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[Atmosphere]
00:36:958 (36958|3) - dont think i heard anything relevant to the noise here. so would delete
moreover - 00:36:871 (36871|2) - should be an LN to represent vocal like any other LNs does
00:41:755 (41755|1) - should add one more note here. for kicks
00:43:325 (43325|1,43499|2) - i'd say this was one vocal syllables instead of two
00:50:650 (50650|6,50999|3) - if this intend to follow vocal, then its off. the syllables change at - 00:50:825
01:07:056 (67056|4) - moving it to 4 would make it more symmetrical which accompanies how the vocals goes
01:16:495 (76495|2,76579|3) - swap? think it would make the roll more lenient
01:22:731 (82731|0,83068|0,83405|0,83742|0) - hmm i wouldnt recommend to place those scratch notes there as the other scratch was placed in rather predictable sense. which is in crash (this was one was only the cymbal). so maybe move all of them to another column
01:24:753 -> 01:30:146 -
Lack of notes in especially in 2 and 8 column. RC clearly state that we cannot leave any column empty, let alone with you only filling 3 to 7 column. find a way to rearange this
01:50:792 - missed a note for a roll
02:04:191 (124191|0) - inconsistent scratch with - 01:02:506- which has similar buildups on the song
[Shana]
00:52:394 (52394|0) - DN_KickPE2F. pls be consistent with atmosphere
00:57:787 (57787|0) - W
just to note some. pls check the HS carefully
00:59:725 - probably add a note here
01:13:040 - also here. for the synths
01:42:113 (102113|6) - i'd prefer one more note too around here for snare
02:04:697 - the scratch jackn on col 1 will be quite a hassle to handle for those who still progressing from Normal so i would suggest this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8997742[422]
01:14:304 (74304|6,74304|3) - ok starting here i dont get what are you doing with all the chords. i thought you were going to following kick but then
01:14:641 (74641|1,74978|3,75315|6) - it goes single and then it goes - 01:15:652 (75652|1,75652|5,75989|7,75989|2,76326|5,76326|3,76663|1,76663|4,77000|7,77000|2) - ? please make them consistent
01:48:011 (108011|2) - should've splitting into 2 LNs for vocal
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01:28:124 (88124|3) -
pls
something something consistent HS pls