all fix-Nitrous wrote:
hi dadSorry I can't mod as much as the other two... I find that its pretty solid and well made too.
- 00:24:946 (1,2) - Mind moving 2's tail away from 1's body a bit? Just to make it like 2 is parallel with 1 or something
- 01:12:398 (3,5) - Obligatory nitpicky blanket mod
- 02:08:852 (1,2) - ^ I hate myself for doing this
- 04:32:349 (1) - Lower tail for neat aesthetics? (blanket lol)
- 04:35:748 (5) - Raise this or curve tail a bit more. Same reason to suffice 04:35:305 (4) - and 04:36:191 (2) -
- 05:30:460 (1) - Nice art. Adjust the body around its head so it would curve better with the head something similar to this. http://puu.sh/wKTuK/0bc9e00db1.jpg
Map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605271
no comment = fixedAkitoshi wrote:
ye im weiner
Flore Alboi can't point much as the map itself is rly solid
- 00:41:068 (6,7,1) - try same thing with 00:38:112 (1,2,3) - for higher pitch? i dont get it
- 01:07:817 (2) - ctrl + g might plays better on this part as visual spacing with 01:07:669 (1) - is kinda far already i want to group the 3 as similar sounds, so same direction is better in that aspect
- 01:25:551 (2) - put it further away from previous slidrrrrr
- 02:05:009 (1) - this is rly confusing as the previous streams 02:04:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - isn't even spaced that much, consider to ctrl + g this or spread 02:04:714 (1,2,3,4) - for the sake of readability, same thing on 03:53:186 (1) - its not that bad, there's some leniency on that slider
- 02:45:945 (2,3) - i rather stack this instead of 02:46:980 (2,3) - for piano's pitch
- 02:57:324 - clickable object would be better but ye i bet there's som reason anyway w 02:57:177 - the piano ends here, and i think a slider end gives a pretty cool effect too for the snare
- 04:01:462 (1,2) - isn't should be opposite direction for pairing with 04:00:576 (1,2,1,2) - ? this part had a bit of a screech so it didn't really fit to have it flowy like the first
- 04:27:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spread it more for screams :^) also this happens only once in the song uwu i wana spread those sexy thighs too, but unfortunately the artist drew it like this
- 04:39:602 (3) - ye maybe safely can add NC as it has huge beat gap from prev. circle and it's on new timing line
- 05:30:460 (1) - 10/10 :3
siq map, take my staR glgl
my mapppp : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/430008
same as abovFiris Mistlud wrote:
STAR BEAT~~~~~
- 00:29:541 (1) - maybe turning it into 2 sliders? Vocal, since the current rhythm feels that you try to give priority on pianos, instead of the vocal, which being the strongest here i am giving priority to piano, i feel like they would be more interesting to focus on
- 00:51:857 (5) - Hmmmmmm... Although stacking it with 00:51:413 (4) - will help giving this note less priority in order to emphasize 00:52:004 (1) - more, but since there's only a short time to react, it may be unreadable, what about try to stack it on 00:51:118 (3) - sliderend? It gives better readability and flow imo
- 00:54:221 (5) - better than above, but the flow is kinda jiggly here, maybe place it like this? Yet it give larger feedback on 00:54:369 (1) - i dont think it flows that badly, i don't really want to put the circle out as a note on its own cuz i feel like it should tie in with the slider here, its just filler rhythm to me imo
- 01:02:497 (1,2,3) - Minor, but i think this will play a little bit better i prefer to keep it sort of blanketed with the slider
- 01:36:635 (1,2) - It feels quite unexpected when there's a jump in opposite direction in a
starr jumpSkystar jumppp jump um how i intended was 01:36:339 (1,2,1,2) - to be a pattern and 01:35:748 (1,2,1,2) - to be a pattern here- 03:31:019 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nice pp
- 04:13:581 -
why no 1 2 1 2 1 2 1 2 jumps hereLMAO, that was exactly what i wanted to avoid here xD
niubia kibb
map for mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596487
Good luck~