[General]- If you want to get this map ranked, you need a difficulty with less than 3 stars.
- Add ezek to tags in all difficulties.
- BG2 and BG3 need to be a 4:3 image, change it to 1024x768 or 800x600
- You have two .osb in your folder, if you don't use it, please remove both and full submit.
- The mp3 have 260kbps wich is unrankable, change it to 128~192kbps. If you don't know how, let me know.
- You need a break in the hard and insane difficulty, the song is very long.
[Normal]Please down the HP Drain Rate, is too high for a normal. I suggest reduce it to 4.
There are a lot of spacing errors, little jumps and some hard stuff to be the easier difficulty. I suggest to not use stacked notes under the slider, use the distance snap ever and don't make pattern that are hard to read for beginners.
00:08:457 (1) There are a little jump, not good for the easier difficulty, change it please.
00:11:169 (5) To be consistent with the previous combo you need a new combo here.
00:35:576 - In the previous patterns you use the red tick, but here you use the white ticks, this can be confusing, please change all of these notes to the red tick. I suggest to make something like this:
http://puu.sh/4TwC follow better the music IMO.
00:46:508 - Remove the clap in the middle of the slider, sounds really bad.
00:52:186 (2) Move this slider to next red tick, considering the rhythm that you are following before. Also you need reduce the slider 1/2 beats.
00:53:288 (3,4) Move (3) to the previous white tick, also move (4) to the next red tick and reduce it 1/2 beats. Also, if you do these changes, you need fix the spacing between the notes.
00:59:983 (1,2,3) Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:339 - Hard spin, too close to the notes, I suggest to make something like this:
http://puu.sh/4TyN delete (6,7,8) and start the spin in the white tick, also finish the spin here 01:07:440.
01:16:254 (5,1) Spacing.
01:18:966 (5,1) ^ Same
01:24:389 (6,7,8,9) Inconsistent spacing.
01:51:678 (3,1) Spacing.
01:54:050 - Why you use different spacing between these notes? please use the same distance.
02:06:593 (3) Move this note to the previous white tick, follow better the rhythm.
02:19:983 (5) Finish the slider in the white tick
02:25:067 (4,5) That pattern is not good, really, very hard to read for beginners. Don't follow the stream in the easier difficulty.
02:28:288 (1) This spin is very short, remove it.
02:36:254 (3,1) Fix this little jump.
02:50:152 (7,1) ^ Same.
02:52:525 (4,1) ^
03:08:796 (4,1) Big jump here, don't fit with the difficulty. You must change it.
03:19:644 (5,1) Little jump here too.
03:21:678 (5) End this slider in the white tick.
[ezek's star]Reduce the OD and the HP Drain Rate, this play like a hard.
I don't hear so much hitsounds in this difficulty, please add more finish and claps.
That background, you should change it, very suggestive.
00:58:203 (3) Move this note to the white tick.
02:55:237 (1) This note is too close to the previous slider, I press before. I know, that's for the symmetry, but you should change it.
No major problems here, but I don't like the difficulty, maybe you can improve it. Different sliders, good patterns and other slider velocity should be fine, because the slider velocity here is faster than the insane difficulty.
[Insane]OD +2
00:11:169 (8) Add a new combo here, remove in the next (1) and add a new combo in (5). That was weird when I play this difficulty.
00:20:237 (5) Move this slider to the previous white tick and fix the spacing.
00:23:118 (6) I don't know if it's on purpose but the (6) need to be in the next red tick
00:24:728 (1) Why you change the spacing constantly? There are no a reason, please change this patterns.
00:35:152 (1,2,3,4) These notes don't follow anything, these noter are in the blue tick, please move to other tick, red or white.
00:46:084 - You use the blue ticks again here, fix it please.
00:57:356 - orz, Again.
01:05:661 - ^ God, not mention it anymore, you will fix all of these problems.
When you fix all of these errors I can do a remod to this difficulty, you need more work on this.
I keep the star for now, you need improve the map.
Good luck