Mod per Ayyri's request here
t+pazolite - Non Venda Rally
- 00:34:513 (34513|1) - Probably the only part where the notes weigh more for the right hand compared with the other parts ahead. Move 00:32:068 (32068|2,32179|1) - to the left once.
- 00:34:513 (34513|1) - TBH I can't seem to make sense how you layer the notes. It's as if you want to layer double at 00:33:068 - for being an obvious lead but then you dropped it at 00:33:402 - and make it single instead. It's a pretty inconsistent layering. Either keep doing one note per sound or make sounds like 00:33:402 - double for being lead too.
- 01:14:735 - I'm still confused about your layering. At some point you layer the bass and the next time you don't. It occurs in the same measuresets ( 01:17:402 - for example) so I don't really think it works as a pattern variation. You need to be consistent on what to follow and what not. 2nd part is the same so I think you know the drill.
- 00:12:735 (12735|1) - You can move this to |3| since previous patterns ( 00:12:068 - and 00:12:402 - ) players need to alternate their hands when playing.
- 00:29:291 (29291|2,29957|2) - You can move these to |2| for a pretty balanced pattern for Novices and also filling the other column so it wouldn't be completely empty.
- 00:32:846 - are different compared to 00:35:513 - and 00:43:513 - and that bugs me a lot hahah. Just stick with one kind of layering so Novices can adapt with the rhythm pretty well.
- 00:42:179 (42179|3) - I don't think doing this is wise for Novices. End the LN at 00:42:846 - so Novices wouldn't need extra effort to time the release of the LNs. Also applies to the next sections like 00:44:846 (44846|0) - 00:50:179 (50179|2) -
- 00:41:846 (41846|1,41957|0,42068|1) - I would really suggest you to avoid doing this kind of thing one-handed as it would be hard for Novices to play. Well there are so many of this in the next sections so I would suggest you to do the same for the next occurence.
- 01:32:624 (92624|0) - Would suggest you to delete this for a simpler rhythm.
- 01:32:735 (92735|3) - The LN should starts at 01:32:846 - and the normal notes should be placed at 01:32:735 - since that's how the melody in this section works.