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Sinnoh wrote:

recheck

General
03:13:022 (5) - i can't figure out what hitsounds should be here since it's done in 3 different ways whistl+finish?
Combo colour 1 is lumosity 240, "Avoid using combo colors with ~220 luminosity or higher during kiai times." ok, change to green
AI bat is telling me there's a tonne of unused storyboard files, can you confirm if this is correct or not? I could not find it ...not exist already?

Easy
ai mod ok

Normal
02:04:533 (3) - 02:10:220 (4) - snaps were broken with timing oh...ok

Hard
00:51:430 (2) - hitsound ok
04:07:748 (4,2,3) - messed up stacking, do a manual stack changed placement

Insane
00:19:782 (3) - Wrong hitsound ok
00:48:793 (3,4,5,6,7) - hitsound inconsistent with extra ok

Extra
ai mod ok
01:26:045 (4) - Hitsound tail ok
Thanks, updated
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what does Thumbs.db do
other than that good to go
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this file seems to be created automatically by Windows, so my PC setting is bad...

i will remove it as soon as i get home
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ok, removed Thumbs.db
updated!
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(☆´3`)ノthanks~♪
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as promised

General
fine

Easy
00:52:419 (2) - missing clap on head
01:13:353 (2) - don't really know what's this following to, I think you should have a circle at 01:13:353 - and then start a 1/1 reverse slider from 01:13:682 - to follow vocal
01:26:540 (3) - similar to above, maybe change to a 2/1 slider and a circle at 01:27:528 -

Normal
00:58:847 (1,2) - missing clap at their ends
01:31:815 (3) - missing two claps
01:54:562 (6) - missing whistle at end
02:06:099 (1) - missing whistle on head
02:07:417 (4) - missing clap at end
02:19:285 (1,2) - missing clap at their ends
03:06:759 (1,1) - ^
04:33:792 (3) - missing whistle on head

Hard
00:04:782 (1) - clap at the reversing point?
00:04:782 (1,2,3) - maybe you can turn up the speed from 00:04:782 (1) - instead of from 00:05:441 (3) - as I feel that will fit the music, also you can use equal spacing between 00:04:782 (1,2,3) - so it'll vissualy look better
00:30:826 (4) - don't know what's this circle following, I think simply removing it will make the rhythm better, kinda similar to 00:27:529 (2,3,1) -
00:33:463 (4) - ^ or maybe you can choose to change it to a 1/2 slider
00:54:891 (1,3) - why not making them parallel? just like 00:55:221 (2,4) -
01:08:573 (2,3) - I think this jump is unreasonably big, 3 is not a really strong beat and I don't think there shold be such a big jump, better keep common spacing between 01:08:573 (2,3) - , the slider jump between 01:08:738 (3,4) - is totally fine
01:47:804 (2,3) - 01:50:441 (2,3) - similar to above, I think these two jumps are too big and don't fit the music well, better make them consistent with 01:53:078 (2,3) - which is more appropriate
02:22:417 (4,5,6) - why are they totally different with 01:01:993 (3,4,5,6) - while the music is the same? I hope you can make them consistent
03:08:242 (1) - missing clap on head and whistle at end
04:09:561 (2) - missing clap on head

Insane
00:07:419 (1) - missing whistle on head
00:13:188 (3) - missing clap at end
01:03:793 (2) - why using a default clap here instead of the snaredrum? it's inconsistent with Easy Normal and Hard
01:46:892 - you don't have a reason to drag the break time here, plz better make it back to natural
02:24:561 (1) - should use finish on head instead of clap
02:49:121 (4) - missing whistle
02:53:077 (5) - missing clap on head
04:00:165 (1) - tbh this slider shape looks really out of place along with the other ones, this might be the only time you drew a slider like this in the whole diff
04:03:297 (2) - I think a circle is totally ok, there's no important sound on the blue tick to follow
04:06:429 (5) - missing clap

Extra
01:03:792 (4) - same as Insane
01:26:045 (4) - should use a clap at end instead of whistle
02:21:264 (3,4) - I don't think there are still 1/3 piano sounds to follow, change these to two 1/2 sliders to follow the drums should be more appropriate
02:35:934 (4,5,6,1) - this flow is not really comfortable imo, you'd better try CTRL+G for 02:36:099 (5,6) - or rework in other ways
02:56:209 (1) - need finish on head like other diffs
03:00:330 (2) - the whistle on head should be moved to the end to match with the drum

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Zero__wind wrote:

as promised trust

General
fine

Easy
00:52:419 (2) - missing clap on head ok
01:13:353 (2) - don't really know what's this following to, I think you should have a circle at 01:13:353 - and then start a 1/1 reverse slider from 01:13:682 - to follow vocal i tried changing pattern
01:26:540 (3) - similar to above, maybe change to a 2/1 slider and a circle at 01:27:528 -^

Normal
00:58:847 (1,2) - missing clap at their ends
01:31:815 (3) - missing two claps
01:54:562 (6) - missing whistle at end
02:06:099 (1) - missing whistle on head
02:07:417 (4) - missing clap at end
02:19:285 (1,2) - missing clap at their ends
03:06:759 (1,1) - ^
04:33:792 (3) - missing whistle on head
all fixed

Hard
00:04:782 (1) - clap at the reversing point? yes
00:04:782 (1,2,3) - maybe you can turn up the speed from 00:04:782 (1) - instead of from 00:05:441 (3) - as I feel that will fit the music, also you can use equal spacing between 00:04:782 (1,2,3) - so it'll vissualy look better ok
00:30:826 (4) - don't know what's this circle following, I think simply removing it will make the rhythm better, kinda similar to 00:27:529 (2,3,1) - ok
00:33:463 (4) - ^ or maybe you can choose to change it to a 1/2 slider slider here
00:54:891 (1,3) - why not making them parallel? just like 00:55:221 (2,4) - oh..miss
01:08:573 (2,3) - I think this jump is unreasonably big, 3 is not a really strong beat and I don't think there shold be such a big jump, better keep common spacing between 01:08:573 (2,3) - , the slider jump between 01:08:738 (3,4) - is totally fine ok
01:47:804 (2,3) - 01:50:441 (2,3) - similar to above, I think these two jumps are too big and don't fit the music well, better make them consistent with 01:53:078 (2,3) - which is more appropriateok, placement moved
02:22:417 (4,5,6) - why are they totally different with 01:01:993 (3,4,5,6) - while the music is the same? I hope you can make them consistent hm, it is certainly the same...
03:08:242 (1) - missing clap on head and whistle at end ok
04:09:561 (2) - missing clap on head ok

Insane
00:07:419 (1) - missing whistle on head ok
00:13:188 (3) - missing clap at end ok
01:03:793 (2) - why using a default clap here instead of the snaredrum? it's inconsistent with Easy Normal and Hard miss...
01:46:892 - you don't have a reason to drag the break time here, plz better make it back to natural ok
02:49:121 (4) - missing whistle ok
02:53:077 (5) - missing clap on head ok
04:00:165 (1) - tbh this slider shape looks really out of place along with the other ones, this might be the only time you drew a slider like this in the whole diff ok
04:03:297 (2) - I think a circle is totally ok, there's no important sound on the blue tick to follow ok
04:06:429 (5) - missing clap ok

Extra
01:03:792 (4) - same as Insane ok
01:26:045 (4) - should use a clap at end instead of whistle ok
02:21:264 (3,4) - I don't think there are still 1/3 piano sounds to follow, change these to two 1/2 sliders to follow the drums should be more appropriate exist 1/3 piano sounds
02:35:934 (4,5,6,1) - this flow is not really comfortable imo, you'd better try CTRL+G for 02:36:099 (5,6) - or rework in other ways changed it to a slider
02:56:209 (1) - need finish on head like other diffs ok
03:00:330 (2) - the whistle on head should be moved to the end to match with the drum ok

call me back
Thank you for modding!!
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I've been using this Miku as avatar for long :3
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wooooo
arigatou!!!!
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Chirony wrote:

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finally! grats!
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gratz!!
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Chirony wrote:

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おめでとうございます!
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おめでとう!
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いぇあ
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awesome !! :)
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これは素晴らしいです!

おめでとう!
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