hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
all suggestions

[DarknessAngel]
00:01:416 (3) - move right 1 grid, and down 2 grid (grid 4)
00:06:377 (1,2) - remove clap
00:13:818 (4) - move down 1 grid (grid 4)
00:15:117 (3) - move left 1 grid (grid 4)
01:09:684 (6) - not stacked properly
01:45:589 (7) - NC

Everything is good!

All done~

xsrsbsns wrote:

Nice map there!
Here are a few suggestions..


[DarknessAngel]
00:29:054 (1,2) - Finish OK
00:40:156 (1) - Change NC to (3) OK
01:03:070 (1,4) - Finish OK
01:04:487 (2) - Finish to slider tail OK
01:06:849 (3) - Finish No
01:07:558 (1) - Finish to slider head No
01:13:936 (4) - Finish to slider tail OK
01:21:731 (1) - Change NC to (2) OK
01:24:566 (1) - Change NC to previous (6) OK
01:45:589 (7) - NC OK
01:45:707 (8,11) - Clap No

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

Jupiter wrote:

All suggestions
[General]
Tag add : Akatsuki Works Hibiki fixed
[Easy]
Good
[Normal]
01:25:274 - 1grid left fixed
01:25:747 - 2grid up fixed
[Hard]
00:03:778 (2) - Remove circle. no fixed
00:59:763 (4) - Change circle. no fixed
[DarknessAngel]
AR-1 no fixed

Nice Map!!

Jupiter wrote:

All suggestions

[DarknessAngel]
AR-1 NO

Nice Map!!

Breeze wrote:

DarknessAngel

1. I'll suggest you use one more node to make your most slider look smooth more 如果改掉的話就要remap了lol
2. 00:53:851 (2,4) - How about remove whistle on slider start, just keep this sliderslide whistle? (2)fixed (4)NO
3. 01:22:906 (3) - This unique clap sounds odd

fixed

Breeze wrote:

General

1. 01:25:505 in video...Would you please get another video without this kind of scene? Or I'm afraid that you had to delete this video

ok.remove ...orz

Timing

1. I got a offset : 702(-6), if you feel this one is better, then use this one

sorry.

(Mod blow is based on the timing I given out)

Easy

1. 00:38:497 (7) - I feel finish instead of whistle sounds better

fixed

Hard

1. 00:19:127 (3) - Why here use whistle? sounds kinda odd

fixed

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kissfly wrote:

Easy
01:21:967(5) - one grid left in order to parallel circle(1) no fixed

Normal
Circle size - 1 Because you set short distance,very crowded ok.fixed
00:26:219(5) - remove clap no fixed
00:27:164(2) - the slider's hisound reversal in begin and end no fixed
00:45:589(3) - one grid right fixed

Hard
00:04:015(3) - one grid down
01:33:070(1) - bad overlap,But i think your stacking is smallest.So i have no idea,but remove(1)(2) sorry.no fixed

Good job
Star

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this map because of ur request

Easy:
00:13:936(3,4) - make them curved to make it flow. iit should be like this http://puu.sh/8elw changed (this)
00:22:912(6) - Aline it to (4) fixed

Normal:
00:23:385(1) - add a clap at the end of the slider fixed
00:24:330(2) - remove the clap at the beginning and add the clap at the end. no fixed
00:25:274(3,4,5,6) - remove clap for (3) add clap for (4) remove clap for (5) and add clap for (6) no fixed
00:27:164(1,2) - remove the clap at the beginning and add it at the end no fixed
01:36:613(2) - remove the clap at the beginning no fixed
01:41:810(5) - remove clap no fixed
01:42:282(6) - add clap no fixed

Hard:
00:34:723(4) - add clap fixed
00:42:282(4) - ^ fixed
01:42:755(3) - ^ fixed

This is the best i can do. GL

kissfly wrote:

DarknessAgnel
00:13:582(2) - one grid down fixed
00:29:526(3) - one grid up fixed
00:58:818(2) - parallel(3) 不懂意思...
01:43:227(2) - ~ ~

Good job
Star

Byakugan249 wrote:

DarknessAngel:
00:07:332(5) - add a clap at the end fixed

This is the best i can do. GL

-Gamu- wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

（ゝω・）☆Aoi's Mod

General

1. I see there have a video in the info page but where is it? 01:25:505 in video...Would you please get another video without this kind of scene? Or I'm afraid that you had to delete this video (by Breeze)
2. Too much blank.make them all of have a cut sorry.

Hard

1. 00:23:857 (3,4) - overlap fixed
2. 01:16:298 (2) - finish on first circle and remove whistle no fixed

Normal

1. 00:03:542 (3) - this slider end at 00:04:015 will be better fixed
2. 00:29:054 (1) - finish instead of whitle finish add
3. 00:42:282 (3) - add clap fixed

Easy

1. 00:02:597 (2) - remove finish at 00:04:015 changed to whistle
2. 01:14:172 (3) - one grid left

no fixed

Hentai in tag....go go rank

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue
[notice]

（ゝω・）☆Aoi's Mod

DarknessAngel

1. I prefer use finish instead of whistle,but it depends on you~ I want to keep my part,sorry...
2. AR+1? No
3. 00:08:267 (2) - finish fixed
4. 00:15:826 (1) - ^ finish fixed
5. 00:29:999 (2) - ^.it's necessary because both beats at 00:29:054 (1) & 00:30:944 (3) have a finish sound in music. finish fixed
6. 00:53:857 (2) - remove whistle on slider body. No
7. 00:56:692 (3) - ^ No
8. 01:46:534 (2) - cancel kiai time here finish fixed

Hentai in tag....go go rank

-Gamu- wrote:

[DarknessAngel]

Updated!

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239,230,175

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IceBeam wrote:

hello

try to avoid using pure white colour
take a look,slidertick is almost invisible:

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how about using this colour? Changed~

239,230,175

stack leniency in Hard is unrankable,set to 4 at the very least ok.fixed

fine otherwise

[Hard]
00:51:731 (1,2) - stacking doesn't occur here,it's an osu! bag,when 2 sliders start in the same point..we were asked to force mappers to fix such moments
it's major,as zero leniency is unrankable

well,you may think of placing slider in different way,or you may unstack them manually by moving 00:52:204 (2) 1 grid down and right (grid lvl4) ok. (2) move

SPOILER

01:27:637 (2) - could you make it symmetrical? ok. fixed
01:32:361 (4,1,2) - not a good idea honestly..like this plays much better: ok. fixed

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this is a good mapset,so I won't nazi other diffs
just fix these issues and you can have my bubble

merchat7 wrote:

Before this get bubbled, consider this video http://www.mediafire.com/?1kx39g7u7y7p27r. White out the scene at 01:25:505. Don't have the original video of the beatmap so I encode it from somewhere else (youtube).

Video offset is -1200. Please double check it, may be off by a bit.

Good luck on rank Tell me if something else is unrankable about video, I'll see what I can do.

Just incase, no kudosu.

merchat7 wrote:

http://puu.sh/9LKY

Try this link.

IceBeam wrote:

before rechecking,we should solve another problem

BG doesn't appear in the map's thread,as you see
try to fix BG's offset via notepad
set 0,0,"haikei.jpg" under //Background and Video events line

then full-submit and call me back once again

IceBeam wrote:

fine,but you forgot to fix stack leniency in Hard
song setup --> advanced --> set stack leniency to 4 at least

don't kd this post

IceBeam wrote:

alright,then here's your well-deserved bubble

good luck with ranking~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:46:534 (2) - This is way too loud, lower the volume of it.

That's pretty much everything, fix for a sweet rank!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good now.

Ranked~

Kaye Sonoko Suzuki wrote:

The anime looks interesting! Can I ask the genre of it?