Satellite wrote:

こんにちは
From My queue

[Insane]
00:18:987 (1,2,3) - 手前の 00:17:332 (1,2,3) - この位置の正反対ですから高さをそろえてはどうでしょう？ fix
00:33:943 (1) - remove newcombo? fix
00:35:707 (9) - 00:35:002 (5) - ここのスライダーの反転させたものを使ってみるのはどうでしょう？ fix
01:04:296 (1) - もう少し上向きにしてDSを整えたほうがいいと思いました fix?
01:07:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - この位置の配置の提案です。 fix 最後のほうだけ近すぎて違和感あるかもだから少しプレイして様子見
画像が見づらい場合はもう１度私にたずねてください～(流れもかいてます！)

01:11:707 (3) - きっちり２の左右対称の位置へ移動x324 y244 fix
01:12:237 (3) - ↑の指摘を修正後それに伴い真ん中へ移動すると綺麗に見えると思います fix
01:44:972 (4) - remove note? fixしてちょっと様子見　自分でプレイして違和感あるようならまた戻すかも
01:47:354 (3) - 流れ的にこういう向きだと思います fix

01:58:913 (1) - ここと　01:59:178 (1) - ここは remove newcomboのほうがわかりやすいきがします fix
02:26:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - めんどくさいかもしれませんがもう少し綺麗に配置したほうがプレイするときもわかりやすいと思います。 瞑想中作り変えてみたけどいまいちかも後で修正?
02:31:119 (1) - ctrl+G 02:31:472 (1) - ^ 歌のテンションが↑↓↓↑になってるのでそれにあわせてます　なのでnot fix

03:09:885 - addnote?
03:11:760 - ^
03:08:596 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - おととりの提案　私はこれが好きです

03:17:033 (3) - 03:17:385 - ココで終わるべき？　03:17:736 - add note

上記を適用してプレイしてみましたが、ここの部分だけ若干忙しくなりすぎて違和感があるように感じたので見送り 、上記を適用するならもっと前後を忙しくする必要がある気がします(>< )ゆっくりペースを維持で



03:58:264 (1) - 手前の4.5と高さをそろえるといいかもしれません fix

[Hard]
00:37:825 (2,3,4) - いきなりDSを狂わせるのはHardではちょっと難しいかもしれません・・・ DSを合わせると間隔があきすぎるのでパターンを変えてみました。　
01:19:119 (1,2,3) - 音とりの提案です、単発noteをおくより、このようにスライダーでカバーしてあげるほうがHardでは優しいと思います もしかしたら向きが悪いかもしれないけどfix

01:38:884 (1) - remove note ここを消すとタイミングが変わってしまうので　パターンを変更してみました
01:58:649 (1,2,3) - 上と同じです fix

03:05:783 (3) - 03:06:135 - ココで終わるべき？
03:06:486 - add note?
hardの方はfix

[eLtXXx's Normal]
looks fine~

[Wafu's Easy]
looks fine~

good luck~

Shana Aisaka wrote:

[Hard]
OD +1 Since BPM changes frequently not fix
Some part need hitsound

00:23:583(4) - whistle Since it just removed by another mod, it is not fix.
00:29:002(1) - finish fix
00:45:943 - spinner add finish fix
02:52:189(3,4) - clap(slider tail) I thinks, It is better for there to be no sound. not fix ><
03:04:767 - timing start in 03:04:846 At the time of change sound, you should not stack. not fix
03:04:846(1) - finish fix but noisy.. sound volume down
03:19:846(1) - ^ ^
03:21:692(1) - ^ ^
03:23:443(1) - ^ ^
03:25:145(1) - ^ ^
03:26:777(1,2,3,4) - finish ^
03:29:853(1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:31:343(1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:50:323(2) - I think it's better if u use notes instant of slider here http://puu.sh/2sYeefix


[Insane]
03:04:846 This part need hitsound not fix but sound volume up
All good i guess??

Yup ~ That's all ~ Good luck !

Frostmourne wrote:

General
- add Display Epilepsy in the Taiko diff since SB is still working in this diff too fix
- better shows who made the Taiko Oni like "inaba-tan's Taiko Oni" , that might be better but I guess you can choose what you want fix
- all diffs are better without Letterbox Break, I highly suggest you remove the Letterbox Break in every diff fix
- I also suggest you remove "Enable Countdown" since it doesn't sound fitting with this moe song (at least in my opinion xD) i like this count down not fix
- You can also add tag : patchouli knowledge the embodiment of scarlet centennial festival for magical girls fix
according to this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53519 since it's the same theme (my map hehe )

Wafu's Easy
03:51:910 (2) - unsnapped note fix
03:52:616 (1) - unsnapped note fix

Hard
01:31:119 (1) - finish head better~~ fix
02:16:296 (1) - ^ fix
03:06:252 (x) - add a note here, this feels really empty and I think player might hit 03:06:486 (5) - too early because this blank is a bit unexpected fix
03:41:323 (1) - finish head :3 fix
03:54:028 (1) - this repeated slider isn't good in my opinion (from the 2 repeats) I think this rhythm plays better fix
add a note on 03:54:558 so that you have to remove the repeat on this slider 03:54:028 (1) - once fix
and change the tail's direction of 03:54:028 (1) - to the right side fix
here is example

SPOILER

Insane
AR8 is better than AR9 in my opinion because your diff doesn't have many jumps, it's fine if you want to keep AR9 but I think AR8 is better ~~ not fix Since it is felt late
03:13:517 (x) - add a note here will fit with blank vocal here not fix Since a weak jump is blank

inaba-tan wrote:

mod thx
http://puu.sh/2AA1e
diff名はお好きにどうぞ

eLtigreXXx wrote:

http://puu.sh/2AImt all done

Frostmourne wrote:

NYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYANNYAN

Good luck for the first map !

KiteAzure wrote:

Rank it pls

I gve u moeny

orioncomet wrote:

Since mapper haven't open my forum PM yet, guess I'll just post it (It was sent for 23hours+)

[inaba-tan's Taiko Oni]
- Uncheck Letterbox during breaks.
- Uncheck display epilepsy warning (Please only use this option when diffifulty is affect by stroyboard!)

[Wafu's Easy]
01:53:354 - Remove timing selection, it's not used.
and move timing selection here 01:53:443 to 01:53:707 instead.
03:38:694 - Remove timing selection.


修正が終了したら、ランクドするためにもう一度私を呼んでください。

orioncomet wrote:

おめでとうございます！

Kuria wrote:

yeeeeeeeeeesh finally T___T

congrats!!