NM from my queue
Butterfly
00:08:267 (5,6) - maybe tone down on the spacing here by a little bit as 00:07:704 (2) - had the same sound but not nearly the same emphaisis by spacing
01:19:704 (2) -maybe find a way to give this note more sapcing like you did at 01:18:204 (3) -
01:23:267 (5,6) - This increase in spacing feels way too high, tone it down a bit
01:56:454 (3,4) - spacing of these 2 notes should be lower than 01:56:642 (4,5) - , if you want to keep following that sapcing emphasis for heavy frum beats
02:03:767 (4,5) - Also feels too big imo
02:18:954 (9) - this should be a triple
02:14:642 (1,2,3,4) - You could do something like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/x1JzAbE.png to still keep the sapcing emphasis you use at 02:13:142 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:13:892 (4,5,6,1) -
02:46:142 (1,2,3) - These feel really important (head and tail), so space them more or just jumps could also work
02:46:892 (3,4) - something on this blue tick, you don't have to map it but just putting it here in the case that you want to
03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream pls
03:46:142 (1) - Also should be a triple
04:05:454 (5) - Would just make this a 1/2 slider as there is a sound on the red tick but not the blue tick where you are currently ending the slider
04:07:892 (5,6) - previously in the same part you put the cymbal sounds on tails like at 04:05:829 (1,2) -, try to be consistent and choose one of the 2
cool map and nice storyboarding
00:08:267 (5,6) - maybe tone down on the spacing here by a little bit as 00:07:704 (2) - had the same sound but not nearly the same emphaisis by spacing
01:19:704 (2) -maybe find a way to give this note more sapcing like you did at 01:18:204 (3) -
01:23:267 (5,6) - This increase in spacing feels way too high, tone it down a bit
01:56:454 (3,4) - spacing of these 2 notes should be lower than 01:56:642 (4,5) - , if you want to keep following that sapcing emphasis for heavy frum beats
02:03:767 (4,5) - Also feels too big imo
02:18:954 (9) - this should be a triple
02:14:642 (1,2,3,4) - You could do something like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/x1JzAbE.png to still keep the sapcing emphasis you use at 02:13:142 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:13:892 (4,5,6,1) -
02:46:142 (1,2,3) - These feel really important (head and tail), so space them more or just jumps could also work
02:46:892 (3,4) - something on this blue tick, you don't have to map it but just putting it here in the case that you want to
03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream pls
03:46:142 (1) - Also should be a triple
04:05:454 (5) - Would just make this a 1/2 slider as there is a sound on the red tick but not the blue tick where you are currently ending the slider
04:07:892 (5,6) - previously in the same part you put the cymbal sounds on tails like at 04:05:829 (1,2) -, try to be consistent and choose one of the 2
cool map and nice storyboarding