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Topic Starter
Sherry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月14日 at 0:12:14

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Frightfully-insane Flan-chan's frightful song
Source: Touhou
Tags: Niconico Patchouli Knowledge the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil The Centennial Festival for Magical Girls flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx inaba-tan Wafu
BPM: 145
Filesize: 8440kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. eLtXXx's Normal (3.22 stars, 307 notes)
  2. Hard (4.57 stars, 354 notes)
  3. inaba-tan's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 1448 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 632 notes)
  5. Wafu's Easy (2.34 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Nanahira - Frightfully-insane Flan-chan's frightful song
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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物凄い勢いでけーねが物凄いうた
物凄い狂っとるフランちゃんが物凄いうた
nya~nya nya~nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya~
Easy :Wafu's map
Normal : eLtigreXXx's map
Hard : Sherry's map
Taiko Oni : inaba-tan's map
Insane :Sherry's map
kkflandre
 
Topic Starter
Sherry
お気に入り登録していただいた方すみません
再修正しちゃってます(´・ω・`)

SB、曲、BPM、offset修正
Deltaswing
随分変わりましたねw
個人的にはストリームが減って少し寂しいですが、これはこれで楽しめています。

さて、新参ではありますが一ファンとして1つだけ気になった点を申し上げます。

[Insane]
00:29:335 (5) - このスライダーですが、違和感がありました。1/8短くないですか?

曲、譜面ともに好きなので完成を心待ちにしています。
頑張ってください!
Topic Starter
Sherry

Naki23 wrote:

随分変わりましたねw
個人的にはストリームが減って少し寂しいですが、これはこれで楽しめています。

さて、新参ではありますが一ファンとして1つだけ気になった点を申し上げます。

[Insane]
00:29:335 (5) - このスライダーですが、違和感がありました。1/8短くないですか?

曲、譜面ともに好きなので完成を心待ちにしています。
頑張ってください!
Naki23さんありがとうございます!
再修正に抵抗があったのですが、さすがにRanked外の状態で放置はもったいないかなーと思って修正しちゃいました。

何かほかに気になる点や修正したほうがいい点ありましたら細かいことでも指摘ください!w


ps. 確かに1/8伸ばすの見落としてました (´・ω・`)b 修正しました
KokoroStudiox3
Accepting normal guest diff? :3
Topic Starter
Sherry

eLtigreXXx wrote:

Accepting normal guest diff? :3
Okay ;)
KokoroStudiox3
I start now :D
KokoroStudiox3
Topic Starter
Sherry

eLtigreXXx wrote:

done :3
Thx eltigreXXx I'm uploaded ;)
TicClick
You know what, I really want to see it finished. Have your timing:
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
778,413.793103448276,4,2,0,50,1,0
13967,-200,4,2,0,50,0,0
24033,504.201680672269,4,2,0,40,1,0
26730,612.244897959184,4,2,0,70,1,0
28413,-200,4,1,0,70,0,0
28999,352.941176470588,4,1,0,70,1,0
31822,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
57234,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
71351,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
85469,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
86881,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
88293,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
89704,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
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101351,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
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112293,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
113351,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
113440,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
130646,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
132057,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
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145116,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
145204,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
153234,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
154843,468.75,4,2,0,100,1,0
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203440,425.531914893617,4,1,0,100,1,0
205142,408.163265306122,4,1,0,100,1,0
206774,389.61038961039,4,1,0,80,1,0
208332,379.746835443038,4,1,0,80,1,0
209850,372.670807453416,4,1,0,80,1,0
211340,361.44578313253,4,1,0,80,1,0
212785,359.281437125748,4,1,0,100,1,0
215659,357.142857142857,4,1,0,100,1,0
218516,350.56967572305,4,1,0,100,1,0
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231201,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
231554,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
231907,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
232260,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
234024,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
243907,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Open your diff in Notepad and replace your [TimingPoints] section with this code. Save it, then press CTRL+L in editor. Do it for other diffs because it's easier than fix timing in osu! editor.

To other people: I fixed the second and the last sections, removed useless red lines and repaired speed-up (it wasn't finished).
Deltaswing
たびたびお邪魔します。
頂いたKudosu使わせていただきました!

未熟者ゆえ本当に簡単なModしかできませんが失礼します。

------------------------------

I have played [eLtigreXXx's Normal].

[eLtigreXXx's Normal](my idea)
00:40:277 (1) - spacing (x:220 y:36 -> x:220 y:48)
01:06:041 (2) - ^ (x:196 y:36 -> x:188 y:40)
02:25:805 (4) - ^ (x:160 y:204 -> x:156 y:208)
02:26:158 (5) - ^ (x:192 y:304 -> x:192 y:320)
02:38:589 (1) - ^ (02:38:589 (1,2,3,4) - x:96 y:132 -> x:80 y: 132)
02:42:339 (1) - ^ (02:42:339 (1,2,3) - x:64 y:104 -> x:100 y:104)
02:50:776 (2) - ^ (x:72 y:224 -> x:96 y:244)
02:53:589 (1) - ^ (02:53:589 (1,2) - x:368 y:156 -> x:372 y:156)
03:35:665 (1) - ^ (03:35:665 (1,2,3,4) - x:300 y:72 -> x:312 y:72)
03:42:048 (3) - ^ (x:60 y:108 -> x:32 y:124)

I think it will become more beautiful beatmap if you adjust any sliders' shape.

------------------------------

[Insane]
02:22:630 (1) - とても綺麗な配置なのですが、同じ位置のnoteが勝手にずれるせいで前のスライダーに被ってしまっています。
このコンボ(1~9)をまるごと右に1grid、下に2grid移動するとプレイ中も綺麗に収まると思います。

また、まことに勝手ながらTicClickさんの[TimingPosts]を使用してみました。
最後のサビで若干の遅れがあるような気がしていたのですが、それも解消されているようです。
使用されるといいかもしれません。
Topic Starter
Sherry
TicClick & Naki23 Thank you very much for moding my map :)
KokoroStudiox3

Naki23 wrote:

たびたびお邪魔します。
頂いたKudosu使わせていただきました!

未熟者ゆえ本当に簡単なModしかできませんが失礼します。

------------------------------

I have played [eLtigreXXx's Normal].all done

[eLtigreXXx's Normal](my idea)
00:40:277 (1) - spacing (x:220 y:36 -> x:220 y:48)
01:06:041 (2) - ^ (x:196 y:36 -> x:188 y:40)
02:25:805 (4) - ^ (x:160 y:204 -> x:156 y:208)
02:26:158 (5) - ^ (x:192 y:304 -> x:192 y:320)
02:38:589 (1) - ^ (02:38:589 (1,2,3,4) - x:96 y:132 -> x:80 y: 132)
02:42:339 (1) - ^ (02:42:339 (1,2,3) - x:64 y:104 -> x:100 y:104)
02:50:776 (2) - ^ (x:72 y:224 -> x:96 y:244)
02:53:589 (1) - ^ (02:53:589 (1,2) - x:368 y:156 -> x:372 y:156)
03:35:665 (1) - ^ (03:35:665 (1,2,3,4) - x:300 y:72 -> x:312 y:72)
03:42:048 (3) - ^ (x:60 y:108 -> x:32 y:124)

I think it will become more beautiful beatmap if you adjust any sliders' shape.

------------------------------

TicClick wrote:

You know what, I really want to see it finished. Have your timing: fixed
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
778,413.793103448276,4,2,0,50,1,0
13967,-200,4,2,0,50,0,0
24033,504.201680672269,4,2,0,40,1,0
26730,612.244897959184,4,2,0,70,1,0
28413,-200,4,1,0,70,0,0
28999,352.941176470588,4,1,0,70,1,0
31822,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
57234,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
71351,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
85469,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
86881,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
88293,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
89704,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
91116,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
100998,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
101351,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
101704,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
102057,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
112293,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
113351,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
113440,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
130646,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
132057,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
133469,-100,4,2,0,90,0,0
135940,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
136293,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
145116,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
145204,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
153234,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
154843,468.75,4,2,0,100,1,0
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218516,350.56967572305,4,1,0,100,1,0
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231201,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
231554,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
231907,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
232260,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
234024,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
243907,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Open your diff in Notepad and replace your [TimingPoints] section with this code. Save it, then press CTRL+L in editor. Do it for other diffs because it's easier than fix timing in osu! editor.

To other people: I fixed the second and the last sections, removed useless red lines and repaired speed-up (it wasn't finished).
thanks
I made ​​changes :)

Download: Nanahira - Frightfully-insane Flan-chan's frightful song (Sherry) [eLtigreXXx's Normal].rar
Elly-chan
Hey! I'm not sure if Nanahira did this vocal and produced it by herself, but if that is not the case, then add Halozy and Ultimate Synthesis to your tags. The song was produced by the circle Halozy as far as I know, and that's the album it was in. Also, if this was produced through Halozy which i'm pretty sure it was, add Sumi Jun and Izumi N to your tags. Sumi Jun arranged it, and Izumi N wrote the lyrics. >w<~

'Nanahira, known for her often perverted and very loli songs, has mixed up with Halozy and their touhou circle'
Topic Starter
Sherry

Elly-chan wrote:

Hey! I'm not sure if Nanahira did this vocal and produced it by herself, but if that is not the case, then add Halozy and Ultimate Synthesis to your tags. The song was produced by the circle Halozy as far as I know, and that's the album it was in. Also, if this was produced through Halozy which i'm pretty sure it was, add Sumi Jun and Izumi N to your tags. Sumi Jun arranged it, and Izumi N wrote the lyrics. >w<~

'Nanahira, known for her often perverted and very loli songs, has mixed up with Halozy and their touhou circle'
oh...
It did not know.

Ultimate Synthesis
Halozy
SumiJun
Izumin

added to the tag.
KokoroStudiox3
Topic Starter
Sherry

eLtigreXXx wrote:

I made some changes :3
thx eLtigreXXx
updated ;)
inaba-tan
taiko作っていいですか?
Topic Starter
Sherry

inaba-tan wrote:

taiko作っていいですか?
いいですよおおお
inaba-tan
Topic Starter
Sherry

inaba-tan wrote:

>w<
ありがとうございます!アップしました ;)
太鼓壁紙はあとでつけよう :?
Tsukasa
Hi there~ Randomly found this on the new feature ppy made on map list

eLtigre:

The 100% Hitsounds are too loud imo

00:19:812 (6) -- Add clap sound and the end of the slider
00:59:704 -- Add a note + Clap sound
01:05:351 -- ^
01:33:587 -- ^
01:44:881 -- ^
01:45:587 (2) -- Add a reverse arrow once and add a clap to the end
01:53:704 -- Break interval
01:58:646 -- I honestly don't get the purpose of this slider
02:18:763 -- Add note + Clap sound
02:42:343 (5) -- New combo
03:43:790 -- Add note + Clap sound
03:49:437 -- ^
03:55:084 -- ^
03:56:496 -- Add Clap
03:57:908 -- ^


Hard:

So I wonder why you have no hitsounds on the beginning... so Here's some suggestions and a few other things

SPOILER
00:29:351 (1) -- Add either Clap sound or Whistle sound
00:30:057 (2) -- ^
00:30:763 (3) -- ^ and the one at 00:31:116
00:31:469 (1) -- Remove new combo
00:31:822 (1,2) -- Either Clap or Whistle but i recommend Whistle
00:33:234 (1,2,3) -- Add Clap on the beginning of the slider and the note
00:34:646 (1,2,3) -- Add Finish sound to the beginning of the 2 1/4 sliders and the 1/2 slider + the end at 00:35:704
00:36:057 (1) -- Remove new combo and add Finish sound to the whole slider
00:37:822 (3,4,5) -- Add Clap sound. You can skip 4 but meh...
00:38:881 (1,2,3) -- Add Clap sounds to the beginning of the sliders and the note in between
00:40:293 (1,3) -- Finish sound at the beginning
00:40:822 (2,4) -- Finish sound on the whole slider
00:49:469 (3,4,5) -- Clap or Whistle
00:52:392 (3,4,5) -- ^
00:55:116 (3) -- ^
00:55:822 (4,5,6) -- Finish sound
01:21:234 (1,1) -- Invalid breaks. Remove them
01:36:234 (4) -- Clap
01:39:057 -- ^
01:53:704 -- Break interval
01:59:351 (1,1,1) -- Invalid breaks
02:18:587 -- Add note + Clap sound
02:21:410 (2) -- Add a Clap on this part of the slider
02:27:057 (3) -- ^
03:07:889 -- Add note (either 1 to make it a doubletap or 2 for a triple)
03:12:108 -- ^
03:13:514 -- Add a note here, move the 3 onto 03:13:632 , then add a note on 03:13:983. It should look like this

03:43:437 (3) -- Clap at the end
03:57:555 (3) -- ^

Insane:

00:29:351 (5,8,13) -- Clap on whole silder
00:32:881 (8) -- Clap on the beginning
00:34:999 (5,8,4) -- ^
00:37:116 (1) -- Clap
00:37:822 (1,4) -- Clap on beginning
00:39:234 (2,4,6,1) -- Clap
00:59:528 (8) -- Clap
01:02:351 (4) -- ^
01:05:175 (5) -- ^
01:07:998 (4) -- ^
01:36:057 (3) -- ^ at reverse arrow
01:44:704 (1) -- ^
01:45:940 (3) -- ^ at reverse arrow
01:50:351 (3) -- ^
01:53:704 -- Break Interval
02:18:587 (4) -- Clap
02:24:234 (9) -- ^
02:27:057 (6) -- ^
03:09:296 --
03:44:849 -- Clap on reverse arrow
KokoroStudiox3

[Tsukasa] wrote:

Hi there~ Randomly found this on the new feature ppy made on map list

eLtigre:

The 100% Hitsounds are too loud imo

00:19:812 (6) -- Add clap sound and the end of the slider
00:59:704 -- Add a note + Clap sound
01:05:351 -- ^
01:33:587 -- ^
01:44:881 -- ^
01:45:587 (2) -- Add a reverse arrow once and add a clap to the end
01:53:704 -- Break interval
01:58:646 -- I honestly don't get the purpose of this slider
02:18:763 -- Add note + Clap sound
02:42:343 (5) -- New combo
03:43:790 -- Add note + Clap sound
03:49:437 -- ^
03:55:084 -- ^
03:56:496 -- Add Clap
03:57:908 -- ^
thanks :)

Download: Nanahira - Frightfully-insane Flan-chan's frightful song (Sherry) [eLtigreXXx's Normal].rar
Topic Starter
Sherry

[Tsukasa] wrote:

Hi there~ Randomly found this on the new feature ppy made on map list

eLtigre:

The 100% Hitsounds are too loud imo

00:19:812 (6) -- Add clap sound and the end of the slider
00:59:704 -- Add a note + Clap sound
01:05:351 -- ^
01:33:587 -- ^
01:44:881 -- ^
01:45:587 (2) -- Add a reverse arrow once and add a clap to the end
01:53:704 -- Break interval
01:58:646 -- I honestly don't get the purpose of this slider
02:18:763 -- Add note + Clap sound
02:42:343 (5) -- New combo
03:43:790 -- Add note + Clap sound
03:49:437 -- ^
03:55:084 -- ^
03:56:496 -- Add Clap
03:57:908 -- ^


Hard:

So I wonder why you have no hitsounds on the beginning... so Here's some suggestions and a few other things

SPOILER
00:29:351 (1) -- Add either Clap sound or Whistle sound
00:30:057 (2) -- ^
00:30:763 (3) -- ^ and the one at 00:31:116
00:31:469 (1) -- Remove new combo
00:31:822 (1,2) -- Either Clap or Whistle but i recommend Whistle
00:33:234 (1,2,3) -- Add Clap on the beginning of the slider and the note
00:34:646 (1,2,3) -- Add Finish sound to the beginning of the 2 1/4 sliders and the 1/2 slider + the end at 00:35:704
00:36:057 (1) -- Remove new combo and add Finish sound to the whole slider
00:37:822 (3,4,5) -- Add Clap sound. You can skip 4 but meh...
00:38:881 (1,2,3) -- Add Clap sounds to the beginning of the sliders and the note in between
00:40:293 (1,3) -- Finish sound at the beginning
00:40:822 (2,4) -- Finish sound on the whole slider
00:49:469 (3,4,5) -- Clap or Whistle
00:52:392 (3,4,5) -- ^
00:55:116 (3) -- ^
00:55:822 (4,5,6) -- Finish sound
01:21:234 (1,1) -- Invalid breaks. Remove them
01:36:234 (4) -- Clap
01:39:057 -- ^
01:53:704 -- Break interval
01:59:351 (1,1,1) -- Invalid breaks
02:18:587 -- Add note + Clap sound
02:21:410 (2) -- Add a Clap on this part of the slider
02:27:057 (3) -- ^
03:07:889 -- Add note (either 1 to make it a doubletap or 2 for a triple)
03:12:108 -- ^
03:13:514 -- Add a note here, move the 3 onto 03:13:632 , then add a note on 03:13:983. It should look like this

03:43:437 (3) -- Clap at the end
03:57:555 (3) -- ^

Insane:

00:29:351 (5,8,13) -- Clap on whole silder
00:32:881 (8) -- Clap on the beginning
00:34:999 (5,8,4) -- ^
00:37:116 (1) -- Clap
00:37:822 (1,4) -- Clap on beginning
00:39:234 (2,4,6,1) -- Clap
00:59:528 (8) -- Clap
01:02:351 (4) -- ^
01:05:175 (5) -- ^
01:07:998 (4) -- ^
01:36:057 (3) -- ^ at reverse arrow
01:44:704 (1) -- ^
01:45:940 (3) -- ^ at reverse arrow
01:50:351 (3) -- ^
01:53:704 -- Break Interval
02:18:587 (4) -- Clap
02:24:234 (9) -- ^
02:27:057 (6) -- ^
03:09:296 --
03:44:849 -- Clap on reverse arrow

thx Tsukasa

updated ;)
KayeSara
nyan, nyan nyan, nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan~
So moe XD
liskun_old
こんにちは

よろしければ一点修正して欲しい箇所がございます。
背景とサークルの色が似かよっているので
できれば見やすいように修正できないでしょうか?

以上、ご検討のほどをお願い致します。
Topic Starter
Sherry

liskun wrote:

こんにちは

よろしければ一点修正して欲しい箇所がございます。
背景とサークルの色が似かよっているので
できれば見やすいように修正できないでしょうか?

以上、ご検討のほどをお願い致します。
的の色を濃くするか背景になにかしらいれるか検討します(´・ω・`)

的が出てる間に暗い背景いれるのがいいのかなー
KokoroStudiox3
Topic Starter
Sherry

eLtigreXXx wrote:

more updates :)

add "eLtigerXXx" in the tag

no kudosu
updated ;)
jamxx
10倍アイスクリーム!!!!

General

SBに使える画像の最大サイズをオーバーしているのがいくつかあるのでリサイズが必要です
ガイドラインより
The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively.
This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.
縦と横にそれぞれ最大で許容される解像度は、640x1440と1920x480までです。

03:04付近でBGが一瞬映るなどSBに少し雑な部分があったので修正してください

Hard
00:20:640 (1) - スライダーの折り返しの音はソフトでいいかも
00:32:528 (3,1) - このふたつ、左右対称にすると綺麗です
00:40:822 (2,4) - 形を揃える
01:04:293 (1) - hardにしては難しいので修正、上下逆にするだけでもいいかもです
02:14:881 (1,2,3,4) - SBとあってないので移動するか、SBを難易度ごとに分けてみては
03:13:632 (2) - 削除


Insane
00:33:234 (1) - 00:32:175 (5) - と重ねてみては
01:00:057 (1) - スピナーを入れるのは不自然に感じました
01:30:763 (1) - SBに合わせるため真ん中に移動
01:40:999 (1) - ここからのストリーム、プレイする時は左上にずれてしまうので01:40:646 (6,7) - と三角形になるように再配置
全部まとめてx244 y240に移動すると綺麗になります
01:53:351 (1) - これもSBに合わせて真ん中へ
02:24:763 (2) - (1)から斜めに入ってるのに対して(3)へは直線で入っているのでどちらかに統一するといいと思います
02:42:343 (1) - 02:41:171 (4) - と重ねる?
02:47:968 (1) - むむむ 個人的に汚く感じました
02:53:593 (1,4) - ずれているのはわざとですか?
03:35:659 (1) - ヒットサウンドつけたほうが10倍アイスクリーム
03:49:084 (3) - 普通のスライダーにするか、この形を維持するならもう少し綺麗に

ちょっと英語に自信がないのでNormalは見ていません。
日本語で良ければNormalもMODさせてもらいますが…。

ナイスマップ&SB~ふぁいと~
Topic Starter
Sherry

jamxx wrote:

10倍アイスクリーム!!!!

General

SBに使える画像の最大サイズをオーバーしているのがいくつかあるのでリサイズが必要です
ガイドラインより
The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively.
This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.
縦と横にそれぞれ最大で許容される解像度は、640x1440と1920x480までです。

03:04付近でBGが一瞬映るなどSBに少し雑な部分があったので修正してください

Hard
00:20:640 (1) - スライダーの折り返しの音はソフトでいいかも
00:32:528 (3,1) - このふたつ、左右対称にすると綺麗です
00:40:822 (2,4) - 形を揃える
01:04:293 (1) - hardにしては難しいので修正、上下逆にするだけでもいいかもです
02:14:881 (1,2,3,4) - SBとあってないので移動するか、SBを難易度ごとに分けてみては
03:13:632 (2) - 削除


Insane
00:33:234 (1) - 00:32:175 (5) - と重ねてみては
01:00:057 (1) - スピナーを入れるのは不自然に感じました
01:30:763 (1) - SBに合わせるため真ん中に移動
01:40:999 (1) - ここからのストリーム、プレイする時は左上にずれてしまうので01:40:646 (6,7) - と三角形になるように再配置
全部まとめてx244 y240に移動すると綺麗になります
01:53:351 (1) - これもSBに合わせて真ん中へ
02:24:763 (2) - (1)から斜めに入ってるのに対して(3)へは直線で入っているのでどちらかに統一するといいと思います
02:42:343 (1) - 02:41:171 (4) - と重ねる?
02:47:968 (1) - むむむ 個人的に汚く感じました
02:53:593 (1,4) - ずれているのはわざとですか?
03:35:659 (1) - ヒットサウンドつけたほうが10倍アイスクリーム
03:49:084 (3) - 普通のスライダーにするか、この形を維持するならもう少し綺麗に

ちょっと英語に自信がないのでNormalは見ていません。
日本語で良ければNormalもMODさせてもらいますが…。

ナイスマップ&SB~ふぁいと~
oh...

SBぎりぎり大丈夫かとおもってたらこえてますな。。lll

SB修正となると時間かかるので少々おまちください :?

modありがとうございました!
cookiegonyaa
Parts were nicely timed and map is well made ^^
I'm not sure, but i think the sb image at 1:55 has a small error there (It flashes white in the beginning)
Topic Starter
Sherry

cookiegonyaa wrote:

Parts were nicely timed and map is well made ^^
I'm not sure, but i think the sb image at 1:55 has a small error there (It flashes white in the beginning)

Picture size was corrected.
please download again. :?
riffy
nya-nya-nyaaaaaaaa~ eh.. i mean Hi!

from modreqs

[General]
same redsections/tags for all diffs

[Insane]
01:40:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too many notes are stcked. doesn't looks good
02:31:822 (1) - finish
03:04:843 (1) - NC here. it's a bug
04:03:908 - remove this green line or end spinner here :/

[Hard]
OD + 1 fits better here, imo
00:59:704 (1,1) - roove nc here oh here
03:49:261 (3) - http://puu.sh/Km3V

[Normal]
AR + 1 (THIS IS NORMAAAL)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well mapped. nice rythm <3
gl~
Topic Starter
Sherry

-Bakari- wrote:

nya-nya-nyaaaaaaaa~ eh.. i mean Hi!

from modreqs

[General]
same redsections/tags for all diffs ?
[Insane]
01:40:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too many notes are stcked. doesn't looks good changed
02:31:822 (1) - finish fix
03:04:843 (1) - NC here. it's a bug fix
04:03:908 - remove this green line or end spinner here :/ fix

[Hard]
OD + 1 fits better here, imo fix
00:59:704 (1,1) - roove nc here oh here
If a new combo is not used, it is unintelligibly, and it is not emphasized. Therefore, it does not change.
03:49:261 (3) - http://puu.sh/Km3V
Since continuous hits are not used until now, it is made not to use here.


[Normal]
AR + 1 (THIS IS NORMAAAL)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well mapped. nice rythm <3
gl~

thx moding !
KokoroStudiox3

-Bakari- wrote:

nya-nya-nyaaaaaaaa~ eh.. i mean Hi!

from modreqs

[General]
same redsections/tags for all diffs



[Normal]
AR + 1 (THIS IS NORMAAAL) oks
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well mapped. nice rythm <3
gl~
tags: niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx

http://puu.sh/KEhF c:
Topic Starter
Sherry

eLtigreXXx wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

nya-nya-nyaaaaaaaa~ eh.. i mean Hi!

from modreqs

[General]
same redsections/tags for all diffs



[Normal]
AR + 1 (THIS IS NORMAAAL) oks
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well mapped. nice rythm <3
gl~
tags: niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx

http://puu.sh/KEhF c:
updated ;)
NeNe_GoShyuJiN
awesome song.
plz ranked it lol
Topic Starter
Sherry

qazok4444 wrote:

awesome song.
plz ranked it lol
thx~ ;)
Topic Starter
Sherry
UPDATE 2012/8/11
-----------
SPOILER
[General]
Add Timing Point offset 22295 BPM140
Add Timing Point offset 23580 BPM135
And adjusted

[Insane]
change Slider Velocity 160->200
change Circle Size -1
Approach Rate +1
And Timing and circle position fix

---------------------------
UPDATE 2012/8/12
--------------------------
SPOILER
[Insane]
HP Drain Rate -1
change Circle Size +1
Change 00:14:019 - 00:16:915

--------------------------
UPDATE 2012/8/13
--------------------------
SPOILER
[Insane]
add hit sound 00:15:053 - 00:15:467
change 02:42:343 - 02:45:624 , 02:49:843 - 02:56:874
change 03:32:785 - 03:35:479

change beatmap help -> pedding map :?
Marcin
[Normal]
00:17:329 (1,2) - how about
01:58:646 (1) - Timing is wrong here - I mean that end of slider doesn't fit music, try to snap end of slider to 1/4 blue tick, i know it's normal but it's necessary to play well :c
03:01:093 (1) - correct it to make it symmetric.
03:29:850 (5) - NC
Good diff \:D/
[Hard]
02:01:204 - Remove break here
02:02:528 - ^
02:10:646 (1,2,3,4) - Feels strange while playing, i don't hear what should i follow, you can ignore this if you want.
03:06:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stacking is strange , (1,2,3) have different space to (4) than (5,6) to (7)
03:10:468 (5) - NC
03:49:261 (3) - This doesn't sound good and doesn't fit (hitsounds).
[Insane]
00:24:024 (1) - I'd suggest removing spinner, and put some notes here - it's insane isn't it? <spinners are supposed to be easy...>
02:30:410 (1,1,1,1) - How about 1/8 sliders?
03:29:850 (1,1,1) - NO SHIT, I EXCEPTED SOMETHING REALLY EPIC... what's that, i don't even...
03:19:843 (1,1,1,1) - You can make square pattern
03:26:774 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here i can hear 1/8 rhythm, why don't you use it?
Topic Starter
Sherry

Marcin wrote:

[Normal]
00:17:329 (1,2) - how about
01:58:646 (1) - Timing is wrong here - I mean that end of slider doesn't fit music, try to snap end of slider to 1/4 blue tick, i know it's normal but it's necessary to play well :c
03:01:093 (1) - correct it to make it symmetric.
03:29:850 (5) - NC
Good diff \:D/
NOT YET
[Hard]
02:01:204 - Remove break here fix
02:02:528 - ^ fix
02:10:646 (1,2,3,4) - Feels strange while playing, i don't hear what should i follow, you can ignore this if you want. changed
03:06:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stacking is strange , (1,2,3) have different space to (4) than (5,6) to (7) changed
03:10:468 (5) - NC fix
03:49:261 (3) - This doesn't sound good and doesn't fit (hitsounds). change hitsound
[Insane]
00:24:024 (1) - I'd suggest removing spinner, and put some notes here - it's insane isn't it? <spinners are supposed to be easy...> umm...

02:30:410 (1,1,1,1) - How about 1/8 sliders? but score....

03:29:850 (1,1,1) - NO SHIT, I EXCEPTED SOMETHING REALLY EPIC... what's that, i don't even...
03:19:843 (1,1,1,1) - You can make square pattern
03:26:774 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here i can hear 1/8 rhythm, why don't you use it?

changed but....s..c..o...r....


thx modiding!

UPDATE 2012/8/18
KokoroStudiox3
Missing Skin Files
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
ready.png
go.png

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [eLtigreXXx's Normal] : 0
- [Hard] : 0
- [inaba's Taiko] : 2007
- [Insane] : 0

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [eLtigreXXx's Normal] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx
- [Hard] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin
- [inaba's Taiko] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin Inaba-tan
- [Insane] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin




- Consider adding "inaba-tan" to all of your tags
tag:niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx inaba-tan


Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
- [eLtigreXXx's Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:024, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 98.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:024, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 98.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000

- [inaba's Taiko]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:033, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 98.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000

- [Insane]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:024, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 96.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000


[Hard]
Snapping
00:24:024 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
03:04:839 - snap to 03:04:843

Insane
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:28:413 - snap to 00:28:448
03:04:839 - snap to 03:04:843


skin
Missing/Unnecessary files in the package
The map has skin with an image file missing, or there's unnecessary files in the song folder.

Missing skin files

When most people use skins, they always miss the fact that skins should not mix incorrectly with the skin a user might have set. This can be very confusing or look ugly. This can be fixed either by adding the missing skin files or forcing a certain skin.

If you wish to use a certain custom object in your beatmap, make sure to use the full set.

The current object sets are as follows:

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Slider:
sliderb.png
sliderfollowcircle.png
*Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

*Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

*Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

*Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

*Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

*Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

*Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

*Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

*Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

*Fruits:
fruit-apple.png
fruit-apple-overlay.png
fruit-grapes.png
fruit-grapes-overlay.png
fruit-orange.png
fruit-orange-overlay.png
fruit-pear.png
fruit-pear-overlay.png
fruit-drop.png

All the other skin elements are considered independent from each other.

Unnecessary files

Often when including skin, the mapper includes useless elements to the song folder, such as mod selection icons. The osz package must be as clean as possible, so any unnecessary file needs to be deleted before ranking, regardless of what it might be.

This might be fixed at submission later on, but for now, any file that is in the song folder will be uploaded and included in the .osz file.



my diff :3 → http://puu.sh/WR0y all done
thanks c:::
Topic Starter
Sherry

eLtigreXXx wrote:

Missing Skin Files
hitcircleoverlay.png add file
approachcircle.png add file
reversearrow.png add file
spinner-clear.png add file
spinner-spin.png add file
spinner-osu.png add file
ready.png add file
go.png add file

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [eLtigreXXx's Normal] : 0 -> 2000
- [Hard] : 0 -> 2000
- [inaba's Taiko] : 2007 -> 2000
- [Insane] : 0 -> 2000

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [eLtigreXXx's Normal] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx
- [Hard] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin
- [inaba's Taiko] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin Inaba-tan
- [Insane] : niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin




- Consider adding "inaba-tan" to all of your tags
tag:niconico U.N.Owen was her? flandre scarlet Ultimate Synthesis Halozy SumiJun Izumin eLtigreXXx inaba-tan

ALL tag Changed(added)

Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
- [eLtigreXXx's Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:024, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 98.000 -> 00:26:734, BPM of 96.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:024, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 98.000 -> 00:26:734, BPM of 96.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000

- [inaba's Taiko]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:033, BPM of 119.000 -> 00:24:024
00:26:730, BPM of 98.000 -> 00:26:734, BPM of 96.000
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000

- [Insane]
Red timing sections at:
00:00:778, BPM of 145.000
00:22:295, BPM of 140.000
00:23:580, BPM of 135.000
00:24:024, BPM of 119.000
00:26:730, BPM of 96.000 -> 00:26:734
00:28:999, BPM of 170.000
02:34:843, BPM of 128.000
03:19:843, BPM of 130.000
03:21:689, BPM of 137.000
03:23:440, BPM of 141.000
03:25:142, BPM of 147.000
03:26:774, BPM of 154.000
03:28:332, BPM of 158.000
03:29:850, BPM of 161.000
03:31:340, BPM of 166.000
03:32:785, BPM of 167.000
03:35:659, BPM of 168.000
03:38:516, BPM of 171.150
03:41:320, BPM of 170.000


[Hard]
Snapping
00:24:024 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end). fix
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
03:04:839 - snap to 03:04:843 fix

Insane
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:28:413 - snap to 00:28:448 fix
03:04:839 - snap to 03:04:843 fix


skin
Missing/Unnecessary files in the package
The map has skin with an image file missing, or there's unnecessary files in the song folder.

Missing skin files

When most people use skins, they always miss the fact that skins should not mix incorrectly with the skin a user might have set. This can be very confusing or look ugly. This can be fixed either by adding the missing skin files or forcing a certain skin.

If you wish to use a certain custom object in your beatmap, make sure to use the full set.

The current object sets are as follows:

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Slider:
sliderb.png
sliderfollowcircle.png
*Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

*Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

*Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

*Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

*Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

*Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

*Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

*Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

*Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

*Fruits:
fruit-apple.png
fruit-apple-overlay.png
fruit-grapes.png
fruit-grapes-overlay.png
fruit-orange.png
fruit-orange-overlay.png
fruit-pear.png
fruit-pear-overlay.png
fruit-drop.png

All the other skin elements are considered independent from each other.

Unnecessary files

Often when including skin, the mapper includes useless elements to the song folder, such as mod selection icons. The osz package must be as clean as possible, so any unnecessary file needs to be deleted before ranking, regardless of what it might be.

This might be fixed at submission later on, but for now, any file that is in the song folder will be uploaded and included in the .osz file.



my diff :3 → http://puu.sh/WR0y all done
thanks c:::
thx modding!
UPDATE 2012/8/22
KokoroStudiox3
everything is alright :3
Mgd
好图啊,我很喜欢 :) 就是皮肤太花容易和背景图片搞混 ;)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
nice map :)
Topic Starter
Sherry
Thank you, everyone ;)

UPDATE 2012/08/26

Change 00:30:410 - 00:30:940
Beatmap Help -> Pending Beatmaps
Wafu
Naaah! I wanted to make guest diff (easy), but I see that you moved to pending. :(

Edit: Completed
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