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phoon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月2日 at 23:23:19

Artist: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.)
Source: Reitetsu Reisei Shikashite XXX!!
Tags: visual novel opening Chien flatps Melophobia ikari_kyon
BPM: 170
Filesize: 19308kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. flatps' Hard (4.97 stars, 261 notes)
  2. i_k's Taiko (4.83 stars, 645 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 311 notes)
  4. Melo's Normal (3.05 stars, 128 notes)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ぴぴるぴー
Mapset:
Normal - Done : Create by Melophobia
Hard - Done : Create by flatps
Insane - Done
i_k's Taiko - Done : Create by ikari_kyon

#1
2012/6/17 Remap
SPOILER
初Rank…ども…

俺みたいな中3でRankしてる腐れ野郎、他に、いますかっていねーか、はは
今日の#Japaneseの会話
CookieziのDTヤバすぎwww とか こいつの譜面おもしれえwww とか
ま、それが普通ですわな

かたや俺はPendingでハートが割れてる譜面を見て、呟くんすわ
やべえ1msズレてる...チェックミス?それ、誉め言葉ね。

好きな音楽 ave;new プロジェクト
尊敬する人間 佐倉紗織(電波ソングはNO)

なんつってる間にUnrankっすよ(笑) あ~あ、newbie mapperの辛いとこね、これ
grvyd
ave;new project!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





自信ない部分結構あるので適当に修正お願いします><

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (phoon) [Infinity].osu
Topic Starter
phoon

flatps wrote:

ave;new project!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





自信ない部分結構あるので適当に修正お願いします><
ゲストありがとう!
Melophobia
完成!

Download: Diff+hitsound.rar


そういえばこれShort Ver.だと思うのです ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Topic Starter
phoon

Melophobia wrote:

完成!

[attachment=0:0dec9]Diff+hitsound.rar[/attachment:0dec9]


そういえばこれShort Ver.だと思うのです ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
thx!
タイトルに(Short Ver.)つけました
Elly-chan
taken from #modreqs, remilia-- helped me translate, if you don't get something look at the english mod

English Mod
(General)
  1. LOVERS.mp3 is 320 kbps. This is Unrankable. Please Re-encode it to 192 kbps (Or Something Between 192 and 128).
  2. Please Keep a Consistency In Tags. Add all tags that are in the insane diff (Chien flatps Melophobia) To The Other Two Diffs.
There Is a Big Gap In Hardness Between Normal and Infinity (Not a Solid Diff Spread). Please tone Infinity down some. (If You Don't Believe me, Look At Each Diff's Star Rating. Normal's is 2.94 and infinity's is 4.98.)

(Normal)
  1. 00:23:641 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 00:29:640 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 00:45:695 (3) - Add a Finish
  4. 00:52:223 (3) - New Combo.
  5. 00:52:752 (3) - Add a whistle.
  6. 00:58:221 (4) - New Combo?
  7. 01:10:571 (3) - New Combo.

(一般)
  1. LOVERS.mp3は320 kbpsです。これはUnrankableです。再エンコードに192 kbpsの(または192と128の間に何か)にしてください。
  2. タグに一貫性を維持してください。その他の2つの差分には非常識な差分(建flatps音楽恐怖症)にあるすべてのタグを追加する。
ノーマルと無限(非固体差分の拡散)の間の硬さでビッグなギャップがあります。トーンのInfinityをいくつか下にしてください。(あなたは私を信じていない場合、各差分のランクで見てください。正常なのは2.94であり、無限大のは4.98です。)

(ノーマル)
  1. 00:23:641 (5) - 新しいコンボ.
  2. 00:29:640 (5) - 新しいコンボ.
  3. 00:45:695 (3) - 仕上げを追加する.
  4. 00:52:223 (3) - 新しいコンボ.
  5. 00:52:752 (3) - 笛を追加する.
  6. 00:58:221 (4) - 新しいコンボ?
  7. 01:10:571 (3) - 新しいコンボ.
sorry i could not have been much of help, i don't speak jap and i want to stop bothering Remilia~ >w<

Normal looks decent. Good Job. If I ever Bother Her Again, i'll Mod Your Other Diffs~ ;w;
Melophobia
Topic Starter
phoon

Elly-chan wrote:

taken from #modreqs, remilia-- helped me translate, if you don't get something look at the english mod

English Mod
(General)
  1. LOVERS.mp3 is 320 kbps. This is Unrankable. Please Re-encode it to 192 kbps (Or Something Between 192 and 128).
  2. Please Keep a Consistency In Tags. Add all tags that are in the insane diff (Chien flatps Melophobia) To The Other Two Diffs.
There Is a Big Gap In Hardness Between Normal and Infinity (Not a Solid Diff Spread). Please tone Infinity down some. (If You Don't Believe me, Look At Each Diff's Star Rating. Normal's is 2.94 and infinity's is 4.98.)

(Normal)
  1. 00:23:641 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 00:29:640 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 00:45:695 (3) - Add a Finish
  4. 00:52:223 (3) - New Combo.
  5. 00:52:752 (3) - Add a whistle.
  6. 00:58:221 (4) - New Combo?
  7. 01:10:571 (3) - New Combo.

(一般)
  1. LOVERS.mp3は320 kbpsです。これはUnrankableです。再エンコードに192 kbpsの(または192と128の間に何か)にしてください。mp3 file was changed.
  2. タグに一貫性を維持してください。その他の2つの差分には非常識な差分(建flatps音楽恐怖症)にあるすべてのタグを追加する。
fixed
ノーマルと無限(非固体差分の拡散)の間の硬さでビッグなギャップがあります。トーンのInfinityをいくつか下にしてください。(あなたは私を信じていない場合、各差分のランクで見てください。正常なのは2.94であり、無限大のは4.98です。)It suspends now,It refers also to the opinion in the direction of others

sorry i could not have been much of help, i don't speak jap and i want to stop bothering Remilia~ >w<

Normal looks decent. Good Job. If I ever Bother Her Again, i'll Mod Your Other Diffs~ ;w;
thx mod!
NewRulerNA
[Insane]

00:07:586 (3) - 1grid up
00:07:939 (5) - ^
00:08:468 (9) - nc (newcombo)
00:18:701 (2) - 00:18:172 (1)とスタック
00:21:877 (4) - DS
00:37:579 (8) - nc
01:04:925 (7) - DS
01:35:977 (1) - 01:35:271 (7)とスタックさせるor被らないような位置、形にする

[Infinity]

00:05:116 (4,5) - DS
00:23:288 (1) - rnc(remove newcombo)
00:33:697 (6) - 00:32:815 (2)と被せないようにすると見栄えが良くなると思います
00:53:987 (3) - 00:53:105 (6,7)とスタックさせるか、被らないような配置にする
01:06:866 (3,4,5,6) - DS
01:21:333 (4) - rnc
01:21:863 (1) - nc

配置において目立った問題点もなくいい譜面だと思います :)
Topic Starter
phoon

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Insane]

00:07:586 (3) - 1grid up fixed
00:07:939 (5) - ^ fixed
00:08:468 (9) - nc (newcombo) no!
00:18:701 (2) - 00:18:172 (1)とスタック fixed
00:21:877 (4) - DS fixed
00:37:579 (8) - nc fixed
01:04:925 (7) - DS fixed
01:35:977 (1) - 01:35:271 (7)とスタックさせるor被らないような位置、形にする fixed
thx mod!
No_Gu
request from my queue

[normal]
Please snap all notes
I use unsnap timing to mod
01:04:220 (4) - ctrl+H from 1 then fix spacing
01:22:568 (4) - 1 grid left

[hard]
01:40:741 (4,1) - too ugly

[insane]
01:33:544 0.75x green line should be here
Melophobia
Topic Starter
phoon

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue


[hard]
01:40:741 (4,1) - too ugly The difficulty of Hard is Remap now.sorry :cry:

[insane]
01:33:544 0.75x green line should be here fixed
thx mod!
grvyd
some fix and remap.
And changed diffname.(->"Hard")

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.) (phoon) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
phoon
update!
jossieP
Timing~
seriously, use this unique red timing line, this type of songs never gonna use a bpm reset

BPM: 170,000
Offset: 1420
Topic Starter
phoon

ikari_kyon wrote:

Timing~
seriously, use this unique red timing line, this type of songs never gonna use a bpm reset

BPM: 170,000
Offset: 1420
fixed!
Miya
Hi, request taken from #modreqs :)

General
  1. Why are you using BG that size is 640x480? The resolution is too low for Osu and will result in blured image if played in bigger resolution. I suggest you find the BG that has more resolution.
  2. Every difficulty has different BPM. Fix that. :( It seems you have fix this when i mod your map. o.o
  3. You should place kiai time on chorus section imo. I think the real chorus begin at 01:02:118-01:27:545. My suggestion is to move kiai time into that time, and delete first and seconde kiai time.
  4. Is Normal diff a guest diff? Then the name should be Melaphobia's Normal.
  5. Hmm, i see Hard is a guest diff too. Then the name should be flatps's Hard
Normal
  1. 00:00:897 (1,1) - How about adding a finish rythim at the start at the song. When i listen it carefully, that part seems epic and need a finish sound to maximize that epic part. So add a finish sound at the spinner, and startpoint of the slider 1.
  2. 00:38:123 (1) - Because in the previous part there is a finish rythim, how about adding a finish here at the startpoint since it can becoming a closing part for that finish rythim. I think it will be more good to hear.
  3. 01:07:058 (3) - I think you can place a finish sound at the startpoint the make the hitsound pattern more consistent.
  4. 01:15:526 (4) - No finish part at repeat point? In your previous rythim there's a finish part. You should place a finish part there to make hitsound consistent.
  5. 01:27:545 (1) - Since it's an opening part of new rythim, and the background music support it, i think you should place a finish sound at the startpoint of the sldier.
  6. 01:38:660 (1) - It seems you forgot to add finish at the startpoint. In your previous ryhtim there's a finish here.
Hard
  1. 00:04:250 (1) - How about adding a finish at the startpoint of the slider? It's have same reason with easy.
  2. 00:15:367 (3) - If you follow my suggestion above, you should place a finish sound here too at the startpoint.
  3. 00:29:309 (3) - Why this note doesn't have a finish sound? Your next rythim has finish sound at this point. You should add it too here to make consistent.
  4. 01:02:132 (1) - It's opening of chorus, so it will be good if you add a finish sound here. Since opening of chorus begin with some epic part.
  5. 01:07:603 (5) - Well, inconsistent clap pattern at the endpoint of slider. Your pattern is 'ta ta', but in this case you have 'ta' only. So change whistle here into clap.
  6. 01:27:545 (1) - Well, just like the begining of the song, you should place a finish sound here too in the startpoint.
  7. 01:38:662 (3) - Don't forget to add finish here too at the startpoint if you follow my suggestion above.
Infinity
  1. Well, i'm quite disagree if you're using whistle in the chorus part. I barely hear the whistle at all. I suggest you change it into another hitsound, like clap.
  2. 00:04:243 (1) - Well, just like other two diff, i suggest you add a finish here at the startpoint.
  3. 00:15:360 (1) - Don't forget to add finish here too if you follow suggestion above.
  4. 00:37:596 (1,2,1,2) - This pattern need to restack properly since some note is not stacked properly. Here is my suggestion :
    1. Move 00:37:596 (1,2) - 1 grid up
    2. 00:38:125 (1,2) - Move 1 grid down
  5. 01:02:125 (1) - This part definetely need a finish sound. So add a finish sound at the startpoint. You can hear "Bang" sound if you hear it carefully.
  6. 01:13:419 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above, don't forget add finish here too.
  7. 01:27:545 (1) - Same as other diff, i suggest you add a finish sound here at the startpoint.
  8. 01:38:661 (1) - Add finish sound here too if you follow my suggestion above.
  9. 01:47:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is kind of tricky and really can break the flow. I suggest you move the stack into other place to fix that problem.
  10. 01:50:130 (1) - A finish sound at end of this spinner will be great imo.
Well, that's all from me. :) I like ave;new and this map is also good, so i will throw a star to you. :)
Bye and Good Luck ^^
jossieP

phoon wrote:

ikari_kyon wrote:

Timing~
seriously, use this unique red timing line, this type of songs never gonna use a bpm reset

BPM: 170,000
Offset: 1420
fixed!
you already have that red timing on 87545 >: delete it please >3<
Melophobia
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