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U - Little My Star

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Topic Starter
-Hyde
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 29 de noviembre de 2012 at 10:20:05 p.m.

Artist: U
Title: Little My Star
Source: Makai Tenshi Jiburiru 2
BPM: 177
Filesize: 7081kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,85 stars, 575 notes)
  2. Normal (3,18 stars, 265 notes)
Download: U - Little My Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Makai Tenshi Jiburiru - 2
Normal ~ Me
Insane ~ Me
kuro_sk
♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫
Ryu_old
cool maap man :DD Slava's lil bro :DDDD hahaha~~~ good job :DD
Arial
:lol: nice map... well done my friend...C: :lol:be approved and ranked... 8-)
Cao cao_old
♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪good job aniki!!!! hope can be ranked!!!!♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫

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lolita_xaut
♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪good job aniki!!!! hope can be ranked!!!!♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫

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phonic
Good ;)



Rnked GoGo!

Stra~ 
[LordsOfShadow]
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Janilett
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
Kuran Deus
I love you Hyde :3 (my nii.. not you >.>(?) xD

Hope this will be rankeed! :3 It's so cuute! I liked it so much >.<
ZekeyHache
No tienes un Preview point...Te recomiendo este: 01:10:830
No afecta en nada si hay algun hitobjet o otra cosa.Lo tienes que poner igual en todas las diff.
Ahi te dejo una imagen con una flechita de donde es.Y tambien te dejo una estrella :)

Topic Starter
-Hyde
Gracias ezek lo pondre a ver que tal :o
Luego me dices bien que pasa con eso :x
Jibril Schiffer
wow bn hecho nii-chan ers grande!! :)
hope can be ranked :3
_lolipop
I mod this map because of the request of [Dark Master].
Too many mistakes in [Normal]
And this is fixed normal diff.

Download: U - Little My Star (Full Ver) (_HydeSama_) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Thanks _lolipop. Sorry for the inconvenience c:
Help me a lot :)
Inwerd
Nice work.. Really liked the map ;D

Hope you get ranked, bro..
Good Luck ;)
chiix3
;O que prooo hydeee! Buena suerte! *w* Si pudiera darte una estrellaaaa... ;(
eldnl
[General]

- If you want to get this map ranked, you need a difficulty with less than 3 stars.
- Add ezek to tags in all difficulties.
- BG2 and BG3 need to be a 4:3 image, change it to 1024x768 or 800x600
- You have two .osb in your folder, if you don't use it, please remove both and full submit.
- The mp3 have 260kbps wich is unrankable, change it to 128~192kbps. If you don't know how, let me know.
- You need a break in the hard and insane difficulty, the song is very long.

[Normal]

Please down the HP Drain Rate, is too high for a normal. I suggest reduce it to 4.
There are a lot of spacing errors, little jumps and some hard stuff to be the easier difficulty. I suggest to not use stacked notes under the slider, use the distance snap ever and don't make pattern that are hard to read for beginners.
00:08:457 (1) There are a little jump, not good for the easier difficulty, change it please.
00:11:169 (5) To be consistent with the previous combo you need a new combo here.
00:35:576 - In the previous patterns you use the red tick, but here you use the white ticks, this can be confusing, please change all of these notes to the red tick. I suggest to make something like this: http://puu.sh/4TwC follow better the music IMO.
00:46:508 - Remove the clap in the middle of the slider, sounds really bad.
00:52:186 (2) Move this slider to next red tick, considering the rhythm that you are following before. Also you need reduce the slider 1/2 beats.
00:53:288 (3,4) Move (3) to the previous white tick, also move (4) to the next red tick and reduce it 1/2 beats. Also, if you do these changes, you need fix the spacing between the notes.
00:59:983 (1,2,3) Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:339 - Hard spin, too close to the notes, I suggest to make something like this: http://puu.sh/4TyN delete (6,7,8) and start the spin in the white tick, also finish the spin here 01:07:440.
01:16:254 (5,1) Spacing.
01:18:966 (5,1) ^ Same
01:24:389 (6,7,8,9) Inconsistent spacing.
01:51:678 (3,1) Spacing.
01:54:050 - Why you use different spacing between these notes? please use the same distance.
02:06:593 (3) Move this note to the previous white tick, follow better the rhythm.
02:19:983 (5) Finish the slider in the white tick
02:25:067 (4,5) That pattern is not good, really, very hard to read for beginners. Don't follow the stream in the easier difficulty.
02:28:288 (1) This spin is very short, remove it.
02:36:254 (3,1) Fix this little jump.
02:50:152 (7,1) ^ Same.
02:52:525 (4,1) ^
03:08:796 (4,1) Big jump here, don't fit with the difficulty. You must change it.
03:19:644 (5,1) Little jump here too.
03:21:678 (5) End this slider in the white tick.

[ezek's star]

Reduce the OD and the HP Drain Rate, this play like a hard.
I don't hear so much hitsounds in this difficulty, please add more finish and claps.
That background, you should change it, very suggestive.
00:58:203 (3) Move this note to the white tick.
02:55:237 (1) This note is too close to the previous slider, I press before. I know, that's for the symmetry, but you should change it.
No major problems here, but I don't like the difficulty, maybe you can improve it. Different sliders, good patterns and other slider velocity should be fine, because the slider velocity here is faster than the insane difficulty.

[Insane]

OD +2
00:11:169 (8) Add a new combo here, remove in the next (1) and add a new combo in (5). That was weird when I play this difficulty.
00:20:237 (5) Move this slider to the previous white tick and fix the spacing.
00:23:118 (6) I don't know if it's on purpose but the (6) need to be in the next red tick
00:24:728 (1) Why you change the spacing constantly? There are no a reason, please change this patterns.
00:35:152 (1,2,3,4) These notes don't follow anything, these noter are in the blue tick, please move to other tick, red or white.
00:46:084 - You use the blue ticks again here, fix it please.
00:57:356 - orz, Again.
01:05:661 - ^ God, not mention it anymore, you will fix all of these problems.
When you fix all of these errors I can do a remod to this difficulty, you need more work on this.

I keep the star for now, you need improve the map.
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Thanks for your help eldnl. I'll fix it now C:
And then ... Thank you for your generosity XD!
Latias_Haruka
Why this happens :shock:
that crazy rhythm What? :|
before corrected but the was a good beat map  :(
Topic Starter
-Hyde

latiaslove wrote:

Why this happens :shock:
that crazy rhythm What? :|
before corrected but the was a good beat map  :(
Thanks? :D
xD
Latias_Haruka
offset3, 118 is not.
The exact value offset3, 032

Insane
「oh my oh my little my heart
素直になるから」02:33:116 (4) - is a little early to start :?
Kanon
General
delete the two osb file when next full submit
tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now . change to 1 plz
cancle countdown because after countdown finished still some time when you start to hit note , its so werid.
time is off when I test play get a timing expert to check it!

Normal
HP DRAIN-1 OD+1 And I suggest CS+1
This diff star rating more than 3 star a lot consider decrease it because its the easiest diff.
00:45:829 (1,2) - unrhythmical
00:52:440 (2,3,4,5) - weird to play , suggest remake this pattern
00:54:643 (6,7,8) - make it nicer
01:09:728 (5) - not fit imo
01:11:253 (1,2,3,4) - make it nicer
01:13:626 (1,2,3,4) - ^

ezek's star
why tick rate 2? if no particuralar reason use 1 plz
00:44:134 (1) - cancle new combo
other looks fine

Insane
00:38:033 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
01:35:829 (6) - unrankable .spit them a bit
02:40:236- why break here? you dont set a break here in normal. Dont be lazy ._.

Still need lots work
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Thanks for the help Kanon
*Correcting mistakes * XD
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Fixed these issues

Now to wait to be back to check
raisana

[Dark Master] wrote:

♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪good job aniki!!!! hope can be ranked!!!!♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫
Good job otouto!! And I really hope the map will become ranked!!
kosiga
I like the song :oops:

↓my mod↓

[General]
title name - Makai Tenshi Djibril 2 better

[Normal]
plz use the CZ -2(lower than hard,insane diff)
00:40:764(1) - remove circle
00:42:120(5,6) - remove 6circle, and move to 5slider 00:42:459~00:43:137end
00:51:950(1,2,3,4,5) - like this http://puu.sh/6rcx
01:09:747(5) - slider start 01:09:916 end 01:10:933
01:10:933 - KIAI TIME here
01:32:289 - KIAI TIME end here?
02:22:798(1,2) - remove 2circle, and move to 2slider 02:22:798~02:23:814 end, and 02:24:153 add circle!
02:29:577 - KIAI TIME here
02:40:086 - KIAI TIME end here
03:00:425(5,6) - Challenge like this http://puu.sh/6rem
03:13:984 - KIAI TIME end here


[ezek's star]
00:23:645(1,2,3,4) - grid move. 1:x152,y152 2:x216,y120 3:x288,y120 4:x352,y152
00:31:781(2,3,4,5,6) - grid move. 4:312,y344 5:x264,y296 6:x216,y248
00:52:798(2) - move to 00:52:967
00:53:814(4) - slider end 00:54:323
01:06:357(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - grid move. 1:x96,y96 2:x64,y160 3:x56,y232 4:x88,y296 5:x160,y304 6:x128,y240 7:x200,y240 1:x168,y176
01:10:933 - KIAI TIME here
01:26:526(1,2,3,4,1) - grid move. 2:x112,y304 3:x64,y248 4:x48,y176 1:x88,y112
01:32:289 - KIAI TIME end here
01:43:476(1,2,3,4) - grid move. 2:x32,y264
01:46:696(2,3,4) - grid move. 3:x400,y240 4:x344,y288
01:49:408(2,3,4) - grid move. 2:x432,y64 3:x480,y120 4:408,y136
02:21:442(1) - spin end 02:23:814
02:25:001(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - grid move. 1:x416,y288 2:x464,y232 3:x472,y160 4:x440,y96 5:x376,y64 1:x336,y200
02:29:577 - KIAI TIME here
02:36:357(5,6,7) - grid move. 6:x400,y288 7:x344,y328
02:40:086 - KIAI TIME end here
02:51:272(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - grid move. 3:x176,y64 4:x228,y116(grid size tiny) 5:x280,y64 6:x352,y80 7:x408,y128
02:57:374(7,1,2,3,1) - 7:NC? and grid move. 1:x80,y160 2:x88,y88 3:x152,y56 1:x224,y56
03:02:120(1,2,3) - grid move. 2:x104,y240 3:x152,y296
03:13:984 - KIAI TIME end here

[Insane]
Set preview point 01:10:933?
00:10:340(1) - slider start 00:10:255 end 00:10:594
00:12:120(4) - remove circle?
00:13:984(1,2,3,4,5) - Challenge like this http://puu.sh/6rqa
00:23:476(1) - slider start 00:23:645 end 00:24:153( remove one repeat)
00:50:848 - add circle?
01:00:933(3) - slider start 01:01:103 end 01:01:781
01:02:035(4) - slider start 01:02:120 end 01:02:289(remove one repeat)
01:10:933 - KIAI TIME here
01:20:848(9) - slider start 01:20:933 end 01:21:103(remove one repeat)
01:32:289 - KIAI TIME end here
01:42:628(5) - change circle
01:50:679(6) - remove slider. and add two circle 01:50:764,01:50:848
02:29:577 - KIAI TIME here
02:40:086 - KIAI TIME end here
02:52:628 - KIAI TIME here and NC?
03:13:984 - KIAI TIME end here
03:14:831(2,3) - why only here DS 0.6x?

Good luck~ :)
ZekeyHache
DerekMcD
It's your lucky day!:D

  • ~Normal~

    00:13:645 (4): Do you realize one of the these girls song "Hai" at loud? If so, Take off both clap and Wistle and add finish?
    00:46:187 (1): End the slider at 00:46:526?
    01:32:289 (4): Add finish on the start of the slider.

    ~esek's star~

    00:13:645 (1): Is it better if you remove clap?
    00:36:865 (1): Could you fix this slider like this? then fix the spacing until 00:37:882?
    01:46:865 (2): Nazi... Move this one grid right...
    02:51:950 (5, 6, 7): Highlight them all and move them one grid right.

    ~Insane.

    00:13:645 (9): Add finish?
    02:10:255 (6): Turn both snaps off and move this to x:186 y: 304.
That's it!
Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Sorry, no comment because not correct the past mistakes that marked me Kosiga
:C
DerekMcD

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Sorry, no comment because not correct the past mistakes that marked me Kosiga
:C
No worries but... We're just trying to help you improve the much as we can though.
DerekMcD
Open up, I got you something.:-)
ATTACH[U - Little My Star (Full Ver) (_HydeSama_) [kokoroanime's star].osu]

Last night, I just decided to make a easy guest diff for you. If you don't like these kinds of sliders, let me know some stuffs needs to be fixed like the other diffs are then I'll do it for you, or you can fix it the way you wanted.

If you're surprised, this is my very first guest diff. So I just want credit from y'all people though.^^

Hope you'll enjoy it.:-)

Download: U - Little My Star (Full Ver) (_HydeSama_) [kokoroanime's star].osu
Topic Starter
-Hyde

kokoroanime wrote:

Open up, I got you something.:-)
[attachment=0:44f62]U - Little My Star (Full Ver) (_HydeSama_) [kokoroanime's star].osu[/attachment:44f62]

Last night, I just decided to make a easy guest diff for you. If you don't like these kinds of sliders, let me know some stuffs needs to be fixed like the other diffs are then I'll do it for you, or you can fix it the way you wanted.

If you're surprised, this is my very first guest diff. So I just want credit from y'all people though.^^

Hope you'll enjoy it.:-)
Thanks for your interest in my beatmap kokoroanime, thank you very much.
I will finish editing the beatmap this weekend, see you.
Topic Starter
-Hyde

_HydeSama_ wrote:

kokoroanime wrote:

Open up, I got you something.:-)
[attachment=0:ee25d]U - Little My Star (Full Ver) (_HydeSama_) [kokoroanime's star].osu[/attachment:ee25d]

Last night, I just decided to make a easy guest diff for you. If you don't like these kinds of sliders, let me know some stuffs needs to be fixed like the other diffs are then I'll do it for you, or you can fix it the way you wanted.

If you're surprised, this is my very first guest diff. So I just want credit from y'all people though.^^

Hope you'll enjoy it.:-)
Thanks for your interest in my beatmap kokoroanime, thank you very much.
I will finish editing the beatmap this weekend, see you.
Okay kokoroanime-san c: I'll accept your difficulty
and if you also can ask me a difficulty for any of your beatmaps (?
[/quote]
DerekMcD

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Okay kokoroanime-san c: I'll accept your difficulty
and if you also can ask me a difficulty for any of your beatmaps (?
Aww!! Thank you!!! I'll let you know whenever. You could mod one of my beatmaps.
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