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U - Little My Star

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Topic Starter
-Hyde
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 29 de noviembre de 2012 at 10:20:05 p.m.

Artist: U
Title: Little My Star
Source: Makai Tenshi Jiburiru 2
BPM: 177
Filesize: 7081kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,85 stars, 575 notes)
  2. Normal (3,18 stars, 265 notes)
Download: U - Little My Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Makai Tenshi Jiburiru - 2
Normal ~ Me
Insane ~ Me
kuro_sk
♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫
Ryu_old
cool maap man :DD Slava's lil bro :DDDD hahaha~~~ good job :DD
Arial
:lol: nice map... well done my friend...C: :lol:be approved and ranked... 8-)
Cao cao_old
♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪good job aniki!!!! hope can be ranked!!!!♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫

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lolita_xaut
♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪good job aniki!!!! hope can be ranked!!!!♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫

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phonic
Good ;)



Rnked GoGo!

Stra~ 
[LordsOfShadow]
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Janilett
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
;) Nicee.
Kuran Deus
I love you Hyde :3 (my nii.. not you >.>(?) xD

Hope this will be rankeed! :3 It's so cuute! I liked it so much >.<
ZekeyHache
No tienes un Preview point...Te recomiendo este: 01:10:830
No afecta en nada si hay algun hitobjet o otra cosa.Lo tienes que poner igual en todas las diff.
Ahi te dejo una imagen con una flechita de donde es.Y tambien te dejo una estrella :)

Topic Starter
-Hyde
Gracias ezek lo pondre a ver que tal :o
Luego me dices bien que pasa con eso :x
Jibril Schiffer
wow bn hecho nii-chan ers grande!! :)
hope can be ranked :3
_lolipop
I mod this map because of the request of [Dark Master].
Too many mistakes in [Normal]
And this is fixed normal diff.

Download: U - Little My Star (Full Ver) (_HydeSama_) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Thanks _lolipop. Sorry for the inconvenience c:
Help me a lot :)
Inwerd
Nice work.. Really liked the map ;D

Hope you get ranked, bro..
Good Luck ;)
chiix3
;O que prooo hydeee! Buena suerte! *w* Si pudiera darte una estrellaaaa... ;(
eldnl
[General]

- If you want to get this map ranked, you need a difficulty with less than 3 stars.
- Add ezek to tags in all difficulties.
- BG2 and BG3 need to be a 4:3 image, change it to 1024x768 or 800x600
- You have two .osb in your folder, if you don't use it, please remove both and full submit.
- The mp3 have 260kbps wich is unrankable, change it to 128~192kbps. If you don't know how, let me know.
- You need a break in the hard and insane difficulty, the song is very long.

[Normal]

Please down the HP Drain Rate, is too high for a normal. I suggest reduce it to 4.
There are a lot of spacing errors, little jumps and some hard stuff to be the easier difficulty. I suggest to not use stacked notes under the slider, use the distance snap ever and don't make pattern that are hard to read for beginners.
00:08:457 (1) There are a little jump, not good for the easier difficulty, change it please.
00:11:169 (5) To be consistent with the previous combo you need a new combo here.
00:35:576 - In the previous patterns you use the red tick, but here you use the white ticks, this can be confusing, please change all of these notes to the red tick. I suggest to make something like this: http://puu.sh/4TwC follow better the music IMO.
00:46:508 - Remove the clap in the middle of the slider, sounds really bad.
00:52:186 (2) Move this slider to next red tick, considering the rhythm that you are following before. Also you need reduce the slider 1/2 beats.
00:53:288 (3,4) Move (3) to the previous white tick, also move (4) to the next red tick and reduce it 1/2 beats. Also, if you do these changes, you need fix the spacing between the notes.
00:59:983 (1,2,3) Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:339 - Hard spin, too close to the notes, I suggest to make something like this: http://puu.sh/4TyN delete (6,7,8) and start the spin in the white tick, also finish the spin here 01:07:440.
01:16:254 (5,1) Spacing.
01:18:966 (5,1) ^ Same
01:24:389 (6,7,8,9) Inconsistent spacing.
01:51:678 (3,1) Spacing.
01:54:050 - Why you use different spacing between these notes? please use the same distance.
02:06:593 (3) Move this note to the previous white tick, follow better the rhythm.
02:19:983 (5) Finish the slider in the white tick
02:25:067 (4,5) That pattern is not good, really, very hard to read for beginners. Don't follow the stream in the easier difficulty.
02:28:288 (1) This spin is very short, remove it.
02:36:254 (3,1) Fix this little jump.
02:50:152 (7,1) ^ Same.
02:52:525 (4,1) ^
03:08:796 (4,1) Big jump here, don't fit with the difficulty. You must change it.
03:19:644 (5,1) Little jump here too.
03:21:678 (5) End this slider in the white tick.

[ezek's star]

Reduce the OD and the HP Drain Rate, this play like a hard.
I don't hear so much hitsounds in this difficulty, please add more finish and claps.
That background, you should change it, very suggestive.
00:58:203 (3) Move this note to the white tick.
02:55:237 (1) This note is too close to the previous slider, I press before. I know, that's for the symmetry, but you should change it.
No major problems here, but I don't like the difficulty, maybe you can improve it. Different sliders, good patterns and other slider velocity should be fine, because the slider velocity here is faster than the insane difficulty.

[Insane]

OD +2
00:11:169 (8) Add a new combo here, remove in the next (1) and add a new combo in (5). That was weird when I play this difficulty.
00:20:237 (5) Move this slider to the previous white tick and fix the spacing.
00:23:118 (6) I don't know if it's on purpose but the (6) need to be in the next red tick
00:24:728 (1) Why you change the spacing constantly? There are no a reason, please change this patterns.
00:35:152 (1,2,3,4) These notes don't follow anything, these noter are in the blue tick, please move to other tick, red or white.
00:46:084 - You use the blue ticks again here, fix it please.
00:57:356 - orz, Again.
01:05:661 - ^ God, not mention it anymore, you will fix all of these problems.
When you fix all of these errors I can do a remod to this difficulty, you need more work on this.

I keep the star for now, you need improve the map.
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Thanks for your help eldnl. I'll fix it now C:
And then ... Thank you for your generosity XD!
Latias_Haruka
Why this happens :shock:
that crazy rhythm What? :|
before corrected but the was a good beat map  :(
Topic Starter
-Hyde

latiaslove wrote:

Why this happens :shock:
that crazy rhythm What? :|
before corrected but the was a good beat map  :(
Thanks? :D
xD
Latias_Haruka
offset3, 118 is not.
The exact value offset3, 032

Insane
「oh my oh my little my heart
素直になるから」02:33:116 (4) - is a little early to start :?
Kanon
General
delete the two osb file when next full submit
tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now . change to 1 plz
cancle countdown because after countdown finished still some time when you start to hit note , its so werid.
time is off when I test play get a timing expert to check it!

Normal
HP DRAIN-1 OD+1 And I suggest CS+1
This diff star rating more than 3 star a lot consider decrease it because its the easiest diff.
00:45:829 (1,2) - unrhythmical
00:52:440 (2,3,4,5) - weird to play , suggest remake this pattern
00:54:643 (6,7,8) - make it nicer
01:09:728 (5) - not fit imo
01:11:253 (1,2,3,4) - make it nicer
01:13:626 (1,2,3,4) - ^

ezek's star
why tick rate 2? if no particuralar reason use 1 plz
00:44:134 (1) - cancle new combo
other looks fine

Insane
00:38:033 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
01:35:829 (6) - unrankable .spit them a bit
02:40:236- why break here? you dont set a break here in normal. Dont be lazy ._.

Still need lots work
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Thanks for the help Kanon
*Correcting mistakes * XD
Topic Starter
-Hyde
Fixed these issues

Now to wait to be back to check
raisana

[Dark Master] wrote:

♪ ♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪good job aniki!!!! hope can be ranked!!!!♪ ♫ ♫♪ ♪ ♫ ♫
Good job otouto!! And I really hope the map will become ranked!!
kosiga
I like the song :oops:

↓my mod↓

[General]
title name - Makai Tenshi Djibril 2 better

[Normal]
plz use the CZ -2(lower than hard,insane diff)
00:40:764(1) - remove circle
00:42:120(5,6) - remove 6circle, and move to 5slider 00:42:459~00:43:137end
00:51:950(1,2,3,4,5) - like this http://puu.sh/6rcx
01:09:747(5) - slider start 01:09:916 end 01:10:933
01:10:933 - KIAI TIME here
01:32:289 - KIAI TIME end here?
02:22:798(1,2) - remove 2circle, and move to 2slider 02:22:798~02:23:814 end, and 02:24:153 add circle!
02:29:577 - KIAI TIME here
02:40:086 - KIAI TIME end here
03:00:425(5,6) - Challenge like this http://puu.sh/6rem
03:13:984 - KIAI TIME end here


[ezek's star]
00:23:645(1,2,3,4) - grid move. 1:x152,y152 2:x216,y120 3:x288,y120 4:x352,y152
00:31:781(2,3,4,5,6) - grid move. 4:312,y344 5:x264,y296 6:x216,y248
00:52:798(2) - move to 00:52:967
00:53:814(4) - slider end 00:54:323
01:06:357(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - grid move. 1:x96,y96 2:x64,y160 3:x56,y232 4:x88,y296 5:x160,y304 6:x128,y240 7:x200,y240 1:x168,y176
01:10:933 - KIAI TIME here
01:26:526(1,2,3,4,1) - grid move. 2:x112,y304 3:x64,y248 4:x48,y176 1:x88,y112
01:32:289 - KIAI TIME end here
01:43:476(1,2,3,4) - grid move. 2:x32,y264
01:46:696(2,3,4) - grid move. 3:x400,y240 4:x344,y288
01:49:408(2,3,4) - grid move. 2:x432,y64 3:x480,y120 4:408,y136
02:21:442(1) - spin end 02:23:814
02:25:001(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - grid move. 1:x416,y288 2:x464,y232 3:x472,y160 4:x440,y96 5:x376,y64 1:x336,y200
02:29:577 - KIAI TIME here
02:36:357(5,6,7) - grid move. 6:x400,y288 7:x344,y328
02:40:086 - KIAI TIME end here
02:51:272(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - grid move. 3:x176,y64 4:x228,y116(grid size tiny) 5:x280,y64 6:x352,y80 7:x408,y128
02:57:374(7,1,2,3,1) - 7:NC? and grid move. 1:x80,y160 2:x88,y88 3:x152,y56 1:x224,y56
03:02:120(1,2,3) - grid move. 2:x104,y240 3:x152,y296
03:13:984 - KIAI TIME end here

[Insane]
Set preview point 01:10:933?
00:10:340(1) - slider start 00:10:255 end 00:10:594
00:12:120(4) - remove circle?
00:13:984(1,2,3,4,5) - Challenge like this http://puu.sh/6rqa
00:23:476(1) - slider start 00:23:645 end 00:24:153( remove one repeat)
00:50:848 - add circle?
01:00:933(3) - slider start 01:01:103 end 01:01:781
01:02:035(4) - slider start 01:02:120 end 01:02:289(remove one repeat)
01:10:933 - KIAI TIME here
01:20:848(9) - slider start 01:20:933 end 01:21:103(remove one repeat)
01:32:289 - KIAI TIME end here
01:42:628(5) - change circle
01:50:679(6) - remove slider. and add two circle 01:50:764,01:50:848
02:29:577 - KIAI TIME here
02:40:086 - KIAI TIME end here
02:52:628 - KIAI TIME here and NC?
03:13:984 - KIAI TIME end here
03:14:831(2,3) - why only here DS 0.6x?

Good luck~ :)
ZekeyHache
DerekMcD
It's your lucky day!:D

  • ~Normal~

    00:13:645 (4): Do you realize one of the these girls song "Hai" at loud? If so, Take off both clap and Wistle and add finish?
    00:46:187 (1): End the slider at 00:46:526?
    01:32:289 (4): Add finish on the start of the slider.

    ~esek's star~

    00:13:645 (1): Is it better if you remove clap?
    00:36:865 (1): Could you fix this slider like this? then fix the spacing until 00:37:882?
    01:46:865 (2): Nazi... Move this one grid right...
    02:51:950 (5, 6, 7): Highlight them all and move them one grid right.

    ~Insane.

    00:13:645 (9): Add finish?
    02:10:255 (6): Turn both snaps off and move this to x:186 y: 304.
That's it!
Thank you and good luck.
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