lobelia

862 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-07-14T12:43:54+00:00

来啦。。大概很水，近期没什么OSU动力
[ Expert ]
00:00:731 - 其实我觉得这个音。。。跟你后面要对的是一样的，我觉得省略掉不是很好
00:01:399 (2,3) - 这个节奏CTRL+G我觉得更好
00:05:232 (2,3) - ↑
00:04:152 - 漏音？00:04:481 - 然后这个音我觉得很重要不能漏。。因为这一段主要音轨你在用滑条强调的都是这种BASE音00:04:398 (5) - 换成短滑条？
00:08:148 - ↑，这块因为你后面都是用的单点强调BASE。。。所以BASE音可以不三连
00:06:898 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得CTRL+G，前后FLOW更好点
00:13:732 (6,1) - 我觉得这里根据你要走的节奏。。

试试这样？

，00:14:565 (2) - 因为这里才是BASE音开始的地方，你前面的节奏也是强调人声。。所以我觉得你这样比较好点
00:24:732 (1,2) - ↑
00:44:898 (1,2,3) - ↑，这个不是MOD，是跟前面两点做对比，这块处理对我来说就比较好
00:18:898 (6,7) - CTRL+G?
00:38:732 (2,3) - ↑
00:28:232 (1) - 这里我觉得是OK的。。但是00:26:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一组跟这里类似。。只是00:28:232 (1) 这块没有连打的鼓音。。所以我觉得你可以换成三个单点，这里相对来说太简单了些？
00:36:898 (1,2) - 做成00:34:232 (1,2) - 和这组一样的吧？
00:48:898 (1) - 这里拖这么长节奏，很突兀啊，我是这样认为的
副歌就不摸啦，感觉还行

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Gyro Zeppeli

95 posts

Joined January 2014

Gyro Zeppeli 2017-07-18T14:42:07+00:00

这好像都被摸好了
鸽了很久的NM水了
高难度set我日
这个Normal真的是看起来像Hard
[Expert]
00:16:232 (1,2,3) - 重拍要不要试一试跳？

01:00:565 (5) - 这里往左一点打起来顺手一些

真送爆！摸不出什么来，还是射一颗星表示歉意

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-07-18T17:01:30+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
blanket/stack mod from my q
-stacks look fine, blankets in Normal are already clean
-adding some extra comments since theres really not much for me to look at ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Normal
00:21:398 (3) - looks like you deleted one of the anchors earlier and it turned into this weirdly curved slider. remap this slider.okay.
00:08:898 (1,3) - visual spacing between these sliders is a bit close, you can space them out more moved a little
00:31:564 (3,4,5) - overlapping makes this section look pretty clumped up. i would have slider 5 move further away from 4 (so something like a -90degree angle change for 5)I moved slider4 instead.
01:05:898 (5,6) - ^ overlapping 3 objects together doesnt look very good I want to make 4 5s' tail and 6's head combine a triangle

Hard
blankets
00:03:231 (3,1) - could be blanketed if u want It's quite hard ;w; I'm lazy
00:04:565 (5,6) - fix blanket fixed.
00:18:898 (6,1) - ^ also doesnt look very nice because the reverse side of 6 gets kinda close to the slidertail of 1 I think it's ok now...not very close
00:25:398 (2,3) - blanket? just want to make 1's tail,2 and 3's head combine a triangle
00:34:231 (1) - fix blanket ok.
01:07:564 (1,3) - blanket?tested but not good..so keep now
00:34:231 (1,2,3,4) - 00:36:898 (1,2) - fix DS, the spacings there are larger than the rest of this section 00:32:898 - 00:38:231 for no apparent reason yes,fixed!
01:03:398 - remove clap fixed.
01:08:898 (1,3) - visual spacing between these sliders is a bit close, you can space them out more moved a little.
01:14:231 (1,2) - rhythm feels awkward here. yea theres guitar here 01:14:731 (2) but you havent really been focusing on that. try a rhythm like this https://puu.sh/wHqer/b04ff919b0.jpg I copied rhythm from 01:02:231 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ,I will ask a BN whether it suited.

really thanks!very useful mod.

Gyro Zeppeli wrote:
这好像都被摸好了
鸽了很久的NM水了
高难度set我日
这个Normal真的是看起来像Hard maya 两星都不到了已经
[Expert]
00:16:232 (1,2,3) - 重拍要不要试一试跳？妈的你们都挑这里改了

01:00:565 (5) - 这里往左一点打起来顺手一些行

真送爆！摸不出什么来，还是射一颗星表示歉意倒是all fix 2333333

thanks!

Lobelia

862 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-07-20T04:11:20+00:00

已经摸啦QWQ别忘记给我KD哟

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-07-24T05:00:33+00:00

Easy
00:00:898 (1,2,3) - 00:02:565 (4,1) - 对称一点
00:18:065 (1) - 没必要nc吧
00:56:898 (1,2) - 拉一样的滑条
01:21:565 (2) - 这边形状不适合

Normal
00:13:898 (4) - 1/2滑条，00:14:064 - 音很明显
00:20:731 (1) - 00:30:898 (1) - 也不需要nc
00:31:398 (2) - 建议删掉，这边没beat
00:31:564 (3,4,5) - 分开一点。。挤一起太难看
00:34:232 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/wRxxH/8d01c407d7.jpg 节奏省略太多了
00:36:898 (3,4) - 考虑一下http://puu.sh/wRxyH/89d31413ad.jpg
后面类似
00:47:398 (2) - 移到00:47:231 - 也没什么问题
00:52:398 - 00:53:398 - add circle？

Hard
00:34:148 (5) - 为啥三连
00:34:398 - 重音没map
00:44:731 (4,5,1) - 类似
01:22:231 (1,2) - 01:22:898 (3,4) - ds差的多

Expert
00:00:564 - 3/4滑条会更好，这边有个拖长音
00:14:565 (2,5) - 分开一些
00:26:232 (5) - nc 00:27:398 (6) - nc
00:26:898 (1) - 去掉nc
00:34:398 (2) - 圈+1/2 slider
00:58:732 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这跳有点乱，而且间距跨度太大了
01:04:148 - 漏三连
01:07:398 (4,5,1) - 这个衔接太不自然了，弧度不对
01:08:065 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 好像和前面一样。。
主难度还是要加强

Hard和Insane难度差的有点多

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-07-24T05:02:57+00:00

只差了1.36而且i没有什么难打的梗，感觉还好？
虽然hard再稍难一点确实会更理想

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-08-08T16:31:10+00:00

[ Abhor ] wrote:
来啦。。大概很水，近期没什么OSU动力
[ Expert ]
00:00:731 - 其实我觉得这个音。。。跟你后面要对的是一样的，我觉得省略掉不是很好好
00:01:399 (2,3) - 这个节奏CTRL+G我觉得更好
00:05:232 (2,3) - ↑ 习惯小白线click了
00:04:152 - 漏音？好00:04:481 - 然后这个音我觉得很重要不能漏。。因为这一段主要音轨你在用滑条强调的都是这种BASE音00:04:398 (5) - 换成短滑条？节奏有点乱,前面我放了三连所以这里还是不了
00:08:148 - ↑，这块因为你后面都是用的单点强调BASE。。。所以BASE音可以不三连主要音实在不明显,放了有点奇怪
00:06:898 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得CTRL+G，前后FLOW更好点ok
00:13:732 (6,1) - 我觉得这里根据你要走的节奏。。
试试这样？
，00:14:565 (2) - 因为这里才是BASE音开始的地方，你前面的节奏也是强调人声。。所以我觉得你这样比较好点
00:24:732 (1,2) - ↑ 刚进人声段所以想突出一下人声啦
00:44:898 (1,2,3) - ↑，这个不是MOD，是跟前面两点做对比，这块处理对我来说就比较好
00:18:898 (6,7) - CTRL+G?
00:38:732 (2,3) - ↑现在这样我觉得可以
00:28:232 (1) - 这里我觉得是OK的。。但是00:26:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一组跟这里类似。。只是00:28:232 (1) 这块没有连打的鼓音。。所以我觉得你可以换成三个单点，这里相对来说太简单了些？好.
00:36:898 (1,2) - 做成00:34:232 (1,2) - 和这组一样的吧？想多有些节奏的变化
00:48:898 (1) - 这里拖这么长节奏，很突兀啊，我是这样认为的想休息一下的,就选择连续1/1了
副歌就不摸啦，感觉还行

sahuang wrote:
Easy
00:00:898 (1,2,3) - 00:02:565 (4,1) - 对称一点?没懂...
00:18:065 (1) - 没必要nc吧手滑
00:56:898 (1,2) - 拉一样的滑条k
01:21:565 (2) - 这边形状不适合改了

Normal
00:13:898 (4) - 1/2滑条，00:14:064 - 音很明显o
00:20:731 (1) - 00:30:898 (1) - 也不需要nc后面那个没改
00:31:398 (2) - 建议删掉，这边没beat感觉缺了点什么,还是加上舒服
00:31:564 (3,4,5) - 分开一点。。挤一起太难看动了一下5
00:34:232 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/wRxxH/8d01c407d7.jpg 节奏省略太多了
00:36:898 (3,4) - 考虑一下http://puu.sh/wRxyH/89d31413ad.jpg
后面类似主要是这里低潮,想直接放掉很多节奏做一个休息
00:47:398 (2) - 移到00:47:231 - 也没什么问题跟人声了,放前面白线的话太难改了
00:52:398 - 00:53:398 - add circle？跟住vocal

Hard
00:34:148 (5) - 为啥三连删了
00:34:398 - 重音没mapo
00:44:731 (4,5,1) - 类似
01:22:231 (1,2) - 01:22:898 (3,4) - ds差的多o

Expert
00:00:564 - 3/4滑条会更好，这边有个拖长音试一下1/2
00:14:565 (2,5) - 分开一些o
00:26:232 (5) - nc 00:27:398 (6) - nc o
00:26:898 (1) - 去掉nc o
00:34:398 (2) - 圈+1/2 slider o
00:58:732 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这跳有点乱，而且间距跨度太大了把2拉出去了
01:04:148 - 漏三连
01:07:398 (4,5,1) - 这个衔接太不自然了，弧度不对
01:08:065 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 好像和前面一样。。都改了,跳都微调了一下
主难度还是要加强

Hard和Insane难度差的有点多我第一张rank差了1.42呢这个才1.36..

Thanks!

Gyro Zeppeli

95 posts

Joined January 2014

Gyro Zeppeli 2017-08-10T17:07:52+00:00

都23SP了，估计快起飞了

Garden

osu! Alumni

1,345 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-09-03T07:53:36+00:00

General:
虽然metadata check过了你还是贴一下
香子兰快动啊

Easy:
00:10:231 (2) - 这里节奏听起来就比较奇怪因为曲子不是在123123123么，你应该懂我意思.. 看你主难度节奏就是
00:20:898 (3,1) - 这样 https://puu.sh/xqiXl/7d6b942c03.png 似乎打起来更流畅点
00:32:898 (1,1) - 人声和重音都在 00:33:564 - 00:36:231 - 所以2/1+圈可能更好，想比normal简单的话就圈也不要了直接中间空个2/1也没问题
00:43:565 (1,1) - same
00:47:565 (2) - ..我感觉这里反而适合折返
00:53:565 (3) - 换1/1slider和转盘衔接更自然点还能跟人声
01:04:898 (1,2) - 和最后一样3/2折返跟到红线人声比较好吧

Normal:
00:10:232 (2) - 同ez
00:51:565 (1,2) - 可以换1/1+圈比easy难点
01:05:398 (4,5,6) - 显得有点乱要不6放上面

Hard:
bpm挺高的ar7.5好了
00:05:898 (3,1) - 这后面音挺强的还是别stack了
00:18:898 (6) - 可以也包下1的尾巴会好看点
00:32:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里比normal节奏密很多，虽然用了低sv小间距单就这个难度看应该没问题但考虑到整体可以稍微弄简单点。我的建议是00:34:064 (4) - 00:44:731 (4) - 删掉只跟vocal，改排版也会更有空间
01:02:898 - 01:04:231 - 01:14:898 - 01:21:564 - 不跟人声吗

Pata:
00:52:564 (1,2,1,2) - 人声多少不一样这里可以变化一下如 -> https://puu.sh/xqku2/e4d460c516.png 肯定会比较有意思，也不影响后面flow
00:56:398 (1,1) - 音效不像你开头一样吗
01:20:898 - 应该finish和 01:18:231 - 对应?

Expert:
现在这种都od9了嘛..
00:02:898 (3) - 00:25:232 (2) - 00:45:565 (3) - 可ctrl-g 不然你这一路贪吃蛇也太没劲
00:09:398 (1,2,3) - 调整下位置? 00:09:232 (3,1) - 理论上跳会好吧，和 00:09:732 (3,1) - 00:10:232 (3,1) - 一样
00:15:398 (6) - 没怎么出界但可以往上点，挡着击打偏差条子了
00:42:232 (1,2) - 这个ctrl-g忽然改变flow会更有感觉吧打起来.. 你这图flow有点太耿直了(
00:47:398 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - 擅自改了改flow -> https://puu.sh/xql17/a6a9a1b7ee.jpg
00:52:565 (1,2,1,2) - 这两个用同一组梗更合理吧
00:54:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 弧度不好看，善用滑条转连打功能，而且 00:54:564 (2,1) - 接先往上的弧度打起来会比较顺吧
01:18:898 (3,4,5,6) - 试试这种flow? -> https://puu.sh/xqlgA/b67ef1b90c.png 01:19:065 (4,5) - 01:19:398 (6,1) - 间距好相对给大一点
01:20:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里我建议缩小整体间距，好让 01:20:565 (4,5) - 01:22:065 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 人声更加突出，顺带这里01:22:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 间距也偏大跟副歌差不多了.. 这个问题在前面主歌部分也有你自己瞧一瞧修一修

以及主观的音效莫得:
00:00:564 - clap或normal sample
00:32:898 - 这段怎么还无脑24clap，仔细听一下啊
00:56:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 你试试在所有这种梗的24加上whistle然后听听效果，还有前面很多地方都可以点缀下，光finish和clap为主还是显得有点空落落的，01:18:231 - 这一段就做得不错

[]
主难度和音效有改善空间，回完mod自己再调整下各种间距然后可以找我check

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-09-03T09:28:59+00:00

metadata has been stuck.

IamKwaN wrote:
好的，沒問題

Unicode Title: キラキラだとか夢だとか～Sing Girls～ (TV Size) 那些~好像不一樣
Romanised Title: Kira Kira datoka Yume datoka ~Sing Girls~ (TV Size) (Kirakira也行吧)
Unicode Artist: Poppin’Party (這個好像也不同)
Romanised Artist: Poppin'Party
Source: BanG Dream!

References:
http://bang-dream.com/cd/#anc1179
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8juUyEP_6PU

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-09-03T10:36:52+00:00

Garden wrote:
General:
虽然metadata check过了你还是贴一下贴好啦
香子兰快动啊 ~~人家累了不想动了呜呜呜~~

Easy:
00:10:231 (2) - 这里节奏听起来就比较奇怪因为曲子不是在123123123么，你应该懂我意思.. 看你主难度节奏就是 Easy里我想不到比较简单的节奏了...就这么带过去了,打起来其实我觉得还可以呀...我现在改成了两个单点看看会不会好一些
00:20:898 (3,1) - 这样 https://puu.sh/xqiXl/7d6b942c03.png 似乎打起来更流畅点 fixed
00:32:898 (1,1) - 人声和重音都在 00:33:564 - 00:36:231 - 所以2/1+圈可能更好，想比normal简单的话就圈也不要了直接中间空个2/1也没问题
00:43:565 (1,1) - same都改了
00:47:565 (2) - ..我感觉这里反而适合折返改不下了..感觉都可以吧...
00:53:565 (3) - 换1/1slider和转盘衔接更自然点还能跟人声改了,不过紧跟转盘符合RC嘛?
01:04:898 (1,2) - 和最后一样3/2折返跟到红线人声比较好吧好.

Normal:
00:10:232 (2) - 同ez 这个直接改1/2滑条了
00:51:565 (1,2) - 可以换1/1+圈比easy难点好
01:05:398 (4,5,6) - 显得有点乱要不6放上面好.

Hard:
bpm挺高的ar7.5好了好
00:05:898 (3,1) - 这后面音挺强的还是别stack了 yes.
00:18:898 (6) - 可以也包下1的尾巴会好看点 ok
00:32:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里比normal节奏密很多，虽然用了低sv小间距单就这个难度看应该没问题但考虑到整体可以稍微弄简单点。我的建议是00:34:064 (4) - 00:44:731 (4) - 删掉只跟vocal，改排版也会更有空间删掉了一些,修改了
01:02:898 - 01:04:231 - 01:14:898 - 01:21:564 - 不跟人声吗改了

Expert:
现在这种都od9了嘛..od9也一堆人ss..给谁试谁ss我都怕了
00:02:898 (3) - 00:25:232 (2) - 00:45:565 (3) - 可ctrl-g 不然你这一路贪吃蛇也太没劲好
00:09:398 (1,2,3) - 调整下位置? 00:09:232 (3,1) - 理论上跳会好吧，和 00:09:732 (3,1) - 00:10:232 (3,1) - 一样好.
00:15:398 (6) - 没怎么出界但可以往上点，挡着击打偏差条子了好
00:42:232 (1,2) - 这个ctrl-g忽然改变flow会更有感觉吧打起来.. 你这图flow有点太耿直了( 因为想着是怎么顺手怎么来的...改了
00:47:398 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - 擅自改了改flow -> https://puu.sh/xql17/a6a9a1b7ee.jpg 嘻嘻好像很棒
00:52:565 (1,2,1,2) - 这两个用同一组梗更合理吧好
00:54:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 弧度不好看，善用滑条转连打功能，而且 00:54:564 (2,1) - 接先往上的弧度打起来会比较顺吧改了
01:18:898 (3,4,5,6) - 试试这种flow? -> https://puu.sh/xqlgA/b67ef1b90c.png 01:19:065 (4,5) - 01:19:398 (6,1) - 间距好相对给大一点自己修了一下
01:20:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里我建议缩小整体间距，好让 01:20:565 (4,5) - 01:22:065 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 人声更加突出，顺带这里01:22:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 间距也偏大跟副歌差不多了.. 这个问题在前面主歌部分也有你自己瞧一瞧修一修

以及主观的音效莫得:
00:00:564 - clap或normal sample
00:32:898 - 这段怎么还无脑24clap，仔细听一下啊
00:56:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 你试试在所有这种梗的24加上whistle然后听听效果，还有前面很多地方都可以点缀下，光finish和clap为主还是显得有点空落落的，01:18:231 - 这一段就做得不错加了很多whistle

[]
主难度和音效有改善空间，回完mod自己再调整下各种间距然后可以找我check

感谢小花园ww
waiting patamon.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-09-03T15:20:05+00:00

第一个我感觉还是没必要过于追求变化吧，主要是我并没有感觉那里明显不同，因为反正都是10、9、8、7……一个个数字嘛
后俩音效加了
谢谢~

@大保健 这玩意是ed吧？tag里加上ED和ending啊，而且动画ed最好还是搞个视频，自己找个动画资源然后问问虾抖或者谁能不能帮着压一下试试？

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328,212,76064,2,0,L|280:244,2,47.9999985351563,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,148,76398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,161,76564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
335,327,76731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,97,76898,6,0,P|223:46|161:65,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,225,77231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
387,263,77398,2,0,L|225:161,1,191.999994140625,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,365,77898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
455,171,78064,1,0,1:0:0:0:
225,161,78231,6,0,P|117:284|103:388,1,191.999994140625,6|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
340,166,78731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,64,78898,2,0,P|162:64|128:98,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,263,79231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,166,79398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,258,79564,6,0,P|191:336|246:373,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,166,79898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
279,263,80064,2,0,P|387:271|429:238,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,64,80398,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,258,80564,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,166,80731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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225,161,81231,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,258,81398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,59,81564,2,0,P|300:74|329:113,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,156,81898,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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316,251,82148,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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205,149,82564,2,0,L|110:156,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,384,83481,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,384,83564,6,0,P|434:345|526:216,1,191.999994140625,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,154,84064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-09-10T16:19:21+00:00

updated.
@patamon 我第一张rank那个其实也应该有视频然而我实在是不想加现在没什么人看视频把文件弄大我觉得坏处大于好处...真的是有点无奈

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-09-10T16:21:16+00:00

主要是有视频别人可以dl with video，没视频就没法

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2017-10-04T11:46:56+00:00

鴿來了
求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻

[General]

Difficulties end time is not consistent:
01:28:731 - Easy
01:29:232 - Normal
01:29:231 - Hard
01:29:231 - Pata-Mon's Insane
01:29:232 - Expert
我估計是因為改了offset而導致的誤差，比如說Hard難度綠線在01:28:731，但Expert難度裡面卻在01:28:732。而物件結束正確時間是01:29:231，由此推論是Normal和Expert難度的滑條晚了1ms，改完綠線然後移一下滑條可以fix了

[Easy]

DS狂魔來了
什麼，沒有任何error，算你走運

[Normal]

什麼，Normal也沒有任何error，是在下輸了

[Hard]

球球你讓我寫兩句
好吧寫不出來

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

整個圖flow很好，就是這個00:32:064 (4,5,6,7,1) - 有點怪，短時間內切了好幾次flow

[Expert]

聽說你圖很pp
00:38:065 (3) - 這有點遠，而且也不是重音
00:51:398 (7,8,1) - DS不一致，78是0.52x，81是0.44x
00:52:564 (1,2) - 這為什麼不ctrl+J，像00:51:565 (1,2,1,2) - 那樣？現在00:52:398 (2,1) - 打起來卡手，甚至你可以順便把00:53:065 (1,2) - 也改了，像這樣flow更好 https://puu.sh/xPKMB/00ec478d58.jpg

求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-10-04T11:51:25+00:00

那里我是觉得切换段落处的重音那么放比较有趣．另外虽不是固定方向但我自己打起来还是觉得挺顺的

谢谢啃球！

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-10-04T11:59:23+00:00

然后我就要咕到7号了
我去加视频我去加视频我去加视频

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2017-10-07T15:37:24+00:00

Kencho wrote:
鴿來了
求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻我错了我错了我错了呜呜呜呜在路上了..
[General]
Difficulties end time is not consistent:
01:28:731 - Easy
01:29:232 - Normal
01:29:231 - Hard
01:29:231 - Pata-Mon's Insane
01:29:232 - Expert
我估計是因為改了offset而導致的誤差，比如說Hard難度綠線在01:28:731，但Expert難度裡面卻在01:28:732。而物件結束正確時間是01:29:231，由此推論是Normal和Expert難度的滑條晚了1ms，改完綠線然後移一下滑條可以fix了fixed~

[Easy]
DS狂魔來了
什麼，沒有任何error，算你走運

[Normal]
什麼，Normal也沒有任何error，是在下輸了

[Hard]
球球你讓我寫兩句
好吧寫不出來

>w<我也是ds狂魔呢~
[Expert]
聽說你圖很pp 对呀对呀w
00:38:065 (3) - 這有點遠，而且也不是重音 fixed~
00:51:398 (7,8,1) - DS不一致，78是0.52x，81是0.44x 移了一下w
00:52:564 (1,2) - 這為什麼不ctrl+J，像00:51:565 (1,2,1,2) - 那樣？現在00:52:398 (2,1) - 打起來卡手，甚至你可以順便把00:53:065 (1,2) - 也改了，像這樣flow更好 https://puu.sh/xPKMB/00ec478d58.jpg 其实是小花园提出应该两个两个一组..嘛不过我那样确实不好qwq 改啦
求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻求你加視頻