Ridho 2307 wrote:

mods come to you from this queue p/6222952

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atmosphere

00:30:069 - add note in 0 hm is there a reason? There is no any new sound, just guitars

00:36:871 - you should make a LN like 00:36:174 (36174|2) - here's 1/4 note 00:36:958 (36958|3) - instead of LN because of vocal words

00:37:482 - https://puu.sh/xnczg/0c0600001f.png I want to keep mine

sorry for little picky

good luck

eyes wrote:

Ridho 2307 wrote:

mods come to you from this queue p/6222952

0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7

atmosphere

00:30:069 - add note in 0 hm is there a reason? There is no any new sound, just guitars//sure, this section has same with the first time while entering the map, i think it will be great if you add note in the 0 like the the first time

00:36:871 - you should make a LN like 00:36:174 (36174|2) - here's 1/4 note 00:36:958 (36958|3) - instead of LN because of vocal words//i know it, coz of i tell you to make the LN to cover the vocal coz i think u miss it

00:37:482 - https://puu.sh/xnczg/0c0600001f.png I want to keep mine

sorry for little picky

good luck

thanks!

Ridho 2307 wrote:

mods come to you from this queue p/6222952

0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7

atmosphere

00:30:069 - add note in 0 hm is there a reason? There is no any new sound, just guitars//sure, this section has same with the first time while entering the map, i think it will be great if you add note in the 0 like the the first time first 0 note was for the sample - "DB-B7.waw", you can count it as keysounding

00:36:871 - you should make a LN like 00:36:174 (36174|2) - here's 1/4 note 00:36:958 (36958|3) - instead of LN because of vocal words//i know it, coz of i tell you to make the LN to cover the vocal coz i think u miss it hm so LN will not look suitable with 1/4 vocal

00:37:482 - https://puu.sh/xnczg/0c0600001f.png I want to keep mine

sorry for little picky

good luck

No kudoss for this okay 😈

Rivals_7 wrote:

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[Atmosphere]

00:36:958 (36958|3) - dont think i heard anything relevant to the noise here. so would delete
moreover - 00:36:871 (36871|2) - should be an LN to represent vocal like any other LNs does these 00:36:871 (36871|2,36958|3) - are for vocal, first one is "ri", second - "shi"

00:41:755 (41755|1) - should add one more note here. for kicks sure

00:43:325 (43325|1,43499|2) - i'd say this was one vocal syllables instead of two I hear two, "don-na"

00:50:650 (50650|6,50999|3) - if this intend to follow vocal, then its off. the syllables change at - 00:50:825 yes

01:07:056 (67056|4) - moving it to 4 would make it more symmetrical which accompanies how the vocals goes ok

01:16:495 (76495|2,76579|3) - swap? think it would make the roll more lenient I want to keep zig-zag pattern

01:22:731 (82731|0,83068|0,83405|0,83742|0) - hmm i wouldnt recommend to place those scratch notes there as the other scratch was placed in rather predictable sense. which is in crash (this was one was only the cymbal). so maybe move all of them to another column

01:24:753 -> 01:30:146 - Lack of notes in especially in 2 and 8 column. RC clearly state that we cannot leave any column empty, let alone with you only filling 3 to 7 column. find a way to rearange this I thought it means that I can't leave any column emptry all over the map, is it bad to leave them empty only for some extra part of music? I'll ask some QAT about this

01:50:792 - missed a note for a roll fixed

02:04:191 (124191|0) - inconsistent scratch with - 01:02:506- which has similar buildups on the song deleted


semyon can't accept mods in this moment, so he asked me to accept mods
[422]

01:14:304 (74304|6,74304|3) - ok starting here i dont get what are you doing with all the chords. i thought you were going to following kick but then
01:14:641 (74641|1,74978|3,75315|6) - it goes single and then it goes - 01:15:652 (75652|1,75652|5,75989|7,75989|2,76326|5,76326|3,76663|1,76663|4,77000|7,77000|2) - ? please make them consistent placed doubles on all kicks

01:48:011 (108011|2) - should've splitting into 2 LNs for vocal fixed

[Begin]

01:28:124 (88124|3) -

pls fixed

something something consistent HS pls mm? I don't understand

eyes wrote:

Rivals_7 wrote:

something something consistent HS pls mm? I don't understand

Rivals_7 wrote:

[422]

01:14:304 (74304|6,74304|3) - ok starting here i dont get what are you doing with all the chords. i thought you were going to following kick but then
01:14:641 (74641|1,74978|3,75315|6) - it goes single and then it goes - 01:15:652 (75652|1,75652|5,75989|7,75989|2,76326|5,76326|3,76663|1,76663|4,77000|7,77000|2) - ? please make them consistent
single = guitar or kick
double = guitar and kick
nothing to change, they are already consistent

01:48:011 (108011|2) - should've splitting into 2 LNs for vocal accepted

eyes wrote:

названия не под сприд битмании/сдвх, поэтому все должно быть ок

14:23 eyes: Hello, sorry for bothering, can I ask something about rankability?
14:27 Feerum: Sure i guess
14:27 eyes: hm
14:27 eyes: Is it rankable to use 5k style in 7k map
14:27 eyes: Like for 6 secs
14:27 Feerum: Wut?
14:27 Feerum: You mean leave some columns empty for a short time?
14:28 eyes: yes
14:28 Feerum: I mean if it's really a short time and you can justify it properly there is absolute no problem
14:29 eyes: I think 6 secs is ok? I used it just to emphasize solo-guitar part
14:29 Feerum: Yeeah. Shouldn't be a problem if it's not a 30sec map haha
14:30 eyes: ok, thanks! I just talked with Rivals and he wanted to make sure it's ok

Rivals_7 wrote:

i think i just notice this but why are you using different hitsounds for relatively the same noise? its kinda waste of space just for the hitsounds

DustMoon wrote:

00:45:243 - add one note in 6
00:51:348 - advice:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355330
01:59:809 (119809|2,119978|4) - Ctrl+g accepted