-Gamu- wrote:

01:40:865 (1,2,3) - this part's a little confusing, so maybe replace them with a slider like this:
http://puu.sh/4jfZ Invisible ><
woops.. sorry. here: http://puu.sh/4lt8


01:28:582 (1,2,3) - maybe make them like this?
http://puu.sh/4jGr Invisible ><
Ignore this xD I changed my mind.

DarknessAngel wrote:

01:22:912 - make this slider loop onle once, and add some notes like this:
http://puu.sh/4jDL like what???
Sorry. There: http://puu.sh/4lu0

Leyko wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

01:40:865 (1,2,3) - this part's a little confusing, so maybe replace them with a slider like this:
http://puu.sh/4jfZ Invisible ><
woops.. sorry. here: http://puu.sh/4lt8 Fixed!


01:28:582 (1,2,3) - maybe make them like this?
http://puu.sh/4jGr Invisible ><
Ignore this xD I changed my mind.

Leyko wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

01:40:865 (1,2,3) - this part's a little confusing, so maybe replace them with a slider like this:
http://puu.sh/4jfZ Invisible ><
woops.. sorry. here: http://puu.sh/4lt8


01:28:582 (1,2,3) - maybe make them like this?
http://puu.sh/4jGr Invisible ><
Ignore this xD I changed my mind.

DarknessAngel wrote:

01:22:912 - make this slider loop onle once, and add some notes like this:
http://puu.sh/4jDL like what???
Sorry. There: http://puu.sh/4lu0

Ignore, if you don't like xD Its only my suggestions.

DarknessAngel wrote:

OK,almost done,but I can understand some of them.
like "snap then under the end of a slider and add new combo on (4)"
Could tou give me a picture?
Thank you for your modding.

SPOILER

These 3 notes must be under the slider's end


like this:


And also add a new combo on (4), like this:

Leyko wrote:

Don't ask me why i'm here... xD
and also
WARNING! My mod is veeeeery long and boring xD So sorry for that... lol

DarknessAngel
Sliders look strange. Make them pretty. lol

00:06:849 (1) - remove a new combo ok
00:08:267 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ok
00:11:810 - ^ ok
00:13:700 - ^ ok
00:15:589 - ^ ok
00:17:715 - add new combo ok
00:19:369 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ok
00:21:495 - ^ ^
00:23:148 - add new combo ^
00:38:975 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
00:42:755 - add ^
00:46:062 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
00:49:133 - ^ ^
00:51:731 - add ^
01:01:180 - ^ ^
01:08:503 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
01:10:393 - ^ ^
00:12:046 - add ^
01:16:298 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
01:20:078 - ^ ^
01:21:067 - ^ ^
01:22:912 - make this slider loop onle once, and add some notes like this: ^
http://puu.sh/4jDL
01:23:857 - add ^
01:25:511 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
01:27:164 (6) - snap this note right under the end of a slider. ^
01:27:637 - add ^
01:31:180 (2,3,4) - snap then under the end of a slider and add new combo on (4) ^
01:34:959 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
01:38:975 - ^ ^
01:40:865 - add ^
01:43:936 (1) - remove new combo ^
01:44:645 - add a new combo, and remove it on the next (1) ^
01:45:589 - add ^
01:46:534 - make this slider end at 01:48:424 like it the other 3 diffs ^

I guess thats it X_X but if ill find something again, ill post here

Leyko wrote:

Sure^^. Here:

SPOILER

These 3 notes must be under the slider's end


like this:


And also add a new combo on (4), like this:

murasamenosigure wrote:

とてもいいと思いました。

って打つと

Your message is too short.

って出てくる

こだまでしょうか？いいえ誰でも

rui wrote:

わずかですがmodさせて頂きました。気に入らない所は無視してください。

[Normal]
01:18:896 - Add a Note

[DarknessAngel]
00:00:708 - Add a Note I think it is strange... :O
00:00:944 (1,2,3) - I think not match the rhythm. slider end at 00:01:180 (1) and add note 00:01:416 and delete 00:01:652 (2)
and slider start 00:01:652 (3)and add note 00:03:306 For example http://puu.sh/4zI6 OK~
00:15:058 (3) - right grid one OK~
00:21:967 - Add a Note No
01:11:810 (4,5) - Distances are different(5) so down grid one (4) No
01:23:513 (5,6) - move slider start 01:23:621 (5) and delete (6) No
01:29:586 (4) - up grid one OK~
01:30:589 (4) - down grid one OK~
01:45:117 (5,6) - Distances are different now. please position fix No

面白い譜面でした:D

rui wrote:

わずかですがmodさせて頂きました。気に入らない所は無視してください。

[Normal]
01:18:896 - Add a Note Fixed!

面白い譜面でした:D

DarknessAngel wrote:

(Why don't you star this map? :O)

frost-b-spec wrote:

Nice

[Darkness]
0.00.471(x) - add object
0.00.708(x) - ^
0.23.385(1) - x0.0 spacing and off grid
1.27.400(1) - ^

gogo~

kusano wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

● 00:12:282 (2) - add note ? ...What?
● 00:49:605 (4) - Shouldn't that end 1/2 to match the sounds ? OK~
● 01:23:857 (1) - add finish ? OK~
● 01:34:959 (1) - remove clap at, and add finish at slider ends. (To match it with a former sound.) OK~
● 01:35:432 (2) - add finish OK~
● 01:46:770 (1) - Please remove this to merge the end of all diff ...?

Yui Nyan

kusano wrote:

eroge mapper Gamu !! yeah~

[Easy]

● 00:16:298 (1) - スピンとの間隔が狭いです。 前のスピンを消して普通にnoteを置いていくのもいいかもしれません。 Slider 2 and Circle 1 Add
● 00:27:164 (5) - add new combo ? No Fixed
● 00:42:755 (1,2,3) - Easyにしては難しいかも・・・？ MATやBATに言われたら直したほうがいいと思います。やっぱ、これ難しいと思いますか・・・　(´ε｀；)ｳｰﾝ…ちょっと変更します。自分もそう思ってて言われたら直そうと思ってましたので　
● 00:57:400 (3) - add new combo　Fixed!
● 01:13:463 (2) - ここを普通の単発にしてスピンを01:14:172ここから置いてみてはどうでしょうかスピナーは削除しました
● 01:16:298 (1) - 00:16:298 (1)と同じ。Slider 1 and Circle 1 Add
● 01:24:802 (-) - add note 　Fixed!
● 01:25:274 (-) - ここにもnoteが欲しいです。　難しいと感じたら前のnoteかここのnoteを消してください。両方にCircle Add
● 01:27:637 (6) - add new combo ? Fixed!
● 01:39:920 (-) - 01:24:802~と同じくnoteを置いてください。Fixed!
●スピンの開始地点をHardと合わせたほうがいいかもです。　もちろん終わる場所も Fixed!

[Normal]

● 00:10:511 (2) - Normal以下で青線に置くのは危険かも・・・？ Sliderに変えてみてはどうでしょうか Fixed!
● 00:25:274 (3) - add new combo ? No Fixed
● 01:03:070 (1) - remove clap, add finish at beginning ? (01:01:180 (1) - や01:04:959 (1) - 等と合わせるため) Fixed!
● 01:12:519 (1) - ^ Fixed!
● 01:21:022 (3) - 01:21:495ここまで伸ばしてもいいかも？ Fixed!
● 01:21:731 (4) - 前のスライダーを伸ばしたならここにnew combo Fixed!
● Easyと同じくスピンを他のdiffと合わせたほうがいいかもです。 Fixed!

[Hard]

● Spacingが不安定なのが少し気になりました。(00:46:062 (1) - 特にここからが1.0~1.7で不規則に変動していたので) 1.5xで(｀再配置しました
● 01:23:621 (1) - remove new combo　Fixed!
● 01:23:857 (2) - add new combo 　Fixed!
● 01:24:566 (1) - remove new combo 　Fixed!
● 01:44:645 (1) - スピンの終わりを01:46:534ここに合わせてください No Fixed

Yui Nyan

BakaHuang wrote:

sorry for my lazy mod and poor english :<
just suggestions

[DarknessAngel] maybe nazi mod
00:08:267(2)-I think the time before this note can change nor-whis to soft-whis?
00:12:046(1)-add whis , remove whis on the head
00:12:282(2)-remove whole silder's whis , add whis at 00:12:519-
00:12:755(3)-only add whis on head
00:13:463(1,3)-change whis to clap
this part until 00:15:589- use whis is too noisy ..right? I think you can remove some whis or change to clap?
00:34:723(7)-change clap to whis
00:51:731(1,2,3,4)-change clap to whis ; remove (4) whis at 00:53:385-
00:53:621(1)-remove whis
00:53:857(2)-remove whis on head ; add whis on silder's body
00:54:566(3)-remove whis
00:54:802(4)-add whis on head
this part I make some changes..
for example:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:61e3d]example.png[/attachment:61e3d]

00:55:511(5,6)-(5)remove whis (6)add whis
00:56:456(2)-remove whis
00:56:692(3)-add whis
00:57:400(1,3)-(1)remove whis (3)-add whis
00:57:873(4)-remove whis
00:59:054(2,3,4)-(2,3)add whis on ending ;(4)add whis on head
01:12:519(6)-add whis and after part try add whis
I'm not good at mod hitsounds but I still can feel the bad hitsounds u have made :'<
you can refer to [hard] to make hitsound more fit music
fin, some pattern I think that not look nice
example:
00:07:322- under the silder have note and you can try to make this?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:61e3d]example.png[/attachment:61e3d]

others diffs have no main problem.

/me run..

DarknessAngel wrote:

All Done.
Thank you for your modding~
嘛~這製圖者剛開始用的音量很小
我聽不太到所以就沒察覺怪怪的
沒想到她後來調大聲了(我也覺得這樣比較好)
我音效的設定的確不好
以後找你來MOD音效好了
(我的圖快完成了><)

SPOILER

1. Make a slider from 01:12:519 to 01:13:227
2. Add a circle to 01:13:700

SPOILER

IceBeam wrote:

[DarknessAngel]
00:28:818 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is wrong here,you should make it consistent.Or move combo mark from 00:28:818 (1) to 00:29:054 (2) if you're pointing out these triangle-spaced jumps.
And also,you could make them more neat.
00:49:723 (5) - You don't need this note.
00:53:621 (x) - Why do you use slowdown here? It doesn't seem to fit anyhow..
01:01:180 (1) - Stack with (5).Doesn't look so good now.
01:04:251 (5) - Kinda out of this pattern,so make a combo mark here instead of 01:04:487 (1).
01:05:550 (4) - Move to 01:05:314.
01:07:558 (6) - Again it's out of the spacing in this combo,you should make it similar to previous objects.
01:44:763 (2) - Remove this note.
01:45:353 (7) - Shorten to previous white tick.

Nice job on this one,but you could improve your map a bit more!
So good luck to you

IceBeam wrote:

Hello!

Caught it in #modreqs

Folder and settings seem fine.

The only minor thing is white combo colour,could you find something instead? oh, little changed whitish.Would obscure

Ah,and,I'm not sure if the map ends in the right place.
Yeah,her voice continues up to 01:48:424,but outro part starts at 01:46:534,so that's where you actually should end the map I think.
But it's minor too. Change the end 01:46:534

[Easy]
00:09:211 - Add a note to complete the rhytm? 00:09:211~00:09:684 - Slider add
00:09:684 - ^
00:10:156 (2,3,4) - Try to avoid hitting blue ticks in easier difficulties.Make a reverse-slider instead. change!


00:39:448 (1) - Move it 1/1 back (00:38:975). And a circle to 00:39:920. fixed!
00:53:621 (1) - Move it some grids down/right to avoid overlapping with 00:52:676 (3). fixed!
Like this:

SPOILER

01:13:463 (2,3) - It was really hard to expect a red tick here. fixed!
Like this:
My suggestions are:

1. Make a slider from 01:12:519 to 01:13:227
2. Add a circle to 01:13:700

It sounds better and it's much easier to hit 1/1 rhytm as you see.

01:44:645 (1) - Maybe start it 1/2 earlier to fit with lyrics? fixed!

[Normal]
OD -1 fixed!

00:06:377 (5) - Move 1/2 back. no fixed
00:55:038 (2) - Placement of this object looks a bit confusing to me ._. fixed!
I'd make something like this to clear up the spacing:

SPOILER

01:02:833 - The note is missing here. fixed!
01:14:408 (1) - Spinner starts too late,move 1/2 back. fixed!
01:28:582 (2) - I was expecting 2 repeats here because of such spacing..so maybe add another one? It seems to fit the lyrics and flow overall. 01:28:582~01:29:054 - Slider add
01:44:645 (1) - Maybe start it 1/2 earlier to fit with lyrics? fixed!

[Hard]
00:10:511 (2) - Hm,I wasn't expecting a note here..maybe add another one to 00:10:629 then? Plays better to me,though it's minor.So you may leave it as is now. 00:10:629 (3) - circle add
00:26:692 (4,5,1) - Looks a bit untidy,could make the spacing between them more consistent?change

SPOILER

00:29:999 (3) - How about to continue this slider up to 00:30:353 then add a circle to 00:30:471 and the final note to 00:30:708.
Sounds catchy to me. no fixed
00:39:093 (2) - Remove this? Plays better w/o it. no fixed
01:28:582 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could make better pentagon shape out of these fixed!
01:44:408 (5) - Start spinner here? fixed!

Nice job on this one,but you could improve your map a bit more!
So good luck to you

qilliam wrote:

[Hard]
Good!

[DarknessAngel]
00:49:369 (2,3,4) - fix the curved pattern on the stream, doesn't look good right now
01:24:566 (1,3,5,7) - not stacked correctly (if you don't know how, PM me in-game and i'll teach you)
01:30:944 (1,3) - ^

Yasora-chan wrote:

Mod by request from #modreqs

Easy
00:00:708 (1) add clap in the end no fixed
00:02:597 (2) ^ no fixed
00:08:267 (1) add finish in beginning have already added
00:12:046 (1) add finish in beginning, add clap in the end no fixed
00:12:991 (2) add clap in the end no fixed
00:13:936 (3) ^ no fixed
00:14:881 (4) ^ no fixed
00:16:298 (1) add clap no fixed
00:16:770 (2) del clap no fixed
00:17:243 (3) add clap no fixed
00:17:715 (1) del clap, add clap in the end no fixed
00:18:660 (2) ^ no fixed
00:21:967 (4) new combo
00:30:944 (5) del whistle, add finish
01:14:172 (3) add finish fixed!

Normal
00:00:708 (1) add clap in the end no fixed
00:01:652 (3) ^ no fixed
00:08:975 (3) add clap in the beginning no fixed
00:09:684 (4) add clap in the end no fixed
00:10:156 (5) ^ no fixed
01:42:755 (1) del clap, add finish fixed!

Hard
Nice :3

Good map~~ OwOd

Yasora-chan wrote:

Mod by request from #modreqs

Easy
00:00:708 (1) add clap in the end
00:02:597 (2) ^
00:08:267 (1) add finish in beginning
00:12:046 (1) add finish in beginning, add clap in the end
00:12:991 (2) add clap in the end
00:13:936 (3) ^
00:14:881 (4) ^
00:16:298 (1) add clap
00:16:770 (2) del clap
00:17:243 (3) add clap
00:17:715 (1) del clap, add clap in the end
00:18:660 (2) ^
00:21:967 (4) new combo
00:30:944 (5) del whistle, add finish
01:14:172 (3) add finish

Normal
00:00:708 (1) add clap in the end
00:01:652 (3) ^
00:08:975 (3) add clap in the beginning
00:09:684 (4) add clap in the end
00:10:156 (5) ^
01:42:755 (1) del clap, add finish

Hard
Nice :3

DarknessAngel
00:28:345 (7) del finish, add clap in the end
00:35:432 (1) del whistle
01:31:416 (2) ^ , add finish
01:31:652 (3) del whistle
01:31:889 (4) add clap
01:32:125 (5) del clap
01:32:833 (1) add clap

Good map~~ OwOd

Verdisphena wrote:

Hard:

Fine I guess, but this is like an a insane :o No problem

Normal:

00:19:605 (1) - Remove new combo fixed!
00:33:778 (1) - ^ fixed!
01:29:526 (1) - ^ fixed!

I can't find anything wrong @A@

Easy:
Fine.

Can I make a taiko diff? ok. Thank you~ XD

Verdisphena wrote:

Hope u like it (●´▽｀●)ﾉ
[attachment=0:ff68a]Sakakibara Yui - Wondering Truth (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [Verdi's Taiko].osu[/attachment:ff68a]

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi ~ Gamu chan~
this is my some tips.

[General]

nice map~
Your BG is a 800 * 600, this is unrankable. No problem!.
Change 1024*768 plz. 800 * 600 is ok


[Normal]

00:25:274 (3) - add NC. no fixed

other diff looks good~

please accept my star ( My heart )>///<
good luck~

Verdisphena wrote:

Please update this.
[attachment=0:afb7d]Sakakibara Yui - Wondering Truth (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [Verdi's Taiko].osu[/attachment:afb7d]

Verdisphena wrote:

DarknessAngel:

00:01:652 (3) - Ctrl + R I don't understand what you mean...
00:03:542 (3) - ^ It would have a distance mistake if I did this...
00:27:400 (7) - This note is very difficult to see, change it please OK
00:28:818 (8) - ^ OK
00:31:416 (1,2,3) - Make something like this OK

SPOILER

00:51:495 (9) - Same as 00:27:400 - No
00:53:621 (T) - Do you really need a slowdown here? It is hard to fix... lol
01:09:684 (6) - Stack this with the end of the slider (01:08:739 (4) - ) It would have a distance mistake if I did this...
01:21:731 (1) - Same as 00:27:400 - No
01:22:912 (4) - This slider is diferent, copy this slider 01:22:440 - OK

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[General]

nice map~
Your BG is a 800 * 600, this is unrankable.
Change 1024*768 plz. 我昨天才知道800x600,640x480都是合理的格式0.0



[DarknessAngel]

00:11:574 (5) - Suggestion Moved here X:64 Y:168. 我總是移不到你說的那個地方耶...你確定那個在distance snap的範圍內？嘛，我還是有放到其他地方就是了:3
00:09:211 (4) - add NC. OK
00:35:196 (8) - ^
00:35:432 (1) - Remove NC.
00:42:755 (9) - add NC.
00:42:991 (1) - Remove NC.

這NC我覺得沒啥大礙，不好意思... lol

good luck~

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

1. Resnap all notes on [DarknessAngel] and [Verdi's Taiko]

1. 00:15:826 (5) - New combo. And remove new combo at 00:16:298.
2. 00:27:164 (5) - New combo for consistency.

1. 00:18:660 (1) - Remove new combo ?
2. 00:19:605 (3) - New combo.
3. 00:21:495 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:30:944 (1) - Useless Timing section.

1. Why DS is always changing ?
2. 00:10:511 (2,3) - Not stacked perfectly. (The way to stacked perfectly : DS=0.0x, Grid snap=OFF, Distance Snap=ON)
3. 00:12:519 (4) - ^
4. 00:17:715 (7) - New combo for consistency.
5. 00:18:660 (1) - Remove new combo.
6. 00:29:526 (2) - Not stacked perfectly.
7. 00:30:471 (4) - ^

1. 00:05:904 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:06:377 (2) - New combo.
3. 00:09:211 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:10:156 (6) - New combo.
5. 00:10:865 (1) - Remobe new combo. (And so on plz check them by yourself >_> Try to have a look on how other diffs do.)
6. 01:27:400 (1) - Not stacked perfectly.

JoJo wrote:

Hi hi ~ >w<
Request from kanpakyin's queue ~

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

1. Resnap all notes on [DarknessAngel] and [Verdi's Taiko]fixed!

[Easy]

1. 00:15:826 (5) - New combo. And remove new combo at 00:16:298.fixed!
2. 00:27:164 (5) - New combo for consistency.no fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:18:660 (1) - Remove new combo ?
2. 00:19:605 (3) - New combo.
3. 00:21:495 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:30:944 (1) - Useless Timing section.

All done~

[Hard]

1. Why DS is always changing ? DS=Distance Snap?? Try changing the placement
2. 00:10:511 (2,3) - Not stacked perfectly. (The way to stacked perfectly : DS=0.0x, Grid snap=OFF, Distance Snap=ON) Changed the placement
3. 00:12:519 (4) - ^ Changed the placement
4. 00:17:715 (7) - New combo for consistency. fixed!
5. 00:18:660 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed!
6. 00:29:526 (2) - Not stacked perfectly. Changed the placement
7. 00:30:471 (4) - ^ Changed the placement

Nice map , have a star ~

JoJo wrote:

Hi hi ~ >w<
Request from kanpakyin's queue ~

[DarknessAngel]

1. 00:05:904 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:06:377 (2) - New combo.
3. 00:09:211 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:10:156 (6) - New combo.
5. 00:10:865 (1) - Remobe new combo. (And so on plz check them by yourself >_> Try to have a look on how other diffs do.)
6. 01:27:400 (1) - Not stacked perfectly.

Nice map , have a star ~

winber1 wrote:

Hard

00:19:487 (x) - add note? no fixed
00:58:109 (4,1) - i wouldn't make a jump here fixed
01:27:164 (4) - *nazi* 1 grid left? to center it no fixed

Normal

--idk, spacing seems a little big, and it seems a little tricky too. with spacing in 1.00x

01:29:526 (3) - new combo fixed

Easy

00:08:267 (1) - i wouldn't really use a repeat slider, I would rather just use two notes. 00:08:503 - this red tick doesn't really follow anything in the music anyways fixed
00:15:826 (1) - add clap? fixed
01:10:156 (x) - sounds better if you add a note imo. fixed

winber1 wrote:

Darkness Angel

00:21:967 (x) - there really needs to be a note here imo. I think it is not a good idea...
00:25:038 (1) - remove combo and new combo on next note OK
00:26:219 (1) - remove combo adn new combo at 00:27:400 (4) - ? OK
00:35:196 (8,1,2) - it would be much better if you swithed combo 1 and 2 around and added a new combo on 8. like this:

SPOILER

ATTACH[screenshot123.jpg]

I make something changed
00:42:755 (9) - new combo and remove combo on next note OK
01:16:298 (5) - add finish? OK
01:37:322 (x) - add note OK
01:41:574 (1,1) - i don't see the point of these new combos, i wuold remove them OK

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Probably better to not have many stacks and repeats, but it's fine.

Good job.
[Normal]
00:24:330 (2) - Clap? fixed
01:41:810 (1) - NC probably not needed here. fixed

Good job :3

[Hard]
00:31:416 (1) - lol NC not needed fixed
00:46:062 (1,2) - Two notes in one combo? Too short... no fixed

Hmm, remember that new combo usually goes on large white tick.
01:08:267 (7) - Move over here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156417 fixed

Very good diff! Just double-check combos...
[DarnkessAngel]
00:46:770 (1) - NC not needed? fixed

lol i suck at these kinds of combos. Good job, plays well.

LKs wrote:

]Easy

slider tick rate just so high..reduce to 1 imo ok.fixed! and Changed to 1 in Normal

[00:00:708] no need to set finish on the slider ending fixed!

Normal

so many claps, that's not easy to enjoy
no rule-breaking errors, but still suggest reduce slider tick rate Hmm .... I will leave this

Hard

fine

actually this is a rankable map but..anyway i think it can be better

P.S. this post probably doesn't good enough, do not give me kudo if you think this is worthless,

KRZY wrote:

[Easy]
Your claps seem to be placed in a very random pattern...I mean it has patterns, but these patterns seem to change every 16 notes or so. I suggest developing a uniform pattern for adding claps and stick to it throughout the difficulty, more so since this is an Easy.
My personal suggestion would be to add claps in every second and fourth beats.
Other than that, very good.

[Normal]
00:04:487 (1) - Move to x:144 y:152
01:13:936 (4) - Move to x:240 y:248
01:31:416 (1) - Add a finish at the head

[Hard]
00:15:826 (1) - Add a finish at the head sorry. no fixed
00:18:660 (2) - Add a clap at the head
00:54:566 (4) - Add a clap at the tail
00:56:456 (4) - ^
01:26:456 (3) - ^
01:27:164 (4) - Add a clap

Looks promising, good luck and don't forget to get more mods!

KRZY wrote:

[DarknessAngel]
Why is the diff name suddenly custom o.o? It is my username...
00:02:361 (1) - Remove whistle OK
00:02:597 (2) - Add whistle at the head OK
00:03:306 (3) - Remove whistle OK
00:03:542 (4) - Add whistle at the head OK
00:05:314 (4) - Add whistle OK
00:05:904 (7) - Add whistle at the head OK
00:26:219 (1,2,3) - Try arranging these like the screenshot below, as I think it fits the music better: OK

SPOILER

00:28:109 (6,7,8) - ^

SPOILER

00:29:763 (1) - Remove this note and
00:29:999 (2,3,1,2,3) - Try something like this I don't want to change this part...

SPOILER

01:10:629 (2,3,4,5) - Move these to 01:10:629, remove 01:12:282 (6), add a note at 01:10:393 and add a note at 01:12:519I don't know what you mean... lol
01:14:408 (5) - Remove this slider and add a note at 01:14:645 OK

SPOILER

01:15:353 (5,6) - It'd be better if you completely stacked these notes. OK

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

Raging Bull wrote:

Lol Hentai Eroge game. You're like Hinacle >w< lol

These are suggestions so you can say no. If you say no, please say why.

General:
You have a good 20% of the mp3 unmapped. I suggest you map it. It doesn't seem very long left. D:
Instead of adding claps every 1/1 (As in every white tick), add claps every 2 and 4 white tick (That means the tick right after the big white tick, clap, white tick, clap, big white tick, clap, white tick, clap, big white tick etc) If you don't understand, just ask/PM me. I'm poor at English. So not understand ..orz

Easy:
00:04:487 (1) - Can you make a different slider? It seems kinda boring to have 3 same sliders. fixed
00:08:739 (2) - I think it would be good to unstack these for now. You didn't have a lot of 1/1 yet so beginners might not get used to the beat yet. fixed
00:27:164 (5) - NC here for consistency with your NC pattern. (You've been NCing every 2 stanza) fixed
00:29:054 (3) - Remove NC for consistency. fixed
00:30:944 (7) - Then NC this one. fixed
00:31:889 (1) - Remove this NC fixed
00:35:196 (1) - I don't really like it when a slider is starts on second tick and ends on 4th because it leaves the slider unstressed (idk if you understand o.o). Maybe add a note and then a slider? [img]puu.sh/7hOb[/img] fixed
00:36:613 (2,3,4,5,6) - Finish hitsound spam doesn't sound nice to me imo. Maybe soft whistle at 100%?fixed(no 100%)
01:01:652 (2) - ^ Same. Note and slider? Or maybe 3 1/1 if you want. no fixed
01:05:432 (2) - ^ no fixed

Easy has pretty nice symmetrical sliders actually.

Normal:
00:36:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - The finish spam here doesn't sound really nice. Make maybe it soft whistle with 100% instead? I'm not sure ._. fixed(no 100%)
01:20:078 (1,3) - The overlap here doesn't look really nice. Maybe make 3 a different slider? Changed the shape of the slider
01:34:723 (4,1) - Slider repeat is covered from hitburst Sorry but this is unrankable. Please move 4 somewhere else or move 1 somewhere else.Move (1)
01:38:030 (3,1) - Kinda funny overlap since the slider end is below 3. Maybe make 1 a different slider? fixed

Hard:
00:34:015 (1) - Remove NC? I'm not sure why you even have it right there.... no fixed
00:36:613 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Use soft whistles at 100%? btw 00:37:322 (1) - you forgot to hitsound slider end. fixed
00:46:062 (1) - to 00:51:495 (3) - Your NCing here just became random to me. Can you try to redo this whole section on NC? no fixed
00:51:495 (3) - Btw. Change this slider into 3 notes. NC at 00:51:731 (3) to signal new instrument. fixed
01:27:637 (2) - You made many symmetrical sliders but this isn't. Why? o.o It's no big deal but can you make it symmetrical since you know how? fixed
01:28:582 (1) - Maybe move this two grid up? I think it makes star look better. fixed

Raging Bull wrote:

These are suggestions so you can say no. If you say no, please say why.


Darkness:
00:00:471 (2,4,2,4) - If you want to make a blanket, I think these angles are kinda sharp. Perhaps make a smoother curve?I don't know what "smoother curve" mean...
00:53:857 (2) - I don't agree with slowdown here. It doesn't really sound anything slow in the music. Maybe remove and use 1x?fixed
01:21:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - D: No hitsound? I thought the whistles you were doing earlier sounded nice. fixed
01:29:999 (1) - Move this to x240 y176? It looks ugly when it's at one side only. Being in the middle of these two streams look a lot nicer. fixed
01:32:833 (1) - Remove NC. Still in the same verse. fixed
01:33:306 (3) - NC here instead.fixed
01:33:542 (1) - And remove this NC.color=#FF0000]fixed[/color]
01:34:487 (6) - Slider sounded awkward to me since the white tick is skipped because of slider. Maybe make it a 1/2 slider and add note to fill in gap? fixed
01:41:574 (1) - Remove NC. I don't think you need it here (it look as though you're NCing for jumps. You shouldn't really NC for jumps since it usually makes no sense to me imo.) fixed
01:42:046 (1) - ^ fixed

spboxer3 wrote:

ok~let's mod

[DarknessAngel]
chinese diff mapper. so I use chinese hope you didn't mind
01:46:652 - 這邊的kiai time需要和其他的diff一樣 恩
00:07:322 (5) - 頂到HP Bar了 OK[/color]
00:36:377 (4,5,6,7,8) - 哭了 又是一樣的作法阿 間距部份明明是後面4個重音 可是你怎麼在(4)的地方就偷跑 (8)的地方卻太監了呢... ;_; 這確實沒問題
00:45:589 (4) - 右移 1格grid (size 3) OK
01:04:487 (2,6) - [nazi]你的slider真的是該大整容了... 喔
01:08:739 (4,6) - stack 間距會不對...
01:14:645 (5) - NC OK
01:14:881 (1) - reNC OK
01:15:353 (4) - NC OK
01:15:826 (1) - reNC OK
01:26:219 (1) - ^ OK
01:27:400 (3) - NC OK
01:28:345 (4) - 這個不適合... 沒有實質建議也至少說個理由吧...
01:31:416 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ... 亂跳對吧...>_> so?有什麼問題麼？>_>
01:41:101 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - NC...亂用阿 NC是用來加血還有幫助判斷用的 不能亂加阿= = 改好了

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

xsrsbsns wrote:

Nice map there!
Here are a few suggestions..

[General]
Have you considered using soft hitsounds from start until 00:08:267?
I think it's more suitable (softer there). oh...good idea my diff only fixed

[Easy]
00:12:046 (1,3) - Finish to slider head fixed
00:30:944 (1) - Finish no fixed
01:08:739 (1) - Finish to slider head fixed
01:16:298 (1) - ^ fixed
01:29:526 (1,3) - Finish fixed
01:31:416 (1) - Finish to slider head fixed
01:42:755 (1) - ^ (only first beat) no fixed

[Normal]
00:29:054 (1) - Finish no fixed
01:03:778 (3) - Finish to slider head fixed
01:07:558 (2) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
00:15:826 (1) - Finish to slider head (only first beat) fixed
00:27:164 (1,2) - Change finish from tail to head no fixed
00:30:944 (1) - Finish no fixed
00:30:944 (1) - Change NC to (2) fixed
00:51:731 (4,5) - Moving these two away from (3) will be better (Stack 4&5 but not with 3) circle and slider change
00:56:219 (3) - Easily seen that it's not really centered, but okay I guess :3 Slightly move
01:03:070 (2) - Finish fixed
01:03:778 (5) - Finish to slider head fixed
01:07:558 (6) - ^ fixed
01:16:298 (2) - ^ no fixed
01:29:526 (1,3,2) - ^ fixed(1,3)

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
all suggestions
1024x768 BG!! ^^
[attachment=0:a2879]haikei.jpg[/attachment:a2879] wow. Thanks :3

[General]
No custom hitsound?
How about add silent slider body? hmm... ok (my diff only)


[Hard]
00:19:133 (3) - forgot to add clap?
00:46:770 (1) - remove NC
01:01:180 (1) - ^
01:39:684 (1) - ^
01:44:408 - imo add a beat here and start spinner at: 01:44:645

[Normal]
00:06:377 (5,6) - this is weird. imo delete (5) and start (6) from 00:06:377~00:07:322 ok.fixed
00:10:156 (5) - NC ok.fixed
00:15:826 (1) - remove clap, add finish at slider head ok.fixed
00:18:188 (4) - NC ok.fixed
00:33:778 (5) - ^ ok.fixed
00:44:645 (1,2,3) - remove finish? too loud.. I think. add whistle on (2) All whistle change
Everything is good!

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
all suggestions

[DarknessAngel]
00:01:416 (3) - move right 1 grid, and down 2 grid (grid 4)
00:06:377 (1,2) - remove clap
00:13:818 (4) - move down 1 grid (grid 4)
00:15:117 (3) - move left 1 grid (grid 4)
01:09:684 (6) - not stacked properly
01:45:589 (7) - NC

Everything is good!

All done~

xsrsbsns wrote:

Nice map there!
Here are a few suggestions..


[DarknessAngel]
00:29:054 (1,2) - Finish OK
00:40:156 (1) - Change NC to (3) OK
01:03:070 (1,4) - Finish OK
01:04:487 (2) - Finish to slider tail OK
01:06:849 (3) - Finish No
01:07:558 (1) - Finish to slider head No
01:13:936 (4) - Finish to slider tail OK
01:21:731 (1) - Change NC to (2) OK
01:24:566 (1) - Change NC to previous (6) OK
01:45:589 (7) - NC OK
01:45:707 (8,11) - Clap No

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

Jupiter wrote:

All suggestions
[General]
Tag add : Akatsuki Works Hibiki fixed
[Easy]
Good
[Normal]
01:25:274 - 1grid left fixed
01:25:747 - 2grid up fixed
[Hard]
00:03:778 (2) - Remove circle. no fixed
00:59:763 (4) - Change circle. no fixed
[DarknessAngel]
AR-1 no fixed

Nice Map!!

Jupiter wrote:

All suggestions

[DarknessAngel]
AR-1 NO

Nice Map!!

Breeze wrote:

DarknessAngel

1. I'll suggest you use one more node to make your most slider look smooth more 如果改掉的話就要remap了lol
2. 00:53:851 (2,4) - How about remove whistle on slider start, just keep this sliderslide whistle? (2)fixed (4)NO
3. 01:22:906 (3) - This unique clap sounds odd

fixed

Breeze wrote:

General

1. 01:25:505 in video...Would you please get another video without this kind of scene? Or I'm afraid that you had to delete this video

ok.remove ...orz

Timing

1. I got a offset : 702(-6), if you feel this one is better, then use this one

sorry.

(Mod blow is based on the timing I given out)

Easy

1. 00:38:497 (7) - I feel finish instead of whistle sounds better

fixed

Hard

1. 00:19:127 (3) - Why here use whistle? sounds kinda odd

fixed

[/notice]

kissfly wrote:

Easy
01:21:967(5) - one grid left in order to parallel circle(1) no fixed

Normal
Circle size - 1 Because you set short distance,very crowded ok.fixed
00:26:219(5) - remove clap no fixed
00:27:164(2) - the slider's hisound reversal in begin and end no fixed
00:45:589(3) - one grid right fixed

Hard
00:04:015(3) - one grid down
01:33:070(1) - bad overlap,But i think your stacking is smallest.So i have no idea,but remove(1)(2) sorry.no fixed

Good job
Star

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this map because of ur request

Easy:
00:13:936(3,4) - make them curved to make it flow. iit should be like this http://puu.sh/8elw changed (this)
00:22:912(6) - Aline it to (4) fixed

Normal:
00:23:385(1) - add a clap at the end of the slider fixed
00:24:330(2) - remove the clap at the beginning and add the clap at the end. no fixed
00:25:274(3,4,5,6) - remove clap for (3) add clap for (4) remove clap for (5) and add clap for (6) no fixed
00:27:164(1,2) - remove the clap at the beginning and add it at the end no fixed
01:36:613(2) - remove the clap at the beginning no fixed
01:41:810(5) - remove clap no fixed
01:42:282(6) - add clap no fixed

Hard:
00:34:723(4) - add clap fixed
00:42:282(4) - ^ fixed
01:42:755(3) - ^ fixed

This is the best i can do. GL

kissfly wrote:

DarknessAgnel
00:13:582(2) - one grid down fixed
00:29:526(3) - one grid up fixed
00:58:818(2) - parallel(3) 不懂意思...
01:43:227(2) - ~ ~

Good job
Star

Byakugan249 wrote:

DarknessAngel:
00:07:332(5) - add a clap at the end fixed

This is the best i can do. GL

-Gamu- wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

（ゝω・）☆Aoi's Mod

General

1. I see there have a video in the info page but where is it? 01:25:505 in video...Would you please get another video without this kind of scene? Or I'm afraid that you had to delete this video (by Breeze)
2. Too much blank.make them all of have a cut sorry.

Hard

1. 00:23:857 (3,4) - overlap fixed
2. 01:16:298 (2) - finish on first circle and remove whistle no fixed

Normal

1. 00:03:542 (3) - this slider end at 00:04:015 will be better fixed
2. 00:29:054 (1) - finish instead of whitle finish add
3. 00:42:282 (3) - add clap fixed

Easy

1. 00:02:597 (2) - remove finish at 00:04:015 changed to whistle
2. 01:14:172 (3) - one grid left

no fixed

Hentai in tag....go go rank

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue
[notice]

（ゝω・）☆Aoi's Mod

DarknessAngel

1. I prefer use finish instead of whistle,but it depends on you~ I want to keep my part,sorry...
2. AR+1? No
3. 00:08:267 (2) - finish fixed
4. 00:15:826 (1) - ^ finish fixed
5. 00:29:999 (2) - ^.it's necessary because both beats at 00:29:054 (1) & 00:30:944 (3) have a finish sound in music. finish fixed
6. 00:53:857 (2) - remove whistle on slider body. No
7. 00:56:692 (3) - ^ No
8. 01:46:534 (2) - cancel kiai time here finish fixed

Hentai in tag....go go rank

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

SPOILER

239,230,175

SPOILER

SPOILER

IceBeam wrote:

hello

try to avoid using pure white colour
take a look,slidertick is almost invisible:

SPOILER

how about using this colour? Changed~

239,230,175

stack leniency in Hard is unrankable,set to 4 at the very least ok.fixed

fine otherwise

[Hard]
00:51:731 (1,2) - stacking doesn't occur here,it's an osu! bag,when 2 sliders start in the same point..we were asked to force mappers to fix such moments
it's major,as zero leniency is unrankable

well,you may think of placing slider in different way,or you may unstack them manually by moving 00:52:204 (2) 1 grid down and right (grid lvl4) ok. (2) move

SPOILER

01:27:637 (2) - could you make it symmetrical? ok. fixed
01:32:361 (4,1,2) - not a good idea honestly..like this plays much better: ok. fixed

SPOILER

this is a good mapset,so I won't nazi other diffs
just fix these issues and you can have my bubble

merchat7 wrote:

Before this get bubbled, consider this video http://www.mediafire.com/?1kx39g7u7y7p27r. White out the scene at 01:25:505. Don't have the original video of the beatmap so I encode it from somewhere else (youtube).

Video offset is -1200. Please double check it, may be off by a bit.

Good luck on rank Tell me if something else is unrankable about video, I'll see what I can do.

Just incase, no kudosu.

merchat7 wrote:

http://puu.sh/9LKY

Try this link.

IceBeam wrote:

before rechecking,we should solve another problem

BG doesn't appear in the map's thread,as you see
try to fix BG's offset via notepad
set 0,0,"haikei.jpg" under //Background and Video events line

then full-submit and call me back once again

IceBeam wrote:

fine,but you forgot to fix stack leniency in Hard
song setup --> advanced --> set stack leniency to 4 at least

don't kd this post

IceBeam wrote:

alright,then here's your well-deserved bubble

good luck with ranking~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:46:534 (2) - This is way too loud, lower the volume of it.

That's pretty much everything, fix for a sweet rank!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good now.

Ranked~