this isn't meramipop!
nice map! i really like the last 20 seconds
eviltan
- i am a fan of low ar, but consider raising the ar to 9.4 or even just 9.3? the high bpm plus the patterns like 00:33:922 (1,2,3,4) - that you use make it quite the challenge at this lower ar and it feels almost a little off to read/play because of it
- 00:38:601 - i would suggest using another sample for this drum sound, your current hitsound sounds really weird and almost bubbly more than drum like? thats the best way i can describe how it sounds to me
- 00:52:362 (3,4,5,6) - your line isn't straight which ruins the effect of the line D:
- 00:59:243 (4,5) - blanket
- 01:07:225 (3,4) - imo this pattern would look a lot cooler/more consistent with 01:06:124 (1,2) - if you just stacked 01:08:050 (4) - on the slider end of 3
- 01:09:977 (1) - wouldn't it be better to make this note a slider like 01:09:151 (6) - since you're following the vocals here? making it two clicks is a little odd
- 01:44:518 (1) - if you remove NC on this and put it on 01:44:656 (2) - it will be 100000x more clear that this starts on the blue tick, its really misleading right now
- 01:49:610 (1,2,3) - consider nerfing this spacing VERY slightly to make it a bit more readable, this could really easily be read as 1/4 spacing with stuff like 01:47:959 (1,2,3) - being so close
- 02:13:968 (1,2) - maybe make this a ctrl h'd 02:13:693 (1,2) - for better aesthetic/playability? is there a reason it is how it is right now that i'm missing? it seems a little off both playing wise and how it looks
- 02:24:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - slightly slighty buff spacing so it wont be confused for 1/8?
- 02:50:986 (6) - might seem like an odd suggestion, but try ctrl ging this for the circular flow with 02:50:161 (3,4,5) - imo it would be really satisfying to play
- 02:54:564 (6,4) - you should just stack these tbh since you stack 02:54:564 (6,2) - it'll be much cleaner this way
- 02:56:491 (1,1,2) - use a softer sample set for this without the loud loud drums, it sounds super off time because you're following the guitar with drum hitsounds where there aren't drum notes
- 03:21:261 - gonna ignore this drum roll here? sounds really juicy and mappable especially considering you map them all here 03:27:867 -
- 04:35:732 (2,3,4) - make the distance between these even
nice map! i really like the last 20 seconds