1. Basic (1.08 stars, 46 notes)
   
2. Medium (1.33 stars, 53 notes)

Basic by me
Medium by me
Hitsounds by Gabe (after disqualification)

FlexxicE wrote:

Easy:
00:08:303 (1) - According to the ranking criteria you should avoid 1/1 sliders with multiple reverses fixed (i think)

Storyboard:
The blacked intro and outro could need a bit stretching, because it would look better with a fully filled screen and a bit smoother transition could be needed, because new players could get suprisied. Also the frost and greyscale image need a bit adaption. i don't understand what you mean D: as for the black however i think it is fullscreen

All in all it looked fine for me but it's also my first mod, hope I could help. you did. thanks!

Joe Castle wrote:

hi! im here from #modreqs to see if i can help you with you map! whatever you say helps. thanks!
lets see what you have: alright


Easy:

1. 00:00:667 (1,1) - make a bit more of spacing between this objects. they are a bit too close fixed i think

2. 00:06:667 (4,5,1) - add a bit more of spacing here too idk if it's fixed or not but i tried

3. 00:08:303 (1,2) - a bit more spacing between this objects too i updated before viewing this mod so i think it's fixed

4. 00:13:758 (2,1) - add a bit more spacing here too according to ds i can't really space this anymore, i think it's fine though

5. 00:16:485 (2,3,4) - this should have equal spacing (and add a bit more of spacing between them too) fixed

6. 00:24:667 (5,6,1,2) - this should have the same spacing between them too fixed

7. 00:29:576 (3,4) - separate them a bit more fixed i think

8. 00:32:849 (1,2,3) - make this objects have the same spacing between them fixed i think

9. 00:36:667 (5,6) - add the same spacing you made between 00:34:485 (3,4) fixed?

10. 00:39:394 (1,2,3) - this objects should have the same spacing between them fixed

11. 00:45:940 (1,1) - separate this a bit more, they are too close of each other fixed

12. 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8290845 and make them have the same spacing between them nice! fixed


Normal:

1. 00:13:212 (1,2) - in this part, just a straight line doesnt fit, try doing this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8290773 it will flow with the piano way better it does flow better! i had a little hard time with the slider shape but.. fixed

2. 00:29:576 (4,5,6) - this objects should have the same spacing between them, since the third slider is a bit far from the circle. did you mean 4,5,6? if so, fixed

3. 00:32:849 (1,2,3) - try doing something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8290797 it will flow a bit better in that way fixed i think,
i didn't understand what you did there

thats all, i hope this mod helps you uwu it did! thank you so much!

FlexxicE wrote:

I made screenshots of the parts I mean, you can see them in the box below. As you can see in them, there are some uncovered bars on the left and right side of the original background. Also for a bit more smoothness you could change these images to slowly fade in and fade out again, so that they are longer visible.

I hope I made it more understandable this time

Screenshots

I had no idea! Thanks for telling me this

Cris_1 wrote:

#modreqs yay

General: Your mapset had some problems with SB (you can see this on AiMod), fix this please. only thing i saw was it needs an epilepsy warning, so i added that

Easy
Imo this needs more DS (1,2x maybe) thanks but i think i'll keep at the ds rn

1. 00:05:031 (3) - NC fixed
2. 00:23:031 (4) - ^ fixed
3. 00:08:303 (1,2,3) - Bad flow, i suggest put 2 above 00:07:758 (5) and 3 right down from this i think it's fine where it is, but if a few more mods come about this i'll TRY to fix it
4. 00:51:940 (5) - Remove and start spinner here i feel something needs to be clicked here

Normal

1. 00:13:212 (1,2) - Fix blanket tried to fix it
2. 00:22:485 (2) - Put this directly to the tail of 1 i don't understand what you mean here
3. 00:29:576 (4) - NC? fixed
4. 00:37:758 (1) - I suggest put this above from 00:34:485 (3) to me it's fine where it is
5. 00:51:940 (3) - Same on easy (remove and put spinner here). Imo emphasizes better

GL~ thanks!

Sidetail wrote:

[general]
as a post-sber myself (SB maker of 1 and 2 Just as a reference xD), i can give you some tips on reducing load for sb

you tried to use sb/circle (which doesn't exist (atleast not in the folder))

your "thank.png" is faded out for entire time... and your "for playing.png" / "kawaii.png" is out of bound.

and your sb isnt very efficient (usages of black.png while you can just fade off the bg), so i fixed it for you: https://puu.sh/weUOV/98f099a71b.zip (make sure you back up your current files (osb & sb folder) , so that you can go back to it if you dont like it and those extra sprites.)

^ on top of that sb, you just need to add "thanks for playing owo" pictures on there thank you for fixing my storyboard! i am a HORRIBLE sb mapper xd

[normal]
00:16:485 (2) - bend this so that it fits nicely with 00:17:576 (3) - and offers more flow bent it a tiny bit (wow that does flow)
00:26:849 (1,2) - not sure why these need vol boost since i dont see a reason for it.. i feel it does but i'll lower it to 40%

good. I like it. i'm not experienced with mapping normals so i'm glad you said that!

[easy]
check AiMod (there is some distance things to perhaps fix) fixed
00:06:667 (4,5,1) - I do think you can make DS just enough big so that objects dont touch. Its just things that drives me nuts i feel this is fine however it does make me a little insane too, but in this case i think i'll keep it unless few more mods ask about this
00:08:303 (1,2,3) - ^ yeah it doesn't look very nice. hope you fix it! (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ okay i tried to fix it
00:35:576 (4,5) - this should've been switched around circle-> slider feels better, ending on downbeat with sliderend seems odd i don't see a need to fix it though, i feel it still goes with rhythm
00:40:485 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:52:485 (1) - have the spinner start at 00:52:212 so that players have just a bit more time to spin (you did it on normal actually) fixed

hope that helps. if you need help with sb or questions in general, just ask me okay, thanks!

CutEddie wrote:

Hi! >-<

Two things to list :3
- Normal Mod
- Guest difficulty

So here is the short mod to both difficulties ^^ (mostly suggestions)

EASY

00:08:303 (1,2) - You could make that 1 slider body fit perfectly the 2, but not the most necessary. c: fffff i have no idea how to fix or understand what you said :c
00:14:849 (1) - Maybe reverse body direction, so it ends in the way to the next note incoming. i don't understand this
00:31:212 (4) - Same ^ ^
00:34:485 (3,4) - You could make the slider bodies bent to the opposite direction -> 3 to the botton and 4 top the top, so the concept is the same but 4 goes directly to the next circle. sorry don't understand
00:48:667 (2,3) - ugh Theres an odd stack here, it's better to keep it to the same spacing, no overlaps and no big spacing. this is consistent spacing (according to aimod) so i think i should keep it
00:50:775 (4) - Same ^ ^
00:51:940 (5) - Feel free to increase spacing here to enphasize it as it is the last note . i did 2 followpoints

NORMAL

00:08:303 (1) - Bent the slider body to the top, so you take it from the last note, and go directly to the next one. tried to fix
00:16:485 (2) - Reverse slider with Ctrl + G, so it keeps flow. i can't do it.. rip mac
00:51:940 (3) - As said in Easy difficulty: Feel free to enphasize it with more spacing as it is the last note in the map c: . i did 2 followpoints again

About the Guest Difficulty:
I would like to make a guest difficulty (how strange lol XD) , but I will do it as long as there's at least a 1% chance you take it (being rejected so many times :c) and obviously, if you let me to do so. it depends. if it's like easy or normal that's fine, just hitsound for me (i can if you want) and make it less than 1.32 for me!

I have put so much efford into a 50 seconds mod LOL but anyway beautiful song ♥ thank you so much! i hope you like the map

CutEddie wrote:

HEYYYY GUEST DIFF + HITSOUNDING FINISHED XD

Code :3

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: A Land Resplendent With Nature's Beauty.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 26801
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

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Title:Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni
TitleUnicode:Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni
Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:Nyantiaz
Version:Eddie's Beginner
Source:東方Project
Tags:Touhou Piano Gensoukyou kara chou Koutetsu Juutei Bakuon 幻想郷から超鋼鉄重低爆音 C78 ZUN Three Moon Fairies Sangetsusei 東方三月精 ～ Strange and Bright Nature Deity 1 Team Shanghai Alice A Land Resplendent With Nature's Beauty 上海アリス幻樂団 Gengakudan Yukimura Hirano Sunny Milk Luna Child Star Sapphire byby
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Took me more time the hitsounding than the actual mapping LOL XD

The hitsounding is wrong though you forgot to use whistle and finish thing however i still added and i put the whistle etc

Error- wrote:

NM from my queue as requested by Eddie.

[Easy]
00:03:394 (2,1) - the circular flow is a bit off.

img

RED: Real movement (without flow)
GREEN: Expected movement (with flow)

00:08:303 (1,2) - This can be used as a blanket instead, it feels weird also it overlaps.
00:19:758 (1,2) - tbh I dont really sure if a 90 degree flow will work, as you dont do it in the other parts of the diff
00:26:849 (1,2) - Fix circular flow.
00:29:576 (3,4) - something like

img

00:37:212 (6) - I beleive 00:37:758 - should be clickable.
00:48:667 (2,3) - Even so the spacing is interrupted by BPM Change, please make the spacing same as 00:47:576 (1,2) - becouse it looks bad due to overlap, also the flow isnt that good.
00:49:212 (3,4) - ^

[Twin Normal]
00:09:940 (3,4) - Posibble blanket
00:27:940 (2) - A curve is better imo
00:43:758 (4,5) - unperfect blanket
00:48:667 (1,2,3) - Save problem as Easy.

[Complexion]
Overall the diff is fine, just check some posibble blanket like 00:32:849 (1,3,4) - so it looks better.

anyway gl.

tatatat wrote:

Why does the CS differ between the Normal and Complexion difficulty? oh my bad fixed Btw, I'm not sure if the Normal is considered a normal, since it is only 1.11*, attempt to make a difficulty that is more than 1.50* to follow the ranking criteria. check https://osu.ppy.sh/s/257739 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347942 it's completely rankableDon't forget to add the guest difficulty mapper's name to the tags. i didYou might also want to clean those tags up a little. Whats "byby CutEddie" supposed to mean? other mappers tags
I searched through every song of the Undead Corporation's on last.fm and I couldn't find a song with the name of this map in japanese or romaji. I highly doubt the title of the song is in romaji. Please find a reputable source with the title. You must have correct metadata in order to have your map be rankable. this is the metadata every other map (i put above) used, so i just went with those I'm sorry I can't be of any further help with this. I spent about 30 minutes searching for the song title myself. sorry, in english is "A Land Resplendent Of Nature's Beauty"
Why does the map's background cut out entirely due to the storyboard around 00:41:576 - You can't just have a black background. Similar at 00:00:000 -
I'm not sure if you need to include an epilepsy warning for your map. The storyboard seems very simple. epilepsy was for previous storyboard, and i'll have to talk to the person that made the sb
Consider using less vibrant combo colors and instead use more dried out colors (colors with high saturation and luminosity) I think less vibrant colors would fit the map better. but why? o_o
00:49:212 - Consider using slider velocity changes here and in the following BPM changes to make the slider velocity constant. in all diffs?
if so fixed
Example of how you could do that:
Twin Normal:
00:19:758 - Start a new combo here? A new combo is started during a similar rhythm at 00:26:849 - fixed
00:13:212 - Maybe map each individual note here instead of using a reverse slider? fixed

Maybe make a diff without slider's at all to increase the difficulty? i don't see why i'd do that tbh