[General]
Flow is fine, but it seems like you don't have any structure. I mean, everything could be placed better, here it looks like it's randomly placed for most of your jumps. I don't really like when there is no structure tbh :/ By structure i mean something like this, see it's pretty geometrical but when you play it you don't see it that way and it still has flow. Idk if you understood what i meant but yeah, you should find your structure
The map is fun to play with DT anyways, but you should change HP5 to HP6, I missed a whole section and was still alive :p
[Transcending Time]
00:02:250 (1,2) - is more spaced than 00:02:701 (3,4,5) - . You should use thhe same spacing here
00:08:565 (1,2) - ^ 00:09:016 (3,4,5) - . ^
00:11:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks like you wanted to do something more rounded, but you failed xD
00:15:107 (4,5,6,7) - thats what i'm talking about in General, This looks sooo random, and i think it is. + Spacing is different at the 4 notes ! thats not good imo (I won't notice theses issues anymore, it's almost everywhere)
00:41:047 (1) - Try to blanket it with 00:40:595 (6) - ?
00:49:167 (3) - ^ 00:50:069 (2) - ?
00:59:994 (6) - This should definitly be clickable
01:10:369 (3) - , 01:10:821 (4) - this is too rounded D:
01:19:392 (2,3) - this is ugly
Now the song is repeating, it's the same issues everytime imo.
Good luck ranking this my man !