Fujita Akane, Miyamoto Yume, Ozawa Ari - Precious You* · forum

Rizen

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2017-05-16T17:19:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 22 September 2017 at 7:36:36 PM

Artist: Fujita Akane, Miyamoto Yume, Ozawa Ari
Title: Precious You*
Source: ロクでなし魔術講師と禁忌教典
Tags: Kibbleru Underforest Rizen aqpw of bastard magic instructor rokudenashi majutsu koushi to akashic records tv size ed ending sistine fibel rumia tingel re=l rayford システィーナ＝フィーベルルミア＝ティンジェルリィエル＝レイフォード
BPM: 130
Filesize: 22573kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.46 stars, 97 notes)
Forest's Normal (1.92 stars, 126 notes)
Insane (3.59 stars, 322 notes)
Kibb's Hard (2.72 stars, 190 notes)

Download: Fujita Akane, Miyamoto Yume, Ozawa Ari - Precious You*
Download: Fujita Akane, Miyamoto Yume, Ozawa Ari - Precious You* (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Opening mapped by Rizia

why is the artist field shortened
meta data

easy - me
normal - Underforest
hard - Kibbleru
insane - me

Last edited by Rizen 2017-09-22T07:37:03+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Jabba

814 posts

Joined February 2015

Jabba 2017-05-18T19:14:51+00:00

hiya, m4m (and I don't even care that you wanted to mod first since I'm gonna have a busy week LOL)

easy
00:00:986 (1,2) - try blanketing those?
00:04:216 (3,1) - this one though seems a bit off
00:08:370 (1,2) - ^^
00:13:909 (3,4) - huh
00:15:755 (1) - isn't stacked properly pls
goddamnit this looks so nazi
00:15:755 (1,2) - uhHHH
00:32:370 (3) - I'd put the anchor on this one at the same position as 00:30:524 (1) - to somehow emphasize the sound at 00:33:062 -
00:34:216 (1,3) - idk might want to try and blanket those, would look neat imo. also the whole triangle looks about 2 grids off, recheck pls
00:40:678 (4,1) - why
00:48:524 (5,1) - I won't even screenshot this
01:05:601 (3,1) - k this one is way too off
neat diff except for teh blankets

hard
00:12:062 (1,2) - seems kinda big for a relatively quiet part imo
00:19:216 (5,1) - I'd try to overlap those a bit more if you want to do such overlaps, rn it looks like they're almost not touching compared to 00:17:370 (5,1) -
00:26:601 (5,1) - eh why would you stack those, breaks the previous patterning but the background is the same
00:45:293 (1,2) - wut is this supposed to be a blanket or what, looks really strange
00:50:370 (4,1,2) - spacing on those feels a bit too much imo, try moving (1) closer to 00:49:909 (3) -
00:49:909 (3) - ^^ uh same here, such curves on sliders literally suggest a blanket but it's not one actually

insane
00:02:832 (1) - try making this similar to 00:00:986 (1) - ? rn looks a bit off
00:14:832 (4,5,6,7) - idk imo this calls for the similar slider-circle-slider pattern, but that's up to you
00:15:755 (1,2,3) - make a perfect triangle out of those pls
00:24:062 (3) - this one gets too much emphasis compared to the rest of this section, ikr the pattern is nice but the ds is kinda strange
00:36:062 (1,2) - mind making those parallel to 3-4?
00:44:370 - I'd put a note there, even though I get that you're following the beat. fits much better I think
00:46:678 (7,8,1) - the flow between those three feels strange, try putting (1) lower or smth
00:54:524 (1,2,3) - this one stand out cause of that 1/4 jump, why won't you use a pattern similar to 00:52:678 (1,2,3) - ?
01:14:832 (2) - NC
01:21:986 (9,1) - why doesn't this have the usual high spacing

neat set, not much to find

gl!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-05-21T00:56:22+00:00

Done with my GD

1.94*

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44370
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Precious You*
TitleUnicode:Precious You☆
Artist:Akane Fujita, Yume Miyamoto, Ari Ozawa
ArtistUnicode:藤田 茜、宮本侑芽、小澤亜李
Creator:Rizen
Version:Forest's Normal
Source:ロクでなし魔術講師と禁忌教典
Tags:Kibbleru of bastard magic instructor rokudenashi majutsu koushi to akashic records tv size ed ending sistine fibel rumia tingel re=l rayford システィーナ＝フィーベル ルミア＝ティンジェル リィエル＝レイフォード
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"edd.avi"
0,0,"821059.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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89601,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 55,135,255
Combo3 : 113,226,255
Combo4 : 230,203,79

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Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-05-24T13:07:24+00:00

the other song brave symphonia from ending's album is way more epic in case you haven't hear it
i prefer that one to be anime ed tbh ;-;
this one's not bad though, gl

Fu Xuan

Beatmap Nominator

1,433 posts

Joined September 2015

Fu Xuan 2017-05-31T09:59:22+00:00

Hello from my queue o/

[General]

Disable Widescreen Support on Easy and Hard
I think the hitsounds are too loud :d

[Insane]

00:02:370 (4) - I think you missed a whistle here? Because there are whistles on 00:06:062 (4) - and 00:09:755 (4) -
00:17:601 (1,2,3,4) - Why is spacing higher than 00:15:755 (1,2,3,4) - Even tho the sound there is the same level of intensity
00:02:832 (1) - imo this would be better if you ctrl j, because of the objects before and after the slider contradicts the flow as it is
00:43:447 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe space them out for consistency of the spacing with 00:43:216 (1,2) -
00:44:832 (6) - I think that a finish would sound better here
01:27:524 (1) - I suggest making this circles that continue the stream to prioritize the white tick
01:27:870 (1) - Maybe end spinner on 01:29:139 -

[Kibb's Hard]

00:41:139 (4) - Maybe ctrl g to flow and to prioritize also 00:41:601 (1) -
00:45:293 (1,2) - Blanket? :d
00:46:678 (6) - I think making this a 1/2 slider would be better, then making 00:47:139 - a circle to prioritize the white tick
01:00:062 (1) - I think you should space this out more because of the intensity there. There are also some parts that are spaced out more rather than this.
01:15:293 (2,3) - Blanket?

[Forest's Normal]

00:41:601 (1) - I think this rhythm would sound better http://puu.sh/w6qla/cafc5adff1.jpg
01:13:678 - I don't think this should be on a low volume. Would sound better if the slidertail is more audible
00:54:524 (3,4,5) - imo the flow is forced here. Forced to go down?
00:56:139 - feels weird to ignore this but idk

[Easy]

Check AiMod distance snap, idk if this is a problem but following ds is always best
00:44:832 (4) - I think should be NC'd? (Same with other diffs)

That's all! Good luck~

My Angel Kitten

121 posts

Joined September 2015

My Angel Kitten 2017-05-31T13:06:24+00:00

Hello from my queue~

General

Nothing help much, the map already good, it doesn't need any major changes

Easy

- 00:30:524 (1) - curve to bottom way better, face to next note

Forest's Normal

- 00:56:370 (1,2) - better you make 1/2 sliders like this 00:57:293 (3,4) - https://puu.sh/w6umn/a8354a061e.png
- 01:03:755 (1) - maybe here better you make two 1/2 sliders https://puu.sh/w6uyl/294c321233.png
- 01:09:293 (3) - here too. but idk, whatever you like
- 01:26:370 - vocal is high, make it like you made here 01:25:447 (5,6) -

Insane

- 00:52:678 (1,2,3) - overlap

gluck~

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-06-01T00:31:55+00:00

-Aqua wrote:
Hello from my queue o/

[Forest's Normal]
00:41:601 (1) - I think this rhythm would sound better http://puu.sh/w6qla/cafc5adff1.jpg I don't use this rhythm because it makes a rhythm conflict with Hard
01:13:678 - I don't think this should be on a low volume. Would sound better if the slidertail is more audible Following the music
00:54:524 (3,4,5) - imo the flow is forced here. Forced to go down? Intended since it follows and matches with the "dong dong dong" in musical terms
00:56:139 - feels weird to ignore this but idk I don't want to force the rhythm

That's all! Good luck~

My Angel Kitten wrote:
Hello from my queue~

Forest's Normal
- 00:56:370 (1,2) - better you make 1/2 sliders like this 00:57:293 (3,4) - https://puu.sh/w6umn/a8354a061e.png Conflicts Hard rhythm
- 01:03:755 (1) - maybe here better you make two 1/2 sliders https://puu.sh/w6uyl/294c321233.png Following vocal
- 01:09:293 (3) - here too. but idk, whatever you like Same reason
- 01:26:370 - vocal is high, make it like you made here 01:25:447 (5,6) - Following the music

gluck~

Thanks

Rizen

1,666 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2017-06-02T03:53:20+00:00

holy shit why did it log me out and lose my responses

anyways..

@madhypnofrog
fixed most blankets pointed out in easy + that anchor point slider. some blankets are fine as is since it's not noticeable during gameplay. Insane, first point is fine as is since the objects won't be on the screen at the same time.
insane
point 4, should be fine because of slider leniency.
point 6, want to stay true to the percussion and only map it.
poiint 7, i think it flows fine ://
point 8, can't use same pattern because the sv changes are different there. I did slightly change the pattern tho
rest I applied, thanks!

@-aqua
widescreen support doesn't matter at all since there's no sb (doesn't matter if on or not)
hitsounds decreased by 20%
insane
point3, should be fine, flow doesn't seem uncomfortable at all :/
point5, I usually only use finishes for cymbal crashes in the music
point7, spinner is at current position because following held instruments and not vocals
easy, only ds problem pointed out by aimod is between two objects with 7/2 beat rest. I think it's fine to 'break' the ds since they are spaced so far apart rhythmically. NC at that point is kinda a personal preference thing and I don't really like NC'ing after a short 'break'
rest apples, thanks!

@My Angel Kitten
Easy, can't curve since the slider is so close to the top. Also, I think it's easy to follow since the map is rather low bpm anyways
Insane, overlap pattern done on purpose
thanks!

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

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Zero__wind 2017-08-01T16:04:13+00:00

NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
use .jpg as bg will make your file size much smaller
disable widescreen support for Easy and Hard

Easy
00:37:909 (1) - I think you need finish on head for the cymbals
00:59:601 (5,1) - nazi blanket
01:12:986 (3) - I noticed you used a red node at the white tick 01:13:447 - to change the direction of this slider, but actually I think you should move the red node to the blue tick 01:13:332 - instead to represent both the vocal and the drums properly

Forest's Normal
00:38:601 (2) - whistle on head?
01:17:370 (4) - 01:24:755 (4) - ^
01:26:832 (2,3,4) - flows kinda odd to me, maybe use clockwise like this so it makes the following spinner smoother

Kibb's Hard
hello Kibb in Taiwan
00:44:832 (1,1) - hmm, looks kinda weird, maybe get rid of the overlap, as it's pretty fine to have a bigger jump at 00:45:293 (1) -
01:14:832 (1,1) - stacK please?
01:17:370 (2,3,4) - make a regular triangle here and stack 01:18:986 (2) - with 01:17:370 (2) -

Insane
00:43:216 (1,2) - maybe move NC from 1 to 2 as 00:43:216 (1) - is actually not grouped with 00:43:447 (2,3,4,5) - but rather with the former stream
00:51:755 (5,6,7) - wrong rhythm here, should actually move 00:51:870 (6) - to 00:52:101 - to form a triple with 00:51:986 (7,8) - instead if you listen closely to the music
01:13:678 (1) - 20% volume soft sample on head is not even audiable and is unrankable here. you should add whistle or clap on head to make the beat noticeable and raise the volume to 40%

call me back

Last edited by Zero__wind 2017-08-13T08:39:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-08-11T05:42:39+00:00

Insane

00:38:255 (2) - The spacing was kinda inconssteitn visually.
00:43:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - Cool pattern. I kinda wish you had mapped the vocal or at least the white tick though, cuz of the way ou set it up.

Coulda tried something cute like this

00:59:139 (5) - NC'ing would be nice.
01:16:216 (7) - Stacks

Kibb's Hard

00:13:909 (1) - Move this down a bit? The structure doesn't look that nice here.

~

00:18:755 (4) - Stacks
01:01:216 (5,6,1) - You rarely if ever use jumps so this is quite out of the blue.

Forest's Normal

00:13:909 (3) - Make the slider-tick align with the red node.
00:54:524 (3,4,5) - These could be more consistent in blanket. You can see the spacing in between them is kinda different.

Easy

00:15:755 (1,2) - blanket
00:50:832 (3) - Personally, i think Ctrl+G'ing flows better overall, sinde 2>3 would become rotational instead of drop-off, and you wouldn't have linear flow going into the next pattern. It's up do you tho since both are fine for Easy.
01:18:524 (1,2) - blanket
01:23:139 (2,4) - stack

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Metadata and 12 SP please

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-11T07:43:56+00:00

a q p w wrote:
meta data

also fixed all

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Rizen

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2017-09-08T03:07:10+00:00

literally applied all

sorry for late replies, have been vry busy irl

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-09-15T03:21:36+00:00

fix most except some mentioned

01:01:216 (5,6,1) - its not really the first time i use jumps.. o-o
00:44:832 (1,1) - did something else instead

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Version:Kibb's Hard
Source:ロクでなし魔術講師と禁忌教典
Tags:Kibbleru Underforest of bastard magic instructor rokudenashi majutsu koushi to akashic records tv size ed ending sistine fibel rumia tingel re=l rayford システィーナ＝フィーベル ルミア＝ティンジェル リィエル＝レイフォード
BeatmapID:1296195
BeatmapSetID:614195

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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