ezek wrote:
Hi! nice mapset, but I think it still has room for improvement~
Gap between Easy and Normal
The Normal difficulty uses a lot of 1/2 rhythm throughout the whole song. It's a fact that the 1/2 usage is very high in Normal, but it is acceptable because it doesn't go too far for a Normal diff due the bpm being very low. However, the Easy diff uses almost exclusively 1/1 rhythm with no variations, and you introduced 1/2 rhythm until 02:14:761 (2) - which is past the half of the map. The difference in playability feels pretty big between your Easy and Normal diffs and I think that can be improved. I don't understand how can a spread between easy and normal be bad when easy should be notably easier than normal not just low sr normal. Also in this era an easy is not even an obligation but rather just a fine addition to the set.
Yes, an easy should be notably easier than a normal, but the difference here is too big, just look at both diffs and play them (and when did I mention sr?). Perhaps your high skill at playing doesn't let you feel the big difference in these low diffs because they're too easy for you. I already explained my points and threw suggestions to improve it. Also, just because an easy difficulty is optional doesn't mean you can have a big gap in difficulty.MaridiuS wrote:
I don't understand how can a spread between easy and normal be bad when easy should be notably easier than normal not just low sr normal. Also in this era an easy is not even an obligation but rather just a fine addition to the set.
You should read this ~ if i replied 'i do not agree with that' : You do not know that my style mapping is almost always following an instrumental beat rather than a vocal (so the beats are not strange when they playing and deviate on its BPM). But if there is a vocal sound with the same instrument beat on one section 'example at 02:15:317 (3) - , then I will add it. If not, then I will pay more attention to the instrument and ignore the vocal sound.ezek wrote:
Hi! nice mapset, but I think it still has room for improvement~
Gap between Easy and Normal
The Normal difficulty uses a lot of 1/2 rhythm throughout the whole song. It's a fact that the 1/2 usage is very high in Normal, but it is acceptable because it doesn't go too far for a Normal diff due the bpm being very low. However, the Easy diff uses almost exclusively 1/1 rhythm with no variations, and you introduced 1/2 rhythm until 02:14:761 (2) - which is past the half of the map. The difference in playability feels pretty big between your Easy and Normal diffs and I think that can be improved. - It's meant that gap between easy and normal that i made it's too far?
[Easy]
Aside from spread, I have a big concern about this difficulty, which I kind of mentioned above. The thing is that in this difficulty you give exclusive use of 1/1 rhythm from 00:00:873 - until 02:14:761 - . The map is pretty much the mapping of the metronome and nothing feels especially represented or emphasized due to the lack of rhythm variation, which also makes it a boring difficulty to play :c - now I understand it more about rhythm variation. Thank you!
I have some suggestions that can improve the music representation and make the spread better than it is right now:Okay
- 00:01:984 (2) - Make this slider a 1/2 slider with a repetition, then remove the repetition from 00:03:095 (3) - and add a 1/2 slider with a repetition at 00:04:206 - . The result will be this. This suggestion doesn't make the map any harder, but helps to make the map feel more unique and represents the song with more accuracy. Your current patterns could simply be applied to any song of the same bpm and fit, since is just mapped to the metronome and nothing else feels specially mapped for this specific song. The same suggestion applies to 00:05:317 (1,2,3,4) - this part because it is identical. Okay~
- 00:10:873 (2) - & 00:15:317 (2) - Make these sliders 1/2 with a repetition. Okay
- 00:19:761 (2) - Make this 1/2 with repeat and then make 00:22:539 (4) - this into a 1/2 slider like this without a repeat (to give more representation to the vocals and add more challenge, plus it is a nice variation for the patterns) (note: using a single 1/2 slider without repeat this way is not too hard for an easy at this bpm). The whole rhythm suggested will look like this. The suggestion applies to 00:23:095 (1,2,3,4) - and the following sections before the first kiai and between the first and second kiais.i'll considering that
- Moving on to kiai section. 00:56:150 - You could add a circle here and then make 00:58:095 (4) - a 1/2 slider without a repeat. The whole suggested rhythm would look like this. i'll considering that
- 01:00:317 (2) - make 1/2 slider and add circle at 01:02:817 - . The rhythm would look like this. Okay
- 01:05:039 - Add circle and make 01:06:984 (4) - this into a 1/2 slider~ rhythm. The suggestions in this kiai also apply to the other two kiais.
[Normal]I don't agree with the map in its current state, but I'm not vetoing it, which means that I let you call squirrelp to rebubble even if you don't agree with me. Just think what is best for your map.
- 00:23:095 (1) - Right now this feels like part of just 1/2 rhythm spam. I suggest to remove the repeat and make this a 1/1 slider to represent the extended vocal. This suggestion also applies to 00:27:539 (1) - , 00:36:428 (1) - , 01:25:317 (1) - , 01:29:761 (1) - and 01:38:650 (1) - . Nah.. it's my mistakes~
- 02:15:317 (3) - I suggest to delete this slider and leave a circle to represent the pause in the vocals. I agree with it
Then you could continue with a slider at 02:15:873 - . The suggested rhythm would look like this. -It's mean that i must remove the notes at 02:17:539? i don't like to ignoring inst. beat- 02:17:539 (3) - The vocal in the middle of the slider is very prevalent and feels weird to leave it there ignored imo. I suggest to delete the slider and add a 1/2 slider at 02:17:817 - to follow it, and it also represents the pause in the vocals just as in the previous suggestion. The suggested rhythm would be this I don't think that. i think it's better to change the 1/2 beat at 02:17:539 (3) with repetition
I'm not arguing i'm just talking about this point ;p the other points seem fine.ezek wrote:
Yes, an easy should be notably easier than a normal, but the difference here is too big, just look at both diffs and play them (and when did I mention sr?). Perhaps your high skill at playing doesn't let you feel the big difference in these low diffs because they're too easy for you. I already explained my points and threw suggestions to improve it. Also, just because an easy difficulty is optional doesn't mean you can have a big gap in difficulty.MaridiuS wrote:
I don't understand how can a spread between easy and normal be bad when easy should be notably easier than normal not just low sr normal. Also in this era an easy is not even an obligation but rather just a fine addition to the set.
Anyway, I'm not even vetoing the map, I'm letting the map get rebubbled even if the mapper disagrees with me (I don't like vetos tbh), so there's no point in arguing with me lol
Thank You~ezek wrote:
Nice~ I just have one more suggestion~
[Normal]I don't think so.. because it has combine snap between vocal and inst.
- 02:11:984 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to replace these notes with 1/1 circles for emphasis on the stronger instrumental part, like this.
Whether you accept or not accept this suggestion, I'm already fine with the map, so contact squirrelp and Cerulean Veyron for your nominations. I won't nominate myself because they were here before me~
Good luck!
u actually didnt fix this on ez diff lolFunnyA wrote:
ezek wrote:
- 01:00:317 (2) - make 1/2 slider and add circle at 01:02:817 - . The rhythm would look like this. Okay
Don't worry, it doesn't matter anymore. We worked on the rhythms after the reply and we left that out.Cerulean Veyron wrote:
u actually didnt fix this on ez diff lolFunnyA wrote:
ezek wrote:
- 01:00:317 (2) - make 1/2 slider and add circle at 01:02:817 - . The rhythm would look like this. Okay
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02:28:650 (3) - 02:30:873 (3) - wudnt it be best if this wer to be some 1/2 repeat slider? just in case u wanna amplify vocals or sth. circle + slidr works well too in thsi one, ya. rite after u do that, u may also want to just redo tis slider into casual 1/1 slide for rhythm on 02:29:761 (1) - sth like https://puu.sh/zNmLy/fbbf92e9a9.png i'll considering that
02:56:428 (1) - u cud try replacing this slidr into two 1/2 circles cuz 02:56:428 (1) - . or u can do the other way if u prefer taht kind of rhythm. well at least u can do w/e possible as long as it follows both vocals and some weird beat ur following Good idea.. but i'll make difference rhythm
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